Narrative Structure Most commercial films – “classic Hollywood” type - are similar in structure to a three-act play. Each act is structured to end on a moment of heightened tension or interest – a ‘plot point’ or ‘turning point’ that will change the direction of the story. The first act introduces the main characters and situation, and ends with a scene that sets up a complication around which the plot will revolve – plot point 1 - that disrupts the equilibrium of the original situation. The second act develops this complication. The ‘mid-point’ scene is a central incident that packs a dramatic punch and kicks the action to a higher level. The third act brings the situation to a climax and resolution. i.e. – get the hero up a tree, throw things at him, and then get him down from the tree. Act I Act II Act III First Half Second Half Andy settles in Andy earns privileges Brooks' story Tommy arrives: Andy is innocent Escape and redemption Confrontation Dramatic action Confrontation Confrontation Andy v Governor Governor v the law Red v his fears Andy v. the sisters Andy makes changes Brooks v freedom mid-point aria scene plot point 1 plot point 2 tax solution on roof shooting of Tommy set-up confrontation resolution Act I: From the start until the scene on the roof; establishes characters, setting, situation. Quite long and unusual in that the set-up also involves major confrontation, though not with the main antagonists. Plot point 1: Ch. 7: Andy offers to sort out Hadley's tax problem. His situation in the prison changes as a result. Act II: Andy is moved to the library, and becomes the tax expert. [Unknown to us, he is also planning for and preparing his breakout. Ch. 8] A dramatic midpoint scene Andy plays the aria and is thrown into the hole. Hadley: "You're mine now." Indicates another shift in relationships. Act II, Part 2: He continues to work for the governor; he teaches Tommy. Plot Point 2: Tommy is shot; Andy seems to be at his lowest ebb, with all hope gone. Particularly poignant now we know he is indeed innocent. Act III: Andy's plans are brought to fruition. The escape is the climax of his story, but there is a long 'dénouement' as Red's story is concluded. An inciting incident in Act 1 that starts the story going? Andy's arrival at Shawshank The story of Brooks is a subplot. Red's story is more of a counter melody than a sub-plot, since he does not do anything. He provides an observer and narrator, and a kind of 'control' (as in an experiment) against whom Andy can be measured. 29 Arrival of Andy at Shawshank – Answer Guide In the left hand column are features of this short scene. In the right, fill in the effect of each of the listed features. 1. Camera moves Feeling of action, a momentous period in Andy’s life 2. Andy is in front He is the main character 3. Same level He is still one of the ordinary citizens 4. Grey walls to the right Impending, miserable influence on Andy 5. Andy looks up Anticipation of what lies ahead and creates suspense, for we do not know what he is looking at. 6. Suspenseful strings and woodwinds Creates expectation of something important to come 7. Low angle shot becoming vertical shot, moving, of prison gateway, emphasising massive grey blocks Stresses the awesomeness of the prison institution, its overbearing weight, how unstoppable it is and how it encloses you. It is a symbol of the institution. 8. Black screen Stark contrast to the life before. Emphasises the blankness of the life to come 9. Yellow line Symbolic of the closely regulated movements of prison life 10. Walking feet sound Stresses how the men are shepherded by their superiors, how they are forced into a pattern of behaviour dictated by more powerful beings. The sound of walking feet evokes militarism, when people obey orders and blindly are led to their miserable fate. 11. Line of prisoners Again evokes regulation 12. Side shot of Sergeant Hadley Creates anticipation and sense of being ordered 13. Over-the-shoulder shot of Norton and Hadley Emphasises the two are the power in the place, together, and again creates suspense 14. Low angle shot of Norton, in the shadows Stresses his power and the coming out of the darkness creates a sense of sinister foreboding 30 Red's Reunion with Andy – Answer Guide Explain why the actors are positioned where they are and explain the sound effects. 1 Helicopter shot advancing over and close to the blue waves. The diving helicopter shot of the sea is uplifting because we are as free as a bird and we have not seen blue before. In marked contrast to the black and grey that have suffused the scenery beforehand. Before, it has always been iron bars hemming in people’s horizons; now, the sky’s the limit. 2 Voice-over of Red: “I hope.” Red’s “hope” speech emphasises the anticipation he has experienced ever since he threw off the shackles of prison. 3 Light, happy strings and woodwind The happier music reflects the lifting of spirits of the actors, now that a long promised reunion has come about. 4 Distant shot of Red, barefoot advancing, prow on the right The distant shot of Red advancing on the boat repairer, from aloft, shows how insignificant he really is. It may be an epic for him, but in the wider context, his is only a minor tale. The bare feet stress how long he has toiled for this moment and as he trudges through the sand, what immense effort it has all been. 5 Tracking shot to reveal up to midway along the boat, still looking at Red The tracking along the boat reveals how the vessel brings them together and will combine their forces as they make a living from it in the future. It is also a convenient device to move along to bring the two together. 