Persuasive Essays Start teaching this on March 30th (Day 1, Monday) English 10 Blocks 1-3 and 1-4 Lesson dates: March 30 April 1, 7, 9, 13, 15, 17 Total lessons: 7 First 2 lessons = Set-up and introducing persuasive writing techniques Lesson 3 and 4 = Library research classes for persuasive essay Lesson 5 = Persuasive essay draft Lesson 6 = Peer editing Lesson 7 = Hand in final essay + extra persuasive wrap up activities Lesson No. Topic 1 – March 30th Intro to Persuasive Writing Persuasive Writing Techniques: 1)Appeal to justice 2) Appeal to logic or reason 3) Appeal to emotion/emotive language 4) Attack on opposition 5) Counterargument Objectives / SWBATs Animal Research Students will be able to explain the 5 persuasive writing techniques that we have discussed in class and what purpose they serve Students will be able to explain how the articles in the Point/Counterpoint articles use these Persuasive Writing Techniques Materials Persuasive writing techniques handout Point/Counterpoint “Do we need to use animals in research?” by Jane McCabe (Pro) and Roger Caras (Con) in the book “Inside Essays I” PLOS: A1, A2, A4, A8, B2, B6, B12 Classroom Schedule (80 min) Attendance via seating plan Assessment Reasons for writing a persuasive essay + Writing Technique Sheet (20-25 min) - - Write “persuasive language” on the board and elicit what students think the purpose of persuasive language is Turn to your partner and talk about anything that uses persuasive language. This can be in the form of writing or oral communication or nonverbal Provide Example: News programs and papers often use persuasive language to show how serious a matter is or to get the public to do/think something Elicit 2 examples from the class - What are students’ preconceptions of persuasive language? Hand out “Persuasive Writing Techniques” handout Go through the first 5 techniques on the list and explain the techniques and the examples that go with them Ask students if they are confused about any of these techniques Tell students to work individually or in pairs and write down what effects these techniques can have. Tell students that they have 10 minutes to complete this! If you finish early then try to help the students around you! Go over effects and fill in anything that is missing Tell students to write down any points that they missed! - Do students understand the techniques and can they SHOW THIS by filling out the “effects” column - Are students able to think of examples of where persuasive language is used? Point-Counterpoint for Animal Research (45-50 min) - - Write “animal research” on the board Ask students to turn to the people around them and talk about what comes to mind when they hear the words “animal research” Elicit answers from the class Tell students that even before reading a persuasive article or listening to a persuasive speech we always begin with our own initial values, beliefs and ideas - Do students’ understand what animal research is and how it can be used? What are their preconceptions? Hand out Point/Counterpoint articles Number students into 2 groups. Group 1 will be responsible for reading the PRO article and advocating a PRO animal research position Group 2 will be responsible for reading the CON article - Are students able to draw information from these articles to answer the 4 discussion questions? - - - - - and advocating a CON animal research position Students will read their designated article and write down: 1) What are the key points the author is trying to make? 2) What persuasive writing techniques does the author use to make their points and how do they do this? (2 examples) 3) What is a powerful quote in the article? 4) Do you agree with the author’s argument? Why/Why not? Students are given 20 minutes to read their article and work on these questions. If they want to discuss the article and questions with others they are free to do so but they must be done ALL 4 QUESTIONS IN 20 MINUTES (possibly extend to 25) After, students must find a student who has read a different article. These students take turns sharing the answers to their questions Once both students have finished speaking they must talk about differences and similarities in persuasive essay techniques and which article has the more effective argument. TRY TO BE UNBIASED After, ask volunteers to share answers to questions Go over techniques and messages behind the articles Get students to stand up and go to the right side of the room if they believe that the PRO article is more compelling, left if the CON article is more compelling and MIDDLE if they are torn Ask each section why they decided to go where they did - Are students able to articulate their answers and explain their articles? - Are students able to back up their choices? Conclusion (5 min) - Elicit the different types of persuasive essay techniques we Homework have discussed Ask students what they believe the most powerful technique Bring