Poetry A kind of rhythmic, compressed language that uses figures of speech and imagery designed to appeal to emotion and imagination One of the oldest forms of communication Often sung Passed down from generation to generation Meant to be read aloud – Read a poem several times to get the feel of it Poetry v. Prose Prose = anything that is not poetry Poetry is a language which says more and says it more intensely than prose Poets say the same thing as prose writers. . . They just say it with fewer words The Implied Poets often write with implied ideas. That is. . . – Reader must make an educated guess to the idea that is suggested – Make inferences Numbering Lines in Poetry 5’s only Battle in the Sky by Shel Silverstein It wasn't quite day and it wasn't quite night, 'Cause the sun and the moon were both in sight, A situation quite all right With everyone else but them. 5 10 So they both made remarks about who gave more light And who was the brightest and prettiest sight, And the sun gave a bump and the moon gave a bite, And the terrible sky fight began. With a scorch and a sizzle, a screech and a shout, Across the great heavens they tumbled about, And the moon had a piece of the sun in its mouth, While the sun burned the face of the moon. And when it was over the moon was rubbed red, And the sun had a very bad lump on its head, 15 And all the next night the moon stayed home in bed, And the sun didn't come out 'til noon. An Introduction to Literary Devices in Poetry Some of these will be familiar to you, while others will be new – Alliteration – Couplet – Image – Metaphor – Onomatopoeia - Personification - Refrain - Rhyme scheme - Simile - Stanza Literary Devices in Poetry A nonhuman thing or quality is given human-like qualities Personification A nonhuman thing or quality is given human-like qualities The soft gray hands of sleep Toiled all night long To spin a beautiful garment Of dreams - Edward Silvera, from “Forgotten Dreams” Literary Devices in Poetry A group of words repeated at intervals in a poem, song, or speech. Refrain A group of words repeated at intervals in a poem, song, or speech. –Often used to build rhythm –Can also emphasize the main theme of the work Refrain A group of words repeated at intervals in a poem, song, or speech. (Same as a chorus in a song.) All God’s critters got a place in the choir, Some sing low, some sing higher, Some sing out loud on the telephone wire, And some just clap their hands, Or paws, Or anything they got now. -Bill Staines, from “A Place in the Choir”(page 178) “I have a dream. . .” - Martin Luther King, Jr. “I’ve got a feeling. . .” -Black Eyed Peas Rhyme Scheme A pattern of rhymes in a poem –End rhymes –Internal rhymes –Near rhymes End Rhymes Rhymes at the end of lines of poetry Darkness settles on roofs and walls, But the sea, the sea in the darkness calls; The little waves, with their soft, white hands, Efface the footprints in the sands, And the tide rises, the tide falls. - Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, from “TheTide Rises, the Tide Falls” What else is here? Rhymes at the end of lines of poetry Darkness settles on roofs and walls, But the sea, the sea in the darkness calls; The little waves, with their soft, white hands, Efface the footprints in the sands, And the tide rises, the tide falls. - Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, from “TheTide Rises, the Tide Falls” Internal Rhymes Rhymes within lines of poetry Back into the chamber turning, all my soul within me burning, Soon there came again a tapping somewhat louder than before - Edgar Allan Poe, from “The Raven” Near Rhymes Rhymes involving sounds that are similar but not exactly the same – Also called slant rhymes milly befriended a stranded star whose rays five languid fingers were - E.E. Cummings, from “maggie and milly and molly and may” (page 522) Rhyme Scheme Rhymes at the end of lines of poetry To indicate the rhyme scheme of a poem, use a separate letter of the alphabet for each rhyme The rhyme scheme of Longfellow’s stanza of “The Tide Rises, the Tide Falls” is a-a-b-b-a Rhyme Scheme Darkness settles on roofs and walls, a_ But the sea, the sea in the darkness