Evan R. & Ryan O. THE FEDERALIST PAPERS No. LXVII: The Executive Department From the New York Packet. Tuesday, March 11, 1788. HAMILTON To the People of the State of New York: THE constitution of the executive department of the proposed government, claims next our attention. There is hardly any part of the system which could have been attended with greater difficulty in the arrangement of it than this; and there is, perhaps, none which has been inveighed against with less candor or criticised with less judgment. Here the writers against the Constitution seem to have taken pains to signalize their talent of misrepresentation. Calculating upon the aversion of the people to monarchy, they have endeavored to enlist all their jealousies and apprehensions in opposition to the intended President of the United States; not merely as the embryo, but as the full-grown progeny, of that detested parent. To establish the pretended affinity, they have not scrupled to draw resources even from the regions of fiction. The authorities of a magistrate, in few instances greater, in some instances less, than those of a governor of New York, have been magnified into more than royal prerogatives. He has been decorated with attributes superior in dignity and splendor to those of a king of Great Britain. He has been shown to us with the diadem sparkling on his brow and the imperial purple flowing in his train. He has been seated on a throne surrounded with minions and mistresses, giving audience to the envoys of foreign potentates, in all the supercilious pomp of majesty. The images of Asiatic despotism and voluptuousness have scarcely been wanting to crown the Red = syntax Green= diction Blue= schemes Orange= tropes Violet= rhetorical appeals Hamilton opens the paper with a direct address to his intended audience, the citizens of New York, and sets a formal and businesslike tone with his use of a colon. He then clearly states his subject and emphasizes the importance of the executive department’s powers by capitalizing the article adjective to “constitution” , repeating “of the” instead of saying “the proposed government’s executive department”, and by employing anastrophe at the end of the paragraph. Hamilton then uses a long sentence with a semicolon to express both the care put into the constitution and the undue anger towards it, without breaking off the reader’s train of thought like he could by breaking this sentence into two. Hamilton also chooses words that indicate a lack of enthusiasm and intelligence in both the efforts against the constitution and those that would make such efforts. Hamilton takes a sardonic tone when speaking of the writers’ actions and then makes mention of appeals against monarchy, which are so effective in post-Revolutionary America, before forming a metaphor of the President being the spawn of the English King, Hamilton expresses his disgust at such an idea by referring to that suggestion as a “pretended affinity” and refers to their sources as “fiction”. He keeps the scope of the issue realistic by saying that a government official in the executive office is usually about as powerful as a state governor, and then exposes the ridiculousness of comparing such men to monarchs. Anaphora of “He has been” offsets each image of monarchial excess for an added, pummeling effect. exaggerated scene. We have been taught to tremble at the terrific visages of murdering janizaries, and to blush at the unveiled mysteries of a future seraglio. Attempts so extravagant as these to disfigure or, it might rather be said, to metamorphose the object, render it necessary to take an accurate view of its real nature and form: in order as well to ascertain its true aspect and genuine appearance, as to unmask the disingenuity and expose the fallacy of the counterfeit resemblances which have been so insidiously, as well as industriously, propagated. In the execution of this task, there is no man who would not find it an arduous effort either to behold with moderation, or to treat with seriousness, the devices, not less weak than wicked, which have been contrived to pervert the public opinion in relation to the subject. They so far exceed the usual though unjustifiable licenses of party artifice, that even in a disposition the most candid and tolerant, they must force the sentiments which favor an indulgent construction of the conduct of political adversaries to give place to a voluntary and unreserved indignation. It is impossible not to bestow the imputation of deliberate imposture and deception upon the gross pretense of a similitude between a king of Great Britain and a magistrate of the character marked out for that of the President of the United States. It is still more impossible to withhold that imputation from the rash and barefaced expedients which have been employed to give success to the attempted imposition. In one instance, which I cite as a sample of the general spirit, the temerity has proceeded so far as to ascribe to the President of the United States a power which by the instrument reported is EXPRESSLY allotted to the Executives of the individual States. I mean the power of To bring the third paragraph to a close, Hamilton employs vivid diction that conjures images of royal excess and abuse of power. Hamilton also uses “We” as the subject of the sentence in order to