Literary Analysis Unit with “Abandoned Farmhouse” A Scaffolded Unit of Integrating Reading, Grammar, Poetry Analysis, and Writing Skills Abandoned Farmhouse Pre-read Exercise Analyze the picture above. Record the different items that you see in the room? What can we infer about the former residents of this room? Item Inference Lesson Purposes To understand how the author uses imagery (sensory details) and diction to create an emotional effect (tone). To make inferences and support them with details from the text. To identify figurative language such as simile, metaphor & personification and analyze how authors use them for effect. To compose a literary analysis paragraph. Abandoned Farmhouse by Ted Kooser He was a big man, says the size of his shoes on a pile of broken dishes by the house; a tall man too, says the length of the bed in an upstairs room; and a good, God-fearing man, says the Bible with a broken back on the floor below the window, dusty with sun; but not a man for farming, say the fields cluttered with boulders and the leaky barn. A woman lived with him, says the bedroom wall papered with lilacs and the kitchen shelves covered with oilcloth, and they had a child, says the sandbox made from a tractor tire. Money was scarce, say the jars of plum preserves and canned tomatoes sealed in the cellar hole. And the winters cold, say the rags in the window frames. It was lonely here, says the narrow country road. Something went wrong, says the empty house in the weed-choked yard. Stones in the fields say he was not a farmer; the still-sealed jars in the cellar say she left in a nervous haste. And the child? Its toys are strewn in the yard like branches after a storm-a rubber cow, a rusty tractor with a broken plow, a doll in overalls. Something went wrong, they say. Comprehension 1. How many people lived on the farm? 2. Describe the man who lived on the farm? 3. Describe the woman who lived on the farm? 4. What evidence suggests that something went wrong at the farm? 5. Were the former residents of the farm successful financially? 6. In line 7, what does the poet mean when he says “but not a man for farming” 7. Based on lines 13-14, what is a “cellar hole”? 8. Take the following stanza and rewrite them in your own words. Poet’s Words A woman lived with him, says the bedroom wall papered with lilacs and the kitchen shelves covered with oilcloth, and they had a child, says the sandbox made from a tractor tire. Money was scarce, say the jars of plum preserves and canned tomatoes sealed in the cellar hole. And the winters cold, say the rags in the window frames. It was lonely here, says the narrow country road. Your Words Inference: An inference is an educated guess, or a guess based on evidence. Directions: In “Abandoned Farmhouse,” the narrator made several inferences about the family that once lived in the farmhouse. Use his inferences to answer the following questions. Your answers will be your opinions, but they must be based on evidence from the text. 1. Question: How is the narrator able to reasonably infer the size of the man? What is your answer? The narrator is able to infer that the man was large by looking at the size of his shoes. Why is that your answer? Large people usually wear large shoes, so the narrator was able to use the size of that shoes as evidence to prove the size of the man. Find the words in the text that prove your answer and write them here: “He was a big man, says the size of his shoes…” “…a tall man too, says the length of the bed…” 2. Question: How is the narrator able to reasonably infer that the man was religious? What is your answer?_________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ Why is that your answer?______________________________________________________ Find the words in the text that prove your answer and write them here________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ 3. Question: How is the narrator able to infer that the man was not a farmer? What is your answer?_________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ Why is that your answer?______________________________________________________ Find the words in the text that prove your answer and write them here________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ 4. Question: How is the narrator able to reasonably infer that the couple had a child? What is your answer?_________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ Why is that your answer?______________________________________________________ Find the words in the text that prove your answer and write them here________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ 5. Question: How is the narrator able to reasonably infer that a woman lived in the house? What is your answer?_________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ Why is that your answer?______________________________________________________ Find the words in the text that prove your answer and write them here________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ Short Answers-must show a deep understanding of the text by providing a thesis, analysis, and text evidence. How does the narrator help readers understand the poem? Use evidence from the story to support you answer. ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ Personification-A figure of speech in which an inanimate object or abstraction is given human qualities or abilities. Example: The rain plays a little sleep song on our roof at night. What can be inferred about the rain? Why does the author use personification? Inanimate Speaker Comment Connection / Inference Shoes “He was big man” Big shoes would only be worn by a large man. Length of the Bed “A tall man too” The length of the bed reveals he is not only big, but tall as well. Why might the author let the objects tell the story? ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ _Imagery: Words and phrases that help the readers image or experience a text through their senses: sight, sound, taste, touch and smell. Sensory Detail: Same as Imagery, words and phrases that help readers imagine or experience a text through their senses: sight, sound, taste, touch and smell. Find words and phrases that help the reader “see” or “hear” the poem. Complete the chart below. Sights Words or phrases that help the reader “see” the events of the poem “It’s toys were strewn in the yard like branches after a storm” Now we are going to write about imagery. Look at the example below. The author uses imagery to help the reader imagine or experience the poem. The author helps the reader “see” the how the toys were spread across the yard when he writes, “It’s toys were strewn in the yard like branches after a storm.” This sensory detail is important because it helps the reader picture broken branches after the destruction of storm, showing that the toys are littering the yard . Now you try. Pick a sight from your chart to use. The author uses imagery to help the reader imagine or experience the poem. The author helps the reader “see” the _______________________________ when he writes, “_____________________________________________________.” This sensory detail is important because __________________________________________________________________________. ___________________________________________________________________________ Diction-the specific word choices an author makes. These choices distinguish a writer’s voice from other writers. 1. Circle all the adjectives in the poem. (Remember, an adjective is a part of speech that modifies/describes a noun or pronoun.) 2. In the chart below categorize all the adjectives in the poem as positive, neutral, or negative. Positive Neutral Negative 3. In which category did most of the adjectives fall?_____________ 4. What other words or lines in the poem fall into the same category? (List at least 4 examples) ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ Tone-is the emotion or attitude of the story. To describe tone, we always use emotion words. mysterious uplifting serene bleak Tone Words optimistic depressing perplexing enlightening frightening amusing The author uses ________________to create a(n) _____________________tone in the poem. For example, when the author writes, ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ Alliteration Two or more words beginning with the same sound A type of sound device Creates a musical effect When reading poetry, the first thing people usually think of is “rhyme,” but that is not the only way to play with sound. In addition to creating a pleasing sound, authors use alliteration to call attention to details or images in a piece of writing. When analyzing alliteration, think about the following… Words: what words alliterate (begin with the same sound?) Emphasis: what is the author calling attention to with the alliteration? He was a big man, says the size of his shoes On a pile of broken dishes by the house A tall man, too, says the length of the bed In an upstairs room, and a good, God fearing man, Look at the following examples of how to write about alliteration. Pick a line to analyze. What alliteration can you find? What does the alliteration emphasize? Example 1: line 2, “On a pile of broken dishes by the house” Words: broken, by Emphasis: this emphasizes the fact that the dishes are broken, and they are outside, by the house. Dishes are a necessity, used daily, packed carefully when moving, etc. The fact that the dishes are broken, as well as their unusual location (outside, on the ground), is unexpected, and makes the reader wonder, “What happened?” Example 2: line 4, “In an upstairs room, and a good, God-fearing man,” Words: good, God-fearing Emphasis: both of these words describe the farmer’s character – the author is emphasizing that he was a good, religious person. Now you try! Pick a line to analyze. What is your line? Line ___, ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ Words: Emphasis: Try one more… Line ___, ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ Preposition: a word that shows the relationship of a noun or a pronoun to another word in a sentence. Object of the preposition: the noun or pronoun that ends a prepositional