1 Karen Simecek, University of Warwick Moral Understanding through Poetic Experience In this paper I will discuss how poetry, particularly our emotional and aesthetic response to some poetic works can play a significant role in developing our understanding of certain moral issues. I will argue that poetry when engaged with as an artwork, with the same attention to design, inner connectedness and the expectation that the work means something beyond the literal, gives rise to a particular kind of experience. Part of what creates this experience is the way in which we engage with the poetic as well as the representational elements of the work. Our engagement must involve attending to the formal features of the work and responding imaginatively, creatively and most importantly, emotionally to the mode of presentation. It is through our emotional responses to the poem that allows us to come to see certain moral issues for ourselves by providing a distinct perspective, which we take part in, on a particular subject. In illustrating this point I will provide a reading of the poem How to Kill by Keith Douglas; I will show that we only come to see the moral problem presented in the poem through our emotional response, which is produced by the reading experience; crucially, I will demonstrate that the moral problem does not arise from a sympathetic response to the character in the poem. Poetic Experience Many works of poetry demand that in order to fully understand them we read them in a literary way, by attending to the formal features of the work in connection to the representational elements and appreciating it as a unified art‐object. We must therefore grasp the poem as a coherent and consistent whole, which requires us to have a heightened awareness of design and to forge connections within the work. In order to understand a work of poetry, it is not sufficient to merely grasp the content in that form but to attend to the resulting experience. It is only through the experience of reading and forging connections that we are able to see the work as a complex, consistent and interrelated whole. To forge the necessary connections, the reader must be sensitive to the words, phrases and images employed in the poem, respond to these elements, the feelings and associations they evoke and have an awareness of how these elements come together as a whole. So when reading we must try to unify our experience – what we understand from the poem must be in response to this unified experience. An appropriate understanding or to be said to have grasped the content of the poem, one must have considered all the elements in the context of the whole work. 2 This experience gets us to focus on certain aspects, since some words and phrases will resonate more strongly with us, evoking richer images which have a stronger affect on us, leading us to carry these through the poem, connecting them with other words (and their connotations), images, ideas and concepts. Take for instance the following poem by Selima Hill: The passion‐fruit resembles coloured bruises rolled into a ball you can suck The rhyme connects the first two lines in meaning, strengthening the image of passion fruits as bruises. The consonance of the words ‘coloured’ and ‘rolled’ link the two stanzas together, so we begin to understand the image as something ‘rolled/into a ball you can suck’. All the ‘s’ sounds also suggest a connection between these words, encouraging the reader to forge connections between the meaning of ‘passion’ and ‘bruises’, arriving at something like ‘passion can hurt and endure like bruises’, which we connect with the completeness expressed by the second stanza. Certain words or ideas will resonate through the whole poem, affecting how we interpret and understand other elements of the poem. In this case it seems to be the word ‘bruises’ which hangs at the centre and affects how we understand ‘rolled’ and ‘suck’. Because of this relationship between the words we interpret rolled and suck as being more aggressive or even violent actions which we must endure. And of course, the word ‘suck’ suggests the erotic, which affects our understanding of the rest of the poem. From this we know we are not merely talking about passion‐ fruits but something else. As we have seen in this example, meaning emerges from a process of forging of connections because it results in appreciating the relationship between images, thoughts, emotions and feelings, in other words, we arrive at a particular complex network of associations which binds the elements together allowing us to grasp the work as a unified whole. What this complex network of associations provides us with is the perspective on offer in the poem, allowing us to come to see the subject and themes from that unique view point. I do not merely mean the perspective of the poet (or even hypothetical poet), character or narrator, instead what is meant here is a particular kind of relation between the reader, their ideas, thoughts, feelings and the ideas, concepts and emotions expressed in the poem. It is this particular network of connections made that allows the reader to take on the perspective of the work, which is getting us to see something in a unique way. When we say ‘see something’ what is meant is not necessarily seeing the subject of the poem in a particular light but also, coming to understand an idea, thought or concept in relation to other concepts. Seeing something in such a unique way contributes to our understanding of the work because of the concepts we must appeal to in order to make sense of the elements in relation to one another. Ultimately in understanding the work we must be able to grasp all elements (including those experiential elements) as part of a coherent and consistent whole. 