How to Grade Papers Using Microsoft Word Do you find yourself occasionally writing the same comments on students’ papers? Want to save time and save your hand from cramping? Try grading electronically using Microsoft Word. Here is how: □ Step #1: Create a code for frequently used comments (see the end of this document for a helpful list of comments). Go to FILE HELP OPTIONS PROOFING then click on “Autocorrect Options” Type a symbol (either an alpha-numeric code such as e1 or an abbreviation that is easy to remember...such as cs for comma splice) into the REPLACE box. Next type your first prescriptive comment into the WITH box. It might be good to begin each comment with the common diacritical mark (abbreviation or symbol) to help your students learn these editing marks. For example: In the REPLACE box type “e1” then in the WITH box type: “cs: COMMA SPLICE: two independent clauses cannot be joined together with only a comma. To fix this error, insert a conjunction (fanboy) following the comma, OR change the comma to a semicolon if the two clauses are closely related, OR make these two clauses two separate sentences by adding a period.” □ Step #2: Create shortcut buttons on your toolbar for frequent actions you will use while grading. For example: crossing through text and writing in a different color. You will do this through creating macros (this will record your actions, clicks, keystrokes formatting styles, change of color, size, etc, to allow the user to perform the same line of action over and over again without having to perform it manually). First go to VIEWMACROSRecord Macro... This will bring up the Record Macro dialog box where you will click BUTTON to create a macro button. Next click the ADD button in the next Option dialog box to indicate that you want this button to show in the Quick Access toolbar for later use. Then click on MODIFY to choose the design of your button. On your next click, it will start recording a macro using your movements. When you’ve performed a set of actions, stop the macro by going back to VIEW MACROS STOP RECORDING. Then test your button to make sure your actions were correct. Your new buttons are now on your toolbar at the top! □ Step #3: You can comment on any word, phrase, sentence or paragraph by selecting the text and heading over to the Review tab and then clicking New Comment. □ Step #4: Have your students turn in their papers electronically (whether through the shared drive or an online program). You may want to consider having the students include the rubric at the bottom of their essays for you to record their score. After you finish grading a paper electronically and adding your comments, make sure you Save As your changes so that your student can go back and make corrections if needed. This will save paper, too! A fun fact: After Microsoft Word finishes checking spelling and grammar, it will display readability statistics. First you need to make sure that the Readability Statistics are activated. To do this just go to FILE HELP OPTIONS PROOFING then make sure that the “Show readability statistics” box is checked off. Now you are set These statistics will be good for students to see so that they can improve their papers through removing passive sentences and improving other elements. To view the readability statistics for any paper click on the Review tab at the top of the Word Document and then click on Spelling and Grammar; here is what you will see at the end of the spellcheck: Flesch Reading Ease Score: This rates the text on a 100point scale; the higher the score, the easier it is to understand the document. For most standard documents, aim for a score of approximately 70 to 80. Flesch-Kincaid Grade Level Score: This rates the text on a U.S. school grade level. For example, a score of 8.0 means that an eighth grader can understand the document. For most documents, aim for a score of approximately 7.0 to 9.0. Advantages of Using This Tool: 1. Once you get used to your grading code, it will save you oodles of TIME, which is what we all need more of (and it saves your hand from cramping, too)! It normally takes an average teacher anywhere between 10-25 minutes to grade one student essay. Now it can take five minutes or less to grade using this electronic method. With an average batch of 90 essays (I know many of you have even more students than this!) this means a times-saving of 7.5 hours (90x10=15 hours. 90x5=7.5 hours). With this method, you can include twice as many comments per essay in half the amount of time. 2. This method will help us in our mission to become more paperless and environmental friendly through requiring students to submit their essays electronically (whether through a web site, the shared drive, etc). 