MĖTHODOLOGIE EXPRESSION ECRITE : Série d’exercices méthodologiques visant à faire prendre conscience aux élèves de l’importance d’un travail préalable à la rédaction axé sur l’analyse du libélé d’un sujet ou de la question posée Dans ces activités, les élèves apprendront à : 1- Analyser ce qui est demandé pour determiner à quel type de production correspond un sujet d’expression écrite. Les élèves utiliseront comme support la compilation des sujets du bacacalauréat correspondant à leur série (ici, Séries Technologiques LV1 et ES/S LV1) 2- Mobiliser les structures et le lexique approprié au sujet, choisir un plan adéquat en s’aidant d’un diagramme adapté au type de production attendu pour l’élaboration de ce plan. Sources : - Textes et Documents Anglais, Méthodes et techniques, Nathan, 1993, Paris, p. 175 - http://ccweb.norshore.wednet.edu/writingcorner/writingprocess.html - http://www.sdcoe.k12.ca.us/score/actbank/torganiz.htm Additional links of interest - http://www.angelfire.com/wi/writingprocess/writing.html The five steps of the writing process from pre writing to publishing http://www.angelfire.com/wi/writingprocess/specificgos.html Specific Graphic Organizer Links: This collection of links allows you to select a specific graphic organizer to suit your specific needs. - http://www.parapal-online.co.uk/eap.htm 6 Flash exercises to help students learn how to write different types of academic essays. Includes argumentative, cause and effect, compare and contrast, descriptions of statistics and a bibliography exercise. Thesis statements, topic sentences, supporting sentences and examples are used. Students can also learn how to write letters - http://members.tripod.com/~lklivingston/essay/index.html This site gives a great deal of reference support about how to write an essay. It helps students to understand the basic structures of an essay - http://essayinfo.com This site offers guides to efficient essay writing. Includes essay writing basics, a thorough description of different essay types, and writing tips. - http://esl.about.com/library/lessons/blwritingplans.htm A selection of lesson plans by esl.about.com Laurence Bernard, Académie de La Martinique, Jan. 2004 Compilation Des SUJETS D’EXPRESSION ECRITE- ANGLAIS - séries STT, STL, SMS, LV1 au baccalauréat jusque 2003 A 1-How did her parents react to their daughter's situation (80 words) B 1- What do you think of Naille's decision? how do your parents feet about your TV habits ? (150 words) 1- Explain the last sentence in the text : " ... and Thomas had known that he should not ask what had happened to the money... " (50 words) C 2- If you found yourself in a difficult situation, who would you rather turn to, your parents or your friends ? Give your reasons. (120 words) 2- Do you think the boy and his mother were right to act as they did ? What would you have done if you had been in their place ? (100 words) D 1- Do you think secret agents have an exciting life ? Why or why not ? (100 words) E 1-" People could get used to life without work”. What does Robin mean by these words ? Do you agree with her ? Wouldn't it bring about problems ? (50 words) F 1 - Public transport or private cars ? Which is better ? Make comparisons. (150 words) 1- Is the quality of life always ruined by technological progress ? (150 words) 1- Explain why Charles Darrow's He can be considered a typical American success story. (80 words) 2- Can you find reasons why people enjoy playing games like Monopoly or trivial Pursuit ? Do you like that kind of games ? Give your reasons. (120 words) I 1 - Why did the narrator love her grandmother so much ? (100 words) 2- Are there differences between the role of a father and the role of a mother in a family ? (100 words) J 1- Imagine a continuation to the story (80 words) K 1-The narrator tries to convince his old friend to jog in the open air. Write their conversation expressing opinion and advice (80 words) 1- 15-year-old Linda tries to convince her parents to buy her a mobile phone. Write the conversation. (100 words) 1- Write a letter to your member of Parliament (député) in which you explain what could be done to make the lives of disabled people better (80 words) 1- Is it always an advantage for a team or a champion to be well-known? (80-100 words) 1- Imagine that you were the girl’s mother. Relate the story to the local newspaper (100 words) 1- In your opinion, is it possible to live without computers today? (100 words) 1- Felicia writes a short letter to her sister to tell her about her feelings during the interview with the security officer (80 words) 1- Do you think it is a good idea to go on such a long trip completely alone at the age of thirteen? Explain the advantages and disadvantages of such an adventure. (200 words) 1- Imagine the conversation at the breakfast table between the policeman and his wife (80 words) 1- imagine a telephone conversation between Oliver and a friend of his. Oliver enjoys living in the country, his friend disagrees (200 words) 1- Write the conversation between the manager and the man who is announced (80 words) 2-a) What qualities would you like your future husband or wife to have? Explain.