Counter Culture NYC: ENG 2150 (LC) Baruch College Spring 2015 Professor: Daniel Hengel Office: A cubical in the labyrinthine depths of the English department; see 7-290R Office hours: T 5-6 & F 2:30-3:30 Mailbox: On the wall, English department, seventh floor E-mail: DanielHengel@Baruch.cuny.edu Class: ENG2150 Code: Section: KTRC Hours: T/TH 2:55 – 4:35 Room: Course Description We live in New York City. We live and breathe it. Walk it and ride it. It surrounds us. It is the most dynamic place on the planet. Millions of people slammed into a small space. We walk and there are hundreds of thousands of people riding cars below us, working above us, walking beside us; a 360 degree sphere of humanity. Just living in it feels like an accomplishment. What did you do this year: “I lived in NYC.” It may be the greatest city on Earth. It is the world’s city. It is the most diverse brew of socioeconomic and cultural demographics out there. We are the denizens of a desired space. Counter-culture, gentrification, immigration, globalization, post-colonial, the 1 percent and everybody else, tunes, trash, cinema and stories, it sometimes feels that these genre bending buzz words were born here, for us, by us, the people of NYC. This city has produced an incredible wealth of literature. We are going to read a bit of it. Then we are going write about it. We are going to read a novel or two, a few stories, pieces of memoirs and the New York Times. We are going to watch a few movies, hold class discussions digging into art and photography, listen to tunes and read lyrics; we may even read a handful of poems—don’t worry they’ll be short. And we are going to write, a lot. There will be three big papers and a bunch of small bits of writing to help get us to the big ones. We are looking at 25-30 pages of finished material, so be ready. I’m looking forward to a great semester. Syllabus may be subject to change THE READING Required texts (editions to be determined) 1. Little, Brown Handbook 2. The Imaginative Argument. Cioffi, Frank 3. On The Road Where to buy the books: Dealoz.com, half.com, amazon.com, alibris.com, abebooks.com, ebay.com The following texts will be placed on blackboard: “A Brief History of the Harlem Renaissance” (Norton) “Realism, Naturalism, Modernism 1940-1960” (Norton) “Sonny’s Blues” (Baldwin) “Everybody’s Protest Novel” (Baldwin) The Autobiography of Malcolm X (Malcolm X) Invisible Man (Ellison) “America,” “The Lynching,” “If We Must Die” (McKay) “A Brief Beat History, Variations on a Generation” (Charters) “The Best Minds of a Generation” (Charters) Junky (Burroughs) “Howl” (Ginsberg) “New York Scenes” (Kerouac) Stonewall Inn articles (The New York Times) 2 POLICIES AND PROCEDURES Learning Goals for 2100 and 2150 There are learning goals. Baruch sets the goals. The goals make sense. We will work toward these goals. I did not write these goals. But I am in agreement with the following goals. These are the goals: After completing ENG 2100 and 2150, students should be able to. . . Read a variety of articles, essays, and literary works, identify their key ideas and techniques, and subject these works to logical analysis; Practice writing as a process requiring the outlining of ideas, multiple drafting, and revision of complete essays; Create an original and cogent thesis and develop an imaginative argument in unified and coherent paragraphs; Observe sentence boundaries, punctuate correctly, vary sentence structures, and employ the conventions of standard English grammar and usage; Engage with different genres of writing, including the short story, the novel, the essay, poetry, and drama, and comprehend and use appropriate vocabulary in interpreting the material by paying close attention to language and style; Identify, analyze, and synthesize multiple sources as support for written arguments; Gauge the value of different strategies for argumentation, including the use of counter-arguments; Produce researched essays that incorporate sources and that effectively evaluate multiple (and even conflicting) points of view; Avoid plagiarism and understand why it is unacceptable in the research process; Imagine the needs of one’s reader when writing in different rhetorical modes and social contexts and take audience and occasion into account when writing. Course Requirements --Three papers, of varying lengths. Total amount required will be somewhere around 20 pages (not including drafts). Worth 80% of your grade. The Weights: Paper 1: 15% Paper 2: 25% Paper 3: 40% --Pre-draft assignments—there will be five of these. Required and graded: check, checkminus, check plus, working toward your participation grade (see below). Write them; they will make the long work a whole lot easier. 3 --Quizzes on the reading. 