Aya El Jerbi English A1SL Mr. Bowe Wednesday, February 24, 2010 Reading Response Journal – Oedipus the King Text (Quote, word, action/event) a. Oedipus the confident, caring leader Response 159-167 1."Here I am myself – you all know me, Oedipus's confident, arrogant and even selfthe world knows my fame; I am centered personality is portrayed in this quote. Oedipus." –Oedipus (pg 159; lines 7-9) He talks to his people while standing behind an Alter, like a God, symbolizing the power that he possesses. The difference in levels between Oedipus and the citizens, kneeling on the ground praying, is a symbol for the difference in power and status found in the Ancient Greek society; whereby the polarity between the powerful and the weak is emphasized. VERY IMPRESSIVE LANGUAGE SKILL HERE! Oedipus refers to himself as "Me, myself and I" often, not only in this quote but throughout the entire play, which highlights his egotistical and shallow nature. It is clear that Oedipus is proud of whom he is and this is re-emphasized when he says "I am Oedipus". The sentence is short and concise which adds to the power of this rather kingly line. It can be argued that Oedipus's confidence is a result of solving the Sphinx riddle which saved the lives of the citizens of Thebes. He, along with the citizens, believes that if he was able to solve the Sphinx riddle then he must be able to do anything else, which includes ending the plague. This betrays certain arrogance of Oedipus towards his abilities and power. It is this unpleasant arrogance of his, or hubris, which eventually leads to his downfall. GOOD KNOWLEDGE OF PLAY AND GREEK TERMS 2. Helping a Priest to his feet. In contradiction to the last quote, here Oedipus seems to be the ideal king, revealing his "You can trust me. I am ready to help, intelligence, responsibility and energy. Oedipus expresses his sympathy and concern about the I'll do anything. I would be blind to problems that face Thebes. He sets an image of misery not to pity my people kneeling himself being an idealistic caring, compassionate at my feet." –Oedipus (pg 150; lines 13and noble leader which is contrasting to his earlier 15) charismatic character. GOOD POINTS Oedipus seems to adopt the approach that 'actions speak louder than words' as he helps the priest to his feet. This same approach is also seen later when he announces that he has already sent his brother-in-law, Creon, to the oracle in an effort to end the plague. This shows that it isn't only talk, Oedipus is physically taking action towards lifting the plague. This incident also seemed to say that Oedipus doesn't need anyone to tell him what to do. He takes actions on his own when he sees necessary which indicates some degree of independent leadership skills. VERY INSIGHTFUL! Two very different sides of Oedipus are revealed in this first scene of the play, one being heroic and the other being self-centered and egoistical. He has demonstrated qualities of both a proficient and a deficient leader. However, even though his personality is split, he does seem to genuinely strive for the overall benefit of the citizens. This is what leads the people to think very highly of him, to view him as a prosperous, respected leader and to refer to him as Oedipus the 'great'. WELL SUMMARIZED. THIS IS A PLEASURE TO READ – SUCH EFFICIENT AND ELEGANT PROSE! 3. Oedipus character flaws vs. character qualities At this point in the play, we notice a quality of Oedipus' which lies in his openness when dealing with his people. He seems to dislike hiding things from them. In fact, he portrays himself as being transparent with nothing to hide, insisting that Creon reveals the news he brings publicly rather than in a secretive manner. This allows the people to feel more secure in the plagued circumstance. This honest behavior is another reason why Oedipus is viewed as an audacious leader in the eyes of the Theban people. EXCELLENT POINT – ORIGINAL! Sophocles brings out these numerous qualities in Oedipus to lead us to be fond of him and his leadership. This is important for the play to be considered a tragedy because we, as audience, must have some degree of liking for the character to be able to later pity him and hence for his downfall to be considered a tragedy. YES, QUITE TRUE At this stage in the play, I begin to question if Oedipus' flaws are more important than his qualities. Sophocles seems to focus more on Oedipus' qualities rather than his flaws. His flaws are built up throughout the play and lead to his eventual downfall while his qualities do not seem to progress at all. THEY WILL AT END OF PLAY! This is probably done on purpose in the intent to heighten the dramatic value of the play. Another reason why Sophocles might have explicitly decided to progress the character's flaws throughout the play is so that the plot is kept believable and credible by the audience. It is part of human nature that we go on hiding our flaws revealing only our qualities until we