QUOTE TECHNIQUE Noone gets into my room, let alone my bed, without one. P1 I was part of the other world, though this morning I felt decidedly part of theirs. P2 Alluding to juxtaposition of classes in society I was glad to know the old girls network was still in force… Subversion of expectation Studying science in the new wing and Latin in the old P5 Symbolism I spent four years getting an Arts degree. With honours. P5 I saw the child I used to be. The girl too tall for her age, the girl with no father, beg me with the sad eyes of childhood Flashback At the centre of this group was a face that could launch ships. P6 Literary allusion (to Dr Faustus – Helen of Troy) There were roses and carnations. And there was Lavender. P7 Allusion; symbolism I rephrased the question so as to get an answer that consisted of more than just ‘good’ and ‘bloke’. EFFECT First sign of her independence; establishes she is in charge, powerful First time there is juxtaposition of classes and areas of Sydney; foreshadows her views on the duality of Sydney yet to come Generally known as ‘all boys network’ or ‘old boys network’. Subverts audience expectation of gender roles in society Latin is becoming an extinct subject in Australian schools; like the ‘wing’ it too is being replaced by ‘new things’ (science being relatively ‘new’) and constantly having new scientific discoveries Mirrors Marele Day’s own degree at Sydney University Shows her intelligence and higher level of education. Foreshadows that it is Sally who will (involuntarily) begin the ‘war’ between Harry and Mark; Alluding to Harry Lavender – FORESHADOWING. The lavender symbolises Harry Lavender and its presence is an indication that he is involved Demonstrates her resourcefulness TYPE Independent Cynical FUNCTION Challenge expectations of women; evoke sense of power and control Attempts to highlight a disconnection with mainstream society Highlight the resourcefulness and connectedness of women in the field Witty AUTHORIAL VOICE Reinforce CVs voice is an extension of Day Introspective Reveals to the audience CV is not as emotionless as she appears or tries to be Challenge expectations about women’s levels of education Intellectual Intellectual Determined Reinforces that women are ingenious, inventive, quick-thinking …sooner or later the debt collector would be around, knocking hard on their bodies. P10 Pun, metaphor I was working on the hair of the dog theory and my little dog was the long-haired type. P11 The last thing I remember before drifting to sleep was the drowsy smell of lavender. P14 Idiom, cliché …A couple of old girls…a group of old blokes… P17 Colloquial language …the centre pole of Sydney Tower that dazzled the city with fool’s gold… P17 Metaphor; allusion; Not quite the metropolis of New York but still it took your breath away P17 …Darling Harbour where buildings with the eyes gouged out had been demolished to make way for ‘development’, for the men of power to build monoliths to themselves P17 Comparison, cliché The present annihilating the past and sweettalking the future P17 Personification, Connotations, sombre tone The bus turned off the Expressway and into the city’s pulsing heart P18 Personification, metaphor Symbolism Metaphor No one is invincible; no one can escape death no matter how hard you try. Creates humour; establishes her hard-drinking lifestyle Pessimistic Witty Reinforces the stereotype of HBD hard lifestyle Shiny particles that look like gold but are worthless. Appearances can be deceiving; Sydney looks beautiful and shiny but that’s not the reality; Proclaiming her love for Sydney Pessimistic, cynical Reveals a negative attitude towards aspects of Sydney Romanticised The buildings are phallic symbols of power; the bigger the building, the more powerful the man. CV is being critical of the powerful men of the city. Eyes gouged out refers to the demolishing of the soul as eyes are considered the ‘windows to the soul’ – thus the men have no souls Sydney is in the midst of being remade, reconstructed. ‘Annihilating’ creates connotations of harsh deconstruction, flattening, killing while ‘sweet-talking’ creates connotations of bribery, falsity and being fake Metaphor for the CBD. Sydney is coming alive and is Sarcastic, passiveaggressive Reveals a passionate side Reinforce her hostility towards men in power and her hatred for misogynist and chauvinistic egocentric men The plant is symbolic of Harry Lavender; foreshadows that Lavender puts people ‘to sleep’ Claudia has a range of register Pessimistic, disillusioned Question the morals of the powerful people and the direction of the city Passionate, ardent Evoke sensory imagery of Sydney; it’s alive …they were lulled to sleep in their subterranean beds… P18 Connotations, adjectival imagery ‘Do you know how the heart works?’ In ways unfathomable. P20 Pun Live fast, die young and leave a good-looking corpse. The cliché had grown old and bitter. P22 Cliché, Steve Angell…with eyes like the pools you find beneath waterfalls. It was all I could do to stop myself taking off my clothes and diving in P25 Simile, metaphor/pun I saw…tantalising glimpses of a healthy pink tongue P25 Innuendo The head told the heart to get back in its box and get on with business P25 Personification One of the former and two of the latter. And the former is former P27 My husband remarried: nice country girl, content with what she’s got P27 Pun/ manipulation of language Double entendre I wouldn’t be surprised if there were a few hard edges, scar tissue, especially with the kids… P28 Metaphor I kept my eyes focussed, refusing to look back Double entendre another living, breathing character Connotations of ‘subterranean’ infer a hidden, secretive world below Sydney; links with the idea of facades While the Dr is speaking literally, CV is referring to her past relationships and the emotional stresses they have caused her CV’s view on this cliché subverts the hard-talking, fast-living conventions of typical male hardboiled detectives. Romanticised description of Steve subverts the sexist language found in traditional hard-boiled novels. Claudia wants to jump right into a sexual relationship with him Demonstrating her sexual desire for Steve based solely on physical attraction Represents her determination to cut herself off emotionally and persevere with the task at hand (enthusiastic) Sarcastic Through word play she is declaring herself divorced and single to Steve Implies that the married life and being a wife and mother was not fulfilling for Claudia Admitting it can be emotionally difficult to not have her kids around her; represents she is vulnerable and receptive to hurt and pain Witty She is determined not to think about what she once had; she is certain of being a part-time carer to Determined, resilient, Witty, introspective, vulnerable Reveal her façade; her is not as tough as her try to perceive Satirical, sarcastic Challenge the expectations of the male detective Romantic, bold, Shock the audience; challenge expectations of female diction Bold (erotic mood established) Determined, resilient As above Reinforce her tough exterior; to comply with the disconnectedness of male counterparts Reveals her detachment Sarcastic Introspective, vulnerable, reflective Exposes the emotional effects of the separation from her children; reveals her duplicity: maternal AND tough Challenges gender stereotype Maybe sometime you could tell me how the heart works. The head, I know all about that, but the heart and it’s motivations are infinitely intriguing P28 Double entendre If I was going to dive into those liquid pools, he was going to get wet too P29 Extended metaphor But hang on Claudia, I thought, you’ve dived in before and found the waters murky and cold Metaphor, inner monologue So pretty and so innocent, the façade of lights covered a multitude of sins and one of those sins was murder P30 Personification My legs are my best weapon. If I’m close enough I can do a karate kick that knocks them flat. If I’m far enough away I run P30 Subversion …I don’t carry a gun like some of my cowboy colleagues P30 Adjectival imagery If I don’t have one then I can’t use it and conversely it can’t be used on me P30 There’s more than one way to skin a cat and most of the time it’s not necessary to skin it. Cliché, Idiom, phraseology her children Referring to wanting to experiment with making an emotional connection to Steve Angell; implying he could ‘fix’ her broken, cold heart They both have a lot to lose and learn in relationships. CV could prove to be dangerous for Steve – she could break his heart easily She has jumped into relationships quickly before and realised it wasn’t what she wanted or expected. Represents the duality of Sydney; on the surface it is beautiful and innocent yet underneath there are criminals doing hideous acts of violence; you wouldn’t expect it from looking at Sydney’s exterior Highlights her conforming to and challenging gender stereotypes: typical feminine trait to detest violence and weapons; subverts the typical male hard-boiled detective by refusing to use weapons that can kill Creates