persuasive writing handout for next class is and why Ask students what they learned from reading the PRO and CON articles Remind students to bring their persuasive writing handouts next class Lesson No. Topic 2 – April 1st Continuing Persuasive Essay Techniques: 1)Analogy/metaphor 2) Appeal to innovation or modernity 3) Exaggeration Objectives / SWBATs Creating an advertisement (Poster) Students will be able to explain the 3 persuasive writing techniques that we have discussed in class and what purpose they serve Students will be able to explain at least 2 qualities of successful advertisements and how these qualities relate to persuasive writing techniques Students will be able to explain how their advertisement uses at least 3 persuasive writing technique Materials Extra persuasive writing techniques handouts Tums meatball commercial Projector Poster activity projection Poster paper Markers Pencil Crayons PLOS: A1, A7, B10, C3, C9 Classroom Schedule (80 min) Attendance via seating plan Qualities of a successful advertisement + Persuasive Techniques (2025 min) - Tell students that advertisements use persuasive language constantly to get people to buy their products Think of some advertisements that stick out in your mind. These can be great ads, terrible ads or just any ads that come to mind In pairs talk about these ads and then think about the reasons why these ads stick out to you. What makes them MEMORABLE? Write these reasons down on a piece of paper (shared between partners) - Project “Tums meatball commercial” as an example. Tell students that this is one of my favourite ads and some qualities that make it memorable - Tell students that they have just 5 minutes to think of as many examples as they can and reasons why these ads are MEMORABLE. Each pair must choose their top 2 ads and one partner to share because I will be choose groups at Assessment - Do students understand how persuasive language can be used in advertisements and why it is so effective? - - random to share if nobody volunteers! Write a list on the board of what makes these ads MEMORABLE Get students to take out their “Persuasive Writing Techniques” handout Go through the rest of the list (Analogy/metaphor, appeal to innovation or modernity and exaggeration) Ask students which of these 3 techniques were used in the ads that they thought about Tell students that they have 2 minutes to talk to their partner and come up with what effects these techniques have Elicit answers from the class - Can students use knowledge form the pervious activity to more easily fill out the remaining spots on their handout? - Do students understand the 3 additional persuasive writing techniques? Advertisement Poster (45-50 min) - - Tell students that they are going to be working in groups of 4 (choose their own) to create a poster that advertises a product of their own creation. They can have the product do anything they want but they must make the product APPEALING to the public by using at least 3 techniques that we have talked about during this class and last class (at least one of these techniques must be from this class) Go over instructions and make sure EVERYONE is clear on what needs to be done. Also, go over how the poster will be graded - Students will showcase their knowledge through a poster worth 15 marks. - This will show comprehension through the creation of their unique advertisement but also deeper understanding through their need to work together - Can students effectively explain why they used the techniques that they did? On the projector: The poster must contain: 1) An original product with a UNIQUE NAME and PURPOSE 2) The poster should convince people WHY they need the product 3) Use at least 3 techniques on the handout (at least one - Are students on task? Is everyone sharing the work must be from this class) 4) Each technique should be labelled. Also, beside each equally? technique you should write reasons WHY you used this technique and what it does for your product (point form is OK) 5) Visuals of the product and how it is used Posters will be marked out of 15 1) 5 marks for the organization of the poster and the creativity of the product 2) 10 marks for the use of persuasive techniques to advertise your product (Are they used properly, do they strengthen the advertisement and are the reasons for using them sound? MODIFICATIONS: Students who are struggling with this task will only need to focus on two simpler techniques or be able to slightly modify an existing product and apply these techniques to it. - You will have access to poster paper and any markers and materials you need! THIS WILL BE DUE AT THE END OF CLASS -> NO EXCEPTIONS Conclusion (5 min) - Elicit the different types of persuasive essay techniques we Homework have discussed this class Ask students what they believe the most powerful technique N/A is that we have talked about so far in the past 2 classes Tell students that next class we