SACE Stage 2 ENGLISH STUDIES SCHOOL No: 322 TASK SHEET SACE No: 443894G Assessment Type 2: Individual Study Response: paired texts – Silver Linings Playbook Directed by Joe Wright and The Soloist Directed by David O. Russell Context: an individual study of two texts chosen sequentially – the first within the context of student interest and enthusiasm; the second within the context of ideas generated by the first, under teacher guidance – and developed through the collection of support material designed to analyse various aspects of both texts. Task: write a maximum 2,000 word critical essay that explores the constructed nature of texts and the influence of sociocultural contexts on reader responses by answering a question created by yourself and generated by your collection of support material on both texts. Topic: (write out your question) How do Joe Wright and David O. Russell use the arts as a therapeutic motif in The Soloist and Silver Linings Playbook to explore mental illness? Learning Requirements Assessment Design Criteria 1. analyse texts, demonstrating depth of understanding through the identification of the structural, conventional, and stylistic features used by authors Knowledge and Understanding 2. understand that the interpretation of texts is influenced by the interplay between what the author presents in the text, the context in which the text was generated, and what the reader, viewer, or listener brings to the text 3. compare and contrast the ways in which texts are constructed 4. use evidence to develop and support critical reasoning in the form of sustained argument 5. compose texts that engage the reader, viewer, or listener 6. express ideas clearly and accurately in a range of appropriate forms. KU1. Knowledge and understanding of authors’ use of stylistic features and language techniques to communicate ideas and influence the reader’s response. Capabilities Learning KU2. Knowledge and understanding of ideas, values, and beliefs in texts. KU3. Knowledge and understanding of the textual conventions of different text types. Analysis An1. Analysis of the interplay between what authors present in texts and the experiences, ideas, values, and beliefs of readers. Personal Development An2. Analysis of the similarities and differences in texts, in comparative exercises. An3. Analysis of the ways in which language techniques are used to influence opinions and decisions in texts. Work Application Ap1. The use of language skills and techniques to create coherent texts that address the meaning and intention of the task. Ap2. Recognition of connections between texts, and an integrated approach to comparing and contrasting texts. Citizenship Ap3. The use of evidence from texts to develop and support a response. Ap4. The use of textual, structural, and conventional features of selected text types and forms of presentation to convey meaning. Communication Communication C1. Accuracy, clarity, and fluency of expression. C2. Appropriate form and register for audience and purpose. Students can refer to the rubric provided over the page to identify the performance standards that they need to demonstrate to reach their highest possible level of achievement in this task. Knowledge and Understanding A 15 14 13 Knowledge and understanding of a wide range of ways in which authors use stylistic features and language techniques to communicate complex and familiar ideas, and to influence the reader’s response. Detailed knowledge and understanding of the ideas, values, and beliefs in familiar and unfamiliar texts. Knowledge and understanding of the ways in which creators and readers of familiar and unfamiliar texts use a range of textual conventions to make meaning. B 12 11 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 Analysis of complex connections between personal experiences, ideas, values, and beliefs, and those explored in familiar and unfamiliar texts. Use of a wide range of language skills and techniques to create sophisticated and coherent texts that address the meaning and intention of the task. Fluent and precise writing and speaking, using appropriate style and structure for a range of mainly unfamiliar audiences and contexts. In comparative exercises, a perceptive analysis of connections between texts, based on analysis and synthesis of similarities and/or differences. Perceptive analysis of a range of ways in which authors use language techniques to influence opinions and decisions in familiar and unfamiliar texts. In comparative exercises, a perceptive recognition of connections between texts, through responses that integrate discussion of texts and move easily between them. Detailed and appropriate use of evidence from texts to support responses, with textual references incorporated fluently in discussion. Knowledge and understanding of some ideas, values, and beliefs in familiar, and some unfamiliar, texts. In comparative exercises, a clear analysis of connections between texts, based on analysis of similarities and/or differences. Appropriate use of evidence from texts to support responses, with textual references incorporated in discussion. Knowledge and understanding of a narrow range of ways in which authors use stylistic features and language techniques to communicate mainly familiar ideas, and to influence the reader’s response. Knowledge and understanding of some ideas, values, and beliefs in mainly familiar texts. Knowledge and restricted understanding of some simple stylistic features and language techniques used by authors to communicate mainly familiar ideas, and to influence the reader’s response. Knowledge and understanding of some familiar ideas, values, and beliefs in familiar texts. Knowledge and understanding of a restricted range of simple stylistic features and language techniques used by authors to communicate familiar ideas, and to influence the reader’s response. Analysis of a range of ways in which authors use language techniques to influence opinions and decisions in familiar, and some unfamiliar, texts. Analysis of simple connections between