6.5% of your grade. (Simple, if you’ve read the material, seriously). --Class participation, which will account for 13.5% of your grade. This portion will involve my assessment of your preparedness and responsiveness in class, your attendance/participation in student led discussions, your presentation and “conceptual workshops,” and your other writing such as the pre-writing assignments and the critiques of others’ work (for draft workshops). This class is going to be fun. We are going to talk, a lot. I do not intend to lecture you too often. Grading Transparency is important. I use a thousand-point scale, which allows for clear computation of your final grade. The weightings of your work, works like this: Paper 1: 150 points Paper 2: 250 points Paper 3: 400 points Participation (and other writing): 135 points Quizzes: 65 points Ranges for letter grades: 970-1000—A+ 930-969—A 900-929—A870-899—B+ 830-869—B 800-829—B770-799—C+ 730-769—C 700-729—C600-699—D <600—F Note: All papers have word counts. Word counts are not suggestions. They are requirements. If the word count is not met; then, severe penalties will be rendered. I am not a monster. There is some give. Penalties begin at the 120 word short mark. That’s about a third of a page. The Penalty: one point from your total essay grade will be deducted for each percentage point your incompleteness represents relative to the required word count. An example: If the required word count is 1850 words and you write 1650; then, 11 points will be deducted from your essay after I have calculated your grade based on the essay’s merit. 1650 is 89% of 1850 (1650/1850)—100%-89%=11pts. Word counts must be listed at your essay’s end. 4 Attendance Come to class. Here’s why. Because writing instruction proceeds by sequential writing activities, your consistent attendance is essential. If you are absent without excuse more than four times, you are going to be dropped from the course and/or given a failing grade. Grounds for excused absence are documented cases of illness or family emergency, observance of religious holidays, and attendance at scheduled college sports competitions. The sports exception applies only to matches and games; practice and preparation are not covered. I’m going to need some sort of proof. On the occasion of your third unexcused absence, you will receive a warning letter. Tardiness Come to class on time. Here’s why. Everybody else is on time. Being late is disrespectful. It disrupts my class. I do not like it. Do not be late. These are the consequences. Three late-shows equals an absence. By late I mean excessively late—ten minutes is my typical cut-off. I understand, things happen. The elevators break down (especially in the 23rd street building), the trains are fickle monsters of the underworld, and old people walk slowly up the stairs. That’s why you get two free passes. But here’s the rub. We take a lot of quizzes in this class. If you are late and you miss the quiz you get a zero, there are no exceptions. But there is a window. Quizzes are distributed at the beginning of class—to the minute—they last for five minutes. So if you get to class four minutes late you have one minute to finish the quiz. There are no time extensions. Once your total absences (excused + unexcused) exceed 4, you will be asked to withdraw. Late Paper Policy Don’t be late. It’s not going to work out well. All deadlines in this learning community are firm. Except in the case of medical/family emergency, or religious observance, I give no individual extensions. In part, this is because you need to understand the importance of deadlines. College is an excellent bubble but in the real world you need to be on time. But just as importantly, the policy also respects the need for parity: all students should have the same amount of time to work on a paper. NO margin notes or response essays will be drafted for late papers. If an emergency occurs and you cannot meet a due date, please contact me, before the due date. The day of is cool the day after is not. Again, I’m going to need some sort of proof. When there are no extenuating circumstances, the following policies will apply: Late papers 1st time: loss of one-third of a grade (i.e., from A to an A- or A- to B+ or B to B-) per 24 hours (or portion thereof) late. nd 2 time: loss of two-thirds of a grade per 24 hours (or portion thereof) late. 5 3rd time: loss of one grade per 24 hours (or portion thereof) late. 4th time: loss of two grades per 24 hours (or portion thereof) late. 5th time: zero. Late pre-draft assignments, critiques of student writing: These will not be counted, graded, or commented on. These policies have two concrete benefits for everyone in the class: 1. They should spur you to promptness, because a lack thereof will result in severe consequences—hence you will be less likely to fall behind in your work; 2. You can be counted on being treated the same as your classmates. No one will receive preferential treatment, or be given extra time to work on a piece of writing. Late Draft Workshop assignments: These will not be read by the class or commented on. Our time is important; indeed, it is our only truly nonrenewable resource, we will not waste it; therefore, if you cannot get your work done on time I do not see a reason why the rest of the class should allocate their energy to your waste. If you manage to get the paper to me before your scheduled Draft Workshop date half points will be rewarded for your effort, despite its tardiness. Completion of Work Do the work. You pay to be here. Do not burn dollars. But if you need more, here’s why, again. Because writing classes at Baruch are organized as a planned sequence of writing, you must write all of the assigned essays to pass the course, and you must write them within the schedule of the course—not in the last few days of the semester once you have fallen behind. That would defeat the purpose. You will receive a letter reminding you of these requirements if you fail to submit at least a substantial draft of an essay by the final due date in that essay unit. The letter will also specify the new date by which you