image of the male detectives being rogue, careless officers who use their weapons before using their brains; implies the men are only interested in looking tough Realistic – aware she could be overpowered and have a weapon used against her Means: there is more than one way to do something. Evident CV is Introspective, contemplative Reveals that while she is detatched/ disconnected, she is open to possible connections Feisty, selfcynical Reinforces she is tough on herself and doesn’t have belief in her capability to have a rltnship Reveals her hesitant nature Introspective, contemplative Pessimistic, realistic, cluey, critical Evoke imagery of the dangers of Sydney and create social commentary on its duplicitous nature Witty, reflective, intelligent, quick-thinking Challenges and conforms to gender stereotypes Feisty, critical, sarcastic Critique male stereotypes & generalised behaviours Intelligent, contemplative, Reinforces her intelligence and realistic outlook on her gender Reveals that she complies to gender Reflective, contemplative. People tend to talk more, be open with a woman, less guarded, less wary. P31 Doors which in my childhood were left open all night for summer breezes to waft through were now bolted, alarmed and connected to a security guard system. A sign of the times. P33 I was being tailed. I must have been doing something right. P35 Flashback/reminiscence Character from Murder, She Wrote flickered across the TV screen… P35 Irony, foreshadowing I trod the taut rope, careful not to lean one way or the other P37 Metaphor I refrained from reminding her that the old don’t have a monopoly on loneliness I walked right past the Daimler and examined the bottom of my shoe for dog shit…there wasn’t any, but that didn’t stop me from going through the motions of wiping it off P46 Variable, she blew hot and cold like a moody child…Sydney was…not so high, not so dying, only sick sometimes… P47 It is only money. Everything has a price. P47 Personification Double entendre resourceful and doesn’t need to prove herself – this differentiates herself from male counterparts. Uses her gender to her advantage, is willing to let people think she is weak Links with ‘the present annihilating the past’ – Sydney is evolving and it is now not safe Cluey, persevering, Cunning stereotype as she has recognised its usefulness to her Nostalgic, reflective, contemplative To question the changing nature of society First indication her investigation was not a waste. Shows she is sharp. Foreshadows that Mrs Levack will provide clues after investigating and deducing clues like a female sleuth By not intervening in a domestic argument demonstrates CV is smart, perceptive, clear-headed. Another example of Claudia admitting she is not as tough and as unbreakable as she appears to be or tries to be Intelligent, observant Complies with female detective stereotype of deducing through clues Cluey, Reveals for her careful and considerate nature Vulnerable CV is resourceful, quick-thinking – wanting to see if it was her or the car being followed Cunning Exposes her vulnerability & reveals her susceptibility to emotional anguish & pain Reinforces her resourcefulness and ability to think quick Sydney is being described as a character. Imagery of a child to demonstrate there is some innocence to Sydney; ‘only sick sometimes’ to indicate it is not a completely vicious and corrupt city – only some parts Everyone and everything can be bought; indicating that the powerful Witty, contemplative, Evokes imagery of the city, makes social commentary on the nature of the city Cynical, disillusioned To question the morals and ethics of the people criminals has the government and police in their pocket; they were able to be bribed Willing to stand up to men; sarcasm used to cut the ‘alpha male’s’ confidence; shows she is in charge Witty, feisty, sarcastic, aggressive of Sydney; questions the manipulative nature of society Reinforces her stoicism and challenges gender stereotypes; critical of male stereotypes Reinforces both her intelligence and her introspective nature; she reflects on the idioms of typical hard boiled detectives Present tense ‘wanted’ reveals her previous optimistic perspective has been corrupted and reimaged to one of disillusionment Exposes her sexually liberated nature, reveals she has been in many (physical) relationships No thanks. Smart arses aren’t my style’. I turned my back on him and walked away. P48 Sarcastic vernacular Bliss was it in that dawn to be alive, but to be young was very heaven P49 Literary