"I Won't Grow Up" "I Won't Grow Up" by Madelon J. Cheatham, Lindsay Griffin, Karen Davis, Jackie Roberts, and Kelli D. Martin This module is designed for beginning sixth grade students to reflect on childhood--from multiple literature and poetry selections, as well as their own experiences. After reading a variety of texts, students will write an informative essay comparing different authors approaches to the theme of growing up. GRADES DISCIPLINE COURSE 5-6 ELA Language Arts Literacy Design Collaborative 6 1 of 28 https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" Section 1: What Task? Teaching Task Task Template 23 - Informational or Explanatory How do experiences from childhood impact adulthood? After reading a variety of texts, write an essay in which you compare the approaches each text uses to develop the theme of growing up . Support your discussion with evidence from the text(s). What conclusions can you draw? D3 Standards CCSS Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts & Literacy in History/Social Studies, Science, and Technical Subjects Use knowledge of language and its conventions when writing, speaking, reading, or listening. L.6.3 L.6.3.a Vary sentence patterns for meaning, reader/listener interest, and style. L.6.3.b Maintain consistency in style and tone. Demonstrate understanding of figurative language, word relationships, and nuances in word meanings. L.6.5 Interpret figures of speech (e.g., personification) in context. L.6.5.a Use the relationship between particular words (e.g., cause/effect, part/whole, item/category) to better understand each of the words. L.6.5.b Distinguish among the connotations (associations) of words with similar denotations (definitions) (e.g., stingy, scrimping, economical, unwasteful, thrifty). L.6.5.c RI.6.1 Cite textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text. RI.6.2 Determine a central idea of a text and how it is conveyed through particular details; provide a summary of the text distinct from personal opinions or Literacy Design Collaborative 2 of 28 https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" judgments. RI.6.3 Analyze in detail how a key individual, event, or idea is introduced, illustrated, and elaborated in a text (e.g., through examples or anecdotes). RI.6.4 Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in a text, including figurative, connotative, and technical meanings. RI.6.5 Analyze how a particular sentence, paragraph, chapter, or section fits into the overall structure of a text and contributes to the development of the ideas. RI.6.6 Determine an author's point of view or purpose in a text and explain how it is conveyed in the text. RI.6.10 SL.6.1 By the end of the year, read and comprehend literary nonfiction in the grades 6— 8 text complexity band proficiently, with scaffolding as needed at the high end of the range. Engage effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grade 6 topics, texts, and issues, building on others' ideas and expressing their own clearly. Come to discussions prepared, having read or studied required material; explicitly draw on that preparation by referring to evidence on the topic, text, or issue to probe and reflect on ideas under discussion. SL.6.1.a SL.6.1.b Follow rules for collegial discussions, set specific goals and deadlines, and define individual roles as needed. SL.6.1.c Pose and respond to specific questions with elaboration and detail by making comments that contribute to the topic, text, or issue under discussion. SL.6.1.d Review the key ideas expressed and demonstrate understanding of multiple perspectives through reflection and paraphrasing. W.6.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas, concepts, and information through the selection, organization, and analysis of relevant content W.6.2.a W.6.2.b Literacy Design Collaborative Introduce a topic; organize ideas, concepts, and information, using strategies such as definition, classification, comparison/contrast, and cause/effect; include formatting (e.g., headings), graphics (e.g., charts, tables), and multimedia when useful to aiding comprehension. Develop the topic with relevant facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, 3 of 28 https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" or other information and examples. W.6.2.c Use appropriate transitions to clarify the relationships among ideas and concepts. W.6.2.d Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain the topic. Establish and maintain a formal style. W.6.2.e Provide a concluding statement or section that follows from the information or explanation presented. W.6.2.f W.6.4 W.6.5 W.6.6 W.6.9 Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience. With some guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach. Use technology, including the Internet, to produce and publish writing as well as to interact and collaborate with others; demonstrate sufficient command of keyboarding skills to type a minimum of three pages in a single sitting. Draw evidence from literary or informational texts to support analysis, reflection, and research. Apply grade 6 Reading standards to literature (e.g., "Compare and contrast texts in different forms or genres [e.g., stories and poems; historical novels and fantasy stories] in terms of their approaches to similar themes and topics"). W.6.9.a Apply grade 6 Reading standards to literary nonfiction (e.g., "Trace and evaluate the argument and specific claims in a text, distinguishing claims that are supported by reasons and evidence from claims that are not"). W.6.9.b W.6.10 Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision) and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of discipline-specific tasks, purposes, and audiences. Texts Eleven by Sandra Cisneros This is a short story about an eleven year old girl who experiences an unforgettable incident in front of all her classmates. Literacy Design Collaborative 4 of 28 https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" Poems: "On Turning Ten" by Billy Collins and "Life Doesn't Frighten Me" by Maya Angelou Musical Lyrics to "I Won't Grow Up" "Never Grow Up" by Taylor Swift Literacy Design Collaborative 5 of 28 https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" LDC Student Work Rubric - Informational or Explanatory Not Yet Approaches Expectations Meets Expectations Advanced 1 2 3 4 Attempts to address prompt, but lacks focus or is off-task. Addresses prompt appropriately, but with a weak or uneven focus. Addresses prompt appropriately and maintains a clear, steady focus. D: Addresses additional demands sufficiently. Addresses all aspects of prompt