SACE Stage 2 ENGLISH STUDIES SCHOOL No: 322 TASK SHEET SACE No: 378168J Assessment Type 2: Individual Study Response: paired texts – and The Road to Wigan Pier by George Orwell Get Carter by Mike Hodges Context: an individual study of two texts chosen sequentially – the first within the context of student interest and enthusiasm; the second within the context of ideas generated by the first, under teacher guidance – and developed through the collection of support material designed to analyse various aspects of both texts. Task: write a maximum 2,000 word critical essay that explores the constructed nature of texts and the influence of sociocultural contexts on reader responses by answering a question created by yourself and generated by your collection of support material on both texts. Topic: (write out your question) Explore the ways in which George Orwell’s The Road to Wigan Pier and Mike Hodges’ Get Carter use setting to create empathy for the socially outcast of Northern England. Learning Requirements Assessment Design Criteria 1. analyse texts, demonstrating depth of understanding through the identification of the structural, conventional, and stylistic features used by authors Knowledge and Understanding 2. understand that the interpretation of texts is influenced by the interplay between what the author presents in the text, the context in which the text was generated, and what the reader, viewer, or listener brings to the text 3. compare and contrast the ways in which texts are constructed 4. use evidence to develop and support critical reasoning in the form of sustained argument 5. compose texts that engage the reader, viewer, or listener 6. express ideas clearly and accurately in a range of appropriate forms. KU1. Knowledge and understanding of authors’ use of stylistic features and language techniques to communicate ideas and influence the reader’s response. Capabilities Learning KU2. Knowledge and understanding of ideas, values, and beliefs in texts. KU3. Knowledge and understanding of the textual conventions of different text types. Analysis An1. Analysis of the interplay between what authors present in texts and the experiences, ideas, values, and beliefs of readers. Personal Development An2. Analysis of the similarities and differences in texts, in comparative exercises. An3. Analysis of the ways in which language techniques are used to influence opinions and decisions in texts. Work Application Ap1. The use of language skills and techniques to create coherent texts that address the meaning and intention of the task. Ap2. Recognition of connections between texts, and an integrated approach to comparing and contrasting texts. Citizenship Ap3. The use of evidence from texts to develop and support a response. Ap4. The use of textual, structural, and conventional features of selected text types and forms of presentation to convey meaning. Communication Communication C1. Accuracy, clarity, and fluency of expression. C2. Appropriate form and register for audience and purpose. Students can refer to the rubric provided over the page to identify the performance standards that they need to demonstrate to reach their highest possible level of achievement in this task. Knowledge and Understanding A 15 14 13 Knowledge and understanding of a wide range of ways in which authors use stylistic features and language techniques to communicate complex and familiar ideas, and to influence the reader’s response. Detailed knowledge and understanding of the ideas, values, and beliefs in familiar and unfamiliar texts. Knowledge and understanding of the ways in which creators and readers of familiar and unfamiliar texts use a range of textual conventions to make meaning. B 12 11 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 Analysis of complex connections between personal experiences, ideas, values, and beliefs, and those explored in familiar and unfamiliar texts. Use of a wide range of language skills and techniques to create sophisticated and coherent texts that address the meaning and intention of the task. Fluent and precise writing and speaking, using appropriate style and structure for a range of mainly unfamiliar audiences and contexts. In comparative exercises, a perceptive analysis of connections between texts, based on analysis and synthesis of similarities and/or differences. Perceptive analysis of a range of ways in which authors use language techniques to influence opinions and decisions in familiar and unfamiliar texts. In comparative exercises, a perceptive recognition of connections between texts, through responses that integrate discussion of texts and move easily between them. Detailed and appropriate use of evidence from texts to support responses, with textual references incorporated fluently in discussion. Knowledge and understanding of some ideas, values, and beliefs in familiar, and some unfamiliar, texts. In comparative exercises, a clear analysis of connections between texts, based on analysis of similarities and/or differences. Appropriate use of evidence from texts to support responses, with textual references incorporated in discussion. Knowledge and understanding of a narrow range of ways in which authors use stylistic features and language techniques to communicate mainly familiar ideas, and to influence the reader’s response. Knowledge and understanding of some ideas, values, and beliefs in mainly familiar texts. Knowledge and restricted understanding of some simple stylistic features and language techniques used by authors to communicate mainly familiar ideas, and to influence the reader’s response. Knowledge and understanding