stumble and lose control over our self conscious image. Hence, it can be argued that Oedipus so far has maintained a rather fake and deceiving personality allowing his qualities to be more apparent than his hidden flaws. I AGREE. WELL SAID (IF A BIT WORDY HERE) 4. “But once he returns, then, then I'll Oedipus immediately swears to take action to be a traitor if I do not do all the god find the murderer and act like a hero to save the makes clear." –Oedipus (pg 162; lines city. This appears to be in the best interest of the 88-9) citizens as a whole. We see that he is determined to do anything possible to save his city. “Whoever killed the king may decide to kill me too, with the same violent hand - by avenging Laius I defend myself." –Oedipus (pg 167;lines 158-9) NICE ORGANIZATION OF QUOTE! I LIKE THE BOLD Contrastingly in the second quote Oedipus seems to be acting in the interest of saving his own life rather than the lives of the general society. Ironically, even though it appears to Oedipus that perseverance to find the murderer is in his own interest, he is actually acting outside of it since the killer happens to be himself. It is highly ironic that Oedipus is oblivious to the truths that surround him. GOOD POINT Foreshadowing - Oedipus foreshadows how difficult it will be to find the killer when he says, "Where to find it now, the trail of the ancient guilt so hard to trace?". He knows that it is not an easy path to solve the mystery yet he sustains his determination. Personification - "And black Death luxuriates in the raw, wailing miseries of Thebes." – (pg 160; lines 37-8). Here, personification of death reveals how it has appeared everywhere in the city. Though figurative, the vivid description invokes images in the audiences minds of the awful state the city is in allowing them to relate to the play. Metaphor - "Drive the corruption from the land." – Creon (pg166; line108) Sophocles in this quote refers to both the literal plague that affects the city as well as Oedipus himself that is metaphorically the 'corruption' within it. Literary features Simile - Oedipus maintains hope when he says "Lord Apollo, let him come with a lucky word of rescue, shining like his eyes!". In these lines, Oedipus uses a simile which shows hope for an idea to rescue the city. Allusions - There is a lot of reference to religion, and we see exactly how big the role it plays in the lives of the citizens. "You freed us from the Sphinx…A god was with you." (pg 161; line 44) The Priest says to Oedipus that a 'God' was with him when he defeated the Sphinx. This goes in contrast with the events that take place later in the play as we see that the Gods where perhaps spitted by Oedipus using him for entertainment purposes. MOST IMPRESSIVE ORGANIZATION AND IDEAS! WONDERFUL ADDITION TO JOURNAL b. The role of the Chorus 168-170 1. "What now, what is your price? Some The Chorus seems to be extremely anxious new sacrifice? Some ancient rite from the about the price of deliverance, the "sacrifice" past come round again each spring?"they will be demanded by the Gods. This Chorus (pg 168; lines74-6) anxiety continues the dramatic irony begun in the first scene, foreshadowing the tragedy's climax, the downfall of Oedipus. YES, WELL THOUGHT OUT The chorus shows how the different Gods are being summoned for help by the people of Thebes and how each God was believed to have a certain area of command. It presents the gods in a glorified manner of them smiting the evil. This is exactly how the gods were viewed in the eyes of the Ancient Greek's. Throughout the Chorus we see the importance of religion in the daily lives of the Greek's. They looked to the gods for an answer that provides them with hope. Even though the citizens were hopeful they were also fearful and this is made clear throughout the entire deliverance but especially when they say "Racked with terror – terror shakes my heart." (page 168) GOOD REFERENCE TO QUOTE WORDS 2."Thebes like a great army dying and The main theme of the chorus is the death there is no sword of thought to save us, and destruction of the city. no and the fruits of our famous earth, Thebes is compared to a great army dying. they will not ripen no and the women This simile used helps emphasize the horrible cannot scream their pangs to birth"-conditions the city is suffering from. The Chorus (pg 169; lines 95-7) chorus vividly describes these conditions as it talks about how the earth no longer bears fruits, and women can no longer give birth. This accentuates the severity of the situation while also reflecting the fear of the Theban citizens. The chorus highlights that they believe that there is no plan for rescue, "no sword of thought to save us". This seems to say that they are defenseless. It also suggests that the people of Thebes do not believe in Oedipus as much as they appear to. A VALID CONCLUSION 3. Role of the Chorus The chorus seems to play the role of the narrator. It summaries what has