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Regards, Triumph Learning Join the conversation about Common Core today by visiting commoncore.com, the place where teachers, parents, and experts come together to share best practices and practical information for successfully implementing Common Core standards in the classroom. 136 Madison Avenue • New York, NY 10016 • p: 212.652.0215 • f : 212.857.8499 • www.triumphlearning.com S uppor tCoa c h, E L A, T e a c he rE di t i on, Gr a de5 Lesson 2 Poetry Poetry Have students read the information about poetry. Discuss the features of poetry, such as •words carefully chosen to show feelings or ideas, to celebrate someone or something, or to tell a story; •rhyme, rhythm, and colorful descriptions make pictures with words. Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC When writing poetry, poets carefully choose their words to show ideas and feelings, celebrate someone or something, or tell a story. Rhyme, rhythm, and colorful descriptions are ways poets make pictures with words. Poets write about everyday things in new ways to help you understand what they see and feel. Suppose you wanted to express the beauty of this picture by writing a poem for a friend. What are some expressive, descriptive words you would use? Model connecting poetry to other reading genres. Tell students that poems can be similar to short stories because both poems and short stories express feelings and ideas. Also, some poems tell stories. Poems are usually written in short lines. How are short stories different from poems? Then encourage students to compare features of poems to features of nonfiction. What are the similarities and differences between poems about nature and scientific articles about nature? Skills Focus The Road Not Taken / By the Arno Visualize Poetic Structure My Castle Figurative Language Supporting Three Reads Speaker Poetry 29 CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 29 5/6/13 11:52 AM •First Read: Begin with the Visualize instruction on Student Edition page 30 and Teacher’s Manual page 26. Then read “The Road Not Taken” and “By the Arno.” •Second Read: Continue with the Poetic Structure instruction on Student Edition page 31 and Teacher’s Manual page 27. Then read “The Road Not Taken” and “By the Arno” again. •Third Read: Continue by reading critically “The Road Not Taken” and “By the Arno” on Student Edition page 32 and Teacher’s Manual page 28. Repeat the process with “My Castle” after completing the first selections. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC CC13_ELA_G5_TM_L02_023-040.indd 25 P oetry 25 5/15/13 6:14 PM Practice the Skill The Road Not Taken / By the Arno First Read Visualize To visualize is to see something in your mind. You create a mental picture that only you can see. You add what you already know about a topic to the descriptive details in a text to create the image. First Read: Comprehension Skill When you listen to or read poetry, visualize the images that the words describe. Close your eyes and picture what the words are saying. You might change your picture as you hear or read more of the poem. Visualize Try It Read the following lines from the poem “Buttercups and Daisies” by Mary Howitt. Read the information about visualizing together with students. Then read aloud the Try It activity and model how to visualize the poem. Buttercups and daisies, Oh, the pretty flowers, Coming ere the springtime, When I read the line about buttercups and daisies, I picture those two flowers. I know buttercups are small yellow flowers on long stems, and daisies are big white flowers with lots of petals. To tell of sunny hours. 5 While the trees are leafless, While the fields are bare, Spring up here and there. Discuss How does the poet describe the trees and fields in the poem? What do trees and fields look like in early spring? Have partners complete the Discuss activity as you circulate and provide support. What do you visualize when you read the lines? What do you know about buttercups and daises? What do you know about trees and fields in early spring? Think about what you know and what the words say. What picture do you see? As you read, complete the Visualize Chart on page 257. After reading the lines from the poem, the picture I visualize is . . . Discuss Students should tell how their reading and what they know about early spring help them visualize the poem. Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC Buttercups and daisies 30 Lesson 2 • Poetry CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 30 Introduce the Visualize Chart Have students tear out the Visualize Chart on page 257 of their books. Explain that as they read, they will be filling in this chart when prompted by the orange first-read boxes. See Teacher’s Manual page 31 for a sample completed chart. 5/6/13 11:52 AM Supporting Struggling Learners Observation Students have difficulty visualizing trees and fields in early spring. Action To help students visualize, show them pictures of early spring and pictures of buttercups and daisies. What do the trees look like? What do the fields look like? Which of these flowers are buttercups? Which are daisies? When do they start to grow? First Read: The Road Not Taken / By the Arno Go to Teacher’s Manual page 28. 26 L e s s o n 2 • P O E T RY CC13_ELA_G5_TM_L02_023-040.indd 26 © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC 5/15/13 6:14 PM Practice the Skill Second Read Poetic Structure Second Read: Literary Skill Poems are made up of different parts. A line is a group of words in one row. Sometimes a line is a complete sentence, but it can be a phrase or even a single word. A stanza is a group of lines separated by a blank line space. The lines and stanzas give a poem its poetic structure or organization. Stanzas build on one another by developing ideas or describing ideas in a new way. Rhyme is the repetition of sounds at the end of lines. Often, poems will have a rhyme scheme, or a consistent pattern of rhymes. Poetic Structure Read the information about poetic structure together with students. Then read aloud the first question in the Try It activity and model how to describe what the stanzas are about. Try It Read two more stanzas from the poem “Buttercups and Daisies” by Mary Howitt. Ere the snowdrop peepeth, Ere the crocus bold, 10 Ere the early primrose By their mother’s door, Somewhere on the sunny bank Purple with the north wind, Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC Buttercups are bright; Somewhere ’mong the frozen grass Peeps the daisy white. 1 Like to children poor, Playing in their sturdy health Opes its paly gold,1 5 I see that the second stanza of the poem is about how buttercups and daisies bloom even before snowdrops, crocuses, and primroses. Little hardy flowers, What is the last stanza about? To what does the poet compare the flowers? Yet alert and bold; 15 Fearing not and caring not, Though they be a-cold! Have partners complete the Discuss activity as you circulate and provide support. Opes its paly gold Opens its pale gold Discuss The word ere in lines 1–3 means “before.” Snowdrops, crocuses, and primroses are flowers. What are these stanzas about? How do the stanzas build on each other? The second stanza builds on the first stanza on page 30 by . . . The third stanza builds on the second by . . . Discuss As you read, record your answers to questions about poetic structure on the Close Reading Worksheet on page 258. Students should describe how the stanzas build on one another. The Road Not Taken / By the Arno 31 CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 31 5/6/13 11:52 AM SUPPORTING STRUGGLING LEARNERS Observation Students are unable to summarize the third stanza or recognize how it builds on the other two stanzas. Action Read the second line of the third stanza and ask What kind of children are the buttercups and daisies like? (poor children) Read the rest of the stanza and ask What do the children do? (play outside even though it is cold) What words describe the children? (sturdy, healthy, purple, alert, bold, cold) How are buttercups and daisies like these children? What weather do they bloom in? How does the third stanza relate to the other two stanzas? Introduce the Close Reading Worksheet Have students use the Close Reading Worksheet on page 258 of their books. Explain that as they read, they will be filling in this worksheet when prompted by the green second-read boxes. See Teacher’s Manual page 31 for a sample completed worksheet. Second Read: The Road Not Taken / By the Arno Go to Teacher’s Manual page 28. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC CC13_ELA_G5_TM_L02_023-040.indd 27 T h e Roa d N ot Ta k en / By t h e Arno 27 5/15/13 6:14 PM Supporting Three Reads First Read Second Read Third Read Focus on visualizing what the poems describe. Focus on the parts of the poems and how they build on one another. Focus on analyzing the poems. •First Read: Use the orange boxes. •Second Read: Use the green boxes. •Third Read: Use the blue boxes. The Road Not Taken Visualize Tool: Visualize Chart Read aloud the first line and ask Where is the speaker? What is a “yellow wood”? Read aloud the rest of the first stanza. What does the speaker wish he or she could do? Poetic Structure Tool: Close Reading Worksheet Reread lines 4 and 5. What is the poet describing? Reread the second stanza and ask What is the poet describing in this stanza? What is the poet doing in these two stanzas? Where is the speaker in the poem? What does he or she see? What is he or she doing? Draw or describe what you imagine on the Visualize Chart. 