appropriately and maintains a strongly developed focus. D: Addresses additional demands with thoroughness and makes a connection to controlling idea. Attempts to establish a claim, but lacks a clear purpose. Establishes a controlling idea with a general purpose. Establishes a controlling idea with a clear purpose maintained throughout the response. Establishes a strong controlling idea with a clear purpose maintained throughout the response. Attempts to present information in response to the prompt, but lacks connections or relevance to the purpose of the prompt. Presents information from reading materials relevant to the purpose of the prompt with minor lapses in accuracy or completeness. Presents information from reading materials relevant to the prompt with accuracy and sufficient detail. Accurately presents information relevant to all parts of the prompt with effective selection of sources and details from reading materials. Attempts to provide details in response to the prompt, including retelling, but lacks sufficient development or relevancy. Presents appropriate details to support the focus and controlling idea. Presents appropriate and sufficient details to support the focus and controlling idea. Presents thorough and detailed information to strongly support the focus and controlling idea. Attempts to organize ideas, but lacks control of structure. Uses an appropriate organizational structure to address the specific requirements of the prompt, with some lapses in coherence or awkward use of the organizational structure. Maintains an appropriate organizational structure to address the specific requirements of the prompt. Maintains an organizational structure that intentionally and effectively enhances the presentation of information as required by the specific prompt. Attempts to demonstrate standard English conventions, but lacks cohesion and control of grammar, usage, and mechanics. Sources are used without citation. Demonstrates an uneven command of standard English conventions and cohesion. Uses language and tone with some inaccurate, inappropriate, or uneven features. Inconsistently cites sources. Demonstrates a command of standard English conventions and cohesion, with few errors. Response includes language and tone appropriate to the audience, purpose, and specific requirements of the prompt. Cites sources using an appropriate format with only minor errors. Demonstrates and maintains a well-developed command of standard English conventions and cohesion, with few errors. Response includes language and tone consistently appropriate to the audience, purpose, and specific requirements of the prompt. Consistently cites sources using an appropriate format. Attempts to include disciplinary content in explanations, but understanding of content is weak; content is irrelevant, inappropriate, or inaccurate. Briefly notes disciplinary content relevant to the prompt; shows basic or uneven understanding of content; minor errors in explanation. Accurately presents disciplinary content relevant to the prompt with sufficient explanations that demonstrate understanding. Integrates relevant and accurate disciplinary content with thorough explanations that demonstrate in-depth understanding. Focus Controlling Idea Reading/Research Development Organization Conventions Content Understanding Literacy Design Collaborative 6 of 28 https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" Background for Students Not provided Extension Not provided Literacy Design Collaborative 7 of 28 https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" Section 2: What Skills? Preparing for the Task BRIDGING CONVERSATION > TASK ENGAGEMENT: Ability to connect the task and new content to existing knowledge, skills, experiences, interests, and concerns. TASK AND RUBRIC ANALYSIS > TASK ANALYSIS: Ability to understand and explain the task's prompt and rubric. Reading Process PRE-READING > PLANNING THE READING: Ability to activate prior knowledge by asking students to think about their age. ACTIVE READING > ANNOTATION: Ability to analyze a text for diction, imagery, and theme. PRE-READING > ESSENTIAL VOCABULARY: Ability to determine connotation of words as used in text. ACTIVE READING > ESSENTIAL VOCABULARY: Ability to identify and master terms essential to understanding a text. ACTIVE READING > QUESTIONING: Ability to answer text-dependent comprehension questions about a story. ACTIVE READING > ANNOTATION: Ability to annotate the text for examples of imagery and figurative language. Transition to Writing BRIDGING CONVERSATION > IDENTIFYING SIGNIFICANT ELEMENTS: Ability to compare and contrast literary elements of a variety of texts. Writing Process INITIATION OF TASK > ESTABLISHING THE CONTROLLING IDEA: Ability to establish a claim and consolidate information relevant to task. PLANNING > OUTLINING THE WRITING: Ability to outline main points of the comparison essay. DEVELOPMENT > INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH: Ability to compose an introductory paragraph using a thesis statement. DEVELOPMENT > BODY PARAGRAPHS: Ability to develop two main body paragraphs comparing texts. REVISION, EDITING, AND COMPLETION > PEER EDITING: Ability to work with peers to provide constructive feedback in the revision and editing process. REVISION, EDITING, AND COMPLETION > FINAL DRAFT: Ability to submit final piece that meets expectations. Literacy Design Collaborative 8 of 28 https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" Section 3: What Instruction? PACING SKILL AND DEFINITION PRODUCT AND PROMPT SCORING GUIDE INSTRUCTIONAL STRATEGIES Preparing for the Task 15 mins BRIDGING CONVERSATION > TASK ENGAGEMENT: Ability to connect the task and new content to existing knowledge, skills, experiences, interests, and concerns. DAY 1-QUICKWRITE What are some ways you’ve grown up over the last few years? Consider any responsibilities you’ve taken on, such as caring for a pet or chores. Write these down in your journal and then describe how you feel about growing up. Student's response lists their responsibilities in journal and describes how they feel about growing up. Think/Pair/Share-Allow students to share with an elbow partner their journal response. Facilate a class discussion about the responsibilities of growing up and coming to middle school. Standards: W.6.4 : Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience. Literacy Design Collaborative 9 of 28 https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" PACING 20 mins SKILL AND DEFINITION BRIDGING CONVERSATION > TASK ENGAGEMENT: Ability to connect the task and new content to existing knowledge, skills, experiences, interests, and concerns. PRODUCT AND PROMPT DAY 1-FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE KEEPER SHEETS Take notes from literary devices keeper sheet using the Cornell Notes handout by (A) Defining unknown words, (B) Asking thoughtful questions, (C) Using Abbreviations or symbols SCORING GUIDE ALWAYS: Defines unknown words from the text Asks thoughtful questions about the text Uses abbreviations/symbols in their notes when possible Summarizes the most important information in a paragraph SOMETIMES: Defines unknown words from the text Asks thoughtful questions about the text Uses abbreviations/symbols in their notes when possible Summarizes the most important information in a paragraph INSTRUCTIONAL STRATEGIES MODELING 1. Distribute the keeper sheet with notes column to students. 