happened, questions things, and provokes the audience. It tells the audience what the people of Thebes thinks while also mirroring the reactions of the actual audience. In my opinion, this role is rather interesting. Even though, it does not seem to add much to the plot and only elaborates on what happened it is extremely effective. Sophocles uses repetition for effect which works well because it highlights exactly what is important in the events. It also helps me understand how the audience at the time would have reacted and it broadens the view and perspective on the events. I enjoy reading the Chorus' line as they are highly poetic and dramatic. They make you wonder and raise questions about the concept behind the Greek Gods. How credible are these Gods? Did they decide Oedipus' fate? If they did, then on what basis? How did they decide his destiny? Was it chosen randomly? Did they enjoy seeing Thebes suffer? If not, could they have decided on a different fate for Oedipus' and therefore avoided the need for a plague? EXCELLENT QUESTIONS! BEST TO BREAK UP THE TEXT FOR EASIER READABILITY Imagery - The chorus is graphically detailed, filled with imagery, visualizing the people of Thebes undergoing these morbid circumstances. This allows the audience to envision this city crying out in pain and grief, again amplifying the severity of the situation. The chorus is also filled with imagery of the gods fighting the god of death in order to save the city - "Burn the god of death that all gods hate!" – Chorus (pg 170; lines 244) Symbolisim/Irony/Oxymoron - "What word from the gold vaults of Delphi comes to brilliant Thebes?" – Chorus (pg 168; lines 70-1)The gold vaults represent the hope that the citizens have for the triumph of their city. They are described as 'gold' suggesting that they are valuable to the citizens of Thebes. It is ironic how they still describe Thebes as being 'brilliant', because it is so opposing to the extent that it is nearly an oxymoron. Simile – "You watch them go like seabirds winging west, outracing the day's fire."-Chorus (pg 169, lines 200-1). The dead are compared to these seabirds, revealing just how many of them are dying "outracing the day's fire". Literary features Personification – "Thebes is dying" – Chorus (pg 205; line 205) - The city of Thebes is personified to indicate that it is now completely in ruins. In some occasions death itself is personified. By doing this Thebes' problems suddenly become a person, something they can fight or kill. Repetition -"Death so many deaths, numberless deaths on deaths, no end-" – (pg 169; line 204) Repetition of the word 'death' throughout the chorus emphasizes the severity of the plague. It helps depict how the City of Thebes is gradually transforming into the City of Death. Another use of repetition by Sophocles is found in the repeated cries for help from the Gods throughout the duration of the Chorus. This indicates how important the Gods were and how much power they had over events that happened. Mood - It is important that the chorus maintains a sad aura and mood to continue driving sympathy out of both the gods and the audience. LOVE THESE PAGES! I’LL HAVE TO KEEP YOUR JOURNAL AS AN EXCELLENT MODEL NEXT YEAR! c. Oedipus from nobleman to accused 171-181 1. "You pray to the gods? Let me grant your prayers. Come, listen to me – do what the plague demands: you'll find relief and lift your head from the This quote shows that Oedipus thinks very highly of himself and believes that he is worthy of his peoples trust. He is telling the people that he will do what the gods will not. This would depths." – Oedipus (pg 171; lines 245-7) spite the gods, since he is assuming authority that normally belongs to them. Yet the people accept this language from their king. This is because the gods don't seem to give them aid so their only hope now is in Oedipus. VALID POINT! 2. "How terrible- to see the truth when In this quote Tiresias, the blind prophet, the truth is only pain to him who sees!" implies that seeing the truth only brings one --Tiresias (pg 176; lines 359-60) pain. He is not able to share the ugly truth with Oedipus because of how ashamed he feels acknowledging that their own king is the murderer. When he does finally speak, Oedipus gets fueled and in turn accuses him of the murder when he asserts, "You helped hatch the plot, you did the work, yes, short of killing him with your own hands…" Naturally, because of his anger, Oedipus went into a state of denial and cursed Tiresias. Yet Oedipus is not quick to blame himself for the plague. Instead he tries to place the burden onto others which brings out his qualities as a deficient leader. YES, EXCELLENT SUMMARY Here, Oedipus continues to act in denial. 