Bellwork Write one example sentence for each of the comma rules we reviewed yesterday (Try to do it from memory!). (Have your notes ready to go!) The Semicolon Objective: to demonstrate an understanding of semicolon rules by correctly placing them in example sentences. PURPOSE: using a semicolon in your writing can help increase your sentence fluency, thereby making your writing more interesting to read. I have grown fond of semicolons in recent years. . . . It is almost always a greater pleasure to come across a semicolon than a period. The period tells you that that is that; if you didn't get all the meaning you wanted or expected, anyway you got all the writer intended to parcel out and now you have to move along. But with a semicolon there you get a pleasant little feeling of expectancy; there is more to come; read on; it will get clearer.__ Lewis Thomas Read the following examples and write a rule for its use on your slate. • Jerry chased Tom around the house; he was not quite fast enough to catch him. • Puff Daddy likes to flaunt his money; he throws million dollar parties. • Hillary Duff is not a real blonde; she dyed her hair to get attention. SEMICOLONS RULE # 1 •Use between independent clauses IF they are not joined by and, but, or, nor, for, so or yet. EXAMPLE: Ben likes Cheerios; he eats them for breakfast every morning. For today’s practice… You only need to record the word that comes right before the semicolon and then the semicolon. Example: He was sad; she was happy. On your slate you would writesad; SEMICOLONS Practice: 1. Sandy soaked up the sun she used SPF 45 to avoid burning. SEMICOLONS Practice: 1. Sandy soaked up the sun; she used SPF 45 to avoid burning. SEMICOLONS Practice: 2. Justin had his heart broken he has a hard time trusting beautiful women. SEMICOLONS Practice: 2. Justin had his heart broken; he has a hard time trusting beautiful women. SEMICOLONS Practice: 3. Love is blind envy has its eyes wide open. SEMICOLONS Practice: 3. Love is blind; envy has its eyes wide open. SEMICOLONS Practice: 4. When Mirano eats breakfast why does he drink three cups of coffee? SEMICOLONS Practice: 4. When Ross eats breakfast, why does he drink three cups of coffee? SEMICOLONS RULE # 2 •Use between independent clauses joined by conjunctive adverbs or transitional expressions. EXAMPLE: Sam is planning to become a lawyer; however, he is also interested in becoming a teacher. SEMICOLONS Conjunctive Adverbs otherwise therefore however consequently indeed nevertheless meanwhile instead besides SEMICOLONS Transitional Expressions as a result for instance for example that is in spite of in conclusion in other words in fact SEMICOLONS Practice: 1. Only two people wanted to eat pizza as a result we ordered Chinese food for dinner. SEMICOLONS Practice: 1. Only two people wanted to eat pizza; as a result, we ordered Chinese food for dinner. SEMICOLONS Practice: 2. The rain made driving difficult nevertheless we arrived safely. SEMICOLONS Practice: 2. The rain made driving difficult; nevertheless, we arrived safely. SEMICOLONS Practice: 3. One should never come to school naked instead, one should come fully dressed every single day. SEMICOLONS Practice: 3. One should never come to school naked; instead, one should come fully dressed every single day. SEMICOLONS RULE #3 •Use to separate independent clauses joined by a coordinating conjunction when the first clause(sentence) contains one or more commas. EXAMPLE - Goofy sat with Mickey, Minnie, and Pluto; and Donald sat with Daisy, Huey, Louie, and Dewey. SEMICOLONS Practice: 1. Yesterday she bought a dress, perfume, a scarf, and boots and he bought slacks, cologne, a tie and a watch. SEMICOLONS Practice: 1. Yesterday she bought a dress, perfume, a scarf, and boots; and he bought slacks, cologne, a tie and a watch. SEMICOLONS Practice: 2. Kenny’s favorite subjects in school were English, science and math yet Sarah’s were recess and nap time. SEMICOLONS Practice: 2. Kenny’s favorite subjects in school were English, science and math; yet Sarah’s were recess, lunch, and nap time. Read the following examples and write a rule for its use on your slate. • He went to Las Vegas, Nevada; San Diego, California; and Tucson, Arizona. • Tiffany loved Back to the Future, with Michael J. Fox; Rambo, with Stalone; and Pretty Woman, with Julia Roberts. SEMICOLONS RULE #4 •Use between items in a series if the items contain commas. EXAMPLE - You may take your test on Wednesday, October 20; Thursday, October 21; or Friday, October 22. SEMICOLONS Practice: 1. The summer reading list includes