READING THE WORLD – POETRY UNIT EIR - January / February 2012 Day 1 CW: Begin Poetry Unit, What is Poetry? HW: Do Vocab 11 & 12; Bring “Reading the World” text to class Day 2 CW: Review vocab, introduce Speaker (personae) “Mirror” by Sylvia Plath (United States) packet HW: “Hazel Tells Laverne” (United States) packet Day 3 CW: Tone – “Song of Becoming” – Tuqan (Palestine / Israel) p. 400 HW: Read “Thoughts of Hanoi” – Thi Vihn (Vietnam) p. 515 Day 4 CW: Rhyme Scheme and Meter “Ten Songs” – Auden (Britain) p. 161 HW: Read “Do Not Go Gentle into that Good Night” – Thomas (Wales) p. 153 Day 5 CW: Continue with meter work “My Papa’s Waltz” – Roethke (America) packet HW: Scansion work (Packet) Day 6 CW: Alliteration / Assonance “The Reapers” – Toomer (America) packet HW: “First Frost” – Voznesesky (Russia) p. 237 Day 7 CW: Personification “The Guitar” – Lorca (Spain) p. 182 HW: Read “And Yet the Books” – Milosz (Poland) p.215 Day 8 CW: Figurative Language – Similes and Metaphors “Two Bodies” – Paz (Mexico) p. 53 HW: “Alone” – Transtomer (Sweden) p. 233 Day 9 CW: Imagery “Sweet Like a Crow” – Ondaatje (Sri Lanka / Canada) p. 456 HW: “Love after Love” – Walcott (St. Lucia) p.71 Day 10 CW: Symbols “Clearances” – Heaney (Ireland) p. 150 HW: Read “The Shadow” – Sankichi (Japan) p. 539 Day 11 CW: Review poetry, practice poetry quiz HW: Prepare for poetry quiz Day 12 CW: Poetry quiz Poem Analysis: A Guide In analyzing poetry, employ a consistent strategy, looking at the poem from the outside in. Look first to form, then to content, then to theme. Begin as follows. 1. Identify the form of the poem. Is it free verse? If yes, what patterns are part of the poem. If no, what is the rhyme scheme and the meter? Is the pattern something you easily recognize? (e.g. Is it a sonnet?) Be sure to note any variations in the patterns. 2. Look at the sound devices used in the poem. Identify alliteration and assonance, repetitions, rhyme, meter. What effect do they create? 3. Identify the speaker. What information can you infer about the speaker? Is there more than one speaker? 4. Look at the images in the poem. What are the similes? the metaphors? Is there any personification? 5. Identify the tone words in the poem. Circle any words that create a mood. What is the tone of the poem? 6. Summarize the events of the poem. 7. Identify and explore the themes of the poem. Poetry Terms SPEAKER TONE TYPES OF IMAGERY: SIMILE METAPHOR PERSONIFICATION SOUND DEVICES: ALLITERATION ASSONANCE REPETITION RHYME SCHEME METER FREE VERSE NARRATIVE STANZA Mirror by Sylvia Plath I am silver and exact. I have no preconceptions Whatever I see I swallow immediately Just as it is, unmisted by love or dislike. I am not cruel, only truthful – The eye of a little god, four-cornered. 5 Most of the time I meditate on the opposite wall. It is pink, with speckles. I have looked at it so long I think it is a part of my heart. But it flickers. Faces and darkness separate us over and over. Reapers – by Jean Toomer Black reapers with the sound of steel on stones Are sharpening scythes. I see them place the hones In their hip-pockets as a thing that’s done, And start their silent swinging, one by one. Black horses drive a mower through the weeds, And there, a field rat, startled, squealing bleeds, His belly close to the ground, I see the blade, Blood-stained, continue cutting weeds and shade. Now I am a lake. A woman bends over me, 10 Searching my reaches for what she really is. Then she turns to those liars, the candles or the moon. I see her back, and reflect it faithfully. She rewards me with tears and an agitation of hands. I am important to her. She comes and goes. 15 Each morning it is her face that replaces the darkness. In me she has drowned a young girl, and in me an old woman Rises toward her day after day, like a terrible fish. My Papa’s Waltz – by Theodore Roethke The whiskey on your breath Could make a small boy dizzy; But I hung on like death: Such waltzing was not easy. We romped until the pens Slid from the kitchen shelf; My mother’s countenance Could not unfrown itself. The hand that held my wrist Was battered on one knuckle; At every step you missed My right ear scraped a buckle. You beat time on my head With a palm caked hard by dirt, Then waltzed me off to bed Still clinging to your shirt. Day 2 Homework “Hazel Tells LaVerne” By Katharyn Machan Aal (United States) last night im cleanin out my howard johnsons ladies room when all of a sudden up pops this frog musta come from the sewer swimmin aroun an tryin ta climb up the sida the bowl so i goes to flushm down but sohelpmegod he starts talkin bout a golden ball an how i can be a princess me a princess well my mouth drops all the way to the floor an he says kiss me just kiss me once on the nose well i screams ya little green pervert an i hitsm with my mop an has ta flush the toilet down three times me a princess SPEAKER a. Who is the speaker of this poem? b. What are the clue words? c. How would you describe the speaker? How does her use of language characterize her? Day 3 Homework “Thoughts of Hanoi” – Thi Vihn (Vietnam) p. 515 1. Who is the speaker of the poem? Who is the speaker speaking to? Provide a line or two that shows the speaker. 