Last update 8 February 2016 AUTHOR QUERIES FOR COPY-EDITORS Use these as far as possible for your queries, but you may need to adapt them to suit the particular paper and to make them more specific. It’s especially useful to provide specific examples of the styling of genes or proteins mentioned in the paper. Please make you queries as succinct and specific as possible to reduce the number/length of queries. Ctrl + click on any of the following topics to take you straight to the query: TITLE Modification of title (general) Modification of title (animal) AFFILIATIONS Author names Affiliation Affiliations (order) Two corresponding authors Study Group Study Group on PubMed CIBERDEM and CIBERESP Singapore in affiliations China in affiliations Hong Kong in affiliations Particles ABBREVIATIONS Abbreviations (standard) Abbreviations (written-out) Abbreviations (gene symbols) THROUGHOUT TEXT Subjects vs participants Caucasians Triglyceride/triacylglycerol Free fatty acids/NEFA HDL/LDL Gender/Sex Male/Female Latin terms Wt or vol. High-/low-calorie and isocaloric Parameters/variables Websites Antidiabetic drugs Prediabetes Utilise Optical density ETHICS PERMISSION Ethics permission (animals) Ethics permission (humans) Ethics permission (organ donors) Ethics permission (donated human cells Ethics permission (database studies) BRIEF ADDRESSES FOR SOURCES Address (animals) Address (chemicals/equipment) UNITS SI units Dual reporting of HbA1c units Units for area under the curve (AUC) HOMA equation MINMOD program (insulin sensitivity) Molecular weight/mass Normal (N) values for solutions Units (U)/International Units (IU) PRECLINICAL STUDIES Replicates Data expression Statistics Randomisation Blinding Exclusion Animal strain Antibodies GENES/PROTEINS Styling: genes vs proteins Styling: human vs rat/mouse Styling: mRNA Styling: western blots Styling: northern blots Styling: knockdown studies Expressed vs produced (general) Expressed vs produced (cell surface markers) Expressed vs produced (mRNA) Old vs up-to-date symbol (human) Keywords: Add old and up-to-date symbols HLA allele format HLA gene family styling Gene set analyses PCR primers STATISTICS Statistics: r values Data expression Statistical tests RANDOMISED CONTROLLED TRIALS CONSORT guidelines: abstract CONSORT guidelines: flow diagram Trials mentioned in other types of article MISCELLANEOUS Unpublished observations/results/data Personal communication Animal models of diabetes Logarithms Logarithms (ln) ICD-9 and -10 Drug names Insulin analogues Sacrificed vs killed Abstracts in commentaries qRT-PCR ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS, AUTHOR CONTRIBUTION STATEMENT AND DUALITY OF INTEREST Acknowledgements Funding Funding by UK research councils Funding by the Wellcome Trust Contribution statement Guarantor Duality of interest Data in repositories REFERENCES Author name/reference mismatch Abstract out-of-date Reference in preparation/submitted In press Accepted for publication ePub ahead of print Websites Cochrane reviews FIGURES Figure part labelling Deletion of legend Deletion of p values Figures not cited in rising order Explanation of statistical symbols Change of statistical symbols p values High-resolution figures Forest plots Scale bars TABLES Tables not cited in rising order Formatting (gridlines) Formatting (rows of space) Formatting (bold type) Formatting changes ESM COMMENTS (LETTERS) Comment title Reply to comment, title Page 2 of 40 TITLE Modification of title (general) The title has been modified slightly in line with journal style [details]. Modification of title (animal) The animal species has been added to the title in line with journal policy. <Back to index> Page 3 of 40 AFFILIATIONS Author names Diabetologia style is to include given (first) name, initials and family name in the author list, e.g. Gregory M. Bunke, Yu-fei Shan, Soo Heon Kim, J. Edgar Hoover. Please ask your coauthors to amend their names in line with this, as appropriate. [Copyeditors and proofreaders please note that Korean given names are often unhyphenated two-part names such as Soo Heon, Sung Hee, and in this case both names should be retained in the author list. Please check with the Editorial Office or raise an author query if you are unsure.] Affiliation In line with journal style, affiliation XXX has been replaced with the address for correspondence. Please check that this address applies