Some helpful information about the Third, Fourth and Fifth Grade Writing Pacing Guides and accompanying maps and rubrics: Item Informational and Research Writing, Research and Informative/Explanatory Writing Units, & First and Second 10 Days (These units are not included in the Lucy Calkins Units of Study.) extra days within each unit Grammar Instruction Map Genre unit rubrics: 1. Launching the Writing Workshop (narrative) 2. Raising the Quality of Narrative Writing (narrative) 3. Breathing Life Into Essays (opinion) 4. Informational and Research Writing 5. Literary Essay: Writing About Reading (literary essay) 6. Research and Informative/Explanatory Writing 7. First and Second 10 Days (MEAP prep) Location on the common drive under Curriculum Resources left hand column of this pacing guide attached to this pacing guide; also found on the common drive under Curriculum Resources attached to this pacing guide; also found on the common drive under Curriculum Resources Purpose Notes to provide instructional writing sessions not offered in Calkins’ Units of Study, but required in the Michigan Grade Level Content Expectations (GLCEs) or Common Core State Standards. some extra days for: stretching a few sessions to more than one day if you feel your students need that extra time focused grammar instruction in the context of writing short time range writing experiences district writing tests These units have been written by local educators experienced in Writing Workshop and teaching the Units of Study. The First 10 Days: Preparation for MEAP Writing and The Second 10 Days for Writing available at http://www.oakland.k12.mi.us/Departments/LearningServices/MEAPWriting/tabid/85 5/Default.aspx) The extra time might be used for focusing on grammar lessons in the context of student writing or for familiarizing students with the genre of standardized writing tests. If you have extended time remaining after a unit, you might choose to offer students personal choice writing time to write a piece in the genre of their choice using their newly learned strategies. Although extra time is offered within each unit, it is likely that teachers new to the Units of Study or Writer’s Workshop will feel the need to push themselves to complete each unit within the amount of time indicated. to emphasize GLCE expectations for grammar instruction When students are taught a new grammar skill, they are expected to use that skill correctly only during editing. In the following unit, students are expected to use that skill before editing - during revising. But again, additional new grammar skills are evaluated only during editing. And in the unit after that, students are expected to use that first skill even earlier - in drafting, and so on. New grammar skills are introduced during most units. The GLCEs specify grammar “in the context of writing,” and research shows, that the most effective method of teaching grammar is in the context of writing, not practice worksheets. used at the end of each unit to evaluate published student work and plan for individual or small group instruction It is necessary to review the student’s writer’s notebook, observations of student partner revising work, teacher-student conferring notes, the student’s project folder work, and published writing to complete these rubrics. The results from these rubrics should be used to evaluate individual student needs and to plan for future instruction. The unit genre rubrics are aligned with the student experiences within each unit. These rubrics reflect the content of our writing instruction which extends beyond the minimum requirements of the GLCEs. Report card rubric attached to this pacing guide; also found on the common drive under Curriculum Resources to emphasize GLCE expectations for grammar instruction Simple Session Planning template found on the common drive under Curriculum Resources can be used to draw out the important points in a session to simplify lesson planning Last updated on Saturday, March 12, 2016 Muskegon Public Schools - Third Grade Writing Pacing Guide The report card and its rubric are aligned with the Michigan Grade Level Content Expectations (GLCEs). It is necessary to review the student’s writer’s notebook, observations of student partner revising work, teacher-student conferring notes, the student’s project folder work, and published writing to complete this rubric. This rubric will help to standardize reporting across the district. Although this rubric can be used to evaluate student writing after each genre unit, the information gained from this rubric will not help you plan for student instruction as well as the genre unit rubrics will. The sessions in the Units of Study offer a peek into another teacher’s classroom and include much information to sift through. Using this form can help you clarify the important points and purpose for each minilesson. Pacing 20-30 minutes in the first week of school Beginning The Writer’s Workshop/ Narrative Writing 5 weeks- 3rd Grade GLCEs / Common Core State Standards Common Core State Standards Text Types and Purposes W.3.3. Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, descriptive details, and clear event sequences. o Establish a situation and introduce a narrator and/or characters; organize an event sequence that unfolds naturally. o Use dialogue and descriptions of actions, thoughts, and feelings to develop experiences and events or show the response of characters to situations. o Use temporal words and phrases to signal event order. o Provide a sense of closure. Production and Distribution of Writing W.3.4. With guidance and support from adults, produce writing in which the development and organization are appropriate to task and purpose. (Grade-specific expectations for writing types are defined in standards 1–3 above.) W.3.5. With guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, and editing. W.3.6. With guidance and support from adults, use technology to produce and publish writing (using keyboarding skills) as well as to interact and collaborate with others. Range of Writing W.3.10. Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision) and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of discipline-specific tasks, purposes, and audiences. GLCE’s W.GN.03.01 write a cohesive narrative piece such as a fable, folktale, or realistic fiction using personification, setting, actions and thoughts that reveal important character traits. W.PR.03.01 set a purpose, consider audience, and replicate authors’ styles and patterns when writing a narrative or informational piece. W.PR.03.02 apply a variety of pre-writing strategies for both narrative and informational writing (e.g., graphic organizers such as maps, webs, Venn diagrams) in order to generate, sequence, and structure ideas (e.g., sequence for beginning, middle, and end, problem/solution, or Skills Assessed for Report Card Student Experiences annual benchmark assessment for CA-60 documentation K-8 Benchmark Narrative Assessment Prints fluently Make decisions as an author with an ability to talk about the writing, not just the topic Writes fluently in cursive Writes a cohesive personal narrative of substantial length Work towards increasing writing stamina Sets a purpose for writing / Applies pre-writing strategies Drafts writing in multiple sentences and paragraphs Writes initial drafts in multiple paragraphs using correct basic grammar conventions and correct spelling of high frequency words Revises drafts based on the input of others Alone or with others, edits writing for grade level grammar conventions and spelling using resources Exhibits personal style in published writing Speaks effectively and in standard American English when presenting work to an audience Listens attentively to ask questions Responds knowledgeably 1 Develops a small repertoire of strategies to generate ideas for writing from the small details of life that the student is learning are worth capturing Tells a story by reliving the “movie in her mind” rather than summarizing or commenting about it Writes a personal narrative that is focused on a small moment in time, choosing where to begin the true story about one’s self. Writes within a detailed chronological structure, leading with action or dialogue, using a variety of strategies to create leads and endings. Identifies elements of narratives Begins writing quickly after the mini-lesson, writing for at least 35 minutes. After finishing an entry, begins a new one or reworks a previous entry By mid-unit, produce at least ¾ of a page of writing during a writing workshop During the unit, write at least 10 pages of entries, drafting Recommended Activities / Resources Units of Study for Teaching Writing Grades 3-5 by Lucy Calkins- Unit 1: Launching the Writing Workshop Resources for the whole year: Writers’ notebooks for the teacher and each child Writing folders to organize drafts, revisions, rubrics, etc. Blank booklets with four or five pages Lined paper for drafting, revising, and publishing Writing utensils and containers to hold them on each table Storage boxes or baskets to hold writers’ notebooks on tables Sticky notes Chart paper and markers Small versions of charts for children to keep in notebooks (see CD) Word Wall or a substitute for teaching high-frequency words Writer’s notepads, one for each student to take home (optional) Overhead projector and transparencies (optional) Thinking Maps: flow map Vocabulary personal narrative mentor text sustaining writing strategy generate storytelling watermelon idea seed story zoom in true, exact details lead ending timeline dialogue setting images revision editing checklist Pacing Going Deeper with Narrative Writing 4 weeks 3rd Grade GLCEs / Common Core State Standards Skills Assessed for Report Card compare/contrast). W.PR.03.03 draft focused ideas in written compositions using multiple sentences and paragraphs to slow down or speed up reading; including varying patterns and/or organizational text structures (e.g., compare/contrast, cause/effect, or problem/solution). W.PR.03.04 revise drafts based on constructive and specific oral and written responses to writing by identifying sections of the piece to improve sequence and flow of ideas (e.g., arranging paragraphs, connecting main and supporting ideas, transitions). W.PR.03.05 proofread and edit writing using appropriate resources (e.g., dictionary, spell check, writing references) and grade-level checklists, both individually and in groups. W.PS.03.01 exhibit personal style and voice to enhance the written message in both narrative (e.g., varied word choice and sentence structure, character description) and informational writing (e.g., examples, transitions, grammar and usage). W.GR.03.01 in the context of writing, correctly use subjects and verbs that are in agreement; verb tenses; nouns and possessives; commas in a series; and begin use of quotation marks and capitalization in dialogue. W.SP.03.01 in the context of writing, correctly spell frequently encountered words (e.g., multi-syllabic, r-controlled, most consonant blends, contractions, compounds, common homophones); for less frequently encountered words, use structural cues (e.g., letter/sound, rimes, morphemic) and environmental sources (e.g., word walls, word lists, dictionaries, spell checkers). W.HW.03.01 fluently and legibly write the cursive alphabet. S.CN.03.02 adjust their use of language to communicate effectively with a variety of audiences and for different purposes including gathering information, making requests, discussing, classroom presentations, and playground interactions. S.CN.03.03 speak effectively emphasizing key words and varied pace for effect in narrative and informational presentations. S.CN.03.04 present in standard American English if it is their first language. (Students whose first language is not English will present in their developing version of standard American English.) S.DS.03.01 engage in interactive, extended discourse to socially construct meaning in book clubs, literature circles, partnerships, or other conversation protocols. L.CN.03.01 ask substantive questions of the speaker that will provide additional elaboration and details. L.CN.03.02 listen to or view knowledgeably while demonstrating appropriate social skills of audience behaviors (e.g., eye contact, attentive, supportive) in small and large group settings. L.RP.03.01 listen to or view knowledgeably and discuss a variety of genre and compare their responses to those of their peers. when listening to or viewing the writing of others Common Core State Standards Text Types and Purposes Prints fluently Student Experiences 2 personal narratives and choosing one for revision and editing Uses true, exact details Paragraphs purposefully Understands that authors make writing choices, gathers entries knowing that he will choose some to revise and edit to make them the best they can be. Moves independently through rehearsal to drafting to revision to editing to publishing Begins to learn that she will learn to write from reading writing Recommended Activities / Resources Vocabulary Children’s Literature for Mentor Texts: Fireflies! by Julie Brinckloe Familiar texts with great leads and endings (for example Salt Hands by Jane Chelsea Aragon; The Paper Boy by Dav Pilkey; Bigmama’s and Shortcut by Donald Crews; Peter’s Chair by Ezra Jack Keats; Whistling by Elizabeth Partridge; The Witch of Blackbird Pond by Elizabeth Speare; Because of Winn- Dixie by Kate DiCamillo; Charlotte’s Web by E.B. White) Teacher created writing examples Publishing options: minibooks, published books, word processed narratives… Writes fluently in cursive 2 Make decisions as an author with an ability to talk about the writing, not just the topic Units of Study for Teaching Writing Grades 3-5 by Lucy Calkins- Unit 2: Raising the writer’s eye turning points 3rd Grade GLCEs / Common Core State Standards Pacing W.3.3. Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, descriptive details, and clear event sequences. o Establish a situation and introduce a narrator and/or characters; organize an event sequence that unfolds naturally. o Use dialogue and descriptions of actions, thoughts, and feelings to develop experiences and events or show the response of characters to situations. o Use temporal words and phrases to signal event order. o Provide a sense of closure. Production and Distribution of Writing W.3.4. With guidance and support from adults, produce writing in which the development and organization are appropriate to task and purpose. (Grade-specific expectations for writing types are defined in standards 1–3 above.) W.3.5. With guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, and editing. W.3.6. With guidance and support from adults, use technology to produce and publish writing (using keyboarding skills) as well as to interact and collaborate with others. Range of Writing W.3.10. Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision) and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of discipline-specific tasks, purposes, and audiences. GLCE’s W.GN.03.01 write a cohesive narrative piece such as a fable, folktale, or realistic fiction using personification, setting, actions and thoughts that reveal important character traits. W.PR.03.01 set a purpose, consider audience, and replicate authors’ styles and patterns when writing a narrative or informational piece. W.PR.03.02 apply a variety of pre-writing strategies for both narrative and informational writing (e.g., graphic organizers such as maps, webs, Venn diagrams) in order to generate, sequence, and structure ideas (e.g., sequence for beginning, middle, and end, problem/solution, or compare/contrast). W.PR.03.03 draft focused ideas in written compositions using multiple sentences and paragraphs to slow down or speed up reading; including varying patterns and/or organizational text structures (e.g., compare/contrast, cause/effect, or problem/solution). W.PR.03.04 revise drafts based on constructive and specific oral and written responses to writing by identifying sections of the piece to improve sequence and flow of ideas (e.g., arranging paragraphs, connecting main Skills Assessed for Report Card Student Experiences Recommended Activities / Resources Vocabulary Quality of Narrative Writing Writes a cohesive personal narrative of substantial length Work towards increasing writing stamina Sets a purpose for writing / Applies pre-writing strategies Drafts writing in multiple sentences and paragraphs Writes initial drafts in multiple paragraphs using correct basic grammar conventions and correct spelling of high frequency words Revises drafts based on the input of others Alone or with others, edits writing for grade level grammar conventions and spelling using resources Exhibits personal style in published writing Speaks effectively and in standard American English when presenting work to an audience Listens attentively to ask questions Responds knowledgeably when listening to or viewing the writing of others Knows that the details of life are worth writing about Sifts through possible stories to select one for development Plans writing by considering focused episodes, making choices about a starting point for the story Writing independence is demonstrated through extended focus and personal decision-making to use strategies learned in this and the first unit Produces quality writing that is focused on craft and personal significance, including details that are angled to support the story and ring true. Produces 1-1/2 pages of writing a day by mid-unit Throughout the unit, the student write many pages of entries, drafts 1 or 2 narratives outside the notebook and quickly revises and edits those. By the end of the unit, selects one of these 2 units to revise more deeply, edit, and publish With reminders, paragraphs drafts Progresses through the writing process with little teacher support, knowing to gather entries, choose seed ideas, draft, revise, edit, and publish. 3 Children’s Literature for Mentor Texts “Eleven” from Woman Hollering Creek and Other Stories by Sandra Cisneros (see CD) Owl Moon by Jane Yolen “Papa Who Wakes Up Tired in the Dark” from The House on Mango Street by Sandra Cisneros Peter’s Chair by Ezra Jack Keats “Your Name in Gold.” In Chicken Soup for the Kid’s Soul: 101 Stories of Courage, Hope, and Laughter Well-crafted personal narratives, as used in Unit 1 (e.g. Salt Hands by Jane Chelsea Aragon; The Paper Boy by Dav Pilkey; Bigmama’s and Shortcut by Donald Crews; Whistling by Elizabeth Partridge) Thinking Maps flow map Teacher created writing examples Publishing options: minibooks, published books, word processed narratives… planning boxes paragraphing revisions significance angling writing scenes events story arc Pacing 3rd Grade GLCEs / Common Core State Standards Skills Assessed for Report Card Common Core State Standards Text Types and Purposes W.3.1. Write opinion pieces on topics or texts, supporting a point of view with reasons. o Introduce the topic or text they are writing about, state an opinion, and create an organizational structure that lists reasons. o Provide reasons that support the opinion. o Use linking words and phrases (e.g., because, therefore, since, for example) to connect opinion and reasons. Recommended Activities / Resources Vocabulary Shares work to make it better and supporting ideas, transitions). W.PR.03.05 proofread and edit writing using appropriate resources (e.g., dictionary, spell check, writing references) and grade-level checklists, both individually and in groups. W.PS.03.01 exhibit personal style and voice to enhance the written message in both narrative (e.g., varied word choice and sentence structure, character description) and informational writing (e.g., examples, transitions, grammar and usage). W.GR.03.01 in the context of writing, correctly use subjects and verbs that are in agreement; verb tenses; nouns and possessives; commas in a series; and begin use of quotation marks and capitalization in dialogue. W.SP.03.01 in the context of writing, correctly spell frequently encountered words (e.g., multi-syllabic, r-controlled, most consonant blends, contractions, compounds, common homophones); for less frequently encountered words, use structural cues (e.g., letter/sound, rimes, morphemic) and environmental sources (e.g., word walls, word lists, dictionaries, spell checkers). W.HW.03.01 fluently and legibly write the cursive alphabet. S.CN.03.02 adjust their use of language to communicate effectively with a variety of audiences and for different purposes including gathering information, making requests, discussing, classroom presentations, and playground interactions. S.CN.03.03 speak effectively emphasizing key words and varied pace for effect in narrative and informational presentations. S.CN.03.04 present in standard American English if it is their first language. (Students whose first language is not English will present in their developing version of standard American English.) S.DS.03.01 engage in interactive, extended discourse to socially construct meaning in book clubs, literature circles, partnerships, or other conversation protocols. L.CN.03.01 ask substantive questions of the speaker that will provide additional elaboration and details. L.CN.03.02 listen to or view knowledgeably while demonstrating appropriate social skills of audience behaviors (e.g., eye contact, attentive, supportive) in small and large group settings. L.RP.03.01 listen to or view knowledgeably and discuss a variety of genre and compare their responses to those of their peers. Personal Essay / Opinion Writing 5 weeks Student Experiences Reads as a writer Prints fluently Writes fluently in cursive Make decisions as an author with an ability to talk about the writing, not just the topic Writes a cohesive personal essay of substantial length Discovers that life supplies important ideas for essays Work towards increasing writing stamina Generates entries without teacher support Sets a purpose for writing / Plans by rereading entries 4 Units of Study for Teaching Writing Grades 3-5 by Lucy Calkins- Unit 3: Breathing Life Into Essays Children’s Literature for Mentor Texts Texts (or excerpts of texts) in which the author uses observation and reflection entry noticing think/wonder ideas main idea details Pacing 3rd Grade GLCEs / Common Core State Standards o Provide a concluding statement or section. Production and Distribution of Writing W.3.4. With guidance and support from adults, produce writing in which the development and organization are appropriate to task and purpose. (Grade-specific expectations for writing types are defined in standards 1–3 above.) W.3.5. With guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, and editing. W.3.6. With guidance and support from adults, use technology to produce and publish writing (using keyboarding skills) as well as to interact and collaborate with others. Research to Build and Present Knowledge W.3.8. Recall information from experiences or gather information from print and digital sources; take brief notes on sources and sort evidence into provided categories. Range of Writing W.3.10. Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision) and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of discipline-specific tasks, purposes, and audiences. GLCE’s W.GN.03.03 write an informational piece including a report that demonstrates the understanding of central ideas and supporting details using an effective organizational pattern (e.g., compare/contrast, cause/effect, problem/solution) with a title, heading, subheading, and a table of contents. W.PR.03.01 set a purpose, consider audience, and replicate authors’ styles and patterns when writing a narrative or informational piece. W.PR.03.02 apply a variety of pre-writing strategies for both narrative and informational writing (e.g., graphic organizers such as maps, webs, Venn diagrams) in order to generate, sequence, and structure ideas (e.g., sequence for beginning, middle, and end, problem/solution, or compare/contrast). W.PR.03.03 draft focused ideas in written compositions using multiple sentences and paragraphs to slow down or speed up reading; including varying patterns and/or organizational text structures (e.g., compare/contrast, cause/effect, or problem/solution). W.PR.03.04 revise drafts based on constructive and specific oral and written responses to writing by identifying sections of the piece to improve sequence and flow of ideas (e.g., arranging paragraphs, connecting main and supporting ideas, transitions). W.PR.03.05 proofread and edit writing using appropriate resources (e.g., dictionary, spell check, writing references) and grade-level checklists, both individually and in groups. W.PS.03.01 exhibit personal style and voice to enhance the written message in both narrative (e.g., varied word choice and sentence structure, character description) and informational writing (e.g., examples, transitions, Skills Assessed for Report Card Applies pre-writing strategies Drafts writing in multiple sentences and paragraphs Writes initial drafts in multiple paragraphs using correct basic grammar conventions and correct spelling of high frequency words Revises drafts based on the input of others Alone or with others, edits writing for grade level grammar conventions and spelling using resources Student Experiences and selecting a big idea, expressing it in a thesis, then drafting and revising a rough outline Conducts research to gather stories, quotations, lists, observations and other kinds of supporting evidence Advances and defends a single clear idea Relies on the teacher for overall direction in carrying out the many small writing projects in essay writing Exhibits personal style in published writing Produces quality writing through the use of small supporting details, angling writing to support the main idea Speaks effectively and in standard American English when presenting work to an audience Begins to use repetition, parallelism, and transition words to create a more compelling argument Listens attentively to ask questions Differentiates between narrative and expository texts and can identify characteristics of each Responds knowledgeably when listening to or viewing the writing of others Shifts from storytelling to advancing ideas supported by evidence Produces at least 1 page of writing each day, probably several smaller texts which may be combined later Initiates, starts and completes several small pieces of writing each day, categorizing writing pieces and sorting them into appropriate categories Uses logical transition words, clarifies pronoun 5 Recommended Activities / Resources Copies of texts in which the author uses lists (e.g. “I Have a Dream” by Martin Luther King) Expository texts with clear-cut structures Picture books that make a point and support it with examples (e.g. The Pain and The Great One by Judy Blume, Alexander and the Terrible Horrible No Good Very Bad Day by Judith Viorst) Vocabulary boxes thesis sentence bullets topic sentence support stories lists outside sources interview Thinking Maps circle bubble tree brace statistics Teacher created writing examples citations observations quotes honesty Pacing 3rd Grade GLCEs / Common Core State Standards Skills Assessed for Report Card grammar and usage). W.GR.03.01 in the context of writing, correctly use subjects and verbs that are in agreement; verb tenses; nouns and possessives; commas in a series; and begin use of quotation marks and capitalization in dialogue. W.SP.03.01 in the context of writing, correctly spell frequently encountered words (e.g., multi-syllabic, r-controlled, most consonant blends, contractions, compounds, common homophones); for less frequently encountered words, use structural cues (e.g., letter/sound, rimes, morphemic) and environmental sources (e.g., word walls, word lists, dictionaries, spell checkers). W.HW.03.01 fluently and legibly write the cursive alphabet. S.CN.03.02 adjust their use of language to communicate effectively with a variety of audiences and for different purposes including gathering information, making requests, discussing, classroom presentations, and playground interactions. S.CN.03.03 speak effectively emphasizing key words and varied pace for effect in narrative and informational presentations. S.CN.03.04 present in standard American English if it is their first language. (Students whose first language is not English will present in their developing version of standard American English.) S.DS.03.01 engage in interactive, extended discourse to socially construct meaning in book clubs, literature circles, partnerships, or other conversation protocols. L.CN.03.01 ask substantive questions of the speaker that will provide additional elaboration and details. L.CN.03.02 listen to or view knowledgeably while demonstrating appropriate social skills of audience behaviors (e.g., eye contact, attentive, supportive) in small and large group settings. L.RP.03.01 listen to or view knowledgeably and discuss a variety of genre and compare their responses to those of their peers. Informational Writing and Research / Nonfiction Writing 5 weeks Common Core State Standards Text Types and Purposes W.3.2. Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly. Introduce a topic and group related information together; include illustrations when useful to aiding comprehension. Develop the topic with facts, definitions, and details. Use linking words and phrases (e.g., also, another, and, more, but) to connect ideas within categories of information. Provide a concluding statement or section. Production and Distribution of Writing W.3.4. With guidance and support from adults, produce writing in which the development and organization are appropriate to task and purpose. (Grade-specific expectations for writing types are defined in standards 1–3 above.) Student Experiences Recommended Activities / Resources Vocabulary references, and repeats key words and phrases to create cohesion Progresses through the writing process producing an essay at the end, but is only able to explain the process of creating the essay at the end of the unit With reminders, paragraphs drafts Is comfortable in using the language of expository writing, such as it is important to notice and it is clear that… Reads with an eye toward imitating the writer’s craft Prints fluently Writes fluently in cursive Writes a cohesive and substantial informational piece Work towards increasing writing stamina Sets a purpose for writing / Applies pre-writing strategies Drafts writing in multiple 6 Make decisions as an author with an ability to talk about the writing, not just the topic Believes that he or she is an authority on a subject and is eager to write as a way to teach and convey meaning Plans topic and organization by categorizing and ordering information Teaches about the chosen topic through a variety of written organizational Informational / Research Unit of Study by Mary Bolt, Julie Kitchel and Cheri Millisor – available through the MAISD Children’s Literature for Mentor Texts: nonfiction and expository writing topic expert cause and effect compare and contrast problem / solution Thinking Maps circle bubble double bubble how-to diagram 3rd Grade GLCEs / Common Core State Standards Pacing Skills Assessed for Report Card W.3.5. With guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, and editing. W.3.6. With guidance and support from adults, use technology to produce and publish writing (using keyboarding skills) as well as to interact and collaborate with others. Research to Build and Present Knowledge W.3.7. Conduct short research projects that build knowledge about a topic. W.3.8. Recall information from experiences or gather information from print and digital sources; take brief notes on sources and sort evidence into provided categories. Range of Writing W.3.10. Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision) and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of discipline-specific tasks, purposes, and audiences. sentences and paragraphs GLCE’s W.GN.03.03 write an informational piece including a report that demonstrates the understanding of central ideas and supporting details using an effective organizational pattern (e.g., compare/contrast, cause/effect, problem/solution) with a title, heading, subheading, and a table of contents. W.GN.03.04 use the writing process to produce and present a research project; initiate research questions from content area text from a teacherselected topic; and use a variety of resources to gather and organize information. W.PR.03.01 set a purpose, consider audience, and replicate authors’ styles and patterns when writing a narrative or informational piece. W.PR.03.02 apply a variety of pre-writing strategies for both narrative and informational writing (e.g., graphic organizers such as maps, webs, Venn diagrams) in order to generate, sequence, and structure ideas (e.g., sequence for beginning, middle, and end, problem/solution, or compare/contrast). W.PR.03.03 draft focused ideas in written compositions using multiple sentences and paragraphs to slow down or speed up reading; including varying patterns and/or organizational text structures (e.g., compare/contrast, cause/effect, or problem/solution). W.PR.03.04 revise drafts based on constructive and specific oral and written responses to writing by identifying sections of the piece to improve sequence and flow of ideas (e.g., arranging paragraphs, connecting main and supporting ideas, transitions). W.PR.03.05 proofread and edit writing using appropriate resources (e.g., dictionary, spell check, writing references) and grade-level checklists, both individually and in groups. W.PS.03.01 exhibit personal style and voice to enhance the written message in both narrative (e.g., varied word choice and sentence structure, Speaks effectively and in standard American English when presenting work to an audience Writes initial drafts in multiple paragraphs using correct basic grammar conventions and correct spelling of high frequency words Revises drafts based on the input of others Alone or with others, edits writing for grade level grammar conventions and spelling using resources Exhibits personal style in published writing Listens attentively to ask questions Responds knowledgeably when listening to or viewing the writing of others structures (problem/ solution, cause/effect, compare/contrast, how-to, diagrams, lists…) Anticipates and answers the readers questions about the topic Teacher created writing examples Uses precise vocabulary and terms specific to the topic Rereads and revises writing with an eye toward making the writing and organization clear and easy for the reader to follow Creates a table of contents to guide the reader Experiments with personification Cycles through the writing process independently, starting a new piece when a piece is done, initiating conferences with partner or teacher Sustains writing for 40+ minutes, producing 1-1/2+ pages of writing a day Throughout the unit, the student writes many pages of entries, drafts several pieces outside the notebook and quickly revises and edits those. Progresses through the writing process producing a report at the end, but is only able to explain the process of creating the report at the end of the unit With reminders, paragraphs drafts 7 Recommended Activities / Resources Student Experiences flow multiflow tree brace Vocabulary table of contents title heading subheading dash facts personification Pacing 3rd Grade GLCEs / Common Core State Standards Skills Assessed for Report Card character description) and informational writing (e.g., examples, transitions, grammar and usage). W.GR.03.01 in the context of writing, correctly use subjects and verbs that are in agreement; verb tenses; nouns and possessives; commas in a series; and begin use of quotation marks and capitalization in dialogue. W.SP.03.01 in the context of writing, correctly spell frequently encountered words (e.g., multi-syllabic, r-controlled, most consonant blends, contractions, compounds, common homophones); for less frequently encountered words, use structural cues (e.g., letter/sound, rimes, morphemic) and environmental sources (e.g., word walls, word lists, dictionaries, spell checkers). W.HW.03.01 fluently and legibly write the cursive alphabet. S.CN.03.02 adjust their use of language to communicate effectively with a variety of audiences and for different purposes including gathering information, making requests, discussing, classroom presentations, and playground interactions. S.CN.03.03 speak effectively emphasizing key words and varied pace for effect in narrative and informational presentations. S.CN.03.04 present in standard American English if it is their first language. (Students whose first language is not English will present in their developing version of standard American English.) S.DS.03.01 engage in interactive, extended discourse to socially construct meaning in book clubs, literature circles, partnerships, or other conversation protocols. L.CN.03.01 ask substantive questions of the speaker that will provide additional elaboration and details. L.CN.03.02 listen to or view knowledgeably while demonstrating appropriate social skills of audience behaviors (e.g., eye contact, attentive, supportive) in small and large group settings. L.RP.03.01 listen to or view knowledgeably and discuss a variety of genre and compare their responses to those of their peers. Literary Essay / Opinion Writing 4 weeks Common Core State Standards Text Types and Purposes W.3.1. Write opinion pieces on topics or texts, supporting a point of view with reasons. o Introduce the topic or text they are writing about, state an opinion, and create an organizational structure that lists reasons. o Provide reasons that support the opinion. o Use linking words and phrases (e.g., because, therefore, since, for example) to connect opinion and reasons. o Provide a concluding statement or section. Production and Distribution of Writing W.3.4. With guidance and support from adults, produce writing in which the development and organization are appropriate to task and purpose. (Grade-specific expectations for writing Student Experiences Recommended Activities / Resources Vocabulary Is comfortable in using the language of expository writing Reads with an eye toward imitating the writer’s craft Prints fluently Writes fluently in cursive Writes a cohesive literary essay of substantial length Work towards increasing writing stamina Sets a purpose for writing / Applies pre-writing strategies Drafts writing in multiple sentences and paragraphs 8 Make decisions as an author with an ability to talk about the writing, not just the topic Discovers that stories she reads supply important ideas for essays Generates entries without teacher support Plans by rereading entries and selecting a selecting a seed idea, testing and revising theses, then drafting and revising a sequential outline Units of Study for Teaching Writing Grades 3-5 by Lucy Calkins- Unit 4: Literary Essay: Writing About Reading entry Children’s Literature for Mentor Texts Every Living Thing by Cynthia Rylant “The Marble Champ” from Baseball in April and Other Stories by Gary Soto “Eleven” from Woman Hollering Creek and Other Stories by Sandra conversational prompts noticing think/wonder tone ideas main idea details boxes 3rd Grade GLCEs / Common Core State Standards Pacing Skills Assessed for Report Card Student Experiences Recommended Activities / Resources Vocabulary types are defined in standards 1–3 above.) W.3.5. With guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, and editing. W.3.6. With guidance and support from adults, use technology to produce and publish writing (using keyboarding skills) as well as to interact and collaborate with others. Research to Build and Present Knowledge W.3.8. Recall information from experiences or gather information from print and digital sources; take brief notes on sources and sort evidence into provided categories. Range of Writing W.3.10. Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision) and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of discipline-specific tasks, purposes, and audiences. Writes initial drafts in multiple paragraphs using correct basic grammar conventions and correct spelling of high frequency words Exhibits personal style in published writing Needs support in crafting a thesis, topic sentences, introduction and conclusion, but works independently to collect support. GLCE’s W.GN.03.03 write an informational piece including a report that demonstrates the understanding of central ideas and supporting details using an effective organizational pattern (e.g., compare/contrast, cause/effect, problem/solution) with a title, heading, subheading, and a table of contents. W.PR.03.01 set a purpose, consider audience, and replicate authors’ styles and patterns when writing a narrative or informational piece. W.PR.03.02 apply a variety of pre-writing strategies for both narrative and informational writing (e.g., graphic organizers such as maps, webs, Venn diagrams) in order to generate, sequence, and structure ideas (e.g., sequence for beginning, middle, and end, problem/solution, or compare/contrast). W.PR.03.03 draft focused ideas in written compositions using multiple sentences and paragraphs to slow down or speed up reading; including varying patterns and/or organizational text structures (e.g., compare/contrast, cause/effect, or problem/solution). W.PR.03.04 revise drafts based on constructive and specific oral and written responses to writing by identifying sections of the piece to improve sequence and flow of ideas (e.g., arranging paragraphs, connecting main and supporting ideas, transitions). W.PR.03.05 proofread and edit writing using appropriate resources (e.g., dictionary, spell check, writing references) and grade-level checklists, both individually and in groups. W.PS.03.01 exhibit personal style and voice to enhance the written message in both narrative (e.g., varied word choice and sentence structure, character description) and informational writing (e.g., examples, transitions, grammar and usage). W.GR.03.01 in the context of writing, correctly use subjects and verbs that are in agreement; verb tenses; nouns and possessives; commas in a series; and