Short Stories Unit English 9 Characteristics of Short Stories Limited in length Limited to one main event and the development of one character Ex: Napoleon Dynomite vs. Breakfast Club Plot Sequence of incidents or actions in a story. Whatever the characters do, or whatever happens to them, constitutes plot. Finding Nemo Plot http://www.glencoe.com/sec/literature/course/course 1/unit/shortstory.shtml Plot The most important element in plot is conflict. External or internal conflict A story often ends when conflict is resolved but this is not always the case… Plot Structure Plot is the literary element that describes the structure of a story. It shows the a causal arrangement of events and actions within a story. Types of Linear Plots Plots can be told in Chronological Order Flashback In media res (in the middle of things) when the story starts in the middle of the action without exposition Pyramid Plot Structure The most basic and traditional form of plot is pyramid-shaped. This structure has been described in more detail by Aristotle and by Gustav Freytag. Aristotle’s Unified Plot The basic triangle-shaped plot structure was described by Aristotle in 350 BCE. Aristotle used the beginning, middle, and end structure to describe a story that moved along a linear path, following a chain of cause and effect as it works toward the solution of a conflict or crisis. Freytag’s Plot Structure Freytag modified Aristotle’s system by adding a rising action (or complication) and a falling action to the structure. Freytag used the five-part design shown above to describe a story’s plot. Modified Plot Structure Freytag’s Pyramid is often modified so that it extends slightly before and after the primary rising and falling action. You might think of this part of the chart as similar to the warm-up and cool-down for the story. Plot Components Climax: the turning point, the most intense moment—either mentally or in action Rising Action: the series of conflicts and crisis in the story that lead to the climax Falling Action: all of the action which follows the climax Exposition: the start of the story, the situation before the action starts Resolution: the conclusion, the tying together of all of the threads Conflict Conflict is the dramatic struggle between two forces in a story. Without conflict, there is no plot. Types of Conflict Interpersonal Conflict Human vs Human Human vs Nature Human vs Society Internal Conflict Human vs Self Commonly found in creative writing Literary Themes What is a theme? Themes can be found everywhere: literature, stories, art, movies etc… The theme of a fable is its moral. The theme of a parable is its teaching. The theme of a piece of literature is its view about life and how people behave. Theme & Meaning Theme is the… underlying meaning of the story, a universal truth, a significant statement the story is making about society, human nature, or the human condition. Theme = idea The theme of a literary work is its underlying central idea or the generalization it communicates about life. Theme...the meaning of life? The theme expresses the author's opinion or raises a question about human nature or the meaning of human experience. At times the author's theme may not confirm or agree with your own beliefs. Even then, if skillfully written, the work will still have a theme that illuminates some aspects of true human experience. The author's task is to communicate on a common ground with the reader. Although the particulars of your experience may be different from the details of the story, the general underlying truths behind the story may be just the connection that both you and the writer are seeking. An understanding of theme is dependent upon one's previous experience of life and literature. At the same time, theme in literature can enlarge one's understanding of life. Be aware that the theme never completely explains the story. It is simply one of the elements that make up the whole. Some short stories have secondary themes as well. Common Literary Themes (Themes repeated in many works) 1. The quest for immortality “Stranger, stop and cast an eye. As you are now, so once was I. As I am now, so you shall be, Prepare for death and follow me.” 2. The individual’s relationship and obligation to society. Sometimes called “man vs. society” 3. The individual’s inward journey to understand himself or herself/identity. Sometimes called “man vs. self” 4. The individual’s relationship and obligation to the natural world. Sometimes called “man vs. nature” 5. How justice and injustice are decided 6. The individual as hero; what it means to be a hero or antihero. 7. What it means to be a “survivor.” 8. The individual’s experience of alienation and despair 9. The artist’s relationship and obligation to society. 