The Scarlet Letter, by Nathaniel Hawthorne The Color Purple, by Alice Walker and The Poisonwood Bible, by Barbara Kingsolver. SEMICOLONS Practice: 1. The summer reading list includes The Scarlet Letter, by Nathaniel Hawthorne; The Color Purple, by Alice Walker; and The Poisonwood Bible, by Barbara Kingsolver. SEMICOLONS Practice: 2. The president has appointed the following students on the committee: Eric Clapton, music Steven Spielberg , movies Usher, dance and Anne Rice, novels. SEMICOLONS Practice: 2. The president has appointed the following students on the committee: Eric Clapton, music; Steven Spielberg , movies; Usher, dance; and Anne Rice, novels. CLOSURE On a separate sheet of paper, write an example sentence of each semicolon rule. (Label your sentences by the rule they are representing) LET’S PRACTICE! Take a moment to review all four rules in your mind. Let’s practice! Write an example sentence for each semicolon rule. (Label your sentences by the rule they are showing) LET’S PRACTICE! Read the following sentences and decide where the semicolon goes in each sentence. 1.I get bored on summer vacation; I like coming back to school. Rule # 1 LET’S PRACTICE! Read the following sentences and decide where the semicolon goes in each sentence. 2. Johnny made a sandwich with tomatoes, lettuce, and pastrami it tasted delicious. LET’S PRACTICE! Read the following sentences and decide where the semicolon goes in each sentence. 2. Johnny made a sandwich with tomatoes, lettuce, and pastrami; it tasted delicious. Rule # 3 LET’S PRACTICE! Read the following sentences and decide where the semicolon goes in each sentence. 3. Many people think Walt Disney was a creative genius in fact, many people think of him as the father of the cartoon industry. LET’S PRACTICE! Read the following sentences and decide where the semicolon goes in each sentence. 3. Many people think Walt Disney was a creative genius; in fact, many people think of him as the father of the cartoon industry. Rule # 2 LET’S PRACTICE! Read the following sentences and decide where the semicolon goes in each sentence. 4. Wilma went shopping for clothes, music, and shoes and I went shopping for books, food, and pictures. LET’S PRACTICE! Read the following sentences and decide where the semicolon goes in each sentence. 4. Wilma went shopping for clothes, music, and shoes; and I went shopping for books, food, and pictures. Rule # 3 LET’S PRACTICE! Read the following sentences and decide where the semicolon goes in each sentence. 5. I have lived in Lake Forest, California Flagstaff, Arizona and Tucson, Arizona. LET’S PRACTICE! Read the following sentences and decide where the semicolon goes in each sentence. 5. I have lived in Lake Forest, California; Flagstaff, Arizona; and Tucson, Arizona. Rule #4 LET’S PRACTICE! Read the following sentences and decide where the semicolon goes in each sentence. 6. Only five students had done all their homework assignments for the year therefore, Ross is not a very happy camper. LET’S PRACTICE! Read the following sentences and decide where the semicolon goes in each sentence. 6. Only five students had done all their homework assignments for the year; therefore, Ross is not a very happy camper. Rule # 2 Semi-colon Review: Place the semicolon(s) in the correct spot. • Over Ross’ long years of life, he has traveled to Paris, France Rotarua, New Zealand and Dublin, Ireland. Semi-colon Review: Place the semicolon(s) in the correct spot. • Over Ross’ long years of life, he has traveled to Paris, France; Rotarua, New Zealand; and Dublin, Ireland. • Rule #4 Semi-colon Review: Place the semicolon(s) in the correct spot. • The man puked all over the sidewalk however his pet dog quickly cleaned up the mess. Semi-colon Review: Place the semicolon(s) in the correct spot. • The man puked all over the sidewalk; however, his pet dog quickly cleaned up the mess. • Rule #2 Semi-colon Review: Place the semicolon(s) in the correct spot. • Felicia came into class with a gallon of milk it was part of her new all dairy diet. Semi-colon Review: Place the semicolon(s) in the correct spot. • Felicia came into class with a gallon of milk ; it was part of her new all dairy diet. • Rule #1 Closing1: Correct the errors on your slate and be ready to explain why they are wrong. • He wanted to go to the store, however; he did not have a ride. • Andrea wanted to attend the U of A, in Arizona, Berkley, in California, and Notre Dame, in Indiana. Closing 2 • What are some ways that you could incorporate semicolons into your writing more frequently? Explain. Be ready to share.