6 Low angle shot of Andy kneeling and sanding the deck The low angle shot of Andy beavering away at his boat shows how he has been true to his word, working on an old vessel to use for tourists. The angle stresses his strength 7 He senses someone is there, pauses and looks at Red His movements towards Red are natural: it would be right for a lone boat repairer to be absorbed with his work but sense that someone was near as Red approached 8 He stands up, then jumps down Entirely natural. No longer are his movements controlled by the prison system 9 Casual dress, open necked shirt The dress again is in marked contrast to institutional uniform and parallels the heat 10 Andy smiles The two are re-united again and happiness suffuses his face 11 Distance shot, receding, as Red and Andy come together Hugging and embraces are the only reactions in this warm scene 12 The two embrace, helicopter rises far above and fades to them hugging The lifting camera to leave the pair as a dwindling, small couple is a delicate method of leaving them to a privacy to recall old times over and over again and to catch up on all the events that have happened since Andy’s escape. It is also a convenient way of terminating the story. 13 Music changes to drum and trumpet song. The triumphant background sound echoes the sense of uplift in our and the characters’ souls. 31 Who’s Who? - Answer Guide To familiarise yourself with the characters in the film, answer the following questions. Some characters appear more than once. Name the following characters. 1 The fictitious silent partner whom Andy creates in Norton’s financial deals whose existence would foil any police examination. 2 Who has an arrogant swagger, wears black side-burns and arrives at Shawshank to the accompaniment of rock and roll music, who has a wife and a baby girl and wants to learn how to read? 3 The star of the 1946 film Gilda, whose toss of her hair throws the inmates watching the film into ecstatic excitement. 4 He almost throws Andy off the licence plate factory roof when Andy asks him if he trusts his wife. 5 An old inmate who is very lonely, runs the prison library, delivers books to the cells, brings a pet crow into the refectory for titbits, almost kills Heywood and finally hangs himself from the ceiling of his lodgings when on the outside because he cannot handle being free. 6 What is the name of his pet crow? 7 The golf professional who was having an affair with Andy’s wife. 8 Which star covers the whole in the wall when Andy finally makes his escape? 9 Who tells Red that he does not need to ask permission to piss? Randall Stevens Tommy Williams Rita Hayworth Captain Hadley Brooks Jake Glenn Quentin Raquel Welch Supermarket manager Who says the following? Give the context in which they say it. 10 Andy crawled to freedom through 500 yards of shit-smelling foulness I can’t even imagine. 11 I was thinking about maybe setting up some sort of trust fund for my kids’ educations. 12 Hey, anybody come at you yet? Anybody get to you yet? I could be a friend to you. … Hard to get. I like that. 13 I am the light of the world. He that follows me shall not walk in darkness, but shall have the light of life. 14 I know a couple of big old bull queers that’d just love to make your acquaintance, especially that big white mushy butt of yours! 15 God, I don’t belong here! I wanna go home! I want my mum! 16 I could see why some of the boys took him for snobby. He had a quiet way about him, a walk and a talk that just wasn’t normal around here. He strolled like a man in a park without a care or a worry in the world. Like he had an invisible coat that would shield him from this place. 17 You eat when we say you eat. You shit when we say you shit. And you piss when we say you piss! 18 Yes sir. Absolutely sir. Yeah, I’ve learned my lesson. I can honestly say that I’m a changed man. I’m no longer a danger to society. That’s the God’s honest truth. 19 You strike me as a particularly icy and remorseless man. It chills my blood just to look at you. 20 Remember, Red, hope is a good thing, maybe the best of things and no good thing ever dies. I will be hoping that this letter finds you and finds you well. 32 Red in V.O., describing Andy's escape. Dekins, just after Andy has been transferred form the laundry to the library; this starts Andy off on his new career. Bogs Diamond, in the showers on Andy's first morning. Norton, to Andy in his cell, quoting St John 8.12 Heywood taunts Chubby Fat Ass on his first night; the man breaks, is beaten by Hadley and dies. Chubby Fat Ass can't cope with his first night in prison. Red, about Andy, when he had been in Shawshank about two months Hadley to the new prisoners when they first arrive – Andy's first day. Red to the Parole Board in 1947 that rejects his application. the Trial Judge to Andy when he is sentenced. Andy's voice from outside the prison, in the letter he leaves for Red. Characterisation of Andy – Answer Guide Match the personality traits with the incidents or quotations that suggest them. 1. He chips away at his concrete prison cell wall over a period of 17 years. Demonstrates the man’s remarkable persistence. 2. A poster of Rita Hayworth conceals the hole in the wall. Shows how astute he is for he knows that everyone will assume that the picture covers a plain, blank wall. It is the last place the guards will look. 3. At the start, he is seen fingering a gun and bullets in a car outside the lovers’ cabin. Indicates murderous intent. He is a very dangerous man, given his other characteristics. But the rejection of murder shows a deep-thinking brain and compassion, plus, perhaps, a realisation of disastrous personal consequences, should he go ahead. 4. The bottle of spirits he is drinking in the car. Suggests he an alcoholic, perhaps, but more likely, a dependence on props to bolster a flagging confidence and resist depression. He shows his weakness here, his normality as a fragile human being. It helps paint him as a rounded character, when many other features tend to make him out as superhuman. 