Maher Armoush 20112012 Maher Armoush (The Effects of Smoking) Qatar Academy 2011-2012 (3490 words without Work sited and Appendices) 1 Maher Armoush 20112012 Table of Contents Goal Pg: 3 Selection of sources Pg: 6 Application of Information Pg: 9 Achieving the Goal Pg: 10 Reflection on Learning Pg: 21 Sources Cited Pg: 23 Appendices o Evidence of product (If needed) o Selection of Journals Pg: 25 Pg: 25 2 Maher Armoush 20112012 Goal We all have heard about the harmful affects of smoking on humans, whether seen on TV, in school presentations and lectures, bill boards, etc.… But yet, people still choose to smoke and cause harm to themselves and others. My personal project topic is the effects of smoking on humans and lung cancer. The reason I selected this topic is that a couple of months ago a dear relative of mine past away from lung cancer because of smoking. My grandmother, who was the last of my grandparents, was a victim of this disease as the millions of other people that are suffering from this fatal issue. I grew up watching my grandmother smoke as she used to come visit us in the USA, and I remember times were my dad would beg here to stop smoking and tried to show her pictures of what was happening to her lungs as she smoked and she said she didn’t want to see them. I think this was because she knew she had a problem and tried various amounts of time to quit but unfortunately she was unable to do so. In response to this experience of seeing my grandmother in the hospital suffering from lung cancer for over two years, I decided to choose this topic for my personal project. My Goal is to learn more about the harmful effects of smoking and it’s fatal affect to humans. To achieve my goal I will communicate my research in a persuasive way showing the audience the effect of smoking on there heath by means of a short video film, that could be used to encourage the viewers to either quit or stop smoking. After creating my video I will broadcast it to viewers on “YouTube” and record their comments (if any) and the number of views to see if my video had any impact on the viewers. 3 Maher Armoush 20112012 There are many ways I could have approached this topic and ways of communicating my findings to my audience. Such as a long documentary video, a website, blog, etc…. and since studies show that visual media has a greater effect on the viewers than a written article in newspaper or magazine. I choose to convey my message in means of a short video film. What is good about this idea of a short video method is that it was going to be fast, easily understood, and persuasive. I want this short video to be very effective to the audience and won’t bore them. I previously did some research and found a video that was like a commercial that showed the audience what taking drugs does to your brain, and it stuck with viewers for a very long time like a symbolized expression. As I mentioned before, I was going to look into the effects of smoking on the human health, my topic best fits into the context of the Area of Interaction (AOI) Heath and Social Education. The AOI Heath and Social Education focuses on different aspects leading us to a healthier life, and looks at the key questions “How do I think and act?”, “How am I changing?”, and “How can I look after myself and others?”. This Area of Interaction connects well to my goal and topic because I will be looking at smoking which is considered to be one of the biggest impacts on the human health, which falls within the key question “How can I look after myself and others”. Also the social side of my project is broadcasting my video to the public and the society encouraging them to quit smoking by showing them the effect of smoking on their heath, and those who receive the message of my video maybe impacted to pursue a healthier life. 4 Maher Armoush 20112012 The specifications I will use to evaluate the outcome on are: Specification Ideal length: Between 3-5 minutes How It relates to my goal For my personal project I wanted to focus on making a short to the point video, instead of a long documentary film because shorter videos tend to have better response rates to people. Inclusion of Factual information Facts often help or support what the video is trying to do, as people are going to believe facts that are true rather then an opinion. In my goal I stated that I wanted to use persuasive language, by using facts and statistics it shows the viewer the effect and they are more likely to take in consideration of quitting. It also relates back to my AOI of Heath and social education. Nicely edited film such as the titles, subtitles, etc… Presenting the information is one of the most important parts of my project because the way the information is presented will impact the way that viewers will see this issue to be. By having a nice organized edited film it 5 Maher Armoush 20112012 attracts people to come and view it. Good plot well planned Having a good plot will also help the impact on the viewers to be stronger. Uses persuasive language not like a In my goal statement I stated that I wanted to make a video that could be used to encourage documentary. the viewers to quit smoking. Part of this will be by using persuasive language. Views/Feedback from the viewers of the video As part of my goal I wanted my video to reach as many people as it could. So I thought that