Section A: Exam question 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. “In Wuthering heights the weather is often a signpost for tragedy.” How far do you agree with this statement. “The most daunting element of the Bloody Chamber is the use of setting.” How far do you agree with this statement. “Shakespeare’s use of the supernatural allows you to feel more sympathy for Macbeth.” To what extent do you support this argument. “In the Bloody Chamber the psychological entrapment faced by characters is more impactful than any physical imprisonment.” To what extent do you support this argument. “Macbeth’s visions of the future are all of his own making.” How far do you agree with this view? “Heathcliff’s story is one of a victim turned Anti-hero whom the audience can’t help liking.” To what extent do you support this argument. “Despite her crimes Lady Macbeth is actually an atypical damsel in distress.” To what extent do you support this argument. “Revenge is always at the root of the narrative in Wuthering heights.” To what extent do you support this argument. “The use of blood in The Bloody Chamber merely shocks the reader and doesn’t inspire real fear.” To what extent do you support this argument. The typical approach… • • • • • • • • • • • • Introduce my argument Introduce my moment/evidence Signpost gothic concepts (you could do this after the quote) Quote Analysis language, form and structure Relate analysis to the question – link back Give another/different interpretation Introduce more support/evidence/quote Signpost gothic concepts Consider gothic context or general context Evaluate the author’s success Link back to argument What the examiners want… Band 6 (34-40 marks) AO1 use of appropriate critical vocabulary and technically fluent style/ well structured and coherent argument – Balance in the argument but they will reward a fervent and passionate. Gothic vocabulary and terminology should be consistently signposted and the arguments should stand up to scrutiny. AO1 always relevant with very sharp focus on task and confidently ranging around texts – The best textual examples and references are chosen not just moulded to fit the argument. The selection also shows scope and thorough knowledge of the text. AO2 exploration and analysis of key features of form and structure with perceptive evaluation of how they shape meanings – Are you discussing the format? Do you discuss the structure of the narrative? How do these things link to your question and the Gothic? Do the form/structure help or hinder the story? AO2 exploration and analysis of key aspects of language with perceptive evaluation of how they shape meanings – Don’t just identify features and comment, demonstrate the writer’s intentions with their use of language and how it links to the gothic. Don’t be afraid to criticise. AO3 detailed and perceptive understanding of issues raised in connecting texts through concept of gothic – Don’t just reference the gothic concept in the question and demonstrate why the writer has developed this gothic concept. AO3 perceptive consideration of different interpretations of texts with sharp evaluation of their strengths and weaknesses and with excellent selection of supportive references – Always consider other readings of the text and how it is received. Is there anything contradictory or controversial in the text? Which interpretation is the strongest and why? AO4 excellent understanding of ways of contextualising gothic – How does the text relate to the gothic and gothic history? Where does it rank with othr gothic texts? Which texts does it relate to? Is this intentional by the author? AO4 excellent understanding of a range of other contextual factors with specific, detailed links between context/text/task – What impact or significance does the context have on the novel? Making Gothic Links: 1 Weather 1. How do your three texts link to the gothic convention? 2. How has the writer used the gothic convention? Weather Quotes Wuthering Heights: Chp 1 pg2 “Atmospheric tumult to which its station is exposed in stormy weather.” “Power of the north wind blowing over the edge.” “Gaunt thorns all stretching their limbs one way, as if craving the alms of the sun.” Chp2 pg5 “On that bleak hilltop the earth was hard with a black frost and the air made me shiver through every limb.” Macbeth: Act 1 Scene 1 “When shall we three meet again? In thunder lightning or in rain?” “Hover through the fog and filthy air.” Act 1 Scene 5 “Shall sun that morrow see!” Act 2 Scene 3 “But this place is too cold for hell.” The Bloody Chamber Pg 32 “Gouging tunnels through the shifting mist.” Pg 35 “unearthly light of dawn filled the room.” The Courtship of Mr Lyon Pg 43 “Hedgrow glistened as if the snow possessed a light of its own…while still the soft flakes floated down.” Erl King Pg 96 “Cold of the approach of winter that grips hold of your belly and squeezes it tight.” Pg 100 “The earth with its fragile fleece of last summer’s dying leaves.” Making Gothic Links: 2 Setting 1. How do your three texts link to the gothic convention? 2. How has the writer used the gothic convention? Setting Quotes Making Gothic Links: 3 Supernatural 1. How do your three texts link to the gothic convention? 2. How has the writer used the gothic convention? Supernatural Quotes The Bloody Chamber (Snow Child) “As soon as he complete his description, there she stood…she was the child of his desires.” The girl began to melt. Soon there was nothing left of her but a feather.” (Erl King) “He came alive from the desire of the woods.” (Courtship of Mr Lyon) “No longer a lion in her arms but a man, a man with an unkempt mane of hair.” “It seemed December still possessed his garden. The ground was hard as iron.” Macbeth “I see thee still art thou not, fatal vision, sensible to feeling as to sight? Or art though but a dagger of the mind, a false creation.” “Thou hast no speculation in those eyes, which thou dost glare with.” “My thought, whose murder yet is but fantastical, shakes so my single state of man that function.” Wuthering heights “Surrounded by a swarm of squealing puppies and other dogs haunted other recesses.” “Knocking my knuckles through the glass and stretching an arm out to seize the importunate branch, instead of which, my fingers closed on the fingers of a little ice-cold hand.” As it spoke I descended, obscurely a child’s face looking through the window.” “Catherine Earnshaw may you not rest ad long as I am living! You said I killed you – haunt me then.” Making Gothic Links: 4 Entrapment, imprisonment and claustrophobia 1. How do your three texts link to the gothic convention? 2. How has the writer used the gothic convention? Entrapment, imprisonment and claustrophobia Quotes Macbeth Act 3 scene 4: Line 138 “I am in blood stepped in so far that, should I wade more.” Act 5 scene 1 – “Infected in minds to their deaf pillows will discharge their secrets.” “Here’s the smell of blood still all the perfumes of Arabia will not sweeten this little hand.” “They have tied me to a stake. I cannot fly.” “We will eat our meal in fear and sleep in the affliction of these terrible dreams.” Wuthering Heights “I’d not exchange for a thousand lives, my condition here, for Edgar Linton’s at Thrushcross Grange.” – trapped in social class. “I cannot live without my life! I cannot live without my soul!” Heathcliff on Cathy. “I inquired what had urged her to escape from Wuthering heights.” Nelly on Isabella “There I remained enclosed, the whole day, and the whole of the next night; and another, and another.” – Nelly’s entrapment “The Grange is not a prison, Ellen, and you are not my jailer.” Cathy Jr to Nelly “She has disturbed me, night and day, through eighteen years.” – Heathcliff The Bloody Chamber “We shall have the absolute privacy for our last rites.” “One false step and into the abyss of the ark you stumbled.” “How long had he kept her in this obscene cell?” Tiger’s bride “In those distant years before he imposed seclusion on himself.” Lady of the house of love “She likes to hear it announce how it cannot escape.” “…incarcerates her the castle of her inheritance.” Erl King “I had no wish to join the whistling congregation he kept in cages.” “How cruel it is to keep wild birds in cages.” Making Gothic Links: 5 Dreams, omens and visions 1. How do your three texts link to the gothic convention? 2. How has the writer used the gothic convention? Dreams, Omens and Visions Quotes Making Gothic Links: 6 Anti-Hero 1. How do your three texts link to the gothic convention? 2. How has the writer used the gothic convention? Anti-Heroes Quotes Wuthering heights: (To Isabella) “’She abandoned them under an illusion’ he answered, ‘picturing in me a hero of romance and expecting unlimited indulgences from chivalrous devotion.” (By Isabella) “No, No! Even if he had doted on me the devilish nature would’ve revealed its existence somehow. ‘Monster’ would that he could be blotted out of creation and out of memory.” Macbeth: “For brave Macbeth, well he deserves that name.” “By the pricking of my thumbs something wicked this way comes.” Bloody chamber: ‘As though he had laid by the face in which he had liked for so long in order to offer my youth a face unsigned by the years.” “My virgin of the arpeggios, prepare yourself for martyrdom.” “I strained my nerves yet could not help but flinch, from the intimate touch for it made me think of the piercing embrace of the iron maiden and of his lost lovers in the fault.” Making Gothic Links: 7 Pursuit of the Heroine/ Women in distress 1. How do your three texts link to the gothic convention? 2. How has the writer used the gothic convention? Women in Distress Quotes Wuthering heights “I cannot live without my life, I cannot live without my soul.” Recalled to a sense of physical weakness by the violent, unequal throbbing of her heart.” “since he asked you after that, he must either be hopelessly stupid or a venturesome fool.” The Bloody Chamber (Courtship) “As if he himself were in awe of a young girl who looked as if she had been carved out of a single pearl.” (Courtship) “‘I’m dying, beauty,’ he said in a cracked whisper of his former purr. ‘since you left me, I have been sick.’” (Erl king) “He is the tender butcher who showed me now the price of flesh is love; skin the rabbit he says! Off come all my clothes.” Making Gothic Links: 8 Revenge 1. How do your three texts link to the gothic convention? 2. How has the writer used the gothic convention? Revenge Quotes Wuthering heights “I felt that God had forsaken the stray sheep there to its own wicked wanderings and an evil beast prowled between it and the fold, writing his time to spring and destroy.” “We’ll see if one tree won’t grow as crooked as another, with the same wind to twist it.” “I could not picture a father treating a dying child as tyrannically wickedly as I afterwards learnt Heathcliff had treated him.” The Bloody Chamber (Erl King) “I shall sit, hereafter in my cage among the other singing birds but I shall be dumb from spite…I shall strangle him…Then she will open the cages and let the birds free.” (Bloody chamber) “The heavy bearded figure roared out aloud braying with fury and wielding the honourable sword as if it were a matter of death or glory.” Macbeth “Blood will have blood.” “I have no words: my voice is in my sword, thou bloodier villain than terms can give thee out.” (To Ghost) “Thous canst not say I did it: Never shake thy gory locks at me.” Making Gothic Links: 9 Blood and Horror 1. How do your three texts link to the gothic convention? 2. How has the writer used the gothic convention? Blood and Horror Quotes Wuthering Heights: Chp 3 “I pulled the wrist onto the broken pane, and rubbed it to and fro till the blood ran down and soaked the bedclothes.” Chp 29 “I ought to have sweat blood the anguish of my yearning – from the fervour of my supplications to have but one glimpse.” Macbeth: Act 1 scene 4 line 50 – “Stars hide your fires, let not light see my black and deep desires.” Act 2 scene 1 line 46 – “On thy blade and dudgeon gouts of blood.” Bloody Chamber: Pg 26 – There is a striking resemblance between the act of love and the ministrations of torture.” Pg 26 - “A metal figure, hinged at the side, which I knew to be spiked on the inside and to have the name: the iron maiden.” Pg 26 – “the walls of this stark torture chamber were the naked rock, they gleamed as if they were sweating with fright.” (Snow Child) pg 106 – “Weeping, the count got off his horse, unfastened his breeches and thrust his virile member into the dead girl.”