10. aka: What tomorrow’s world holds for us … “The Future” 11. Love: Topics/Effects Marriage Logical-sensible love Romance Self-centered love Platonic or companionate love Game-Playing Unrequited love Godly love Familial love Admiration Infatuation Possessiveness Erotic love Intense dependency Jealousy Altruistic love Love of Country 12. Role of Institutions Sometimes called “man vs. the institution” Literary Themes End of Presentation. The Lottery “If a thousand foolish people do a foolish thing, it’s still a foolish thing”. What does this mean? How does it relate to the lottery? Do you agree/disagree? Why? What is an example of this in real life? Consider this when examining mood in “The Lottery”? After execution of the woman, the people go back to work or eat lunch as if nothing has happened. Villagers do not excuse children from the lottery. Children take part in the stoning. When Mr. Hutchinson pulls from his wife’s hand the slip of paper she has drawn, he holds it up for all to see and contributes to her execution. The Lady or the Tiger What is the theme or message of the work? Do you agree or disagree with the message? Why? Mood = EMOTIONS! Tone Content What is tone? Purpose of tone Elements to make the tone How to identify tone? What is Tone? Tone: the implied attitude of a writer toward the subject and characters of a work. ATTITUDE CHARACTERS AUTHOR Tone may be happy, sad, formal, informal, ironic, playful, serious, angry, naive condescending, or many other possible attitudes TONE EXAMPLE Finally, one of the girls pointed to the grass and giggled. "Meow!" A cat sat on the edge of the field and licked its paw. They did indeed have company. The girls ran over to the cat and pet his belly. They laughed and the cat sauntered back to the field. TONE Example The tone of this passage is happy/contentment as there was a successful, happy resolution to the problem. Elements to make the tone Elements contribute to make the tone The speaker The author’s language The author The theme or/and the characters Tips to identify tone Tone must be inferred through the use of descriptive words. You can recognize the tone/attitude by the language/word choices the author uses. His language will reveal his perspective/opinion Note: Be careful to separate mood from tone. The tone shows you an author's opinion, while mood is the feeling and atmosphere of the text Essential Question How do both the mood & tone of a story help the author achieve it’s purpose? BrainPop: Mood & Tone Class Blog Adam Griffen Prezi Setting: The Portable Phonograph 5 minute write: Imagine that you are fleeing your homes because of an impending calamity that threatens to destroy civilizations. List 5 items that you would take with you? The Portable Phonograph: CP English: GROUPWORK: Find a line or two that demonstrates Clark’s use of setting to create mood and atmosphere in the text. Point of View Omniscient Narrator Point of view is simply the vantage point from which the story is told. Omniscient means “all knowing”. In this case there is no identifiable narrator. The omniscient narrator knows all the thoughts and feelings of all the characters . Omniscient Narrator Example Once upon a time there was a girl named Cinderella. Cinderella got her name because she was forced to work as a servant and sleep near the cinders. Cinderella was treated cruelly by her wicked stepmother, who was jealous of the girl’s good looks and sweet temper because her own daughters were ugly and mean. Limited Third POV Story is narrated by someone who stands outside the story, but who sees everything from the limited vantage point of only one character. All attention is focused on one person. We do not know much of what other characters outside this one are thinking or feeling. Limited Third Person POV Example Once upon a time there was a girl name Cinderella, who was treated cruelly by her stepmother. Cinderella often wept bitterly in her ashy corner. Nightmares haunted her, and she feared that darkened scullery when the rats came out and played about her feet. At times, she wondered if her goodness would ever be rewarded. Third Person Objective The narrator tells “his” or “her” story and does not reveal any character’s thoughts or feelings. Characters may reveal their feelings through actions or dialogue. Example: He walked down the street. A man drove by and yelled, “Hey, watch where you’re going!” First-Person POV This is when the writer lets one character tell the story. This narrator can be a hero or heroine of the story, or a minor character is observing the action. This narrator would speak using “I”. As an audience we only know what the narrator reports to us. First Person POV example I had spent sixteen years sitting in the cinders of my kitchen. My stepmother must have hated me, because she made me do the dirty work. I could not understand the reasons for her feelings, for I had always treated her with respect. I slept in the ashes and was tortured by nightmares and fear of rats. Second Person The narrator tells “you” or “your” story, usually used for instructions. Example: First, you should wash your hands. “Choose Your Own Adventure” story To analyze the POV ask these questions. Is this narrator a character in the story, or does the narrator stand outside the story? Does the narrator know about all the action and characters in the story or is it limited to one character? How does the point of view affect my reaction to the story’s characters and events? Author’s Purpose Modes of Writing Three Reasons for Writing 1. To Inform (Expository) 2. To Persuade (Persuasive) 3. Entertain (Narrative or Poetry) Writing to Inform Often called expository writing. Expository writing shows or explains facts. • • • • Examples: Biography of Barack Obama News report about a shooting Note to a friend Essay about “killer bees” Remember: Expository = Expose Writing to Persuade