personal experiences, ideas, values, and beliefs, and those explored in familiar texts. In comparative exercises, analysis of connections between texts, based on some understanding of similarities and/or differences. Descriptive analysis of a number of ways in which authors use language techniques to influence opinions and decisions in familiar texts. Reference to simple connections between uncomplicated personal experiences, ideas, values, and beliefs, and those explored in familiar texts. In comparative exercises, answers that make partial comparisons and contrasts. Reference to some ways in which authors use a narrow range of language techniques to influence opinions and decisions in familiar texts. Recognition of a simple connection between a straightforward personal, experience, idea, value, or belief, and that explored in a highly familiar text. Identification of an idea, a value, or a belief in familiar texts. In comparative exercises, answers that make a simple comparison or contrast. Knowledge and understanding of the ways in which a creator or reader of a highly familiar text uses textual conventions to make factual meaning. Reference to the way in which an author uses language techniques to influence opinions and decisions in a highly familiar text. Appropriate use of form and register to convey mostly complex meaning in a range of unfamiliar contexts. Skills in using the textual, structural, and conventional features of text types for a range of familiar and unfamiliar contexts, audiences, and purposes. Use of a range of language skills and techniques to create clear and coherent texts that address the meaning and intention of the task. Knowledge and understanding of a restricted number of ways in which creators and readers of a narrow range of familiar texts use some textual conventions to make simple or factual meaning. E Communication Analysis of some complex connections between personal experiences, ideas, values, and beliefs, and those explored in familiar, and some unfamiliar, texts. Knowledge and understanding of some of the ways in which creators and readers of a range of familiar texts use textual conventions to make simple or factual meaning. D Application Knowledge and understanding of the ways in which authors use stylistic features and language techniques to communicate complex and familiar ideas, and to influence the reader’s response. Knowledge and understanding of the ways in which creators and readers of mainly familiar texts use some textual conventions to make meaning. C Analysis In comparative exercises, recognition of connections between texts, through responses that compare and contrast texts in an integrated way. Skills in using some of the textual, structural, and conventional features of text types for a range of mainly familiar, and some unfamiliar, contexts, audiences, and purposes. Use of language skills and techniques to create texts that address the meaning and intention of the task. In comparative exercises, recognition of some connections between texts, through responses that compare and contrast texts, usually in a sequential rather than an integrated way. Competent use of evidence from texts to support responses, with some use of textual references in discussion. Skills in using some of the textual, structural, and conventional features of some text types for familiar contexts, audiences, and purposes. Use of some language skills and techniques to create texts that partly address the meaning and intention of the task. In comparative exercises, some awareness of connections between texts, through partial responses that mainly deal with texts separately. Some use of evidence from texts to support a response, with use of a narrow range of textual references. Mostly fluent and precise writing and speaking, using appropriate style and structure for a range of mostly familiar audiences and contexts. Appropriate use of form and register to convey complex and simple meaning in a range of familiar and unfamiliar contexts. Generally fluent and functional writing and speaking, using appropriate style and structure for familiar audiences and contexts. Appropriate use of form and register to convey simple meaning in a narrow range of familiar and unfamiliar contexts. Achievement of a level of fluency in writing and speaking, in a mainly appropriate style. Occasionally appropriate use of form and/or register to convey simple meaning in familiar contexts. Skills in using some of the textual, structural, or conventional features of a text type for a familiar context, audience, or purpose. Attempted use of a restricted range of language skills and/or techniques to create a text or texts that attempt to address the meaning or intention of the task. In comparative exercises, identification of limited connections between texts, through fragmented responses that deal with texts separately. Restricted use of evidence from texts to support a simple response, with limited textual reference. Skills in using the textual, structural, or conventional features of a text type for a highly familiar context, audience, or purpose. Emerging development of fluency in an occasionally appropriate style. Occasionally appropriate use of form and register to convey literal meaning in highly familiar contexts. How do Joe Wright and David O. Russell use the arts as a therapeutic motif in The Soloist and Silver Linings Playbook to explore mental illness? Mental illness is a common theme in Joe Wright’s The Soloist and David O. Russell’s Silver Linings Playbook. With the arts as a motif, the two texts are explored through cinematic techniques to gain an understanding of how music and dance are used therapeutically to help those suffering from mental illnesses. Music and dance are used to explore isolation, alienation and relationships through the theme of mental illness. While the symbol of clothes and use of heads as a visual motif explores isolation and alienation. Wright’s The Soloist uses music to explore the relationships of Nathanial (Jamie Foxx), a homeless cello player, with