the best way to do this would be to place the video onto YouTube. Selection of Sources People: Throughout my project, I interviewed and met with people that helped me with three main parts of my personal project they are; my research, video interview, and with the preparation of the video. Two main Doctors helped me with my research, Dr. Giorgia Francesconi and Dr. Majdi Ashour. Dr. Giorgia is a specialist in internal medicine that did her thesis on the topic of smoking. (Source 4) She has a vast experience with the topic. Dr. Giorgia gave her statement in my Infomercial. She is a primary source and reliable because she has 6 Maher Armoush 20112012 done research on this topic and has done her report on the effects of smoking on the human body. Dr. Majdi Ashour is a doctor working for Hamad Hospital’s Stop Smoking Clinic, he accounts for a primary source in my project.(Source 1) Benefits of this source include, he deals with smokers all the time, and helps smokers quit. These interviews were relevant to my goal because it helped me get my message across to the viewers, by having experienced professional’s talk about the subject. My audience would more likely consider quitting after hearing what professionals had to say about the topic. Also for preparation of the video I met with two main people Mrs. Fletcher and Abdurahman Megahad. Mrs. Fletcher is a film teacher at Qatar Academy that helped me get started with the new software final cut pro. (Source 3) Since Mrs. Fletcher teaches film classes and has been using this software for a long time making her a very reliable source for my project. She is a primary source. Abdurahman Megahad helped me with the different effects in my video he taught me how to do effects such as Color to monochrome subtitles, and title. (Source 5) Media: Throughout my project I used different websites to research statistics and facts of the effects of smoking to include in my video. The two main sites are from the “CDC”(Centers for disease control and prevention) and WHO(World Health Organization). 7 Maher Armoush 20112012 The CDC is a health organization formed in the USA in1942, to provide people with factual information about diseases to help prevent them. On the CDC website they have an area explaining the effects of cigarette smoking and provide up-to-date statistics for viewers to see. This source is a secondary source and is reliable because they are a well known organization, that targets to help people live healthier and better lives. (Source 2) The WHO is the United Nations heath organization it was established in 1948. The World Heath Organization’s mission is to help all countries reach the best level of health they can get. On their Western Pacific Region page they have recent statistics on the effects of smoking on our health. This source is a primary source and is reliable because the information given is from experienced professionals that look at all aspects of health including smoking. (Source 9) Text: As part of my meeting with Dr. Majdi Ashour, he gave me different pamphlets that contained looks of information and statistics about my topic smoking. The main two pamphlets I got were “Second hand smoke” and “Quit Smoking Today”. The Quit Smoking Today (Source 6) Pamphlet contained information about what happens at different periods of time when you quit, and tips on how to handle quitting. The second pamphlet contained information about second hand smoking (Source 7) and statistics on the issue. Both of these sources are primary sources and are reliable because these pamphlets are from the supreme council of Heath in Qatar and are sponsored by Pfizer. 8 Maher Armoush 20112012 Application of information As stated above in my selection of sources I used a variety of different resources to gather a high level of information on my topic, these sources rang from many different people, media websites, and text sources. These sources as well as others helped me make keen decisions to help me achieve my goal. During my meetings with Dr. Giorgia, I was able to gain a lot of information from her on the topic, and we went through different topics that could be included in my video. I had to decide on which topics to include, because those topics would be what Dr. Giorgia would talk about in her statement as part of my video. (See Appendices 4 and 11 ) Part of my goal was to use persuasive language to encourage the viewers to quit smoking. I choose to have Dr. Giorgia give her statement, because the viewer is more likely to believe and get affected on what a professional states, rather then a non-professional. And the topics I choose where the main and most important, in order for the video to have a big effect on the viewers. The CDC organization and the world health organization provided me with lots of information to help me achieve my goal. Part of this information was statistics, which are very important for us as humans to see smoking’s effect on us. After I videoed my doctor statement showing all the aspects Dr. Giorgia and me discussed and planned, I had to decide on which statistics on both of these sites would be relevant to the topic. In order to encourage someone to do something you must give him or her facts on why. Like in my case I wanted to encourage 9 Maher Armoush 20112012 people to quit smoking, by using of these statistics they would help back up