Advanced English 6 February 25 Choice Time Finish your poetry analysis. Turn it in to your class bin when it is completed. Read Oliver Twist chapters 813. Look for social themes, and take notes on in your journals (due Monday, February 29). Continue to explore London via ArcGIS, and take notes in your journal about what Dickens would have seen, heard, smelled, tasted, and touched. Think about why he would have written about the topics he chose. Add text evidence the social issues board and vocabulary to the Vivid Vocab. board. Work on vocabulary activities 1 and 2 (due March 16 [A] and March 17 [B]). “The Chimney Sweeper” by William Blake When my mother died I was very young, And my father sold me while yet my tongue Could scarcely cry, “Weep! Weep! Weep! Weep!" So your chimneys I sweep and in soot I sleep. There's little Tom Dacre, who cried when his head, That curl'd like a lamb's back, was shav'd: so I said "Hush. Tom! never mind it, for when your head's bare You know that the soot cannot spoil your white hair." And so he was quiet and that very night, As Tom was a-sleeping, he had such a sight! That thousands of sweepers, Dick, Joe, Ned or Jack. Were all of them lock'd up in coffins of black. And by came an Angel who had a bright key, And he open'd the coffins and set them all free; Then down a green plain leaping, laughing, they run, And wash in a river, and shine in the Sun. Then naked & white, all their bags left behind, They rise upon clouds and sport in the wind; And the Angel told Tom, if he'd be a good boy, He'd have God for his father and never want joy. And so Tom awoke; and we rose in the dark. And got with our bags and our brushes to work. Tho' the morning was cold, Tom was happy and warm; So if all do their duty they need not fear harm. A1: SIFT Poetry Analysis Strategy Symbols Images Line 12: coffins=death Line 8: white hair Line 6: lamb=innocence Line 11: picture the many sweepers Line 3: weep could mean sweep or not being able to talk very well because he is young or did not have much education Line 12: coffins are painted black Line 21: dark=death Line 18: rising on clouds; rising to Heaven Line 8: white hair=being clean from coal, being innocent Lines 19-20: hear the angel talking Line 23: happy and warm=emotions, free Line 4: picture a dirty child A1: SIFT Poetry Analysis Strategy Figures of Speech Tone and Theme 1. The tone is sad or depressed because the child did not really have a choice to be a sweeper or not. He was in poverty. The tone turned joyful at the end because the boy realized he would go to a happy place if he did his duty. The tone is a child’s perspective; he is innocent and ignorant. At the end, the poem’s tone becomes joyful and hopeful because Tom thinks things will get better. 2. Blake wanted to change society’s perspective of chimney sweepers, poor people, child labor, orphans. He also wanted people to see the downfalls of the Indurtrial Revolution. “The Chimney Sweeper” by William Blake When my mother died I was very young, And my father sold me while yet my tongue Could scarcely cry, “Weep! Weep! Weep! Weep!" So your chimneys I sweep and in soot I sleep. There's little Tom Dacre, who cried when his head, That curl'd like a lamb's back, was shav'd: so I said "Hush. Tom! never mind it, for when your head's bare You know that the soot cannot spoil your white hair." And so he was quiet and that very night, As Tom was a-sleeping, he had such a sight! That thousands of sweepers, Dick, Joe, Ned or Jack. Were all of them lock'd up in coffins of black. And by came an Angel who had a bright key, And he open'd the coffins and set them all free; Then down a green plain leaping, laughing, they run, And wash in a river, and shine in the Sun. Then naked & white, all their bags left behind, They rise upon clouds and sport in the wind; And the Angel told Tom, if he'd be a good boy, He'd have God for his father and never want joy. And so Tom awoke; and we rose in the dark. And got with our bags and our brushes to work. Tho' the morning was cold, Tom was happy and warm; So if all do their duty they need not fear harm. A7: SIFT Poetry Analysis Strategy Symbols Line 13: bright key=opening the door to freedom Line 6: lamb=innocence (chimney sweepers) Lines 15-16: running, playing, washing=happiness, freedom, new life, not industrialism Line 13: Angel=helper Line 12: coffin: “cage” of chimney-sweeping; death Line 20: God as their Father: parents they never had Line 3: weep=young age Line 23: happy and warm=safety, happiness, protection Images Lines 15-16: playing Line 3: crying Line 19: Angel speaking Line 12: black coffins, soot Line 6: white hair, curly hair Line 21: picture the darkness Line 21: feel the cold Line 13: picture the bright key Line 15: green plain A7: SIFT Poetry Analysis Strategy Figures of Speech Tone and Theme 1) The chimney sweepers had a bad life filled with sadness. The children dream of a better life. The boys have hope that warms them. 2) Blake wanted to show people problems in society, such as child labor, absent labor regulations, treatment of children/orphans, and poverty. Blake wants to change people’s perspectives because of his emotional poem. “The Chimney Sweeper” by William Blake When my mother died I was very young, And my father sold me while yet my tongue Could scarcely