must submit the late work. If you fail to submit at least a substantial draft of the essay by this new date, and you have not documented a medical problem or family emergency, you are eligible to be officially dropped from the course and given a failing grade. Cheating and Plagiarism Do not do it. You will fail. Here are some definitions of cheating and plagiarism so that we may avoid any sort of confusion. The following definitions are based on the Baruch’s Academic Honesty website: Cheating: is the attempted or unauthorized use of materials, information, notes, study aids, devices, or communication during an academic exercise. Examples include but are not limited to: 6 Copying from another student during an examination or allowing another to copy your work Unauthorized collaborating on a take home assignment or examination Using unauthorized notes during a closed book examination Using unauthorized electronic devices during an examination Taking an examination for another student Asking or allowing another student to take an examination for you Changing a corrected exam and returning it for more credit Submitting substantial portions of the same paper to two classes without consulting the second instructor Preparing answers or writing notes in a blue book (exam booklet) before an examination Allowing others to research and write assigned papers (including the use of commercial term paper services) Plagiarism: is the act of presenting another person's ideas, research or writing as your own: Copying another person's actual words without the use of quotation marks and footnotes (a functional limit is four or more words taken from the work of another) Presenting another person's ideas or theories in your own words without acknowledging them Using information that is not considered common knowledge without acknowledging the source Failure to acknowledge collaborators on homework or laboratory assignments My policy is to give a failing grade to any assignment that has been plagiarized or an assignment on which you have cheated. On your second offense, you will fail the course. I mean it. In addition, I am required by College policy to submit a report of suspected academic dishonesty to the Office of the Dean of Students. This report becomes part of your permanent file. This will keep you from getting jobs. What company wants to hire an employee already proven to be dishonest? (That was a rhetorical question.) Here’s how I’m going to know that you lifted someone else’s work: Safe Assign—it’s on my Blackboard. It is free for Profs. This is the age of information people. Whatever you can find, I can find; please don’t waste my time. More paper stuff Electronic submission of final versions of papers is not permitted, unless I give you permission ahead of time. Why not? Because you want to have control over the final version of the paper that I receive, and often, in the course of electronic transmission, something goes awry, and I get a paper that’s weirdly formatted or in a word processing program that my computer can’t accommodate. Also, I don’t want to spend a lot of time 7 at the printer; reading on the computer drives me nuts. I can barely get through the NY Times. Note, I require hard copies of the five pre-draft assignments as well. Draft Workshops Instructions for draft workshops: for the students who are going to have their essays work-shopped—send a copy to each of your classmates, giving them enough time to read it before the class. For each essay you receive from your classmates, I would like you to prepare a brief written critique—you will give this to the author and give a copy to me! You need not write a critique of your own paper. Make as many points as you feel would be helpful, but keep in mind: 1. You may present only ONE or TWO points to the class for each category (good, bad, steps for remediation); 2. You should not repeat what has been said. You should not repeat what has been said; 3. You should avoid editing issues; 4. Spend 45 seconds to one minute to present your idea (I’ll time you, if needs be); 5. I will summarize at the end, emphasizing important points made. The Logical Fallacy A logical fallacy is an argument built upon a faulty premise. Ergo conclusions based upon this sort of reasoning are inaccurate. We are going to explore some of the more common logical fallacies. This will help us identify them in the writing of others— making us better literary detectives—more importantly it will aid in the prevention of their appearance in our own writing—making us better advocates. We are going to figure all this out not through the constant droning of my voice but through student presentations. The presentation: I will model the first one. They are four minutes long—ish. You are going to be paired up. Research and define the fallacy of the day. Try to find examples of the fallacy in the texts we are reading. Talk about the examples provided in TIA. Try to think of other examples of your fallacy. Be creative. You are free to use your own presentation technique— posters, handouts, the sound of your voice, whatever— BUT skip the Power Point, we don’t have the time. Student Led Discussions See handout. 