to all authors listed as having this affiliation and modify if necessary. OR In line with journal style, affiliation XXX has been amended to include the full address for correspondence. Please check that this address applies to all authors listed as having this affiliation and modify if necessary. Affiliation (more than one) Different affiliations, including different departments within the same institution (but not joint departments) should be listed separately. Should affiliation [?] therefore be rewritten as …? Affiliation (postal details) Full postal details are only needed for the address of the corresponding author, and have been deleted from other affiliations. Affiliations (order) The publisher requires that affiliations should be given in the order: department, institution, town/city, country. Please amend affiliation XXX in line with this. Affiliations (ask co-authors to check all affiliations have been included) Please check with your co-authors that they have included all their affiliations, as it is difficult to add additional affiliations at the proof stage. Page 4 of 40 Affiliations (corporate affiliation moved from footnotes/acknowledgements) In order to include full affiliation details for each author, we do not include affiliation details as footnotes or acknowledgements. Therefore the details of (COMPANY NAME) have been added as an additional affiliation. Please check with your co-author that this is acceptable. Please note that this change might need to be checked and approved by the compliance team of the company in question; let us know if this change contravenes compliance guidelines. Two corresponding authors Which of the two corresponding authors would you like to nominate to receive proofs? Study Group Please check with your co-authors and/or trial co-ordinators to ensure that any guidelines for the representation of the Study Group in the title, author list and affiliations are followed. Confirm that you mean ‘on behalf of’ rather than ‘and’. Confirm that you mean ‘and’ rather than ‘on behalf of’. Study Group members on PubMed You include XXX Study Group in the author list and in the footnotes/acknowledgements/appendix/ESM you have identified people as authors or as members of the writing group/writing committee for this study group. They will therefore be added as authors on MEDLINE/PubMed (and will be appear after any authors listed in the main author list on the paper). For more information, see the NLM Fact Sheet Authorship in MEDLINE at www.nlm.nih.gov/pubs/factsheets/authorship.html. Please include full affiliation details of study group authors/members of the writing group, with details of department, institution, city, state (USA, Canada and Australia) and country. CIBERDEM and CIBERESP The organisation CIBERDEM is not usually given with a town/city. Please confirm that we can insert the URL instead, e.g. Centro de Investigación Biomédica en Red de Diabetes y Enfermedades Metabólicas Asociadas (CIBERDEM), Spain URL www.ciberdem.org/ The organisation CIBERESP is not usually given with a town/city. Please confirm that we can insert the URL instead, e.g. Page 5 of 40 Centro de Investigación Biomédica en Red de Epidemiología y Salud Pública (CIBERESP), Spain URL www.ciberesp.es/ Singapore in affiliations We are required to provide both city and country for affiliations. ‘Republic of Singapore’ has therefore been inserted after ‘Singapore’. China in affiliations Can ‘China’ be replaced by ‘People’s Republic of China’? Hong Kong in affiliations Can ‘Hong Kong’ be replaced by ‘Hong Kong Special Administrative Region’? Particles in author names (de, de la, von, van, del, etc.) Author name: XXX It is important that you check with your co-author exactly how they would like their name to appear in the author list (this will determine how it appears in PubMed). [Insert specific example] For example: Jane von Braun: appear as ‘von Braun, J, ‘Von Braun, J’ or ‘Braun, JV’ or ‘Braun, J’? In particular, please confirm lower or uppercase for von/Von. <Back to index> Page 6 of 40 ABBREVIATIONS Abbreviations (standard) XXX is a standard abbreviation (see www.diabetologiajournal.org/webpages/abbreviations.html) that can be used without definition. Your paper has been amended accordingly If used more than once, the abbreviation has been added to the abbreviations list. Please note that abbreviations used only once in the