the facts stated in my video, and show the viewer what smoking has done to society. (See Appendices 6 and 7) During one of my meeting with Mr. Schwaberow, we discussed different ways in how to achieve my goal. Mr. Schwaberow suggested that one-way to achieve your goal could be to give ask the FCD organization, (See appendix 8) when they come to Qatar Academy in late January to play your video as part of there presentation. Or another way would be to upload the video to YouTube. I decided on going with the YouTube route because I felt that my video could reach a much larger audience if it was to be uploaded to YouTube. Achieving the Goal Evaluation of the Product to the Design Specification: 1. Ideal length: Between 3-5 minutes For my product I wanted to focus on making a short video because I learned that a longer film tends to bore people and has a smaller response rate. My final product was three minutes and nine seconds (3:09), which falls in the time length I had in my specification. This specification was an important part of my project because in my goal I stated I wanted my video to be quick and to the point unlike a documentary film. During the making of this video I originally got footage that add up to equal 6 minutes but when I started working in the film lab and editing the length came down. 10 Maher Armoush 20112012 2. Inclusion of Factual information Throughout my video there is lots of information and explanations about the effects of smoking on the human body. In the video statistics would appear on screen to inform the viewers on the diseases effect globally. There was many ways I could have approach this specification in my video such as a voice over etc. but I decided if it appeared on screen for the viewers to read it would be more effective. Also another point is the doctors statement, when viewers see that a Doctor that has done her thesis statement on this issue is explaining there findings, they are more likely to believe it. Again my video has lots of factual information, and meets this specification. 3. Nicely edited film such as the titles, subtitles, etc… In a video the editing stage is really important. It’s the different effects that bring out the effect you want to have on the audience. A lot of the time I spent on my video was editing it and making it look nice. In my video it has a very nice title (Description: Smoke passing though as the title appears), Subtitles including the name of the doctor that is 11 Maher Armoush 20112012 speaking, and many other effects like fade to black and white (To show that smoking was a bad thing so in my montage I would fade the clip to black and white as if it was a crime.), transitions, text appear, and background music that is programmed to lower its volume as someone is talking. 12 Maher Armoush 20112012 13 Maher Armoush 20112012 4. Good plot well planned Planning is one of the most important parts of the video making process. Before I started videoing or getting any footage I made and filled out a video structure sheet. This helped me organize where things where going to be in my video and also helped me layout what I wanted to include in my video. This planning sheet also helped me with editing my video because I did not only place the content of the video but the description of what it would look like on screen. This planning technique helped my video to become successful because many of the specifications listed were placed in there to become part of the video. My product is well planned and has a great plot. The video is organized as it follows a normal video structure (Title-Beginning-Middle-EffectsConclusion- Tips on how to quit and End). 14 Maher Armoush 20112012 5. Uses persuasive language not like a documentary. This specification was another important aspect of my video. In my goal I stated I wanted my video to use persuasive unlike a boring documentary. Persuasive language would encourage the viewers to stop smoking. In my video I used persuasive language by including facts and examples, when a person realizes the effects of smoking and is provided with facts he is more likely to consider quitting. Also by using a doctor to talk about the effects of smoking ensures the viewers that they are telling the truth because they are specialists. Another way I use Persuasive language is by giving the viewers tips on how to quit. So the style and language in my video is a persuasive type unlike the documentary. 15 Maher Armoush 20112012 6. Views/Feedback from the viewers of the video For my project I got feedback at two main stages, the mid-term submission, and my test results from YouTube. During the midterm submission I recorded comments from people that came and viewed my video. Some of these comments were to make a couple of changes so I recorded them and I would fix them over the break. In my goal I stated that I wanted to record the comments given by viewers, but I changed that to comments and views because there are many people that view videos and do not have YouTube accounts to place comments. Below in my test results you can see the success of my draft video in YouTube. Results from Testing: Below are the statistics showing how successful my video was by the number of people that have viewed the video. But its not just the number of views but where the video was viewed (Country), the videos progress over time, Charts distinguishing how many views from 16 Maher Armoush 20112012 each gender, the comments I got (2), and where the video was most popular. These charts are relevant to my goal, because I statement that I would post the video onto YouTube and see how many views and feedback the video would get. Overall my product meets all the specifications I set up and given these statistics it shows that the product was successful because it got a good number of views and many different people all over the world viewed the video. I would give this product a 4. 