allusion Ability to recall lines from William Wordsworth poem is a reflection of her high level of education Intellectual, reflective, contemplative I’d wanted the dawn to last forever P49 Metaphor Disillusioned, realistic Robbie: ‘I’ve got quite a thirst…’ I grinned back ruefully, too chicken to tell him I’d drunk that fountain dry P50 Metaphor; double entendre Dawn is representative of light, something new. She wanted life to always be happy and positive, but she knew darkness would eventually come – literally and figuratively. Robbie is sexually attracted to CV. She has had too many relationships with younger men and does not want another. *p51 – CV describes the setting of a hit years before. Harry Lavender describes him killing the punk in a later chapter. CV: “You put it away Otto, you don’t know where it’s been” Otto: “That’s the trouble…it hasn’t been anywhere lately” P53 Parallel narrative Witty, feisty, Challenges gender expectations He went over the whole body…caressing it with his little gadget, paying particular attention to the smooth, round curves of the rear-end P53 Sexualised language Indicates Claudia is a sexual person with a ‘dirty mind’; this complies with the stereotype of male language and subverts the expectations of how ‘ladies’ speak. Indicative of her sexual nature; compounds the previous line about ‘where it’s been’ Bold Indicates a power struggle between the two females. Observational, intellectual Confronts the audiences and shocks them – challenges expectations of how women would describe car mechanics Highlights the tension between the two women She sat on the edge of a lounge chair, obviously knowing the territory and the Sexual innuendo Witty, bold, reflective psychological advantages…I was almost lying down P53 The conversation wasn’t supposed to go like this. She was supposed to soften and open up. P56 Repetition She let me out and I walked the million steps back into the real world P57 Hyperbole The unpredictable child had started off sunny, then clouds had frowned across her forehead. She’d sulked all day and finally burst into a fitful rain. P59 …we were going to change the world. Blow it up…when Carol got recruited everything changed. She was going to chip away at the structure rather than blow it up…nothing had changed P62 Personification The whole thing was too embryonic to have a miscarriage of justice at this early stage P64 Metaphor, dark, cynical tone I park the rented LTD, donned a blonde wig, and a pair of dark glasses, and walked round into the video arcade. Allusion, symbolism Here very few suits walked by, but up the other end of town – Macquarie Street that the Premier looked over, the barrister’s chambers, the Opera House and Art Gallery – it was nothing but suits. Contrast, symbolism Up there was the Strand Arcade, camembert Metaphor, critical tone and reveals that Sally will be an adversary of CV Highlights CV’s shock at finding her sex/gender will not be advantageous as it normally would be Reinforces her opinions of the class difference in Sydney Claudia has taken advantage of the fact most people open up to a woman; indicates Sally will be an opposition and a challenge for CV Emphasises the vast differences between the classes of Sydney; links to the duality of Sydney Describing the weather of Sydney; personification creates strong imagery of the tumultuous day Disillusioned, contemplative Signifies that the realities of expectations of gender roles affected their goals and ambitions; Carol has realised that it’s a ‘man’s world’ and she needs to be implicit and passive rather than domineering Metaphor of miscarriage links to the death of Mark Banister Cynical, disillusioned Critiques and reveals her disgust of the passive behaviours of women in male-dominated roles Cynical Shocks and confronts the audience as she challenges gender expectations by graphically using idea of miscarriage Cynical, pessimistic Reveals her opinion of the façade of Sydney Complying with expectations of hard boiled genre; wig and glasses are symbolic of typical disguises in crime fiction texts Highlighting the differentiation between classes in society. Cynical Witty and salad greens on rye. Down here it was hamburger and chips P69 All quiet on the western front P72 My palms started sweating. The dry mouth came next and a strong desire to go to the toilet. Now I fully understood the significance of the expression ‘rooted to the spot’. My veins filled with adrenalin. Lots of it…One more second. One more centimetre. P74 Accumulation of physical responses to