Kaylin’s Fun File of Poetry Kaylin Brown May, 19, 2009 6A, Language Table of Contents Exaggeration…………………. Section 1 Free Verse……………………….Section 2 Narrative…………………………Section 3 Metaphor………………………… Section 4 Personification………………… Section 5 Onomatopoeia…………………… Section 6 Alliteration……………………….. Section 7 Repetition…………………………. Section 8 Exaggeration/Section 1 Definition The obvious stretching of the truth Example Poem “Please Do Not Read This Poem” by Kenn Nisbitt Please don't read this poem. It's only meant for me. That's it. Just move along now. There's nothing here to see. Besides, I'm sure you'd rather just go outside and play. So put the poem down now and slowly back away. Hey, why are you still reading? That isn't very nice. I've asked you once politely. Don't make me ask you twice. I'm telling you, it's private. Do not read one more line. Hey! That's one more. Now stop it. This isn't yours; it's mine. You're not allowed to read this. You really have to stop. If you don't quit this instant, I swear I'll call a cop. He'll drag you off in handcuffs. He'll lock you up in jail, and leave you there forever until you're old and frail. Your friends will all forget you. You won't be even missed. Your family, too, will likely forget that you exist. And all because you read this instead of having fun. It's too late now, amigo; the poem's nearly done. There's only one solution. Here's what you'll have to do: Tell all your friends and family they shouldn't read it too. www.poetry4kids.com Description Lines in this poem that are examples of exaggeration are; “You’re not allowed to read this You really have to stop If you don’t stop this instant, I swear I’ll call a cop He’ll drag you off in handcuffs. He’ll lock you up in jail, And leave you there forever Until you’re old and frail” This is definitely exaggeration because you cannot go to jail for reading a poem that is supposed to be read “Too Much To Do” by Kaylin Brown I want to go outside today But I have one hundred and three things to do Sweep the floor, Wash the car And do my homework too I wanted to go outside today But I had one hundred and three things to do After I finished sweeping the floor Washing the car And doing my homework too I no longer have one hundred and three things Now it’s one hundred and two Free Verse/Section 2 Definition Poetry written without a regular rhyme scheme, meter, or form Example Poem “Good Hotdogs”: by Sandra Cisneros Fifty cents apiece To eat our lunch We'd run Straight from school Instead of home Two blocks Then the store That smelled like steam You ordered Because you had the money Two hotdogs and two pops for here Everything on the hotdogs Except pickle lily Dash those hotdogs Into buns and splash on All that good stuff Yellow mustard and onions And french fries piled on top all Rolled up in a piece of wax Paper for us to hold hot In our hands Quarters on the counter Sit down Good hotdogs We'd eat Fast till there was nothing left But salt and poppy seeds even The little burnt tips Of french fries We'd eat you humming And me swinging my legs Homepage.mac.com/crocon/poetry Description Because this poem is an example of free verse, it has no rhyming words. The words “here” and “dogs” do not rhyme. Neither do “onions” and “wax”, nor “all” and “not”. This poem has no rhyme scheme so it is definitely a free verse poem. “School” by Kaylin Brown The hectic hallways Slamming of the lockers The sound of shoes squeaking Against the floor And of pencils going across paper The sudden ring of the bell To alert the students to move The joy in their faces When they come out of the worst class of the day Finally its lunch time The lunchroom has many aromas The smell of Clorox from the tables The smell of the lunch And the sides that go along with it The loud conversations at each table It’s the last locker break of the day The last class of the day Every day is slightly different But the long week days usually end With a good nights sleep Narrative/Section 3 Definition A poem that tells a story, and has characters, a setting, and a plot Example Poem “Papa’s Fishing Hole” by Elisabeth D. Babin I place my tiny hand in his as we walk to Papa’s Fishing Hole. I hand him a wiggling night crawler fighting for his life. The deadly hook squishes through the worm’s head, and I watch the brown guts ooze out. Papa throws the pole’s long arm back and then forward. The line lands in a merky spot along the reedy shore. Now I get to reel it in. Nothing yet, he says. He casts again. I reel it in. Still nothing. Three time’s a charm, he says. He casts. A strike. We turn the crank together. The fish jumps from the water and his colors form a rainbow as he arches his body above the reeds. My Papa handles him with the skill of a master as I stop helping to watch him work. A