Analysis of Texts Sam MacDuff Some tips for approaching the in-class essay and contrôle continu 1. Read the question carefully and make sure that you understand every part of it (use a dictionary if necessary). 2. Highlight or underline/circle the key words in the title. 3. Hopefully you have highlighted form, content, language, meter, sound, structure, ideas, sentiments. These are the main aspects of the passage which you are being asked to analyse and comment on. 4. If you’re not sure what the key words mean, here are some pointers to help you. Note that form, content, etc, are not discrete; you should consider them together. Form: is this a narrative or lyric poem? If narrative, is it (part of) a balad or epic? If lyric, is it an ode, an elegy, a sonnet, a villanelle? If none of these, is there a regular rhythmical pattern? What is it – iambic pentameter, catalectic trochaic tetrameter, etc. Are there any significant deviations from the metrical template – e.g., feminine endings, trochaic inversions, etc.? Is there a rhyme scheme? Annotate it - A8B7A8B7 (=ballad metre), etc. Are there any significant rhymes? Is it a concrete poem? Does the form enhance the meaning in any way? Think about the effect of the rhythm, rhyme and form on the meaning of the poem – remember that form and content are closely related. Content: what is the subject of the poem? What does it say? Is there a narrator or dialogue (link to form)? Look up any difficult words (you will often need to consider several meanings). When you understand all the words, read it again - and again - until you understand every line. Now: is the poem literal or figurative, or both? (Does it seem to be symbolic or allegorical? How?) Investigate the imagery – similes, metaphors, analogies… What is implied or suggested in the poem. Finally, what do you think the poem means (often a difficult question!)? Language: this obviously covers everything, so remember that you have to analyse the language in detail. Start with the vocabulary. Is it simple or complex, monosyllabic or polysyllabic, Teutonic or Latinate, prosaic or poetic, literal or figurative (note the former choices tend to go together, as do the latter, but not always)? Then move on to imagery – similes, metaphors, personification, rhetorical devices… Meter: see form. What is the metrical pattern in the poem? Are there any important deviations from the base pattern, or template? What effect does it have? (Remember: all poems have metre, even free verse. If the metre is irregular, are there points when it falls into familiar patterns?) Sound: as well as the rhyme and rhythm, look out for examples of alliteration, assonance, onomatopoeia, half rhymes, ablaut, etc. Consider the effect of these devices – e.g., is the poem melodious or cacophonous? Does it change? How does this relate to the meaning of the lines? Structure: as well as the verse form, think about how the poem develops – is the poem in stanzas? What is the structure of these (what does each one deal with, how are they ordered…)? Is there a central conceit? Is there a turn? If it seems symbolic or allegorical, is there a point at which this becomes evident to the reader? Ideas: is there one central idea or conceit in the poem? Is this expressed as an argument or dialogue? Is the poem based on an image or perception? What are the controlling or underlying ideas in the poem? How are these expressed – directly/discursively or subtly/figuratively? Sentiments: feelings, attitudes, judgments and opinions expressed in the poem, usually coloured by or derived from emotion – an 'emotional thought' reflecting the feeling or meaning in the poem (see OED, esp. 3, 8b, 9). Ideas and sentiments are clearly related, like form and content; ideas are more intellectual, sentiments suggests feeling or emotion, leading to mental reflection. 5. Use this list, or a similar one of your own, as a guide to analyse the passage. Remember that these aspects are interwoven, not separate. The more thoroughly you analyse the passage now, the better you will do in the in-class essay and the better prepared you will be for the exam. 6. While annotating the passage (or afterwards), you may want to use different colours, symbols or lines to group your main ideas together and then put them into a logical, numbered list. 7. When you have done this, you should be ready to write a one-sentence thesis statement and make a paragraph plan showing how your essay will develop. 8. You should now be ready to write your essay. Remember to use PEE. Good luck!