paper will not be included in the abbreviations list. Abbreviations (written-out) Please give written-out versions of: XXX Abbreviations (gene symbols) Gene symbols are not true abbreviations and so have been deleted from the abbreviations list. [List here] <Back to index> Page 7 of 40 THROUGHOUT TEXT Subjects vs participants To make it clear to readers that participation in the study was voluntary, Diabetologia prefers that ‘subject’ is replaced by another term such as ‘participant’, ‘individual’ or ‘volunteer’. This change has been made for you throughout. (An exception is made for people who are studied by use of a database where permission is not sought from each individual.) Caucasians In line with AMA recommendations (AMA Manual of Style, 10th edn, ch 11.10.2 Race/Ethnicity, p. 415), Diabetologia does not use the term ‘Caucasian’, which is considered to be non-specific and inaccurate. The term ‘white’ is a suitable alternative: this change has been made for you throughout (‘Europid’ or ‘of European descent’ are also acceptable terms). Triglyceride/triacylglycerol In line with IUPAC recommendations (http://www.iupac.org/publications/books/principles/principles_of_nomenclature.pdf, p. 129), ‘triglyceride’ has been changed to ‘triacylglycerol’ throughout the paper. [Note that the exception to this is the enzyme ‘adipose triglyceride lipase’, which should not be changed to ‘adipose triacylglycerol lipase’.] <Back to index> Free fatty acids/NEFA In line with IUPAC recommendations (http://www.iupac.org/publications/books/principles/principles_of_nomenclature.pdf), ‘free fatty acid’ has been replaced by ‘NEFA’ (non-esterified fatty acid) HDL/LDL Where you use the terms ‘HDL’ and ‘LDL’ are you referring to HDL-cholesterol and LDLcholesterol, respectively? Please change where appropriate. Gender/sex ‘Gender’ (cultural term) has been replace by ‘sex’ (biological term) throughout. Page 8 of 40 Males/females Males/females used as nouns have been replaced with men/women (male/female are generally used as adjectives when referring to people). Latin terms In line with journal style, Latin terms that appear in the Oxford English Dictionary, e.g. in vitro, will be formatted in upright type, not italics. <Back to index> Wt or vol. Please specify whether % concentrations are by weight or by volume (e.g. wt/vol., wt/wt, etc.): [e.g. Provide a single example here] High-/low-calorie and isocaloric ‘High-calorie’ has been replaced by ‘high-energy’ throughout (calorie is a unit rather than an adjective). ‘Low-calorie’ has been replaced by ‘low-energy’ throughout (calorie is a unit rather than an adjective). [Note that the term VLCD, very low calorie diet, is allowed because it is widely used in the literature. It should be described as a ‘diet very low in energy (very low calorie diet [VLCD])’ at first mention] ‘Isocaloric’ has been replaced by ‘isoenergetic’ throughout (calorie is a unit rather than an adjective). Parameters/variables ‘Parameter’ is used for an arbitrary constant within an experiment or mathematical term, whereas ‘variable’ is used for an expression that can be assigned any of a set of values. In line with this standard English usage, parameters has been replaced by variables where appropriate. Websites Please give the date that the site was accessed (day/month/year). Page 9 of 40 Antidiabetic drugs In line with journal policy, ‘antidiabetic’ drugs has been replaced by ‘glucose-lowering’ drugs. The term ‘hypoglycaemic’ drugs would also be acceptable if you prefer. Page 10 of 40 Prediabetes: type 2 Diabetologia prefers to avoid the terms ‘prediabetes’ and ‘prediabetic’ except in a purely temporal sense. As prediabetes does not have an accepted definition, please replace with, for example, ‘impaired glucose tolerance’ and/or ‘impaired fasting glucose’. Prediabetes: type 1 Diabetologia prefers to avoid the terms ‘prediabetes’ and ‘prediabetic’ except in a purely temporal sense. As prediabetic does not have an accepted definition, please replace with, for example, ‘at risk of diabetes’ or ‘with diabetes-related autoantibodies’. Utilise Strictly speaking, ‘utilise’ means to make the best use of something not intended for the job. Instances of ‘utilise’ have been changed to ‘use’ throughout. Optical density The Oxford Dictionary of Biochemistry and Molecular Biology no longer recommends the use of ‘optical density’ as an alternative for ‘absorbance’. Can