3. You can explain what is wrong and offer solutions to correct or revise the writing issue...not just identify the problem. Also, students can get feedback sooner rather than waiting to get the paper back in class 4. You can link to resource sites that will provide additional practice or reference 5. You can require students to address each of your comments using the “Track Changes” and then resubmit with their corrections. With this step, your grading changes from static to dynamic 6. You eliminate the student excuses of: “But I DID turn it in on time” or “You lost my paper” since everything is electronic. 7. Unlike our purple handwritten marks, students tend to read these online comments and take them a little more seriously (especially if they are required to correct their mistakes and resubmit). *If you have writing comments that you frequently use that are not on our shared list, please feel free to e-mail them to Joni Gilman so that others can benefit from your ideas and add to their own codes. Here are some frequently used comments from Peachtree Ridge’s Language Arts Teachers: (Just copy and paste the ones you can use as you are completing Step #1) “Make your main points stand out” “Main points are confusing or not seen” “MLA error--Proper Heading (Left, Top, Four Lines): John Doe-Pennington–11 CP LA–7 March 2009” “slang/colloquial. Use more sophisticated language and show more control in your tone” “ AWK--Wording is awkward. Find a way to reword this” “PR—unclear pronoun reference” “MLA error-- Set one inch margins; double space; use Times New Roman 12 (no bold face); and indent each paragraph one inch–don’t skip lines between paragraphs.” “Work on clarity. The reader is confused about the content of “good CD:CM! = good ratio of CD to CM” what you are trying to say because the grammar / spelling / punctuation is causing a breakdown in meaning.” “Skim Milk! Aim for Whole Milk through richness in details” “Vary your sentence structure. Include more compound/complex sentences, etc” “X Summary-- avoid summarizing and instead analyze” “All SUM—Summary, no analysis “Losing focus here” “X TS—This is not a topic sentence. Make sure you direct the reader where this paragraph is going” “Your CMs (Commentary) should NOT be a summary. Instead your CMs need to EXPLAIN your CDs (Concrete Details)” “CD? You need to add something concrete. Your argument has gotten too vague.” “Avoid making an assumption by using the word YOU.” “SHOW, don’t tell! For example: rather than telling me a storm was violent, show me through your details. How was it violent? What did it do? DETAILS!” “Weak CM- Your commentary needs more insightful analysis” “Passive voice obscures meaning and leads to wordiness. Passive voice occurs when the subject is receiving the action rather than doing it. For example, the cookies were brought to the teacher by the students. Instead use active voice: the students brought the cookies” “BMS—Be more specific! You have very little detail” “NMD—Needs more specific detail (some detail, not enough) “ “Work on more effective conclusions that provide closure without being repetitive.” “Include transitions between paragraphs and within paragraphs. Consider using transitional words to help you with this” “Missing a thesis that addresses your argument” “Your details are too vague/general. Think of more specific details through using examples.” “WC---Word choice is not appropriate. Use more specialized vocabulary” “ MW- Missing Word” “Keep your verb tense consistent” “ //---lacks parallel structure. Parallel structure is the repetition of sentence structure. For example, we like running, jumping and swimming. “CS. ---COMMA SPLICE: two independent clauses cannot be joined together with a comma. To fix, insert a conjunction (fanboy) following the comma or change the comma to a semicolon or period. RO--- RUN ON SENTENCE: two independent clauses cannot be joined together without proper punctuation. To fix, insert a comma followed by a conjunction (fanboy) or change the comma to a semicolon or period. “PA---pronoun/antecedent disagreement: Make sure the pronoun agrees in number, person and gender with its antecedent (the word to which it refers to). Each,either,neither,one,anyone,anybody,everyone,everybody, somebody,another,nobody,aperson are singular and use “he or she”!” “SV--- make sure your subject and verbs agree” Grading Legend Example Essay Formatting Essay Conventions / Fluency Symbol What Does It Mean Symbol What Does It