3. “You've lost your power, stone-blind, stone-deaf- senses, eyes blind as stone!" It is highly ironic that Oedipus is accusing –Oedipus (pg 181; lines 422-3) Tiresias of the very character traits in himself that are causing the accusations in the first place. GOOD POINT Through the repetition of his senses being "stone" Oedipus' cold and emotionless nature is highlighted. We also see the continuous metaphor that Sophocles employs throughout the entire play – sight vs. blindness. Though Tiresias is physically blind, he sees the truth, and is in fact the only person that does. On the other hand, Oedipus, who has physical eyesight, is blind to his fate and the truths that surround him. QUITE TRUE! The text is trying to build the notion that truth is only visible completely to those who do not use their eyes. OR USE EYES TO “SEE” DEEPER TRUTHS THAN THE PHYSICAL WORLD REVEALS Diction - Throughout the beginning of this section Oedipus speaks powerfully and poetically with a strong use of diction. However, his growing anger soon starts to reflect on his speech. He begins to stumble over words which distrupts the flow of his lines. This is important as it indicates that Oedipus is acting defensless to direct the blame away from him. Repetition – "Rescue yourself, your city, rescue me – rescue everything infected by the dead." The repetition of the word 'rescue' here is used for effect. It highlights the extent the city of Thebes was in need for rescue. Literary features Figurative Speech - "So I beg you, grudge us nothing now, no voice, no message plucked from the birds, the embers or the other mantic ways within your grasp." -Oedipus has a rhetorical style of speech in these lines as he addresses Tiresias. We see the contrast in the change of Oedipus' style of speech after Tireseas accuses him. He speeks using the same figurative language but instead of praising him he mocks him instead. Foreshadowing - "I curse myself as well...may the curse I just called down on him strike me!" - In these lines Oedipus foreshadows his own tragic fate. The curse will infact strike him in the end and he could have avoided that if he hadn't called upon it to begin with. Irony - Oedipus says "So I will fight for him as if he were my father" – This line is highly ironic because as audience we know that Lauis is in fact his father but he doesn't know it. FANTASTIC HOW YOU SHOW THE LITERARY FEATURES IN USE – WITH EFFECTS! d. Oedipus reveals character flaws 182-187 1. "So, you mock my blindness? Let me tell you this. You with your precious eyes, you're blind to the corruption of your life" – Tiresias (pg 183; lines 46971) Oedipus continues to taunt Tiresias for his blindness. However, Tiresias, biting that he is, responds to Oedipus using the same metaphor, mocking him for his eyesight and brilliance. It is Oedipus' intelligence that made him King, yet it is his intelligence as well that causes him to doubt and insult Tiresias. ISN’T OED. SHOWING LACK OF INTELLIGENCE HERE? IT IS TIRESIUS WHO IS THE MORE INTELLIGENT Tiresias foreshadows Oedipus' tragic fate saying that "No man will ever be rooted from the earth as brutally as you." He reveals the entire truth for the first time but Oedipus refuses to hear or rather acknowledge it. He only hears what he wants to hear ignoring anything that goes against what he believes happened. 2. Confident expedience another flaw? In this section, Oedipus’s quick thinking ability begins to work against him. When Oedipus first met Tiresias he says to him "Blind as you are, you can feel all the more". Oedipus praises him saying that even though he is blind, he can see the truth, and can "feel all the more". However, he then calls Tiresias a “scum from the earth” and soon after that accuses him of treason. Because of his short temper, Oedipus makes judgments and comes to conclusions way too quickly. ANGER PROBLEM, DEFINITELY It seems that the things Oedipus says and does are so exaggerated almost to the point that it's like he's tempting fate and the Gods. AN EXCELLENT POINT He insults Tireasias in a very ruthless and rude way when he says "Come here you pious fraud. Tell me, when did you ever prove yourself a prophet?" It is at this point that I lost any shred of sympathy I had for Oedipus. He is so insecure and paranoid after hearing what Tireseas said that he starts accusing the most loyal people in his life. He makes assumptions without any evidence which is another character flaw of Oedipus'. Perhaps, however, his most important character flaw is his excessive pride. Sophocles seems to imply that all these flaws work together, alongside fate, to bring about Oedipus' downfall. YES, THE INTRO TO PLAY ALL SHOW US VARIOUS FORMS OF THIS HUBRIS IN OED. The Chorus seems terrified and helpless in this 3. "Never will I convict my king, never section. Like Oedipus, the Chorus cannot believe in my heart." -- Chorus (pg 187; lines the truth of what Tiresias has said. They are 571-2) confronted with two options accepting the word of the Prophet or staying loyal to their King. There decision to side with Oedipus strikes me as being odd since that would mean that the Chorus has more faith in Oedipus than the prophet of the Gods. The line is expressing that