8 Rewrites If you are not satisfied with your grade on a paper, I strongly urge you to consider rewriting it. Your rewrite will be due one week from the time that the paper was returned to you, and the re-write grade will count as 50% of the grade for that paper (50% being the first version’s weighting). Furthermore, the original copy of your paper—the copy I commented on—must be handed in with your rewrite. What you need to do when you are in my class This should be pretty straightforward. Bring the text under discussion to every class. Make sure that you have read the material assigned and have done the writing required for a given day. If you don’t volunteer, I’m going to end up calling on you, so be prepared and have something to say. Talking is fun, much less boring than listening. But please be aware that I am not trying to embarrass you or put you on the spot; rather, I am trying to involve you in the conversation, get some of your ideas out in the open, and explore the subject matter. A significant part of your grade will be based on class participation, on how well you present yourself orally in class discussions and workshops. 9 IN CLASS BEHAVIOR It is in all caps because this one is especially important to me. It is at the end because I want it to be the last bit of policy talk you read. It even gets its own page. You will remember this. It probably deserves some sort of star. Maybe a hash tag, I don’t know I’ve never used Twitter. Here it is: My class is a good class. It is a safe class. It is going to be a fun class. Only respectful behavior will be tolerated. Period. You are all adults. You pay to be here. Act like it. I expect nothing less than absolute respect for ourselves and others. Everyone should feel free to speak without fear of being slighted by a fellow student. I will never do this. You will never do this. 10 ASSIGNMENT SEQUENCE Note 1: You will be asked to write three papers in this course. Each of these papers will require multiple steps to complete. Make sure that you take seriously all phases of the writing assignment, trying to do as good a job as possible on the pre-writing work. The more carefully and completely you think through and complete each aspect of prewriting, the more likely you are to have a good paper. Note 2: You are going to have some serious latitude when picking a paper topic. Choose wisely. Oh, topics have to be run by me. I’ll give the go. Weeks 1-5: Harlem Renaissance Paper 1: Comparison/contrast (4 pages; approximately 1200 words). Choosing two texts that we have read thus far in the course (preferably in this unit), compare and contrast them with respect to some key element in both: theme, literary style, exploration/representation of the immigrant experience, pessimism/optimism, picture of the protagonist’s future or something of your own choosing. You might compare or contrast two major characters or focus on a series of ancillary characters. You might look at an important social or political issue. Or you might show how the immigrants of today rework or support archetypes of the past. Try to focus on something that both interests you and seems to you dissonant or inherently perplexing. Something you can talk about. You are going to be interpreting and explaining the works, developing an argumentative thesis about some point of comparison or contrast, some region of tension between them. What to do in a comparison/contrast. . . Usually this kind of paper relies heavily on “close reading,” such as what you did in the first paper. In addition, though, you need to look at two works and in some ways set side by side two close readings. Typically, in comparison/contrast studies, you will want to argue that there is a striking similarity between two texts that seem on the surface very different; or you want to show some startling contrast or difference between two texts that seem, on the surface, very similar. A third strategy would be to look at one work through the lens of the other. In this situation you will really focus on an analysis of one text but will use terms, ideas, structures, and the like from a second text as a “lens” to look, in a new way, at the first text. In all cases you are looking at some kind of cognitive dissonance—inconsistency in thought, action or attitude—that the two texts, set side-by-side, seem to generate. Your paper should attempt to resolve this dissonance. The goal of this kind of paper is not only a greater understanding of the two texts (though this is indeed one goal), but also a greater understanding of the conceptual framework through which we understand the texts themselves. For example, comparing works by fiction writers with works by journalists might reveal that there is not such a gulf of separation between the two 11 categories, or between the ways that the two pieces of fiction come to terms with human desires, needs, or propensities. Or comparing a contemporary piece with an older one might suggest that there are many things that still have not been answered—certain issues speak across the ages; an old text/new text dichotomy is not necessarily absolute. Pre-draft assignment 1.1: Using your own words, describe what makes for a good thesis statement. A thesis is a statement or theory posed by an author that will be proved and maintained throughout the course of a work, usually appearing within the first paragraph in the essay form. 12 Weeks 6-10: Paper 2: Close Reading (4 pages; approximately 1200 words). This paper will focus on a single text. I would like you to look at one of the works we have read or watched and argue for some explanation of this work: what is it saying? What is the work implying or suggesting? What is this work