17 Maher Armoush 20112012 Above is a larger scale performance chart showing the steady incline of the video overtime. It also includes the top sources as posted in letters. -Above is a chart showing how the video was found what was typed into the search engine. 18 Maher Armoush 20112012 -Above is a chart showing the places in which the video was viewed and the amount of views in that place. - The above screenshot shows the different playback locations as well as what device was used to view the video (Mobile Phone, YouTube watch page etc.) 19 Maher Armoush 20112012 -Above is a chart showing how many Male viewed the video against the number of females that viewed the video. -Above is a map showing where the video was most popular in the world. 20 Maher Armoush 20112012 Reflection on Learning In my goal statement, I wanted to learn more about the harmful effects of smoking and it’s fatal affect to humans. Before completing this project, I knew some basic effects of smoking such as lung cancer. This project has extended my knowledge on the topic of smoking. I have learned that smoking provides nicotine into our blood, which damages all of the cell in our body. I have also learned that smoking can cause Urinary bladder cancer, and it can cause Chronic obstructive pulmonary diseases like asthma and bronchitis. Another effect of smoking is stroke and cardio vascular diseases that are between the heart and the brain. Pregnant ladies that smoke cause huge health effects to there babies, like giving birth to an under weight baby with chronic diseases. As you can see the sources used during this project has helped me gain a vast amount of information about the topic of smoking, and I was able to communicate my findings through my video. Completing this project extended my knowledge about my AOI Heath and Social Education, by helping me realize that there are many organizations out there trying to raise awareness about the effects of smoking, to help encourage smokers to quit smoking as part of health and social education. For example the CDC organization and the WHO organization both has webpages explaining the effects of smoking, and provide statistics on the topic. On a personal level, this project helped me realize the fatal affect of smoking and its impact on society. Families with cancer stricken members suffer emotionally and financially. So this is why it is important to raise awareness in order to look after myself and others. 21 Maher Armoush 20112012 As an ATL learner, this project helped me practice all of the ATL skills. The main ATL skills that were improved are organization, communication, and thinking skills. All these skills contributed to the success of my personal project. This project helped me enhance my organizational skills by meeting the deadlines and milestones of this project. Throughout this project I had to manage time for personal project as well as the other school subjects. Even though, I still feel that I could use better time management skills to manage this project and other school subjects to avoid procrastination. This project also improved my communication skills, as I had to interview several different professionals like Doctors, film professionals, advisors, and peers. I’m sure this improved skill of communication will help me in the future interacting with others. By communicating I was able to get direct answers to my questions, to help me prepare my personal project. Throughout the course of this project, my thinking skills had improved by being exposed to different situations that caused me to make certain decisions and to plan for different aspects related to my personal project. This improvement will help me solve different problems as they come up later on in my life. 22 Maher Armoush 20112012 Sources Cited 1. Ashour, Dr. Majdi. "Interview with Dr. Majdi Ashour at Heath Convention." Personal interview. 30 Nov. 2011. 2. "CDC - Fact Sheet - Health Effects of Cigarette Smoking - Smoking & Tobacco Use." Centers for Disease Control and Prevention. Web. 3 Nov. 2011. <http://www.cdc.gov/tobacco/data_statistics/fact_sheets/health_effects/effects_cig_s moking/>. 3. Fletcher, Mrs. Suzanne. "Learning Sessions on How to Use Final Cut Pro." Personal interview. Nov.-Dec. 2011. 4. Francesconi, Dr. Giorgia. "Interview about the Effects of Smoking on Humans." Personal interview. 10 Nov. 2011. 5. Megahed, Abdelrahman. "Learning How to Do Certain Effects in Final Cut Pro." Personal interview. Nov.-Dec. 2011. 6. Quit Smoking Today. Qatar, Doha: CMD- Supreme Council of Health, 2010. Print. Sponsored By Pfizer 7. Second Hand Smoke. Qatar: CMD- Supreme Council of Health, 2010. Print. Sponsored By: Pfizer 8. Shisha (Hookah). Doha, Qatar: CMD- Supreme Council of Health, 2010. Print. Sponsored By: Pfizer 23 Maher Armoush 20112012 9. "WHO Western Pacific Region - Fact Sheets - Smoking Statistics." WHO Western Pacific Region - Home. Web. 6 Nov. 2011. <http://www.wpro.who.int/media_centre/fact_sheets/fs_20020528.htm>. 