OD450 and OD690 be changed to absorbance at 450 and 690 nm respectively? [change these wavelengths as appropriate] <Back to index> Page 11 of 40 ETHICS PERMISSION Ethics permission (animals) Please insert a sentence confirming that experiments involving animals were approved by the local ethics committee or that the study was conducted in accordance with the Guide for the care and use of laboratory animals (2011) (http://grants.nih.gov/grants/olaw/guide-for-thecare-and-use-of-laboratory-animals.pdf) Ethics permission (humans) Please insert a sentence confirming: (1) that study participants gave informed consent; and (2) that your investigations have been approved by the responsible ethics committee (institutional review board) and/or were carried out in accordance with the Declaration of Helsinki as revised in 2008 (www.wma.net/en/30publications/10policies/b3/index.html). Ethics permission (organ donors/autopsy samples) Organ donors: please insert a sentence confirming that your investigations have been approved by the responsible ethics committee (institutional review board). Autopsy samples: please insert a sentence confirming that your investigations have been approved by the responsible ethics committee (institutional review board). Donated human cells: please insert a sentence confirming that your investigations have been approved by the responsible ethics committee (institutional review board). Ethics permission (database studies) Please insert a sentence confirming that the study has the approval of the local ethics committee and/or health authority from which the data were obtained. [Not needed for publically available gene databases such as MAGIC, DIAGRAM, GIANT, GLGC, ICBP, ADIPOgen, or if the data are anonymised, i.e. individual patients cannot be identified, but if in doubt, raise an AQ or ask the Editorial Office.] <Back to index> Page 12 of 40 BRIEF ADDRESSES FOR SOURCES Address (animals) Please give the source (supplier’s name, city, state [for USA, Canada, Australia] and country), species, strain, international strain nomenclature, sex, genetic background and age of animals as well as details of housing and husbandry. [Provide examples here] Address (chemicals/equipment) Please give the name, city, state (for USA, Canada, Australia) and country for the following manufacturers/suppliers on first mention. [Provide examples here] Address (software) For software, the URL from which the software was downloaded can be given as an alternative to the physical address. [Please include the software version used]. <Back to index> Page 13 of 40 UNITS SI units Diabetologia uses SI units throughout. For an SI conversion table see AMA Manual of Style: SI Conversion Table NB An exception is made for administered doses of insulin, which can be given in U. Please convert values for XXX into SI units. [give specific variables/units/location(s)] Please convert values for plasma glucose to SI units (mmol/l). Please convert values for plasma insulin to SI units (pmol/l). Please convert units for radioactivity in Ci to SI units (Bq). Please convert values for ACR in mg/g to SI units (mg/mmol). Please convert values for centrifuge speed in rpm to g. Please convert units for energy in kcal to SI units (kJ or MJ). If you wish, you may give values in non-SI units (kcal) in parentheses. Please use the conversion factor 1 kcal = 4.184 kJ. Please re-draw Fig. 000 to show XXX in SI units (XXX) and send it to us directly by email. <Back to index> Dual reporting for HbA1c units In line with current recommendations, Diabetologia includes dual reporting of HbA1c units. Please include values for HbA1c in percentage units with International Federation of Clinical Chemistry and Laboratory Medicine (IFCC) units (mmol/mol) in parentheses. e.g. HbA1c level was 5% (31 mmol/mol) For details of the conversion from NGSP (DCCT) percentage units (used in the UK, USA and many other countries) to IFCC units, see http://www.ngsp.org/docs/IFCCstd.pdf. A conversion calculator can be found at http://www.diabetes.co.uk/hba1c-units-converter.html [If the study includes data from Sweden or Japan or is a review with data from a variety of sources, please also add the following, and amend as necessary:] Data from Sweden or Japan may contain HbA1c percentage units calculated in a slightly different way. For details of conversion from Mono-S units (Sweden) or Japanese Diabetes