will be starting to research and outline individual persuasive essays and that I will provide them with a sheet that details the dates of everything else we will be doing throughout this unit. The next two classes will be in the library! Lesson No. Topic 2 – April 1st Continuing Persuasive Essay Techniques: 1)Analogy/metaphor 2) Appeal to innovation or modernity 3) Exaggeration Objectives / SWBATs Creating an advertisement (Poster) Students will be able to explain the 3 persuasive writing techniques that we have discussed in class and what purpose they serve Students will be able to explain at least 2 qualities of successful advertisements and how these qualities relate to persuasive writing techniques Students will be able to explain how their advertisement uses at least 3 persuasive writing technique Materials Extra persuasive writing techniques handouts Tums meatball commercial Projector Poster activity projection Poster paper Markers Pencil Crayons PLOS: A1, A7, B10, C3, C9 Classroom Schedule (80 min) Attendance via seating plan Qualities of a successful advertisement + Persuasive Techniques (2025 min) - Tell students that advertisements use persuasive language constantly to get people to buy their products Think of some advertisements that stick out in your mind. These can be great ads, terrible ads or just any ads that come to mind In pairs talk about these ads and then think about the reasons why these ads stick out to you. What makes them MEMORABLE? Write these reasons down on a piece of paper (shared between partners) - Project “Tums meatball commercial” as an example. Tell students that this is one of my favourite ads and some qualities that make it memorable - Tell students that they have just 5 minutes to think of as many examples as they can and reasons why these ads are MEMORABLE. Each pair must choose their top 2 ads and one partner to share because I will be choose groups at random to share if nobody volunteers! Write a list on the board of what makes these ads MEMORABLE - - Get students to take out their “Persuasive Writing Techniques” handout Go through the rest of the list (Analogy/metaphor, appeal to innovation or modernity and exaggeration) Ask students which of these 3 techniques were used in the ads that they thought about Tell students that they have 2 minutes to talk to their partner and come up with what effects these techniques Assessment - Do students understand how persuasive language can be used in advertisements and why it is so effective? - Can students use knowledge form the pervious activity to more easily fill out the remaining spots on their handout? - Do students understand the 3 additional persuasive writing techniques? - have Elicit answers from the class Advertisement Poster (45-50 min) - - Tell students that they are going to be working in groups of 4 (choose their own) to create a poster that advertises a product of their own creation. They can have the product do anything they want but they must make the product APPEALING to the public by using at least 3 techniques that we have talked about during this class and last class (at least one of these techniques must be from this class) Go over instructions and make sure EVERYONE is clear on what needs to be done. Also, go over how the poster will be graded - Students will showcase their knowledge through a poster worth 15 marks. - This will show comprehension through the creation of their unique advertisement but also deeper understanding through their need to work together - Can students effectively explain why they used the techniques that they did? On the projector: The poster must contain: 1) An original product with a UNIQUE NAME and PURPOSE 2) The poster should convince people WHY they need the product 3) Use at least 3 techniques on the handout (at least one - Are students on task? Is everyone sharing the work must be from this class) 4) Each technique should be labelled. Also, beside each equally? technique you should write reasons WHY you used this technique and what it does for your product (point form is OK) 5) Visuals of the product and how it is used Posters will be marked out of 15 1) 5 marks for the organization of the poster and the creativity of the product 2) 10 marks for the use of persuasive techniques to advertise your product (Are they used properly, do they strengthen the advertisement and are the reasons for using them sound? MODIFICATIONS: Students who are struggling with this task will only need to focus on two simpler techniques or be able to slightly modify an existing product and apply these techniques to it. - You will have access to poster paper and any markers and materials you need! THIS WILL BE DUE AT THE END OF CLASS -> NO EXCEPTIONS Conclusion (5 min) - Elicit the different types of persuasive essay techniques we Homework have discussed this class Ask students what they believe the most powerful technique N/A is that we have talked about so far in the