2. Explain and give examples to students of each vocabulary term from the keeper sheet. Students may record their own examples on their notes. PRACTICE 1. As students progress through the notes, have them share with an elbow partner their examples. Ask for good examples to be shared with the whole group. CLOSING 1. Ask students to respond individually What was challenging/easy about the Cornell Notes activity? How might this strategy be helpful throughout the year? 2. Have the entire class share out their ideas. NEVER: Defines unknown words from the text Asks thoughtful questions about the text Uses abbreviations/symbols in their notes when possible Summarizes the most important information in a paragraph Standards: CCR.R.1 : Read closely to determine what the text says explicitly and to make logical inferences from it; cite specific textual evidence when writing or speaking to support conclusions drawn from the text. CCR.W.5 : Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach. CCR.R.2 : Determine central ideas or themes of a text and analyze their development; summarize the key supporting details and ideas. Additional Attachments: Cornell_Note_Taking_System - Sample.pdf Figurative Language Keeper Sheet Literacy Design Collaborative 10 of 28 https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" PACING 20 mins SKILL AND DEFINITION BRIDGING CONVERSATION > TASK ENGAGEMENT: Ability to connect the task and new content to existing knowledge, skills, experiences, interests, and concerns. Literacy Design Collaborative PRODUCT AND PROMPT SCORING GUIDE DAY 1-EXIT SLIP Listen and watch YouTube video of the lyrics of the song, "I Won't Grow Up" from Peter Pan. Discuss what growing up means to Peter. Compare and contrast your own feelings of growing up to those of Peter's. Write your response on a sticky note and place on the door as you leave. Students write an accurate comparison of their feeling versus Peter's using complete sentences. 11 of 28 INSTRUCTIONAL STRATEGIES Students watch a Youtube clip of the lyrics to the song, "I Won't Grow Up" and compare their feelings, as previously written in their journals, to those of Peter's. Teacher will facilitate a discussion on the varying points of view for students. Students will place their exit slip on the door as they leave class. https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" PACING 15 mins SKILL AND DEFINITION TASK AND RUBRIC ANALYSIS > TASK ANALYSIS: Ability to understand and explain the task's prompt and rubric. PRODUCT AND PROMPT SCORING GUIDE DAY 2-CHALK TALK (LIST) Silently read the essential question and task posted on the board. Think about it and silently add your thoughts/ideas as a part of a class list in response to the question. Product meets expectations if students participate meaningfully by adding to the chalk talk. INSTRUCTIONAL STRATEGIES NOTE: Chalk Talk is a silent way to reflect, generate ideas, check on learning, develop projects, or solve problems. Because it is done completely in silence, it gives students a change of pace and encourages thoughtful contemplation about the word, question, artifact or picture presented. SET UP The teacher writes a word or the task's essential question on the board and circles it. LESSON Do Now: Silently journal about the essential question on the board. You might write: what it reminds you of, what questions you have, what you think the answer is, things you already know, etc. 1 The teacher explains the norms and expectations of "chalk talk": * Silence in the room. *One person at the board at a time *If classroom culture permits, it can also be very effective to say nothing at all except to put finger to lips in a gesture of silence and simply begin with #2. 3 The teacher either hands a piece of chalk to everyone or places many pieces of chalk at the board and hands several pieces to people at random. 4 People write as they feel moved. There are likely to be long silences?that is natural, so allow plenty of wait time before deciding it is over. 5 How the teacher chooses to interact with the Chalk Talk influences its outcome. The teacher can stand back and let it unfold or expand thinking by: * circling other interesting ideas, thereby inviting comments to broaden writing questions about a participant comment adding his/her own reflections or ideas Standards: CCR.W.10 : Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision) and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of tasks, purposes, and audiences. CCR.W.5 : Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach. CCR.W.4 : Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience. Literacy Design Collaborative 12 of 28 https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" PACING SKILL AND DEFINITION PRODUCT AND PROMPT SCORING GUIDE INSTRUCTIONAL STRATEGIES Reading Process 20 mins PRE-READING > PLANNING THE READING: Ability to activate prior knowledge by asking students to think about their age. DAY 2QUICKWRITE/BRAINSTORMING WEB Quickwrite in journal: Is age more than a number? Think about what your age means to you. Create a web that shows the things that matter to you at your age. Consider how it would change if you were younger (kindergarten) or older (high school). Students complete their web and contribute to their small group discussion. Students will make an individual web in their journal with ideas that are important to them at their current age. Put students into groups of 3-4 and allow them to create a collaborative web that shows what matters to them. (Have them use construction paper or computer paper.) Teacher facilitates whole group discussion of ideas on their webs. Create class example on Smart Board. Standards: SL.6.1.C : Pose and respond to specific questions with elaboration and detail by making comments that contribute to the topic, text, or issue under discussion. Not provided ACTIVE READING > ANNOTATION: Ability to analyze a text for diction, imagery, and theme. DAY 2 & 3-POEM ANNOTATION Compare and contrast each speakers point of view of growing up based on annotations. Students will complete the graphic organizer with at least 3 details/examples from the poems of differing points of view. Students correctly annotate and analyze the poem for diction, imagery, and theme. 