Society (JDS; Japan) see www.ngsp.org/docs/IFCCstd.pdf Page 14 of 40 [For figures with values in NGSP (DCCT) percentage units, please add the following if applicable] Where you have included HbA1c values in % in Figure 000 the following has been added to the figure legend: To convert values for HbA1c in DCCT % into mmol/mol, subtract 2.15 and multiply by 10.929 Please confirm. [For tables, please add the following] Please include HbA1c values expressed in mmol/mol in a separate row below the % values. Units for area under the curve (AUC) The units for area under the curve (AUC) should be in the format y-axis unit × x-axis unit (e.g. for glucose level vs time, the unit would be mmol/l × min). Please check your units to ensure that they are correct. <Back to index> HOMA equation We cannot accept the HOMA equation written-out with non-SI units. If you would like to provide an equation, it should include SI units (glucose in mmol/l, insulin in pmol/l). Please bear in mind that the constant will also be altered (note that the constant varies depending on the standardisation of your insulin assay and its cross-reactivity with proinsulin species and will be approximately 380–420). Important: It is not necessary to recalculate the HOMA values, as equations with non-SI units generate the same values as equations with SI units (which is why they have different constants), provided that values in the units specified in the particular equation are used. Alternatively, you may omit the equation and provide a reference. In this case, you may need to re-number the subsequent citations in the text and in the reference list. If you used the computer-generated HOMA2 index to calculate your results, you should refer to this directly (e.g. www.dtu.ox.ac.uk) and include the date that you accessed the site (day, month, year). <Back to index> Page 15 of 40 MINMOD program (insulin sensitivity) To enable comparison of units for insulin sensitivity index generated by the MINMOD program with results in other papers, we have included a conversion factor to SI units (i.e. to convert values to SI units multiply by 0.167). <Back to index> Molecular weight/mass Note that molecular weight is the former name for relative molecular mass (Mr), which has no units. Molecular mass is given in kDa. Please check that you have used these terms correctly. Normal values (N) for solutions Please change normal (N) values for solutions to mmol/l. [Give example] Units (U)/International Units (I/U) ‘IU’ has been changed to the more commonly used ‘U’. Please let me know if the intended meaning has been changed. <Back to index> Page 16 of 40 PRECLINICAL STUDIES (involving animals, cells or tissue) Authors are encouraged to follow the NIH guidelines regarding reporting of experimental conditions (http://www.nih.gov/about/reporting-preclinical-research.htm) to facilitate the replication and interpretation of experiments. In line with this, please include the following information in your article. Statistics Please include a sentence to state how your data were expressed e.g. ‘Data are expressed as means (SEM)’ Please provide details of statistical tests used in your analysis. Replicates Please state how often each experiment was performed and whether the results were substantiated by repetition under a range of conditions. Randomisation For animal experiments, please state whether the samples were randomised and specify the method of randomisation. Blinding Please state whether experimenters were blind to group assignment and outcome assessment. Inclusion and exclusion criteria Please state criteria used for exclusion of any data, samples or animals. Include any similar experimental results that were omitted from the reporting for any reason, particularly if the results do not support the main findings of the study. Describe any outcomes or conditions that were measured or used and are not reported in the results section. Animal strain Please give the source (supplier’s name, city, state [for USA, Canada, Australia] and country), species, strain, international strain nomenclature, sex, genetic background and age of animals as well as details of housing and husbandry. Studies involving cell lines [Human or animal cell lines, not donor cells] Please report the source, authentication and mycoplasma contamination status of cell lines used. Page 17 of 40 Antibodies Please report source, characteristics