Attempts to influence the reader. Usually makes an argument. • • • • Examples: Political speeches Advertisements A cover letter for your resume An essay urging readers to recycle Writing to Entertain Narratives: stories. Have a beginning, middle, and end A story may have a lesson, but the author’s main purpose is to entertain. • • • • Examples of Writing to Entertain Harry Potter books Poems about love Narrative essay about the big game Script for a TV show Is it a story, poem, or drama (script)? Yes No Does the text make arguments? Yes No Does the text give facts? Yes Entertain Persuade No Inform Start Over Voice Each writer has a distinct personality. Each writer has passions, opinions, prejudices, and information. Words should capture the writer's personality. Writers with strong voice capture the reader's attention with individuality, liveliness, and energy. Strong voice makes the writer's purpose clear. Strong voice helps readers experience the emotions of the writer and understand the writer's ideas. Careful word choice, punctuation, paragraphing and style help strengthen a writer's voice. Voice Example: Learning to play piano… Ex. 1 – Audience: Parents Those piano lessons you’re pushing on your reluctant ten year old, stressful though they may be, will pay off down the line. No one was worse than me as a kid, giving my mother (bless her soul!) a run for her money every day at practice time. She had to round me up, tear me away from my friends, sit me down on the bench, and then listen to me moan and watch me squirm for the required half an hour. I learned, through her calm persistence, that I might as well apply myself, since I was wasting a half hour anyway. She always smiled and said, “Someday you’ll thank me!” She stuck to her guns, and offered HIGH PRAISE when my dirty little fingers produced anything that remotely resembled music. After awhile a surprising thing began to happen – the scales and Hannon exercises started to pay off and my fingers gained some kinesthetic knowledge of their own. I discovered, to my reluctant delight, that I COULD PLAY! The key was consistency, her quiet but unfailing persistence, and her confidence and belief that she was giving me a gift I could not yet recognize. Voice Example: Learning to play piano… . Ex. 2 – Audience: piano teachers The challenge in teaching piano to children is not in acquiring students, rather it is in keeping students motivated and engaged. A one size fits all approach will leave you with only a handful of students. The gifted, indemand pedagogue is the one who sees each student and adapts a balanced combination of technique, repertoire, and theory in a variety of ways based on the ability, attention span, maturity, and personality of the individual student. This involves a good deal of careful observation, time spent researching or creating appropriate music and material, and taking the time and energy to pinpoint the motivational devices that move a student to want to practice. Of course, demonstrating a real passion and zest for your own playing, and sharing that freely is often the most powerful way to intrigue and motivate your young protégés. At a recent conference on piano pedagogy and methodology we explored a variety of specific strategies which I will share. Voice Notes A Voice Revealed Knowing Poe Edgar Allan Poe Video “Cask of Amontillado”: POV Analyze the actions, motives, and attitudes of the two main characters. Key Supporting Details Supporting details are the examples and ideas that support the main idea. Writers use these details to help establish the main idea, whether they state it directly or imply it. Key supporting details provide with you the important details or elements that help you understand the main idea. Non- key supporting details do not support the main idea. Key Supporting Detail Examples Reading a passage about fabulous dinner parties, it would be off topic to digress into a lengthy discussion about how the families obtained wealth. The Necklace Journal Prompt: Is the price that Mme. Loisel pays for being lent the necklace too high, or is it worth the social triumph and memory for an evening? What could she have done instead of trying to cover up her mistake? Irony 3 Kinds of Irony What is Irony? Irony is about expectations. Irony: the opposite of what is expected. 3 kinds of irony Verbal Dramatic Situational Verbal Irony A character says one thing but means the opposite Also called sarcasm or being sarcastic. Examples The locker room smells really good. Awesome! Another homework packet! Dramatic Irony When the reader understands more about the events of a story than a character. You know something that a character doesn’t. Example Tim’s parents are proud of the “A” he got on the test, but we know he cheated. Alex writes a love poem to Judy but we know that Judy loves Devin. Situational Irony When what actually happens is the opposite of what is expected. Something about the situation is completely unexpected. Example General Sedgwick’s last words were, “They couldn’t hit an elephant at this distance.” Bill Gates uses an Apple computer. Review Something that is ironic is unexpected. If unexpected by a character, it’s dramatic. If unexpected by everyone, it’s situational. If it’s sarcasm, it’s verbal. 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