1) Explain the definition of annotation and give students a keeper sheet of annotation and highlighting tips (see page 83 of LTF book). 2) Assign students in groups of 3-4 and give each group a copy of the poem, "On Turning Ten" by Billy Collins. The poem should be posted on a larger sized (poster) chart/butcher paper so that students can write on the outside margins. Each student should be given a different colored marker (red, blue, green, purple). 3) Teacher does a read aloud of the poem to model fluency and phrasing. Discuss the illustrations and the overall feelings associated with the poem. 4) Students will participate in a "collaborative annotation" activity. Give directions for each colored maker, and each student will annotate the poem for their assigned criteria. Red=circle any words that help identify the tone of the poem/Blue=underline any words or phrases that help identify the speaker/Green-put a box around any words that are good examples of imagery (draw a picture of what sense it shows-ex. nose for smell, eye for sight, etc.), Purple-put a bracket around any words or phrases that are strong examples of author's diction. 5) The following day, repeat activity with 2nd poem, "Life Doesn't Frighten Me" by Maya Angelou. Follow same directions as above. After students share out as whole group, give students a copy of a graphic organizer to compare/contrast the speakers views on growing up. (see handout) Literacy Design Collaborative 13 of 28 https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" PACING SKILL AND DEFINITION PRODUCT AND PROMPT SCORING GUIDE INSTRUCTIONAL STRATEGIES Standards: RL.6.4 : Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in a text, including figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the impact of a specific word choice on meaning and tone. RL.6.5 : Analyze how a particular sentence, chapter, scene, or stanza fits into the overall structure of a text and contributes to the development of the theme, setting, or plot. RL.6.6 : Explain how an author develops the point of view of the narrator or speaker in a text. Additional Attachments: Poem Comparison Chart Literacy Design Collaborative 14 of 28 https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" PACING 20 mins SKILL AND DEFINITION PRE-READING > ESSENTIAL VOCABULARY: Ability to determine connotation of words as used in text. PRODUCT AND PROMPT SCORING GUIDE DAY 4-CONNOTATION CHART Create a 3 column chart for connotation (positive/neutral/negative) of words. Use a song and a short story of the same theme (growing up) to analyze connotations of various words. Check student's notes for completed charts with examples given in class. INSTRUCTIONAL STRATEGIES As an attention grabber, have students watch Youtube video of Taylor Swift's song, "Never Grow Up" and discuss the overall tone of the song and the speakers feelings of "growing up" throughout the song. Students should recognize that at the beginning the child wants to grow up and be on his/her own, but at the end he/she is sad about growing up and wishing they were again "little". Use the word little to transition to explanations of denotation and connotation. Explain to students that denotation is the dictionary definition of a word and that sometimes words can have different definitions depending on how it is used in context. Show the definitions of "little" from dictionary.com and discuss which definition best fits as used in the song. Have students record denotation definition in notes and add example of "little". Continue to explain that words also have connotations. Connotations are the feelings associated with words (positive, negative, and neutral). Have students record definition in notes. Give example using the word skinny. Explain that skinny associates negative feelings, slender is more of a positive feeling, and thin would be a neutral word. Have students create a 3 column chart in their notes with positive/neutral/negative as the headings. Allow them to work in small groups or pairs to come up with a positive/neutral/negative for the word little. Share examples and add to their 3 column chart. Choose another word from the song to practice together such as "old" or "mortified". Give students 1-2 minutes to find various connotations of each of these words and add to their chart. Record examples on SmartBoard chart to make sure all students can add to their notes. Standards: L.6.4.A : Use context (e.g., the overall meaning of a sentence or paragraph; a word's position or function in a sentence) as a clue to the meaning of a word or phrase. L.6.5.C : Distinguish among the connotations (associations) of words with similar denotations (definitions) (e.g., stingy, scrimping, economical, unwasteful, thrifty). Literacy Design Collaborative 15 of 28 https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" PACING 40 mins SKILL AND DEFINITION ACTIVE READING > ESSENTIAL VOCABULARY: Ability to identify and master terms essential to understanding a text. Literacy Design Collaborative PRODUCT AND PROMPT SCORING GUIDE DAY 4-CONNOTATION CHART"ELEVEN" Read the short story "Eleven" and highlight words that impact the story and analyze connotation. Students meet expectations by highlighting appropriate Tier 2 vocabulary from the story. Students must also correctly identify the words and add them to their chart as either positive, negative, or neutral. 