of some familiar ideas, values, and beliefs in familiar texts. Knowledge and understanding of a restricted range of simple stylistic features and language techniques used by authors to communicate familiar ideas, and to influence the reader’s response. Analysis of a range of ways in which authors use language techniques to influence opinions and decisions in familiar, and some unfamiliar, texts. Analysis of simple connections between personal experiences, ideas, values, and beliefs, and those explored in familiar texts. In comparative exercises, analysis of connections between texts, based on some understanding of similarities and/or differences. Descriptive analysis of a number of ways in which authors use language techniques to influence opinions and decisions in familiar texts. Reference to simple connections between uncomplicated personal experiences, ideas, values, and beliefs, and those explored in familiar texts. In comparative exercises, answers that make partial comparisons and contrasts. Reference to some ways in which authors use a narrow range of language techniques to influence opinions and decisions in familiar texts. Recognition of a simple connection between a straightforward personal, experience, idea, value, or belief, and that explored in a highly familiar text. Identification of an idea, a value, or a belief in familiar texts. In comparative exercises, answers that make a simple comparison or contrast. Knowledge and understanding of the ways in which a creator or reader of a highly familiar text uses textual conventions to make factual meaning. Reference to the way in which an author uses language techniques to influence opinions and decisions in a highly familiar text. Appropriate use of form and register to convey mostly complex meaning in a range of unfamiliar contexts. Skills in using the textual, structural, and conventional features of text types for a range of familiar and unfamiliar contexts, audiences, and purposes. Use of a range of language skills and techniques to create clear and coherent texts that address the meaning and intention of the task. Knowledge and understanding of a restricted number of ways in which creators and readers of a narrow range of familiar texts use some textual conventions to make simple or factual meaning. E Communication Analysis of some complex connections between personal experiences, ideas, values, and beliefs, and those explored in familiar, and some unfamiliar, texts. Knowledge and understanding of some of the ways in which creators and readers of a range of familiar texts use textual conventions to make simple or factual meaning. D Application Knowledge and understanding of the ways in which authors use stylistic features and language techniques to communicate complex and familiar ideas, and to influence the reader’s response. Knowledge and understanding of the ways in which creators and readers of mainly familiar texts use some textual conventions to make meaning. C Analysis In comparative exercises, recognition of connections between texts, through responses that compare and contrast texts in an integrated way. Skills in using some of the textual, structural, and conventional features of text types for a range of mainly familiar, and some unfamiliar, contexts, audiences, and purposes. Use of language skills and techniques to create texts that address the meaning and intention of the task. In comparative exercises, recognition of some connections between texts, through responses that compare and contrast texts, usually in a sequential rather than an integrated way. Competent use of evidence from texts to support responses, with some use of textual references in discussion. Skills in using some of the textual, structural, and conventional features of some text types for familiar contexts, audiences, and purposes. Use of some language skills and techniques to create texts that partly address the meaning and intention of the task. In comparative exercises, some awareness of connections between texts, through partial responses that mainly deal with texts separately. Some use of evidence from texts to support a response, with use of a narrow range of textual references. Mostly fluent and precise writing and speaking, using appropriate style and structure for a range of mostly familiar audiences and contexts. Appropriate use of form and register to convey complex and simple meaning in a range of familiar and unfamiliar contexts. Generally fluent and functional writing and speaking, using appropriate style and structure for familiar audiences and contexts. Appropriate use of form and register to convey simple meaning in a narrow range of familiar and unfamiliar contexts. Achievement of a level of fluency in writing and speaking, in a mainly appropriate style. Occasionally appropriate use of form and/or register to convey simple meaning in familiar contexts. Skills in using some of the textual, structural, or conventional features of a text type for a familiar context, audience, or purpose. Attempted use of a restricted range of language skills and/or techniques to create a text or texts that attempt to address the meaning or intention of the task. In comparative exercises, identification of limited connections between texts, through fragmented responses that deal with texts separately. Restricted use of evidence from texts to support a simple response, with limited textual reference. Skills in using the textual, structural, or conventional features of a text type for a highly familiar context, audience, or purpose. Emerging development of fluency in an occasionally appropriate style. Occasionally