(120 words) Or b) Do you think parents should interfere in their children’s choice about their future lives? Explain.(120 words) 2- Do you prefer outdoor or indoor activities? Explain your reasons. (120 words) G H L M N O P Q R S T U 2- Nicky still loves Charles and tries to persuade him to give up his job as a British agent and marry her, but, to Charles, his career is more important than family life. Imagine their conversation. (100 words) 2- Factory workers are being replaced by machines and computers. Should we try and stop this trend or are there other ways of putting an end to unemployment ? (100 words) 2- Should the use of mobile phones be banned in public transport, in restaurants, in cinemas, in schools? (100 words) 2- Do you think discrimination against disabled people can be compared to other forms of discrimination? (120 words) 2- Are you personally interested in being a member of a sports team? Why or why not? (80-100 words) 2- How do you react to the decision made by the head teacher? Justify your opinion (100 words) 2- Should we be afraid of the technologies of the future? (100 words) 2- Traveling in your own country or in a foreign country can be an enriching experience. What’s your opinion about this? Justify with examples (120 words) Or 2- You are planning a trip similar to Jane’s. Explain how you would prepare it to make it as successful as possible. (200 words) 2- What do you expect from your future job? (120 words) 2- Give examples of circumstances when sportsmen’s lives are put at risk. (120 words) Compilation Des SUJETS D’EXPRESSION ECRITE, séries ES/S, LV1 au baccalauréat jusque 2003 1) To what extent can archaeology be exciting ? 3) A few days later, Britt confesses her lie to her mother. Write their conversation. 5) Imagine the end of the story. 7) Imagine what had happened to Anna. 9) Later on, Mrs Rice, Harold and Elsie are talking about their future plans to get out of their difficult situation. Imagine their conversation. 11) Milo meets his father in the parlour and complains about his sisters. Write out their conversation. 13) Imagine the end of the story. 2) You have just moved into a new house. You and a friend of yours make an unexpected discovery. Write about it. 4) Do you agree with Britt’s belief that “You could have anything you wanted if only you tried hard enough" ? Justify your answer, giving examples. 6) Do you enjoy reading detective stories or do you prefer another type of literature? Explain why. 8) Years later, the narrator is surprised to get a letter from Anna. What is it about? 10) How important is reading at a time when new technologies have an ever-increasing importance? 12) Discuss the advantages and difficulties of living in a large family. 14) Do you enjoy reading detective stories or do you prefer another type of literature? Explain why 15) Do you agree with Alice’s position and the fact that 16) In what way is music and art in general necessary in life? being independent is the best way in a couple? 17) Imagine why Ishmael and Hatsue’s relationship 18) Do you think there is any point in commemorating past came to an end. historical events, wars, for example? 19) Imagine the interview between the boy and the 20) Write an essay about the following subject: “would you editor. Write the dialogue. consider ambition as a quality? 21) Would you feel secure in a country where it is legal 22) “The first thing you have to learn is not to trust anyone”. Do to carry weapons? you agree with this statement? 23) Comment on Mrs Wormwood’s statement: “Looks 24) Do you think parents need to get involved in their children’s is more important than books.” studies or not? Give some relevant examples. 25) Suppose Judy had been fired. Back home, she talks 26) Is working for such an organization as the FBI a job you would it over with a firend of hers. She expresses her regrets like to do? According to which criteria would you choose your and discusses her future. future job? Do you think you are likely to keep that job for all your working life? 27) Imagine what had happened to Anna 28) Years later, the narrator is surprised to get a letter from Anna. What is it about? 29) Imagine the conversation between the teacher and 30) Are you ambitious and do you think that ambition is necessary Monty Roberts when they met again. to succeed in life? 31) Write about something strange or unexpected you 32) According to Mommy, the aim of school is to “educate your suddenly discovered in your childhood, and the mind”. Discuss this statement. consequences it had for you. 33) Imagine the letter Elizabeth writes her relatives to 34) Would you be ready to leave your homeland to follow the one tell about what happened and what she is going to do. you love abroad? Give your reasons. 