16 of 28 INSTRUCTIONAL STRATEGIES Give student's some background information on author, Sandra Cisneros. Share with student's how she writes stories based on some of her childhood experiences, especially those that demonstrate her struggles in school growing up. Pass out a copy of the short-story, "Eleven" and have students get a highlighter. Prepare students to listen to the story and highlight words (only words not phrases) that they feel have an impact on the story. Refer to the "author's diction" as a literary term for word choice. Refer to literary devices keeper sheet as needed. Read the story aloud to students. (Tier 2 words that should be addressed: rattling, raggedy, clownsweater, alley/ other possible: bury, nonsense, rings due to their abstract use in the story). After reading the story, have students spend time independently placing the words they highlighted on their connotation chart. Prompt them by asking, "Does this word impact the sentence/story in a positive or negative way? Or is it just a neutral term? Have student's work in their groups to compare their charts to see if there were any similarities or differences. Facilitate a discussion as a whole group as to which words were selected and placed in each category. For example, the word "raggedy" should be placed in the negative category. Direct student's attention to the red sweater described in the story. Ask students to tell whether Rachel had a positive or negative feeling towards the sweater (they should answer negative). Explain how word choice (diction) that the author uses impacts the tone and feelings associated with this item from the story. As an exit slip and formative assessment from today's lesson, have students create a chart on sticky note with positive/neutral/negative and using the word "ugly" complete the connotation chart. Make sure student's are understanding the differences between words connotation. Examples could include, unattractive-neutral or plainpositive. https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" PACING SKILL AND DEFINITION PRODUCT AND PROMPT SCORING GUIDE INSTRUCTIONAL STRATEGIES Standards: L.6.5.C : Distinguish among the connotations (associations) of words with similar denotations (definitions) (e.g., stingy, scrimping, economical, unwasteful, thrifty). L.6.4 : Determine or clarify the meaning of unknown and multiple-meaning words and phrases based on grade 6 reading and content, choosing flexibly from a range of strategies. RL.6.4 : Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in a text, including figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the impact of a specific word choice on meaning and tone. Literacy Design Collaborative 17 of 28 https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" PACING 50 mins SKILL AND DEFINITION ACTIVE READING > QUESTIONING: Ability to answer textdependent comprehension questions about a story. PRODUCT AND PROMPT SCORING GUIDE DAY 5-CLOSE READ-"ELEVEN" Close read the story "Eleven" by Sandra Cisneros and answer textdependent questions using packet. Student meets expectations by completing and answering all of the textdependent questions on the chart. INSTRUCTIONAL STRATEGIES Have student's get out their figurative language keeper sheet to use as a reference for terms such as simile, metaphor, imagery, etc. Assign students into groups of 3-4 and make sure each student has a copy of the questions in the student packet. As the teacher reads aloud the story, students will work in groups to answer the textdependent questions. (Questions used were taken from website, achievethecore.org with the lesson title, "Eleven" by Sandra Cisneros. Text-dependent Questions/Evidencebased Answers In paragraph three, the author includes figurative language. How does the figurative language in the text help the reader understand the character’s feelings about getting older? (Pg. 27) Cisneros writes “the way you grow old is kind of like an onion or like the rings inside a tree trunk or like my little wooden dolls that fit one inside the other, each year inside the next one”. All three have layers numbered like years and are part of the whole identity. This is especially true of the tree with the rings representing how an outside source can affect the growth and development of each individual ring/year and how the rings underneath affect and build upon the outer layers and years. On page 27 the author stated, “Only today I wish I didn’t have only eleven years rattling inside me like pennies in a tin can.” What does this figurative language mean and how does it affect the tone of the text? (Pg. 27) The pennies represent the emotions that are rattling inside of Rachel. They can represent more than one maturity or age level in a moment. This reflects her anxious tone. Her emotions are bouncing within her as loudly as pennies in a tin can. Reread the first four paragraphs and note how many times the author starts a sentence with the word “and”. Why does the author make this choice? (Pg. 27) The author begins a sentence with the word “and” 5 times. This reflects Rachel’s anxiety as she rambles her thoughts about her birthday. It also reflects Literacy Design Collaborative 18 of 28 https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" PACING SKILL AND DEFINITION PRODUCT AND PROMPT SCORING GUIDE speaking voice rather than a writing voice. INSTRUCTIONAL This definitely sounds STRATEGIES like Rachel as an eleven-year old narrator thinking aloud. When Sylvia says the sweater belongs to Rachel, how does Rachel respond? What does this reveal about how Rachel feels about herself? (Pg. 28) Rachel responds with negative self-talk, “I’m skinny, maybe because she doesn’t like me…” She feels angry when she calls Sylvia stupid. She also feels insulted because Mrs. Price believes her. She reverts to “me when I was four”, when she partially responds in a little voice. Why does Rachel feel that Mrs. Price is “right”? Give evidence from the text to support your answer. (Pg. 28) Rachel feels that Mrs. Price is older and wiser. The common perception is that older equals wiser. She states, “Because she’s older and the teacher, she’s right and I’m not.” It also demonstrates authority trumping childhood, even when the child is right. In paragraph twelve beginning “Not mine, not mine, not mine”, what does the text and how Rachel responds to the situation tell us about Rachel’s character? (Pg. 28) Rachel shows maturity by controlling her emotions. Rather than reverting to a crying three year-old, she emotionally removes herself from the uncomfortable moment by remembering the birthday celebration that awaits her when she gets home. How does Rachel feel about the sweater? Include evidence from the text to support your answer. (Pg. 28) Rachel hates the sweater so much that it upsets her. Rachel calls it an ugly sweater, all raggedy and old. She is upset over Sylvia’s claim that it belongs to Rachel, not claiming the sweater as hers. She calls it a big red mountain and she moves it to the corner of her desk with a ruler. She devises all these plans on how to get rid of the sweater (i.e. throw over schoolyard fence, hang on parking meter, toss in alley). Identify each time Rachel claims “not mine”. Why does the author repeat this refrain throughout the story and how does it affect the overall meaning and tone of the text? (Pg. 28) Literacy Design Collaborative 19 of 28 https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" PACING SKILL AND DEFINITION PRODUCT AND PROMPT SCORING GUIDE Even though Rachel is eleven, she speaks INSTRUCTIONAL