and dilutions of antibodies and how they were validated. <Back to index> Page 18 of 40 GENES/PROTEINS Styling: genes vs proteins, human vs mouse genes Diabetologia distinguishes between gene symbols and protein abbreviations by using italic font for gene symbols and upright font for protein abbreviations. Please note that gene symbols for humans are styled in uppercase italics, whereas those for rats/mice are styled with an initial capital letter and the remaining letters in lowercase italics. Please check your paper carefully to ensure that you have made this distinction correctly. For example: Human gene: XYZ Rat/mouse gene: Xyz Protein (any species): XYZ Styling: mRNA mRNA and cDNA should be referred to in italic text using the correct gene symbol. For example: Xyz mRNA Styling: western blots Since western blots are used to measure relative amounts of proteins, protein abbreviations should be used. Please check that the correct styling (upright capitals) has been used throughout. <Back to index> Styling: northern blots Since northern blots are used to measure gene transcription/levels of mRNA, gene symbols should be used. Please check that the correct styling has been used throughout. <Back to index> Styling: knockdown studies Where siRNA or similar methods are used for knockdown studies, protein formatting should be used for the molecule knocked down, whereas the oligonucleotide used for the knockdown is formatted using the gene symbol. Please check your paper to ensure that this has been done correctly. For example ‘knockdown of ABC was carried out using Abc siRNA’ Page 19 of 40 Expression of proteins For clarity, the term ‘expression’ has been replaced by ‘levels’ or ‘content’ in instances where protein levels are being quantified, e.g. western blots. <Back to index> Unofficial vs official gene symbol Diabetologia uses the Entrez Gene site (mouse, rat, human, etc.) http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/entrez/query.fcgi?CMD=search&DB=gene to check gene symbols. Where you have used an unofficial symbol (alias) for the gene, the up-to-date name has been added in parentheses at first mention in the abstract and in the text. For example: Xyz (also known as Abc) Keywords: Add unofficial and up-to-date symbols To aid electronic scanning we have included both the unofficial gene symbol and up-to-date symbol in the keywords (Xyz and Abc). [Insert symbols for Xyz and Abc] HLA allele format Diabetologia uses the up-to-date formatting guidelines for HLA alleles, as detailed in http://hla.alleles.org/nomenclature/naming.html. Please check that your manuscript complies with this and make any necessary changes. HLA gene family styling HLA is not a gene, but a gene family. It is therefore not styled in italics but should be upright. This change has been made for you throughout. <Back to index> Gene set analyses GSEA software (www.broad.mit.edu/gsea). The following references should be cited in addition to the website URL. Please re-number subsequent references in the text and reference list as necessary. Subramanian A, Tamayo P, Mootha VK et al. (2006) Gene set enrichment analysis: a knowledge-based approach for interpreting genome-wide expression profiles. Proc Natl Acad Sci U S A 102:15545-15550. Page 20 of 40 Mootha VK, Lindgren CM, Eriksson K-F et al. (2003) PGC-1α-responsive genes involved in oxidative phosphorylation are coordinately downregulated in human diabetes. Nat Genet 34:267-273. SHEsis software (http://analysis.bio-x.cn/SHEsisMain.htm). The following reference should be cited in addition to the website URL. Please re-number subsequent references in the text and reference list as necessary. Shi YY, He L (2005) SHEsis, a powerful software platform for analyses of linkage disequilibrium, haplotype construction, and genetic association at polymorphism loci. Cell Res 15:97–98 If the haplotype analysis function is cited, then the following reference should be cited in addition to Shi & He: Li Z, Zhang Z, He Z et al (2009) A partition-ligation-combination-subdivision EM algorithm for haplotype inference with multiallelic markers: update of the SHEsis (http://analysis.bio-x.cn). Cell Res 19:519–523 PLINK software (http://pngu.mgh.harvard.edu/~purcell/plink/). The following reference should be cited in addition to the website URL. Please re-number subsequent references in the text and reference list as necessary. Purcell