begin use of quotation marks and capitalization in dialogue. W.SP.03.01 in the context of writing, correctly spell frequently encountered words (e.g., multi-syllabic, r-controlled, most consonant blends, Speaks effectively and in standard American English when presenting work to an audience Produces quality writing through the use of a variety of evidence, angling writing to support the main idea Listens attentively to ask questions Brings all he or she knows about writing well to this genre quotes Understands essential principles for writing essays, knowing that literary essayists must read actively and develop ideas about the text honesty Revises drafts based on the input of others Alone or with others, edits writing for grade level grammar conventions and spelling using resources Responds knowledgeably when listening to or viewing the writing of others Cisneros Gathers stories, summaries, quotations and lists to support the thesis Becomes comfortable with the writing of an essay after the challenging work of creating the thesis and topic sentences has been completed Supporting provocative ideas with a variety of evidence from the text Produces at least 2 pages of writing each day, in longer and more complicated passages of thought By the end of the unit, produces a well written literary essay with a welldeveloped thesis and supporting evidence Is conscientious about subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, 9 Thinking Maps circle bubble tree brace Teacher created writing examples thesis sentence bullets topic sentence support stories lists sequence summarize outside sources interview statistics observations citations Pacing 3rd Grade GLCEs / Common Core State Standards Skills Assessed for Report Card contractions, compounds, common homophones); for less frequently encountered words, use structural cues (e.g., letter/sound, rimes, morphemic) and environmental sources (e.g., word walls, word lists, dictionaries, spell checkers). W.HW.03.01 fluently and legibly write the cursive alphabet. S.CN.03.02 adjust their use of language to communicate effectively with a variety of audiences and for different purposes including gathering information, making requests, discussing, classroom presentations, and playground interactions. S.CN.03.03 speak effectively emphasizing key words and varied pace for effect in narrative and informational presentations. S.CN.03.04 present in standard American English if it is their first language. (Students whose first language is not English will present in their developing version of standard American English.) S.DS.03.01 engage in interactive, extended discourse to socially construct meaning in book clubs, literature circles, partnerships, or other conversation protocols. L.CN.03.01 ask substantive questions of the speaker that will provide additional elaboration and details. L.CN.03.02 listen to or view knowledgeably while demonstrating appropriate social skills of audience behaviors (e.g., eye contact, attentive, supportive) in small and large group settings. L.RP.03.01 listen to or view knowledgeably and discuss a variety of genre and compare their responses to those of their peers. Student Experiences Recommended Activities / Resources paragraphing and pronoun use. Proceeds through the writing process collecting entries that re responses to close reading of the text, crafting a supportable thesis, and framing evidence to support the claim. Continually rereads the text he or she is writing to glean more insights and ideas. Revises work continuously to support the claim rather than waiting to correct during editing With reminders, paragraphs drafts Is comfortable in using the language of expository writing, such as for example and more importantly… Reads with an eye toward imitating the writer’s craft and like a literary critic, growing big ideas out of small pieces of text Informational / Explanatory 6 weeks needs editing Research and Informative / Explanatory Writing by Kahlo, Fortmeyer, Millisor, Oak - available through the MAISD Common Core State Standards Text Types and Purposes W.3.2. Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly. Introduce a topic and group related information together; include illustrations when useful to aiding comprehension. Develop the topic with facts, definitions, and details. Use linking words and phrases (e.g., also, another, and, more, but) to connect ideas within categories of information. Provide a concluding statement or section. Production and Distribution of Writing 10 Vocabulary 3rd Grade GLCEs / Common Core State Standards Pacing Skills Assessed for Report Card W.3.4. With guidance and support from adults, produce writing in which the development and organization are appropriate to task and purpose. (Grade-specific expectations for writing types are defined in standards 1–3 above.) W.3.5. With guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, and editing. W.3.6. With guidance and support from adults, use technology to produce and publish writing (using keyboarding skills) as well as to interact and collaborate with others. Research to Build and Present Knowledge W.3.7. Conduct short research projects that build knowledge about a topic. W.3.8. Recall information from experiences or gather information from print and digital sources; take brief notes on sources and sort evidence into provided categories. Range of Writing W.3.10. Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision) and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of discipline-specific tasks, purposes, and audiences. GLCE’s W.GN.03.03 write an informational piece including a report that demonstrates the understanding of central ideas and supporting details using an effective organizational pattern (e.g., compare/contrast, cause/effect, problem/solution) with a title, heading, subheading, and a table of contents. W.GN.03.04 use the writing process to produce and present a research project; initiate research questions from content area text from a teacherselected topic; and use a variety of resources to gather and organize information. W.PR.03.01 set a purpose, consider audience, and replicate authors’ styles and patterns when writing a narrative or informational piece. W.PR.03.02 apply a variety of pre-writing strategies for both narrative and informational writing (e.g., graphic organizers such as maps, webs, Venn diagrams) in order to generate, sequence, and structure ideas (e.g., sequence for beginning, middle, and end, problem/solution, or compare/contrast). W.PR.03.03 draft focused ideas in written compositions using multiple sentences and paragraphs to slow down or speed up reading; including varying patterns and/or organizational text structures (e.g., compare/contrast, cause/effect, or problem/solution). W.PR.03.04 revise drafts based on constructive and specific oral and written responses to writing by identifying sections of the piece to improve sequence and flow of ideas (e.g., arranging paragraphs, connecting main and supporting ideas, transitions). W.PR.03.05 proofread and edit writing using appropriate resources (e.g., 11 Student Experiences Recommended Activities / Resources Vocabulary Pacing 3rd Grade GLCEs / Common Core State Standards Skills Assessed for Report Card Student Experiences Recommended Activities / Resources Vocabulary dictionary, spell check, writing references) and grade-level checklists, both individually and in groups. W.PS.03.01 exhibit personal style and voice to enhance the written message in both narrative (e.g., varied word choice and sentence structure, character description) and informational writing (e.g., examples, transitions, grammar and usage). W.GR.03.01 in the context of writing, correctly use subjects and verbs that are in agreement; verb tenses; nouns and possessives; commas in a series; and begin use of quotation marks and capitalization in dialogue. W.SP.03.01 in the context of writing, correctly spell frequently encountered words (e.g., multi-syllabic, r-controlled, most consonant blends, contractions, compounds, common homophones); for less frequently encountered words, use structural cues (e.g., letter/sound, rimes, morphemic) and environmental sources (e.g., word walls, word lists, dictionaries, spell checkers). W.HW.03.01 fluently and legibly write the cursive alphabet. S.CN.03.02 adjust their use of language to communicate effectively with a variety of audiences and for different purposes including gathering information, making requests, discussing, classroom presentations, and playground interactions. S.CN.03.03 speak effectively emphasizing key words and varied pace for effect in narrative and informational presentations. S.CN.03.04 present in standard American English if it is their first language. (Students whose first language is not English will present in their developing version of standard American English.) S.DS.03.01 engage in interactive, extended discourse to socially construct meaning in book clubs, literature circles, partnerships, or other conversation protocols. L.CN.03.01 ask substantive questions of the speaker that will provide additional elaboration and details. L.CN.03.02 listen to or view knowledgeably while demonstrating appropriate social skills of audience behaviors (e.g., eye contact, attentive, supportive) in small and large group settings. L.RP.03.01 listen to or view knowledgeably and discuss a variety of genre and compare their responses to those of their peers. Test Genre 4 weeks needs editing W.PR.03.01 set a purpose, consider audience, and replicate authors’ styles and patterns when writing a narrative or informational piece. W.PR.03.02 apply a variety of pre-writing strategies for both narrative and informational writing (e.g., graphic organizers such as maps, webs, Venn diagrams) in order to generate, sequence, and structure ideas (e.g., sequence for beginning, middle, and end, problem/solution, or compare/contrast). W.PR.03.03 draft focused ideas in written compositions using multiple sentences and paragraphs to slow down or speed up reading; including varying patterns and/or organizational text structures (e.g., compare/contrast, cause/effect, or problem/solution). W.PR.03.04 revise drafts based on constructive and specific oral and written responses to writing by identifying sections of the piece to improve Prints fluently Writes fluently in cursive Writes a cohesive and substantial piece Work towards increasing writing stamina Sets a purpose for writing / Applies pre-writing strategies 12 Express thoughts through writing First Ten Days, Second 10 Days Utilize the word wall and other spelling resources Decorate writer’s notebooks Practices spelling; sentence capitalization and punctuation; commas in a series, in letters, and in dates; and quotation marks and capitalization in dialogue Brainstorm to create chart of many genres of writing writing (not handwriting) writer’s notebook entry author Practice peer revising and teacher conferring one-onone with students illustrator Practice routines and procedures for writer’s conferring/conference genre Pacing 3rd Grade GLCEs / Common Core State Standards sequence and flow of ideas (e.g., arranging paragraphs, connecting main and supporting ideas, transitions). W.PR.03.05 proofread and edit writing using appropriate resources (e.g., dictionary, spell check, writing references) and grade-level checklists, both individually and in groups. W.PS.03.01 exhibit personal style and voice to enhance the written message in both narrative (e.g., varied word choice and sentence structure, character description) and informational writing (e.g., examples, transitions, grammar and usage). W.GR.03.01 in the context of writing, correctly use subjects and verbs that are in agreement; verb tenses; nouns and possessives; commas in a series; and begin use of quotation marks and capitalization in dialogue. W.SP.03.01 in the context of writing, correctly spell frequently encountered words (e.g., multi-syllabic, r-controlled, most consonant blends, contractions, compounds, common homophones); for less frequently encountered words, use structural cues (e.g., letter/sound, rimes, morphemic) and environmental sources (e.g., word walls, word lists, dictionaries, spell checkers). W.HW.03.01 fluently and legibly write the cursive alphabet. S.CN.03.02 adjust their use of language to communicate effectively with a variety of audiences and for different purposes including gathering information, making requests, discussing, classroom presentations, and playground interactions. S.CN.03.03 speak effectively emphasizing key words and varied pace for effect in narrative and informational presentations. S.CN.03.04 present in standard American English if it is their first language. (Students whose first language is not English will present in their developing version of standard American English.) S.DS.03.01 engage in interactive, extended discourse to socially construct meaning in book clubs, literature circles, partnerships, or other conversation protocols. L.CN.03.01 ask substantive questions of the speaker that will provide additional elaboration and details. L.CN.03.02 listen to or view knowledgeably while demonstrating appropriate social skills of audience behaviors (e.g., eye contact, attentive, supportive) in small and large group settings. L.RP.03.01 listen to or view knowledgeably and discuss a variety of genre and compare their responses to those of their peers. Skills Assessed for Report Card Student Experiences Drafts writing in multiple sentences and paragraphs Enjoy creating something with writing Writes initial drafts in multiple paragraphs using correct basic grammar conventions and correct spelling of high frequency words Write within a timeline with a publishing date in mind Revises drafts based on the input of others Alone or with others, edits writing for grade level grammar conventions and spelling using resources Exhibits personal style in published writing Speaks effectively and in standard American English when presenting work to an audience Listens attentively to ask questions Responds knowledgeably when listening to or viewing the writing