even though there might be doubt, the Chorus believe their king with all of their heart. Even though at the moment there is nothing proving that Oedipus is guilty other then the prophet's word, there is also nothing proving that he is innocent either. Oedipus believes himself to be above the gods. This can be seen, for example, when he belittles them saying "Not a word, you and your birds, your gods – nothing." NOTE THE “YOUR” IN YOUR GODS! It seemed to me as though the Greek's feared the Gods up until now where Oedipus degrades and challenges them. This is very daring especially since they believed that all power was in the hands of the Gods. Foreshadowing - A lot of what Tiresias says foreshadows Oedipus' tragic fate. He talks mystically and in riddles when he says "This day will bring your birth and your destruction." Sophocles saved his best writing in Tireseas since his lines are uniquely poetic. He ends his speech addressed to Oedipus strongly with these two lines: "And if you find I've lied from this day onward call the prophet blind." He ends the lines as couplets to sustain the unity and strength of the message he gives to Oedipus. e. Oedipus vs. Creon Oxymoron - Sophocles incorporates an oxymoron in Tiresias' lines when he says "Your great fortune, true, it was your ruin." (pg 184; line 503) Tiresias highlights that it is because of Oedipus' state now that he later suffers a demise. Literary features Events & Dramatic Irony The plot itself is used by Sophocles to evoke fear and pity in the audience. His biggest tool is the knowledge that the audience already has about Oedipus. They know that he killed his father and married his mother but Oedipus doesn't This is important so that the audience feels connected with the play. If they felt no emotional connection then the play would not be tragic. 188-198 Oedipus, after having already blamed Tireseas, 1. "I see it all, the marauding thief himself scheming to steal my crown and accuses Creon of trying to overthrow him. He power!" --Oedipus (pg 189; lines 597-8) continues to jump into conclusions too quickly because of his uncontrollable fury and temper. This behavior is not practical and could easily have caused misconviction of the murder multiple times already. Instead of taking things calmly he acts irrational which goes against the characteristics of a strong leader. TRUE – I AGREE Creon is wise in the sense that he has a wicked 2. "Look, if you think crude, mindless stubbornness such a gift, you've lost your way of manipulating words. IS HE TALKING sense of balance." --Creon (pg 190; lines DIRECTLY OR SLYLY? He obviously isn't at fault because he isn't acting defenseless. He 615-6) doesn't seem worried at all as he calmly says, "Time alone can bring the just man to light – the criminal you can spot in one short day." (pg 194; lines 690-1). Creon defends himself with logic which suggests a strong personality on his behalf. He sounds convincing as he gives many rational reasons as to why he is not the killer. We see that unlike Oedipus, Creon thinks sensibly when he could otherwise act out of rage. A REAL LEADER – KEEPS HIS HEAD WHEN ALL OTHERS ARE LOSING THEIRS! 3. Oedipus Character Flaws vs. Creon Character Qualities Oedipus acts irrationally threatening to kill Creon on a thought that he has absolutely no proof. He is portrayed as a dictator and this is especially clear, for example, when he says "No matter – I must rule" (pg 195; line 703). He believes that he must rule even if he rules unjustly. This makes us lose sympathy for him as we see his selfish and power hungry side. His pride and anger has blinded his judgment ability as he now considers everything a threat to him. YES, THIS IS OEDIPUS’ LOW POINT – PARANOID, IRRATIONAL, IMPULSIVE, DEFENSIVE ETC. Creon in this section has outshined Oedipus showing traits of a secretive, professional politician. We see that Creon and Oedipus are very much different in character. While Oedipus is keen on finding the truth Creon is happy to dissemble. It can be argued that Creon is more fitting for a leader than Oedipus is. This goes in correspondence with the events that later takes place in the play as we find that Creon does in fact take over Oedipus' position as King. YES, GOOD FORESHADOWING THERE (BUT CREON IS A MUCH MORE POLISHED, LESS HUMAN LEADER THAN OEDIPUS. NOT NEARLY AS BELOVED BY PEOPLE! f. The mother-wife Jocasta 199-210 1. "No skill in the world, nothing human Jocasta, Oedipus's wife, seems to have a firm can penetrate the future." –Jocasta (pg belief in that no human can tell the future; that 201; lines 781-2) psychics do not exist. Here we see that indeed the 'apple did not fall far from the tree'. Jocasta just like Oedipus' makes decisions based on no evidence whatsoever. However, even though they are much alike, they do differ in the sense that Jocasta is skeptic while Oedipus is insistent on finding the truth. DOES SHE BELIEVE IN GODS? Oedipus logically and earnestly pursues the 2."I