LA Times writer Steve Lopez (Robert Downing Junior). Russell’s Silver Linings Playbook follows Tiffany (Jennifer Lawrence), recently widowed and suffering from nymphomania and Patrick (Bradley Cooper), who suffers from bipolar disorder, as they use dance as a therapeutic method to deal with mental illness. Isolation is present within both Russell’s Silver Linings Playbook and Wright’s The Soloist to provide emphasis on the theme of mental illness. Isolation is represented in The Soloist through the motif of homelessness and segregation from modern society, Nathanial’s combination of homelessness and schizophrenia creates abnormality which leads to isolation and is further emphasized by his difficulty with verbal communication due to his schizophrenia. Instead, it is through music that Nathanial communicates, further highlighting the importance and power of music. Isolation is also highlighted through his relationship with Steve because he is the only one suffering from mental illness. In a scene representing Nathanial’s isolation and his social status relative to Steve, he asks: “Why are you Mr. Steve Lopez and I’m Nathaniel Ayers?” Wright incorporates such stark juxtapositions in their relationship through much of the film. Wright’s choice to display Steve’s normality in contrast to Nathanial’s schizophrenia, creates a comparison which causes the viewer to make a distinction between the two characters. This can be contrasted to Russell’s directing where the two protagonists suffer from mental illness, removing an aspect of isolation from Silver Linings Playbook. However, Nathanial’s feeling of isolation can still be related to that felt by Patrick with his bipolar mood swings. Russell shows Patrick in a scene when he is talking to himself in his room at the psychiatric hospital. At the beginning of the scene, specific camera shots display the bare contents of his room and odd objects, creating his aura of abnormality, proving his isolation from society. Clothing is used as a symbol within both texts to express characters’ isolation and alienation and is seen in the protagonists Nathanial and Tiffany. Nathanial wears odd clothing similar to clothes stereotypical of homeless people; however, his costumes often include excessively flashy items, representing his jumbled, schizophrenic mind. The choice of eclectic clothing is first seen when Nathanial wears a hat with the words “Mr. Walt Disney” and “Mr. Stevie Wonder” written on it. This hat, with hand written names, represents both Nathanial’s admiration of artistic figures and his abnormalities. At Nathanial’s second appearance he is wearing a slightly tattered, silver, sparkly jacket. This jacket symbolizes the lively but also damaged part of his personality; his schizophrenic mind, which causes him to be isolated and alienated from the rest of society. Nathanial’s brightly coloured and mismatched clothing can be seen as opposite to Tiffany. Tiffany’s costumes are often black: black clothes, black eye make-up and black finger nails. Black is used to symbolize her grief and depression. Tiffany also covers up her body; her clothing signifying the bandages she is using to keep herself together. In contrast, during the dance scenes, Tiffany is seen wearing lighter coloured clothing, such as pink and purple. These colours are used to represent the lifting of her depression through of her enjoyment of dance. Tiffany wears less clothing during these scenes; representing the freedom felt from dancing. 634 Alienation due to mental illness is considered in both The Soloist and Silver Linings Playbook through the characters and the arts. The characters within these texts are often alienated from society as a result of suffering from mental illness. In Silver Linings Playbook the restraining order placed on Patrick is an extreme form of alienation ensuring his separation from some individuals. Patrick displaces his alienation onto Tiffany in an attempt to group her into the “mental illness society,” a society he doesn’t think he belongs in, because of her depression and previous scandalous activities. Patrick’s attempt to alienate Tiffany, from others because of her mental illnesses, prompts outburst from both characters “You (Patrick) told your therapist you’re in a superior mental illness category than me (Tiffany)”. Patrick’s is seen as his wedding song “Ma Cherie Amour” plays when the characters are arguing; revealing that Patrick has alienated the song as something that causes his hurt and pain. Russell directs this with jagged camera angles and the characters’ disjointed dialogue. Russell uses juxtaposition in this scene as it takes place on Halloween, where children dress up as monsters; but it seen through the protagonists that the real horrors are in their heads. The contrast of the use of music within the texts is seen in The Soloist where Nathanial using the cello to create a calm mood after a schizophrenic outburst; similar to the way dance is used to help Tiffany overcome her grief and thus, her alienation. As the characters’ mental illnesses originate by definition in the brain, the use of heads as a visual motif is a significant aspect within both films. In The Soloist the first scene shows Steve crash his bike and injure his head, symbolizing that his lack of mental illness doesn’t mean he is protected from it affects. Wright shows this through Steve’s relationship with Nathanial. Wright’s use of the CT scan of Steve’s head in the following scene is a cinematic technique used to represent mental illness and its involvement in the film. Close ups are a largely used camera technique in Silver Linings Playbook. Russell applies this technique on Patrick when he walks into the therapist’s office, symbolizing the mental illness that Patrick suffers. At Tiffany’s first appearance the camera focuses on important aspects of her appearance: her cross necklace, black finger nails and her head. This shows that mental illness is as an important part of her person as the symbols that represent her. These camera shots are closely followed by