5 Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, And sorry I could not travel both And be one traveler, long I stood And looked down one as far as I could To where it bent in the undergrowth; 10 Then took the other, as just as fair, And having perhaps the better claim Because it was grassy and wanted wear; Though as for that the passing there Had worn them really about the same, 15 And both that morning equally lay In leaves no step had trodden black. Oh, I kept the first for another day! Yet knowing how way leads on to way, I doubted if I should ever come back. 20 I shall be telling this with a sigh Somewhere ages and ages hence: Two roads diverged in a wood, and I,— I took the one less traveled by, And that has made all the difference. How does the second stanza build on the first? Underline one group of words that rhyme in stanza 1. Double underline another group of words that rhyme in the stanza. Why does the speaker take the road “less traveled”? Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC The Road Not Taken / By the Arno Purpose for Reading Read along with your teacher. Each time, read for a different purpose. 32 Lesson 2 • Poetry Poetic Structure CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 32 Have a volunteer read aloud the last word of each line in the first stanza. Which words rhyme? Critical Thinking Tool: Close Reading Worksheet Ask students to reread the second stanza. How is the second road different from the first? On which road have more people traveled? Overset How might choosing the second road be more exciting? 28 L e s s o n 2 • P O E T RY CC13_ELA_G5_TM_L02_023-040.indd 28 5/6/13 11:52 AM Supporting English Language Learners Provide visuals to aid in comprehension of the poems. As you read “The Road Not Taken,” display an image of a forked path in the woods in autumn. How is this picture similar to the woods the poet describes? How is it different? As you read “By the Arno,” display images of Florence, a hill covered in dew, a valley, and a nightingale. Hold up each image and name the object it portrays, relating the images to specific parts of the poems. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC 5/15/13 6:14 PM By the Arno 1 Visualize Tool: Visualize Chart by Oscar Wilde The oleander on the wall Grows crimson in the dawning light, Though the grey shadows of the night Lie yet on Florence like a pall.2 5 10 The dew is bright upon the hill, And bright the blossoms overhead, But ah! the grasshoppers have fled, The little Attic3 song is still. Arno a river in Italy that flows through the cities of Florence and Pisa pall a sense of gloom Attic related to ancient Greece or Athens 4 gale a breeze 5 vale a valley 6 nightingale a small, dark songbird 2 3 Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC How does the setting change in each stanza? Only the leaves are gently stirred By the soft breathing of the gale,4 And in the almond-scented vale 5 The lonely nightingale 6 is heard. 1 Reread the first stanza of the poem together with students. What time of day is it? (dawn) Then ask students to reread the second and third stanzas, naming things that they can visualize. (dew on a hill, blossoms overhead, leaves blowing in a breeze) What details from the second and third stanzas do you visualize? Describe or draw them on the Visualize Chart. What feeling do the first three stanzas of the poem create? Circle the words or images that create this feeling. Poetic Structure Tool: Close Reading Worksheet Ask volunteers to skim the first stanza to identify a place. What is the setting in the first stanza? Then ask them to skim the second and third stanzas to identify a place. What is the setting in the second and third stanzas? Critical Thinking Tool: Close Reading Worksheet The Road Not Taken / By the Arno 33 CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 33 Focus on Word Study Explain to students that some words have several consonants together, such as light and sight. Say these words aloud, and ask students to repeat. In the words light and sight, the letters ght are blended together to make the sound t. Then have students identify other words in the poem with the ght consonant cluster. (night, bright, nightingale) Say these words aloud, and ask students to repeat. Explain that other consonant clusters include dg (dodge), tch (match), and sph (sphere). © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC CC13_ELA_G5_TM_L02_023-040.indd 29 5/6/13 11:52 AM For each stanza, have students identify words that establish a cheerful mood, and words that establish a sorrowful mood. Which feeling does the poem give you overall, happy or sad? Why? T h e Roa d N ot Ta k en / By t h e Arno 29 5/15/13 6:14 PM Visualize Tool: Visualize Chart Read the second stanza on this page. What is stealing, or moving, across the lawn? What are “the long white fingers of the dawn”? Then read the lines again and ask students to describe what they see. The day will make thee silent soon, O nightingale sing on for love! 15 While yet upon the shadowy grove Splinter the arrows of the moon. What idea about love do these stanzas work together to develop? Before across the silent lawn In sea-green mist the morning steals,7 And to love’s frightened eyes reveals 20 The long white fingers of the dawn Analyze In “By the Arno,” dawn is depicted as the enemy of night and love. What does the poet mean? Find details in the poem to support your ideas. Fast climbing up the eastern sky To grasp and slay the shuddering night, All careless of my heart’s delight, Or if the nightingale should die. 7 steals moves Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC The Road Not Taken / By the Arno Read lines 17–20. Draw or describe what you see on the Visualize Chart. Poetic Structure Tool: Close Reading Worksheet Reread this page together with students. Ask volunteers to paraphrase each stanza, and record their answers on the board. What is the poet saying about love here? How does the first stanza introduce this idea? How does the second stanza further develop this idea? How does the third stanza finish developing this idea? 34 Lesson 2 • Poetry CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 34 5/6/13 11:52 AM Vocabulary: Consult a Dictionary Higher-Order Thinking Skill: Analyze A dictionary is a reference source that lists words alphabetically with their definitions, pronunciations, and parts of speech. Pronunciations use a standard set of symbols to represent the sounds in the English language. They show how words are broken into syllables and which word parts are stressed. Part of speech describes the way a word is used in a sentence. A word might be a noun, verb, adjective, or adverb. Tool: Close Reading Worksheet Why would the poet think that dawn kills night? Why might the poet think that daytime is the enemy of love? Try It Read these lines from “The Road Not Taken” and the dictionary entry. Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, And sorry I could not travel both Vocabulary: Consult a Dictionary Deepening Vocabulary Understanding •What will you be doing five years hence? • How do you imagine oleander to smell? •When does your face turn crimson? different in character Discuss Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC When I read the dictionary definition, I see that diverge is broken into two parts, so I know it has two syllables. The word in italics tells me the part of speech. I read the two definitions and go back to the lines from the poem. Which definition of diverge works best in the context of the poem? di•verge (də-'vərj) verb. 1: to move in different directions; 2: to be Read the definitions of the words from the poems. Then write a sentence with each word, using it as it is used in the poem. 1. hence, p. 32 (hen(t)s) adverb. 1: as a consequence; 2: years from now; 3: from this place In five years hence, I will be in the tenth grade. 2. oleander, p. 33 (‘ o-le-an-d r) noun. 1: a leafy shrub with bright flowers The landscaper planted oleander near the garden door. 3. crimson, p. 33 (‘krim-z n) noun. 1: a deep purple-red color; adjective. 2: of the color crimson She wore a crimson dress to the party. The Road Not Taken / By the Arno 35 CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 35 30 L e s s o n 2 • P O E T RY CC13_ELA_G5_TM_L02_023-040.indd 30 How is diverge pronounced? 