35) In Dublin, Signora happens to meet someone she 36) “Same as me…looking for ancestors” (l.42). Comment and used to know and who expresses surprise at Signora’s explain. Why do some people need to fing their roots? return. Write out their conversation. 37) Imagine the dialogue between Joan and his 38) Where would you rather live if you were given the choice? At rescuers. the seaside, in the mountains, in the countryside, in a big city…? Give your reasons. 39) Would you like to go and live in another country? 40) Imagine Signora’s past life What would motivate your decision? What difficulties would you be faced with? 41) Write an article published by a journalist after the 42) Is it right for Man to interfere with the laws of nature? Give scene, in which he mentions each party’s motivations examples and say what you think. and problems. 43) Imagine what happened next. (dialogue or/and 44) The soldier tells the same story to a friend. Imagine his narration) version of events. (150 words) 45) There are various ways of communicating today. Which do you prefer and why. (150 words) Pour répondre par écrit en un paragraphe à une question posée, il faut analyser ce qui est demandé, puis mobiliser le lexique et les structures necessaires, enfin présenter et développer l’idée centrale du paragraphe en créant entre les phrases qui le composent des liens logiques et de la cohérence I- Analyser ce qui est demandé 1-Description : Describe a situation in which you have felt out of place 2- Comparison Are things changing? Describe and compare a father’s and a mother’s responsibilities now and fifty years ago. 3- Narration: Retell the end of “Little red riding Hood” so that she has the upper hand. 4- Hypothèse, souhait: Would it be an advantage to live in a world in which everybody has the same skin colour, whatever the colour? 5- Explication: Explain why teenage girls may be particularly at risk from tobacco advertising 6- Opinion: Do you think that animals should live in their natural habitats? II- Mobiliser le lexique et les structures pour Nommer , qualifier, localiser la situation dans le temps et dans l’espace Nommer et qualifier: Utiliser comparatifs et superlatifs, exprimer ressemblances et contrastes Utiliser les formes verbales relatives au passé et exprimer des relations temporelles. Décrire personnages et actions Utiliser le conditionnel (irréel du présent et du passé, préterit modal) Utiliser les conjonctions qui expriment la condition, Parler de ce qui n’existe pas. III- Présenter l’idée centrale du paragraphe Sous forme déclarative : Never in my life have I felt more ill at ease than on the day when I arrived at a dress-up party in my bathing-trunks En annonçant une généralité : Men and women are supposed to have equal rights and opportunities. Sous forme déclarative : It is not easy to fool little girls nowadays as it used to be. En faisant une citation : Alvin Toeffler writes in « future Shock » : ‘Given our new fast accumulating knowledge of genetics, we shall be able to breed whole races of blue people – or for that matter, green, purple, or orange.’ Exprimer des faits objectifs, En annonçant les faits : exprimer des opinions, les nuancer à Authority showed that almost 25% of 15l’aide d’auxiliaires modaux et year-od girls smoke compared with only 17% d’adverbes, utiliser les mots de of boys. liaison qui expriment des relations causales Définir le problème, exprimer le En posant une question : pour et le contre en utilisant les Caged and safe or wild and free ? mots de liaison necéssaires, présenter et justifier le point de vue choisi TASK 1: Analysez ce qui est demandé dans les sujets d’expression écrite (déterminez le type de production attendue ) TASK 2: (in English) Match the writing forms with their purpose and examples Form Narrative Expository Persuasive Descriptive Purpose to argue or persuade to inform to entertain to describe Examples story, poem, report, essay essay story (personal, true or imaginative), fable, poem, play, biography Recount, Report, Explanation, Procedure TASK 3: What form do these prompts correspond to? Write E for Expository, N for Narrative, D for Descriptive or P for Persuasive Write a story. . . Tell about a time when . . . Write a poem . . Describe a special place and explain why it is special. Describe the most important person in your life. Describe the animal's habitat in your report. Persuade your audience that . . . Convince your audience that . . . Does watching violence on television . . . Should students wear school uniforms? Recount (tell) what happened when . . . Retell a story. Record the events . . . Write a report on . . . Explain how to . . . Describe the procedure for . . . Explain the procedure used First Steps Framework: 1. Recount or retell Orientation with who, where, when, what, why Events in time