5. The shattering of the bottle. The shattering bottle is probably a consequence of his inebriated state, of carelessness. 6. “Since I am innocent of the crime, sir, I find it decidedly inconvenient that the gun was never found.” The remarks to the judge reveal his calmness, sophistication and eloquence. He is clearly a very well educated man, self-assured, highly intelligent and linguistically gifted. 7. “You strike me as a particularly icy and remorseless man. It chills my blood just to look at you.” The judge’s observations about him expose him as cold, distant – distinctly to be avoided. 8. Andy closes his eyes when the judge sentences him to two life sentences, back to back. Depression, fatalism and resignation show in the closing of the eyes on hearing his sentence. 9. “that tall drink-a-water with the silver spoon up his arse.” Red’s first impression of Andy is of a privileged individual. 10. “I didn’t think much of Andy the first time I set eyes on him. Looked like a stiff breeze would blow him over. That was my first impression.” Then, when he observes that it looks as if a stiff breeze would blow him over, he sees Andy as fragile, non-athletic, delicate and weak. 11. Andy sits in his cell on the first night rotating a ball in his hand. Andy is shown as meditative and deep thinking. 12. “His first night in the joint, Andy Dufresne cost me two packets of cigarettes. He never made a sound.” Making no sound on his first night, when many moaned, tell us and Red that Andy has unusual self-control, is quiet, interiorises everything and is deep-thinking. 13. The way he reacts to finding a maggot in his porridge. Further strengthens our impression of a man in tight control of his emotions. 14. “What was his name?” asks Andy of Chubby Fat Ass, whom Hadley kicked to death. Demonstrates a humanity and compassion in Andy. 15. “Andy kept pretty much to himself at first. It wasn’t until a month went by that he finally opened his mouth to say more than two words to somebody.” Andy is a reserved, detached, very private person. 16. “I have no enemies here,” says Andy to Red of Shawshank Prison. Suggests an extremely naïve man. It illustrates the fact that he has probably had a sheltered existence and has never mixed with the criminal class. 17. Andy laughs when Red thinks Andy will use a rock hammer to escape. “You’ll understand when you see the rock hammer.” Red thinks a rock hammer is a normal tool, capable of making a hole in concrete. But in telling Red to wait until he sees it and realises that it is very small, Andy is revealing a sense of the comic. There is a deep awareness of the comedy of existence. 33 18. “I could see why some of the boys took him for snobby. He had a quiet way about him, a walk and a talk that just wasn’t normal around here. He strolled like a man in a park without a care or a worry in the world.” “A walk and a talk that just wasn’t normal around here” makes the men consider him snobby, but it isn’t that at all. He is just very different. He is distant, non-communicative, reserved and independent. 19. “Every so often, Andy would turn up with fresh bruises. The sisters kept at him. He never said who did it.” The fresh bruises prove how long-suffering he is and also that he is very strong. 20. Andy’s suggestion to Hadley that he will be able to keep his brother’s money if he trusts his wife. The amazing “Do you trust your wife?” remark to Hadley not only reveals Andy’s naïveté, but also his boldness, bravery and ability to take the initiative. 21. His lack of resistance when Hadley threatens to throw him off the roof. His courage and stoicism are revealed by his non-resistance to Hadley’s threat to throw him off the roof. 22. “I’d only ask three beers a piece for each of my co-workers.” The three beers for all his co-workers demonstrates a clever awareness of how this will make him friends; it also shows that he thinks of others, rather than of himself and has a generous nature. 23. He sits, smiling, on his own, while his mates enjoy their beers. Sitting on his own and smiling not only reveals his detachment, but his happiness in having turned an important corner in his relations with the prisoners and the guards. Giving up alcohol exhibits stoic, self-discipline. He has steel armour on. 24. He says he’ll teach Red how to play chess even though Red says he hates the game. The determination to teach Red chess, even though Red says he hates the game, discloses to us that Andy is helpful as well as determined. 25. He tells Red that he will use the rock hammer to carve the chess pieces himself. This is deceitful. He will not confess to his closest friend even, the real purpose of the tool. This shows how Andy keeps himself to himself when he wants to – to protect Red? or simply to minimise any risk of discovery? It seems that nothing will ever break him. Is he unreal? 26. Andy warning Bogs of the reflexes in the teeth if Bogs puts his penis in Andy’s mouth. An astute way of avoiding the worst of the bestiality. Andy Dufresne is a very clever man. 27. The accurate quotations and Biblical references he gives Warden Norton. The Biblical references make Andy out as having an amazing memory, a religious up-bringing, a scholarly nature and a knowledgeable background. 28. His repeated requests and letters to the State Senate, asking for more funds for the library. The repeated written letters to the State Legislature demanding funds for the library expose his unusual determination and persistence, plus a boldness remarkable its audacity. He’s a man in a million. 29. His completion of tax returns for the guards and Norton. His financial wizardry and dedication are shown by the tax returns. 