appropriate use of form and register to convey literal meaning in highly familiar contexts. SACE #: 378168J English Studies Word Count: 1,845 Explore the ways in which George Orwell’s The Road to Wigan Pier and Mike Hodges’ Get Carter use setting to create empathy for the socially outcast of Northern England. In the investigative journalism of George Orwell’s book The Road to Wigan Pier and the brutish 1970’s crime drama of Mike Hodges’ film Get Carter, setting is used to create empathy with England’s northern working class. Hodges and Orwell both use a conflicted ‘protagonist’ at odds in different ways with their surroundings. Orwell explores a self-appraisal of his own socio-economic guilt as a middle class outsider, while Hodges’ uses a working class avenger in the form of Jack Carter, the film’s main character. Another aspect of setting which Hodges and Orwell use is in the contrasting portrayal of sympathy. The exploration of setting through a tragic mode is also common to both texts’ portrayal of the socially outcast. But while Orwell slowly lures the reader into the tragedy of a desperately bleak and monotonous lifestyle, Hodges effectively uses the framework of a revenge tragedy to expose the protagonist’s vulnerability in a town he knows very little about since he left. Orwell and Hodges use a conflicted protagonist at odds with their surroundings to create empathy for the socially outcast of Northern England. Orwell explores his own self-analysis of middle-class guilt and Hodges uses a form of working class revenge revolving around the main character. In analyzing the effect of setting on empathy for the socially outcast ,Orwell uses a steady self-analysis of his own middle-class guilt, after a fairly lengthy discussion on this it becomes apparent to the reader that he actually slips into a state of empathy for the people immediately around him. The empathy that becomes visible to the reader in the second half of the book is derived from much deeper roots than a mere visit to the northern towns of England. Orwell analyzes how his own empathy begins to evolve into a form of shame and disgust, as noted by Dr. N.R. Sawant who observed that Orwell’s approach in the book goes beyond describing poverty by revealing his own compassion and disgust at the affront of human decency represented by squalid housing. Thus Orwell’s response to his surroundings whilst on his investigative stay in northern England was one of both empathetic research as well as a method of socio revenge. Hodges’ lead character Jack Carter is motivated by a man-hunting revenge, but one led through the working class immediately surrounding him. Carter lets his own cool, steely, and untouchable guard down during the middle section of the film where he begins to empathize for the hardworking, gritty people around him, who are coincidently members of his family and close friends. More importantly, also related to this is Carter’s revenge. As the film appears to steadily progress towards its climax, Carter’s thirst for revenge increases incrementally. Through the circumstances within which he finds himself,, a rundown crammed terraced house with an over sensitive, over charging owner; ‘joker’ gangsters whom he initially deems annoying rather than threatening, and a general sense of secrecy on Carter’s part - the Newcastle town drives him to breaking point and eventually revenge, not only for his brother, but for the huge difficulty and effort he has faced since he arrived in the town. Additionally, and the key element of this revenge of sorts, is the fact that Carter strongly empathizes with his brother upon realizing he was a victim of setting and socio cultural origins. This is most apparent when Carter suddenly stabs Thorpey, the nervous messenger of Cyril Kinnear. Cinematically, Hodges uses the scene as a sort of epiphany for Carter, a sudden realization and the panic and anger that are associated with that, resulting in Thorpey’s death. Carter feels the injustice relays back to the working class people he is surrounded by believing that his brother was a 622 SACE #: 378168J English Studies Word Count: 1,845 victim of the social outcasts and the circumstances associated with them. More importantly, the incident with Thorpey becomes a focus for Carter’s recognition for the oppression suffered by the working class. Orwell and Hodges create empathy for the working class through their contrasting portrayal of sympathy; however they also show how they have a deep thirst to display their motivations of sympathy. They do this predominantly through setting. Orwell uses his work in The Road to Wigan Pier on the social outcasts of northern England to display a desire to expose the “labyrinth of poverty”. After publishing the book Orwell wrote “Every line of serious work that I have written since 1936 has been written, directly or indirectly against totalitarianism and for democratic socialism.” Thus Orwell expressed his empathy for the socially outcast through his writing, which in turn, only served to grow his hunger for democratic socialism. An example of Orwell using the ugliness of his surroundings to generate sympathy in him was in the Newcastle area, where he commented that “Northerners have got used to that kind of thing and do not notice it”. This is where the main truth in his writing lies, he feels an empathy for the people around him because they seem completely blind and oblivious to their surroundings as well as things like their livelihoods, and simply cannot see that this is what is continually pushing them into a state of depression, sadness and an overall feeling