Character Analysis of Huck Finn Step I: Brainstorm what you know about Huck Finn. Appearance Background Personality Relationship Conflicts Character Changes Step II: Take a good look at your brainstormed information about Huckleberry Finn then choose ONE of the following topics about which to write a formal paragraph: - Discuss the qualities Huck possesses that are necessary for survival on the frontier. - What is "civilization" in the mind of Huck? - What is Huck’s primary motivation – greed, adventure, safety, or something else? Step III: Identify the topic of your paragraph in a topic sentence. *Remember that the topic sentence should identify the character Huckleberry Finn, the book title and author, and the point your writing will make. Ex. 1: Joe Schmo proves that a quality life does not have to include the actions and beliefs held by most of society in It Was All My Idea, a novel written by Judy Jackson. Ex. 2: In John Smith’s classic tale The Life of My Brother, Kirk Leonard depicts a man filled with greed and hostility. Ex. 3: Brian Brandy, the protagonist in Gene Geoffrey’s What a Day, demonstrates a strong will in his quest for survival. Topic Sentence: _______________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ Step IV: Identify, in your notes (brainstorm), those points about your character that support the claim you make in your topic sentence. Using those points, outline the structure of your paragraph into a graphic organizer (next page). All points/evidence should work to prove your topic sentence. TS SD1 SD2 SD3 EX & QUOTE EX & QUOTE EX & QUOTE EXPL EXPL EXPL CL Step V: Using your graphic organizer as a guide, write a rough draft of your essay. Peer edit for grammar, spelling, punctuation, organization, content, and focus. REVISE Peer edit for vocabulary usage, voice, and sentence structure. REVISE Peer conference. REVISE – make FINAL COPY! Parenthetical Documentation The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn Punctuation Example - Jim questions, “Say—who is you?” (8). comma - “Well, I knows what I’s gwyne to do,” Jim tells the stranger (8). colon - Jim hears a noise and knows someone is near him, so he asks aloud who it could be: “Say—who is you?” (8). nothing - Jim tries to quiet the noise and decides he “knows what I’s gwyne to do” (8). Quoting 4 or more lines *block *no quotes *no endmark When Tom Sawyer and the boys agree on the terms of their oath, Tom reiterates their responsibility to one another: It swore every boy to stick to the band, and never tell any of the secrets; and if anyone done anything to any boy in the band, which ever boy was ordered to kill that person and his family must do it, and he mustn’t eat and he mustn’t sleep till he had killed them and hacked a cross in their breasts, which was the sign of the band. (11) As the leader, Tom… Quoting a Quote Some of the boys wonder what family member of Huck’s they would kill: “Ben Rogers says: ‘Here’s Huck Finn, he ain’t got no family—what you going to do ‘bout him?’” (12). *Quotes are double spaced the same as the rest of the document. Directions: Punctuate each of the following sentences that include internal documentation. 1. The boys pricked their fingers with a pin “to get blood to sign with” (12). 2. Tom Sawyer tells the boys “We ain’t burglars. That ain’t no sort of style. We are highwaymen” (12). 3. All of the boys thought the oath was agreeable “Everybody said it was a real beautiful oath” (12). 4. Huck arrived back home before dawn. He said he “clumb up the shed and crept into my window just before day was breaking” (13). 5. Huck arrived back home before dawn. He said “I clumb up the shed and crept into my window just before day was breaking” (13). 6. Huck arrived back home before dawn “I [Huck] clumb up the shed and crept into my window just before day was breaking” (13). 7. Huck Finn contemplates what others tell him “I thought this over for two or three days, and then reckoned I would see if there was anything in it” (17). 8. Huck Finn contemplated “…for two or three days, and then reckoned I would see if there was anything in it” (17). 9. Huck Finn claims “I thought this over for two or three days, and then reckoned I would see if there was anything in it” (17). 10. Huck is startled when he sees Pap sitting in his room “When I lit my candle and went up to my room that night, there set pap, his own self!” (20).