can hold nothing back from you, truth after having "reached this pitch of dark now I've reached this pitch of dark foreboding." –Oedipus (pg 205; lines 846- foreboding". His search becomes more productive 50) as he starts to calm down. He begins to pick up on important details that might help him with his investigation. "I thought I heard you say that Laius was cut down at a place where three roads meet." (pg 202; lines 804-5) We see that he quickly seizes upon an important detail that Laius was slain at a place where three roads meet. A crossroads is a universal symbol known for the moment where decisions and choices are made. Linking this with the play, the crossroads symbolizes the crucial moment when Oedipus began to fulfill the dreadful prophecy. GOOD LIT TERM USE He had three roads ahead of him and he chose the one that lead to misery. However, Oedipus was not aware at the time that he was making a fateful decision. Therefore, the crossroads here can also symbolize the power of prophecies YES, POWERFUL SYMBOL OF FATE/CHANGE Was it Oedipus that chose his own direction or was it fate that chose it for him? If life really is controlled by fate then should Oedipus be held responsible for his choice if it was already predetermined? Perhaps Sophocles is trying to say that all the seemingly free choices we make in life are really already chosen for us by a higher power. 3. "Pride breeds the tyrant violent pride, Contrastingly to previous lines, the Chorus gorging, crammed to bursting with all now describes Oedipus as being a tyrant gorging that is overripe and rich with ruin.... " – in his pride. A lot of negative imagery is created Chorus (pg 209; lines 963-982) which reflects the disgust that the Chorus is feeling towards their King. Sophocles uses an "overripe" fruit as a metaphor for Oedipus' excessive pride. This highlights that Oedipus was greedy to the extent that he was never satisfied with what he had. No matter how high he reached in status and power, he always wanted more. The Chorus questions "Can such a man, so desperate, still boast he can save his life from the flashing bolts of god?" (pg 210; lines 981-4) The Chorus now seems more believable to me as they reveal their belief in oracles and in the Gods who control people's destiny. GREAT USE OF LITERARY FEATURES. g. The last hope extinguished 211-224 1. Fear? What should a man fear? It’s all chance, chance rules our lives. Not a man on earth can see a day ahead, groping through the dark. Better to live at random, best we can. And as for this marriage with your mother—have no fear. Many a man before you, in his dreams, has shared his mother’s bed. Take such things for shadows, nothing at all— Live, Oedipus, as if there’s no tomorrow! – Jocasta (pg 215; lines 1068– 1078) This passage is highly dramatic because Jocasta treats incest extremely lightly. She claims that “chance rules our lives” and that Oedipus should live “as if there’s no tomorrow”. It is clear that Jocasta does not fully believe in what she says. This is because if she really believed that oracles are nonsense she would not have abandoned her own son, Oedipus, in the mountains in attempt to avoid it. Hence, she is portrayed as being hypocritical since she believes in oracles only when it suits her. EXCELLENT UNDERSTANDING However, Jocasta seems to say these things to curb Oedipus' fear. Her intent is to give advice to Oedipus on how to get along in this world. We see Jocasta's supportive nature in that she gives both advice and comfort to Oedipus when he most needs it. This is a role that woman, even in our modern world, often fall into because of their nurturing nature. Jocasta seems to be extremely mother-like in her lines and especially when she says "No, please – for your sake- I want the best for you!".She speaks like any mother wanting the best for her son. But in fact what she wants is against what is the best for him. It can be argued that Jocasta wants Oedipus to stop searching for the truth to protect herself. "Stop – in the name of god, if you love your own life, call of this search! My suffering is enough." (pg 222, lines 1166) Jocasta wanted Oedipus to terminate his search so she does not suffer further and is not publicly humiliated. NEED TO BREAK UP THESE LONG PASSAGES FOR EFFECTIVE READING 2. "And you got your name from that Oedipus gets his name from the fact that he was left in the mountains with his ankles pinned misfortune too, the name is still with you." – Messenger (pg 220; lines 1135-6) together. This incident left him with a vivid scar for the rest of his life. He was named after this injury since his name Oedipus literally means "swollen feet" in Greek. This symbolizes the way in which fate has marked and distinguished him. It also symbolizes the irony of Oedipus and Jocasta's ignorance towards the truth that surrounded them. Oedipus injured foot (FEET) was so obvious to the extent that it is impossible that, Oedipus who solved the riddle of Sphinx, could not put two together to figure out the truth of his birth. His name alone blatantly points attention to his scarred feet, which could have given away his identity. DID HE GET LUCKY WITH SPHINX? It is also an easy clue to Jocasta who could have tied Oedipus' name with her son. However, both Oedipus and Jocasta chose not to acknowledge the obvious truths and pretend not to see them. A GOOD OBSERVATION This seems to be the easy option, but perhaps if they had acknowledged the truth earlier they would not be suffering from such pain and misery now. 3. Listen to you? No more. I must know it This line seems to suggest that Jocasta had all, must see the truth at last."