Diary writing (1):
Writing a diary entry
using a timeline
This is Annie. She wants to
write a diary entry about
yesterday. Can you help her?
You
use
a timeline
We can
write
about
eventsto
help
you in
write
the
in a day
the down
correct
events.
order in a diary.
In the morning
In the afternoon
In the evening
Put
them
thethings
correct
These
areinthe
order
timeline.
Annie in
didthe
yesterday.
In the morning
In the afternoon
In the evening
dog. and
In the morning I played with my dog
I painted
painted
aa
picture.
picture.
I tidied
In the afternoon I watched a cartoon.
cartoon and
tidiedmy
myroom.
room.
In the morning
In the afternoon
In the evening
In the
evening
my
uncle
and his
family visited me. I played
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Now
Use
the
sentences
help
simple
Annie
with
past
write
words
tense
sentences
in
such
diary
computer
with my cousin.
about
entries.
as
and.thegames
events.
Good! Now you can help Annie
write the diary entry.
Sunday 25th July
Write the date and
the day of the week.
Wet
Draw or write about
the weather.
Sunday 25th July
Wet
In the morning I played with my dog and painted a
picture.
Write about the events in the morning.
Sunday 25th July
Wet
In the morning I played with my dog and painted a
picture.
In the afternoon I watched a cartoon and tidied my
room.
Write about the events in the afternoon.
Sunday 25th July
Wet
In the morning I played with my dog and painted a
picture.
In the afternoon I watched a cartoon and tidied my
room.
In the evening my uncle and his family visited me. I
played computer games with my cousin.
Write about the events in the evening.
Sunday 25th July
Wet
It was wet today. I stayed at home all day.
In the morning I played with my dog and painted a
^
picture.
I was bored in
My room was messy. I
In the afternoon.I watched a cartoon .and tidied my
^
^
room. After that, I was tired.
In the evening my uncle and his family visited me. I
played computer games with my cousin. We had a good
time.
Add details to make the entry clearer.
Sunday 25th July
Wet
It was
was wet
wet today.
today so
I stayed
at home
day.
In the
It
I stayed
at home
all all
day.
In the
morning I played with my dog and painted a picture.
was bored
bored in
in the
the afternoon.
afternoon so
I watched
a cartoon.
II was
I watched
a cartoon.
My room was messy.
I tidied
mymy
room.
After
that,
I was
messy so
I tidied
room.
After
that,
I
tired.
was tired.
In the evening my uncle and his family visited me. I
played computer games with my cousin. We had a good
time. We were happy.
Use linking
Write
aboutwords
your like
feelings
so toatlink
thesentences.
end.
Sunday 25th July
Wet
It was wet today so I stayed at home all day. In the
morning I played with my dog and painted a picture.
I was bored in the afternoon so I watched a cartoon.
My room was messy so I tidied my room. After that, I
was tired.
In the evening my uncle and his family visited me. I
played computer games with my cousin. We had a good
time. We were happy.
The End