24 Maher Armoush 20112012 Appendices Video URL: http://youtu.be/9-eovBlpzcc Organization: 1. Ical, is a calendar application on Mac. I sometimes used this calendar to organize my time so that I would have enough time to complete other assignments, with the Personal project Submissions. 25 Maher Armoush 20112012 2. During sessions of editing I had to plan when I would come back to the film lab to continue editing. As shown at the end of the below Journal Entire. 26 Maher Armoush 20112012 November 22nd- Continuing the editing of my video After school Abduraman Megahad and me went to the film lab to show me how the techniques on how to fade the footage to black and white. When we got there he taught me about an effect called color corrector this effect allows you to edit the color of the video. This effect was located under the effects window under video filters so I dragged it and placed it over the first clip. Know when I double clicked on that clip the color corrector was part of its properties. Know that the color corrector was placed as usual I had to Render the clip. So Abdurahman told me that under filter properties the color corrector would be there. It also should a timing there I had to also put the input and output for where I wanted the video to fade. Abdurahman explained to me that the Saturation bar adjusts that color, so in my video normally it would be set to 100 as the usual so where I wanted it to fade would fall all the way to zero meaning no color. When I did that I had to smooth en the time line so it would show the clip turning from color to non-color slowly. And that worked I rendered and thanked Abdurahman. He had to leave but know I knew how to do it. I inserted a color corrector into the next clip and following the same structure I faded it to black and white. But before the full effect could be shown I had to insert a fade out effect onto the clips. I was able to complete all three clips for the montage. 27 Maher Armoush 20112012 Mrs. Fletcher came in and wanted to see how I was doing, she said that the fade was coming out well and said to continue. After the fade was complete I could know put in the statistics over those clips. So I inserted a text effect over each clip and added the text to it, the sive had to be adjusted in order to see the full text on the screen. After each change I had to render the clip and save. The screen shot below shows how the text was added before it was placed over the clip. I had just finished the third statistic and it was time to leave it was 10 past 3:00 and Mrs Flecture had to lock the film lab. Since I had an assessment to work on tomorrow I would not be able to come and continue editing so I planed to come on next Sunday November 27 th 2011. Collaboration Skills: 3. Communication Skills: 28 Maher Armoush 20112012 5. 29 Maher Armoush 20112012 Thinking Skills: 6. I used the ATL Thinking skills when I was deciding on what aspects to include in my video. I did this when I filled out My Movie Structure sheet given to me by Mrs. Fletcher. 30 Maher Armoush 20112012 31 Maher Armoush 20112012 7. 8. During the MYP Personal Project Retreat I had to think about which AOI my project would be based on. As part of the retreat there was a session about AOI’s, we were asked to list three different AOI’s that our project could be on and make a final decision on which one ours will be based on. (MYP Personal Project Retreat September 21st 2011)- Journal Entire Today is the annual MYP Personal project retreat, today all the 10th graders in our school where going to be split up into different groups. Each group will attend a different round robin of sessions. In the morning we were asked to enter the Qatar Academy auditorium where there was a brief introduction of the day given by Mr. Sweeney. This was at 7:30- 8:00 am, at this point we were asked to grab a candy bar and then take a seat. Based on which type of candy bar you received is the group you were going to be in during this day. Mr. Sweeny explained to us that there were 3 sessions today that were held by 32 Maher Armoush 20112012 three different teachers and at different places. Since I was part of the Snickers group Mr. Sweeny said that the Snickers groups’ first workshop was with him Mr. Sweeney, and it was in the Rec-center Theater. This workshop was about the Requirements and Assessment of the personal project. When we arrived to the Rec Center Theater Mr. Sweeny asked us to open our laptops and go to the moodle and download the “Getting Started” document that had everything we needed to know about the personal project. The first thing we did was review the timeline we were running on for this project this was on page 5 in the document. Mr. Sweeney said that the first up coming due date was the goal submission which was on October 6th 2011 two weeks from know. And after that the next due date would be the mid term project submissions that was on December 14th 2011, on this day proof of our product as well as well as the process journal and goal must be submitted. Mr. Sweeney told us to not worry about the report until after the product and the process journal were completed. After reviewing the important due dates for personal