-- Oedipus the power in her relationship with Oedipus. (pg 222; lines 1170-1) Since she was older and wiser it is not unlikely that she had the say in how things were governed. But Oedipus now says "Listen to you? No more." It is almost as though he is fed up of being directed by her that he wants to have his way for once. OR HIS STUBBORNNESS IS NOW TURNED TOWARDS THE TRUTH OF HIS LIFE/FATE Even though Jocasta appears to be the voice of reason she cannot sway Oedipus to stop pursuing the truth. This may suggest that in the end men had their say over women in the Greek society. However, Sophocles was restrained by the outcome of the argument because if Jocasta was able to convince Oedipus to stop searching for the truth there would not have been a tragedy that unfolds. BUT THE TRAGEDY OF THEBES WOULD CONTINUE! h. The tragedy unfolds 225-232 Oedipus treats his search to learn about his birth 1."So, you won't talk willingly – then you'll talk with pain." –Oedipus (pg 228; parents like a riddle, asking the shepherd endless amounts of questions. We see that he is willing to lines 1266-7) do anything to find out the truth and that includes resorting to extreme measures of violence. He threatens the Shepherd with torture "Twist his arms out quickly!" This comes in sharp contrast to the caring and compassionate Oedipus that we see at the beginning of the play. Perhaps, however, his character was forced to change due to the vindictive circumstances he was put in. GOOD UNDERSTANDING OF THE CHARACTER 2. Motives behind Jocasta killing herself There were many motives behind Jocasta's suicide. The most obvious motive is incest which directly brings about her suicide. Other motives are that Jocasta cannot live without an honorable place in society, which is why she married Oedipus to begin with. She was happiest when she married Oedipus but when she found she had married her son, it destroyed her social standing so she had to kill herself. YES, ALTHOUGH HER PERSONAL LIFE WAS IN RUINS AS WELL She also committed suicide because of how miserable she became. Who can live with themselves after knowing they have slept with their own son? It is not unexpected that Jocasta looks to suicide for an answer because even today people who are extremely unhappy sometimes choose suicide as a way of ending their misery. Jocasta can be seen as having some heroic qualities because she was dealing with a very difficult and unusual situation. This results in the audience feeling sympathetic towards her. But had she chosen to live she might have received even more sympathy. However, being the proud person she is, Jocasta preferred death then to live in humiliation forever. GOOD CONTRAST TO OEDIPUS – HE PREFERS HARD WAY OUT – LIFE LONG PUNISHMENT! 4. "O god-all come true, all burst to light! When Oedipus discovers the truth he says that O light-now let me look my last on you! I he can now see and declares that it is revealed by stand revealed at last-cursed in my birth, "the light". It is almost as though he has cursed in marriage, cursed in the lives I surrendered to his pride, to his fate and to the cut down with these hands!" – Oedipus (pg 232; lines 1306-10) Gods. The word "cursed" is repeated to emphasize that he has been cursed by his own doing. He finally admits that he was under the control of the Gods and realizes that the prophecy could not have been escaped. The Shepherd assures Oedipus what he suspected is true and tells him "Believe me, you were born for pain." (pg 232; line 1305) This shows that the god had planned Oedipus' life from the moment of birth to be one of pain and misery and nothing he might have done could have changed that. i. Oedipus accepts his curse 233-end 1. "You, you'll see no more the pain I suffered, all the pain I caused! Too long you looked on the ones you never should have seen, blind to the ones you longed to see, to know! Blind from this hour on! Blind in the darkness-blind!" --Oedipus (pg 237; lines 1405-9) It is as though Oedipus is punishing himself for what he has done. He brings on himself his own humiliation. As soon as Oedipus gorges GOUGES his eyes out he becomes a blind and helpless outcast. Personally, I believe that Oedipus cannot be blamed entirely for what has happened to him because his sins were involuntary. I feel empathetic