with the whiney STRATEGIES tone of a threeyear old. Her thoughts of the sweater consume her entire being. A more mature person can compartmentalize. The refrain “not mine, not mine, not mine” demonstrates Rachel’s determination that she is right and Mrs. Price is wrong. This connects to the Big Idea because Rachel is reverting to her inner 3-year old. In paragraph nineteen, count the words that begin with the sentence “My face all hot…” Identify other sentences from paragraphs fourteen through nineteen that are of similar lengths. Why does the author choose to write such lengthy sentences in paragraphs fourteen through nineteen? (Pg. 29) There are 58 words. For further examples of long run-on sentences, please check paragraphs fourteen, eighteen, and nineteen. The author’s change in sentence structure reflects a change in Rachel’s internal dialogue. The run-on-, a list of Rachel’s body reactions (face all hot, spit coming out of mouth, animal noises, no more tears, shaking body) reflects Rachel’s intensity of emotions, culminating with her crying in class. When the text states, “Mrs. Price pretends like everything’s okay”, what age does this reflect? Why? (Pg. 29) Someone who is mature would admit they were wrong and apologize, without ignoring the problem. Mrs. Price does not do this, which shows less maturity and that even people of older ages do not always act in a mature manner. Responses will vary. In paragraph five and in the last paragraph, Rachel says she wants to be 102. In each instance, why does Rachel want to be 102? (Pg.29) In paragraph five, Rachel would have had the wisdom to handle the situation with Mrs. Price. She says “if I was one hundred and two I’d have known what to say when Mrs. Price put the red sweater on my desk”. In the last paragraph, Rachel wants the red sweater incident to be far in the past, “far away like a runaway balloon, like a tiny o in the sky, so tiny-tiny you have to close your eyes to see it”. How has Rachel grown older today? Include evidence from the text to support your answer. (Pg. 29) Literacy Design Collaborative 20 of 28 https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" PACING SKILL AND DEFINITION PRODUCT AND PROMPT SCORING GUIDE Rachel has accepted the fact that she is eleven INSTRUCTIONAL and life will require STRATEGIES people to bear difficulties. She has learned that we all carry with us the years that come before, sometimes reverting to the child within us. This is demonstrated in the last paragraph when Rachel says “I’m eleven today. I’m eleven, ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four, three, two, and one, but I wish I was one hundred and two”. Closure: Add a written reflection to your reader response journal about the story "Eleven". What do you think the author wants you to remember from the story? Can you make any connections to your own life? Standards: RL.6.1 : Cite textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text. RL.6.2 : Determine a theme or central idea of a text and how it is conveyed through particular details; provide a summary of the text distinct from personal opinions or judgments. RL.6.3 : Describe how a particular story's or drama's plot unfolds in a series of episodes as well as how the characters respond or change as the plot moves toward a resolution. RL.6.5 : Analyze how a particular sentence, chapter, scene, or stanza fits into the overall structure of a text and contributes to the development of the theme, setting, or plot. RL.6.6 : Explain how an author develops the point of view of the narrator or speaker in a text. Additional Attachments: Eleven Annotation Boxes Literacy Design Collaborative 21 of 28 https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" PACING 50 mins SKILL AND DEFINITION ACTIVE READING > ANNOTATION: Ability to annotate the text for examples of imagery and figurative language. PRODUCT AND PROMPT SCORING GUIDE DAY 6 GALLERY WALK Close read "Eleven" by Sandra Cisneros and analyze for examples of imagery and figurative language. Create a chart for examples of each of the 5 senses. Answer questions about the impact these examples have on the tone of the story. Students meet expectations if they have at least 2 examples in each of the columns of graphic organizer (only one is needed in smell). Students must provide at least 2 examples of imagery and figurative language from the story, and each example should demonstrate a tone of embarrassment. INSTRUCTIONAL STRATEGIES Lesson on Sensory Details 1. Give students a graphic organizer with five columns, one for each of the five senses. Make 5 large posters to display around the room and draw an eye, an ear, a hand, a nose, and a tongue to represent sight, sound, touch, smell, and taste. 2. Provide students with copies of Eleven. Students will independently read the passage and record details from the text in the appropriate columns of their graphic organizers. 3. Students will meet in small groups to compare their responses and add details suggested by group members. 4. Groups will then participate in a Gallery Walk. Five white posters, one for each of the senses, will be placed around the room. Each group will begin at a specific poster and record two-to-three details from their charts. Groups will rotate to the next chart, read the work from the group, and then add additional details of their own. Repeat the process until groups have visited all posters. 5. Lead the class in a whole-group discussion of each sense. Compare the posters to the teacher-created SMART Board chart. Assessment and Closure: Give students a short quiz over the story elements of "Eleven" including a timed writing using examples of imagery and figurative language and how they impact the tone of the story. Provide students with a list of tone words to use as a reference. Standards: RL.6.4 : Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in a text, including figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the impact of a specific word choice on meaning and tone. L.6.5 : Demonstrate understanding of figurative language, word relationships, and nuances in word meanings. L.6.5.A : Interpret figures of speech (e.g., personification) in context. RL.6.2 : Determine a theme or central idea of a text and how it is conveyed through particular details; provide a summary of the text distinct from personal opinions or judgments. Transition to Writing Literacy Design Collaborative 22 of 28 https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" PACING 20 mins SKILL AND DEFINITION BRIDGING CONVERSATION > IDENTIFYING SIGNIFICANT ELEMENTS: Ability to compare and contrast literary elements of a variety of texts. PRODUCT