of others 13 Speak and present writing work to an audience Confer with peers or teacher to improve writing Practice the routines and procedures for the classroom’s Writer’s Workshop time Recommended Activities / Resources workshop time, such as material use and storage, coming to circle, beginning writing time, speaker and audience roles in sharing writing… Review the use of spelling resources, such as dictionaries and word walls Offer daily opportunities / invitations for extended free writing time and the creation of a writing piece of student choice Encourage writing stamina Publishing celebration to share final work with classmates Vocabulary ideas organization audience pre-write/plan draft sentence fluency voice word choice revise conventions/mechanics edit illustrate publish present 3rd Grade Grammar Usage Expectations Personal Narrative Personal Narrative (Launching the Writing Workshop) (Raising the Quality of Narrative Writing) Literary Essay Personal Essay (Breathing Life into Essays) Correct Use of These Conventions Expected in Planning (work in the Writer’s Notebook) Correct Use of These Conventions Expected During Drafting Correct Use of These Conventions Expected During Revising Sentence capitalization & end punctuation/capitalize first and last names and the pronoun I (1st gr. GLCEs) Contractions, capitalizes proper nouns, Commas in a series, in letters, and in dates (2nd gr. GLCEs) Sentence capitalization & end punctuation/capitalize first and last names and the pronoun I (1st gr. GLCEs) Contractions, capitalizes proper nouns, Commas in a series, in letters, and in dates (2nd gr. GLCEs) Correct spelling of high frequency words Quotation marks and capitalization in dialogue Correct spelling of high frequency words Quotation marks and capitalization in dialogue Subject / verb agreement Correct spelling of high frequency words Quotation marks and capitalization in dialogue Subject / verb agreement Appropriate verb tense Subject / verb agreement Appropriate verb tense Possessive nouns As well as all conventions listed earlier in the writing process (above) As well as all conventions listed earlier in the writing process (above) As well as all conventions listed earlier in the writing process (above) Sentence capitalization & end punctuation/capitalize first and last names and the pronoun I (1st gr. GLCEs) Contractions, capitalizes proper nouns, Commas in a series, in letters, and in dates (2nd gr. GLCEs) Subject / verb agreement As well as all conventions listed earlier in the writing process (above) Appropriate verb tense As well as all conventions listed earlier in the writing process (above) Possessive nouns As well as all conventions listed earlier in the writing process (above) All conventions listed earlier in the writing process (above) All conventions listed earlier in the writing process (above) All conventions listed earlier in the writing process (above) Correct spelling of high frequency words Quotation marks and capitalization in dialogue (work in the Project Folder) (final work for sharing with an audience) Correct spelling of high frequency words Quotation marks and capitalization in dialogue (work in the Project Folder) Correct Use of These Conventions Expected When Editing for Publication Sentence capitalization & end punctuation/capitalize first and last names and the pronoun I (1st gr. GLCEs) Contractions, capitalizes proper nouns, Commas in a series, in letters, and in dates (2nd gr. GLCEs) Sentence capitalization & end punctuation/capitalize first and last names and the pronoun I (1st gr. GLCEs) Contractions, capitalizes proper nouns, Commas in a series, in letters, and in dates (2nd gr. GLCEs) Informational Writing and Research Poetry (Literary Essay: Writing About Reading) Sentence capitalization & end punctuation/capitalize first and last names and the pronoun I (1st gr. GLCEs) Contractions, capitalizes proper nouns, Commas in a series, in letters, and in dates, (2nd gr. GLCEs) Subject / verb agreement As well as all conventions listed earlier in the writing process (above) Appropriate verb tense As well as all conventions listed earlier in the writing process (above) Correct spelling of high frequency words Quotation marks and capitalization in dialogue 14 Possessive nouns As well as all conventions listed earlier in the writing process (above) LAUNCHING THE WRITING WORKSHOP: PERSONAL NARRATIVE 3rd GRADE RUBRIC Name: _____________________________________________________ Date: ____________________ 4 – WOW! Seed Story and Productivity Planning Details Lead and Ending Revising (writer’s notebook and first draft) Editing (final published copy) Publishing / Presentation 3 – I’m There! My true story about me is a focused seed story – not a big watermelon topic. I have produced at least 10 pages of entries culminating in drafts of 2 narratives, 1 of which went through the writing process to publishing. My true story about me is a seed story – not a big watermelon topic. I have produced 8-10 pages of entries culminating in drafts of 2 narratives, 1 of which went through the writing process to publishing. I used a variety of strategies to generate ideas and plan the sequence of my story. I tried out several different leads and endings. I zoom in and use true, exact details to tell the most important parts of the story in the order they happened. My lead and my ending include action, dialogue, setting, or images to create a mood and make a lasting impression. I used a few strategies to generate ideas and plan the sequence of my story; I tried out a few different leads and endings. I reread my previous entries and chose one to work on to make it my best writing ever. I purposefully paragraphed my work and used information from conferring with my partner or teacher to improve my writing. All of my sentences are capitalized and have ending punctuation. I use commas correctly in a series, in letters and in dates. I have spelled all of my high frequency words correctly. I am using quotation marks and capitalization correctly in dialogue. I always speak clearly when I share and my piece was published on time. I listen attentively with an intention to learn when others are presenting their work. TOTAL SCORE: 25-28 points = 4 I use many details to tell important parts of the story in the order they happened. Either my lead or my ending includes action, dialogue, setting, or images to create a mood and make a lasting impression. I reread my previous entries and chose one to work on to improve it. I paragraphed my work and used information from conferring with my partner or teacher to improve my writing. Most of my sentences are capitalized and have ending punctuation. I usually use commas correctly in a series, in letters and in dates. I have spelled almost all of my high frequency words correctly. I usually use quotation marks and capitalization correctly in dialogue. I usually speak clearly when I share and my piece was published on time. I listen attentively when others are presenting their work. 18-24 points = 3 _____ 4 – student work exceeds objectives - EXCELLENT!! _____ 3 –student work achieves objectives – GREAT WORK!! 2 - Almost 1 – Not Yet My story might not be a true story about me, and it includes more than one seed, but it’s not a big watermelon topic. I have produced 6-8 pages of entries culminating in at least 1 or 2 drafts of narratives, 1 of which might have gone through the writing process to publishing. I tried 1 or 2 strategies to generate ideas and plan the sequence of my story; I might have tried 1 or 2 leads and endings. My story might not be a true story about me, and is a big watermelon topic. I have produced less than 6 pages of entries culminating in a draft of 1 narrative that might not have gone through the writing process to publishing. I use a few details to tell some parts of the story, but they might not be in the order they happened. Either my lead or my ending includes action, dialogue, setting, or images but might not create a mood and make a lasting impression. I worked on a story to make it better, but it was not an entry from my writer’s notebook. I might have paragraphed my work, and I might have used information from conferring with my partner or teacher to improve my writing. Some of my sentences are capitalized and have ending punctuation. I sometimes use commas correctly in a series, in letters and in dates. I have spelled many of my high frequency words correctly. I sometimes use quotation marks and capitalization correctly in dialogue. I sometimes speak clearly when I share and my piece was published on time. I sometimes listen attentively when others are presenting their work. I use very few details in my story, and they might not be in the order they happened. Neither my lead nor my ending create a mood and make a lasting impression. 11-17 points = 2 I tried 1 strategy to generate ideas and plan the sequence of my story; I didn’t try out different leads or endings. I wrote a story, but never worked on it or changed it to make it better. I did not use paragraphing, and I did not use information from conferring with my partner or teacher to improve my writing. Few of my sentences are capitalized and have ending punctuation. I seldom use commas correctly in a series, in letters or in dates. I have spelled some all of my high frequency words correctly. I do not use quotation marks and capitalization correctly in dialogue yet. I might not speak clearly when I share and my piece might not have been published on time. I seldom listen attentively when others are presenting their work. 7-10 points = 1 _____ 2 – student is making progress – GOOD EFFORT!! _____ 1 – student is experiencing difficulty – KEEP WORKING!! Teacher Comments: 15 RAISING THE QUALITY OF NARRATIVE WRITING: PERSONAL NARRATIVE Name: _____________________________________________________ Date: ____________________ 4 – WOW! Seed Story and Productivity Planning Details Lead and Ending Revising (writer’s notebook and first draft) Editing (final published copy) Publishing / Presentation 3 – I’m There! My true story about me is a focused seed story – not a big watermelon topic. I have produced at least 20 pages of entries culminating in drafts of 2 narratives, 1 of which went through the writing process to publishing. My true story about me is a seed story – not a big watermelon topic. I have produced 16-20 pages of entries culminating in drafts of 2 narratives, 1 of which went through the writing process to publishing. I used a variety of strategies to generate ideas. I planned the sequence of my story and chose a starting point. I used paragraphing in my draft and tried out several different leads and endings. I used a few strategies to generate ideas. I sequenced my story and chose a starting point. I used paragraphing in my draft and tried out a several different leads and endings. I angle true, exact details to support important parts of the story in the order they happened. My lead and my ending include action, dialogue, setting, or images to create a mood and make a lasting impression. I reread my previous entries and chose one to work onto make it my best writing ever. I purposefully paragraphed my work and used information from conferring with my partner or teacher to improve my writing. All of my sentences are capitalized and have ending punctuation. I use commas correctly in a series, in letters and in dates. I have spelled all of my high frequency words correctly. I am using quotation marks and capitalization correctly in dialogue. I angle many details to support important parts of the story in the order they happened. Either my lead or my ending includes action, dialogue, setting, or images to create a mood and make a lasting impression. I reread my previous entries and chose one to work on to improve it. I paragraphed my work and used information from conferring with my partner or my teacher to improve my writing. Most of my sentences are capitalized and have ending punctuation. I usually use commas correctly in a series, in letters and in dates. I have spelled almost all of my high frequency words correctly. I usually use quotation marks and capitalization correctly in dialogue. All of my subjects and verbs are in agreement. I have also corrected any grammar feature errors that I may have missed earlier in the writing process. I always speak clearly when I share and my piece was published on time. I listen attentively with an intention to learn when others are presenting their work. Most of my subjects and verbs are in agreement. I have also corrected most of the grammar feature errors that I may have missed earlier in the writing process. I usually speak clearly when I share and my piece was published on time. I listen attentively when others are presenting their work. TOTAL SCORE: 25-28 points = 4 18-24 points = 3 _____ 4 – student work exceeds objectives - EXCELLENT!! _____ 3 –student work achieves objectives – GREAT WORK!! 2 - Almost My story might not be a true story about me, and it includes more than one seed, but it’s not a big watermelon topic. I have produced 12-16 pages of entries culminating in at least 1 or 2 drafts of narratives, 1 of which might have gone through the writing process to publishing. I used 2 or 3 strategies to generate ideas. I may not have planned the sequence of my story or chosen a starting point. I might have used paragraphing in my draft and may have tried out a few different leads and endings. I use a few details to tell some parts of the story, but they might not be angled or in the order they happened. Either my lead or my ending includes action, dialogue, setting, or images but might not create a mood and make a lasting impression. I worked on a story to make it better, but it wasn’t an entry from my writer’s notebook. I might have paragraphed my work, and I might have used information from conferring with my partner or teacher to improve my work. Some of my sentences are capitalized and have ending punctuation. I sometimes use commas correctly in a series, in letters and in dates. I have spelled many of my high frequency words correctly. I sometimes use quotation marks and capitalization correctly in dialogue. Some of my subjects and verbs are in agreement. I have also corrected some of the grammar feature errors that I may have missed earlier in the writing process. I sometimes speak clearly when I share and my piece was published on time. I sometimes listen attentively when others are presenting their work. 3rd GRADE RUBRIC 1 – Not Yet My story might not be a true story about me, and is a big watermelon topic. I have produced less than 12 pages of entries culminating in a draft of 1 narrative that might not have gone through the writing process to publishing. I used 1 or 2 strategies to generate ideas. I did not plan the sequence of my story and did not try different starting points. I may not have used paragraphing in my draft and did not try out different leads and endings. I use very few details in my story, and they might not be angled or in the order they happened. Neither my lead nor my ending create a mood and make a lasting impression. I wrote a story, but never worked on it or changed it to make it better. I did not use paragraphing, and I did not use information from conferring with my partner or my teacher to improve my writing. Few of my sentences are capitalized and have ending punctuation. I seldom use commas correctly in a series, in letters or in dates. I have spelled some all of my high frequency words correctly. I do not use quotation marks and capitalization correctly in dialogue yet. Few of my subjects and verbs are in agreement. I have missed many of the grammar feature errors that I may have made earlier in the writing process. I might not speak clearly when I share and my piece might not have been published on time. I seldom listen attentively when others are presenting their work. 11-17 points = 2 7-10 points = 1 _____ 2 – student is making progress – GOOD EFFORT!! _____ 1 – student is experiencing difficulty – KEEP WORKING!! 