one on Patrick’s head; signifying a connection between the two characters. Mental illness hinders relationships and this is displayed through Silver Linings Playbook’s Patrick and The Soloist’s Nathanial. Patrick’s inability to maintain a healthy relationship with his ex-wife resulted from his mental illness. Wright showed Nathanial having difficulty creating strong relationships with his family, through the use of flashbacks, caused by his mental illness. Nathanial’s inability to create strong relationships as a result of mental illness is also displayed at the beginning of the film when Nathanial is unable to trust or communicate with Steve. Additionally, it is shown that positive relationships are necessary for people with mental illnesses. In Silver Linings Playbook the usefulness of positive relationships is represented through Tiffany’s change in clothes. Her clothes become lighter toward the end of the film when grief plays less of a role in her life allowing her to trust and love Patrick. This is displayed visually through the dance performance as she wears white, in contrast to her common black costuming, representing her vulnerability and the abandonment of her grief. As the film progresses Patrick’s development is seen as his wedding song affects him less; representing the discontinuing of past relationships and opening up new ones; similar to Nathanial trusting Steve more at the end of The Soloist. Nathanial and Steve’s relationship blossoms as the film progresses and is noticeable through the use of music. When the relationship is healthy the music is calm; when the relationship is weak the music becomes forceful. At the end of the text their relationship is equal and healthy; calm orchestral music is played and the camera is focused on Nathanial enjoying his one true love; music. However, Wright shows, through Steve’s lack of involvement in the music process, that Nathanial is alone in both his love for music, “I 1359 [Steve] have never loved anything the way he [Nathanial] loves music,” and his suffering of mental illness. In contrast Russell presents both Tiffany and Patrick involvement in dance. This represents the journey of the characters relationship together through the use of the arts. In The Soloist the relationship is also based on inequality; with Steve being a middle class, white male and Nathanial a homeless, African American suffering from mental illness. Inequality of characters is juxtaposed in both texts, since Silver Linings Playbook’s protagonists are both middle class, recovering from failed relationships and suffering from mental illness, leaving one not less than the other. However, a camera shot at the end of The Soloist shows Nathanial and Steve shaking hands, with light classical music playing in the background. This is a visual representation of the growth and progression of their relationship throughout the text. The motif of the arts is used as a therapeutic method within Silver Linings Playbook and The Soloist; portrayed through the actions of the films’ characters. Russell uses dance for Tiffany and Patrick to assist in overcoming their mental illnesses. Similarly, music is used in Wright’s The Soloist. Nathanial both listens to and performs Beethoven’s music to deal with his schizophrenia. The beauty and clarity of the music offers Wright’s Nathanial a sense of control while expressing powerful emotions, which would otherwise engulf him. Nathanial’s intense devotion to music attracted Steve to him, while Steve’s goodwill and charitable actions helps develop their unlikely friendship. As Silver Linings Playbook progresses, Patrick becomes less obsessive about his relationship with his ex-wife and has fewer bipolar episodes. The change in Patrick’s attitude to his ex-wife is demonstrated by his increased involvement in dance with Tiffany; he has fewer reservations about how dancing may affect his relationship. Initially, Patrick was reluctant to dance with Tiffany and would barely participate. However, at the concluding dance competition Patrick performs with a great deal of passion, demonstrating his progression through his mental illness. The competition allowed him to express deeply felt emotions, without relapsing into a manic episode. The directors’ choice of the style of arts within the films also creates a dramatic contrast between them. In The Soloist, classical music plays a significant role. Wright shows this through Nathanial’s inspiration, Beethoven. The influence of Beethoven is seen throughout the film, whether it was Nathanial playing his music on the cello or the statue at which Steve and Nathanial first met and Nathanial stated “Beethoven is the leader of Los Angeles.” Contrasting this is the use of contemporary dance seen in Silver Linings Playbook. Russell’s Tiffany and Patrick show that style and era of the art used is not important in the process of minimizing the effect of mental health. The influence the arts have on mental illness is also seen in The Soloist as Nathanial uses music to reduce the control his mental illness has on his life. He plays music to create a calm atmosphere when his schizophrenic thoughts predominate. A key example is a scene during The Soloist, when, after an argument with Steve, Nathanial played the cello solitarily, to calm himself. The theme of mental illness featured in Silver Linings Playbook and The Soloist is explored through the therapeutic motif of the arts. Isolation and alienation are demonstrated through the symbol of clothing and heads as a visual motif and are present within Silver Linings Playbook and The Soloist as the plots explore the lives of the protagonists and their differences from the majority of society because of mental illnesses. The relationships represented in the texts demonstrate the complexity of the human mind and the effects of mental illnesses. David Russell and Joe Wright both explored the difficulties of mental illness through the motif of the arts with great individuality and rawness while maintaining respect for mental illnesses without glorification. 1999