order Concluding statement or ending 2. Report Topic statement Examples Description with supporting details Summary 3. Explanation Definition of phenomenon Sequenced explanation Description of parts Operations (how and why) Applications Comments and/or evaluation 4. Procedure Goal, purpose, or aim Tools, equipment, materials, data Description of specific steps Evaluation and testing to determine if goal was met First Steps Framework: 1. Orientation Who, when, where 2. Events that lead to a complication or problem Sequence of important events Details that enhance story development 3. Complication or problem Real-life complication or problems for main characters Other minor complications or problems 4. Resolution Complication or problem solved in a satisfactory way First Steps Framework: 1. Thesis Point of view or position Background information 2. Argument Support for position Evidence Detailed examples 3. Reiteration Conclusion that summarizes important points Concise redefinition or review of position. Key Features: 1. Recount or retell Relevant background Time sequence Selected details Descriptive language Linking words Conclusion or ending 2. Report Identified audience Framework fits need Logical organization Detailed descriptions Accurate definitions Knowledgeable voice 3. Explanation Identified Audience Framework fits need Examples and details Specific vocabulary Linking words Cause and effect Knowledgeable voice 4. Procedure Identified Audience Framework fits need Sequence of steps Visuals support text Precise vocabulary Knowledgeable voice First Steps Framework: Description is used in all forms of writing to create a vivid impression of a person, place, object, or event. First Steps does not recognize this a a separate form, but an integral part of the other three. Key Features: Descriptive language: adjectives, adverbs, sensory words Active verbs Detailed examples create a picture Shows instead of tells Imagery, metaphor. simile Key Features: Specific audience Thesis statement with summary of arguments to follow Logical organization Relevant information included Detailed support with examples Links part to whole Specific Vocabulary Object style Consistent tense Knowledgeable voice TASK 4: What form do the following first steps and key features (basic characteristics) correspond to? Cut them out and reorganize them in pairs Key Features: Strong story line Defined characters Details enhance plot, setting, characters, and events Descriptive language Effective dialogue Organization supports plot development Pacing builds suspense Past, present, or future tense Strong voice Key Features: Descriptive language: adjectives, adverbs, sensory words Active verbs Detailed examples create a picture Shows instead of tells Imagery, metaphor. simile NARRATIVE First Steps Framework: 1. Orientation Who, when, where 2. Events that lead to a complication or problem Sequence of important events Details that enhance story development 3. Complication or problem Real-life complication or problems for main characters Other minor complications or problems 4. Resolution Complication or problem solved in a satisfactory way Key Features: Strong story line Defined characters Details enhance plot, setting, characters, and events Descriptive language Effective dialogue Organization supports plot development Pacing builds suspense Past, present, or future tense Strong voice First Steps Framework: 1. Thesis Point of view or position Background information 2. Argument Support for position Evidence Detailed examples 3. Reiteration Conclusion that summarizes important points Concise redefinition or review of position. Key Features: Specific audience Thesis statement with summary of arguments to follow Logical organization Relevant information included Detailed support with examples Links part to whole Specific Vocabulary Object style Consistent tense Knowledgeable voice First Steps Framework: 1. Recount or retell Orientation with who, where, when, what, why Events in time order Concluding statement or ending 2. Report Topic statement Examples Description with supporting details Summary 3. Explanation Definition of phenomenon Sequenced explanation Description of parts Operations (how and why) Applications Comments and/or evaluation 4. Procedure Goal, purpose, or aim Tools, equipment, materials, data Description of specific steps Evaluation and testing to determine if goal was met Key Features: 1. Recount or retell Relevant background Time sequence Selected details Descriptive language Linking words Conclusion or ending 2. Report Identified audience Framework fits need Logical organization Detailed descriptions Accurate definitions Knowledgeable voice 3. Explanation Identified Audience Framework fits need Examples and details Specific vocabulary Linking words Cause and effect Knowledgeable voice 4. Procedure Identified Audience Framework fits need Sequence of steps Visuals