16 BREATHING LIFE INTO ESSAYS: PERSONAL ESSAY Name: _____________________________________________________ 3rd GRADE RUBRIC Date: ____________________ 4 – WOW! 3 – I’m There! I take a strong and clear position on a single clear idea. I have produced at least 1 page of writing each day consisting of several separate small pieces which were later combined to create the essay. I used a variety of strategies to generate theses and create the topic sentences for my essay; I used several different kinds of evidence for support, categorizing the pieces and sorting them into categories to lead my reader smoothly through the text. I take a clear position on a single idea. I have usually produced 1 page of writing each day consisting of many separate small pieces which were later combined to create the essay. I used several strategies to generate theses and create the topic sentences for my essay; I used many different kinds of evidence for support, categorizing the pieces and sorting them into categories to lead my reader smoothly through the text. 2 - Almost 1 – Not Yet I take a position on an idea. I have usually My position or my idea is not clear. I have produced less than 1 page of writing each consistently produced less than 1 page of day consisting of 2 or 3 separate small writing each day consisting of only 1 or 2 pieces which were later combined to small pieces which might have been create the essay. combined later to create the essay. I used 1 or 2 strategies to generate theses I wrote one thesis and created the topic and create the topic sentences for my sentences for my essay; I used only 1 or 2 essay; I tried a couple different kinds of types of evidence for support, and did not Planning evidence for support, attempting to categorize the pieces or sort them into categorize the pieces and sort them into categories to lead my reader through the categories to lead my reader through the text. text... I use repetition, parallelism, and transition I use repetition, parallelism, or transition I try to use repetition, parallelism, and I use very little repetition, parallelism, or Transitions words to make my argument clear and words to make my argument clear and transition words, but they may not help to transition words and they do not help to compelling. compelling. make my argument clear. make my argument clear. My introduction and my conclusion include My introduction or my conclusion include My introduction or my conclusion might Neither my introduction nor my Introduction interesting words or small stories to interest interesting words or small stories to not include interesting words or small conclusion includes interesting words or and Conclusion the reader and make a lasting impression. interest the reader and make a lasting stories to interest the reader and make an small stories to interest the reader make a impression. impression. lasting impression. I revised my thesis, topic sentences, and I revised my thesis, topic sentences, or my I wrote my thesis, topic sentences, or my I wrote my thesis, topic sentences, or my support pieces to make sure they supported support pieces to make sure they support pieces to support each other and support pieces, but never revised them to each other and flowed smoothly by using supported each other and flowed by using attempted to use paragraphs. I might have make them support each other. I did not paragraphing. I used information from paragraphing. I used information from used information from conferring with my use paragraphing or information from conferring with my partner or teacher to conferring with my partner or teacher to partner or teacher to improve my writing. conferring with my partner or teacher to improve my writing. All of my sentences improve my writing. Most of my sentences Some of my sentences are capitalized and improve my writing. Few of my sentences Revising are capitalized and have ending are capitalized and have ending have ending punctuation. I sometimes use are capitalized and have ending (writer’s notebook punctuation. I use commas correctly in a punctuation. I usually use commas commas correctly in a series, in letters punctuation. I seldom use commas and first draft) series, in letters and in dates. I have spelled correctly in a series, in letters and in dates. and in dates. I have spelled many of my correctly in a series, in letters or in dates. I all of my high frequency words correctly. I I have spelled almost all of my high high frequency words correctly. I have spelled some all of my high am using quotation marks and capitalization frequency words correctly. I usually use sometimes use quotation marks and frequency words correctly. I do not use correctly in dialogue. All of my subjects and quotation marks and capitalization capitalization correctly in dialogue. Some quotation marks and capitalization verbs are in agreement. correctly in dialogue. Most of my subjects of my subjects and verbs are in correctly in dialogue yet. Few of my and verbs are in agreement. agreement. subjects and verbs are in agreement. All of my verbs are written in the correct Most of my verbs are written in the correct Some of my verbs are written in the Few of my verbs are written in the correct Editing tense. I have also corrected any grammar tense. I have also corrected most of the correct tense. I have also corrected some tense. I have missed many of the grammar (final published feature errors that I may have missed grammar feature errors that I may have of the grammar feature errors that I may feature errors that I may have made earlier copy) earlier in the writing process. missed earlier in the writing process. have missed earlier in the writing process. in the writing process. I always speak clearly when I share and my I usually speak clearly when I share and I sometimes speak clearly when I share I might not speak clearly when I share and Publishing / piece was published on time. I listen my piece was published on time. I listen and my piece was published on time. I my piece might not have been published Presentation attentively with an intention to learn when attentively when others are presenting sometimes listen attentively when others on time. I seldom listen attentively when others are presenting their work. their work. are presenting their work. others are presenting their work. TOTAL SCORE: 25-28 points = 4 18-24 points = 3 11-17 points = 2 7-10 points = 1 _____ 4 – student work exceeds objectives - EXCELLENT!! _____ 2 – student is making progress – GOOD EFFORT!! _____ 3 –student work achieves objectives – GREAT WORK!! _____ 1 – student is experiencing difficulty – KEEP WORKING!! Teacher Comments: Thesis Statement and Productivity 17 INFORMATIONAL WRITING AND RESEARCH Name: _____________________________________________________ Date: ____________________ 4 – WOW! 3 – I’m There! 2 - Almost Topic and Productivity Headings / Subheadings Craft Details Revising (writer’s notebook and first draft) Editing (final published copy) Publishing / Presentation I have written about a specific topic on which I am an expert. I have produced at least 1½ pages of writing each day consisting of several separate pieces which were later combined to create a report with at least 6 headings. I have written about a clear topic that I know a lot about. I have usually produced 1½ pages of writing each day consisting of several separate pieces which were later combined to create a report with at 5-6 headings. I have effectively and accurately used headings and subheadings to organize my information and lead my reader smoothly through the text. I have used a wide variety of text features (organizational text patterns, text boxes, diagrams with labels, pictures with captions…) throughout my report to teach my reader about my topic and add interest to my writing. I did not write using the passive voice. I have accurately used headings and subheadings to organize my information and lead my reader smoothly through the text. I have used a variety of text features (organizational text patterns, text boxes, diagrams with labels, pictures with captions…) throughout my report to teach my reader about my topic and add interest to my writing. I did not write using the passive voice. I have written about a topic that might be too broad or too narrow, and I might not know a lot about it. I have usually produced less than1½ pages of writing each day consisting of 3-4 pieces which were later combined to create a report with at 3-4 headings. My information may not be categorized correctly or my headings may not clearly identify my information I have used 3-4 text features (organizational text patterns, text boxes, diagrams with labels, pictures with captions…) throughout my report to teach my reader about my topic and add interest to my writing. Some of my writing may have been in the passive voice. I have used a wide variety of honest and precise support within each subheading, as well as extensive content specific vocabulary, to teach my reader everything I know about that subheading. I substantially revised my headings, subheadings, facts, and transitions to make sure they were organized and paragraphed to help my reader find information easily. I chose specific suggestions from conferring with my partner or teacher to improve my writing. All of my sentences are capitalized and have ending punctuation. I use commas correctly in a series, in letters and in dates. I have spelled all of my high frequency words correctly. I am using quotation marks and capitalization correctly in dialogue. All of my subjects and verbs are in agreement. All of my verbs are written in the correct tense. I have written and used all of my possessive nouns correctly. I have used honest and precise support within each subheading, as well as content specific vocabulary, to teach my reader everything I know about that subheading. I have used general support within each subheading, and some content specific vocabulary, to teach my reader what I know about that subheading. I revised my headings, subheadings, facts, and transitions to make sure they were organized and paragraphed to help my reader find information easily. I used suggestions from conferring with my partner or teacher to improve my writing. Most of my sentences are capitalized and have ending punctuation. I usually use commas correctly in a series, in letters and in dates. I have spelled almost all of my high frequency words correctly. I usually use quotation marks and capitalization correctly in dialogue. Most of my subjects and verbs are in agreement. Most of my verbs are written in the correct tense. I have written and used most of my possessive nouns correctly I revised some of my headings, subheadings, facts, and transitions to make sure they were organized and paragraphed to help my reader find information. I may not have used suggestions from conferring with my partner or teacher to improve my writing. Some of my sentences are capitalized and have ending punctuation. I sometimes use commas correctly in a series, in letters and in dates. I have spelled many of my high frequency words correctly. I sometimes use quotation marks and capitalization correctly in dialogue. Some of my subjects and verbs are in agreement. Some of my verbs are written in the correct tense. I have written and used some of my possessive nouns correctly. I have corrected any grammar feature errors that I may have missed earlier in the writing process. I always speak clearly when I share and my piece was published on time. I listen attentively with an intention to learn when others are presenting their work. I have corrected most of the grammar feature errors that I may have missed earlier in the writing process. I usually speak clearly when I share and my piece was published on time. I listen attentively when others are presenting their work. I have corrected some of the grammar feature errors that I may have missed earlier in the writing process. I sometimes speak clearly when I share and my piece was published on time. I sometimes listen attentively when others are presenting their work. TOTAL SCORE: 25-28 points = 4 18-24 points = 3 _____ 4 – student work exceeds objectives - EXCELLENT!! _____ 3 –student work achieves objectives – GREAT WORK!! Teacher Comments: 11-17 points = 2 3rd GRADE RUBRIC 1 – Not Yet I have written about an unclear topic that I might not know a lot about. I have consistently produced less than1½ pages of writing each day consisting of only 1 or 2 pieces which were later combined to create a report with less than 3 headings. My headings and subheadings do not help to organize my information or lead my reader smoothly through the text. I have used 1 or 2 of text features (organizational text patterns, text boxes, diagrams with labels, pictures with captions…) throughout my report to teach my reader about my topic and add interest to my writing. Much of my writing was in passive voice. I have used minimal support within each subheading, and limited content specific vocabulary, to teach my reader a little about that subheading. I did little revision on my headings, subheadings, facts, and transitions to make sure they were organized and paragraphed to help my reader find information. I may not have used suggestions from conferring with my partner or teacher to improve my writing. Few of my sentences are capitalized and have ending punctuation. I seldom use commas correctly in a series, in letters or in dates. I have spelled some all of my high frequency words correctly. I do not use quotation marks and capitalization correctly in dialogue yet. Few of my subjects and verbs are in agreement. Few of my verbs are written in the correct tense. I have written and used few of my possessive nouns correctly. I have missed many of the grammar feature errors that I may have made earlier in the writing process. I might not speak clearly when I share and my piece might not have been published on time. I seldom listen attentively when others are presenting their work. 7-10 points = 1 _____ 2 – student is making progress – GOOD EFFORT!! _____ 1 – student is experiencing difficulty – KEEP WORKING!! 