past 2 classes Tell students that next class we will be starting to research and outline individual persuasive essays and that I will provide them with a sheet that details the dates of everything else we will be doing throughout this unit. The next two classes will be in the library! Lesson No. Topic 3 – April 7th How to write an essay Library Session 1 of 2 Researching for Persuasive Essay Filling out essay organizer and notes Objectives / SWBATs Students will understand how to properly write a thesis statement, topic sentences and introduction Students will be able to explain how to create a body paragraph and what the purpose of a body paragraph is Students will choose their persuasive essay topic and their three main ideas by the end of the period Students will have found at least 1 source that they can use for their persuasive essay and are able to explain why that source is important Materials Extra persuasive writing techniques handouts How to write an essay PPT Library Persuasive Essay Package which contains: Persuasive essay criteria and timeline Pro/Con note-taking page Persuasive essay outline organizer Persuasive Essay Rubric Extra source forms in case library runs out PLOS: A2, A11, B1, B2, B3, B6, B7, C2, C4 Classroom Schedule (80 min) Attendance via seating plan Assessment How to write an essay (15-20 min) - Do students understand the components of an introduction, body paragraphs and conclusion? - Tell students that we are going to be learning about the components of writing a good essay before heading to the library and researching our topics Open “how to write an essay” PPT Explain the purpose of a thesis statement and topic sentences while providing examples Explain how to properly write an introduction. Provide a good example and a bad example of an introduction and ask students the problems with the bad example Break down the components of body paragraphs and the sandwich structure of an essay. Back these up with using examples Explain the components of a good conclusion **Throughout PPT and after ask students questions for clarification** - Can students explain the purpose of thesis statements and topic sentences? Explaining Persuasive Essay Package(10-15 min) - Walk students through the persuasive essay package and explain what they are expected to do over the remaining classes Go over the essay outline organizer and PRO/CON page and tell students how to organize their ideas Go over rubric Head to Library - Do students understand the timeline and know what they are expected to do in the library? - Do students know how to properly take down notes on the essay package pages? Library Work Period (45-50 min) - Explain to students what they are expected to do by the end of each library session. Remind students that this information is found on their essay criteria sheet Tell students that you will be checking in several times to see how much of the checklist they have completed If anyone needs help please raise your hand or come to me and I will help you out. Remind students that they must WRITE DOWN all of their sources that they have used and what information they gathered from these sources Get students to explain to you why their sources are important and how they are going to use them ** MODIFIED ESSAYS IF NECESSARY ** - Are students spending their time efficiently? - How many components of the checklist have students completed? - CHECK FOR COMPREHENSION AND UNDERSTANDING Students who need a modified assignment may only use 1-2 sources instead of 2-3. The word count can be lessened to 350-500 words and students can focus on two major points over 4 paragraphs instead of three major points over 5 paragraphs. Conclusion/exit slip (5 min) - - Tell students that they must ALL take out a separate piece of paper and write down the answers to the following questions (these questions can be found on their essay criteria sheet): 1) What is your persuasive essay topic? 2) What is one source that you are going to use for your essay? 3) What are your three main ideas that you are going to write about in your essay? Remind students to keep their packages with them and bring them next class. THEY MUST FINISH ALL OF THEIR RESEARCH NEXT CLASS - Have all students completed the required sections for today? Follow up with students who have not. Homework Bring Persuasive Essay Package Lesson No. Topic 4 – April 9th Library Session 2 of 2 Finding all sources Filling out 5 Paragraph Essay Outline Organizer Objectives / SWBATs Students will be able to find all of their sources Students will be able to explain how they are going to set up their introduction and conclusion Students will be able to explain how their paragraphs will be broken down and what supporting details they will use Materials Extra persuasive writing techniques handouts Library Extra Persuasive Essay Packages which contains: Persuasive essay criteria and timeline Pro/Con note-taking page Persuasive essay