calls; a_ The little waves, with their soft, white hands, b_ Efface the footprints in the sands, b_ And the tide rises, the tide falls. a_ - Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, from “TheTide Rises, the Tide Falls” Stanza A group of consecutive lines that forms a single unit – Something like a paragraph in prose – Often expresses a unit of thought – May consist of any number of lines – In some poems, each stanza has the same rhyme scheme I’m Nobody! I’m Nobody! Who are you? Are you Nobody too? Then there’s a pair of us! Don’t tell! They’d banish us, you know! How dreary to be Somebody! How public - like a Frog To tell your name the livelong June To an admiring Bog! - Emily Dickinson If I Can Stop One Heart from Breaking (page 72) If I can stop one Heart from breaking I shall not live in vain If I can ease one Life the Aching Or cool one Pain Or help one fainting Robin Unto his Nest again I shall not live in Vain. - Emily Dickinson Meter A regular pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables – Free verse does not have a regular pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables – Sounds like ordinary speech When poets write in meter, they count out the number of stressed syllables (or strong beats) and unstressed syllables (weaker beats) in each line They then repeat the pattern throughout To avoid singsong effect, poets usually vary the basic pattern Hello, iambs! Each line has four unstressed syllables alternating with four stressed syllables ‘Twas brillig, and the slithy toves Did gyre and gimble in the wabe; All mimsy were the borogoves, And the mome raths outgrabe. - Lewis Carroll, from “Jabberwocky” Literary Devices in Poetry A comparison between two unlike things, using a word such as like, as, than, or resembles. Your old friend, the Simile! A comparison between two unlike things, using a word such as like, as, than, or resembles. When the last bus leaves, moths stream toward lights like litter in the wind. - Roberta Hill, from “Depot in Rapid City” Literary Devices in Poetry An imaginative comparison between two unlike things in which one thing is said to be another thing. You’ve been waiting for, the mighty Metaphor! An imaginative comparison between two unlike things in which one thing is said to be another thing. When she comes slip-footing through the door, she kindles us like lump coal lighted and we wake up glowing. She puts a spark even in Papa’s eyes and turns out all our darkness. When she comes sweet-talking in the room, she warms us like grits and gravy, and we rise up shining. Even at nighttime Mama is a sunrise that promises tomorrow and tomorrow. - Evelyn Tooley Hunt, from “Mama Is a Sunrise” Metaphor An imaginative comparison between two unlike things in which one thing is said to be another thing. (More on Langston Hughes on page 67.) Dreams Hold fast to dreams For if dreams die Life is a broken-winged bird That cannot fly. Hold fast to dreams For when dreams go Life is a barren field Frozen with snow. - Langston Hughes Image from http://goinglocoinyokohama.files.wordpress.com/2009/06/hughes.jpg Madam and the Rent Man The rent man knocked. He said, Howdy-do? I said, What Can I do for you? He said, You know Your rent is due. I said, Listen, Before I'd pay I'd go to Hades And rot away! The sink is broke, The water don't run, And you ain't done a thing You promised to've done. Back window's cracked, Kitchen floor squeaks, There's rats in the cellar, And the attic leaks. He said, Madam, It's not up to me. I'm just the agent, Don't you see? I said, Naturally, You pass the buck. If it's money you want You're out of luck. He said, Madam, I ain't pleased! I said, Neither am I. So we agrees! - Langston Hughes Literary Devices in Poetry The repetition of the same or very similar consonant sounds in words that are close together. Alliteration The repetition of the same or very similar consonant sounds in words that are close together. – Usually occurs at the beginning of words – Can also occur within or at the end of words – Can help establish a mood, emphasize words, or serve as a memory aid Alliteration The repetition of the same or very similar consonant