3 Emotional Engagement I now want to argue that part of this experience must be emotional, that is, we must read with emotion in order to fully understand some works of poetry. This involves responding emotionally to the experience which the poetic features and the representational elements produce. On my view, not engaging emotionally will result in a failure to fully understand the poem because our emotional responses to the reading experience help us to forge connections across the work and with our own thoughts, concepts and commitments relevant to the work. Engaging emotionally is necessary in order to forge some connections within the work and therefore understand the poem as a unified whole. In her book Deeper than Reason, Jenefer Robinson develops a similar position, arguing that in order to fully understand some works of literature we must read with emotion. She writes “nothing else can do the job that emotions do. Without appropriate emotional responses, some novels simply cannot be adequately understood.” (Robinson, 2007; 107) On her view, we engage emotionally with a literary work in order to gain an appreciation and understanding of the characters and their situations. To support her claims, Robinson gives an example from Anna Karenina, where Anna visits her son on his birthday and takes with her a parcel of toys for him. However, Anna is rushed out of the house by the servants, not giving her enough time to give the parcel to her son. Robinson comments that the reader’s emotional response to this episode in the novel is “a way of understanding Anna and her situation. An examination of the sources of our emotional responses to Anna reveal important facts about Anna and her situation as described in the novel.” (ibid; 109) Robinson argues that relevant emotional responses focus our attention on aspects of the novel that we take to be important to us. This focusing allows us to develop a perspective from which we interpret the work: “The emotions function to alert us to important aspects of the story such as plot, character, setting, and point of view ... [O]ur emotions can lead us to discover subtleties in character and plot that would escape a reader who remains emotionally uninvolved in the story.” (ibid; 107) Her claim is that by engaging emotionally with a novel we become in a position to notice certain features, to appreciate their significance that would otherwise go unnoticed. In relation to works such as Anna Karenina, Robinson argues, “although it might seem that an unemotional point of view can serve the same purpose as a bona fide emotional response, in fact those who fail to respond emotionally to Anna won’t be focused on her vulnerability with the same urgency and sense of its importance.” (ibid; 126) And so the unemotional reader would not interpret the work from this perspective and would fail to understand the work as a coherent and consistent whole. Robinson continues: “I might not notice Anna’s vulnerability unless I respond with sadness and compassion to her. The emotions are ways of focusing our attention on those things that are important to our wants, goals, and interests.” (ibid; 126) So on Robinson’s view, we must respond emotionally to the characters (and events in relation to them) in order to notice the features of their character which are relevant in forming a coherent interpretation of the work. 4 How to Kill I agree with Robinson that the emotions do get us to focus on certain aspects of the work. However, I do not think that we are focusing on specific aspects of plot, character or setting but appreciating the subtleties of the perspective we take up on reading the poem, which may be different to the perspective of the character. So we do come to see something that would have otherwise gone unnoticed but what we see is connections between the poetic features, and the thoughts, feelings expressed by the poem and our own thoughts, beliefs, and commitments. I agree with Robinson that emotional engagement is sometimes required in poetry in order to make sense of as much of the work as possible in a consistent way but understanding a work isn’t necessarily the same as understanding a character. In fact, our emotional response to some works of poetry can show us the importance of failing to appreciate the perspective of the character. Also, Robinson suggests that we respond emotionally to the way characters are presented in a novel. However, in some works of poetry, we can be prompted to have an emotional response by the poetic features of the work and the resulting mode of presentation, which isn’t always connected to the representation of a character. I now wish to discuss the poem How to Kill which highlights the issue with