Music Extended Essays – scoring rubric Student: Numerical Score: Predicted Letter Grade: Faculty Adviser: Use the guidelines & rubric on the following pages to award scores for each criterion: A: Research Question out of 2 B: Introduction out of 2 C: Investigation out of 4 D: Knowledge & Understanding out of 4 E: Reasoned Argument out of 4 F: Application of Analytical Skills out of 4 G: Use of Language out of 4 H: Conclusion out of 2 I: Formal Presentation out of 4 J: Abstract out of 2 K: Holistic Judgment out of 4 Total out of 36 Grading Mark Bands A: Research Question 29-36 points A excellent 23-28 points B good 16-22 points C satisfactory 8-15 points D mediocre 0-7 points E elementary Rubric The research question can often be best defined in the form of a question. It may, however, also be presented as a statement or proposition for discussion. It must be: • specific and sharply focused • appropriate to the particular area of music being explored • centred on music and not on peripheral issues such as biography or social discourses • stated clearly early on in the essay. Note that larger-scale musical works or groups of pieces may limit the possibility of effective treatment within the word limit. 0 The research question is not stated in the introduction or does not lend itself to investigation in the subject. 1 The research question is stated in the introduction, but is not clearly expressed or is too broad in scope. 2 The research question is clearly stated in the introduction, sharply focused, and lends itself to effective treatment within the word limit. NOTES: If the research question does not lend itself to investigation in the subject, scores in criteria C, D, and E are also affected. If the research question is not present in the introduction, it affects criteria A & B. If the research question is not present in the abstract, it affects criterion J only. MORE Student’s Score B: Introduction Rubric The introduction should relate the research question to existing subject knowledge: the student’s personal experience or particular opinion is rarely relevant here. 0 The research question is not placed in context and the significance of the topic is not explained in the introduction. 1 Attempt is made to place the research question in context and to explain the significance, stating why the topic is worthy of investigation. 2 The research question’s context is clear, as is the significance of the topic and why it is worthy of investigation. The introduction should not be seen as an opportunity for padding out an essay with a lengthy account of the context of the music. C: Investigation Rubric The range of resources available will be influenced by various factors, but above all by the topic. 0 • Students should use primary sources (scores, recordings, performances, interviews) in the first instance, with secondary sources (textbooks and the comments of other musicians) as evidential support. Little or no evidence that sources have been consulted, data gathered, or that planning has taken place. 1 Sources used and/or data gathered are inappropriate. Little or no evidence of planning the investigation. 2 Limited range of appropriate sources and/or data; some relevant material selected; some level of planning evident. 3 Sufficient range of appropriate sources and/or data; relevant material selected; satisfactory planning is evident. 4 Imaginative range of appropriate sources and/or data; relevant material carefully selected; well-planned investigation. • The proper planning of an essay should involve interrogating source material in light of the research question, so that the views of other musicians are used to support the student's own argument, and not as a substitute for that argument. It may thus be helpful for a student to challenge a statement by a musician, in reference to the music being studied, instead of simply agreeing with it, where there is evidence to support such a challenge. • If students make use of internet-based sources, they should do so critically and circumspectly in full awareness of their potential unreliability. D: Knowledge & Understanding Rubric Students are expected to demonstrate knowledge and understanding of the music chosen, together with its historical, social and cultural, as well as academic, contexts. Wherever possible, this knowledge should be based at least partially on primary sources. 0 1 2 Student’s Score (A maximum of 2 may be awarded if the research question does not lend itself to investigation in this subject.) Student’s Score No real knowledge or understanding of the topic studied. Some knowledge but little understanding of the topic. Little awareness of an academic context for the investigation. Adequate knowledge and some understanding of the topic. Some awareness of academic context for the investigation. 3 Good knowledge and understanding of the topic. Successfully outlines the academic context for the investigation. 4 Very good knowledge and understanding of the topic. Clearly and precisely grounds the investigation in an academic context. MORE Student’s Score (A maximum of 2 may be awarded if the research question does not lend itself to investigation in this subject.) E: Reasoned Argument Rubric Students should be aware of the need to give their essays the backbone of a developing argument. Personal views should not simply be stated but need to be supported by reasoned argument to persuade the reader of their validity. Straightforward descriptive or narrative accounts that lack analysis do not usually advance an argument and should be avoided. 0 No attempt to develop a reasoned argument in relation to the research question. 