FMS 409 Advanced Screenwriting

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Lecture 2:

Structuring Time

Memento ( 2000)

Jonathan Nolan (short story)

Christopher Nolan (screenplay)

Professor Daniel Cutrara

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Previous Lesson

• Introduction

• Story Analysis

• Plot

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This Lesson

• Structure

• Memento and structuring time

• Assignments

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Structure

Traingng Day ( 2001)

Written by David Ayre

Lesson 2: Part I

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Beginning, Middle, End

• According to Aristotle:

– A whole is that which has a beginning, a middle, and an end. A beginning is that which does not itself follow anything by causal necessity, but after which something naturally is or comes to be. An end, on the contrary, is that which itself naturally follows some other thing, either by necessity, or as a rule, but has nothing following it. A middle is that which follows something as some other thing follows it. A well constructed plot, therefore, must neither begin nor end at haphazard, but conform to these principles.

( The Poetics , Aristotle 350 B.C.E.)

Division into Three Acts

• Division into Three Acts

– Use of Jargon

– Syd Field, Laura Seger, Chris Vogler, Robert Mckee

• Standard Script Length

– Page per minute

The Hero’s Journey

• Chris Vogler/Joseph

Campbell

• Mythology

• Archetypes

• Application to story

– Disney, et. al.

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Act Structure

• The Three Acts

– Act One (approximately 30 pages)

– Act Two (approximately 60 pages)

– Act Three (approximately 20-30 pages)

• Alternatives to Three Acts

– Multiple acts

– Non-linear

Act One

• Introducing the

Story

– Character and

The Problem

– The World and

The Theme

The Lord of the Rings: Fellowship of the Ring (2002)

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Act One (Cont’d)

• The Jargon

– The Setup/Ordinary

World

– Inciting Incident

– Turning Point/Plot

Point/Act Break

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Act Two

• Structures vary, however, tension rises

• Sequences

• Garfinkel’s breakdown

• IIA

• Midpoint

• IIB

• Plot Point 2/Second Turning Point

– Second Act Climax

– Second Act Break

Act Two Conflict

• Rising Action

• Complications and Reversals

• The Special World of the Hero’s Journey

• Values at stake

• Character Arc

Act Three

• Crisis

– Character dilemma

• Climax

– Irreversible

– Filled with meaning

– Showdown

– Appropriate to genre

Batman and the Joker

The Dark Knight (2008)

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Act Three (Cont’d)

• Resolution

– Show effects of climax

– Tie off subplots

– Slow Curtain

– Can set up sequel

Freddy Krueger

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Other Concerns

• Nonlinear

– Pulp Fiction, Memento, Donnie Darko

• Episodic

– Discreet sequences

– Characters don’t return even if protagonist is effected.

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Structure, Plot, Character

• Although Aristotle saw plot as more important than character, Robert

McKee suggests that in good storytelling plot flows out of character.

Aristotle (384 BCE- 322 BCE)

Memento and Structure

Memento

Lesson 2: Part II

The Origin

• Memento Mori

– A Short Story by Jonathan Nolan

– His brother, Christopher Nolan, an independent film writer/director, developed the script

– Memento Mori becomes backstory for the film Memento (2000).

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Memento Genre

• What Genre is this film?

– Psychological Thriller

– Revenge plot

– Film Noir

– Mystery

Memento

Memento- Antecedents

• BetrayalHarold Pinter’s stage play adapted into a film traces an adulterous affair that begins at the end and goes backward in time to show the stages of the relationship, the final surprise being how it began.

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Memento Concept

• Short term memory loss

• Search for wife’s murderer

Memento Structure

• Structure should fit the story.

• The Structure in Memento creates a subjective experience for the audience similar to the experience of the protagonist.

• This supports sympathy and identification by the audience.

Memento – Three Acts

• Act One

– Set up/The Ordinary

World

• Memory loss, urban environment

– The Main Characters

• Leonard, Teddy, Natalie

– Leonard’s Problem

• Did he kill the right guy?

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The Beginning

• Pause the lecture and watch the first clip from Memento .

– How does the opening shot function in terms of the rest of the film?

– What storylines are introduced at the beginning?

– What problem is introduced?

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Act Two

• Conflict

– Mystery- did he kill the right guy?

– How are Teddy and Natalie involved?

– Who is being used?

• Midpoint (complications)

– Dodd

– his wife

• Act Break

– Natalie’s betrayal

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The Second Plot Point

• Pause the lecture and view the second clip from Memento .

– How does this scene with Natalie function to shift the viewer from act two to act three?

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Act Three

• The End of Sammy’s story

– B&W connects up with

Color

• Climax

– Teddy reveals the truth about Sammy

Jankis and Leonard

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The Climax

• Pause the lecture and view the third clip from Memento .

– How does this scene provide a climax for the film?

– What does it do to set up the resolution?

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Resolution

• Leonard chooses not to accept the truth

– Leonard targets Teddy

• Mixed motivation- Teddy used him, now he’ll use

Teddy. He needs a purpose. And he needs to be able to deny his involvement with his wife’s death.

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Storylines and Subplots

• Leonard’s pursuit of John G.

– Teddy, Natalie (both play with his memories)

• Leonard’s wife

– Gives dimension, motivation, sympathy, clue to the truth

• Sammy Jankis

– Backstory, the truth

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Leonard’s Wife

• Importance of the Storyline

– Humanize

– Motivate

– Complicate

– foreshadow

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His Wife

• The last memory he formed

– in bed when he awakens to burglars

• His ritual of remembering and forgetting

– how many times

• Connection to Natalie

– Natalie’s relationship to his wife

• Memories that undermine his “truth.”

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Sammy Jankis

• Form- B&W

– Told in normal chronology

– The week before main narrative (2 rooms)

– Ties back at the end

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Who is Sammy Jankis?

• Importance of Sammy’s story

– Entrance into Leonard’s character.

– What we learn about Leonard is layered.

– Leonard as Sammy.

– What can we know that is real?

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• “How can I heal if I can’t feel time?”

• Memory vs The

Facts

– Meaning

– purpose

Theme

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The Wrap Up

• Structuring Time

• Beginning, Middle, End

• A character’s journey

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Assignments

Memento

Lesson 2: Part III

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E-Board Post #1

• Approximately 200 words. Do a structure critique of one of your favorite films.

• Comment on two of your peers.

End of Lecture 2

Next Lecture:

Arcing Characters

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