project, Mr. Sweeney then explained to us the structure of this years personal project. “This year the personal project will be assessed on the journal, the product, and the report” said Mr. Sweeney so that meant that it was pretty balanced. Next we continued to criteria’s that the personal project was asseded on. Criteria A is the Use of Process Journal, Criteria B is the goal, Criteria C is Selected Sources, Criteria D Apply Information, Criteria E Achieving the goal, Criteria F reflecting on your personal learning, and criteria G report the project. So the personal project is assessed on all the criteria’s in the MYP system. And to some up this workshop we looked at different goals and assessed them verbally in groups. After that session was completed our next workshop was in the senior school Library with Ms. Sudah it was about Citation and research. At this workshop we were shown a power point by Ms. Sudah about Citing work and bibliography, during the PowerPoint a lady was passing out a work sheet called “How to cite your work…” this worksheet had different examples on how to cite your work based on the different sources you used like a website, tv/radio, sound recording, lecture/speech and much more. After the PowerPoint was shown we were asked to do some research based on our topic and to find different sources and cite them and upload them to the Moodle. This exercise was important because it helped me learn how to cite sources other then a website which is usually the case at our school. Ms. Sudah explained to us that we have to have a variety of sources in our bibliography to get a good mark on the selection of sources. After the session in the library with Ms. Sudah it was time for our final workshop which was back in the recreation center in the Shafallh area, but this time with Ms. Schwaberow that was about AOI or Area of Interaction. As you know each Personal Project must have or relate to an AOI. In this session we were shown another power point about each of the different AOI’s, which include AOI: Human Ingenuity, Heath and Social Education, community and service, Environments, and Approaches to learning. After we were shown examples of what a project would be for each AOI we were given an exercise to complete which was for our personal project. We had to chose three different AOI’s that our project could be part of. I choose Heath and social education, human ingeniety, and community and service. At the end I choose health and social education because it was the AOI that best fits my Goal 33 Maher Armoush 20112012 and topic. That was the last session for the day after that we had lunch and for the rest of the day began working on our goals that were due soon. Reflection: 9. November 20th 2011- Getting started with Editing and Final Cut Pro As planned I meet with Mrs. Fletcher so she can help me get started with final cut pro. But before we could begin Mrs. Fletcher told me to get all the files I have in the right format. Meaning the videos I downloaded where in a FLV file and had to be converted to a MOV file in order for it to be used in Final Cut. To do this Mrs. Fletcher told me to use the software called MPEG Streamclip. So I downloaded it and imported each video starting with the montage clips. The screenshot below shows the MPEG Streamclip window. 34 Maher Armoush 20112012 When I clicked on export to Quick time the window above appeared. I had to change a couple of things before I export the video. The Quality was changed to 100%, and “Deinterlace Video was checked, and then I exported the video. I did that for the rest of the montage and then the Statement from Doctor Georgia. After that using Mrs. Fletcher hard drive I placed all my files into a folder and then uploaded the folder to one of the computers in the film lab. When That was done Mrs. Fletcher told me to open Final Cut pro. The Following windows filled the screen. Mrs. Fletcher Explained to me what each window was for and how to open them if they do not appear n=on screen. The windows were: Browser window- This windows contains all the files that you import into final cut. It is also where effects can be added to your footage. 35 Maher Armoush 20112012 Timeline Window-the Timeline window shows the order that the video will be played in. in is basically the video structure itself. Viewer window- This window is used to drag parts of a video that one wants into his film. Canvas window- this will play what is on the timeline Toolbar window- this window contains the tools that can be used to edit the film. Audio window- Displays the Sound coming out of the footage. After I was introduced to the windows it was time to import my footage into Final Cut so I went to File---Import--Folder. I clicked on my Folder and it uploaded to the browser window. By that time it was time for Mrs. Fletcher to leave so she told me to save the file, and we can continue tomorrow. I went to File---Save and then closed Final cut Pro. I Thanked Mrs. Fletcher and scheduled to meet her during lunch and after school in order t have more time and she agreed. 36 Maher Armoush 20112012 10. Information Literacy 11. Here I had to choose which Doctor (Source) would be the most relevant to help me achieve my goal. 37 Maher Armoush 20112012 12. Here I had to choose a reliable source to help me with the editing of my video so I went to talk to Mrs. Fletcher. 38