30. Playing Mozart over the public address system. The Mozart broadcast exposes a refined side to Andy we have not seen yet. It also confirms our knowledge of his effrontery and devil-may-care attitude. 31. “That’s the beauty of music. They can’t get that from you.” He is philosophical, and able to live within his head. 32. “I’m done. Everything stops. Get someone else to run your scams.” “Get someone else to do your scams!” expresses defiance and anger – and frustration, given that he has seen how ruthless they can be. 33. His desire to live the rest of his life in a little seaside place in Mexico, running a tourist boat. Escapism. A romantic. Andy lives in a dream world. He’s realistic in knowing he won’t be able to live in the USA afterwards. This also shows he’s tired of finance and wants a break. 34. Andy confesses that he did kill his wife because he had driven her away from him with coldness. Though someone else killed his wife, he deserves to do time. “I just didn’t know how to show it (love to his wife)” confirms our knowledge of the man as finding it hard to reveal his emotions. He’s unemotional, introspective and flagellates himself. He tortures his mind with regret. 34 35. “My wife used to say I’m a hard man to know. Like a closed book. God, I loved her. I just didn’t know how to show it, that’s all. I killed her, Red. I didn’t pull the trigger, but I drove her away and that’s why she died-because of me, the way I am.” Highly intelligent and introspective. Carries guilt, which may expose a religious background – though no suggestion of this is made. 36. “Promise me Red, if you ever get out, find that spot. In the base of that wall you’ll find a rock that has no earthly business in a Maine hayfield. A piece of black, volcanic glass. There’s something buried under it I want you to have.” The obsidian plan must tell us how far-sighted he is. The preparations have been very meticulously made. 37. His arms stretch heavenward in the rain after his escape. Stretching his arms heavenward on coming out of the sewage pipe may reveal a deep religious sense, but it also expresses immense relief and gratitude for his success. He is deep feeling. An immense burden has been taken off his shoulders. Personality Traits Some of these personality traits will fit more than one incident. If you don't understand what any of these words mean, look them up! Most of them are adjectives, but some are abstract nouns. When you write them in the table, write 'a' if it is an adjective, or 'n' if an abstract noun. Don't settle just for matching up the word; explain the situation as well. careless financial wizard * fragile empathy with others* self-denigration reliance on alcohol* far sighted planner * stoic helpful bold independent sense of the comic* inexpressive introspective long-suffering naïveté quiet n n philosophical. unemotional privileged happy scholarly clever eloquent deep feelings* deceitful murderous musical private fatalistic furious astuteness perseverance n distant escapist selflessness n determination religious despairing calculating n n n n * noun phrases You are now in a position to write about Andy’s characteristics. Remember to support assertions on personality with incidents and/or quotations that bear them out. Quite a different question is how the director, actor and crew portray Andy’s personality. 35 n n Characterisation of Andy 2 – Answer Guide A range of techniques is employed to fill out the person who is Andy. Some are listed below. Suggest what each of them is telling us about Andy. There is no one, definitive answer for each and there is a myriad of ways of expressing responses, so discussion with your teacher afterwards is advisable. 1. We first see Andy Dufresne in a car. The car symbolises the constraints placed upon him: he is hemmed in by his circumstances of an unfaithful wife, her lover and his guilt complex that he is responsible for her infidelity, never having been able to express his love for her. The black colour of the car merely reinforces his morbidity. So the car is a metaphor for persecution of the mind and negative circumstances impinging on his life. The framing of him by the window accentuates this first impression 2. It is night and the light is weak. It is very hard to distinguish Andy in the faint light: this must clearly (!) mirror his dark thoughts – the dim, misty, cryptic depths of his agonised self torture of conscience. He is, after all, musing on the murder of his wife and her toy boy, the destruction of his marriage, the collapse of his dreams. 3. He is clumsily trying to put bullets into his gun. The clumsiness reflects his conflicting thoughts, as well as his drunken state: should he commit murder or walk away from it? So his mind is not really focussed (!) on loading the pistol. 4. A bottle of bourbon is swigged twice. Clearly, the man is not invincible, though the film portrays him as steely tough. Interesting here is a comparison with Warden Norton, also portrayed as an iron man. Both have their Achilles’ heels. Here, the whisky is a prop to support his weakened emotions. 5. The Inkspots croon “If I didn’t care.” If you examine the lyrics of the Inkspots’ number, (see synopsis), it suggests that Andy’s head is going “round and round,” agonising over whether to kill his wife and Glenn. Does he care enough about her to want her to live? “If I didn’t care, would I feel this way?” So he is a man who finds reaching decisions tortuous, who has a conscience, an acute awareness of what is right and wrong. 6. The gun and bullets are wrapped in a cloth. The care of the gun shows his meticulousness. 