outline organizer Persuasive Essay Rubric Extra source forms in case library runs out PLOS: A11, B1, B2, B3, B6, B7, C2, C4 Classroom Schedule (80 min) Attendance via seating plan Assessment Quick recap (5-10 min) - - Ask students what we did last class and what we completed Tell students that we are going to be heading to the library again today and that they must fill out the majority of their 5 paragraph essay outline organizer as well as find all of their sources Get a student to repeat what we need to get done Remind students that they must WRITE DOWN all of their sources that they have used and what information they gathered from these sources - Do students remember what they have completed last class and what they are expected to do in this library session? Head to Library Library Work Period (45-50 min) - Explain to students what they are expected to do by the end of the library session. Tell students that you will be checking in several times to see how much of the checklist they have completed If anyone needs help please raise your hand or come to me and I will help you out. Ask students what ideas they have regarding the sections in their organizers and nudge out ideas Get students to explain to you why their sources are important and how they are going to use them Conclusion (5 min) - - Tell students that they must SHOW ME what they have completed for their 5 paragraph organizer before they leave and show me that they have written down information for their 2-3 sources REMIND STUDENTS THAT THEIR 5 PARAGRAPH ESSAY OUTLINE ORGANIZERS ARE DUE NEXT CLASS Remind students to keep their packages with them and bring them next class. - Are students spending their time efficiently? - How many components of the checklist have students completed? - CHECK FOR COMPREHENSION AND UNDERSTANDING - Have students completed the majority of their 5 paragraph essay outline organizers? - Have students found the sources that they needed? - Have all students completed the required sections for today? Follow up with students who have not. Homework COMPLETE 5 paragraph essay outline organizer Lesson No. Topic 5 – April 13th Creating Persuasive Essay draft Objectives / SWBATs Students will be able to explain what transitions are and what their purpose is Students will be able to explain how all of their ideas connect together and how this is shown in their introduction AND conclusion Materials Students will be able to break down the necessary components of body paragraphs and explain how they connect to the introduction and conclusion Extra Persuasive Essay Packages which contains: Persuasive essay criteria and timeline Pro/Con note-taking page Persuasive essay outline organizer Persuasive Essay Rubric Finished 5 Paragraph Essay Outline Organizers “Transitions” handout PLOS: B6, B7, B10, B11, C1, C2, C4, C6, C11 Classroom Schedule (80 min) Attendance via seating plan Assessment How to create a draft and how to make transitions (10-15 min) - Have students fully completed their 5 paragraph essay outline organizers? - Get students to take out their completed 5 paragraph essay outline organizers Tell students that today we will using our outline organizers to create drafts for our essays Use your thesis, main ideas and supporting ideas that you have already outlined to create a smooth and powerful persuasive essay To do this you need good TRANSITIONS between your ideas and your writing must easily flow together Hand out “Transitions” sheet and go through what words can be used to make transitions smoother Also, tell students that they should try to avoid using the same words OVER AND OVER as it makes the reader lose interest Elicit the purpose of the introduction Elicit how the conclusion is different from the introduction Elicit what needs to be included in the body paragraphs Add any additional info that was missed Creating essay drafts (60-65 min) - Explain to students that they must spend the rest of the class working on their draft. - Do students understand the purpose of transitions and how to use them? - Are students able to define the elements of a good introduction and conclusion? - Can students explain what is involved in creating good body paragraphs? - Are students on task and - Tell students that they should focus on what paragraphs they think are easiest to write and then focus on completing the difficult paragraphs Explain to students that they should read their essays out loud to check for problems in grammar or structure1 what elements are they struggling with the most? - Do students know what they need to do for next class? Are they prepared? Conclusion (5 min) - Elicit what students must do by next class Remind students to go home and practice reading their essay out loud to catch mistakes. If something doesn’t sound right then try to find out WHY Remind students to keep their packages with them and bring them next class ALONG with their completed draft Lesson No. Topic