phrase. Example: I read to Carlito from the new book. The words to & from are prepositions Carlito & book are the objects of the preposition. Common Prepositions Aboard About Above Across Against Along Amid Among Around As At Before Behind Below Beneath Beside Between Beyond But (meaning except) By Concerning Despite Down During except excepting For From In Inside Into Onto Opposite Out Outside Over Past Pending To Toward Under Underneath Until Up Upon Like Near Of Off on Regarding respecting Since through throughout With Within without Using the poem, Abandoned Farmhouse, highlight the preposition and underline the object of the preposition. Abandoned Farmhouse He was a big man, says the size of his shoes on a pile of broken dishes by the house; a tall man too, says the length of the bed in an upstairs room; and a good, God-fearing man, says the Bible with a broken back on the floor below the window, dusty with sun; but not a man for farming, say the fields cluttered with boulders and the leaky barn. A woman lived with him, says the bedroom wall papered with lilacs and the kitchen shelves covered with oilcloth, and they had a child, says the sandbox made from a tractor tire. Money was scarce, say the jars of plum preserves and canned tomatoes sealed in the cellar hole, and the winters cold, say the rags in the window frames. It was lonely here, says the narrow country road. Something went wrong, says the empty house in the weed-choked yard. Stones in the fields say he was not a farmer; the still-sealed jars in the cellar say she left in a nervous haste. And the child? Its toys are strewn in the yard like branches after a storm-a rubber cow, a rusty tractor with a broken plow, a doll in overalls. Something went wrong, they say. ~Ted Kooser How does the narrator’s use of prepositions create the use of visual imagery in the poem? _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Write four additional lines to the poem using examples of prepositions and their objects. Highlight your prepositions and underline the object of preposition. Something went wrong, says the newspapers strewn across the yard. _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Verbs Simple Present Tense Verbs What are Simple Present Tense Verbs? Simple Present Tense Verbs show what is happening repeatedly or every day. Examples: I go to school every day. My friend works at the mall. Simple Past Tense Verbs What are Past Tense Verbs? Simple Past Tense Verbs show what has already happened. Examples: I went to school yesterday. My friend worked at the mall last week. Using the poem, classify each verb as either past or present. Verb Was Past Present Says Lived Made Says Had Went Read the second stanza of the poem and change each of the underlined verbs from past to present or from present to past. A woman lived with him, says the bedroom wall papered with lilacs and the kitchen shelves covered with oilcloth, and they had a child, says the sandbox made from a tractor tire. Money was scarce, say the jars of plum preserves and canned tomatoes sealed in the cellar hole. And the winters cold, say the rags in the window frames. It was lonely here, says the narrow country road. A woman _____ with him, _____ the bedroom wall Papered with lilacs and the kitchen shelves Covered with oilcloth, and they _____ a child, _____ the sandbox made from a tractor tire. Money _____ scarce, _____ the jars of plum preserves And canned tomatoes sealed in the cellar hole. And the winters cold, say the rags in the window frames. It _____ lonely here, _____ the narrow country road. Within the poem, there are many words that look like verbs but function like adjectives or adverbs. For each of the following words on the chart below, read how the word is being utilized in the poem and decide if the word is a verb (a clear action or being word that has a subject ) or a verbal (a word that looks like a verb but functions as an adjective or adverb to describe something within the poem.) Example: Lines 10 “papered” is a verbal because it describes the bedroom wallpaper. It isn’t performing “action” in this poem. Now you try… Line/Word Line #5 / says Line #8 / cluttered Line #11 / covered Line #13 / was Line #14 / sealed Line #17 / went Line #20 / left Verb or Verbal Reason Analysis Verbs compare communicate imply suggest reveal show Illustrate signify point out express The author uses ________________________to ______________________________________ (personification, imagery or alliteration) (analysis verb) ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ Key Vocabulary with Visuals Abandon-(verb) to leave and never come back, to desert Abandoned-(adjective) A farmer on a tractor-(nouns)-( Boulders-(noun) Leaky- (adjective) Scarce- (adjective) in a small amount, barely + Jar-(noun) Cellar (noun)= Farmhouse (compound noun) Directions: Match the vocabulary word with its synonym (word that means almost the same as another word). Container Rocks Jar = _______________________ Cellar = _____________________ Boulders = ____________________ Abandoned = ___________________ Basement Alone