sounds in words that are close together. – Example: s sound repeated at beginning of silken and sad and within the words uncertain and rustling. . . And the silken sad uncertain rustling of each purple curtain, Thrilled me--filled me with fantastic terrors never felt before; - Edgar Allan Poe, from “The Raven” Poetic Sleuth Using this same example from “The Raven”, what other poetic device(s) can you find? And the silken sad uncertain rustling of each purple curtain, Thrilled me--filled me with fantastic terrors never felt before; - Edgar Allan Poe, from “The Raven” Couplet A pair of lines of verse Usually consists of two lines that rhyme and have the same meter While traditionally couplets rhyme, not all do Couplet A pair of lines of verse Because the rhyme comes so quickly in rhyming couplets, it tends to call attention to itself Good rhyming couplets tend to "snap" as both the rhyme and the idea come to a quick close in two lines An example of a rhyming couplet: Whether or not we find what we are seeking is idle, biologically speaking. — Edna St. Vincent Millay (at the end of a sonnet*) A Minor Bird I have wished a bird would fly away, And not sing by my house all day; Have clapped my hands at him from the door When it seemed as if I could bear no more. 5 The fault must partly have been in me. The bird was not to blame for his key. And of course there must be something wrong In wanting to silence any song. ` Robert Frost* Literary Device in Poetry A single word or phrase that appeals to one or more of our senses Imagery A single word or phrase that appeals to one or more of our senses Imagery refers to the "pictures" which we perceive with our mind's eyes, ears, nose, tongue, and skin Imagery A single word or phrase that appeals to one or more of our senses Night Watch (Ode to the Gargoyle) Frozen jaws snap at timeless air And concrete eyes stare at passers-by Claws deeply imbedded, sadly not in flesh As you crouch forever ready to pounce - Mary O. Fumento, 1989 Imagery A single word or phrase that appeals to one or more of our senses Read also “Sarah Cynthia Sylvia Stout Would Not Take the Garbage Out” by Shel Silverstein (page 608) “A Boy Named Sue”, sung by Johnny Cash, was written by Shel Silverstein. Literary Devices in Poetry The use of a word whose sound suggests or imitates its meaning Onomatopoeia The use of a word whose sound suggests or imitates its meaning Important element in creating the music of poetry Onomatopoeia In “The Bells”, by Edgar Allan Poe, he creates a frenzied mood by choosing words that imitate the sounds of alarm bells 5 10 Oh, the bells, bells, bells! What a tale their terror tells Of Despair! How they clang, and clash, and roar! What a horror they outpour On the bosom of the palpitating air! Yet the ear, it fully knows By the twanging And the clanging How the danger ebbs and flows. E. A. Poe In “The Bells”, Poe uses onomatopoeia, it’s true, but he is also utilizing the recurring use of a sound, word, a phrase, or a line. What is this called? Oh, the bells, bells, bells! What a tale their terror tells Of Despair! How they clang, and clash, and roar! What a horror they outpour On the bosom of the palpitating air! Yet the ear, it fully knows By the twanging And the clanging How the danger ebbs and flows. Repetition The recurring use of a sound, a word, a phrase, or a line Can also be used to create music, to appeal to our emotions, and to emphasize important ideas Poe used this quite a bit (page 575) Annabel Lee (page 579) Note how the lines are numbered! Some More Poetic Perusal “Gold” by Pat Mora (page 571) “maggie and milly and molly and may” by e.e. cummings (page 522) Casey at the Bat” by Ernest Lawrence Thayer (page 132) “The Names” by Billy Collins (page 561) Last but certainly not least, “Jabberwocky” by Lewis Carroll (page 339) – Let’s read this one together, then break it down, shall we? Now it’s YOUR turn! I am Poem BioPoem Diamante Cinquain I am Poem Format I am (two special characteristics you have) I wonder (something you are actually curious about) I hear (an imaginary sound) I see (an imaginary sight) I want (an actual desire) I am (the first line of the poem