7. The camera slowly PANS from the cabin to Andy and ZOOMS into him from a high angle through the car door. The camera movement clearly establishes linkage between the two, the focus of his mind: murder. He is prepared to go to any lengths to achieve his purpose. He is single minded. The eventual focus on his face in the car establishes him as the main personage in the film, the instigator of the action. He is not one to let things drift – he is the sort of person who moves mountains. No wonder he has risen to be Vice-President of a bank at such a young age. So camera and angles position him as a leader. 8. The next shot of Andy is low angle. The low angle cements what has just been said about his power 9. Then the camera lifts to eye level. 10. As he stumbles from the car, the bourbon bottle smashes onto the driveway. Emphasises his dominance again. Apart from stressing his drunkenness, and hence his inability to control his emotions completely, it reveals a side to his character that we never see again, his carelessness. It is a fine counterpoint to his otherwise impeccable organizational ability, and thus makes him a rounded character and hence more believable. We can understand, if not forgive, his weaknesses here, given the immense psychological pressure he is under. Andy's abstinence from alcohol in prison is because when under the influence outside, he came close to murder, so wishes to avoid any future possible mistake 11. The car is a mid1940’s model. The car and suit position Andy in 1947, rooting him in the post-war American scene. 12. His suit - seen more clearly in court - is of the same era. The car and suit position Andy in 1947, rooting him in the post-war American scene. 36 13. His gait is unsteady. The wobbling walk reinforces our impression of a man in a vortex of emotional distress and symbolically represents his cerebral dilemma. He’s wavering in his intent to kill. 14. His tie is loose, collar undone, clothes dishevelled. Quite unlike Andy in court, life or prison: he’s totally disorganized here. 15. Tim Robbins's face has a deep forehead, his lips are set tight, his eyes unblinking, remain fixed distantly. 16. In court, his words come measured after slight pauses to the prosecuting counsel’s questions. Here is a man who thinks hard and deep, a measured, careful, calculating tactician, an impression added to by the words he replies to the accusing barbs of the prosecutor: “Since I am innocent of the crime, sir, I find it decidedly inconvenient that the gun was never found.” He is confident, self-assured, unflappable, bold. 17. His head moves but little. The steady head adds to this sense of a man very much in control of himself. A clever move, this, of the director, providing sharp contrast with our previous meeting with Andy stumbling from the car. So we are prepared for the later despair when we see him in solitary confinement after the opera stunt. He can waver from hopelessness to set resolve. 18. His diction is clear and precise. The precise diction suggests that he has had an outstanding New England education as well as possessing a razor-sharp mind. His school must have been the American equivalent of Eton. 19. The hair is carefully groomed. The neat hair indicates discipline, an organized personality, a man unswerving from his set path as well, of course, as reflecting fashion, his home background and the culture of the U.S. banking profession. 20. Colours of his suit are restrained, not bright and his skin has a pale wash. These perhaps lead the judge to call him “icy.” There is an inner deadliness about Andy that Red comments upon during the licence plate factory roof beer party, remarking how he detaches himself from the rest and how he resisted Hadley’s threats to throw him to his death. The facial features here are vital to developing an insight into Andy and are testimony to Tim Robbins’ acting ability. The still, penetrating eyes express determination, the high forehead his intelligence and the sealed lips trustworthiness, grit and resolve. Many of the remarks above are speculative and conjectural. But you are allowed to speculate thus, as long as your deductions are reasonably based on solid evidence, well supported. I well remember inviting along to one of my junior classes Owen Marshall, a renowned New Zealand short story writer. One boy asked him if the hurling of eggs taken out of the refrigerator by Mrs Ransumeen in "The Day Hemingway died" (an image repeated in Once Were Warriors when Beth, in a rage, hurls eggs onto the floor of the kitchen, demanding that her useless husband, Jake, do some work around the place, rather than booze his life away and wake up to the world of feminine emancipation.) symbolised the death of unborn life within her. In other words, represented the fact that her own life, with all its wonderful potential, had been killed because she was locked in a oneway street of pathetic uselessness and meaninglessness. Owen's eyes brightened, for here was a perceptive intellect in a boy so young (13). "No," he replied, "that is not what I had in mind. I chose eggs because that is what the hands would first seize upon when opening the door of the fridge. They just happen, by accident, to be closest to hand in the physical situation of pulling the door open. But your observation is quite justifiable. What did you see in the image?" The boy replied, "Well, sir, I saw the eggs dribbling down the wall of the kitchen in a hideous, foul, repulsive picture of how she saw the hideousness, foulness and repulsiveness of her own inadequate self image of her own life with her pathetic husband. How she was locked in an unfulfilled marriage and tortured herself for having put herself in that situation." " Brilliant, my lad," rejoined Owen, "Quite brilliant. You are quite justified in seeing symbolism in an image that is relevant to the context. It never occurred to me, even though I wrote it!" So feel free to milk images of all their potential. So the main ingredients of Andy's personality have been delineated in the first few minutes of meeting him - always a most important phase in character build-up. Nothing we witness later on detracts from the initial assessment; it merely reinforces it. We see a clever, calculating individual of resolve and courage, prone to depression when under severe pressure, but strong enough to rise above the stress. His successful plan and break-out are foreshadowed by the mindset of murderous resolve, and the despair in solitary is foreshadowed by the drunken wavering beside the car. Even his falling into the sphere of Red's influence and the deep bond that emerges between the two is foreshadowed by his marriage. 