\ 2006 Ap lBl EUROPEAN HISTORY FREE-RESPONSE QUESTIONS EUROPEAN HISTORY SECTION II Parte (Suggested planning and writing time-35 minutes) Percent of Section II score-27 1/2 Directions: You are to answer ONE question from the three questions below. Make your selection carefully, choosing the question that you are best prepared to answer thoroughly in the time permitted. You should spend 5 minutes organizing or outlining your answer. Write your answer to the question on the lined pages of the Section II free-response booklet, making sure to indicate the question you are answering by writing the appropriate question number at the top of each page. Write·an essay that: • • • • Has a relevant thesis. Addresses all parts of the question. Supports thesis with specific evidence. Is well organized. APQll European History Free-Response Scoring Guidelines Generic Free-Response Scoring Rubric for AP European History These guidelines are intended to be generic and should be adapted to suit the particular needs ofthe question. 8-9 Points • Thesis is explicit and fully responsive to the question. • Organization is clear, consistently followed, and effective in support of the argument. • Essay is well balanced; all major topics suggested by the prompt are covered at some length. • All major assertions in the essay are supported by multiple pieces of relevant evidence. • May contain errors that do not detract from the argument. . 6-7 Points • Thesis is explicit and responsive to the question. • Organization is clear and effective in support ofthe argument but not consistently followed. • Essay is balanced; all major topics suggested by the prompt are covered at least briefly. • All major assertions in the essay are supported by at least one piece of relevant evidence. • May contain an error that detracts from the argument. 4--5 Points • Thesis is explicit but not fully responsive to the question. • Organization is clear and effective in support of the argument but not consistently followed. • Essay shows some imbalance; some major topics suggested by the prompt are neglected. • Most ofthe major assertions in the essay are supported by least one piece of relevant evidence. • May contain a few errors that detract from the argument. 2-3 Points • No explicit thesis or a thesis that merely repeats/paraphrases the prompt. • Organization is unclear and ineffective. • Essay shows serious imbalance; most major topics suggested by the prompt are neglected. • Only one or two major assertions are supported by relevant evidence. • May contain several errors that detract from the argument. 0-1 Points • No discemable attempt at a thesis. • No discemable organization. • One or none ofthe major topics suggested by the prompt is mentioned. • Little or no supporting evidence used. • May contain numerous errors that detract from the argument. Generic Core-Scoring Guide for AP European History Document-Based Question (Score scale 0-9) BASIC CORE Points 1. Provides an appropriate, explicitly stated, thesis that directly addresses all parts of the question. Thesis may not simply restate the question. 1 2. Discusses a majority of the documents individu­ ally and specifically. 1 Points Expands beyond basic core of 1-6. The basic score of 6 must be achieved before a student can earn expanded core points. 0-3 Examples: 3. Demonstrates understand- 1 ing of the basic meaning of a majority of the docu­ ments (may misinterpret no more than one). 4. Supports the thesis with appropriate interpreta­ tions of a majority of the documents. 1 5. Analyzes point of view or bias in at least three docu­ ments. 1 6. Analyzes documents by explicitly organizing them in at least three appropri­ ate groups. 1 Subtotal 6 • Has a clear, analytical, and comprehensive thesis. • Uses all or almost all documents. • Addresses all parts of the question thoroughly. • Uses documents persua­ sively as evidence. • Shows understanding of nuances in the documents. • Analyzes point of view or bias in at least four docu­ ments cited in the essay. • Analyzes the documents in additional ways-addi­ tional groupings or other. • Brings in relevant "out­ side" historical content. TOTAL 26 EXPANDED CORE Subtotal 3 9 apcentral.collegeboard.com SCALE: Exceeds Standard: Name: Assessment: Date: Period: Understanding of the Big Ideas (25 %): The intro. paragraph has a clear and powerful thesis that addresses the issue. Application and Transfer of Knowled~e (25%): The arguments and evidence are relevant and connect to the big ideas Historical Thinking (25%): Impact (25%): Communication is fluid and delivery is smooth. Key history concepts s are fully explained The arguments make inferences and connections to prior learning. Sophisticated understanding of -chr0nology, -historical context, -the role of cause & effect -the results of continuity and change Evidence demonstrates exceptional effort and focus. Meets Standard: All EQ's are answered in depth. Thesis and intro paragraph the address issue. Frequent use of key history concepts. Evidence demonstrates effort and focus. All EQ's are,answered. Near Standard: Adapts new information to new situations with ease and clarity Arguments and evidence make many connections to the big ideas. Several connections to prior learning. Adapts new information to new situations. Thesis and intro paragraph Arguments and attempt to address the issue evidence attempt to connect to the big ideas. Some use ofkey historical Some connections to concepts. prior learning. Choice of evidence demonstrates insufficient Attempts to adapt new effort and/or focus. ideas to new situations. ',' Below Standard: Attempts to answer all EQ's. Thesis/intro do not address the issue. Little if any use of key history concepts. Choice of evidence demonstrates little or no effort and/or focus. Partial answers to the EQ's. Arguments and evidence are not connected to the big ideas. Few if any connections to prior learning. Does not adapt new information to new ideas. Meticulous proofreading and preparation. Each paragraph is focused and introduced by a topic sentence. Demonstrates a deep understanding of multiple perspectives. Conclusion is reflective and original. References several examples of: -chronology -historical context -the role of cause & effect -the results of continuity and change Demonstrates reflection on multiple perspectives Some use of -chronology -historical context -the role of cause and effect -the results of continuity and change. Communication is generally fluid and smooth. Very good proofreading and preparation. Each paragraph is focused and introduced by a topic sentence but may lack some detail. Conclusion is reflective. Commuriication suggests more preparation and proofreading are necessary. Paragraphs are focused but lack a topic. sentence and some important details. Demonstrates some awareness of multiple perspectives. Some reflection shown in conclusions. Little or no awareness of -chronology -context -cause & effect -continuity and change -multiple points of view Communication suggests little or no proofreading and preparation. Paragraphs lack focus and one or'more elements: Topic sentence Conclusion Clear body paragraphs