Objectives / SWBATs Homework COMPLETE FINISHED DRAFT by next class 6 – April 15th Peer editing and revisions Students will be able to describe the three main points of 2 of their classmates’ essays Students will be able to comment on 2 strengths and 2 weaknesses of 2 of their classmates’ essays Materials Students will be able to explain 3 ways that they can improve their essays Extra Persuasive Essay Packages which contains: Persuasive essay criteria and timeline Pro/Con note-taking page Persuasive essay outline organizer Persuasive Essay Rubric Students’ rough copies of essays PEER EDITING SHEETS (double-sided so two different people can edit) PLOS: A1, A8, A11, B2, B6, B7, B11, C7, C11 Classroom Schedule (80 min) Attendance via seating plan Assessment Going over peer editing sheets and process (10-15 min) - Hand out peer editing sheets and get students to turn to their persuasive essay rubrics inside of their packages Once again go over what students are going to be marked on and that they can refer to the criteria as a guide on how to help their classmates Go over the peer editing sheets and what students are - Do students understand the process of peer editing and how they are being assessed? - - expected to do Remind students to be respectful but to also not be afraid of giving advice and pointing out errors -> By doing this, you are HELPING your classmates improve and making their essays stronger Explain to students that they will (write these steps on the board): 1) Exchange papers 2) Read through the paper in its entirety making edits on it when necessary 3) Fill out peer editing sheets and re-reading sections of the paper -> if you have to ask your classmate for clarification then you can use that as something to be improved upon 4) If you are finished early then find more ways that your partner’s essay can be improved -> Make sure you are clear in all of your points 5) I will tell you when to swap papers back and both partners TAKE TURNS telling each other in depth what is on their peer editing sheets Peer Editing – 1st person (25-30 min) - - Elicit what students need to make sure to do first. Elicit when students will swap papers back Get students to go through the processes and remind them that each of them has a double sided sheet because 2 people will be peer-editing your paper. Put your name on the sheet and hand it to your partner Observe and help students out. Give students time to go through essays before jumping in After 15-20 minutes get students to swap papers back and explain their edits and peer editing sheets After 10 minutes get students to find another partner to swap papers with -> if students are finished early tell them that they can re-look at their own papers and make further changes Peer Editing – 2nd person (25-30 min) - Repeat process for person # 2 Conclusion and Further Edits (5-10 min) - - Are students writing down clear responses and are they following the steps provided? - Are students able to provide information and evidence for their feedback? Are they able to explain their ideas clearly to their peers in order to help them? - Are students picking up on different issues during the second run of peer editing? Tell students that the final copies of their essays are due on FRIDAY April 17th (NEXT CLASS). Remind students to print out their essays and REMEMBER - Are students able to apply the that they must have 2 COPIES of their work cited pages. 1 edits to their essay -> What are they struggling with most? Do copy for me and 1 copy for the librarian they understand the critiques? - - EXIT SLIP: Tell students that they must have both of their peer editing pages done by the time class is over. I will be standing by the door and asking students to show me their completed peer editing sheets before they leave If finished early, students can work on implementing changes to their essays Lesson No. Topic Objectives / SWBATs Homework COMPLETE ESSAY -> DUE APRIL 17 NEXT CLASS!!!!! COMPLETE 2 copies of Works Cited pages 7 – April 17th FINAL LESSON Handing in Final Paper Persuasive essay opinion lines Strange persuasive arguments Students will be able to provide their opinions on certain topics and compare these opinions to their peers on a spectrum of agree to disagree Students will be able to formulate 3 cohesive arguments for strange persuasive topic stances Materials Students will be able to explain 3 ways that they can improve their essays Students’ essays Persuasive skit topics Some topics obtained from: http://homeworktips.about.com/od/essaywriting/a/100-Persuasive-EssayTopics.htm PLOS: A1, A4, A5, A11, C1, C4, C5, C10 Classroom Schedule (80 min) Attendance via seating plan Assessment Collect Persuasive Essays and wrap-up (10-15 min) - - Tell students to hand in their persuasive essays at the front of the class and remind students that they must put their name, date and block number on their papers Get students to take out a piece of paper and individually write down: 1) What was the most difficult part about writing a persuasive essay 2) What is one thing you did well? 3) What surprised you the most in your research? 