18 FREE VERSE POETRY ANTHOLOGY 3rd GRADE RUBRIC Name: _____________________________________________________ Date: ____________________ 4 – WOW! Anthology Theme, Variety and Productivity I have a strong theme for my anthology and I have written a wide variety of poems that fall within my theme. I have produced at least 1½ pages of writing each day consisting of several separate poems which were later combined to create an anthology of at least 9 poems. 3 – I’m There! 2 - Almost I have a theme for my anthology and I have written a variety of poems that fall within my theme. I have usually produced 1½ pages of writing each day consisting of many separate poems which were later combined to create an anthology of 7-8 poems. I have tried to use a theme for my anthology and most of poems that fall within my theme. I have usually produced less than 1½ pages of writing each day consisting of 2 or 3 poems which were later combined to create an anthology of 5-6 poems. 1 – Not Yet I have written a variety of poems that do not follow a theme. I have consistently produced less than 1½ pages of writing each day consisting of only 1 or 2 poems which were later combined to create an anthology of less than 5 poems. I successfully use the craft tools of I use some of the craft tools of images, line I try to use some the craft tools of images, My poetry shows minimal evidence of the images, line breaks, white space, breaks, white space, repetition, and strong line breaks, white space, repetition, and craft tools of images, line breaks, white Craft Tools repetition, and strong word choice to add word choice to add meaning to my poetry. strong word choice to add meaning to my space, repetition, or strong word choice to meaning to my poetry. poetry. add meaning to my poetry. Beginnings, I use strong beginnings, endings, and I use beginnings, endings, and titles to add I try to use beginnings, endings, or titles that My beginnings, endings, or titles add little or Endings, and titles to add focus and meaning to my meaning to my poems. add meaning to my poems. no meaning to my poems. Titles poems. I use a wide variety of honest and precise I use honest and precise nouns and verbs I try to use honest and precise nouns and My nouns and verbs do not add deeper Word Choice nouns and verbs to add deep meaning to to add deep meaning to my poems. verbs to add meaning to my poems. meaning to my poems. my poems. My poetry drafts show significant My poetry drafts show some evidence of My poetry drafts show little evidence of My poetry drafts show minimal evidence of evidence of revision and attempts to revision and attempts to incorporate revision or few attempts to incorporate revision and few or no attempts to incorporate information I learned in mini- information I learned in mini-lessons. Most information I learned in mini-lessons. Some incorporate information I learned in minilessons. My poetry is capitalized and of my poetry is appropriately capitalized of my poetry is appropriately capitalized and lessons. Little of my poetry is appropriately punctuated to add meaning to my poetry, and punctuated to add meaning, and most punctuated to add meaning, and some of my capitalized and punctuated to add meaning, and my words are spelled correctly. I use of my words are spelled correctly. I usually words are spelled incorrectly. I sometimes and several words are spelled incorrectly. I Revising commas correctly in a series, in letters use commas correctly in a series, in letters use commas correctly in a series, in letters seldom use commas correctly in a series, in (writer’s and in dates. I have spelled all of my high and in dates. I have spelled almost all of and in dates. I have spelled many of my high letters or in dates. I have spelled some all of notebook and frequency words correctly. I am using my high frequency words correctly. I frequency words correctly. I sometimes use my high frequency words correctly. I do not first draft) quotation marks and capitalization usually use quotation marks and quotation marks and capitalization correctly use quotation marks and capitalization correctly in dialogue. All of my subjects capitalization correctly in dialogue. Most of in dialogue. Some of my subjects and verbs correctly in dialogue yet. Few of my subjects and verbs are in agreement. All of my my subjects and verbs are in agreement. are in agreement. Some of my verbs are and verbs are in agreement. Few of my verbs are written in the correct tense. I Most of my verbs are written in the correct written in the correct tense. I have written verbs are written in the correct tense. I have have written and used all of my tense. I have written and used most of my and used some of my possessive nouns written and used few of my possessive possessive nouns correctly. possessive nouns correctly. correctly. nouns correctly. I have corrected any grammar feature I have corrected most of the grammar I have corrected some of the grammar I have missed many of the grammar Editing errors that I may have missed earlier feature errors that I may have missed feature errors that I may have missed feature errors that I may have made (final published copy) in the writing process. earlier in the writing process. earlier in the writing process. earlier in the writing process. I always speak clearly when I share I usually speak clearly when I share and I sometimes speak clearly when I share I might not speak clearly when I share and my piece was published on time. my piece was published on time. I listen and my piece was published on time. I and my piece might not have been Publication / I listen attentively with an intention to attentively when others are presenting sometimes listen attentively when others published on time. I seldom listen Presentation learn when others are presenting their work. are presenting their work. attentively when others are presenting their work. their work. TOTAL SCORE: 25-28 points = 4 18-24 points = 3 11-17 points = 2 7-10 points = 1 _____ 4 – student work exceeds objectives - EXCELLENT!! _____ 2 – student is making progress – GOOD EFFORT!! _____ 3 –student work achieves objectives – GREAT WORK!! _____ 1 – student is experiencing difficulty – KEEP WORKING!! 19 ESSAY-WRITING ABOUT READING: LITERARY ESSAY Name: _____________________________________________________ Date: ____________________ 4 – WOW! 3 – I’m There! 2 - Almost Thesis Statement and Productivity Planning Transitions Introduction and Conclusion Revising (writer’s notebook and first draft) Editing (final published copy) Publishing / Presentation I take a strong and clear position on my reading. I have consistently produced more than 2 pages of writing each day of long and complicated passages of thought. I used a variety of strategies to generate theses and create the topic sentences for my essay; I used several different kinds of evidence for support, categorizing the pieces and sorting them into categories to lead my reader smoothly through the text. I take a clear position on my reading. I have usually produced 2 pages of writing each day of longer and more complicated passages of thought. I used several strategies to generate theses and create the topic sentences for my essay; I used many different kinds of evidence for support, categorizing the pieces and sorting them into categories to lead my reader smoothly through the text. I use repetition, parallelism, and transition words to make my argument clear and compelling. My introduction and my conclusion include interesting words or small stories to interest the reader and make a lasting impression. I revised my thesis, topic sentences, and support pieces to make sure they supported each other and flowed smoothly by using paragraphing. I used information from conferring with my partner or teacher to improve my writing. All of my sentences are capitalized and have ending punctuation. I use commas correctly in a series, in letters and in dates. I have spelled all of my high frequency words correctly. I am using quotation marks and capitalization correctly in dialogue. All of my subjects and verbs are in agreement. All of my verbs are written in the correct tense. I have written and used all of my possessive nouns correctly. I have also corrected any grammar feature errors that I may have missed earlier in the writing process. I always speak clearly when I share and my piece was published on time. I listen attentively with an intention to learn when others are presenting their work. I use repetition, parallelism, or transition words to make my argument clear and compelling. My introduction or my conclusion include interesting words or small stories to interest the reader and make a lasting impression. I revised my thesis, topic sentences, or my support pieces to make sure they supported each other and flowed by using paragraphing. I used information from conferring with my partner or teacher to improve my writing. Most of my sentences are capitalized and have ending punctuation. I usually use commas correctly in a series, in letters and in dates. I have spelled almost all of my high frequency words correctly. I usually use quotation marks and capitalization correctly in dialogue. Most of my subjects and verbs are in agreement. Most of my verbs are written in the correct tense. I have written and used most of my possessive nouns correctly I have also corrected most of the grammar feature errors that I may have missed earlier in the writing process. I usually speak clearly when I share and my piece was published on time. I listen attentively when others are presenting their work. 3rd GRADE RUBRIC 1 – Not Yet I take a position on my reading. I have usually produced less than 2 pages of writing each day. My position or my idea is not clear. I have consistently produced less than 1 page of writing each day. I used 1 or 2 strategies to generate theses and create the topic sentences for my essay; I tried a couple different kinds of evidence for support, attempting to categorize the pieces and sort them into categories to lead my reader through the text... I try to use repetition, parallelism, and transition words, but they may not help to make my argument clear. My introduction or my conclusion might not include interesting words or small stories to interest the reader and make an impression. I wrote my thesis, topic sentences, or my support pieces to support each other and attempted to use paragraphs. I might have used information from conferring with my partner or teacher to improve my writing. Some of my sentences are capitalized and have ending punctuation. I sometimes use commas correctly in a series, in letters and in dates. I have spelled many of my high frequency words correctly. I sometimes use quotation marks and capitalization correctly in dialogue. Some of my subjects and verbs are in agreement. Some of my verbs are written in the correct tense. I have written and used some of my possessive nouns correctly I have also corrected some of the grammar feature errors that I may have missed earlier in the writing process. I sometimes speak clearly when I share and my piece was published on time. I sometimes listen attentively when others are presenting their work. I wrote one thesis and created the topic sentences for my essay; I used only 1 or 2 types of evidence for support, and did not categorize the pieces or sort them into categories to lead my reader through the text. I use very little repetition, parallelism, or transition words and they do not help to make my argument clear. Neither my introduction nor my conclusion includes interesting words or small stories to interest the reader make a lasting impression. I wrote my thesis, topic sentences, or my support pieces, but never revised them to make them support each other. I did not use paragraphing or information from conferring with my partner or teacher to improve my writing. Few of my sentences are capitalized and have ending punctuation. I seldom use commas correctly in a series, in letters or in dates. I have spelled some all of my high frequency words correctly. I do not use quotation marks and capitalization correctly in dialogue yet. Few of my subjects and verbs are in agreement. Few of my verbs are written in the correct tense. I have written and used few of my possessive nouns correctly I have missed many of the grammar feature errors that I may have made earlier in the writing process. I might not speak clearly when I share and my piece might not have been published on time. I seldom listen attentively when others are presenting their work. TOTAL SCORE: 25-28 points = 4 18-24 points = 3 11-17 points = 2 7-10 points = 1 _____ 4 – student work exceeds objectives - EXCELLENT!! _____ 2 – student is making progress – GOOD EFFORT!! _____ 3 –student work achieves objectives – GREAT WORK!!! _____ 1 – student is experiencing difficulty – KEEP WORKING!! 