Checklist for a Compare/Contrast Essay DIRECTIONS: Work with a partner to evaluate and edit his or her Compare/ Contrast Essay. Offer constructive criticism using the specifications listed. Specifications/ Criteria The opening paragraph introduces TWO researched epidemics. The thesis sentence ends the introductory paragraph and makes a claim. The essay is organized in either a point to point or whole to whole structure. Point to Point Whole to Whole Body Paragraph #1Body Paragraph #1Compares one topic Discusses three main points for Topic:________________ epidemic #1 Circle: Similar OR Different Epidemic-___________ Three Main Points: 1. 2. 3. Body Paragraph #2Body Paragraph #2Compares one topic Discusses three main points for Topic:________________ epidemic #1 Circle: Similar OR Different Epidemic-___________ Three Main Points: 1. 2. 3. Body Paragraph #3Compares one topic Topic:________________ Circle: Similar OR Different Conclusion Conclusion Creates an Overarching Gives 2- 3 similarities or Position: differences between epidemics Are the epidemics more similar or different? The author addresses how the setting affects the individuals living during the epidemic. The essay cites convincing textual evidence, and the research process is evident. Words are concise, powerful, vivid, and engaging for the audience. The tone of the essay is informative. The essay includes the use of transitions to provide comprehension of ideas between sentences and paragraphs. Grammar Skills: Correct usage of commas with coordinating adjectives Lacks dangling modifiers The sketch demonstrates command of the conventions of standard English. (CUPS: Capitalization, Usage, Punctuation, and Spelling) Agree/ Disagree Comments What did you like best about this compare and contrast essay? How could this compare and contrast essay be improved? Evaluating the Peer Review Process DIRECTIONS: Now that you’ve had your Compare/ Contrast Essay evaluated by a peer, take time to reflect on the process and what changes you will make in your draft. My partner was:_____________________________ 1. Based on my partner’s comments, I know that I need to revise: _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ 2. Rate how helpful you think the peer review session was. Circle the appropriate rating. 1 no help at all 2 not so helpful 3 kind of helpful 4 fairly helpful 5 very helpful 3. In a few sentences, explain why you chose the rating above. ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ 1. How could you and your partner have improved the peer review process? _________________________________________________________________________________________