S, Neale B, Todd-Brown K et al (2007) PLINK: a toolset for whole-genome association and population-based linkage analysis. Am J Hum Genet 81:559–575 Genetic Power Calculator software (http://ibgwww.colorado.edu/~pshaun/gpc/). The following reference should be cited in addition to the website URL. Please re-number subsequent references in the text and reference list as necessary. Purcell S, Cherny SS, Sham PC (2003) Genetic Power Calculator: design of linkage and association genetic mapping studies of complex traits. Bioinformatics 19:149–150 MeV (MultiExperiment Viewer) software (http://www.tm4.org/mev.html). The following references should be cited in addition to the website URL. Please re-number subsequent references in the text and reference list as necessary. Saeed AJ, Bhagabati NK, Braisted JC et al (2006) TM4 microarray software suite. Methods Enzymol 411:134–193 Saeed AJ, Sharov V, White J et al (2003) TM4: a free, open-source system for microarray data management and analysis. Biotechniques 34:374–378 PCR primers Please create a table of primers rather than listing them in the Methods, and allow us to publish this as electronic supplementary material (ESM) on our website. Please insert a reference to the electronic supplementary material at relevant places in the text and supply the ESM table as a separate pdf document. Please ensure that the ESM files are cited in numerical order in the text. Page 21 of 40 <Back to index> Page 22 of 40 STATISTICS Statistics (r values) Please check notation is used correctly: r bivariate correlation coefficient R multivariate correlation coefficient Data expression Please include a sentence to state how your data were expressed e.g. Data are expressed as means (SEM) Statistical tests Please provide details of statistical tests used in your analysis. <Back to index> Page 23 of 40 RANDOMISED CONTROLLED TRIALS CONSORT guidelines: abstract Thank you for completing your CONSORT checklist for abstracts and for including this information in your abstract (see www.consort-statement.org/?o=1001). In line with these guidelines, please could you also add the following information to your abstract: OR In line with CONSORT guidelines (http://www.consort-statement.org/?o=1001) on the reporting of randomised controlled trials, please add the following information to your abstract: [Pick as appropriate] Title Include identification of the study as randomised. Trial design Include description of trial design (e.g. parallel, crossover, cluster). Methods Include eligibility criteria for participants and the setting where the data were collected Include the interventions intended for each group. Include specific objective or hypothesis. Include a clearly defined primary outcome for this report. Include a description of how participants were allocated to interventions and details of allocation concealment, e.g. allocation by central office; sequentially numbered, opaque, sealed envelopes. State whether or not participants, caregivers, people doing measurements or examinations, or people assessing the outcomes were blinded to group assignment. Avoid use of terms such as ‘single’- and ‘double’-blinded as these terms are not specific. Results Include the number of participants randomised to each group. Include the number of participants analysed in each group. For the primary outcome, include a result for each group and the estimated effect size and its precision. Include important adverse (or unexpected) effects or side effects. Conclusions Page 24 of 40 Include general interpretation of the results. Trial registration In line with ICMJE guidelines (www.icmje.org/urm_main.html), Diabetologia requires authors to have registered clinical trials in a registry at the time of conception. Acceptable registries include any registry that is a primary register of the WHO International Clinical Trials Registry Platform (see www.who.int/ictrp/network/primary/en/index.html) or in ClinicalTrials.gov (http://clinicaltrials.gov/) Funding Include the source of funding. For examples of abstracts formatted in this way, see: http://www.consortstatement.org/Media/Default/Downloads/Extensions/CONSORT%20Extension%20for%20A bstracts%20Checklist.pdf <Back to index> CONSORT guidelines: flow diagram In line with CONSORT guidelines (http://www.consort-statement.org/?o=1001) on the reporting of randomised controlled trials, please include a