that they cannot escape. The labyrinth of poverty that Orwell uses so well to evoke true empathy mirrors that of Hodges in Get Carter. Hodges makes great use of a power figure to create a sense of inferiority amongst the social outcast through Jack Carter. The product of his time, as a hardened gangster with apparently endless experience, Carter’s commands respect. This immediately sends the people around him into the state of inferiority that becomes ever more apparent as the film progresses. This is not done merely through speech; body language and appearance also have a heavy influence. A major episode displaying this has people immediately stop what they are doing to look at Carter the moment he enters the local pub; keeping their distance as if by instinct. As soon as he steps to the bar the barman asks “What’ll it be sir?” to which Carter replies “Just a pint” and instantaneously the barman brings the drink and does not even bother Carter. This shows how the use of a power figure can create a feeling of immediate inferiority even on mere appearance. Hodges has done this by using a lighting technique that becomes more apparent throughout the film; he casts Carter in a darker light and at a slightly higher height giving a physical image of superiority to add to the conversation between Carter and the Barman. Suschitzky also uses the darker light to give a sense of mystery, further protecting Carter’s identity in the town and giving the barmen a sense of threat through the unknown, meaning that he would serve the drink as he doesn’t know the consequences of not doing as Carter asks. Furthermore, Hodges also plays around with the power surrounding Carter through the evident use of setting. In the final scenes of the film Carter is seen scampering around the back streets and crowded areas of Newcastle in blood thirsty revenge. As he is moving around the city he is imbued with power by both Hodges and his cinematographer Wolfgang Suschitzky, through the use of camera angles and lighting that isolate Carter from the characters around him with a commanding and authoritative look, particularly in the scenes where he comes up against three other gangsters and defeats them. However, in the final scene of the film Carter is seen to be relieved, walking alone down the pile of coal and about to throw his shotgun away. This is where he is shot and the film abruptly ends. It is a metaphor for Carter’s time in Newcastle, Carter being shot represents him becoming as worthless as the slag surrounding his dead carcus. More importantly, it is a short snippet of how the use of a power figure is turned around in a very short space of time. It shows how the viewer becomes able to feel a 1,337 SACE #: 378168J English Studies Word Count: 1,845 great amount of empathy towards Jack Carter whereas for the majority of the film it has been made obvious that Carter is in an empathetic mood towards the people around him; this is because he sees them as not only social outcasts, but dregs of society, despite him being a noted gangster which is not considered to be a highly noble profession. Orwell and Hodges both explore the role of the outcast in their texts’ social settings through the use of a tragic mode George Orwell uses a steady form of tragedy to gently lure the viewer into what his beliefs are, eventually turning the audience’s interest in the people of northern England into one of tragedy for them, realizing the monotonous lives in which they are forever encased. Orwell stayed in northern England visiting many different towns and cities for quite a long period of time. Orwell structured the book arising from this research into a first section describing the lives of the people he is studying in detail. The reader gains a sense of empathy as Orwell describes his own with the people he is studying, in dismal settings such as a small shop, or a coal mine. Orwell’s descriptions gradually build an awareness of their tragic life style, doing the same tasks over and over and not being allowed an imagination in such a small, narrow world. This narrow mindedness that Orwell uses so effectively also underpins the tragedy surrounding Jack Carter as he moves through Newcastle. Hodges and cinematographer Suschitzky present stark images of barren scenery and horrid factories that give the viewer an idea of what it would be like to exist in the tragedy of a depressed 1970’s industrial England. The repetition of such scenery creates a sense of tragic inevitability in the lives of people of the town, exacerbated even further by the sense the film creates of their lack of awareness that they are stuck inside the trap for their whole lives. They try to fill the void that they are missing in their lives in various ways; the majorities appear to drink heavily whilst others take more drastic measures such as turning to the life of a fully-fledged criminal. In The Road to Wigan Pier and Get Carter George Orwell and Mike Hodges use the theme of setting in a broader sense to create a form of empathy. This is cleverly done in several ways. Firstly, a form of contrast is used by both author and director, with Orwell using a fascinating example of his own appraisal of his middleclass guilt, which can be paired with Hodges use of a form of working class revenge via his protagonist Jack Carter. Also, a contrast exists in the portrayal of sympathy. Orwell uses his findings on the social outcast as a desire to expose the labyrinth of poverty whilst Hodges uses a power figure. Another major point in the two texts is the use of tragedy to create a certain type of empathy for the reader and viewer. 1,845