fear, humour Alludes to the novel (and subsequent film) of the same name. It describes German soldier’s extreme physical and mental stress during WWI. Symbolic of the stressful situation CV has gotten herself into Humorously represents CV’s fear at being discovered at the container yard Repetition, truncated sentences Builds tension as the action builds to a climax With one kick both the torch and the gun went flying…rapid punches: head, solar plexus, abdomen…I kicked it out of reach P74 Truncated sentences, repetition, accumulation of physical self-defence moves Metaphor Creates tension, conveys the strength of CV and her skills at martial arts Conveys CV doesn’t want to be alone; the fearful moment has had an emotional effect on her Vulnerable ‘I’ll slip into something a little more comfortable’, Like your bed. P79 Double entendre Bold, witty So his wings were tarnished P80 Metaphor ‘It’s a question of money, that’s all’. ‘That’s all it ever is, isn’t it?’ I said grimly. Double entendre Establishes her attraction to Steve and her willingness to move the relationship along to the next physical level Indicates she has realised he is not the perfect ‘angel’ she thought he was While he is referring to patients saving money, CV is referring to corruption and bribery; everyone can be bought – everyone has a price. I didn’t feel like going home and licking my wounds alone Allusion Witty Intellectual Reveals her dry sense of humour and reinforces her education (well read) Witty Vulnerable Reinforces CV is susceptible to fear and reveals her façade; not as tough as she appears Powerful, persevering, determined Powerful Cynical, disillusioned, sarcastic Emphasises her strength and highlights the power she is capable of Exposes her vulnerable side and her need to feel a connections; contradicts her statements about being isolated and detached Challenges gender stereotypes Questions the ethics and morals of society and the power of wealth We had watched the dawn spread its colours like some shy, elusive bird, watched the city come alive with it P84 Simile, personification Creates strong, positive imagery of the dawn awakening Sydney to create a romantic atmosphere Optimistic Whose Valentine was I now? Pun Creates a humorous tone which contradicts the dangerous threat of someone entering her home CV has finally learnt that Harry Lavender is involved in the case; indicates to her, his name creates feeling of tension and unrest Creates imagery of HL being dangerous and implies he is responsible for many deaths Ironic that cancer is killing Harry Lavender; CV described him as cancer, infecting and killing Sydney CV is beginning to question why she has not been harmed when it’s obvious she is being followed and she is on the right track at believing Mark’s death was murder Indicates CV knows she is in danger; everything is happening around her. This passage reveals the connection between Claudia, her father, and Harry Lavender Brian is warning Claudia from any further investigations; reveals Lavender is dangerous and will always win Knowing she is in danger and flashing back to her childhood when Harry Lavender threatened her father’s family (being HER), Claudia Questioning P86 Lavender. Instead of remedying giddiness and faintness it was causing it P86 Allusion Harry Lavender. Every person living and breathing, and many that were dead, knew the name of that cancerous growth… P86 Some sort of poetic justice. His own rot killing him. P91 Metaphor Why were they still intact? There’d been plenty of breaking opportunities… P92 Rhetorical question Trouble was swirling around me…I was the centre of it, the eye of the storm, the private eye, of the storm There’d been phone calls…Do you know what it’s like? Personification, pun ‘…He’s always one step ahead of the game. You wouldn’t get to the end of the first round with Lavender’ P95 Metaphor ‘I’d like to talk to them’. To hear their voices, to know my flesh and blood was safe. My babies. …Hold them to your heart and never let them go P98 Metaphor, irony Flashback Pessimistic, fearful Reveals her positive side, opens the possibility for her breaking her cynicism and creating a more optimistic attitude to life Queries her role in the investigations Exposes her vulnerability and reveals her stoicism is a façade Disillusioned Reveals one half of the dualities of Claudia: her maternal instincts; I was standing on the edge of the blue light teetering, shot up, overdosed, the ganglia overloaded and the circuits shorting P99 Metaphor, allusions, jargon …beneath the mask of