The Laboratory by Robert Browning Commentary on the poem The Laboratory • The poem is set in France during the 18th century – the Ancien Regime – the time before the French Revolution. • It is a time of privilege for the aristocracy • The French Court* was known to be very flirtatious – much more so than the English Court. Love affairs were common. Where the people associated with the King meet • In a laboratory (apothecary’s shop) away from Court, a Lady is plotting to murder her rival with poison. The Laboratory - Form • The poem is a dramatic monologue (Browning’s preferred form) • In the poem the Lady is speaking to the apothecary – the “old man” • We only hear the voice of the Lady in the poem, never the apothecary • We know she is with him in the ‘laboratory’ as he prepares it • Through her voice we build up a picture of what is happening i.e. she has asked him to make a poison so that she may kill her rival The Laboratory - commentary “Now that I, tying thy glass mask tightly, May gaze thro' these faint smokes curling whitely,” She is looking intently She wears a mask to protect her from the fumes Makes the process seem mysterious and beautiful Through description Browning has established that the lady is taking more than just a casual interest in the process. This is an early indication of how strong her desire for vengeance is. The Laboratory - commentary “As thou pliest thy trade in this devil's-smithy-Which is the poison to poison her, prithee?” Informal 2nd person – Establishes relationship; She is the social superior Repetition of poison makes it more sinister. The laboratory - where the apothecary carries out his work. Consider connotations of ‘devil’ and ‘smithy’ As a creator of poisons Establishes victim’s gender The question is direct, she has nothing to hide – it is a polite request about a sinister action. Through careful use of pronouns, repetition and word choice, much of the poem’s narrative has been established in the first stanza. The lady likes to watch the poison being made; this implies she is enjoying this stage of her revenge. Grind away, moisten and mash up thy paste, Pound at thy powder, -- I am not in haste! Better sit thus, and observe thy strange things, Than go where men wait me and dance at the King's List of four verbs describes the violence and physical effort needed to make the poison. These lines imply that she does not want the attention of the men at court. This seems rather odd given that she is seeking a poison to kill a rival in love. The speaker finds more pleasure in watching the apothecary at his work than she does being flirted with at the King’s. List of verbs Gives a commanding and eager tone to the description of the poison’s creation – implies her desire for revenge is very strong. She’s fascinated by the process, asking questions and pointing at things. She points at things Her questions imply curiosity That in the mortar -- you call it a gum? Ah, the brave tree whence such gold oozings come! And yonder soft phial, the exquisite blue, Sure to taste sweetly, -- is that poison too? The ingredients to the poison are described using words we associate with goodness and beauty – thus linking beauty and death. Browning describes the scene through the eyes of the lady and what attracts her attention. This is how he creates her character. It’s not just revenge, the lady is taking pleasure from the idea of carrying it out The poisons are described as “treasures”, consider the connotations. Had I but all of them, thee and thy treasures, What a wild crowd of invisible pleasures! She seems to take pleasure In the idea of having power over people. This suggests that, despite her position in society, She feels very weak. To carry pure death in an earring, a casket, A signet, a fan-mount, a filigree-basket! The lady looks forward to giving the poison Word choice and position imply she’s looking forward to the moment. Her rival in love Notice the exclamation mark - She is gleeful at the idea of her rival’s death tablet Soon, at the King's, a mere lozenge to give And Pauline should have just thirty minutes to live! But to light a pastille, and Elise, with her head And her breast and her arms and her hands, should drop dead! Roll of paste it kills through the fumes She lingers on different parts of the victim's body: notice how she repeats the pronoun “her” each time. Another rival in love The lady grows impatient… “Quick -- is it finished?” “Let it brighten her drink” And critical “the colour’s too grim” “let her turn it and stir” “try it and taste” “ere she fix and prefer” By giving these details, Browning gives us some insight into the Lady’s psychological state. She Describes what she wants to see Pauline do – adding a voyeuristic quality to the poem. She seems to want to watch Pauline admire and enjoy the drink before it kills her. This adds a further layer of Malevolence to the Lady. We learn more of the back story She sees herself as small and insignificant “She's not little, no minion like me-That's why she ensnared him:” “Ensnare” has connotations of trapping or holding captive. This suggests that Pauline may be more powerful in society than the Lady. Also, physically larger. “What a drop!” She’s concerned that the poison is not strong enough to kill. We learn the lady tried to kill Pauline by staring at her – giving us further insight into her psychological state. “I brought My own eyes to bear on her “ “she would fall, Shrivelled; she fell not; yet this does it all!” To wrinkle, to make smaller -picks up on the “size” of Pauline, mentioned in previous stanza The note of triumph implies she is desperate for revenge She stares at her rival and fantasises that she can kill her with a glance. This suggests that the Lady is egotistical and deluded. She imagines the scene of death “Let death be felt and the proof remain:” Wants the method of death to be painful and also clear to anyone who sees the body. She lingers on the details as she imagines Pauline’s death “Brand, burn up, bite into its grace-” She wants to see good things destroyed – in this case, Pauline’s attractiveness Words linked to pain and suffering emphasized by alliteration. She wants the death to be long and painful. This suggests that she is not only after revenge, but wants to see Pauline suffer greatly, further indicating her deranged state. sad The poison is ready Take my mask off! Nay, be not morose She’s talking to the alchemist It kills her, He may look sad because he is helping commit a murder She’s only concerned whether it’s effective He’s had to listen to the details beside, can it ever hurt me? For a moment she considers whether the poison could be turned against her. my whole fortune's fee This revenge is costing her everything: it shows how much she desires it. She's ready to leave the alchemist take all my jewels The price of the poison is her jewellery gorge gold to your fill But she is concerned about being poisoned accidentally brush this dust off me, lest horror it brings You may kiss me, old man, on my mouth if you will! She likes to be in control Power,poison, death and sex are all linked together Her visit to the alchemist is over and she looks forward to returning to the court It sounds like she’s excited about an innocent pleasure But we know next moment I dance at the King's she’s excited about the prospect of murdering her rival Some gothic qualities in the poem An evil plot A deranged narrator A story of a murder A sinister setting madness secrets Which other poems in the anthology have some of these qualities?