Robinson’s view, yet still demonstrates a requirement to engage emotionally in order to fully understand the work. I will then argue that it is the nature of our emotional engagement which contributes to our moral understanding of the issue at the heart of the poem. How to kill Under the parabola of a ball, a child turning into a man, I looked into the air too long. The ball fell in my hand, it sang in the closed fist: Open Open Behold a gift designed to kill. Now in my dial of glass appears the soldier who is going to die. He smiles, and moves about in ways his mother knows, habits of his. The wires touch his face: I cry NOW. Death, like a familiar, hears and look, has made a man of dust 5 of a man of flesh. This sorcery I do. Being damned, I am amused to see the centre of love diffused and the wave of love travel into vacancy. How easy it is to make a ghost. The weightless mosquito touches her tiny shadow on the stone, and with how like, how infinite a lightness, man and shadow meet. They fuse. A shadow is a man when the mosquito death approaches. Although there are two characters in the poem, the sniper and the soldier who is shot, we are not given enough information about either character or their situation. There is little mention in the poem of the man killed, apart from in the second stanza with the vague description ‘He smiles, and moves about in ways/his mother knows, habits of his.’ And with the sniper himself, we are only presented with his action of killing the soldier and then his response, no context is given beyond the immediate situation. Of course, at least part of our understanding of this poem must involve understanding who the characters are. But we only need to appreciate the relation they bear to one another – the killer and the killed. Further information about them is not needed to understand the poem; we do not need to attend to certain aspects of their character, plot or setting. What is important is that we see the sniper’s response to his actions and how his response is bound to his representation of the events. It just so happens that the reader may represent these events differently. What is most important is our own emotional response to his lack of emotion. When engaging with the poem, we do not come to understand the sniper’s response, how it is that he is able to glorify the death of the soldier even though we may be able to appreciate the aesthetic quality of the final two stanzas. And that is precisely why the poem is interesting. Our emotional response is in tension with the aesthetics of the poem and in tension with the sniper’s response to the killing. Our engagement with the poem does not lead to an appreciation of the character and his situation. It may seem that our emotional response is directly connected to the way the sniper views his actions but the formal features of the poem do much of the work in getting us to reject the sniper’s response. Take for example, the use of enjambment in the poem. When we read the words ‘I cry/NOW’ in the second stanza we are presented with polar emotional responses to the killing of the soldier. But in order to see the two different responses, we must read these words with emotion, in particular we must respond emotionally to ‘I cry’, only then will the enjambment have any effect. 6 The obvious but important feature is the silence that separates these words, which, in terms of their literal meaning, should sit together. We read and understand the words ‘I cry’ in isolation to begin with, since we take a natural break at the end of the line. Reading these words in isolation allows us to reflect on these words only (our reflection is intensified because these words act as an emotional trigger), suggesting that the sniper is upset, that his ‘cry’ is symbolic of distress, compassion for the soldier who he is about to shoot. The build up to this moment in the second stanza with the description of the soldier, moving ‘in ways only his mother knows’, shows us the human side of the soldier, and we are therefore lead to react to the sniper’s ‘cry’ as the correct response. Yet when we read ‘NOW’ on the next line, the words ‘I cry’ become extended to ‘I cry NOW’, changing the meaning of ‘cry’ from distress to command (with urgency). This change in meaning negates the reading of the previous line, leaving us, the readers, feeling confused and reacting to the sniper’s response. We are therefore guided to react to the sniper’s response, to question it. The words alone cannot invoke this response; we only focus on this change of meaning because we are reading with emotion. Often we make the wrong assumption regarding what someone is saying but it doesn’t result in such deep confusion and recoil; it is our emotional response in this case that makes the difference. Our response intensifies reading further in the poem; we become increasingly horrified at the sniper’s response. In the final stanza, the metaphor of the mosquito and the shadow does more than just communicate the image of the bullet travelling through air, it communicates the response of the sniper; his fascination with the consequences of his actions, imagining it to be a beautiful moment when the bullet ‘fuses’ with the man. The words ‘They fuse’ suggest that the