Connections N LY Extended Text Teaching Guide SA M PL E O with Performance Assessment The Lemonade War by Jacqueline Davies The new school year is a week away, and Evan Treski has been avoiding his little sister Jessie since a letter arrived from the school stating that both siblings have been placed in the same class. Jessie, on the other hand, is nervous about skipping third grade and thinks Evan could help ease her transition by introducing her to the other fourth graders. Jessie enjoys her brother’s company and can’t understand why he’s so angry. Meanwhile, Evan, who struggles academically, thinks his overachieving sister will humiliate him. The siblings’ personal conflict plays out over a competi- N LY tion to make the most money selling lemonade before Labor Day. With each chapter linked to a business or economic principle, the pair gleans valuable lessons through the successes and failures of their entrepreneurial ventures. Jacqueline Davies is an award-winning children’s book author. Her idea for The Lemonade War was inspired by an argument between her own children over who could set up a lemonade stand in the family’s driveway. In addition to The Lemonade War series, her titles also include picture books, fantasy, and historical fiction. Davies was born in Cleveland in 1962; today she lives in Mas- O sachusetts with her three children. Page references throughout this guide are from the © 2007 hardcover and paperback edition of PL E The Lemonade War. Other print and electronic versions of the text may vary. Copyright © by Houghton Mifflin Harcourt Publishing Company SA M All rights reserved. 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Possession of this publication in print format does not entitle users to convert this publication, or any portion of it, into electronic format. OVERVIEW This guide supports your teaching with The Lemonade War in an easy-to-use format. • Plan your instruction using the teaching objectives, reading assignment, and critical vocabulary list. • Focus students’ attention with questions that send them back to the text for discussions or writing. • Teach and assess with ideas for comprehension support, vocabulary development, and writing practice. • Use Text Complexity notes to help all students unpack meaning. The main objectives of the lessons and activities in this guide are to help students • describe characters in a story • describe how parts of a story build on earlier episodes • determine a central message of a story WORD STUDY N LY OBJECTIVES Additionally, students will learn to • analyze point of view • identify and analyze conflict in a story • analyze cause and effect • write dialogue using correct punctuation O • The academic vocabulary words in the box appear in The Lemonade War. Introduce these words before students read the book. Then display the words in the classroom and encourage students to use them as they discuss the text. complicated equation determined emphasis estimate (v.) philosopher PL E • Each lesson also includes a list of critical vocabulary words from the reading assignment. You may preview these words before students read each chapter. ACADEMIC VOCABULARY INTRODUCE THE TOPIC • Tell students that they are going to read The Lemonade War. Have students preview the book’s cover. • Display this essential question in a prominent place: How do people try to succeed? Tell students that this question can help them focus on important events and ideas as they read. SA M • Work with students to make a list of general “success tips” that might apply to any project or competition. (Examples may relate to the importance of creativity, teamwork, and effort.) Encourage students to add to and revise this list as they read. PREVIEW THE PERFORMANCE ASSESSMENT Tell students that after they finish reading and discussing the book, they will write a plan for a new business. Suggest that, as they read, they pay attention to details that relate to planning a business. CONNECT TO HOME Families can share their experiences with businesses and youth-run enterprises. Readers can describe the business concepts that each chapter introduces and discuss examples. Connections the lemonade war 3 POINT OF VIEW PLAN TEACH AND ASSESS • Describe effects of sound devices. Reading Assignment Chapters 1–2 2.READ Read aloud the first two chapters. Encourage students to pay attention to how they learn about the thoughts and feelings of the characters in each chapter. 