LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar March 15, 2012 Part 1, Seminar 3 Creating a Concept Map Strategies for Argumentation •Toulmin •Rogerian LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar March 15, 2012 References: The Purdue OWL Glenn, Cheryl, et al. The Writer's Harbrace Handbook. 2nd ed. Boston: Heinle, 2004. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar March 15, 2012 The PowerPoint Concept Map: • Is a graphic representation of the rhetorical path • Defines the path from Point A (your topic or subject) to Point B (your thesis claim or conclusion) • Helps with planning your persuasive paper, much as an outline would • Is due at the end of Unit 3 LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar March 15, 2012 For the concept map, • trim the material from your freewriting exercise • discard useless ideas from your brainstorming • choose and address relevant counterarguments • distill down to several (at least 3) main points in support of your thesis • compile the details necessary to develop and explain these points clearly, concisely, and convincingly LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar March 15, 2012 Under Unit 3’s homepage, you’ll find a website link that will help you bring your ideas together and create a coherent concept map. Include your revised thesis statement (if revision was necessary from Unit 2) and introductory paragraph for your persuasive essay in the “notes” section under your PowerPoint slide(s). [Note: You will also turn in the revised thesis statement and introductory paragraph in the appropriate dropbox folder.] LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar March 15, 2012 The Toulmin Method, a common formula for organizing an argument, works as follows: • • • Claim: The overall thesis the writer will argue for (a.k.a., conclusion drawn from evidence). Data: Evidence gathered to support the claim. Warrant (a.k.a. “bridge”): Explanation of why or how the data supports the claim, the underlying assumption that connects your data to your claim. A well thought out warrant or bridge is essential. If you present data to your audience without explaining how it supports your thesis they may not make a connection between the two or they may draw different conclusions. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar March 15, 2012 • • • Backing (a.k.a. “foundation”): Additional logic or reasoning that may be necessary to support the warrant. Counterclaim: A claim that negates or disagrees with the thesis/claim. Rebuttal: Evidence that negates or disagrees with the counterclaim. Including counterclaims allows you to find common ground with more of your readers. It also makes you look more credible because you appear to be knowledgeable about the entirety of the debate rather than just being biased or uniformed. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar March15, 2012 Example of Toulmin Method: • Claim: Hybrid cars are an effective strategy to fight pollution. • Data 1: Driving a private car is a typical citizen's most air polluting activity. • Warrant 1: Because cars are the largest source of private, as opposed to industry produced, air pollution switching to hybrid cars should have an impact on fighting pollution. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar March 15, 2012 • Data 2: Each vehicle produced is going to stay on the road for roughly 12 to 15 years. • Warrant 2: Cars generally have a long lifespan, meaning that a decision to switch to a hybrid car will make a long-term impact on pollution levels. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar March 15, 2012 • Data 3: Hybrid cars combine a gasoline engine with a battery-powered electric motor. • Warrant 3: This combination of technologies means that less pollution is produced. According to ineedtoknow.org, "the hybrid engine of the Prius, made by Toyota, produces 90 percent fewer harmful emissions than a comparable gasoline engine." LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar March 15, 2012 Counterclaim: Instead of focusing on cars, which still encourages a culture of driving even if it cuts down on pollution, the nation should focus on building and encouraging use of mass transit systems. Rebuttal: While mass transit is an environmentally sound idea that should be encouraged, it is not feasible in many rural and suburban areas, or for people who must commute to work; thus hybrid cars are a better solution for much of the nation's population. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar March 15, 2012 Rogerian Argument: Psychologist Carl R. Rogers advocated communication based on compromise. He felt a person should listen to the point of view of his or her adversary and come to a conclusion that takes into account this other perspective. Rogerian argument takes this idea and applies it to the essay format. A Rogerian essay structure acknowledges that a subject can be looked at from different standpoints. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar March 15, 2012 Rogerian argument works best when people have strong, opposing positions, as with divisive subjects like gun control or abortion. Because Rogerian arguments are based on listening to the opposition and giving consideration to those concerns, this structure works to calm an audience who may be opposed to your opinion. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar March 15, 2012 The structure of Rogerian argument differs from the Toulmin model because the opinions of the opposition are presented earlier in the essay and given due consideration. Your thesis will appear after you have shown that you understand the arguments of those who have a different position. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar March 15, 2012 Introduction: From the beginning of your essay, acknowledge that there is another side to the argument, and it is dissimilar from your own. Give a fair assessment of the opposition in your introduction. Acknowledgment of the Opposition builds trust because it shows that not only do you acknowledge the other side of the argument, but that you also find some value in it. State the parts of the opposition in which you find some merit. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar March 15, 2012 State Your Thesis: Once you have shown that you are taking your opposition into consideration, you should state your own perspective. Support Your Thesis: Explain why your thesis is valid. The research you have done in support of your position should appear here. This section builds support for your point of view and illustrates that you have delved deeply into your subject and found material to endorse the position you have chosen. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar March 15, 2012 Conclusion: illustrates why your position in this argument would be beneficial and would resolve the problem. Even though you have admitted that the other side of the argument has merit, you want to conclude by showing why your thesis is the better option. If your position cannot completely solve the problem, as is often the case when writing about a controversial issue, admit that. State that while your ideas will help, more work needs to be done. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar March 15, 2012 Tone: the Rogerian thesis should be delivered in neutral, non-adversarial language. The thesis should not be an attack on the opposition; rather, it should present the writer’s viewpoint without dismissing or demeaning the viewpoints of others. For example, in a thesis that advocated the death penalty, you would not want to refer to those on the other side of the issue as "bleeding-heart liberals." LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar March 15, 2012 Support: The most persuasive support for a Rogerian argument comes through research. Saying that "anyone who takes a life should pay with his life" is an impassioned statement, which is all wrong for a Rogerian argument, and it is not supportable through research. Show the reader why your way of seeing the issue is valid in certain circumstances. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar March 15, 2012 Thesis: a Rogerian thesis differs from a regular thesis because it is presented only after the writer has conceded that opposite viewpoints exist and that they have some merit. This concession of merit may even lead into your thesis statement, as in this example: “Regardless of whether the fetus is entitled to legal protection, society as a whole will benefit if we treat a high abortion rate as symptomatic of a greater social illness. Identifying and addressing that illness will do more practical good than endlessly pitting the rights of a woman against the rights of her fetus." LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar March 15, 2012 As always, contact me with any questions. vhill@kaplan.edu Good luck with the Persuasive Papers and I’ll see you on the discussion board!