United States History I Imperialism Research Paper Revision Help Guide Thesis Statement CP Thesis: During the 19th and early 20th centuries, Americans were divided over the issue of imperialism because of different opinions on Social Darwinism, the proper role of democracy, and the economic benefits of the action. (Choose 2) Thesis Statement Honors Thesis: During the 19th and early 20th centuries, Americans were divided over the issue of imperialism because of different opinions on Social Darwinism, the proper role of democracy, and the economic benefits of the action. For and Against Imperialism Chart For Imperialism Social Darwinism (racist) The proper role of democracy (Political) The economic benefits of the action (Economic) *Americans need a new frontier *Military would gain power by having bases around the world *Economy would benefit from more markets *American ideals of liberty and democracy would be spread Against Imperialism *Racist beliefs are used to justify controlling other nations *American ideals of liberty and democracy would be spread *People in territories *Oversea under American involvement is control will be denied expensive, their liberties **United States has enough problems at home, should not take on more responsibilities leading to higher taxes and debts Sample topic sentences For Imperialism: *Imperialist believed that American ideals of liberty and democracy would be spread. *Some in America felt that Social Darwinism required the country to help others around the world. *Military leaders, who voiced their opinion on the economic views, spoke in favor of Imperialism. Against Imperialism *Anti-Imperialist believed people in territories under American control would be denied their liberties. *Some in America felt that the theory of Social Darwinism was wrong because racist beliefs were used to justify controlling other nations. *College professors, expressed their opinion on political views, spoke out against the policy of Imperialism. How to set up quote and analysis Introduce Quote (Author’s last name) stated “_______________________” ( ). Introduce Analysis (Author’s last name) explained (questions to think about in analysis *Who said the quote? *When did they say it? *To whom did they say it? *Why did they say it? *How does the quote support your thesis? II. Support Paragraph 1 A. Topic Sentence: (use first supporting argument) The foreign policy of Imperialism would cause people in territories under American control to be denied their liberties. B. Present document using to support: (when is it from, who is talking, what are they talking about) In 1899, Senator George Hoar of Massachusetts expressed his extreme disapproval of Imperialism through giving a speech on why the country should not annex the Phillipines. C. Introduce and present quote: Hoar explains that a country cannot govern another territory against their will. He addresses supporters of Imperialism by saying they cannot take over the Phillipines just “because you think it is for their good, when they do not; because you think you are going to give them the blessings of liberty”. D. Explain Quote: (what does it mean) Through this, Hoar is trying to express that the ideals and values of people in this country are not necessarily the same for people in other lands and that it is not fair to impose them on people without their consent. E. Connect to thesis: Hoar’s speech presents one of the most prominent arguments against Imperialism as he believed that if America takes over other countries that are unwilling, those people will be denied their civil liberties. (change the items in red to match your document and ideas in topic sentence) Sample Quotes for Political stance in thesis statement For Political Lodge stated “the taking of the Phillippines does not violate the principles of the Declaration of Independence, but will spread them among a people who have never known liberty” (83). Loge explained that the U.S. going to the island of the Phillipines to spread the principles of the D.O.I. on the Filipinos did not break any laws. In fact America spread life, liberty and the pursuit of happiness to a new group of people in the Phillippines. OR Lodge explained that by taking the area of the Phillipines was not going against the Declaration of Independence but it was going to extend the rights of life, liberty and the pursuit of happiness to the Filipinos. The Americans by helping the Filipinos gave them a gov’t that enabled them rights they never had. Against Political Hoar stated “you have no right at the cannon’s mouth to impose on an unwilling people your Declaration of Independence and your Constitution and you notions of freedom and notions of what is good” (82). Hoar explained that the U.S. should not push the American gov’t on the Filipino people because they did not have the right to vote about the U.S. gov’t the Filipinos were forced to follow it. Sample Quotes for Social Darwinism stance in thesis statement For Social Darwinism President Mckinley stated “that there was nothing left for us to do but to take them all, and educate the Filipinos and uplift and civilize and Christianize them and by God’s grace do the very best we could by them as our fellowmen for whom Christ also died” (82). Mckinley explained