3.WORD STUDY Tell students that authors often use words that represent sounds to add to the meaning or feeling of a story. Point out the words thwap, scra-a-a-ape, pop, crack, and thud in Chapter 1. Ask: How do these words help the reader understand Evan’s feelings? (the sounds emphasize his boredom, frustration, and growing anger) O Critical Vocabulary humiliated, nervousness, attention, competition, attract, customer N LY 1. COMPREHENSION Explain that a third-person narrator describes events as an outsider. Third-person narrators may tell the thoughts and feelings of one character or all main characters. Discuss how differences in point of view can affect a story. Objectives • Analyze point of view. FOCUS Use the following for writing or discussion. PL • How does the change in point of view between chapters affect our understanding of Jessie and Evan? 4.COLLABORATE Help students recognize that the third-person narrator shares only Evan’s thoughts and feelings in Chapter 1 and only Jessie’s thoughts and feelings in Chapter 2. Have students discuss the first Focus question in small groups. Suggest that they list details from the text about each character in a two-column chart with separate rows for each chapter. E 1 • What does Evan do to avoid Jessie? SA M • Why do Evan and Jessie feel differently about the letter that arrived from school? Cite details from the text that explain their feelings. 4 the lemonade war Connections 5.WRITE Have students write their answers to the first Focus question independently. 6.SHARE Invite students to share their ideas about how the shift in point of view affects the story. 7. ASSESS Have students write brief responses to the third Focus question. Strong responses will explain why the letter pleased Jessie but angered Evan. SCAFFOLDING FOR ELL STUDENTS Idioms Work with English language learners to identify context clues that help them understand the idiomatic expressions this is a curve ball and straight shooter in Chapter 2. Encourage them to use context to define other unfamiliar terms. CHARACTER • Use context to correctly define multiplemeaning words. Reading Assignment Chapters 3–4 Critical Vocabulary profit, expectantly, business, sneered, impressed, impatiently FOCUS Use the following for writing or discussion. 2.READ Have students complete the reading assignment independently. Ask them to pay attention to details about the characters as they read. 3.COLLABORATE Discuss the first Focus question as a whole-class. Students should note that Evan is angry and avoids his sister, but he still sticks up for her and recognizes her positive qualities. Have pairs discuss the second Focus question. In addition to describing each character’s personal qualities, suggest that students also look for details that tell about the siblings’ values and interests. 4.SHARE Invite students to share their answers to the second question. Record their responses in a Venn diagram. 5.WORD STUDY Draw students attention to the different ways in which the multiple-meaning word business is used on pages 32, 37, and 40. Have students work with a partner to define the word in each context. Then have students use a dictionary to clarify the precise meaning. PL • Explain Evan’s mixed feelings about his sister. Give details and examples that show his feelings. 1. COMPREHENSION Point out that readers can learn about a character through his or her thoughts, actions, and speech. These clues can help students describe a character’s overall qualities and importance to the story. N LY Objectives • Describe characters in a story. TEACH AND ASSESS O PLAN E 2 M • In what ways are Jessie and Evan similar and different? SA • Why does Evan become angrier with Jessie? How is a lack of communication affecting their relationship? Which details from the story support your answer? 6.ASSESS Assign the third Focus question. Have students write their answers. Strong responses will explain that poor communication is hurting the relationship between the siblings because each character’s feelings and motivations are misunderstood. TEXT COMPLEXITY Chronological Shifts Explain to struggling readers that authors sometimes interrupt the sequence of events to provide additional information about an earlier event. For example, in Chapter 3, Evan recalls his experience with a corner lemonade stand the previous summer. Ask: How does the author interrupt the order of events between the end of Chapter 3 and the beginning of Chapter 4? What purpose does this time shift serve? (The author uses a flashback at the beginning of Chapter 4 to describe what Evan experienced at the end of Chapter 3 from Jessie’s point of view.) Connections the lemonade war 5 CONFLICT PLAN TEACH AND ASSESS • Interpret figurative language. Reading Assignment Chapters 5–6 2.READ Students may complete the reading assignment independently. Suggest that as they read, students think about the problems the characters face. 3.WORD STUDY Explain that a simile is a type of figurative language that directly compares unlike things, often using the word like or as. For example, the narrator describes how Evan’s words to Jessie “felt like disgusting spiders running out of his mouth” (page 61). Later, Jessie’s reply to Evan