Mean MLA? MLA Heading/ Formatting is missing or not correct Poss Apostrophe is needed . Period is needed , Comma is needed W/W Wrong word is used D/B Don’t begin a sentence with this word AWK Awkward word or sentence CC Coordinating conjunction used but not needed APP Indicated an appositive that needs a comma or commas PREP Indicated a prepositional phrase that needs a comma or commas R/ON Run on sentence DQ Not a direct quote- quotation marks are not needed DQ Quotation marks are needed because this is a direct quotation SEP Should be two separate words COMB Words should be combined to form one word S/V The subjects and the verbs of the sentence do not agree Title # Title of the essay or a piece of literature is not punctuated or capitalized correctly In general spell a cardinal number (a number that can be expressed in two words or less. The exception for this rule comes from when you are discussing numerals for dates, measurements, addresses. Ex: 29 percent PC? Parenthetical citation is needed but is missing or is not correct DBL Should be double-spaced ET? Essay is missing a title / title is inappropriate or not punctuated correctly Essay Focus/ Development and Organization Symbol What Does It Mean HNA Hook is not appropriate for this essay WT Weak/Vague Thesis Statement WTS Weak/Vague Topic Sentence SUM? More summary is needed PN Pronoun agreement TMD Too much detail ART Article is needed NN Info/word not needed SP Word is misspelled N TRAN Needs a transition P Begin a new paragraph Info N/C Information or facts about the literature are not accurate P Miss Paragraph(s) missing Word/Sentence is not needed Most Commonly Used Teacher Comments from Other Schools Although many teachers prefer to use letters for their codes (such as “ro” for “Run on Sentence”), it might be easier to use an alpha numeric code (e1). After you create your code, just keep a hard copy of the cheat sheet for your codes next to you as you grade. The more you get used to grading using this code, the easier it will be since you will slowly end up memorizing this code. Mechanics e1. Use commas before or after speaker tags. Example: She said, “Call me at home.” e2. Use commas to set apart appositives. Example: That man, the one with the hat, left. e3. Use commas after each item in lists (except the last). Example: John, Jane, and Jose left early. e4. Use commas after introductory words or phrases. Example: First of all, you should listen to me. e5. Use commas between number dates and years. Example: It all happened on May 3, 1999. e6. Use commas between geographical places. Example: She lived in Tampa, Florida. e7. Use commas after greetings/closings in personal letters. Example: Dear Ralph, …Sincerely, e8. Use commas after nouns of direct address. Example: Kristin, leave some for your sister. e9. Use commas before conjunctions to join two independent clauses. Example: I liked her, and she liked me. e10. Use exclamation points for surprise or strong emotions. Example: The decision really shocked me! e11. Use quotation marks before and after direct quotations. Example: Sue said, “I’m going to bed.” e12. Use quotation marks before and after songs, poems, document titles, book chapters, magazine articles, and short story titles. Example: Whenever I hear “Clementine,” it reminds me of “Leaves of Grass” and “The Gettysburg Address.” e13. Use colons after business letter greetings. Example: Dear Sirs: e14. Use colons to introduce lists. Example: The following: shoes, pants, and… e15. Use colons between numbers in relationship. Example: 8:52 P.M. e16. Use semicolons to join independent clauses without conjunctions. Example: Jamal went to school; Larry met him there. e17. Underline movie, television show, book, magazine, play, and work of art titles. e18. Use apostrophes for contractions. Example: I can’t see what they’re doing. e19. Use apostrophes for singular and plural possessives. Example: Tom’s and the girls’ coats were red. e20. Use parentheses to explain or define. Example: The hombre (man) rode off alone. e21. Capitalize proper nouns (a name that is given to special persons, places, or things). Example: Ryan visited the Holocaust Museum in Los Angeles. e22. Capitalize holidays, dates, groups, organizations, and businesses. Example: Last Easter on March 24, 2002, the P.T.A. and McDonald’s helped out. e23. Capitalize the first, last, and any important words in titles. Example: Prince Charles’s favorite book was Islands of Adventure. e24. Capitalize the names of languages and peoples. Example: He spoke Spanish to the Indians. e25. Capitalize special events and historical