appeal to a common execration of royal power. The fourth paragraph is one long sentence with many breaks and shifts in thought—a necessary structure for the complex idea being expressed. Hamilton wrestles with appropriate word choice to describe the anti-federalist railings against the Constitution. He fist says that they “disfigure” the issue, but appropriately chooses “metamorphose” to suggest that they offer a feasible, but invalid view of the issue. He contrast the “genuine” nature of the issue and the “disingenuity” of its portrayal. He reinforces his assertion that the propaganda is “counterfeit” and that its methods of exposition are “insidiously” and “industriously” done. No doubt Hamilton intends those two words to also reflect the character of his opponents. Also, he personifies the opinion of anti-federalists as an evil that must be “unmasked” and scrutinized like a traitor in the midst of patriots. Hamilton uses a double-negative in the apposition of the subject ,“devices,” and also uses alliteration of “weak” and “wicked” to enhance his description and make it stand out. Hamilton then makes a logos appeal to the general public by appealing to their rational review of the issue and of the naysayers. He strengthens his appeal by suggesting that antifederalists would “pervert” their minds with their opinions. Although a typical construction of this clause would be “It is possible to bestow…” Hamilton uses a double negative to attribute an imperative tone to the verb “bestow.” He also keeps his tirade focused by referring to the anti-federalist actions as “deliberate” At the end of the sentence he uses deliberately awkward sentence structure (“of the” is repeated three times) to emphasize the importance of character in a head of state. The appeal against the anti-federalists gains strength as Hamilton chides their methods as “rash and barefaced” and then logically cites a counterexample to the assertion that the President overrides the state executives in appointments to filling casual vacancies in the Senate. This bold experiment upon the discernment of his countrymen has been hazarded by a writer who (whatever may be his real merit) has had no inconsiderable share in the applauses of his party[1]; and who, upon this false and unfounded suggestion, has built a series of observations equally false and unfounded. Let him now be confronted with the evidence of the fact, and let him, if he be able, justify or extenuate the shameful outrage he has offered to the dictates of truth and to the rules of fair dealing. The second clause of the second section of the second article empowers the President of the United States "to nominate, and by and with the advice and consent of the Senate, to appoint ambassadors, other public ministers and consuls, judges of the Supreme Court, and all other OFFICERS of United States whose appointments are NOT in the Constitution OTHERWISE PROVIDED FOR, and WHICH SHALL BE ESTABLISHED BY LAW." Immediately after this clause follows another in these words: "The President shall have power to fill up all VACANCIES that may happen DURING THE RECESS OF THE SENATE, by granting commissions which shall EXPIRE AT THE END OF THEIR NEXT SESSION." It is from this last provision that the pretended power of the President to fill vacancies in the Senate has been deduced. A slight attention to the connection of the clauses, and to the obvious meaning of the terms, will satisfy us that the deduction is not even colorable. The first of these two clauses, it is clear, only provides a mode for appointing such officers, "whose appointments are NOT OTHERWISE PROVIDED FOR in the vacant Senate seats, emphasizing via capitals that such power is firmly in the hands of the latter. The short sentence at the end of the paragraph dramatically transitions to the next paragraph. Hamilton quotably refers to the anti-federalist effort as an “experiment,” which is intended to incite feelings of anger in the audience at the prospect that they are being toyed with. The unnamed “writer” was likely an obvious figure at the time, and would be defamed by Hamilton’s use of anonymity and condescension in naming him. A connection between this writer’s “suggestions” and “observations” is drawn by the repetition of “false and unfounded” immediately before each term. Anaphora of “let him” in the last sentence presents an urgent, confrontational tone to complement the imperative sentence. An isocolon of the objects of the writer’s “shameful outrage” effectively links “truth” and “fair dealing.” The placement of prepositional phrases within one another at the beginning of the seventh paragraph sets the methodical tone used in his appeal. Hamilton quotes the Constitution to provide support to his argument and his appeal to logos. Words and phrases that are crucial to his point are written in all capitals (they do not appear this way in the Constitution) to drive his ideas into his audience with the weight of the nation’s central document. “Pretended” is the operative word in the next sentence, because of Hamilton’s disagreement with the portrayed power of the president. Hamilton closes this thought process with a restatement of his thesis, but he uses “us” instead of “I” to appeal to the public. Hamilton hastily employs artful syntax (scheme) in the form of parenthesis, which serves to state his purpose in this first of two explanatory paragraphs. He then follows up with the word only, which Constitution, and which SHALL BE ESTABLISHED BY LAW"; of course it cannot extend to the appointments of senators, whose appointments are OTHERWISE PROVIDED FOR in the Constitution[2], and who are ESTABLISHED BY THE CONSTITUTION, and will not require a future establishment by law. This position will hardly be contested. The last of these two clauses, it is equally clear, cannot be understood to comprehend the power of filling vacancies in the Senate, for the following reasons: First. The relation in which that clause stands to the other, which declares the general mode of appointing officers of the United States, denotes it to be nothing more than a supplement to the other, for the purpose of establishing an auxiliary method of appointment, in cases to which the general method was inadequate. The ordinary power of appointment is confined to the President and Senate JOINTLY, and can therefore only be exercised during the session of the Senate; but as it would have been improper to oblige this body to be continually in session for the appointment of officers and as vacancies might happen IN THEIR RECESS, which it might be necessary for the public service to fill without delay, the succeeding clause is evidently intended to authorize the President, SINGLY, to make temporary appointments "during the recess of the Senate, by granting commissions which shall expire at the end of their next session." Second. If this clause is to be considered as supplementary to the one which precedes, the VACANCIES of which it speaks must be construed to relate to the "officers" described in the preceding one; and this, we have seen, excludes from its description the members of the Senate. Third. The time within which the power is implies that the first clause is easily summarized and explained. Through quotation of the Constitution itself, Hamilton establishes an incredibly powerful appeal to ethos or credibility. This establishment of credibility supports his subsequent appeals to logos, or logic by demonstrating that the words of the Constitution refute the claims made against it (by the “writers against the Constitution”). His choice of diction in using “of course” helps him to manipulate the readers into supporting his views by making them (his views) seem startlingly obvious. The parallel structure of this penultimate paragraph and the previous serves to link the two in rhetorical function: refutation of arguments (false, exaggerated arguments) against the constitution. Hamilton once again applies parenthesis which, in this case, supports his logical claims. This also supports the tone of Federalist #67, which can be described as defensive, contemptuous, persuasive, and realistic. Hamilton’s use of “comprehend,” combined with diction: “understood,” is an allusion to the lack of comprehension (of the Constitution) shown by the “writers against the Constitution” and their libelous criticisms. However, “comprehend” is also used sylleptically in that the word also means “to encompass.” This demonstration is further supported by the antithesis of “auxiliary methods” supporting “general methods.” Such antithesis is quite effective because it serves to illustrate how the constitution works, and that it has many backup systems in place. Hamilton begins again to use phrases and words in all capital letters. Again, The use of capitalization makes his main points of argument stand out from the rest of the paper. They also allow him to quote the constitution without the use of quotation marks. Hamilton uses these capitalized words and phrases to support his hordes of appeals to logos and ethos. Hamilton uses the word “supplement” (in contrast with “complement”) to show that the Constitution is complete, and to show that it considers all things. The parenthesis of “we have seen” stresses the fact that Hamilton is walking his audience through this section of the constitution. The use of “we” reminds the audience that Hamilton is clarifying for their to operate, "during the recess of the Senate," and the duration of the appointments, "to the end of the next session" of that body, conspire to elucidate the sense of the provision, which, if it had been intended to comprehend senators, would naturally have referred the temporary power of filling vacancies to the recess of the State legislatures, who are to make the permanent appointments, and not to the recess of the national Senate, who are to have no concern in those appointments; and would have extended the duration in office of the temporary senators to the next session of the legislature of the State, in whose representation the vacancies had happened, instead of making it to expire at the end of the ensuing session of the national Senate. The circumstances of the body authorized to make the permanent appointments would, of course, have governed the modification of a power which related to the temporary appointments; and as the national Senate is the body, whose situation is alone contemplated in the clause upon which the suggestion under examination has been founded, the vacancies to which it alludes can only be deemed to respect those officers in whose appointment that body has a concurrent agency with the President. But last, the first and second clauses of the third section of the first article, not only obviate all possibility of doubt, but destroy the pretext of misconception. The former provides, that "the Senate of the United States shall be composed of two Senators from each State, chosen BY THE LEGISLATURE THEREOF for six years"; and the latter directs, that, "if vacancies in that body should happen by resignation or otherwise, DURING THE RECESS OF THE LEGISLATURE OF ANY STATE, the Executive THEREOF may make temporary appointments until the NEXT MEETING OF THE LEGISLATURE, benefit. Hamilton strategically arranges his summations of separate elements of the second clause (of the previously mentioned Constitutional clauses) into easily understandable bullets. This allows him to disprove falsified claims one at a time, making them more logically appealing. Hamilton appeals often to ethos and logos by quoting the words of the constitution Hamilton repeats his sylleptic use of “comprehend” within a parenthetical scheme to make concrete the facts that the “writers against the constitution” have falsified information. Hamilton antithesizes State legislatures and the national Senate to establish them as separate entities, for it is important that the audience understands the differences between the two. Parenthesis adds complexity and clarification to Hamilton’s statements. Hamilton places “of course” in parenthesis to make the constitution seem clearer, as if there is no other way for it to be interpreted than the way he has. Parenthesis adds further complexity and clarification to Hamilton’s statements. “But last,”: Hamilton has employed a climactic structure to his organization of arguments, making them Before concluding his penultimate paragraph, which is of central importance to Federalist #67, Hamilton unleashes a final, furious barrage of quotations directly from the Constitution. This builds up his audience with ethos and logos before he crushes them with nearly intolerable amounts of pathos. which shall then fill such vacancies." Here is an express power given, in clear and unambiguous terms, to the State Executives, to fill casual vacancies in the Senate, by temporary appointments; which not only invalidates the supposition, that the clause before considered could have been intended to confer that power upon the President of the United States, but proves that this supposition, destitute as it is even of the merit of plausibility, must have originated in an intention to deceive the people, too palpable to be obscured by sophistry, too atrocious to be palliated by hypocrisy. Hamilton here employs a scheme of parenthesis to support his interpretations of the constitution. It is important for the audience to understand that any appointments the president makes to fill vacated slots, are, in fact, temporary. The extended length of the penultimate paragraph indicates its importance. The paragraph, like the previous, serves to summarize and clear up any misunderstanding of the Constitution concerning the temporary appointment of Senators. In his fourth and final section (of the penultimate paragraph), Hamilton integrates ethos, or emotional appeal into his paper by making members of the audience feel like victims (of “deception”, “sophistry”, and “atrocity”). This appeal further manipulates the readers, turning them against the “writers against the constitution”, whom Hamilton refers to as obscured hypocrites. I have taken the pains to select this instance of misrepresentation, and to place it in a clear and strong light, as an unequivocal proof of the unwarrantable arts which are practiced to prevent a fair and impartial judgment of the real merits of the Constitution submitted to the consideration of the people. Nor have I scrupled, in so flagrant a case, to allow myself a severity of animadversion little congenial with the general spirit of these papers. I hesitate not to submit it to the decision of any candid and honest adversary of the proposed government, whether language can furnish epithets of too much asperity, for so shameless and so prostitute an attempt to impose on the citizens of America. In the final paragraph Hamilton builds on the emotions of the readers to turn them against the opposition of the Constitution. He mentions misrepresentation to instill anxiousness and fear in his audience; the United States of America was identified with representation of the masses, and had a profound fear of developing a monarchy or dictatorship within its borders. Hamilton also states that he would never stoop to such a low level, as the opponents of the constitution had done in spreading their outrageous fabrications. He believes that this paper is no place to initiate criticism (animadversion) and argument. He employs further use of parenthesis in order to further illustrate his shocked reaction to the claim made against the constitution. Hamilton demonstrates that he is extremely confident in his response to Constitutional criticisms and fabrications. This confidence adds a new level of appeal to the ethos which Hamilton has been building on throughout the entire paper. Hamilton concludes Federalist #67 with a final powerful appeal to logos, pathos, and ethos by reminding his audience that they were shamelessly being taken advantage of. PUBLIUS 1. See CATO, No. V. 2. Article I, section 3, clause 1.