is described as “smooth as whipped cream” (page 63). Ask: How do these images help show a sharp contrast between Jessie and Evan? (Evan is burdened by his feelings and feels remorse when he reacts to them. While Jessie experiences inner struggles of her own, the image highlights her confidence and quick-wittedness.) O Critical Vocabulary competition, taunting, miser, menacing, complicated, desirable, pulverize N LY 1. COMPREHENSION Tell students that conflict is a problem experienced by the main characters of a story. A conflict may involve a struggle between two characters, between a character and outside forces, or within the mind of a character. While stories may have more than one conflict, the major events of a story often revolve around a central conflict. Objectives • Identify and analyze conflict in a story. FOCUS Use the following for writing or discussion. PL • What conflicts do Jessie and Evan face within their own minds? Cite examples from the story in your answer. E 3 M • How is the title of Chapter 5 important to the story? Give details from the story to support your answer. SA • Compare and contrast the ways in which Jessie and Evan try to sell more lemonade in Chapter 6. 6 the lemonade war Connections 4.WRITE Assign the first Focus question. Have students write their responses independently, referring to the text for details that show the characters’ feelings. 5.COLLABORATE Work with students to identify the competition introduced in Chapter 5 (to earn the most money selling lemonade) and the business strategies used by Jessie and Evan in Chapter 6 (Jessie: value-added; Evan: goodwill). Then have students discuss the second and third Focus questions in small groups. Remind them to take notes during their discussion. 6.SHARE Let representatives from each group present their ideas to the class. Then ask students to predict the winner of the lemonade war based on what they have learned about Jessie and Evan. Tally students’ responses on the board. 7. ASSESS Have students write a brief paragraph that describes the central conflict between Jessie and Evan. Strong responses should describe how the personal conflict between Jessie and Evan leads to the lemonade war. STORY STRUCTURE • Distinguish shades of meaning among related words. Reading Assignment Chapters 7–8 Critical Vocabulary guarantee, gimmick, residential, calculations, stern, persistent FOCUS Use the following for writing or discussion. 2.READ Ask students to complete the reading assignment independently. Encourage them to take notes on the main plot events as they read, noticing how the events in these chapters build on the events from earlier chapters. 3.WORD STUDY Explain that the small differences among related words are called shades of meaning. Point out the words beat and win on page 87. Ask: How do the meanings of these words differ? Why would you choose to use one word over the other? (The word win emphasizes success itself, while beat focuses on the competition. I might choose win instead of beat to show sensitivity toward a competitor.) 4.COLLABORATE Call attention to the math calculations that Evan and Jessie perform as they develop their plans. As pairs discuss their answers to the first Focus question, suggest that they consider other ways of solving the equations. PL • How do Evan and Jessie plan to sell lemonade in Chapters 7 and 8? 1. COMPREHENSION Remind students that the action of a story is called the plot. The rising action includes the events that show how characters try to resolve their conflict. Chart the major events of the story’s plot so far as a class. N LY Objectives • Describe how successive parts of a story build on earlier episodes. TEACH AND ASSESS O PLAN E 4 M • Why does the narrator say that Evan would think of the saying “Pride goeth before a fall” on page 96? SA • Why does Jessie have mixed feelings about the success of her franchises? Which details from the story show her feelings? 5.WRITE Assign the second Focus question to half of the class and the third question to the other half. Have students work independently to write their answers. 6.SHARE Invite students to share their responses in a whole class discussion. 