Constructing a Thesis Statement for a Literary Analysis Paper
Sometimes the best way to begin a thesis statement, is to start with a series of questions
about the work.
Attempt to answer the question, and then revise into a statement.
A thesis statement should have one main point, and mentions only what will be discussed
in the paper.
It must be narrow enough to be fully supported. Make your thesis specific instead of
vague.
Avoid praising the author or his work. This is not your job- focus on a critical analysis.
Don’t attempt to state that James Joyce’s reputation is well-deserved.
It should be your opinion that is supported by factual evidence and specific reasons and
examples.
The thesis should show that you’ve read the short story, and are familiar with literary
elements.
Some ideas to focus on- setting, foreshadowing, figurative language, characterization.
A simple yet effective thesis might be something like: In “A Dill Pickle,” Katherine
Mansfield uses ________________ to argue __________________________________.
Keep in mind for your paper- you should have quotes from the story to support your
point.
Do not summarize the plot
Avoid “purple prose” i.e., long, flowery introductions. Get to the point. Avoid starting
with phrases like “In the world, some people …”