AND PROMPT DAY 7-VENN DIAGRAM-3 CIRCLES Using a 3 circle Venn diagram, compare and contrast literary elements such as speaker, imagery, tone, point of view, figurative language, etc. of each selection. SCORING GUIDE Students will meet expectations if they have at least 5 details recorded for each selection. Information should be accurate based on selections. INSTRUCTIONAL STRATEGIES Students should have all materials from previous lessons such as annotated poems, graphic organizers, etc. to use as reference for this activity. Give students a 3 circle Venn diagram and have them write the title of each selection on a circle, "On Turning Ten" by Billy Collins, "Life Doesn't Frighten Me" by Maya Angelou, and "Eleven" by Sandra Cisneros. Explain to students they will participate in a written discussion to help identify various literary elements of each text. For example, students should be able to refer to their notes and identify the speaker of each selection (11 year old girl, 10-12 year old boy, and young girl), overall tone and mood, setting, examples of imagery and figurative language, etc. Give students 5 minutes to complete their own Venn diagrams, writing as many examples as possible in each circle. Everyone will pass their paper to the right, and give students an additional 3 minutes to add details to their group members Venn diagram. Continue to pass giving 2-3 minutes until each person in group has seen each other's paper and added details. Give students about 5 minutes to review their circles and discuss any information that may need to be added. Make a class Venn diagram on the SmartBoard to record results from discussions. Make sure students have picked up on the main points of each selection. Standards: RL.6.9 : Compare and contrast texts in different forms or genres (e.g., stories and poems; historical novels and fantasy stories) in terms of their approaches to similar themes and topics. RL.6.1 : Cite textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text. RL.6.2 : Determine a theme or central idea of a text and how it is conveyed through particular details; provide a summary of the text distinct from personal opinions or judgments. RL.6.5 : Analyze how a particular sentence, chapter, scene, or stanza fits into the overall structure of a text and contributes to the development of the theme, setting, or plot. RL.6.4 : Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in a text, including figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the impact of a specific word choice on meaning and tone. RL.6.6 : Explain how an author develops the point of view of the narrator or speaker in a text. Writing Process Literacy Design Collaborative 23 of 28 https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" PACING 30 mins SKILL AND DEFINITION INITIATION OF TASK > ESTABLISHING THE CONTROLLING IDEA: Ability to establish a claim and consolidate information relevant to task. PRODUCT AND PROMPT DAY 7-EVIDENCE CHART Choose two selections that were part of "close reading" lessons and create an evidence chart of quotes that demonstrate how the author develops the theme of growing up. SCORING GUIDE Students meet expectations if they have three examples of evidence for each selection (6 total). They should have page numbers to cite from the selection. INSTRUCTIONAL STRATEGIES Students will work individually to complete an evidence chart. (2 column t-chart with heading for quote and page number/commentary) Students must find at least three examples of a sentence/phrase from each selection and cite its line or page number. Then in the commentary section the student will add his or her thoughts about how that particular quote shows the author developing the theme of "growing up". Evidence should be strong examples that demonstrate analysis, as noted during annotations and close reading of these texts. Students will be expected to use literary terms such as diction, point of view, speaker, and tone/mood in their commentary. Standards: RL.6.1 : Cite textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text. RL.6.2 : Determine a theme or central idea of a text and how it is conveyed through particular details; provide a summary of the text distinct from personal opinions or judgments. RL.6.5 : Analyze how a particular sentence, chapter, scene, or stanza fits into the overall structure of a text and contributes to the development of the theme, setting, or plot. RL.6.4 : Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in a text, including figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the impact of a specific word choice on meaning and tone. RL.6.6 : Explain how an author develops the point of view of the narrator or speaker in a text. RL.6.9 : Compare and contrast texts in different forms or genres (e.g., stories and poems; historical novels and fantasy stories) in terms of their approaches to similar themes and topics. Additional Attachments: Evidence Chart 30 mins PLANNING > OUTLINING THE WRITING: Ability to outline main points of the comparison essay. DAY 8-OUTLINE ESSAY Students will use the outline graphic organizer with sentence frames to begin outlining and drafting the main points of their essay. Students must complete all sections of the outline with sentence frames in order to meet expectations. 1) Use the anchor chart "Tips for Writing a Comparison Essay" to begin the discussion for the day. Show students an exemplary model of an essay that follows the tips of writing. 2) Think-pair-share with an elbow partner discussing the question, "What makes this an exemplary essay?" Share out with the whole group and create a checklist of requirements for the essay. 3) Share rubric with students and have them highlight and annotation important aspects of each category. Literacy Design Collaborative 24 of 28 https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" PACING SKILL AND DEFINITION PRODUCT AND PROMPT SCORING GUIDE INSTRUCTIONAL STRATEGIES Standards: W.6.2 : Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas, concepts, and information through the selection, organization, and analysis of relevant content W.6.2.A : Introduce a topic; organize ideas, concepts, and information, using strategies such as definition, classification, comparison/contrast, and cause/effect; include formatting (e.g., headings), graphics (e.g., charts, tables), and multimedia when useful to aiding comprehension. W.6.2.B : Develop the topic with relevant facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples. W.6.2.D : Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain the topic. Additional Attachments: Outline 25 mins DEVELOPMENT > INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH: Ability to compose an introductory paragraph using a thesis statement. DAY 8-INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH Develop an effective and engaging introduction paragraph for your essay incorporating a hook, explanation, and thesis. Meets expectations if: Hook is engaging and relevant Explanation sucessfuly bridges hook and argument. Thesis is specific, well articulated, and the actual topic of the paper. *This tool should be used with students who already know their thesis, not as a tool to develop one. 1. Using the handout, do a think aloud in which you walk through the steps to develop an introduction paragraph. Think about several hooks, and chose the best one (emphasizing that the first idea isnt always the best). 