37 Themes and Quotations - Answer Guide Below are some quotations or incidents, which illustrate certain lessons. Identify such themes. Possible match-ups suggested – there are sure to be other answers. 1. “I’ll see you in Hell before I see you in Reno!” Dangers of impetuousness, of saying or doing things in the heat of the moment without thinking through the consequences. 2. “I hereby order you to serve two life sentences back to back.” Miscarriage of justice. The law occasionally convicts the wrong person. 3. “I’m up for rejection next week.” Levity, making light and fun if something serious in order to cope. Hardening, becoming inured by suffering. Also 12, 15 4. “Chubby Fat-Ass.” Nicknaming illustrates inmates’ way of making fun in a horrid situation. 5. “You eat when we say you eat. You shit when we say you shit.” Institutionalisation: one becomes inured to a system’s regulations and finds it hard to break free and organize oneself. Also 27, 26, 42, 50 6. “A whole life blown away in the blink of an eye.” Irrevocability, the finality of certain actions. 7. “I know a couple of big old bull queers that’d just love to make your acquaintance.” Foulness, bestiality, the cruelty man can inflict on man. Also 9, 16 8. “I wanna go home. I don’t belong here.” Homesickness, love of home and mother survives even into adulthood; called on in moments of great stress. 9. “If I hear so much as a mouse fart the rest of the night, I swear by God and sonny Jesus you’ll all visit the infirmary.” Guards are as foul and bestial as the criminals. 10. “His first night in the joint, Andy Dufresne cost me two packets of cigarettes. He never made a sound.” Respect built on experience. Also 21, 22 11. Brooks asks for the maggot Andy found in his porridge. Misinterpretation of events and scenes, the failure to see the real import. Also 14, 17, 45, 46 12. 13. “It doesn’t fucking matter what his name was. He’s dead.” Hardening, becoming inured by suffering. “I wonder if you might get me a rock hammer.” Business, the need to occupy oneself in a boring situation, to take one’s mind off it. 14. “I could see why some of the boys took him for snobby. He had a walk and a talk that just wasn’t normal around here.” Revelation given by clothes and gait to character. 15. Andy is the only inmate to say thanks to Brooks for the books. Hardening, becoming inured by suffering. 38 16. 17. 18. “Every so often, Andy would turn up with fresh bruises.” Foulness, bestiality, the cruelty man can inflict on man. “Mr Hadley, do you trust your wife?” Misinterpretation of events and scenes, the failure to see the real import. “I’d only ask three beers a piece for each of my co-workers.” Mateship. Any situation which binds people closely together, such as a school, the forces, an accident or prison, especially when there is danger to life, pushes folk close together and results in a lifetime’s friendship. 19. “Only guilty man in Shawshank.” Criminals don't accept their guilt; they cover up, play innocent. 20. Andy warns Bogs of the reflex motion if Bogs puts his penis in Andy’s mouth. The power of education, of reading. Andy says he learned this in books. It doesn't save him from a beating, though. 21. Hadley beats up Bogs so severely that he spends the rest of his life drinking his meals through a straw. Brutality; the abuse of power. Hadley considers he is above the law. 22. The prisoners welcome Andy back with Rita and rocks after his spell in the infirmary. Respect built on experience. Mateship 23. “I hear you’re good with numbers.” Specialization, people are slotted into the tasks they are best fitted to. 24. Dekins asks Andy to set up a trust fund for his sons’ education. Something for nothing – he could have paid a lawyer to do it. OR – the high cost of legal advice in US?? 25. Andy writes to the State Senate every week asking for money for books. Determination. Also 47, 48. 26. Brooks holds a knife to Heywood’s throat when the guard comes to farewell him. Institutionalisation. 27. Brooks hangs himself. Institutionalisation 28. Wiley sits on the toilet reading the Jughead comic. Childishness, some people never grow up. 29. “I tell you, those voices soared….and for the briefest of moments, every last man at Shawshank felt free” Music, its power to transform situations. Also 30 30. 31. “Here’s where it makes most sense.” Music they cannot get to. It symbolises hope. Hope, the power of positive thinking. Also 43, 44, 51 “Lost interest in it though.” Here “it didn’t seem to make sense.” Fatalism. Also 44, 45 32. Andy made book bargains with charity groups, book clubs… Ingenuity, there’s always a way out if one thinks hard enough. Also 37 39 33. “Underbid any contractor in town” using “slave labour” but Norton gets kickbacks for having his prisoners “committed elsewhere.” Venality. People feather their own nests. See also 36, 40 34. “Woman can’t bake for shit.” Male machismo. Sweeping generalisation and categorisation. Norton despises everyone. 35. Norton gives the pie he considers awful to Andy. Haughtiness, people in high positions despise those lower. 