man and bullet belong together, that his body accepted the bullet. The description is of pure fascination, using words such as ‘weightless’, ‘infinite lightness’, trying to communicate the grandeur of his perception of the event. The sniper views the killing as something spiritual, therefore unburdening the responsibility of the destruction of another human being from himself. He sees that he has created something new; he has transformed the man, not killed him. Not only has the sniper failed to show compassion at the point of killing but has inappropriate responses to his actions, as a consequence we do not engage emotionally with the sniper in the final stanza. At the moment we read the enjambment we are presented with raw emotional data from our responses to the effect produced by the poetic and representational elements together, which allows us to feel the moral tension at the heart of the poem. Not only do we recoil at the point we feel the sniper’s response to be inappropriate, we are also responding to the aesthetic quality of the poem, which serves to keep us focused on the sniper’s response and allows us to enter into it even though we do not share his interpretation. 7 Moral understanding The divide between our aesthetic appreciation of the poem and our emotional response creates a tension between the reader and the sniper; this is a moral tension since the reader is pushed to question the character of the sniper – has he responded to killing another human being as we feel he ought to? This question arises since we have a different emotional response to the sniper yet we are lead to enter into his view of the killing through the aesthetics of the work. So as we can see the poem centres on a divide between the character and the reader; we take his view of the killing seriously because of the aesthetic properties but we recoil because we object to the sniper’s view. So the uncomfortable feeling in the poem which leads us to the moral question is generated by our engagement with the aesthetic quality of the work and our emotional response. This helps us to come to see the moral issue at the heart of the poem from a unique perspective. The perspective is not that of the sniper because it is my own emotional responses and commitments that are drawn in; these do not belong to the sniper and appear to be at odds with the commitments and response of the sniper, which is most apparent in the final stanza, in his glorification and misrepresentation of his actions. Also the aesthetic quality of the work is produced by the formal features of the poem and are therefore also not truly part of the sniper’s response but a way of expressing his view. Our emotional engagement does not just get us to question the response of the sniper in the poem but also gets us to see the moral problem on a conceptual level. It is not coming to appreciate the moral dilemma faced by the soldier since it is clear he does not see a dilemma, for him this is how to kill at war but what I demand of a soldier at war. Our emotional response and recoil to the poem reveals our expectation of how a soldier ought to behave, which involves making a judgement of some kind in connection with my moral understanding of such situations. And so my emotional response is generated by a process of forging connections between my experience of the poem and my own moral commitments. As a reader and responder to the work, I become implicated in the moral issue because it is my own conception of a soldier at war and such killing that is at stake. My repulsion to the sniper’s response brings out my uneasiness with my concept of a soldier, since I reject his perspective, yet, because of how I engage with the poem, I also come to understand the necessity of his response; if he did not respond in this way, how could he continue to kill other soldiers? I come to understand by forging connections across the poem that what I am rejecting is the very notion of a soldier at war. I have agued that in order to fully understand and appreciate a work of poetry we must engage in a process of forging connections in order to grasp the work as a coherent and consistent whole. The meaning of the work emerges through this experience of forging connections. As we saw in the example of How to Kill, an important part of this experience is our emotional response. 8 So I agree with Robinson that we need to engage emotionally with a work of poetry in order to fully understand the work, but this does not necessarily involve engaging emotionally with a character and their situation. As I have demonstrated, understanding a poem such as How to Kill requires emotional engagement but we engage emotionally with the experience of the work which may well be at odds with understanding the character. And because of our engagement with the aesthetics of the work we become implicated in the situation described, encouraged to enter into the sniper’s fascination – we must respond which has wider consequences for our own commitments and moral understanding. So, it is our emotional engagement which gets us to see the moral problem posed in the poem for ourselves. References Douglas, Keith. 2000. The Complete Poems, ed. 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