about? How does its archetype function? You should strive to make an argument about some irresolvable issue, some point of dissonance that is central to the power of the text. You should also look for one or more serious counterarguments and address them as best you can. What is a “close reading”? This kind of assignment, so often used in college courses, involves looking at just a single text in isolation from contextual sources such as biography, sociology, or history. In a close reading, you should seek out patterns within the work itself, and suggest why those patterns are significant. In addition, you might show how these patterns are sometimes violated or varied. A close reading searches for some meaning behind the words themselves, some meaning that is perhaps not on the surface of the text itself but is implied, hinted at, or perhaps even inadvertently conveyed by the work. Your job is to show how your interpretation, your explanation of the work’s meaning, can be supported by details of the text itself. Don't arrive at a meaning that everyone will see immediately, but a meaning or an interpretation that you—having taken great care analyzing the work—have arrived at and need to convince your readers of. NOTE: You must quote directly from the primary text. Do not use secondary source material without prior professorial approval. I want to read your ideas. Pre-draft assignment 2.1: Do two (3-4 point) bullet outlines, one focusing on a particular theme you recognize in the text; the other, proceeding chronologically through the text highlighting the work’s important moments. Decide which you like best, hand them both in, briefly arguing why you prefer one over the other. Remember page numbers are key. 13 Weeks 11-16: Counter-Culture in NYC Paper 3: Research Paper Analysis (7 pages; approximately 2100 words). Many of the texts we have read discuss some aspect of NYC culture that is apart from the mainstream socioeconomic-culture dynamic. Choose a topic that you can get into, then head to the library or go online and do some research. See what other writers are saying about this same issue. Then, in your paper, examine and critique several (2-3) related texts in the course, and evaluate/discuss their representation of some aspect of a NYC counter cultural movement. Writing research. . . How do the texts (fiction and nonfiction) in the class raise still relevant questions? Are they dealing with “representative” cases, or are the situations too idiosyncratic to be applicable to most people? Are there larger issues that our texts have overlooked or not given appropriate weight? Have they focused on the right aspects of the issues? Have they examined aspects of the issue that recent discourses have overlooked? As you examine the course texts, make sure that you show how they help inform and complicate the cultural movement you have chosen and that you can discuss your own understanding of the period. This is a “research paper” in which you are using some of the course’s texts—along with others that you have found—to argue for a new position, interpretation, explanation, or idea with respect to a previously discussed cultural movement. Note: There is a six source minimum, three of which must be academic journal articles (print). The remaining three sources can be whatever you deem fit for citation—newspaper or magazine articles, accredited blog posts, the Huffington Post, court transcripts, police reports, documentaries, etc. You may use online sources, but I want at least one half of all cited texts to be print material. Pre-draft assignment 3.1: Propose what you would like to write about, choosing a theme that you have found in several pieces and explaining why you think it might be useful to explore further. What is special about it? What are some especially interesting features of it? What are some points of inquiry that you might make? Pre-draft assignment 3.2: Provide an annotated bibliography of approximately 8-10 sources that might be useful for your paper. Try to find some range of "opinions" represented in your sources, and make sure that at least half are "hard copy" rather than website sources. 3 or 4 sentences for each source will do. 14 Note 2: This assignment is going to be pretty intense. There will be an additional handout. 15 Spring 2015 Academic Calendar (as of January 2014) January 27 Tuesday Last day for 100% tuition refund 28 Wednesday Classes Begin February 3 Tuesday Last day for 75% tuition refund Last day of late registration; Add/Drop Late registration ends. 10 Tuesday Last day for 50% tuition refund 12 Thursday Lincoln's Birthday - College is closed 16 Monday Presidents' Day - College is closed 17 Tuesday Last day for 25% tuition refund Last day to file Pass/Fail (WSAS-Undergrad) Last day to file P/NC (Graduate) 17 Tuesday Last day to drop without the grade of 'W' 18 Wednesday Course Withdrawal period begins (A grade of 'W' is assigned to students who officially drop a class) 18 Wednesday Classes follow Monday schedule March 2 Monday Last day to register for Undergraduate Internship and Independent study courses. (Excluding COM 5010/5011) 30 Monday Last day to register for Graduate Internship and Independent study courses. April 3-11 FridaySpring Recess Saturday 16 Thursday Last day to drop with the grade of 'W' May 17 Sunday Reading Day 18- MondayFinal Examinations 24 Sunday 24 Sunday End of Spring Term 25 Monday Memorial Day - College is closed 16