5/6/13 11:52 AM © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC 5/15/13 6:14 PM Name: Visualize Chart “The Road Not Taken,” page 32 Students should describe or draw a person standing at a fork in a country road. The person may be walking or standing looking at the two paths. The path that the speaker is heading toward is more overgrown. First Read: Visualize Chart •After each orange first-read question in “The Road Not Taken” and “By the Arno,” allow students time to fill in their Visualize Charts. Circulate to provide help as needed. •Use the orange first-read boxes on Teacher’s Manual pages 28–30 to provide students with additional support, as needed, to complete each question. •Have partners compare their completed charts, discussing any differences in pictures or descriptions. “By the Arno,” page 33 Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC Students should describe or draw a hill with dew on it at dawn and leaves blowing. Perhaps there is a nightingale in a tree nearby. “By the Arno,” page 34 Return to Teacher’s Manual page 27 to begin the second read. Students should describe or draw the sun rising with its rays turning the dark grass to bright green. The Road Not Taken / By the Arno Lesson 2 257 CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_BLM.indd 257 4/30/13 3:20 PM Second Read: Close Reading Worksheet Name: Close Reading Worksheet Second Read: Poetic Structure (green boxes) Page 32: The second stanza builds on the first by moving the story along, by telling that the person in the poem is taking the second path . Page 33: The setting in the first stanza is a wall in a city , but the setting in the second and third stanzas is a hillside in the country . Page 34: The stanzas work together to suggest that love is happy at night but is afraid of the dawn because it, like the night, will die and disappear . Third Read: Critical Thinking (blue boxes) Page 32: The speaker takes the road “less traveled” because it is less worn, adventure . Page 33: The first three stanzas of the poem create a feeling of quiet loneliness because they describe fading darkness and few sounds or movement . Analyze—Page 34: By depicting the dawn as the enemy of night and love, the poet is saying night is when the poet can be with the one he loves, and they must part during the day . 258 Lesson 2 Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC which means fewer people have walked on it, so taking it might lead to an The Road Not Taken / By the Arno CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_BLM.indd 258 © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC CC13_ELA_G5_TM_L02_023-040.indd 31 •After each green second-read question in “The Road Not Taken” and “By the Arno,” allow students time to complete the appropriate item on their Close Reading Worksheets. Circulate to provide assistance. •Use the green second-read boxes on Teacher’s Manual pages 28–30 to provide students with additional support, as needed, to complete each question. •Group students and have them discuss their completed worksheets. Then have a volunteer from each group share with the class. Return to Teacher’s Manual page 28 to begin the third read. Third Read: Close Reading Worksheet Repeat the procedure for the third read. 4/30/13 3:20 PM T h e Roa d N ot Ta k en / By t h e Arno 31 5/15/13 6:14 PM First Read: Comprehension Skill Figurative Language Read the information about figurative language together with students. Then read aloud the Try It activity and model how to identify the figurative language. In the first stanza, the poet compares the sun to a “frosty, fiery sleepy-head.” I know that in winter, the sun often shines weakly and rises late, so I think this is why the poet calls the sun a sleepy-head. How does this metaphor add beauty or interest to the poem? Have partners complete the Discuss activity as you circulate and provide support. The simile . . . helps me visualize . . . Discuss Students should identify the figurative language and discuss how it helps them see and feel more deeply what the poet is describing. (See page annotations.) First Read Figurative Language Poets often use language to express something beyond what the words literally mean. This special use of language is called figurative language. Figurative language can add beauty, interest, excitement, and depth of feeling to a poem. Some figurative language makes comparisons between two things that are not actually alike. By comparing two very different things, the poet makes you think of them in a new way. For example, a poet might say: The baby’s cheeks were like peaches. This kind of comparison is a simile. Similes use the word like or as to make a comparison. Another kind of comparison is metaphor. Metaphors make direct comparisons. They do not use the word like or as. Her hair was a cascading waterfall is an example of a metaphor. Try It Read these stanzas from the poem “Winter-Time” by Robert Louis Stevenson. Late lies the wintry sun a-bed, A frosty, fiery sleepy-head; Blinks but an hour or two; and then, A blood-red orange, sets again. Discuss 5 Black are my steps on silver sod; Thick blows my frosty breath abroad; And tree and house, and hill and lake, Are frosted like a wedding-cake. Draw a box around the metaphor that describes the winter sun. Circle the simile in the last line. Describe what the figurative language helps you see. As you read, complete the Figurative Language Chart on page 259. 36 Lesson 2 • Poetry CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 36 Introduce the Figurative Language Chart Have students tear out the Figurative Language Chart on page 259 of their books. Explain that as they read, they will fill in this chart when prompted by the orange first-read boxes. See Teacher’s Manual page 37 for a sample completed chart. Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC My Castle Practice the Skill 5/6/13 11:52 AM Supporting Struggling Learners Observation Students have difficulty explaining how the figurative language helps them visualize the poem. Action To help students understand the figurative language in the poem, display pictures of the winter sky at dawn, midday, and sunset. Ask students to relate these images to the poem. In which picture is the sun sleeping in like a “sleepy-head”? In which picture is the sun setting like “a blood-red orange”? If necessary, display pictures of a snow-covered scene and a white-frosted wedding cake. First Read: My Castle Go to Teacher’s Manual page 34. 32 L e s s o n 2 • P O E T RY CC13_ELA_G5_TM_L02_023-040.indd 32 © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC 5/15/13 6:14 PM Practice the Skill Second Read Speaker Second Read: Literary Skill The speaker of a poem is the person telling the poem. It is the speaker who expresses ideas about the topic of the poem. Sometimes, poems are autobiographical, so the poet and the speaker are the same person. But often, the speaker of the poem is separate from the poet; the speaker is similar to a character made up by the author of a fictional story. Speaker Read the information about the speaker together with students. Then read aloud the Try It activity and model how to identify the speaker of the poem. Often, the speaker is indicated by the pronoun I. However, it is not always clear who the speaker of a poem is. As you read or listen to poetry, think about who the speaker might be and how the speaker reflects on or feels about the topic. I read both stanzas to try to identify the speaker. The pronoun I identifies the speaker, who I think is a child. Try It Read these stanzas from the poem “Bed in Summer” by Robert Louis Stevenson. In winter I get up at night And dress by yellow candle-light. In summer, quite the other way, I have to go to bed by day. Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC 5 What clues tell you the speaker is a child? I have to go to bed and see The birds still hopping on the tree, Or hear the grown-up people’s feet Still going past me in the street. Discuss Have partners complete the Discuss activity as you circulate and provide support. Based on the clues . . . the speaker has to go to bed . . . Discuss Who is the speaker in this poem? When does he or she have to go to bed? Underline the clues that tell you. Students should understand that the speaker is a child who dislikes getting up in the dark in winter, and going to bed when it’s still light out in the summer. (See page annotations.) As you read, record your answers to questions about a poem’s speaker on the Close Reading Worksheet on page 260. My Castle 37 CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 37 5/6/13 11:52 AM Supporting Struggling Learners Observation Students have difficulty identifying when the speaker has to go to bed. Action Call attention to the poem’s title, “Bed in Summer,” then read aloud the first stanza. When does the speaker go to bed in the summer? Then read aloud the second stanza and have students identify additional clues that show it is still light out when the speaker goes to bed, such as “birds still hopping on the tree” and adults “still going past me on the street.” Introduce the Close Reading Worksheet Have students use the Close Reading Worksheet on page 260 of their books. Explain that as they read, they will be filling in this worksheet when prompted by the green second-read boxes. See Teacher’s Manual page 37 for a sample completed worksheet. Second Read: My Castle Go to Teacher’s Manual page 34. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC CC13_ELA_G5_TM_L02_023-040.indd 33 M y C a s t l e 33 5/15/13 6:14 PM Supporting Three Reads •First Read: Use the orange boxes. •Second Read: Use the green boxes. •Third Read: Use the blue boxes. First Read Second Read Third Read Focus on finding and understanding figurative language in the poem. Focus on thinking about the poem’s speaker. Focus on analyzing the poem. My Figurative Language Castle Explain to students that the first read asks questions about figurative language. Speaker Tool: Close Reading Worksheet Read aloud lines 1–16 with students. Then ask probing questions. What is the speaker describing? Who does the castle belong to? How does the speaker feel about the castle? Who is the speaker in this part of the poem? How does he or she feel about the castle? Underline clues that tell you. Based on your reading of the first four stanzas of the poem, what do you know about the speaker? I have a beautiful castle, With towers and battlements fair; And many a banner, with gay device, Floats in the outer air. 5 10 15 Critical Thinking 34 L e s s o n 2 • P O E T RY CC13_ELA_G5_TM_L02_023-040.indd 34 The walls are of solid silver; The towers are of massive gold; And the lights that stream from the windows A royal scene unfold. Ah! could you but enter my castle With its pomp of regal sheen, You would say that it far surpasses The palace of Aladeen.1 Could you but enter as I do, And pace through the vaulted hall, And mark the stately columns, And the pictures on the wall; Aladeen Aladdin, the hero of the tales of the Arabian Nights who finds a magic lamp that contains a genie 1 Tool: Close Reading Worksheet Reread these stanzas with students. Do we know if the speaker is male or female? young or old? Are these descriptors important to the poem? Based on the speaker’s description of the castle, what kinds of things does he or she admire? by Horatio Alger, Jr. Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC My Castle Purpose for Reading Read along with your teacher. Each time, read for a different purpose. 38 Lesson 2 • Poetry CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 38 5/6/13 11:52 AM supporting English Language Learners Read the stanzas on the page together with students and paraphrase them in prose. After each stanza, invite volunteers to the board or to mural paper to draw the castle as it is described in the poem. If necessary, sketch the features that students might not know, such as battlements or banners. Or display pictures of these features so that students can sketch them. Have students add to the drawing as they read more stanzas of the poem. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC 5/15/13 6:14 PM 20 With the costly gems about them, That send their light afar, With a chaste and softened splendor Like the light of a distant star! And where is this wonderful castle, With its rich emblazonings, Whose pomp so far surpasses The homes of the greatest kings? 25 30 Come out with me at morning And lie in the meadow-grass, And lift your eyes to the ether blue, And you will see it pass. How does the speaker change in lines 33–36? What idea does he or she express? There! can you not see the battlements; And the turrets stately and high, Whose lofty summits are tipped with clouds, And lost in the arching sky? Who cannot enter the castle? Why not? Critical Thinking 5/6/13 11:52 AM See pages 215–237 for additional Fluency Assessments and Activities. Explain that fluent readers use emotion when they read. They read exciting parts of poems with excitement in their voices. They read sad parts of poems with sadness in their voices. To read with emotion, fluent readers pay attention to •the meanings of words; •the feelings described in a poem; •punctuation, such as exclamation points and question marks. Model reading with emotion by reading aloud lines 17–24 as students follow along. Exaggerate the excitement at the end of line 20 and the question at the end of line 24. Raise your voice both times, but convey the two emotions differently. Have partners practice reading with emotion by reading the last two stanzas on the page. CC13_ELA_G5_TM_L02_023-040.indd 35 Remind students that a simile uses the word like or as to make a comparison, while a metaphor does not. Then read aloud lines 17–20. Does the poet use a simile or a metaphor? What does the light of the gems look like? Read lines 29–36 aloud, changing your voice in the last stanza to sound like a different speaker. What words in lines 33–36 give us a clue that the speaker has changed? Is the second speaker impressed by the first speaker’s castle? Why or why not? CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 39 © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC Tool: Figurative Language Chart Tool: Close Reading Worksheet My Castle 39 Focus on Fluency Figurative Language Speaker Dear friend, you are only dreaming, Your castle so stately and fair Is only a fanciful structure,— A castle in the air. Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC 35 Circle the figurative language in lines 17–20 that describes the light of the gems. What are the gems like? Record your ideas in the Figurative Language Chart. Tool: Close Reading Worksheet Ask students to decide if the castle is real and made of silver and gold, or if it is imagined and made of dreams and ideas. If the castle is a dream, who is the only person who can enter? Who cannot enter? M y C a s t l e 35 5/15/13 6:14 PM Figurative Language Tool: Figurative Language Chart Read lines 37–40 aloud and ask What is another word for phantom? Why does the speaker compare the castle to a phantom? Figurative Language Tool: Figurative Language Chart Have a volunteer read aloud lines 41–44. How do the “clouds and darkness” make the speaker feel? What kinds of things in life make you feel this way? What does the speaker leave behind when inside the castle? For when clouds and darkness are round me, And my heart is heavy with care, I steal me away from the noisy crowd, To dwell in my castle fair. 45 Read lines 41–44. What do the clouds and darkness represent? What kind of figurative language does the poet use to express the idea? Write your ideas on the Figurative Language Chart. The poem ends with the first speaker speaking. What does he or she think about the castle? Underline the clues that tell you. 50 55 There are servants to do my bidding; There are servants to heed my call; And I, with a master’s air of pride, May pace through the vaulted hall. And I envy not the monarchs With cities under their sway; For am I not, in my own right, A monarch as proud as they? What matter, then, if to others My castle a phantom may be, Since I feel, in the depths of my own heart, That it is not so to me? Support Support this idea with details from the poem: The castle is a metaphor for a safe or secure place. Speaker Tool: Close Reading Worksheet 40 Perchance you are right. I know not If a phantom it may be; But yet, in my inmost heart, I feel That it lives, and lives for me. Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC My Castle Read lines 37–40. Draw a box around the figurative language the speaker uses to describe the castle. Record it and its meaning on the Figurative Language Chart. 40 Lesson 2 • Poetry CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 40 Reread lines 53–56. How does the speaker feel inside the castle? Why doesn’t the speaker care if others believe in the castle? 5/6/13 11:52 AM Vocabulary: Context Clues When you come across a new word, use context clues to figure out its meaning. Context clues are words, phrases, and sentences located near a word that give hints about what that word means. My brother and sister are complete opposites. He is painfully shy, but she is a complete extrovert. Higher-Order Thinking Skill: Support The underlined words are context clues for the word extrovert. They tell you that an extrovert is the opposite of a shy person—an outgoing person. Tool: Close Reading Worksheet Try It Read these lines from “My Castle.” What words describe the structure of the castle? How is the castle a safe place for the speaker? I have a beautiful castle, With towers and battlements fair; You may not know the word battlements, but the words castle and towers are context clues that can help you figure out its meaning. Vocabulary: Context Clues Deepening Vocabulary Understanding •When do people show a lot of pomp? •Which countries still have monarchs? Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC I know that a castle is a large stone building and that towers are tall structures that are parts of castles. So I imagine that battlements are also parts of castles. I also know that the word battle means “a fight in a war.” Based on these context clues, what do you think battlements are? Discuss 1. pomp, p. 39 greatness, showiness 2. fanciful, p. 39 imaginary 3. monarchs, p. 40 kings and queens, rulers My Castle 41 CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 41 36 L e s s o n 2 • P O E T RY CC13_ELA_G5_TM_L02_023-040.indd 36 Brainstorm definitions for the word battlements. The following words appear in “My Castle.” Find the words in the poem and identify the context clues that help you understand their meanings. Then write a definition for each word. 5/6/13 11:52 AM © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC 5/15/13 6:14 PM Name: Figurative Language Chart Page 39 ✔ Simile Metaphor First Read: Figurative Language Chart “With the costly gems about them, That send their light afar, With a chaste and softened splendor Like the light of a distant star!” •After each orange first-read question in “My Castle,” allow students time to fill in their Figurative Language Charts. Circulate to provide help as needed. •Use the orange first-read boxes on Teacher’s Manual pages 34–36 to provide students with additional support, as needed, to complete each question. •Have partners compare their completed charts, discussing any differences in ideas and meanings they described. What it means: The gems sparkle like stars in the sky. Simile Page 40 ✔ Metaphor Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC “I know not If a phantom it may be;” What it means: The castle might be a phantom or as unreal as a ghost. Page 40 Simile ✔ Metaphor “For when clouds and darkness are round me” Return to Teacher’s Manual page 33 to begin the second read. What it means: The clouds and darkness are the troubles and fears in the speaker’s life. My Castle Lesson 2 259 CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_BLM.indd 259 4/30/13 3:20 PM Second Read: Close Reading Worksheet Name: Close Reading Worksheet Second Read: Speaker (green boxes) Page 38: The speaker in this part of the poem might be the owner of a fine castle who thinks the castle is fine and beautiful. He or she loves it and is proud of it . Page 39: The speaker of lines 33–36 is the second speaker, or “you” in previous stanzas . He or she thinks that the castle isn’t real; it’s just a cloud in the sky . Page 40: In the end, the first speaker thinks his or her castle is beautiful and real , and he or she loves it . Third Read: Critical Thinking (blue boxes) stories of Aladdin Page 39: “You” or the reader . can’t enter the castle because it is only in the speaker’s imagination . Support—Page 40: The castle is a metaphor for a safe or secure place because the first speaker goes there when he or she feels worried or troubled. He or she feels better when thinking about the castle . 260 Lesson 2 Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC Page 38: I think the speaker of the poem is someone who admires things that are nicely or richly made. He or she knows a lot about castles and has read the My Castle CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_BLM.indd 260 © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC CC13_ELA_G5_TM_L02_023-040.indd 37 4/30/13 3:20 PM •After each green second-read question in “My Castle,” allow students time to complete the appropriate item on their Close Reading Worksheets. When completing the worksheet, students should refer to the text markings they made. Circulate to provide assistance. •Use the green second-read boxes on Teacher’s Manual pages 34–36 to provide students with additional support, as needed, to answer each question. •Group students and have them discuss their completed worksheets. Then have a volunteer from each group share with the class. Return to Teacher’s Manual page 34 to begin the third read. Third Read: Close Reading Worksheet Repeat the procedure for the third read. M y C a s t l e 37 5/15/13 6:14 PM Build Background Have a volunteer read aloud the information at the top of the page and the Try It activity. I know that in the poem “My Castle,” there are two speakers, so the speakers are clearly different from the one poet. How do the two speakers reflect on the castle differently? (The first speaker believes in and admires the castle. The second speaker doesn’t believe in the castle.) Scaffold Discussion Have partners discuss the question together and take a few notes about their ideas for their writing assignment. The first speaker thinks the castle is . . . The second speaker thinks the castle is . . . Respond to Text: How Speakers Reflect on a Topic “My Castle” is one poem with two speakers. They have different ideas about the castle. Is it real or in the clouds? Why does it matter? Try It Think about what you have learned about how the speaker of a poem reflects on the poem’s topic. For example, the speaker of “The Road Not Taken” is a thoughtful person who makes a careful decision to walk on the road that might offer some adventure. Discuss How do the speakers in “My Castle” reflect on the topic of the poem? On Your Own Write a paragraph about the speakers in “My Castle.” Tell about how they reflect differently on the topic of the poem. Use the next page to help you plan your response. Then write your paragraph on a separate sheet of paper. Checklist for a Good Response A good paragraph ✔ shows your understanding of what the poem means. ✔ explains how the two speakers reflect on the topic. ✔ includes a topic sentence and supporting ideas. ✔ ends with a concluding statement. ✔ uses complete sentences. ✔ is free of spelling and grammatical errors. Discuss Prepare for Writing Read aloud the On Your Own task and the Checklist for a Good Response. Ask students to repeat in their own words their understanding of the assignment. Remind students that a good paragraph has a topic sentence, detail sentences that support the topic sentence, and a concluding sentence that sums things up. 38 L e s s o n 2 • P O E T RY CC13_ELA_G5_TM_L02_023-040.indd 38 Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC Respond to Text: How Speakers Reflect on a Topic 42 Lesson 2 • Poetry CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 42 5/6/13 11:52 AM Supporting Struggling Learners Observation Students have difficulty understanding how the speakers reflect on the castle. Action Reread the poem “My Castle” aloud with students. What does the first speaker think of the castle? Why? How does the castle make the first speaker feel? What does the second speaker think of the castle? Why? © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC 5/15/13 6:14 PM My Analysis of the Speakers in the Poem Support Planning 1. Topic Sentence Include this information in your first sentence: Work with students to read the information on page 43 and complete the activities. As students work on the chart, circulate and provide support as needed. (See page annotations.) Then have partners discuss their charts together. In the poem “My Castle,” there are two speakers—one who thinks is real and beautiful the castle who thinks the castle and one is imaginary . 2. Detail Sentences The sentences of your paragraph should provide details that explain how the speakers reflect differently on the topic. Use this chart to organize your ideas. What does the castle look like? Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC Where is the castle? How does the castle make the speaker feel? Review Checklist First Speaker Second Speaker made of silver and gold, a cloud with battlements and towers and banners and walls covered with gems that glow like stars in the sky, in the clouds in the other speaker’s imagination safe and secure, happy Review the Checklist for a Good Response with students before they begin writing. Tell students to use the information on this page to write a paragraph telling what each speaker thinks of the castle. Remind students to use information from the poem to support their ideas and to write a concluding sentence that restates the poem’s meaning with a new twist. skeptical, unbelieving 3. Concluding Sentence Your final sentence should restate the poem’s meaning with a new twist. Writing Share Even though the second speaker might be correct, the first speaker doesn’t care because the imaginary castle makes him Have partners share their completed paragraphs with each other. Then ask them to share in a class discussion one idea from their partner’s writing. or her feel happy and safe. On a separate sheet of paper, write your paragraph. My Castle 43 CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 43 5/6/13 11:52 AM Rubric 4 Clearly states how the two speakers reflect on the topic differently. Includes a topic sentence, supporting ideas, and a concluding statement that show a well-developed understanding of the meaning of the poem. Sentences are well structured, with good word choice and few grammatical errors. 3 States how the two speakers reflect on the topic differently. Includes a topic sentence, supporting ideas, and a concluding statement that show some understanding of the meaning of the poem. Sentences could be better developed and word choice expanded. Contains few grammatical errors. 2 May state only some of the ways the two speakers reflect on the topic differently. Evidence to support topic sentence is vague, and concluding sentence may be absent. Sentences are not well developed, contain limited word choice, and have frequent grammatical errors. 1 Does not state how the two speakers reflect on the topic differently. Does not cite evidence and/ or follow basic paragraph structure effectively. There are many grammatical issues, with poor word choice and simple sentence structures. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC CC13_ELA_G5_TM_L02_023-040.indd 39 M y C a s t l e 39 5/15/13 6:14 PM Lady Icicle / Snow-Flakes READ ON YOUR OWN PROCEDURE Assign students “Lady Icicle” and “Snow-Flakes” as independent reading. Remind them to use the interactive questions as support. • First Read: Use the orange boxes. • Second Read: Use the green boxes. • Third Read: Use the blue boxes. When students have finished their three reads to deepen comprehension, have them complete the Comprehension Check questions. Comprehension Check Sample Answers, pages 47–48 1. VISUALIZE Possible response: I visualize a woman all in white singing and dancing across the snow-covered land, followed by fairies who dance around her slippered feet. The wind is blowing gently, making a “wild and low” music. The words that help me visualize this are singing, music, fairies, and silver slippers. 2. CONTEXT CLUES The word mar means “to damage.” The words that help the reader know this are dainty, yet, and slightest touch. 3. POETIC STRUCTURE The fifth stanza continues to describe the snowflakes, just as the first four stanzas do, but the fifth stanza introduces the idea of the snowflakes’ fragility. This idea is further developed in the last two stanzas. 4. FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE Possible response: Snowflakes are a metaphor for the things we love most in nature. Snowflakes are sent from heaven to the gloomy earth, each one perfect, beautiful, and fragile. Humans “cannot command” them, despite their “tiny” size. Even though each one is different, they are the same in their magnificence. They are compared to “fragile flowers,” appearing not during sunny days, but when it is cold. They are “so dainty and so pure,” easily ruined by human touch. They cannot be “handled or caressed,” just as everything in nature must be left alone and appreciated from “afar,” lest humans destroy it. 5. CONSULT A DICTIONARY The word wayward is an adjective. The first syllable is stressed. Example sentence: We strolled down the wayward path, not knowing or caring what would be around the next bend. 6. SPEAKER The speakers of both poems reflect similarly on their topics. They both describe their topics with awe and admiration. However, the speaker in “Snow-Flakes” is more personal with the topic, because snowflakes are real. In contrast, the speaker in “Lady Icicle” is more removed because Lady Icicle isn’t real—she represents the winter season, made to seem like a person. 40 L e s s o n 2 • P O E T RY CC13_ELA_G5_TM_L02_023-040.indd 40 © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC 5/15/13 6:14 PM Name: Visualize Chart “The Road Not Taken,” page 32 Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC “By the Arno,” page 33 “By the Arno,” page 34 The Road Not Taken / By the Arno CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_BLM.indd 257 Lesson 2 257 4/30/13 3:20 PM Name: Close Reading Worksheet Second Read: Poetic Structure (green boxes) Page 32: The second stanza builds on the first by . Page 33: The setting in the first stanza is , but the setting in the second and third stanzas is . Page 34: The stanzas work together to suggest that love . Third Read: Critical Thinking (blue boxes) . Page 33: The first three stanzas of the poem create a feeling of because . Analyze—Page 34: By depicting the dawn as the enemy of night and love, the poet is saying . Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC Page 32: The speaker takes the road “less traveled” because 258 Lesson 2 The Road Not Taken / By the Arno CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_BLM.indd 258 4/30/13 3:20 PM Name: Figurative Language Chart Page 39 Simile Metaphor Simile ✔ Metaphor Simile Metaphor “With the costly gems about them, That send their light afar, With a chaste and softened splendor Like the light of a distant star!” What it means: Page 40 Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC What it means: Page 40 “For when clouds and darkness are round me” What it means: My Castle CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_BLM.indd 259 Lesson 2 259 4/30/13 3:20 PM Name: Close Reading Worksheet Second Read: Speaker (green boxes) Page 38: The speaker in this part of the poem might be who thinks the castle is . Page 39: The speaker of lines 33–36 is . He or she thinks that . Page 40: In the end, the first speaker thinks his or her castle is , and he or she . Third Read: Critical Thinking (blue boxes) . Page 39: can’t enter the castle because . Support—Page 40: The castle is a metaphor for a safe or secure place because . Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC Page 38: I think the speaker of the poem is someone who 260 Lesson 2 My Castle CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_BLM.indd 260 4/30/13 3:20 PM S uppor tCoa c h, E L A, S t ude ntE di t i on, Gr a de5 Lesson 2 Poetry Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC When writing poetry, poets carefully choose their words to show ideas and feelings, celebrate someone or something, or tell a story. Rhyme, rhythm, and colorful descriptions are ways poets make pictures with words. Poets write about everyday things in new ways to help you understand what they see and feel. Suppose you wanted to express the beauty of this picture by writing a poem for a friend. What are some expressive, descriptive words you would use? Skills Focus The Road Not Taken / By the Arno Visualize Poetic Structure My Castle Figurative Language Speaker Poetry 29 CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 29 5/6/13 12:47 PM Practice the Skill First Read Visualize To visualize is to see something in your mind. You create a mental picture that only you can see. You add what you already know about a topic to the descriptive details in a text to create the image. When you listen to or read poetry, visualize the images that the words describe. Close your eyes and picture what the words are saying. You might change your picture as you hear or read more of the poem. Try It Read the following lines from the poem “Buttercups and Daisies” by Mary Howitt. Buttercups and daisies, Oh, the pretty flowers, Coming ere the springtime, To tell of sunny hours. 5 While the trees are leafless, While the fields are bare, Spring up here and there. Discuss What do you visualize when you read the lines? What do you know about buttercups and daises? What do you know about trees and fields in early spring? Think about what you know and what the words say. What picture do you see? As you read, complete the Visualize Chart on page 257. Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC Buttercups and daisies 30 Lesson 2 • Poetry CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 30 5/6/13 12:47 PM Practice the Skill Second Read Poetic Structure Poems are made up of different parts. A line is a group of words in one row. Sometimes a line is a complete sentence, but it can be a phrase or even a single word. A stanza is a group of lines separated by a blank line space. The lines and stanzas give a poem its poetic structure or organization. Stanzas build on one another by developing ideas or describing ideas in a new way. Rhyme is the repetition of sounds at the end of lines. Often, poems will have a rhyme scheme, or a consistent pattern of rhymes. Try It Read two more stanzas from the poem “Buttercups and Daisies” by Mary Howitt. Ere the snowdrop peepeth, Ere the crocus bold, Little hardy flowers, 10 Ere the early primrose Playing in their sturdy health Opes its paly gold,1 5 By their mother’s door, Somewhere on the sunny bank Purple with the north wind, Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC Buttercups are bright; Somewhere ’mong the frozen grass Peeps the daisy white. Like to children poor, Yet alert and bold; 15 Fearing not and caring not, Though they be a-cold! Opes its paly gold Opens its pale gold 1 Discuss The word ere in lines 1–3 means “before.” Snowdrops, crocuses, and primroses are flowers. What are these stanzas about? How do the stanzas build on each other? As you read, record your answers to questions about poetic structure on the Close Reading Worksheet on page 258. The Road Not Taken / By the Arno 31 CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 31 5/6/13 12:47 PM Purpose for Reading Read along with your teacher. Each time, read for a different purpose. First Read Second Read Third Read Focus on visualizing what the poems describe. Focus on the parts of the poems and how they build on one another. Focus on analyzing the poems. Where is the speaker in the poem? What does he or she see? What is he or she doing? Draw or describe what you imagine on the Visualize Chart. 5 Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, And sorry I could not travel both And be one traveler, long I stood And looked down one as far as I could To where it bent in the undergrowth; 10 Then took the other, as just as fair, And having perhaps the better claim Because it was grassy and wanted wear; Though as for that the passing there Had worn them really about the same, 15 And both that morning equally lay In leaves no step had trodden black. Oh, I kept the first for another day! Yet knowing how way leads on to way, I doubted if I should ever come back. 20 I shall be telling this with a sigh Somewhere ages and ages hence: Two roads diverged in a wood, and I,— I took the one less traveled by, And that has made all the difference. How does the second stanza build on the first? Underline one group of words that rhyme in stanza 1. Double underline another group of words that rhyme in the stanza. Why does the speaker take the road “less traveled”? Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC The Road Not Taken 32 Lesson 2 • Poetry CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 32 5/6/13 12:47 PM By the Arno 1 by Oscar Wilde The oleander on the wall Grows crimson in the dawning light, Though the grey shadows of the night Lie yet on Florence like a pall.2 5 What details from the second and third stanzas do you visualize? Describe or draw them on the Visualize Chart. The dew is bright upon the hill, And bright the blossoms overhead, But ah! the grasshoppers have fled, The little Attic3 song is still. How does the setting change in each stanza? Only the leaves are gently stirred 10 By the soft breathing of the gale,4 And in the almond-scented vale 5 The lonely nightingale 6 is heard. Arno a river in Italy that flows through the cities of Florence and Pisa pall a sense of gloom 3 Attic related to ancient Greece or Athens 4 gale a breeze 5 vale a valley 6 nightingale a small, dark songbird 1 Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC 2 What feeling do the first three stanzas of the poem create? Circle the words or images that create this feeling. The Road Not Taken / By the Arno 33 CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 33 5/6/13 12:47 PM Read lines 17–20. Draw or describe what you see on the Visualize Chart. The day will make thee silent soon, O nightingale sing on for love! 15 While yet upon the shadowy grove Splinter the arrows of the moon. What idea about love do these stanzas work together to develop? Before across the silent lawn In sea-green mist the morning steals,7 And to love’s frightened eyes reveals 20 The long white fingers of the dawn Analyze 7 steals moves Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC In “By the Arno,” dawn is depicted as the enemy of night and love. What does the poet mean? Find details in the poem to support your ideas. Fast climbing up the eastern sky To grasp and slay the shuddering night, All careless of my heart’s delight, Or if the nightingale should die. 34 Lesson 2 • Poetry CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 34 5/6/13 12:47 PM Vocabulary: Consult a Dictionary A dictionary is a reference source that lists words alphabetically with their definitions, pronunciations, and parts of speech. Pronunciations use a standard set of symbols to represent the sounds in the English language. They show how words are broken into syllables and which word parts are stressed. Part of speech describes the way a word is used in a sentence. A word might be a noun, verb, adjective, or adverb. Try It Read these lines from “The Road Not Taken” and the dictionary entry. Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, And sorry I could not travel both di•verge (də-'vərj) verb. 1: to move in different directions; 2: to be different in character Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC Discuss How is diverge pronounced? Read the definitions of the words from the poems. Then write a sentence with each word, using it as it is used in the poem. 1. hence, p. 32 (hen(t)s) adverb. 1: as a consequence; 2: years from now; 3: from this place 2. oleander, p. 33 (‘ o-le-an-d r) noun. 1: a leafy shrub with bright flowers 3. crimson, p. 33 (‘krim-z n) noun. 1: a deep purple-red color; adjective. 2: of the color crimson The Road Not Taken / By the Arno 35 CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 35 5/6/13 12:47 PM Practice the Skill First Read Figurative Language Poets often use language to express something beyond what the words literally mean. This special use of language is called figurative language. Figurative language can add beauty, interest, excitement, and depth of feeling to a poem. Some figurative language makes comparisons between two things that are not actually alike. By comparing two very different things, the poet makes you think of them in a new way. For example, a poet might say: The baby’s cheeks were like peaches. This kind of comparison is a simile. Similes use the word like or as to make a comparison. Another kind of comparison is metaphor. Metaphors make direct comparisons. They do not use the word like or as. Her hair was a cascading waterfall is an example of a metaphor. Try It Read these stanzas from the poem “Winter-Time” by Robert Late lies the wintry sun a-bed, A frosty, fiery sleepy-head; Blinks but an hour or two; and then, A blood-red orange, sets again. Discuss 5 Black are my steps on silver sod; Thick blows my frosty breath abroad; And tree and house, and hill and lake, Are frosted like a wedding-cake. Draw a box around the metaphor that describes the winter sun. Circle the simile in the last line. Describe what the figurative language helps you see. As you read, complete the Figurative Language Chart on page 259. Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC Louis Stevenson. 36 Lesson 2 • Poetry CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 36 5/6/13 12:47 PM Practice the Skill Second Read Speaker The speaker of a poem is the person telling the poem. It is the speaker who expresses ideas about the topic of the poem. Sometimes, poems are autobiographical, so the poet and the speaker are the same person. But often, the speaker of the poem is separate from the poet; the speaker is similar to a character made up by the author of a fictional story. Often, the speaker is indicated by the pronoun I. However, it is not always clear who the speaker of a poem is. As you read or listen to poetry, think about who the speaker might be and how the speaker reflects on or feels about the topic. Try It Read these stanzas from the poem “Bed in Summer” by Robert Louis Stevenson. In winter I get up at night And dress by yellow candle-light. In summer, quite the other way, I have to go to bed by day. Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC 5 I have to go to bed and see The birds still hopping on the tree, Or hear the grown-up people’s feet Still going past me in the street. Discuss Who is the speaker in this poem? When does he or she have to go to bed? Underline the clues that tell you. As you read, record your answers to questions about a poem’s speaker on the Close Reading Worksheet on page 260. My Castle 37 CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 37 5/6/13 12:47 PM Purpose for Reading Read along with your teacher. Each time, read for a different purpose. First Read Second Read Third Read Focus on finding and understanding figurative language in the poem. Focus on thinking about the poem’s speaker. Focus on analyzing the poem. My Castle Based on your reading of the first four stanzas of the poem, what do you know about the speaker? I have a beautiful castle, With towers and battlements fair; And many a banner, with gay device, Floats in the outer air. 5 10 15 The walls are of solid silver; The towers are of massive gold; And the lights that stream from the windows A royal scene unfold. Ah! could you but enter my castle With its pomp of regal sheen, You would say that it far surpasses The palace of Aladeen.1 Could you but enter as I do, And pace through the vaulted hall, And mark the stately columns, And the pictures on the wall; Aladeen Aladdin, the hero of the tales of the Arabian Nights who finds a magic lamp that contains a genie 1 Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC Who is the speaker in this part of the poem? How does he or she feel about the castle? Underline clues that tell you. by Horatio Alger, Jr. 38 Lesson 2 • Poetry CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 38 5/6/13 12:47 PM 20 With the costly gems about them, That send their light afar, With a chaste and softened splendor Like the light of a distant star! And where is this wonderful castle, With its rich emblazonings, Whose pomp so far surpasses The homes of the greatest kings? 25 30 Come out with me at morning And lie in the meadow-grass, And lift your eyes to the ether blue, And you will see it pass. How does the speaker change in lines 33–36? What idea does he or she express? There! can you not see the battlements; And the turrets stately and high, Whose lofty summits are tipped with clouds, And lost in the arching sky? Who cannot enter the castle? Why not? Dear friend, you are only dreaming, Your castle so stately and fair Is only a fanciful structure,— A castle in the air. Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC 35 Circle the figurative language in lines 17–20 that describes the light of the gems. What are the gems like? Record your ideas in the Figurative Language Chart. My Castle 39 CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 39 5/6/13 12:47 PM 40 For when clouds and darkness are round me, And my heart is heavy with care, I steal me away from the noisy crowd, To dwell in my castle fair. 45 Read lines 41–44. What do the clouds and darkness represent? What kind of figurative language does the poet use to express the idea? Write your ideas on the Figurative Language Chart. The poem ends with the first speaker speaking. What does he or she think about the castle? Underline the clues that tell you. Support Support this idea with details from the poem: The castle is a metaphor for a safe or secure place. Perchance you are right. I know not If a phantom it may be; But yet, in my inmost heart, I feel That it lives, and lives for me. 50 55 There are servants to do my bidding; There are servants to heed my call; And I, with a master’s air of pride, May pace through the vaulted hall. And I envy not the monarchs With cities under their sway; For am I not, in my own right, A monarch as proud as they? What matter, then, if to others My castle a phantom may be, Since I feel, in the depths of my own heart, That it is not so to me? Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC Read lines 37–40. Draw a box around the figurative language the speaker uses to describe the castle. Record it and its meaning on the Figurative Language Chart. 40 Lesson 2 • Poetry CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 40 5/6/13 12:48 PM Vocabulary: Context Clues When you come across a new word, use context clues to figure out its meaning. Context clues are words, phrases, and sentences located near a word that give hints about what that word means. My brother and sister are complete opposites. He is painfully shy, but she is a complete extrovert. The underlined words are context clues for the word extrovert. They tell you that an extrovert is the opposite of a shy person—an outgoing person. Try It Read these lines from “My Castle.” I have a beautiful castle, With towers and battlements fair; You may not know the word battlements, but the words castle and towers are context clues that can help you figure out its meaning. Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC Discuss Brainstorm definitions for the word battlements. The following words appear in “My Castle.” Find the words in the poem and identify the context clues that help you understand their meanings. Then write a definition for each word. 1. pomp, p. 39 2. fanciful, p. 39 3. monarchs, p. 40 My Castle 41 CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 41 5/6/13 12:48 PM Respond to Text: How Speakers Reflect on a Topic “My Castle” is one poem with two speakers. They have different ideas about the castle. Is it real or in the clouds? Why does it matter? Try It Think about what you have learned about how the speaker of a poem reflects on the poem’s topic. For example, the speaker of “The Road Not Taken” is a thoughtful person who makes a careful decision to walk on the road that might offer some adventure. Discuss How do the speakers in “My Castle” reflect on the topic of the poem? On Your Own Write a paragraph about the speakers in “My Castle.” Tell about how they reflect differently on the topic of the poem. Use the next page to help you plan your response. Then write your paragraph on a separate sheet of paper. A good paragraph ✔ shows your understanding of what the poem means. ✔ explains how the two speakers reflect on the topic. ✔ includes a topic sentence and supporting ideas. ✔ ends with a concluding statement. ✔ uses complete sentences. ✔ is free of spelling and grammatical errors. Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC Checklist for a Good Response 42 Lesson 2 • Poetry CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 42 5/6/13 12:48 PM My Analysis of the Speakers in the Poem 1. Topic Sentence Include this information in your first sentence: In the poem “My Castle,” there are two speakers—one who thinks the castle and one who thinks the castle . 2. Detail Sentences The sentences of your paragraph should provide details that explain how the speakers reflect differently on the topic. Use this chart to organize your ideas. First Speaker Second Speaker What does the castle look like? Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC Where is the castle? How does the castle make the speaker feel? 3. Concluding Sentence Your final sentence should restate the poem’s meaning with a new twist. On a separate sheet of paper, write your paragraph. My Castle 43 CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 43 5/6/13 12:48 PM Read on Your Own Read the poems independently three times, using the skills you have learned. Then answer the Comprehension Check questions. First Read Second Read Third Read Practice the first-read skills you learned in this lesson. Practice the second-read skills you learned in this lesson. Think critically about the poems. Lady Icicle by Emily Pauline Johnson Visualize Think about what Lady Icicle looks like. Circle the words that help you form a picture in your mind. One detail has been circled for you. Speaker Think about who the speaker is in this poem and how he or she feels about Lady Icicle. 5 Little Lady Icicle is dreaming in the north-land And gleaming in the north-land, her pillow all a-glow; For the frost has come and found her With an ermine1 robe around her Where little Lady Icicle lies dreaming in the snow. 10 Little Lady Icicle is waking in the north-land, And shaking in the north-land her pillow to and fro; And the hurricane a-skirling2 Sends the feathers all a-whirling Where little Lady Icicle is waking in the snow. ermine white fur from an animal in the weasel family a-skirling making a shrill or sharp sound like a bagpipe 1 2 Poetic Structure Underline pairs of words that rhyme. Think about the poem’s rhyme scheme. 44 Lesson 2 • Poetry CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 44 5/6/13 12:48 PM 15 Little Lady Icicle is laughing in the north-land, And quaffing3 in the north-land her wines that overflow; All the lakes and rivers crusting That her finger-tips are dusting, Where little Lady Icicle is laughing in the snow. 20 Little Lady Icicle is singing in the north-land, And bringing from the north-land a music wild and low; And the fairies watch and listen Where her silver slippers glisten, As little Lady Icicle goes singing through the snow. 25 Little Lady Icicle is coming from the north-land, Benumbing all the north-land where’er her feet may go; With a fringe of frost before her And a crystal garment o’er her, Little Lady Icicle is coming with the snow. Figurative Language Think about what Lady Icicle’s “benumbing” feet are a metaphor for. Poetic Structure Think about how the stanzas build on one another, contributing new information and telling the story. quaffing drinking 3 Lady Icicle / Snow-Flakes 45 CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 45 5/6/13 12:48 PM Snow-Flakes by Fannie Isabelle Sherrick Figurative Language Draw a box around the metaphors in the second stanza. Visualize what they compare. Speaker Think about how the speaker feels about snowflakes. Critical Thinking Think about the author’s main message, or theme, in the poem. I wonder what they are, These pretty, wayward things, That o’er the gloomy earth The wind of heaven flings. 5 10 15 20 Each one a tiny star, And each a perfect gem; What magic in the art That thus has fashioned them. What beauty in the flake That falls upon my hand; And yet this tiny thing My will cannot command. No two are just alike, And yet they are the same; I wonder if my thought Could give to each a name. Unlike the fragile flowers That love the sun’s warm rays, These snow-flakes love the cold, And die on sunny days! So dainty and so pure, How beautiful they are; And yet the slightest touch Their purity may mar. 25 They must be gazed upon, Not handled or caressed; And thus we hold afar The things we love the best. 46 Lesson 2 • Poetry CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 46 6/4/13 11:12 AM Comprehension Check 1. Reread the fourth stanza of the poem “Lady Icicle.” Describe what you visualize as you read. What words help you visualize the scene? 2. Read this stanza from the poem “Snow-Flakes.” So dainty and so pure, How beautiful they are; And yet the slightest touch Their purity may mar. Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC What does the word mar mean? What context clues help you understand the word? 3. Reread the poem “Snow-Flakes.” How does the fifth stanza build on the first four stanzas and also introduce a new idea? Lady Icicle / Snow-Flakes 47 CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 47 5/6/13 3:03 PM 4. Reread the last stanza of “Snow-Flakes.” For what are snowflakes a metaphor? Explain the metaphor using details from the poem. 5. Read this dictionary definition of the word wayward from the second line of the poem “Snow-Flakes.” way•ward (‘wa-w rd) adjective. 1: turning or changing irregularly; 2: flighty 6. Think about both poems. How are the speakers similar? How are they different? Find details from each poem to support your response. Duplicating any part of this book is prohibited by law. © 2014 Triumph Learning, LLC What part of speech is wayward? Which syllable is stressed? Use wayward in a sentence. 48 Lesson 2 • Poetry CC13_ELA_G5_SE_L02_029-048.indd 48 5/6/13 12:48 PM