repeated) Example I am a carefree girl who loves horses. I wonder if there ever was a horse that could fly. I hear the stomping of a hundred mustangs on the desert in Arabia. I see a horse with golden wings soaring into the sunset. I want to ride swiftly over a green meadow. I am a carefree girl who loves horses. I pretend (someting you pretend to do) I feel (a feeling about something imaginary) I touch (an imaginary touch) I worry ( something that really bothers you) I cry (something that makes you sad) I am (the first line of the poem) I pretend to be an Olympic jumper. I feel the sky pressing down on me as I ride along a sandy shore. I touch the clouds on a winged horse. I worry that I'll fall off and become paralyzed. I cry when a colt dies. I am a carefree girl who loves horses. I understand (something you know is true) I say (something you believe in) I dream (somethng you actually hope for) I try (something you make an effort about) I hope (something you actually hope for) I am (the first line of the poem repeated) adapted from various teacher resources I understand that I will not be able to ride every day of my life. I say, let all horses roam free. I dream about the day when I have a horse of my own. I try to be the best rider in the world. I hope to ride all my life. I am a carefree girl who loves horses. Elly Tatum From: http://cte.jhu.edu/techacademy/web/2000/kochan/formatspoem2.html BioPoem Be sure to follow the directions indicating how many items you must share. Format Sample (first name) (four words that describe you--character traits) Relative of (list close family members) Resident of (place where you live) Who reads (four books, magazines, and or newspapers) Who likes (three things you like) Who loves (three things you love) Who fears (three things) Who wishes (three things) Who admires (three) Who needs (three things you need) Who aspires to (at least two aspirations) (last name) Adam Precocious, enthusiastic, mischievous, energetic. Relative of Mom, Daddy, and Eric. Resident of St. Joseph, Michigan. Who reads Captain Underpants, Star Wars, Knuffle Bunny, and Super Hero Books Who likes to go the museum, fight bad guys, and pillow fights. Who loves Snickers ice cream, my brother, and my army guys. Who fears The Princess and the Frog bite, people taking me, and falling into our ravine Who wishes for money coming out of the sky, a snake for a pet, and a trip to Disney. Who admires Papa Dixon, Papa Walsworth, and the President. Who needs to play, run, and learn. Who aspires to become a police officer and a king. Walsworth Cinquain Highly structured form of poetry Requires a fluent and flexible writer Format commands attention to word choice, word meaning, syllabication, and parts of speech, while at the same time expressing a meaningful message Cinquain Line 1: 1 word title (noun) 2 syllables Line 2: 2 descriptive words (adjectives) 4 syllables Line 3: 3 words that express action 6 syllables Line 4: Line 5: 4 words that express feeling 1 word (synonyms or reference to title in line 1) 8 syllables 2 syllables Friend/ship Pre/cious, awe/some Bright/ens gloom/y mo/ments Rain/bow's treas/ure trove dis/cov/ered Al/ways Diamante Seven line poem, shaped like a diamond The result is a pattern of contrast shown in poetry form LINE 1 - one word subject (noun) contrasting with line 7 LINE 2 - two adjectives describing LINE 1 noun LINE 3 - three action verbs ending in -ing or -ed to describe LINE I noun LINE 4 - four words: first 2 words relate to line 1, last 2 words relate to line 7 LINE 5 - three participles ending in -ing or -ed to describe LINE 7 noun LINE 6 - two adjectives describing LINE 7 noun LINE 7 - one word subject (noun) contrasting with line 1 Diamante Square Symmetrical, Conventional Shaping, Measuring, Balancing Boxes, Rooms, Clocks, Halos Encircling, Circumnavigating, Enclosing Round, Continuous Circle From: http://teams.lacoe.edu/documentation/classrooms/amy/algebra/56/activities/poetry/diamante.html Diamante Fireball Brilliant, Beautiful Flashing, Shining, Dashing Bright, Wondrous, Black, Nothing, Staring, Hoping, Missing Deep, Quiet Darkness From http://www.docstoc.com/docs/17715586/Diamante-Poem