811 News Class Newsletter March, Issue 2 Top Benchmark Scores Samantha Ament John Lense Noah Bolte Hanna Linesch Kenny Cornell Daryll McMullen Clhoe Kincart Asyah Mitchell Donovan Nguyen Austin Perkins Andy Pitts Elena Rivera Tyler Billups Maud Sonzogni Benjamin Bowers Lauren Terry Jordan Durain Morganne Williams Daniel Ferguson Peyton Wirth Tyler Grant Samuel Dotson Caitlin McNeely Myah Follero Steven Stewart Luke Gormley Austin Byrd Paige Harris Cameron Gable Lily MacWilliams Catherine Harkins Estevan Mikhail Hunter Hopperton Dezstany Peterson Graden Knapp Elijah Prather Alleigh Maguire Molly Sansoucy Jyogi Maruishi Anika Yadav Colin McClure Sierra Newton Donovan Page Gabi Richardson Cole Sandlin Sarah Wermeling Alex Barlow Crystal Bufano Raegan Keller Third Quarter Wrap-up Since the last newsletter, students have eagerly jumped into the poetry unit. In class, we have read and thoroughly annotated a few poems: “Poetry” by Pablo Neruda, Austin Kleon’s blackout poems, “Fast Break” by Edward Hirsch, and “Nikki-Rosa” by Nikki Giovanni. With each poem, students have been asked to use them as models and create similar poems. Many students have proven to be natural-born poets and are bringing at least one new poem into class every day to share with their peers. Several students have also chosen to submit their poetry for this newsletter, which has twentyfive impressive poems. Students also took their third Benchmark test on Thursday before the three-day weekend. Scores either met or exceeded expectations; the students listed are ones who scored at least a 20 out of 24. There is no doubt that both teachers are very proud of the students’ hard work and dedication! 1 Student Submissions March :: Issue 2 What Will We Doing with Poetry? The poetry unit will be coming to a close before the students go on Spring Break. Students have just a few more poems to read like “We Real Cool” by Gwendolyn Brooks and “Hanging Fire” by Audre Lorde. With these poems, students will many do activities that relate to structure, diction, and the continued theme of Coming of Age. At this point of the unit, students have written four poems. One of their assigned poems was a form poem titled “A Poem About A Poem,” which you will see a few examples of from first period. Students also did blackout poems, like you saw in the last issue. Students have been working on interest/hobby and Coming of Age poems. These poems along with a couple others will be put into student anthologies with an introduction about how each student has grown as a student poet. The anthology will not be the only project that students complete. Students will also do a group poet presentation. Groups will choose a poet that they will research and teach the class. Students will also talk about one of the poet’s poems and analyze it for the class. While we do have a couple projects down, our main goal is to show students how 2 poetry is something that they can make their own. Many students have done just that. byline [Name] “The Power of Poetry” by Daniel Ferguson Poetry is Strong Slow And Steady. You never truly can be ready. It comes and goes as it pleases, Just like a mini Jesus. It fills that void inside your heart, You never wanna be apart. When it becomes a part of you it’s there to stay. And I bet you’ll say, “I’ve never, ever felt this way.” Student Submissions March :: Issue 2 A Poem by Semir Ruspic A Poem About A Poem by Josh Cundiff Poetry is more than words, it’s meaning. Poetry is like dreaming. Poetry is about feeling. Poetry is as important as breathing. Poetry means speaking. Poetry is hearing. Poetry is words. Poetry is like a book. Poetry is about a bunch of words. Poetry is as important as cheese. Poetry is as pointless as pants. Poetry means rhyming. Poetry is a story. A Poem of Poetry by Andy Pitts Big Air by Zoey Brixey Feel the wind blowing Poetry is universally love. Poetry is like emotions flowing into paper like a river. through your hair, Poetry is pulsating through the world. against your face, Poetry is as important as air we breathe. and pushing your clothes, as you jump into the air like a hawk. You land on the ground like you have just been hit with a rock Poetry is about love, anger, dreams. Poetry is as pointless as burying the dead. Poetry means to move on, make amends. Poetry is life. A Poem about a Poem by Donovan Nguyen Poetry is infinite. while soaring in the sky Poetry