36. “There’s a river of dirty money running through this place.” Venality, however powerful the institution 37. “He is a phantom, an apparition-second cousin to Harvey the Rabbit.” Ingenuity, there’s always a way out if one thinks hard enough. 38. Tommy determines to learn his ABCs. Power of ambition and education. 39. Norton refuses to find out if the Elmo Blatch story is true. Protection of own interests over-rides responsibility to others. 40. Murder of Tommy. “Broke Captain Hadley’s heart to shoot him.” Brutality; the abuse of power. Hadley and Norton consider they are above the law, or that they make their own laws. Hypocrisy. 41. Andy confesses to Red that it was he who really killed his wife because he was so cold to her. Failed relationships 42. “I been in here most of my life. I’m an institutional man now.” Institutionalisation. 43. Andy dreams of Zihuantanejo. Escapism, need to keep focussed on something beyond one’s present misery in order to survive. 44. “Get busy livin’ or get busy dyin’.” Fatalism. Optimism. 45. “Andy would never do that! I don’t know. Every man has his breaking point.” Misinterpretation of events and scenes, the failure to see the real import. Fatalism. 46. Andy asked Heywood for a piece of rope six feet long. Misinterpretation of events and scenes, the failure to see the real import. 47. Andy’s escape. Determination. 48. 49. 50. “Andy’s favourite hobby was totin’ his wall out into the exercise yard a handful at a time.” Determination. Cleverness. “I look back on the way I was then. A young, stupid kid who committed that terrible crime.” Realism, acceptance of the facts. How people change. “Forty years I’ve been asking permission to piss.” Institutionalisation. 51. “Remember, Red, hope is a good thing.” Positivism 40 Themes and Issues - Answer Guide Below are details from the film that point to issues. Identify what those issues are. Issue 1 Andy is incarcerated for well on 20 years in most inhuman conditions amid a confraternity of negative thinkers, who have long given up any expectation of being free. Yet he beavers away at chipping through his cell’s concrete wall and lays a plan for robbing Norton of his ill-gotten gains. Red is free in Boston, working in the supermarket and staying at Brooks' old half-way house, but he contemplates suicide because he finds he has to look after himself and can’t. The only thing that prevents him from re-offending and getting back into the “safety” of prison are the words of Andy, promising him something of value under a black rock in a wall near Buxton. Tommy wants to have a decent job in life but realises that he needs to pass his School Equivalency examinations, which he failed at school. Under Andy’s tutelage in the library, he works at his studies. There is always hope Issue 2 Red, Andy's closest friend in prison, is sceptical of a rock hammer being able to chisel through the walls: “600 years” is the time it would take, he opines. Dufresne toils under cover of darkness every night at chipping away at the concrete wall to effect an exit hole hidden by a poster of a female star. He gradually worms his way into the confidence of the guards and Norton by displaying financial expertise as a result of his banking career and so siphons the Warden’s personal fortune into an account which will safeguard his financial security for the rest of his life. Perseverance rewards all one’s efforts Issue 3 Andy’s work-boots need to be swapped for a pair of fancy shoes for when he hits the bank, so he has to invent some tactic to accommodate this situation. He must create a tax number, bank account numbers and social security files for his fictitious character, Randall Stevens, in order to have a deposit for the Norton funds he siphons off. No-one in the prison or out of it must know of the plan, otherwise it might be “blown” by a foolhardy remark, so absolute secrecy has to be adopted from the outset. Careful planning is absolutely essential in order to succeed Issue 4 Andy is thrown into prison on the evidence of his footprints outside on the drive of his wife his fingerprints on the broken whisky bottle the car tyre marks in the mud outside the murder scene failure of the police to find Andy’s gun in the Royal River Andy’s confession that he would rather see his wife in Hell than see her in a divorce court in Reno, which implies that he wanted her dead. These circumstances lead the judge to give Andy two life imprisonments, back to back, for the two murders, yet we learn that he did not do it at the beginning of the film and that Elmo Blatch, in fact, pulled the trigger. The law sometimes gets it wrong. It is a mistake to think that lawyers, judges and the police are infallible. 41 Issue 5 Red asks his employer at the supermarket if he can go for a pee. Brooks finds the traffic in Boston tremendously fast, so is hesitant about crossing the road. Finding life on the outside so dependent on him looking after himself, rather than being cared for in every activity, Hatlen hangs himself. One can become institutionalised, totally dependent on the system, given long enough in the place. Issue 6 Red builds up a network of procurers, who can obtain anything. So he secures a rock hammer and posters for Andy. He is the “King Rat” of Shawshank. All depend on him. Andy, in his turn, becomes dependent on Red, but more than that, opens up his heart about his marriage and his failure to show deep affection to his wife. So Red becomes his confidante. It is the promise that Red made to Andy, to read the note under the rock in the wall, which is the only thing keeping Red on the outside and from suicide. Without Andy, Red would have probably gone the way of Brooks The deepest friendships develop when in close proximity to others, especially when in danger. Issue 