flow diagram as one of the figures showing Enrolment/Allocation/Follow-up/Analysis (for an outline flow diagram see http://www.consortstatement.org/Media/Default/Downloads/CONSORT%202010%20Flow%20Diagram.doc). <Back to index> Trials mentioned in other types of article The International Committee of Medical Journal Editors (ICMJE) recommends that the trial registration number of clinical trials should be included at first mention of the trial in the manuscript. Please include relevant trial numbers in the text in line with this. <Back to index> Page 25 of 40 MISCELLANEOUS Unpublished observations/results/data Please insert the names of the authors linked to the unpublished observations. For authors that are not listed as authors of the present paper, we require written consent to cite their results. Please email a copy of this confirmation directly to us. Alternatively, you may replace this with a suitable reference (re-numbering subsequent references in the text and in the reference list). Personal communication Please add an affiliation(s) for the communicant(s) (e.g. institute, city, country). We require written consent to cite the communication if the communicant is not an author of the present paper. Please email a copy of this confirmation directly to us. <Back to index> Animal models of diabetes Note that animals are used as models of type 1 and 2 diabetes; they cannot have type 1 or type 2 diabetes. In the title, and at first mention in the abstract and in the text, your wording has been changed to indicate that the animals are used as a model of diabetes. Logarithms Please give details of the base used for logarithmic transformations (for example log10). Logarithms (ln) The format ‘ln’ may not be familiar to all readers. Can this be replaced by loge? ICD-9 and ICD-10 Where you mention ICD-9, the website URL has been added: (www.icd9data.com/2007/Volume1) Where you mention ICD-10, the website URL has been added: (www.who.int/classifications/icd/en/). <Back to index> Drug names Page 26 of 40 European Law requires use of the Recommended International Non-proprietary Name (rINN) for medicinal substances (http://www.pharmj.com/pdf/news/pj_20040313_bnf.pdf). In line with this, the drug name XXX has been changed to YYY. As glyburide is a US-named drug and may not be familiar to European readers, it has been replaced by ‘… glibenclamide (known as glyburide in the USA and Canada) … ’ Adrenaline/noradrenaline Adrenaline and noradrenaline are the official names used by EU members, so have been used throughout, with epinephrine/norepinephrine added in parentheses at first mention. Insulin analogues The full name of the insulin analogue has been added at first mention: insulin lispro (B28Lys,B29Pro human insulin) insulin aspart (B28Asp human insulin) insulin glargine (A21Gly,B31Arg,B32Arg human insulin) insulin detemir (B29Lys(ε-tetradecanoyl),desB30 human insulin) insulin glulisine (B3Lys,B29Glu human insulin) insulin degludec (Des(B30)LysB29(γ-Glu Nε-hexadecandioyl) human insulin) [Choose as appropriate] Sacrified vs killed In line with the dictionary definitions, ‘sacrificed’ has been changed to ‘killed’ (there was no ritual involved). Another alternative would be ‘euthanised’. Abstracts in commentaries You may insert an unstructured abstract if you wish. Note that some readers only have access to abstracts, not the full text, on PubMed. qRT-PCR RT-PCR is a standard abbreviation for ‘reverse transcription PCR’. Please either use the abbreviation qPCR for quantitative real-time PCR or, if the PCR involves reverse transcription, the abbreviation qRT-PCR can be retained but this should be made clear when the abbreviation is first defined. Page 27 of 40 <Back to index> Page 28 of 40 ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS AND DUALITY OF INTEREST Acknowledgements [Delete as appropriate] Please include brief affiliations for the people thanked in the Acknowledgements section. Please provide a brief affiliation (University/Institute/Company/Organisation, town/city, state [for USA, Canada, Australia] and country) for the person that assisted you in the preparation/writing of the manuscript. Please provide details of any compensation given to the person that assisted you in the preparation/writing of the manuscript. Funding Please provide details of any funding used in this research. 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