towards him because of the fact that he wasn't aware of what he was doing and was merely a victim of fate. GOOD PERSONAL CONNECTION TO TEXT. He screams in agony these heartfelt lines, defending his decision to humble himself through blindness, furthering Sophocles' sight metaphor. Oedipus thinks that the pain will be less now that he cannot see. However, blinding himself caused him even more pain. He continues to defend his action questioning "What good were eyes to me? Nothing I could see could bring me joy." (pg 241;lines 1471-3) 2. "What god, what god power leapt beyond all bounds, beyond belief, to crush your wretched life? – godforsaken, cursed by the gods!" – Chorus (pg 239;lines 1435-7) This quote clearly reiterates the running idea throughout the play that humans have no power in face of the gods. Oedipus seems to have always been damned and no matter how hard he tried to avoid his fate it eventually came back to haunt him. The chorus questions Oedipus saying "What superhuman power drove you on?" (pg 240;lines 1466) It seems as though the chorus thought that Oedipus could not have done such horrible things without the drive of a greater power. Not only did the Chorus realize this, but so did Oedipus. This is clear when he says "It's mine alone, my destiny – I am Oedipus!" (pg 242;line 1497) Here, Oedipus repeats the line that he said in the opening of the play. It seems to imply that Oedipus' pride continued right from the beginning to the end of the play. YES INDEED, ALTHOUGH THE EARLIER PRIDE SEEMS IRONIC/SUPERFICIAL COMPARED TO THE TERRIBLE TRUTH OF WHO HE HIS AT END OF PLAY Oedipus is no longer fighting for his destiny but is now just letting it take its course. This is clear when he screams "Well let my destiny come and take me on its way!" He obviously did not expect his destiny to turn out the way it did and this is clear when he says "My destiny, my dark power, what a leap you made!"(pg 239;line 1448) He out of all men was at the top of the social hierarchy at the time and thought that nothing could bring him down. Perhaps the Gods chose such a horrible fate for Oedipus because they wanted to dent his rather inflated ego. QUITE POSSIBLY THAT IS SOPHOCLES’ MESSAGE! The Gods had to take action because Oedipus was seen as a threat to them. The people started believing in Kings more than they did in Gods. It seems as though Sophocles wanted to frighten the audience to make them go back to believing in Gods and obeying them. He set Oedipus as an example to those who dare challenge the Gods and fight their fate. 3. "Oh no, what can I say to him? How can I ever hope to win his trust? I wronged him so, just now, in every way. You must see that-I was so wrong, so wrong." – Oedipus (pg 244; lines 1553-6) Oedipus' attitude toward Creon seems dramatically altered and the opposite is also true. Oedipus now fears Creon while Creon now belittles Oedipus. Creon's short lines in this section demonstrate how eager he is to exile Oedipus out of the city. Even though, earlier in the play, Creon sounded extremely convincing when he told Oedipus that he had no intention of taking his title as King we see that he actually desires it above all. The fact that Creon was able to hide his greed so cleverly suggests that he rightly fits the position of the King. 4. "Now what a black sea of terror has These words, spoken by the Chorus, end the overwhelmed him…count no man happy play powerfully. It seems to discomfort the till he dies, free of pain at last." –Chorus audience telling them to take Oedipus as an (pg 251;line 1684) example of a man who fell because he rose too high. An example of a man that others should not follow in his footsteps. YES –A CAUTIONARY TALE TOLD IN EPIC PROPORTIONS! The Chorus also seems to deliver the message that no man should be counted happy until he dies because only then would he have escaped his fate. This makes me question whether this is true or not. Is the world that horrible? Are we all living in pain? GOOD QUESTIONS! Oedipus himself can be viewed as a symbol for all of humanity that is lost in this dark world. There are many questions out there that are left unanswered but we must seek answers within ourselves. We can't continue living our lives in agony until we die. We must be cautious but most importantly remain humble. We learn from what happened to Oedipus that we are relatively powerless before fate or the Gods so it would be much easier to surrender and accept fate than to fight it till we die. A VERY NICE PERSONAL SUMMARY TO PLAY AYA, THIS IS SIMPLY FANTASTIC. I REALLY ENJOYED READING YOUR IDEAS, YOUR PERSONAL OPINIONS/REACTIONS/PREDICTIONS ABOUT THE PLAY. YOU SEEM TO HAVE GOT A LOT OF INSPIRATION FROM THE PLAY TO WRITE IN SUCH DETAIL. THE LITERARY TERM USE WAS GREAT AS WELL, EXEMPLARY IN FACT (ESPECIALLY EARLY SECTIONS WITH THOSE COLORED TABLES OF LITERARY FEATURES AND EFFECTS). A GREAT EFFORT AND SUPERB UNDERSTANDING OF THE TEXT – ON A PERSONAL AND LITERARY LEVEL. WELL DONE.