support text Precise vocabulary Knowledgeable voice EXPOSITARY DESCRIPTIVE First Steps Framework: Description is used in all forms of writing to create a vivid impression of a person, place, object, or event. First Steps does not recognize this a a separate form, but an integral part of the other three. PERSUASIVE (Answer to task 4) TASK 5: Use the following model to compose four pages for each of the four forms (Descriptive, Expository, Narrative, Persuasive) Each page should be copied in your notebook Descriptive (Model Page) Purpose: (use task 2) Examples: (task 2) Cues words in prompt: (task 3) First Steps Framework: (Task 4) – Stick the corresponding “first steps” here Key Features: ( Task 4) and stick the corresponding key features here (Answers to tasks 2-5) Descriptive Purpose: to describe Examples: Story, Poem, Report, Essay Cues words in prompt: Describe a special place and explain why it is special. Describe the most important person in your life. Describe the animal's habitat in your report. First Steps Framework: Description is used in all forms of writing to create a vivid impression of a person, place, object, or event. First Steps does not recognize this a a separate form, but an integral part of the other three. Key Features: Descriptive language: adjectives, adverbs, sensory words Active verbs Detailed examples create a picture Shows instead of tells Imagery, metaphor. simile Narrative Purpose: to entertain Examples: Story (personal, true, imaginative), Fable, Myth, Poem, Play, Biography Cues words in prompt: Tell about a time when . . . Write a story. . . Write a poem . . . First Steps Framework: 1. Orientation Who, when, where 2. Events that lead to a complication or problem Sequence of important events Details that enhance story development 3. Complication or problem Real-life complication or problems for main characters Other minor complications or problems 4. Resolution Complication or problem solved in a satisfactory way Key Features: Strong story line Defined characters Details enhance plot, setting, characters, and events Descriptive language Effective dialogue Organization supports plot development Pacing builds suspense Past, present, or future tense Strong voice Persuasive Purpose: to argue or persuade Examples: Essay, Position Paper Cues words in prompt: Persuade your audience that . . . Convince your audience that . . . Does watching violence on television . . . Should students wear school uniforms? First Steps Framework: 1. Thesis Point of view or position Background information 2. Argument Support for position Evidence Detailed examples 3. Reiteration Conclusion that summarizes important points Concise redefinition or review of position. Key Features: Specific audience Thesis statement with summary of arguments to follow Logical organization Relevant information included Detailed support with examples Links part to whole Specific Vocabulary Object style Consistent tense Knowledgeable voice Expository Purpose: to inform Examples: Recount, Report, Explanation, Procedure Cues words in prompt: Recount (tell) what happened when . . . Retell a story. Record the events . . . Write a report on . . . Explain how to . . . Describe the procedure for . . . Explain the procedure used . . . First Steps Framework: 1. Recount or retell Orientation with who, where, when, what, why Events in time order Concluding statement or ending 2. Report Topic statement Examples Description with supporting details Summary 3. Explanation Definition of phenomenon Sequenced explanation Description of parts Operations (how and why) Applications Comments and/or evaluation 4. Procedure Goal, purpose, or aim Tools, equipment, materials, data Description of specific steps Evaluation and testing to determine if goal was met Key Features: 1. Recount or retell Relevant background Time sequence Selected details Descriptive language Linking words Conclusion or ending 2. Report Identified audience Framework fits need Logical organization Detailed descriptions Accurate definitions Knowledgeable voice 3. Explanation Identified Audience Framework fits need Examples and details Specific vocabulary Linking words Cause and effect Knowledgeable voice 4. Procedure Identified Audience Framework fits need Sequence of steps Visuals support text Precise vocabulary Knowledgeable voice DIAGRAMS can be used to help you start answering a question or developing a subject 2 1 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 TASK 6: What diagrams correspond to the following descriptions on how , when, or why use them. Write the appropriate number diagram n° …… .