is like endless imagination. and you can’t control your landing. Poetry is about what comes from inside. The board rattling beneath your feet, Poetry is as important as knowledge. the wheels sounding like Poetry is as pointless as sliced bread. you’re searching for Poetry means to express your feelings. a station on the radio, but all you get is static. As you come to a stop, You can still feel the shock In your feet and legs. You stuck it and The feeling of adrenaline Rushes through your body. Poetry is life. Poem About a Poem by Micah Schenck Poetry is love. Poetry is like the girl you can’t get out of your head. Poetry is about things you care about. Poetry is as important as Clhoe. Poetry is as pointless as cuddling alone. Poetry is love. 3 Student Submissions False Hope by Dezstany Peterson These memories I rarely remember Over the years moment by moment those times flooding my brain they enter. This is the first time I’ve stated All those weekends I sat and waited. You promise you would come get me, but for hours I’d wait weeping. You never called me, but made me feel bad when I called you. I was a five year old child. What was I to do? My dad took me when you split. But now I understand why because you lied while I sit And hope to see your face. And had three other children to take my place I waited hopeful everytime I waited from age 5 to age 9 I waited from January to December these are the memories I rarely remember. A Poem About a Poem by Shannon Foudray Poetry is an equation love x inspiration = poetry. Poetry is like the music of the world. Poetry is about the world. Poetry is as important as breathing. Poetry is as pointless as golf. Poetry means love, hate, passion, emotions. Poetry is me. 4 March :: Issue 2 A Poem About A Poem By Allison Hyder Poetry is like determination. Poetry is like burning fire. Poetry is about someone’s passion. Poetry is as important as water. Poetry is as pointless as 3rd degree criminals. Poetry means happiness in your life. Poetry is your confidence. Poem About A Poem By Tristin Younger Poetry is expression of feelings and thoughts. Poetry is like the thoughts in your head and the feelings in your heart. Poetry is about the darkness of your thoughts and the humor in your mind. Poetry is as important as what you make it because poetry is all around you. Poetry is as pointless as a clueless person makes it. Poetry doesn’t have a certain meaning, it means what you want it to. A Poem by Racheal Stuck Poetry is anything. Poetry is like life. Poetry is about the fight. Poetry is as important as family. Poetry is as pointless as nothing Poetry means living life. Poetry is anything. Student Submissions A Poem About A Poem by Kristin Opp Poetry is anything. Poetry is like a brainfreeze. Poetry is about love. Poetry is as important as music. Poetry is as pointless as making your bed. Poetry means confusion. Poetry is anything. March :: Issue 2 A Poem About a Poem by Noah Bolte Poetry is fire. Poetry is like the smoke off a spinned out fire. Poetry is about getting higher. Poetry is as important as a wire. Poetry is as pointless as a liar. Poetry means getting passed the dire. Poetry is fire. A Poem About A Poem by Marjorie Baco “The Lonely Thought” by Myah Follero He comes and he goes. Not in person, not in dreams. He only comes in my thoughts when least expected. These thoughts I hate to see for they are just one lonely memory. “The Only Thought” by Myah Follero She stays and never goes. Always in person, even in dreams. She’s constantly in my thoughts even when not wanted. These thoughts I love to see for she will always be in every single important detail of every important memory. Poetry is anything. Poetry is like a rhyme that describes life. Poetry is about anything you wish it to be. Poetry is as important as life living. Poetry is as pointless as getting shoes but not wearing them. Poetry means loves yet hate. Poetry is everything. A Poem About A Poem by Elizabeth Andrade Poetry is anything you desire. Poetry is like a maze. Poetry is about you. Poetry is as important as a flower blooming. Poetry is as pointless as nothing. Poetry means anything. Poetry is anything you want it to be. A Poem About a Poem by Micah Poetry is trash. Poetry is like a trash bag. Poetry is about nothing. Poetry is as important as you. Poetry is as pointless as a tire. Poetry means nothing. Poetry is trash. 