that the U.S. wanted to educate the Filipinos and teach them the American cultures. The U.S. also wanted to teach the Filipinos about Christianity in their village. Against Social Darwinism Sumner stated “We assume that what we like and practice and what we think better, must come as a welcome blessing to Spanish-Americans and Filipinos. This grossly and obviously untrue. They hate our ways. They are hostile to our ideas. Our religion, language, institutions, and manners offend them…” (Sumner). Sumner explained that Spanish Americans and Filipinos rejected the culture the U.S. brought to the island. The people in the Philippines did not want to accept the new religion of Christianity, English language and American gov’t as it insulted their culture. OR Sumner explained that the Filipinos and Spanish Americans did not like the Americans culture or gov’t and did not like the U.S pushing it on the Filipino people for example the push on religion and Chrisitanity. Sample Quotes for Economic stance in thesis statement For Economics Mahan stated “Americans must begin to look outward. The growing production of the country demands it” (81). Mahan stated the U.S. needed to spread its markets to the Pacific. America needed markets because factories had a large supply of goods that needed to be sold and would profit for American business and gov’t. Against Economics Bryan stated “When trade is secured by force the cost of securing it and returning it must be taken out of the profits and the profits are never large enough to cover the expense. Such a system would never be …” (Bryan). Bryan explained that oversea involvement was expensive, leading to higher taxes and debt for the American people. The U.S. would spend more money building the new territories but the new territories would not make enough money to pay off the debt that it cost to expand and American tax payers would pay without receiving any benefits. Citation Material College Prep & Honors DOCUMENT 1 Strong, Josiah. “Our Country.” (1891): 222-223. Rpt. in Document-Based Assessment Activities for U.S. History Classes. Ed. Kenneth Hilton. Portland, ME: Walch, 1999. 81. Print. DOCUMENT 2 Mahan, Alfred T. The Interest of America in Sea Power. (1897): 21-22. Rpt. in Document-Based Assessment Activities for U.S. History Classes. Ed. Kenneth Hilton. Portland, ME: Walch, 1999. 81. Print. DOCUMENT 3 Rusling, James. “Interview with President William McKinley,” The Christian Advocate 22 (Jan. 1903): 17. Rpt. in Document-Based Assessment Activities for U.S. History Classes. Ed. Kenneth Hilton. Portland, ME: Walch, 1999. 82. Print. DOCUMENT 4 Hoar, George. “The Lust for Empire.” Congressional Record. (1898): 493-503. Rpt. in Document-Based Assessment Activities for U.S. History Classes. Ed. Kenneth Hilton. Portland, ME: Walch, 1999. 82. Print. DOCUMENT 5 Beveridge, Albert. “In Support of an American Empire.” Congressional Record. (1900): 704-712. Rpt. in DocumentBased Assessment Activities for U.S. History Classes. Ed. Kenneth Hilton. Portland, ME: Walch, 1999. 83. Print. DOCUMENT 6 Lodge, Henry Cabot. “The Retention of the Philippine Islands.” Senate of the United States. Washington, D.C. (7 Mar. 1900): 7-14 Rpt. In Document-Based Assessment Activities for U.S. History Classes. Ed. Kenneth Hilton. Portland, ME: Walch, 1999. 83. Print. DOCUMENT 7 Schurz, Carl. “The Platform of the Anti-Imperialist League.” Chicago: 1899. Rpt. in Document-Based Assessment Activities for U.S. History Classes. Ed. Kenneth Hilton. Portland, ME: Walch, 1999. 83. Print. Anti-Imperialist William G. Sumner, Yale University professor, in an 1898 speech Sumner, William G. “The Conquest of the United Stated by Spain.” Delivered before the Phi Beta Kappa Society of Yale University at College Street Hall, New Haven, 16 January 1899. Molinari Institute. Web. 5 March 2012. Anti-Imperialist Platform of the American Anti-Imperialist League, October 17, 1899 Schurz, Carl. “Anti-Imperialist Platform of the American Anti-Imperialist League.” Address at the Anti-Imperialist Conference in Chicago. 17 October 1899. Liberty and Anti-Imperialism. Web. 5 March 2012. Pro-Imperialist Albert J. Beveridge, leading imperialist and later United States senator, in an 1898 speech Beveridge, Albert. “The March of the Flag.” Campaign Speech. 16 Sept. 1898. Rpt. in Great Debates in American History. Ed. Peter Pappas. Needham, MA: Prentice-Hall, Inc., 1989. GD28. Print. Pro-Imperialist The Reverend Josiah Strong, Our Country, 1885 Strong, Josiah. “Our Country.” (1891): 222-223. Rpt. in Document-Based Assessment Activities for U.S. History Classes. Ed. Kenneth Hilton. Portland, ME: Walch, 1999. 81. Print. The following two sources were only given to Honors classes. U.S. Senator Albert J. Beveridge speaks on the Philippine Question, U.S. Senate, Washington, D.C., January 9, 1900 Beveridge, Albert J. “The Philippine Question.” U.S. Senate Speech, Washington, D.C. 9 January 1900. UCLA International Institute, 10 Dec. 2004. Web. 5 March 2012. William Jennings Bryan’s Acceptance Speech for the Democratic nomination for President Indianapolis, IN, August 8, 1900 Bryan, William Jennings. “Imperialism.” Democratic National Convention Speech, Indianapolis, Indiana. 8 August 1900. Great American Documents, 2008. Web. 4 March 2012.