Seventh Grade Unit 2: Writing About Reading Information Monday Writing Focus: Tuesday and Wednesday Thursday and Friday Continued session from previous day May be able to complete this the following week Standard: ELAGSE7W2: Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas, concepts, and information through the selection, organization, and Objectives CCGPS/G PS TKES 1.1 2.2 analysis of relevant content. a. Introduce a topic clearly, previewing what is to follow; organize ideas, concepts, and information, using strategies such as definition, classification, comparison/contrast, and cause/effect; include formatting (e.g., headings), graphics (e.g., charts, tables), and multimedia when useful to aiding comprehension. b. Develop the topic with relevant facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples. c. Use appropriate transitions to create cohesion and clarify the relationships among ideas and concepts. d. Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain the topic. e. Establish and maintain a formal style. f. Provide a concluding statement or section that follows from and supports the information or explanation presented. ELAGSE7L1: Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English grammar and usage when writing or speaking. a. Explain the function of phrases and clauses in general and their function in specific sentences. b. Choose among simple, compound, complex, and compound-complex sentences to signal differing relationships among ideas. Essential Questions TKES 3.3 3.4 5.2 5.4 Activator TKES 3.1 3.2 TKES 3.1 3.2 3.4 3.6 3.8 4.1 4.2 4.3 4.5 4.6 5.3 6.5 6.6 7.3 7.4 7.6 7.7 How do I develop a strong conclusion for my informational writing? Journaling Whole Group Instruction: No School Teaching Whole Group: Distribute handout Strong Conclusions in Informative Writing 2. Discuss elements of strong conclusions. (Slides 2 & 3) 3. Explain that students will look at three types of conclusions and will write each type. (Slide 4) Modeled Instruction: 1. Introduce students to each of the techniques. (Slides 5-7) Be sure to enforce that these are not the ONLY methods How do writers use figurative language to help their writing? How do I elaborate to make my writing more detailed? What is the purpose of freewriting? Journaling Journaling Journaling Teaching Whole Group: Use slide 2 of the PowerPoint to introduce the purpose of the lesson, which is to practice identifying the details an author uses to elaborate on evidence in a text. This lesson is a “warm up” so that students will be able to elaborate on evidence when writing their own analytical essays. Discuss slides 3-5 to explain what elaboration is and how an author uses it. Teaching Whole Group: Review the different tiered levels of academic vocabulary and explain how the tiered words area applied to complex text and precise language. Distribute handout. Modeled Instruction: Share the writing prompt with the class. Distribute and review the rubric. Read paragraph one aloud. Think aloud to model the process used to identify key academic/precise words. Guided Instruction: Teaching Whole Group: Explain why writers use figurative language. Define and give examples of alliteration and allusion. Figurative language is the writer’s way of creating a story that is more vivid and interesting for the reader. One way writers do this is through the use of alliteration. Alliteration is the repetition of the same initial word sounds within a phrase. For example, the snake slithered silently across the field. In this statement, you hear the repetition of the s sound. When writers use figurative language, they do not 7.8 8.1 8.3 8.5 8.6 8.7 used to conclude a paper. These are just a few examples of various techniques. Guided Practice: Distribute the article Starfish and read together as a class. If students haven’t yet written introductions or body paragraphs using this article, there is a partial sample essay included on their handout. (Slide 8) 3. Have students work with a partner to write the first conclusion paragraph. Independent Practice: Next, have students write the remaining two conclusions on their own Modeled Instruction: Display slide. Model how to number the paragraphs of the article “Seward’s time-traveling folly”. Read aloud the texts. The purpose for reading is to think about how the evidence in bold print supports the point/claim that is given for an explanatory essay. Introduce the Elaboration Warm Up handout and model how the author elaborates on the evidence in the example. (Note that clarifying questions serve as a guide.) Model marking the details in the text. (Ex: “In today’s gold prices that’s $16,250,000,000.”) Use slides 7-10 to support a think aloud while analyzing the elaboration in the example. Guided Instruction: Display slides 11 and 12. Teacher will guide the students in completing the next one or two pieces of evidence, first underlining the details in the text and then writing them on the handout. Independent Practice: Display slide 13. Students will complete the rest of the handout, first underlining the details in the text and then writing them on the handout. Review the prompt with the class. Students work in partners to identify key academic/precise words in paragraph two of the text. After reading paragraph two, students make notes of words to use in the written response. Some students may begin working on a prewrite. Students continue working in partners to read paragraph three. After reading paragraph three, students summarize the entire passage. Students work independently to take note of the key academic/precise language used in the last section of reading (paragraph three) and work on their prewrite for their written response. Students complete a carousel activity to compare key academic/precise language identified in the text as well as written summaries. Students write their written responses. Distribute highlighters. Students pair up to edit each other’s work for the use of key academic/precise language. Teachers can determine the color-coding for editing. One option: Highlight direct quotes in one color. Highlight key academic/precise words in another color. Independent Practice : always mean exactly what they say, rather it is implied. As a reader, you must use the clues within the text to determine the connotative meaning, or the implied meaning. Writers also use allusions to help readers make connections to another text. An allusion is an indirect reference to a person or circumstance from a piece of literature or another piece of text. For example, their love was like Romeo and Juliet’s, something worth dying for. Modeled Instruction: Distribute Handout 1 to each student. Model how to identify figurative language by reading and thinking aloud for students. As I read the passage, listen for different elements of figurative language. Circle the first example of alliteration (first sentence). In the passage I just read, there were several examples of figurative language. For example, the author used alliteration when they said, “Belligerent, beautification, bewildered, which word will it be?” Let’s copy this under the Figurative Language column on the graphic organizer below the passage and think about why the author made this choice. I think the author used alliteration here to hook the reader at the beginning of the passage and to convey the narrator’s anxiety over her uncertainty about which word she may have to spell. In the Impact of Alliteration column, let’s write these thoughts down. Guided Instruction: Direct students to continue reading and filling out the graphic Students are given time to review the feedback from their partner’s edits and revise their responses. Questions to consider include: a. Did you use the preidentified words? b. Did you summarize or quote directly? c. Did you use different words from the list of pre-identified words or did you use the same word over and over? d. How could you improve your summary while using more precise words? organizer below the passage with a partner. Continue reading the rest of the passage. As you come across any examples of figurative language, circle it and copy it onto the graphic organizer under the Figurative Language column. If the example you found is a word or phrase with an implied meaning, complete column two on the graphic organizer, stating the connotative meaning. For any examples of alliteration, complete column three, stating the impact of the alliteration on the passage. Additionally, find an example of allusion and interpret its meaning as used in the passage. Give students 8-10 minutes to complete this activity. Once time is up, review student responses as a class. Independent Practice: Distribute Handout 2 and the Figurative Language Paragraph Checklist to each student. Review the paragraph expectations on the checklist. Now, it is your turn to write your own sample body paragraph. Using the checklist, write your sample paragraph on the lines provided. Once you have completed the paragraph, record your examples of figurative language in the chart below, and complete columns two and three, as well. Be sure to allude to a person or circumstance in literature and explain the meaning of the allusion. Figurative Language Paragraph Checklist: _____ Clear main idea _____ At least three examples of figurative language _____ Example of alliteration _____ Example of allusion _____ Example of ____________________ _____ Internal transitions _____ Wrap-up sentence Summariz erTKES 5.2 6.7 Group Share Group Share Group Share Using Transition s to Link and Extend Information Group Share Finding, Analyzing, and Citing Evidence to Support Ideas Homework: Setting A Goal TO Work Toward Homework: Refine: Extend: Refine: Extend: Homework: 7.5 7.7 Refine: Extend: Refine: Extend: