Grade Four Writing Achievement – March 2006 Annotated Item 9 Standard and Benchmark Assessed: Standard: Benchmark: Writing Conventions C. Use conventions of punctuation and capitalization in written work. Multiple Choice Question: 9. Only one of these men’s birthplaces was located outside Ohio. A. man’s B. mens C. mens’ D. Correct as is Commentary: This multiple choice question asks students to determine whether the underlined word is punctuated correctly. Answer choice A is incorrect. The word man’s uses the apostrophe incorrectly and uses the singular form “man” instead of the correct plural form “men”. Answer choice B is also incorrect. The absence of an apostrophe eliminates the possessive element. Answer choice C is incorrect. The letter s and the apostrophe are transposed. Answer choice D is correct. The word men’s is in plural form and shows possession with the inclusion of an apostrophe and an s in correct order. Performance Data: The percentage of public school students selecting answer choice D for question 9 on the March 2006 Grade 4 Writing Achievement Test was 48.88%. Keyword: Grade 4 Writing, Apostrophe, Possession, March 2006 Source: Ohio Department of Education March 06