20 RESEARCH AND INFORMATIVE/EXPLANATORY WRITING Name: _____________________________________________________ Date: ____________________ 4 – WOW! 3 – I’m There! 2 - Almost Topic and Productivity Headings / Subheadings Craft Details Revising (writer’s notebook and first draft) Editing (final published copy) Publishing / Presentation TOTAL SCORE: 25-28 points = 4 18-24 points = 3 _____ 4 – student work exceeds objectives - EXCELLENT!! _____ 3 –student work achieves objectives – GREAT WORK!! Teacher Comments: 11-17 points = 2 7-10 points = 1 _____ 2 – student is making progress – GOOD EFFORT!! _____ 1 – student is experiencing difficulty – KEEP WORKING!! 21 3rd GRADE RUBRIC 1 – Not Yet REPORT CARD 3rd GRADE RUBRIC During this Marking Period, your child learned and practiced (teacher indicates applicable genres): personal narrative writing personal essay writing literary essay writing free verse poetry writing informational and research writing 4 – WOW! 3 – I’m There! 2 - Almost 1 – Not Yet WRITING Holistic Writing Assessment Prints fluently (Earlier Grade GLCEs) D, P Writes fluently in cursive holistic writing rubric score = 6 holistic writing rubric score = 5 or 4 holistic writing rubric score = 3 or 2 holistic writing rubric score = 1 Fluently and neatly writes using the upper and lower case manuscript alphabet Fluently and legibly writes using the upper and lower case manuscript alphabet Writes legibly using the upper and lower case manuscript alphabet Writing in upper and lower case manuscript alphabet is difficult to read Fluently and neatly writes using the upper and lower case cursive alphabet Fluently and legibly writes using the upper and lower case cursive alphabet Writes legibly using the upper and lower case cursive alphabet Writing in upper and lower case cursive alphabet is difficult to read or student cannot produce all upper and lower case cursive letters W.HW.03.01 D, P 22 4 – WOW! Works towards increasing writing stamina (not a GLCE) D, S Sets a purpose for writing / Applies prewriting strategies D, C W.PR.03.01/.02 Is consistently focused and intent upon producing significant amounts of quality written work 1. Building a Writing Community 2. Launching the Writing Workshop (10 pages of entries resulting in 2 narratives, 1 of which went through the writing process to publishing) 3. Raising the Quality of Narrative Writing (20 pages of entries resulting in 2 narratives, 1 of which went through the writing process to publishing) 4. Breathing Life Into Essays (at least 1 page of entries daily consisting of several small pieces culminating in the published essay) 5. Literary Essay: Writing About Reading s (at least 1 page of entries daily consisting of several small pieces culminating in the published essay) 6. Free Verse Poetry (at least 1½ pages of entries daily consisting of several separate poems culminating in an anthology of at least 9 poems) 7. Informational and Research Writing (at least 1½ pages of writing daily consisting of several separate pieces culminating in report of at least 6 headings) Chooses from several plans for expressing meaning by considering audience and imitating a combination of authors’ styles. Confidently initiates a variety of strategies to generate, sequence and structure several possible ideas in order to choose the best option. 3 – I’m There! 2 - Almost Remains focused and intent upon producing increasing amounts of quality written work. 1. Building a Writing Community 2. Launching the Writing Workshop (8-10 pages of entries resulting in 2 narratives, 1 of which went through the writing process to publishing) 3. Raising the Quality of Narrative Writing (16-20 pages of entries resulting in 2 narratives, 1 of which went through the writing process to publishing) 4. Breathing Life Into Essays (usually 1 page of entries daily consisting of many small pieces culminating in the published essay) 5. Literary Essay: Writing About Reading (usually 1 page of entries daily consisting of many small pieces culminating in the published essay) 6. Free Verse Poetry (usually 1½ pages of entries daily consisting of several separate poems culminating in an anthology of 7-8 poems) 7. Informational and Research Writing (usually 1½ pages of writing daily consisting of many separate pieces culminating in report of 5-6 headings) Plans for expressing meaning through writing by considering audience and imitating an author’s style. Uses a variety of strategies to generate, sequence and structure ideas Produces an increasing amount of written work. 1. Building a Writing Community 2. Launching the Writing Workshop (6-8 pages of entries resulting in 1-2 narratives, 1 of which went through the writing process to publishing) 3. Raising the Quality of Narrative Writing (12-16 pages of entries resulting in 1- 2 narratives, 1 of which went through the writing process to publishing) 4. Breathing Life Into Essays (less than 1 page of entries daily consisting of 2-3 small pieces culminating in the published essay) 5. Literary Essay: Writing About Reading (less than 1 page of entries daily consisting of 2-3 small pieces culminating in the published essay) 6. Free Verse Poetry (less than1½ pages of entries daily consisting of 2-3 separate poems culminating in an anthology of 5-6 poems) 7. Informational and Research Writing (less than 1½ pages of writing daily consisting of 3-4 separate pieces culminating in report of 2-3 headings) Produces a consistent amount of written work. 1. Building a Writing Community 2. Launching the Writing Workshop (less than 6 pages of entries resulting in1 narrative which went through the writing process to publishing) 3. Raising the Quality of Narrative Writing(less than 12 pages of entries resulting in 1 narrative which went through the writing process to publishing) 4. Breathing Life Into Essays (less than 1 page of entries daily consisting of 12 small pieces which may or may not culminate in a published essay) 5. Literary Essay: Writing About Reading (less than 1 page of entries daily consisting of 1-2 small pieces which may or may not culminate in a published essay) 6. Free Verse Poetry (less than 1½ pages of entries daily consisting of 12 separate poems culminating in an anthology of less than 5 poems) 7. Informational and Research Writing (les than 1½ pages of writing daily consisting of 1-2 separate pieces culminating in report of at 2 or fewer headings) Expresses meaning through writing by imitating an author’s style. Attempts to use a few strategies to generate, sequence and structure ideas, but may not be successful in some of those attempts. Attempts to express meaning through writing, but may be unclear. Struggles to generate, sequence and structure ideas. 23 1 – Not Yet 4 – WOW! Writes initial drafts in multiple sentences and paragraphs / Correctly spell high frequency words D, C W.PR.03.03 W.SP.03.01 Revises drafts (initial writing) based on the input of others W.PR.03.04 S, C, P Edits Writing for Correct Grade Level Grammar Conventions / Uses Resources to Edit for Publishing W.GR.03.01 W.PR.03.05 D, P Exhibits personal style and voice in published writing P 3 – I’m There! 2 - Almost Drafts focused ideas using multiple, mechanically correct, sentences and paragraphs including varying sentence patterns and/or organizational text structures. Mechanically Correct (1st / 2nd gr. GLCEs) = Drafts ideas using short paragraphs, with more than 1 sentence pattern and/or organizational text structure. The sentences may be mechanically incorrect. Mechanically Correct (1st / 2nd gr. GLCEs) = Drafts ideas that may be limited to sentences rather than paragraphs. The sentences are often mechanically incorrect. Mechanically Correct (1st / 2nd gr. GLCEs) = Seeks out and utilizes constructive and specific oral and written responses to own writing by identifying sections of the piece to improve sequence and flow of ideas Consistently uses constructive and specific oral and written responses to own writing by identifying sections of the piece to improve sequence and flow of ideas Sometimes uses constructive and specific oral and written responses to own writing by identifying sections of the piece to improve Seldom uses constructive and specific oral and written responses to own writing Independently initiates editing alone or with others. Confidently seeks out and uses appropriate editing resources. During initial planning and drafting, consistently and correctly: uses subjects and verbs that agree uses accurate verb tenses uses possessive nouns uses commas in a series uses quotation and capitalization in dialogue Uses original style and strong voice to enhance the written message Edits alone or with others. Uses appropriate resources. In the context of revising or editing, consistently and correctly: uses subjects and verbs that agree uses accurate verb tenses uses possessive nouns uses commas in a series uses quotation and capitalization in dialogue Sometimes edits alone or with others. With prompting, uses appropriate editing resources. In the context of revising or editing, usually correctly: uses subjects and verbs that agree uses accurate verb tenses uses possessive nouns uses commas in a series uses quotation and capitalization in dialogue Seldom edits alone or with others. Struggles in using appropriate editing resources. In the context of revising or editing, seldom correctly: uses subjects and verbs that agree uses accurate verb tenses uses possessive nouns uses commas in a series uses quotation and capitalization in dialogue Uses style and voice to enhance the written message Style and voice do not enhance the written message Style and voice are not evident in the student’s writing Easily writes focused drafts expressing clear ideas using mechanically correct paragraphs of varied sentence patterns and/or organizational structures Mechanically Correct (1st / 2nd gr. GLCEs) = uses complete sentences beginning with a capital letter uses complete sentences ending with punctuation capitalizes first and last names capitalizes the pronoun I uses contractions commas is a series, in letters, and in dates capitalizes proper nouns spells high frequency words uses complete sentences beginning with a capital letter uses complete sentences ending with punctuation capitalizes first and last names capitalizes the pronoun I uses contractions commas is a series, in letters, and in dates capitalizes proper nouns spells high frequency words W.PS.03.01 24 uses complete sentences beginning with a capital letter uses complete sentences ending with punctuation capitalizes first and last names capitalizes the pronoun I uses contractions commas is a series, in letters, and in dates capitalizes proper nouns spells high frequency words 1 – Not Yet uses complete sentences beginning with a capital letter uses complete sentences ending with punctuation capitalizes first and last names capitalizes the pronoun I uses contractions commas is a series, in letters, and in dates capitalizes proper nouns spells high frequency words SPEAKING, LISTENING, AND VIEWING S.CN.03.03./.04 When presenting own published narrative or informational writing, consistently speaks in standard American English, using excellent emphasis on key words and using varied pace for effect maintaining exceptional posture, eye contact and position. Listens attentively to ask questions Asks thoughtful, precise, and substantive questions to gain more information and details Speaks effectively and in standard American English when presenting work to an audience P S, C L.CN.03.01 Responds knowledgeably when listening to or viewing the writing of others S, C S.CN.03.02 S.DS.03.01 L.CN.03.02 L.RP.03.01 Knowledgeably listens to, views, or questions the written work of others and responds respectfully and in a way to help and motivate the author revise and improve their writing When presenting own published narrative or informational writing, consistently speaks in standard American English, effectively emphasizing key words and using varied pace for effect maintaining appropriate posture, eye contact and position. Asks substantive questions to gain more information and details When presenting own published narrative or informational writing, sometimes speaks in standard American English, sometimes emphasizing key words and using varied pace for effect, sometimes maintaining appropriate posture, eye contact and position. Sometimes asks substantive questions to gain more information and details When presenting own published narrative or informational writing, seldom speaks in standard American English, seldom emphasizing key words and using varied pace for effect, seldom maintaining appropriate posture, eye contact and position. Knowledgeably listens to, views, or questions the written work of others and responds in a way to help the author revise and improve their writing Listens to, views, or questions the written work of others and responds in a way to help the author revise and, sometimes, improve their writing Listens to, views, or questions the written work of others and responds in an attempt to help the author revise and, sometimes, improve their writing Teacher notes: (D) – observe during planning work in the Writer’s Notebook or drafting work in the Project Folder (S) – observe during student partner revising work (C) – observe during teacher/student (one-on-one) or small group conferring (P) – observe in final published writing and/or presentation 25 Seldom asks substantive questions to gain more information and details