5 Wishing on Paper by Lauren Terry Piano Poem by Jordan Durain Softly and slowly my fingers hover over the white and black infinity in front of me and for a moment the world stops. The turning momentum ceasing as I start with a middle C and continuing on with my piece. Scanning and comprehending my music, Fastly behind decrypted as I ride the wave of keys. My fingers gliding, my mind thinking, and my heart pounding, praying to nail the troublesome chord, sending chills up and down my spine, making my eyes blink in surprise, but also Wonder. Sarah Harkrader Black clouds begin to form from the lost dreams and broken mind. Searching far for an escape, a way out of this twisted, broken path. Picking up a lead-filled yellow piece of wood, hands taking control. Curving, coloring, creating an unknown piece of something hidden, new. An escape from the lost mind took the form of scribbles on a white sheet. Satisfied by what these hands created scribbles grew to something more. The wood working rapidly as it sprawled across the page. An image began to grow into a person. The person was what the hands wanted to be. The hands drew, created what they wished and desired. NF You believe your diagnosis is a defect to who you are, but you don’t realize you are so ahead of it, so far. You are shining like a light in darkness. Please continue to fight. “You have the happiest energy” is what people say. They all want you to stay someway, somehow. It doesn’t get better, but you will kill your demons and step into some new shoes, maybe red or blue. Depression is a setback, but you are already ahead. Sadness is not everlasting but you… You are forever loved. A Little Thing Called Love by Ano Nymous I had no sword, but the blade for my skin to be my defense from the war within. I had no shield to keep me safe, but the walls I put up to be my escape. No more smiles, but hey! at least no more tears. I learned to be empty, to scream when no one hears. I believed myself, that the blame was mine. When I looked around, my life was fine. But I saw the monsters and I heard the demons. They had to win, couldn’t just break even. And I was growing so weak from the fight, couldn’t stand another sleepless night. So I caved in, gave up, broke down. Prepared to let go without a sound. Empty and Numb brought the pills to my lips, like saying goodbye in one last loving kiss. Yet here I am, stronger than ever before. No more ghosts can live inside here anymore. And maybe it’s a poison that will be mine forever but I’ll never let it kill my soul whatsoever I’ve learned a little thing called love. Though I’m still young, memories from my childhood are starting to fade. I remember the night I cried what could have filled an entire kiddie pool. When I moved to Kentucky, away from all my friends I grew up with, away from Max the neighborhood bully, away from Isabella whom I idolized, and away from my first crush, Hayden. I felt my life would never be the same. My childhood had been ripped in half. I remember blaming my dad And his dumb job for it. Calm, great, perfect. That’s how it starts out… Everything is grand And everyone is happy… But then something changes, and it’s not a big deal to you, just something small… But to them it’s the start of world war three, everything has gone haywire. They are angry… you are confused… But then it’s over, it’s gone… All gone before you can even grasp what has happened. It’s all over… All gone… And you barely even know why… But of course not all relationships end this way, Some end peacefully… Some never end at all… But that’s how it works… Love is a grenade… When it’s in your hand sometimes you’re safe… But then one small mistake and it blows up… Right before your eyes. And maybe that’s what it takes… Maybe… Maybe you need it to blow up to realize… That you’re not the same person you were before. You’re not the same little girl. Not the little girl who depended on other people… Maybe... That’s what you need to learn who you are, And that you need to be careful, Because love is a grenade. -- Katlin Diersing I didn’t understand how moving further away from his boss would help. But moving was actually fun. I realized we would see my dad more. I loved the fact we lived in a state with so many horses. And I found new friends, new people to idolize, new bullies, new crushes. And somehow moving turned out to not be so bad. And it also created a great memory. -- Maud Sonzogni 7