7. ASSESS Ask students to write a paragraph comparing the successes and failures Jessie and Evan have experienced so far. Strong responses will note that creative planning led to success, but unexpected complications arose. TEXT COMPLEXITY Subject-Specific Words Have all students work in pairs to define the following economics terms, first using context and then using a dictionary to confirm meanings: real estate, value, earn, sales, market, production, profit margin, operating costs, franchise, company, investment. Then discuss real-life examples of each term as a whole class. Connections the lemonade war 7 CAUSE AND EFFECT PLAN TEACH AND ASSESS • Use knowledge of affixes and roots to determine the meanings of words. Reading Assignment Chapters 9–12 2.WORD STUDY Tell students that a root is the main part of a word that contains the word’s basic meaning. Affixes are word parts at the beginning or end of a word. Work with students to identify and define the affixes and roots in the vocabulary words. Then have students use the definitions of these word parts to define the vocabulary words. Encourage students to use their knowledge of roots and affixes to help them understand the meanings of unfamiliar words as they read. O Critical Vocabulary negotiation, miserable, impatient, malicious, violation, frantically N LY 1. COMPREHENSION Explain that a cause is the reason for an action. An effect is the result of an action. Analyzing cause and effect can help readers understand events in a story. Objectives • Analyze cause and effect. 3.READ For fluency practice, have students complete the reading assignment in pairs, alternating chapters. FOCUS Use the following for writing or discussion. PL • Why does Evan suggest ending the lemonade war? Cite details from the story that show his reasons. 4.COLLABORATE Discuss the first focus question as a whole class. Explain that causes and effects are not always directly stated. Readers must look for clues in the text to make inferences about the reasons for or results of an event. Ask: Who is Grumpminster Fink? What does Evan realize about himself in Chapter 9? (Grumpminster Fink is a character from stories Evan used to tell Jessie when they were younger. Thinking about Grumpminster Fink makes Evan realize that he has been cranky and mean himself. He wants to call off the lemonade war because he misses having fun with his sister.) E 5 M • Why does Jessie put bugs and dirt in Evan’s lemonade? What events in the story lead to this action? SA • What are the effects of Jessie’s “malicious mischief”? 8 the lemonade war Connections 5.WRITE Have students write their answers to the second and third focus questions. Encourage students to identify at least two causes and two effects of Jessie’s actions. 6.SHARE Invite students to share their responses to the second and third Focus questions. (Possible causes: Jessie is mad at Evan. She is afraid of losing Megan’s money if she loses the war. She finds out that she only earned 89 cents more than Evan. Possible effects: Evan loses the war. Jessie feels guilty.) 7. ASSESS Ask students to choose an event from the book and describe its cause or its effect. CENTRAL MESSAGE • Use context clues to determine the meanings of words. • Write a dialogue using correct punctuation. Reading Assignment Chapters 13–14 Critical Vocabulary resolution, crisis, reprimand, skeptical, reassuring FOCUS 2.WORD STUDY Suggest that, as they read, students note any unfamiliar or challenging words. Encourage them to look for context clues in the surrounding text that can help them guess the meanings of these words. Then have them use a dictionary to confirm meanings. 3.READ Students may complete the reading assignment independently. Ask them to think about details that suggest a central message as they read. 4.COLLABORATE Have students discuss the first two Focus questions in small groups. Remind them to refer to the text for details and take notes on their discussion. 5.SHARE Invite students to share their answers. Then ask students how their answers might point to a message about life. (Possible messages: Talking about how you feel can help prevent conflicts. People are intelligent in different ways. How you compete is more important than winning.) PL Use the following for writing or discussion. 1. COMPREHENSION Tell students that a central message of a story is a main lesson or idea that the author wants to share with readers. Key details about how conflicts are resolved or how characters change can help readers determine a central message. N LY Objectives • Determine the central message of a story. TEACH AND ASSESS O PLAN E 6 • What do Jessie and Evan learn about themselves and each other? Give details from the story to support your answer. M • How are the story’s main conflicts resolved? SA • Describe a central message of the book. Remember to support your ideas with details from the story. 6.WRITING INSTRUCTION Ask students to locate examples of dialogue in the book. Then display different examples on the board, circling the punctuation that sets off the dialogue and underlining the tags. Work with students to use the examples to write a list of rules for writing dialogue. 7. WRITING PRACTICE Have students write a brief dialogue between Jessie and Evan that could have taken place after the book’s ending when the siblings discussed the Labor Day project. Remind students to use commas and quotations to punctuate the dialogue correctly. 