stiff jerk, a quick reel, a stiff jerk again. The fish doesn’t have a chance, I yell. I know. I know. I know, he says. www.docstoc.com/docs/narrativepoetry Description This poem is a narrative poem because it has characters, a setting, and a plot. The characters in this poem are Papa and the character that is not given a name, but is implied to be Papa’s grandchild. The setting is at a murky spot, and Papa and his grandchild are fishing. “B-ball with My Bros.” by Kaylin Brown It was my two brothers against me We were playing basketball outside The score was thirteen to fourteen I shot a long shot They said ‘ Get real your gonna lose’ I really shut then up when the ball went in the net Swoosh!! ‘ I won, I won, I won’ I did say Of course they were sore losers And wanted to replay Personification/Section 4 Definition A type of figurative language in which a poet gives an animal, object, or idea human like qualities Example Poem “Hey Diddle Diddle” by Mother Goose Hey diddle diddle, the cat and the fiddle, The cat and the fiddle, The cow jumped over the moon. The little dog laughed to see such fun And the dish ran away with the spoon! Description This is an example of personification because it uses phrases such as; “The cow jumped over the moon” and “The little dog laughed to see such fun” In real life cows cannot jump over the moon and dogs cannot laugh. That is why this poem is an example of personification. “Fishing” by Kaylin Brown We had been sitting for a while The rods were tired and weak We tried time after time to get a catch But the worms that were scared And wriggled in fright The fish seemed mighty picky Because the rod they would not bite Metaphor/Section 5 Definition A direct comparison between two unlike things, does not use the words like or as Example Poem “The Toaster” by William Jay Smith A silver-scaled Dragon with jaws flaming red Sits at my elbow and toasts my bread. I hand him fat slices, and then, one by one, He hands them back when he sees they are done. Description In this poem, the poet is comparing the toaster to a silver dragon without using the words like or as. That is why this is an example of metaphor. “Tornado” by Kaylin Brown A monster that varies in color That destroys everything in sight Is made of opposing air And cannot be destroyed It’s a monster that sucks up houses And has no sympathy for trees It has no face And no feet But indeed it is one of the many monsters of nature Alliteration/Section 6 Definition The repetition of the same consonant sound at the beginnings of several words of a line of poetry or sentence Example Poem “Dewdrops Dancing Down Daisies” by Paul Mc Cann Don't delay dawns disarming display . Dusk demands daylight . Dewdrops dwell delicately drawing dazzling delight . Dewdrops dilute daisies domain. Distinguished debutantes . Diamonds defray delivered daylights distilled daisy dance . Description The same consonant used in this poem is the consonant sound “d” There are multiple words that begin with the letter “d” “Tori’s Dad” by Kaylin Brown Tori’s dad Trevor Told Tori to Turn off the Television because It was taking Tori Too long to Finish her homework Onomatopoeia/Section 7 Definition The use of words that sound like the noises they describe Example Poem “Pizza Parlor” by Alex Wee! Wee! Goes the dough in the air. Splat ! Splat ! Goes the sauce on the dough. Sprinkle. Sprinkle. Goes the cheese on the sauce. Flop! Flop! Goes the pepperoni on the cheese. Sizzle! Sizzle! Goes the pizza as it cooks. Description This poem is describing the expressions made by the ingredients used to make up pizza. Words such as; wee, splat, sprinkle, flop, and sizzle are all examples of onomatopoeia “Riding” by Kaylin Brown Ding! Goes the light Zoom! Zoom! Is the revving car motorcycle waiting to zoom pass everyone Honk! Honk! Cars honking impatiently Ding! Goes the light Zoom! Zoom! Is the revving motorcycle Vroooooooom!!! We’re finally on our way Repetition Definition “To repeat” something, the use of any sound, word, phrase, or sentence Example Poem Lazy, lazy, lazy, Jane, She wants a drink of water So she waits, and waits, and waits, and waits For it to rain Description This poem is an example of repetition because repetition means “to repeat something” in this poem the words “lazy” and “wait” are repeated several times. “What’s For Dinner?” by Kaylin Brown In my imagination I hear chicken frying I wonder what’s for dinner tonight In my imagination I smell barbeque grilling I wonder what’s for dinner tonight In my imagination I taste creamy salad dressing I wonder what’s for dinner tonight In my imagination I feel mooshy honey mustard dripping off my finger I wonder what’s for dinner tonight School is over I get home Walk into the house Finally!! I know what’s for dinner tonight