periods. Example: The New Year’s Day Parade celebrates the Year of the Dog. Spelling e26. The “i” before “e” Rule—Usually spell “i” before “e” (believe), but spell “e” before “i” after a “c” (receive) and when the letters are pronounced as a long /a/ sound (neighbor). e27. The Final “y” Rule—Keep the “y” when adding an ending if the word ends in a vowel, then a “y” (delaydelayed), or if the ending begins with an “i” (copy-copying). Change the “y” to “i” if the word ends in a consonant, then a “y” (pretty-prettiest). e28. The Silent “e” Rule—Drop the “e” (have-having) if the ending begins with a vowel. Keep the “e” (closeclosely) if the ending begins with a consonant, has a soft /c/ or /g/ sound, then an “ous” or “able,” or if it ends in “ee”, “oe”, or “ye.” e29. The Double the Consonant Rule—Double consonants, when adding on endings if these conditions are met: 1. last syllable is accented (per/MIT) 2. last syllable ends in a vowel–consonant (permit) and 3. ending begins with a vowel (ed). e30. The Ending “an”–“en” Rule—End words with “ance”, “ancy”, or “ant” if the root has a hard /c/ or /g/ sound or it ends with “ear” or “ure.” End words with “ence”, “ency”, or “ent” if the root has a soft /c/ or /g/ sound, after “id,” or it ends with “ere.” e31. The “able”–“ible” Rule—End words with “able” if the root has a hard /c/ or /g/ sound, after a complete root word, or after a silent “e.” End words with “ible” if the root has a soft /c/ or /g/ sound, an “ss,” or after an incomplete root word. e32. The Ending “ion” Rule—Spell “sion” (illusion) for the final zyun sound or the final shun sound (expulsion, compassion) if after an “l” or “s.” Spell “cian” (musician) for a person and “tion” (condition) in most all other cases. e33. The Plurals Rule—Add an “s” even with “y” or vowel—“o” endings. Spell “es” after /s/, /x/, /z/, /ch/, or /sh/ sounds or a consonant— “o.” Change a “y” to “i” and add “es” when the word ends in a consonant—“y.” Change “fe” or “lf” ending to “ves.” Writing Errors e34. —=Delete e35. vt=verb tense error e36. ww=wrong word e37. ¶=needs new paragraph e38. v=Close gap e39. ~=Reverse e40. ro=run-on sentence e41. frag=sentence fragment e42. ‘=Insert an apostrophe e43. awk=awkward e44. mm=misplaced modifier Writing Revisions e45. dev=inadequate development e46. irr=irrelevant e47. nc=not clear e48. red=redundant e49. sup=add support evidence e50. trans=needs transition e51. wordy=excessively wordy e52. //=lacks parallel structure e53. voice—needs third person e54. slang—informal language e55. figure of speech—Avoid idiomatic expressions in formal writing. e56. verb—Too many “to be” verbs e57. Abbv—Do not use abbreviations in formal writing e58. cont=Don’t use contractions in formal writing e59. wc=word choice (word overused) e60. db neg=double negative e61. pv=passive voice unnecessary e62. Rhetorical question in which answer is assumed e63. Too many prepositional phrase strings e64. Avoid (parenthetical) remarks. e65. Don’t start sentences with coordinating conjunctions, e.g. but, and, so, or. e66. Don’t split infinitives, e.g. “to carefully walk” e67. Don’t end sentences with prepositions. e68. Don’t refer to your own writing. Writing Content e69. def=Define this term. e70. spf=Get more specific. e71. cit=Needs citation e72. Needs sentence variety e73. Off topic—focus is off of central idea e74. Overstated idea—exaggerated e75. seq=sequence problems e76. Inconsistent argument e77. Needs topic sentence e78. Needs variety of types of evidence e79. Needs another introduction strategy e80. Needs variety of introduction strategies e81. Thesis is unclear—must state purpose or point of view. e82. Re-state the thesis to introduce the conclusion. e83. Needs another conclusion strategy e84. Needs variety of conclusion strategies e85. Proper Heading (Left, Top, Four Lines): John Doe–Mr. Pennington–11 CP LA–7 March 2009 e86. Set one inch margins; double space; use Times New Roman 12 (no bold face); and indent each paragraph one inch–don’t skip lines between paragraphs. e87. def=Define this term. e88. spf=Get more specific. e89. cit=Needs citation e90. Needs sentence variety e91. Off topic e92. Overstated idea e93. seq=sequence problems e94. Inconsistent argument e95. Needs topic sentence e96. Needs variety of types of evidence e97. Needs another introduction strategy e98. Needs variety of introduction strategies e99. Thesis is unclear e100. Re-state the thesis e101. Needs another conclusion strategy *Information in this document has been adapted from http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/grammar_mechanics/how-tosave-time-grading-essays/