- useful for examining similarities and differences in characters, stories, poems, etc a prewriting activity to enable students to organize thoughts or textual quotations prior to writing a compare/contrast essay. This activity enables students to organize similarities and differences visually diagram n° …… -a spider map is used to describe a central idea: a thing, a process, a concept, a proposition. The map may be used to organize ideas or brainstorm ideas for a writing project. Key frame questions: What is the central idea? What are its attributes? What are its functions? diagram n° …… - requires students to identify a problem and consider multiple solutions and possible results. diagram n° …… - A Fishbone Map is used to show the causal interaction of a complex event (an election, a nuclear explosion) or complex phenomenon (juvenile delinquency, learning disabilities). Key frame questions: What are the factors that cause X ? How do they interrelate? Are the factors that cause X the same as those that cause X to persist? diagram n° …… -used to show similarities and differences. Key frame questions: What are being compared? How are they similar? How are they different? diagram n° …… - attempts to show how a series of events interacts to produce a set of results again and again, such as the life cycle or a cycle of poor decisions. Key frame questions: What are the main events in the cycle? How do they interact and return to the beginning again? diagram n° …… -used for time lines showing historical events, ages (grade levels in school), degrees of something (weight), shades of meaning, or rating scales (achievement in school). diagram n° …… -shows how family members are related. Key frame question: Who are my ancestors? How are they related on the Family Tree? diagram n° …… -a nonlinear activity that generates ideas, images and feelings around a stimulus word. As students cluster, their thoughts tumble out, enlarging their word bank for writing and often enabling them to see patterns in their ideas. Clustering may be a class or an individual activity. diagram n° …… -used to describe the stages of an event, the actions of character or the steps in a procedure. Key questions: What is the first step in the procedure or initiating event? What are the next stages or steps? How does one event lead to one another? What is the final outcome (answers)TASK 6:What diagrams correspond to the following descriptions on how , when, or why use them. Write the appropriate number diagram n° …5… .- useful for examining similarities and differences in characters, stories, poems, etc a prewriting activity to enable students to organize thoughts or textual quotations prior to writing a compare/contrast essay. This activity enables students to organize similarities and differences visually diagram n° …6… -a spider map is used to describe a central idea: a thing, a process, a concept, a proposition. The map may be used to organize ideas or brainstorm ideas for a writing project. Key frame questions: What is the central idea? What are its attributes? What are its functions? diagram n° …9… - requires students to identify a problem and consider multiple solutions and possible results. diagram n° …7… - A Fishbone Map is used to show the causal interaction of a complex event (an election, a nuclear explosion) or complex phenomenon (juvenile delinquency, learning disabilities). Key frame questions: What are the factors that cause X ? How do they interrelate? Are the factors that cause X the same as those that cause X to persist? diagram n° …4… -used to show similarities and differences. Key frame questions: What are being compared? How are they similar? How are they different? diagram n° …3… - attempts to show how a series of events interacts to produce a set of results again and again, such as the life cycle or a cycle of poor decisions. Key frame questions: What are the main events in the cycle? How do they interact and return to the beginning again? diagram n° …8… -used for time lines showing historical events, ages (grade levels in school), degrees of something (weight), shades of meaning, or rating scales (achievement in school). diagram n° …2… -shows how family members are related. Key frame question: Who are my ancestors? How are they related on the Family Tree? diagram n° …1… -a nonlinear activity that generates ideas, images and feelings around a stimulus word. As students cluster, their thoughts tumble out, enlarging their word bank for writing and often enabling them to see patterns in their ideas. Clustering may be a class or an individual activity. diagram n° …10… -used to describe the stages of an event, the actions of character or the steps in a procedure. Key questions: What is the first step in the procedure or initiating event? What are the next stages or steps? How does one event lead to one another? What is the final outcome - TASK 7: Now, choose 2 subjects from the list and use two different diagrams to develop those subjects - TASK 8: Fill in the grid for each subject Sujet libélé Analyser ce qui est Diagramme illustré demandé Lexique et structures Utiliser ………..….. pour ………… - TASK 9 : Write your essay ( to be handed to your teacher ) Rédiger la premère partie (80 words)