2. Allow students to complete the handout independently. 3. Finish with a share, either class wide or between partners. Standards: CCR.W.5 : Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach. CCR.W.4 : Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience. Additional Attachments: Intro Handout 1 hr DEVELOPMENT > BODY PARAGRAPHS: Ability to develop two main body paragraphs comparing texts. Literacy Design Collaborative DAY 9 AND 10-INITIAL DRAFT USING GOOGLE DOCS Write an initial draft complete with opening, development, and closing; insert and cite textual evidence. Provides complete draft with all parts. Supports the opening in the later sections with evidence and citations. 25 of 28 Using Google Docs students will create an initial draft of their essay following the outline format and sentence starters. Introduction will include a hook and thesis statement. Body paragraphs will include a topic sentence, evidence including citation, and commentary including student's own analysis. Concluding sentences will wrap up each paragraph. The essay should be a total of 4 paragraphs: introduction, 2 body paragraphs (one for each selection) and a conclusion. https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" PACING SKILL AND DEFINITION PRODUCT AND PROMPT SCORING GUIDE INSTRUCTIONAL STRATEGIES Standards: W.6.2 : Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas, concepts, and information through the selection, organization, and analysis of relevant content W.6.2.A : Introduce a topic; organize ideas, concepts, and information, using strategies such as definition, classification, comparison/contrast, and cause/effect; include formatting (e.g., headings), graphics (e.g., charts, tables), and multimedia when useful to aiding comprehension. W.6.2.B : Develop the topic with relevant facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples. W.6.2.C : Use appropriate transitions to clarify the relationships among ideas and concepts. W.6.2.D : Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain the topic. W.6.2.E : Establish and maintain a formal style. 1 hr REVISION, EDITING, AND COMPLETION > PEER EDITING: Ability to work with peers to provide constructive feedback in the revision and editing process. DAY 11 & 12-PEER EDITING AND MULTIPLE DRAFTS Refine composition’s analysis, logic, and organization of ideas/points. Use textual evidence carefully, with accurate citations. Decide what to include and what not to include. Provides complete draft with all parts. Supports the opening in the later sections with evidence and citations. Improves earlier edition. Uses peer feedback as purpose for revising/editing. Students work in groups of 2-3 to peer edit each other's drafts. Using the "share" feature on Google Docs students share their essay with at least 2 other students in group. Students should also "share" with the teacher for additional feedback. Students comments should use language from anchor charts, rubric, and writing checklists. Students must comment at least 6 times and no general "good job" or other vague comments will be accepted. After reading comments from peers, students should work on improving and making corrections needed to their drafts. Standards: CCR.W.5 : Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach. CCR.W.4 : Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience. CCR.W.1 : Write arguments to support claims in an analysis of substantive topics or texts, using valid reasoning and relevant and sufficient evidence. W.6.5 : With some guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach. W.6.9 : Draw evidence from literary or informational texts to support analysis, reflection, and research. W.6.9.A : Apply grade 6 Reading standards to literature (e.g., "Compare and contrast texts in different forms or genres [e.g., stories and poems; historical novels and fantasy stories] in terms of their approaches to similar themes and topics"). 30 mins REVISION, EDITING, AND COMPLETION > FINAL DRAFT: Ability to submit final piece that meets expectations. Literacy Design Collaborative FINAL PIECE Turn in your complete set of drafts, plus the final version of your piece. Fits the “Meets Expectations” category in the rubric for the teaching task. 26 of 28 After working through the writing process, students will print their essay written in Google Docs. Students will complete a final exit ticket that includes a reflection of their strengths and weaknesses as a writer. Reflections should be submitted with the final product. https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" PACING SKILL AND DEFINITION PRODUCT AND PROMPT SCORING GUIDE INSTRUCTIONAL STRATEGIES Standards: CCR.W.10 : Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision) and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of tasks, purposes, and audiences. W.6.6 : Use technology, including the Internet, to produce and publish writing as well as to interact and collaborate with others; demonstrate sufficient command of keyboarding skills to type a minimum of three pages in a single sitting. Instructional Resources No resources specified Literacy Design Collaborative 27 of 28 https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" Section 4: What Results? Student Work Samples Advanced Growing Up Sample Teacher Reflection Not provided Literacy Design Collaborative 28 of 28 https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag "I Won't Grow Up" All Attachments Poems: "On Turning Ten" by Billy Collins and "Life Doesn't Frighten Me" by Maya Angelou : https://s.ldc.org/u/bayp55ij35tg90eyewpjqbult Musical Lyrics to "I Won't Grow Up" : https://s.ldc.org/u/2f7hp802hvus29j34hsjqvb10 "Never Grow Up" by Taylor Swift : https://s.ldc.org/u/4r9mchm5iq5w1tg8vzfp5sxnj Growing Up Sample : https://s.ldc.org/u/bzmu4hjmpt37cesp4dpaq9vit Literacy Design Collaborative 29 of 28 https://s.ldc.org/u/49pkz5bhwpi13vbne0gd4ekag