makeup she could have been anybody’s daughter P102 …the signposts of the city’s history and mine were being effaced… P109 Everything stank of Lavender. P110 Foreshadowing The city was highly strung, a girl like Sally, a beautiful, made-up face, a sophisticated child, cool and crying and laughing all in the one breath, a liar, a tease P110 I knew why people retched and gagged. Because there were some things you couldn’t stomach. Why the yes streamed. Because you couldn’t hold it in. Why they raved and ranted and went mad. Because the message to the computer in the skull was just too much and the system revolted P112 …Lucifer was once an angel… P113 Personification, simile I could never understand how Phillip Marlowe and those guys, from one end of the story to the other, got shot, beaten up, and sometimes laid, without ever going to bed P131 Every breath I took reeked of Lavender P139 Allusion, irony, humour becomes aware he may do the same to her family. Represents how on edge CV feels finally knowing Harry Lavender is connected to the case; ‘shot up’ ‘overdosed’ link to the drug trade HL is in and how Mark Bannister died; ‘circuits shorting’ links to the final passage of HL where he compares himself to a motherboard We eventually learn she is another man’s daughter: HL’s Metaphor Metaphor Capitalisation of L indicates it’s the proper noun – HL. Creates imagery of Lavender being omniscient – everywhere in Sydney, figuratively. Compares Sydney to Sally revealing BOTH have facades, very nervous, easily upset Metaphor, technical jargon CV’s reaction to the news of Robbie’s death is emotional anguish and she begins contemplating human emotions Biblical allusion, pun Lucifer is the devil who was once an angel; Pun reveals CV now believes Steve Angell is dangerous Ironically questions and challenges the stereotypes of the typical HBD genre protagonists and the unrealistic plot conventions Creates imagery of the profound effect HL is having on CV’s life; he Metaphor I’m about as curious as a bomb disposal squad P142 Simile I had been caught up in his maze, looking for the piece of cheese P143 Metaphor That symbol for Cancer has eaten my heart…my fast and future obliterated P143 Symbolism Returned his service. All I had to do now was keep the volley going and never let the ball fall on the ground P144 The lights were on in Harry Lavender’s city P145 Sport jargon, metaphor Cold hard bitch, cold hard monster…cold hard renunciation P151 My eyes dropped…to where my stomach should have been. My insides curdled and all of time eclipsed into the barrel of the gun she had aimed at my naval My legs went into action… P153 Repetition The policewomen shifted uncomfortably in their big shoes P160 Metaphor Adjectival imagery Recurring motif is consuming all of her time and energy Highlights to utter fear CV is feeling as she is about to enter HL’s computer system Alluding to her being the mouse in a maze where scientists watch on to test whether the mouse can find the ‘prize’ at the end; Claudia is the mouse and the cheese represents the manuscript HL is trying to find The crab is the symbol for the astrological sign of Cancer and represents HL; the crabs eating the heart (links to Valentine) represent HL killing CV. ‘Past’ and ‘future’ quote links with previous quotes about the history and the future of Sydney To win, CV must not cower, but instead match all of HL’s threats Represents she has conceded and accepted that HL is omniscient; he ‘owns’ Sydney Represents the touch exterior of CV ‘dropped’ and ‘curdled’ create imagery of CV’s nervous system and indicate the anxiety and fear she is feeling in that moment Reiterates her earlier statements about her legs being her best weapon ‘big shoes’ symbolises big roles; the female officers have a difficult job trying to ‘keep up’ with their male counterparts Sarcastic, disillusioned, I had a lump of steel where the heart should be…I had done my job, right to the bitter end….The Amazon. No breast, no heart Metaphor, allusion Indicates she has closed herself off emotionally and shut everyone out of her life. Amazon reference represents she was willing to cut off anyone and everything who will get in her way; indicates she has made sacrifices I…stood at the window, looking at the city herself. Her far horizons, her jewelled sea, her beauty and her terror P168 Literary allusion, personification Reference to Mackellar’s ‘My Country’ not only shows her levels of education, but compounds with the personification CV uses and highlights the facades CV mentions numerous times