4) What would you do differently next time? After, get students to turn to groups of 2-3 and share their responses What responses were the same? What responses were - What did students get out of the persuasive essay process? - Did students struggle and excel with similar things? What can be improved for next time? - different? Elicit responses from students Tell students again of the importance of writing persuasive arguments and how it relates to decisions and ideas we are exposed to every single day - Do students understand the importance of persuasive writing and persuasive arguments? Persuasive lines (30-35 min) - - Tell students that in this activity I will say an argument and students must decide whether they agree with the argument, disagree with the argument or have a neutral stance. Designate 3 different parts of the room for Agree, Disagree or Neutral After, students must talk in their groups about why they chose to stand where they did and they must order each other from the person who agrees the most to the person who agrees the least. Line up from most agree to least agree I will ask 1 random person from each group to explain why they chose to stand where they did. Try to convince me that their stance is good! Continue this for 6 different topics: 1) Students should have to wear uniforms in public schools 2) Smoking should be allowed in public areas such as parks 3) Violent crimes should be punished by the death penalty 4) High school students should have to learn another language to graduate 5) People under the age of 13 should be unable to vote 6) People have become too reliant on technology - Are students able to quickly come up with agree/disagree/neutral positions and defend their positions - Are students able to figure out how they can be ordered from most agree to least agree? Persuasive skits (30-35 min) - - Students form groups of 2-3 Tell students that each group will get a random topic from a hat Students must then think of a persuasive argument for the topic Students must also come up with a short SILENT skit that illustrates: 1) What the topic is 2) What the argument is Students get 10 minutes (15 if this is too short) to think of their argument and plan out their skit (NO TALKING DURING SKIT) Tell students that groups will take turns presenting their skits while other people guess what their skit is Each skit can go on for 2.5 minutes max. If time runs out then the presenters provide the answer Tell students that the only words they can say are TOPIC - Are students able to quickly come up with logical arguments in groups? - Can students translate their arguments into create skits? - Are students able to guess each other’s skits and persuasive arguments? and ARGUMENT to indicate what the audience is supposed to guess Conclusion/Wrap up (5 min) - Thank students for participation and remind them again that this is the last class with them that I will be teaching Provide closing remarks Remind students that they if they need to hand in anything late then they MUST hand it in as soon as possible. My last day at Gladstone is the 24th and I can’t mark anything after that. Also, everyone should not hand in everything on the 24th because then I won’t have time to mark everything. - Are students clear about final due dates and what they must do if they have late assignments? Homework N/A Step 1. Choose and narrow your topic. Brainstorm pros and cons and do some research to understand both sides of the issue. You will be given TWO library periods for research so use your time wisely! (April 7th and April 9th) Make sure to keep a track of all of your sources! Step 2. Take a stance. Develop your argument using the ideas you found in Step 1. Write your thesis statement. Step 3. Make an outline. Fill in the essay outline organizer. You may need to do additional research for specific statistics and facts that will back up your points. Keep track of your sources on the back of your outline. Step 4. Write your essay. You will have one full class to write your first draft. The in-class draft essay will take place April 13th. You must bring your completed outline to class on this day! Step 5. Get your draft peer-edited. Peer editing will take place on April 15th. Step 6. Prepare your final essay. Make changes according to the peer editing sessions. Review the requirements above and rewrite. Final due date: April 17st. You must hand in: your outline, inclass essay draft, peer editing forms, and final essay. If any portion is missing, you won’t get full marks. Extra Note: April 21 Grade 10 block 1-3 = Recognition assemblies Persuasive writing techniques: Adapted from I. Breuer, M. Napthine, & R. O'Shea: “Analysing persuasive language” in Persuasive Language in Media Texts (2008). Persuasive essay