7 Andy is threatened with having Bog’s penis thrust into his mouth. He is beaten to within an inch of his life several times by the Sisters. The Warden confines him to solitary for two months. Captain Hadley murders two men, Chubby Fat Ass and Tommy Williams. The Warden obtains countless kickbacks and lines his own pockets. Prison is horrific. Issue 8 Norton tells every prisoner to guide his life by the Good Book, i.e. live a life of selfless goodliness. Norton connives at the murder of Williams. He outwardly assumes a religious fervour, by quoting the Bible verse by verse, yet steals prison funds. There is so much hypocrisy amid people. Issue 9 The notes of the sopranos in The Marriage of Figaro over the loudspeaker stop everyone in their tracks: the workers in the carpentry shop down tools and run to the window to see where the sound is coming from. The guard on the toilet while the sopranos sing pulls up his pants pronto and dashes outside to find the music source. Andy buys Red a new mouth organ to raise his spirits in Shawshank. Red has never played his own mouth organ since he came to Shawshank. Music can transform people’s way of thinking. 42 Crossword Answers Z S I H H A U I N T O A G P H O M A R E S M T A O E T N K R O L I E S N E S B A E R A N R S M J O A L Y I H A E S I O W I T A N H A N Y I C A A H A R M 43 O N Word Search Answers In the following word search, you will find 20 adjectives or nouns that apply to various characters in the film. When you find them, ascribe them to the most appropriate character in the table below. Some could match up with more than one character, but there should be at least three to each character. Identify nouns with 'n' and adjectives with 'a'. N O I T A N I M R E T E S P E T I R E E R A L S P A I A D E I C M S I P T T E N N O D C O O P F R Y ANDY S L I L N A I I Y R C L C E N T E C N R O O E R I R T E U U I P T R T I V B U P H A M T O Y A N N H E D E I R D E E L E S S T S L O Y A L E N D E R E D R RED U M I NORTON REDEMPTION n HOPELESS a CRIMINAL n INNOCENT a RETRIEVER n HYPOCRITE n DETERMINATION n CYNICAL a CORRUPT a CLEVER a LOYAL a PERSISTENT a HADLEY BROOKS TOMMY INHUMANE a DESPAIR n MURDERED a BULLY n INSTITUTIONALISED a PUNK n SADISM n AFRAID a PERSISTENT a 44 Interesting Trivia The role of Tommy Williams was intended for Brad Pitt. Filming was done at the defunct Mansfield State Penitentiary in Ohio. The prison was in such poor condition that renovations had to be made prior to filming. The American Society for the Prevention of Cruelty to Animals monitored the filming of scenes involving Brooks' crow. During the scene where he fed it a maggot, the ASPCA objected on the grounds that it was cruel to the maggot, and required that they use a maggot that had died from natural causes. One was found, and the scene was filmed. In Stephen King's original story, Red was written as an Irishman. The line, "Maybe it's 'cause I'm Irish", was left in even after Morgan Freeman was cast as Red. There are several similarities to the Alexandre Dumas novel, The Count of Monte Cristo, which is mentioned during the film. The Dumas novel involves a man falsely imprisoned for a crime, who later makes a daring escape. After escaping, he acquires hidden treasure, which he learns about in jail, and executes a plan of revenge against those who imprisoned him. The movie is dedicated to Frank Darabont's former agent, who helped him get started. Warden Norton whistles the hymn "Eine feste Burg ist unser Gott", the English translation of which is "A Mighty Fortress is Our God". The mug-shots of a young-looking Morgan Freeman that are attached to his parole papers are actually pictures of Morgan's younger son, Alfonso. Alfonso also has a cameo in the movie as a con shouting "Fresh fish! Fresh fish today! We're reeling 'em in!" On the wall in Andy Dufresne's cell is a picture of Albert Einstein. Tim Robbins, who portrayed Andy Dufresne, also played in the fictional movie of Albert Einstein, I.Q. In the opening courtroom sequence, Andy Dufresne mentions that he threw his gun into the Royal River; this is the same name of the river that the kids cross in Stand By Me, also from a Stephen King story. When Warden Samuel Norton opens the Bible where Andy Dufresne hid his rock pick, it opens to the Book of Exodus, which details the escape of the Jews from Egypt. In the scene after Andy has escaped, the warden tells them to question Red. When they call to open Red's cell they shout, "Open 237!" This is the same number as the room in The Shining, and the amount of change ($2.37) the four boys in Stand By Me collect between them. All three movies were based on Stephen King stories Stephen King sold the rights to the movie very cheaply out of his friendship with Frank Darabont. They had become friends when Darabont adapted a short story of King's called "The Woman in the Room" (King has a policy stating that any aspiring filmmaker can adapt his short stories for a buck) and King was thoroughly impressed. They maintained a pen pal relationship and didn't actually meet until Darabont optioned Shawshank. Towards the beginning, when Red leaves after they stamp REJECTED on his papers, his buddies ask him what happened, and Red says "Same shit, different day." This phrase is also said in the movie Dreamcatchers, which is also a Stephen King movie. The prisoners are drinking Stroh's beer on the roof. Actual prison inmates were used as extras in the scene when the camera PANS over the prison yard while Andy plays the aria over the loudspeaker. Although a very modest hit in theatres, the film became one of the highest grossing video rentals of all time. It currently ranks number 3 in the IMDb list of all-time most popular films, and was recently voted in the UK as the best film never to have earned an Oscar. 45