2. What is the tone of the first stanza? What is the tone of the third stanza? Provide three words or phrases from each stanza that show the theme. Why does the poet switch the tone? 3. What is a possible theme of the poem? How does the author use the speaker and tone to establish that theme? Day 4 Homework “Do Not Go Gentle into that Good Night” – Thomas (Wales) p. 153 1. What is the rhyme scheme of the poem? Where does the rhyme scheme change? Why did the author change the rhyme scheme here? 2. Who is the speaker of the poem and who is he speaking to? Provide a line that shows the speaker and audience clearly? 3. What is the meter of the poem? Give an example where the meter does not match the rest of the poem. How does the meter and change in meter help to reinforce the message of the poem? Day 5 Homework Scansion work SCANSION HOMEWORK – What is the meter of the following lines? To scan a poem means to discover its metrical pattern. The meter for poetry has many patterns, but some of the most popular are the following: The stress patterns for poetry (metrical feet) Iambic (iamb) unstressed stressed Anapestic (anapest) unstressed unstressed stress Trochaic (trochee) stressed unstressed Dactylic (dactyl) stressed unstressed unstressed The length of lines Monometer = one foot Dimeter = two feet Trimeter = three feet Tetrameter = four feet Pentameter = five feet Hexameter = six feet Heptameter = seven feet Octameter = eight feet So by combining the feet with the length, we can identify a line of poetry's meter. Question: What is the meter of the following line of poetry? Shall I compare thee to a summer's day? ˘ ΄ ˘ The stress pattern would be: ΄ ˘ ΄˘ ΄ ˘ ΄ Shall I com - pare thee to a sum - mer's day? ˘ The repeated pattern is unstressed then stressed There are five repeated feet = pentameter ΄ = iamb foot pattern Answer : So the line is scanned as “iambic pentameter” Mark the stress patterns of the following lines of poetry and identify the meter. 1. What kept his eyes from giving back the gaze 2. He was louder than the preacher 3. I am called to the front of the room 4. Sing it all merrily 5. She lived in storm and strife 6. And the outrageous cannon 7. If we shadows have offended 8. Happiness is a warm gun, mama Day 6 Homework “First Frost” – Voznesesky (Russia) p. 237 1. Provide an example of alliteration in the poem. Provide an example of assonance. What do these sound devices do for the poem? 2. What is the tone of the poem? Provide a few words that suggest this tone. 3. What do you think the girl just experienced? Why doesn’t the author explicitly say what has happened in the poem? Day 7 Homework “And Yet the Books” – Milosz (Poland) p.215 1. What inanimate objects are personified in the poem? Provide a few lines that show this use of personification. 2. What is the message of the poem? How does the title reinforce the message of the poem? Day 8 Homework “Alone” – Transtomer (Sweden) p. 233 1. Provide an example of a metaphor or a simile in the poem. Why does the author connect these dissimilar objects? 2. What is the tone of the first section of the poem? What is the tone of part II? Provide some words that show the tone of each. 3. What does the title of the poem mean in both parts of the poem? How is it the same? How is it different? Day 9 Homework “Love after Love” – Walcott (St. Lucia) p.71 1. This poem seems to have occurred after the narrator has had a messy breakup with a lover. What are some images in the poem that suggest what the relationship used to be like? What are some images that show what the narrator is hoping to become? 2. What does the imagery of bread and wine suggest for this poem? 3. What is the significance of the title? How does the title connect to the theme of the poem? Day 10 Homework “The Shadow” – Sankichi (Japan) p. 539 1. “The Shadow” could represent a couple of ideas in the poem. First it is a physical shadow, then it could represent an emotional shadow. Using lines from the poem, define how the shadow is used in the poem as both an image and a symbol. 2. What is the theme of the poem? Should we let the shadow fade? Practice Quiz “The Nobel Prize” – Pasternak (Russia) p. 235 1. What is the rhyme scheme of the poem? What is the meter? Does the meter vary in the poem? 2. What is the overall tone of the poem? Provide some words and phrases that help to illustrate the tone. 3. Who is the speaker of the poem? What are some lines that suggest who the speaker may be? 4. Provide an example of figurative language (metaphor, simile, imagery, symbol). 5. How does the title help to set up what the poem is about? In a brief paragraph (five to eight sentences), using the devices above, explain and support what the theme of the poem may be.