rubric: Adapted by Mr. Bailey from “Analytical Paragraph/Essay Rubric” from “Provincial Ministry Scoring Guidelines for Stand-Alone Test (Part A)” 2 Classes: Examples of persuasive essays and techniques -> breaking them down… what makes something persuasive? (get them to think of influential people in their lives, influent speeches or pieces of writing that really got them to think) USE ANIMAL TESTING YES OR NO USE ABORTIONS YES OR NO Advertising slogan activity -> they need to make a company and they must sell it with persuasive writing -> how could you translate this into a more professional persuasive essay 1 Class debate (pros and cons of university vs going into trades) 2 Classes of research for persuasive essay 1 Class to organize and structure essay -> brainstorming etc, monitor and help students -> for homework students must complete a full draft! 1 Class peer editing and after do grammar drills -> what are some things that you noticed that students are struggling with and how can we best avoid these issues -> grammar tips and tricks -> create peer editing rubric etc Last class -> review Jeopardy and other activities to solidify learning etc Ideas: Persuasive essay prompts: http://www.tengrrl.com/tens/018.shtml Censorship, litter/environment (what are our duties, what are our limits?) Government (how much should they get involved) Community Service Letter (how best to improve our school) Instant messaging and the future of language -> using text-speak Computer-Mediated Communication and using informal speech… is this deteriorating language or making it stronger? Tying this to identity Nature vs. Nurture -> how does our environment and the people around us shape who we are? (get students to think of an influential person in their lives that has changed their way of thinking) Debate -> University vs. going into trades -> positives and negatives of each. Get students to HAVE TO argue for one side and come up with positives and negatives. Students must talk about how their side is BETTER and must think of counterarguments that the opposing side can think of. Future, food and money Will food or water ever run out in the world? What would people do? Would people become violent? Do you think in the future we should be careful of having a population that is too large? What would you do to control this? Do you think better medicine and helping people live longer will make this happen faster? Do you give money to beggars or homeless people? What's the best way to plan for your future? Do you give to charity? Why or why not? Should the rich pay higher taxes? Should hospitals be free? Some people say that the journey is more important than the destination. Do you agree? Cloning Cloning is a very controversial topic. What do you think about cloning? How would cloning change the world? Do you think animal cloning is OK to make more food? Do you think cloning people is OK for medical reasons? If clones could think and act like humans, should they be treated like humans? If robots could think and act like humans, should they be treated like humans? Animal Testing What do you think about animal testing? Animal testing was very popular before to test things like makeup and medicine. Do you think this is the same now? Do you think that animals have the same rights as humans? What is unfair to animals? What is unfair to humans? If people could make special medicine to save many people but the medicine had to go through a lot of animal testing is it OK? Is raising farm animals just to be eaten OK? Do you think the animals are happy because they get food all the time and don’t know what will happen to them? If you were a farm animal that was going to be eaten, would you want to know? Family Should men and women share the responsibility for housework 50/50? What household chore do you hate the most? Should children share responsibilities in the house? What are the advantages of raising a family in your country? What's the best age to move out on your own? Would you adopt a child? Is it good or bad to be a single child? Are you more like your father or your mother Sports What hobbies would you not let your children do? Do you think your country should put more money into its athletic programs? Games: How do you think peoples’ increased interest in gaming will change in the future? Do you think that game addiction is a big problem now? What are games good for? What are some negative things about games? What are some dangers associated to games? Some people say that violent video games can make children into violent people. Do you believe this? How do video games change peoples’ personality? Misc: Before people went to space, people sent animals to space. Why did they do this? Was this a good idea? Do you think it was fair? Is noise pollution a big problem? Should it be something we should be concerned about or should we focus our resources on fixing more pressing things? Braveheart speech