cry, “Weep! Weep! Weep! Weep!" So your chimneys I sweep and in soot I sleep. There's little Tom Dacre, who cried when his head, That curl'd like a lamb's back, was shav'd: so I said "Hush. Tom! never mind it, for when your head's bare You know that the soot cannot spoil your white hair." And so he was quiet and that very night, As Tom was a-sleeping, he had such a sight! That thousands of sweepers, Dick, Joe, Ned or Jack. Were all of them lock'd up in coffins of black. And by came an Angel who had a bright key, And he open'd the coffins and set them all free; Then down a green plain leaping, laughing, they run, And wash in a river, and shine in the Sun. Then naked & white, all their bags left behind, They rise upon clouds and sport in the wind; And the Angel told Tom, if he'd be a good boy, He'd have God for his father and never want joy. And so Tom awoke; and we rose in the dark. And got with our bags and our brushes to work. Tho' the morning was cold, Tom was happy and warm; So if all do their duty they need not fear harm. B1: SIFT Poetry Analysis Strategy Symbols Line 6: hair=lamb’s wool, symbolizes innocent Images Line 18: children rising on clouds Line 6: lamb=innocence Lines 15-16: children playing, laughing, having fun, washing off “dirt” Line 14: coffins=death; Angel=helper Line 3: hear the child crying Line 20: God as their father=have parents Line 17: picture the children lying down and leaving worries behind Line 2: tongue=ability to speak Line 13: key=freedom Line 17: bags=old life, chimney-sweeping Stanza 2: shaving head=letting go of worries; old life with parents being gone Line 4: soot/dirt Stanza 2: picture the white hair being shaved so that it doesn’t become black from soot Line 12: black coffins Line 13: Angel being bright B1: SIFT Poetry Analysis Strategy Figures of Speech Tone and Theme 1. The tone is sad at the beginning because the word choice promotes darkness and coldness. It is also angry in the first stanza because the child is screaming because he is taken from his father. Toward the end of the poem, the children have hope because the dream made them wish for a happy afterlife. 2. Blake wanted to expose problems in society, such as child laborers, a high mortality rate, bad working conditions, and poverty, so that society could change. “The Chimney Sweeper” by William Blake When my mother died I was very young, And my father sold me while yet my tongue Could scarcely cry, “Weep! Weep! Weep! Weep!" So your chimneys I sweep and in soot I sleep. There's little Tom Dacre, who cried when his head, That curl'd like a lamb's back, was shav'd: so I said "Hush. Tom! never mind it, for when your head's bare You know that the soot cannot spoil your white hair." And so he was quiet and that very night, As Tom was a-sleeping, he had such a sight! That thousands of sweepers, Dick, Joe, Ned or Jack. Were all of them lock'd up in coffins of black. And by came an Angel who had a bright key, And he open'd the coffins and set them all free; Then down a green plain leaping, laughing, they run, And wash in a river, and shine in the Sun. Then naked & white, all their bags left behind, They rise upon clouds and sport in the wind; And the Angel told Tom, if he'd be a good boy, He'd have God for his father and never want joy. And so Tom awoke; and we rose in the dark. And got with our bags and our brushes to work. Tho' the morning was cold, Tom was happy and warm; So if all do their duty they need not fear harm. B7: SIFT Poetry Analysis Strategy Symbols Images Line 6: lamb=innocence Stanza 2: white hair Line 8: white hair=purity, innocence Line 12: picture the coffins being black Line 12: coffins of black=death, soot Stanzas 4-5: running, playing, being happy Lines 13: Angel=hope, helper Line 14: doors=barrier, chimney sweep job Line 4: chimney sweeper=hard life, dirty Line 16: wash in the river=free from chimney sweeping Lines 15-16: green grass, running, playing, washing, being clean Line 13: Angel with bright key shining B7: SIFT Poetry Analysis Strategy Figures of Speech Tone and Theme 1. Life is hard for chimney sweepers; the children are sad and depressed. When they dream, though, they become happier. The children become hopeful that life will be better in the future. 2. Blake wants society to change some issues, such as child labor, treatment of children/orphans, poverty, and discrimination. To Do Today: Analyze Victorian poems Have choice time SIFT Poetry Analysis Now you will analyze a poem of your choice. Use the color-coding key to help you find figures of speech. Fill in the SIFT organizer. Be sure to put evidence from the poem to support your answers. You may use line numbers, as well as quotes from the poem. Color-Coding and Labeling Metaphor (a surprising comparison between two unlike things) -Red Simile (a surprising or unlikely comparison using “like” or “as”) -Blue Personification (giving human qualities to anything non-human) -Brown Symbolism (the use of object or action that means something more than its literal meaning) -Orange Imagery (descriptive language that appeals to the senses) -Purple Alliteration (repetition of beginning sounds in a series of words) Green Assonance (the repetition of vowel sounds in a series of words) -Yellow Onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like what it means) Pink