8.ASSESS Assign the third Focus question. Have students use details from the text to support their answer. Connections the lemonade war 9 PERFORMANCE ASSESSMENT OVERVIEW Students will combine information from The Lemonade War with their own ideas to write a plan for a new business. Tech Option: Students may develop their business plan using computer software and present their business plan to the class. N LY INTRODUCE THE ASSESSMENT Tell students that a performance assessment allows them to use what they have learned from their reading to complete a creative project. In this assessment, they will use information from The Lemonade War to create a business plan. If possible, share some examples of simple business plans that students can use as models. SUPPORT STUDENTS’ WORK O • Distribute copies of the blackline master on the facing page. Review the steps with students and answer any questions they have about the assessment. • Clarify that each student will create his or her own business plan, although step 2 allows them to share ideas with a partner as part of the planning process. E • Ensure that students have access to materials they will need. This might include computer access. ASSESS STUDENTS’ PERFORMANCE PL The following are suggested criteria for scoring this performance assessment. To help students focus their work, you might share these criteria or a simplified version of them. STRONG • The business plan integrates facts from The Lemonade War but leaves out some key information. • The business plan integrates little relevant information from The Lemonade War. • The text provides a clear outline of the business plan. • The text describes the business plan but does not provide enough detail. • The plan does not clearly describe a business plan. • The text has few or no errors in grammar, mechanics, and spelling. • The text has some errors, but the writer’s meaning is clear. • The text has many errors, making the writer’s meaning unclear. M RUBRIC WEAK • The business plan integrates information from The Lemonade War that would be helpful for a new business. SA 10 AVERAGE the lemonade war Connections Name: PERFORMANCE ASSESSMENT Date: WRITE A BUSINESS PLAN What lessons did Jessie and Evan learn in the business of selling lemonade? Use information from The Lemonade War to write a plan for a new business. Plan N LY 1. Think about an idea for a new business. Then review The Lemonade War and take notes on lessons that Jessie and Evan learned about business. Which lessons would be important to your business plan? 2. Meet with a partner to share your ideas. Discuss what information would make the most sense for a business plan. E Description of Product or Service O 3.Organize your ideas. You may use this chart if you wish. PL M Money-Making Ideas SA © Houghton Mifflin Harcourt Publishing Company. All rights reserved Organization of Business Create 4.Write the text for your business plan. 5. Exchange drafts with a partner. Read your partner’s business plan. Tell what you like about his or her plan and how the plan could be better. 6.Use your partner’s comments to revise your business plan. 7. Edit your business plan to make sure there are no spelling errors or other mistakes. The Lemonade War FICTION by Jacqueline Davies Text Complexity in The Lemonade War Multiple themes, shifts in chronology, subject-specific words, and allusion contribute to text complexity in The Lemonade War. Quantitative Measure Lexile 630L 1300 1200 1100 1000 N LY Lexile Number E The lessons in this guide provide options for differentiated instruction tied to specific reading assignments and the text complexity issues they present. Look for boxed notes with suggestions for English language learners, struggling readers, and above-level readers. O Differentiating for Diverse Learners TEXT COMPLEXITY RUBRIC 900 • Allusion The text alludes to and includes excerpts from Charlotte’s Web. 800 3 700 4 600 5 500 • Subject-Specific Vocabulary While much of the language is conversational and accessible, the text also contains some complex economics terms. 6 400 • Shifts in Chronology Chronological shifts allow the third-person omniscient narrator to follow the simultaneous thoughts and actions of each sibling. Grade Level • Multiple Themes The book supports multiple themes about relationships, competition, work, and morals. PL Purpose/Levels of Meaning Difficult: multiple levels of meaning Text Structure SA M Qualitative Measures Difficult: time shifts and complex characters; some graphics essential to understanding text Reader and Task Considerations Language Conventionality and Clarity Moderate: subject-specific vocabulary; some figurative language Knowledge Demands Moderate: few allusions to other texts Text Complexity notes throughout the lessons can help you decide how best to motivate your students and provide additional support as needed. G3 1597419