1 Limited or superficial attempt to present ideas logically/coherently and to develop a reasoned argument. 2 Some attempt to present ideas logically/coherently and develop a reasoned argument, with only partial success. 3 Ideas are presented logically/coherently, along with reasoned argument, but with some weaknesses. 4 Ideas are presented clearly, logically and coherently; successful in developing a reasoned, convincing argument. F: Application of Analytical & Evaluative Skills Rubric Students should accurately and consistently analyse technical aspects of the music (melody, harmony, rhythm, texture, tone colour, and lyrics or text), demonstrating an understanding and a persuasive personal interpretation of the music. 0 No application of appropriate analytical and evaluative skills. 1 Little application of appropriate analytical and evaluative skills. 2 Some application of appropriate analytical and evaluative skills, which may be only partially effective. 3 Sound application of appropriate analytical and evaluative skills. 4 Effective and sophisticated application of appropriate analytical and evaluative skills. G: Use of Language Rubric Students are expected to make effective use of musical terminology and, where appropriate, notation. Notation may take a variety of forms, depending on the type of music studied. 0 1 2 3 4 MORE Language is inaccurate and unclear. No effective use of terminology appropriate to the subject. Language sometimes communicates clearly, but not consistently. Terminology is only partially accurate. Language & terminology usually communicate clearly and accurately. Language communicates clearly. Terminology is accurate, although there may be occasional lapses. Language is clear and precise. Terminology is appropriate, used accurately and with skill and understanding. Student’s Score (A maximum of 2 may be awarded if the research question does not lend itself to investigation in this subject.) Student’s Score Student’s Score H: Conclusion Rubric “Consistent” is the key word here: the conclusion should develop out of the argument and not introduce new or extraneous matter. It should not repeat the material of the introduction; rather, it should present a new synthesis in light of the discussion. 0 1 2 I: Formal Presentation This criterion relates to the extent to which the essay conforms to academic standards about the way in which research papers should be presented. The presentation of essays that omit a bibliography or that do not give references for quotations is deemed unacceptable (level 0). Essays that omit one of the required elements—title page, table of contents, page numbers—are deemed no better than satisfactory (maximum level 2), while essays that omit two of them are deemed poor at best (maximum level 1). In music, discographies should be included where appropriate; musical examples, and tables and charts, if relevant, should appear in the body of the essay, as close as possible to their first reference. The abstract must clearly state three things: (1) the research question, (2) how the investigation was undertaken (methodology), and (3) conclusions reached. The abstract is judged on the clarity with which it presents an overview of the research and the essay, not on the quality of the research question itself, nor on the quality of the argument or the conclusions. Clearly-stated, effective conclusion; relevant, consistent with evidence, and includes any unresolved questions. 0 Unacceptable formal presentation; or essay exceeds 4,000 words. 1 Poor formal presentation. 2 Satisfactory formal presentation. 3 Good formal presentation. 4 Excellent formal presentation. Rubric 0 1 2 K: Holistic Judgment This criterion allows examiners to reward work that shows initiative, creativity and insight, even if the essay does not achieve the highest standard overall. Qualities that are rewarded under this criterion include the following. Little or no attempt to provide a conclusion relevant to the research question. Attempt to provide conclusion relevant to the research question, but not entirely consistent with presented evidence. Rubric A score of 0 must be awarded if there is no bibliography or no citations in the essay or if the essay exceeds 4000 words. Essays that omit one of the required elements—title page, table of contents, page numbers—may be deemed no better than level 2, while essays J: Abstract that omit two of them are deemed maximum level 1. Student’s Score Student’s Score Abstract exceeds 300 words, or is missing one or more of the required 3 elements. Abstract contains all 3 required elements, but they are not clearly stated. Abstract includes all 3 required elements, and they are clearly stated. Rubric 0 No evidence of initiative, creativity, or insight. 1 • Intellectual initiative: Ways of demonstrating this in music essays include the choice of topic and research question, locating and using a wide range of sources, including some that may have been little used previously or generated for the study (for instance, transcripts of oral interviews). Little evidence of initiative, creativity, or insight. 2 Some evidence of initiative, creativity, insight. 3 • Insight and depth of understanding: These are most likely to be demonstrated as a consequence of detailed research, reflection that is thorough and well informed, and reasoned argument that consistently and effectively addresses the research question. Clear evidence of initiative, creativity, insight. 4 Considerable evidence of initiative, creativity, insight. • Creativity: In music essays, this includes qualities such as comparison of musical features, inventive approaches to musical analysis and new approaches to popular topics. Student’s Score Student’s Score