ISO/IEC JTC 1/SC 25 N
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Date: 2014-02-25
ISO/IEC JTC 1/SC 25
INTERCONNECTION OF INFORMATION TECHNOLOGY EQUIPMENT
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Voting report and collation of comments
Voting report to ISO/IEC DIS 30100-3: IT– Home network
resource management: Part 3: Management applications.
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1.25.01.20.3 CS#: 56727
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implemented as recorded in SC 25 N 2129. The text
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ISO/IEC JTC 1/SC 25 N
2234
Date: 2014-02-25
Ballot Information
Reference
Edition number
ISO/IEC DIS 30100-3
1
English title
Information technology -- Home network resource management -- Part 3:
Management application
Interconnexion des équipements de technologie de l'information -- Gestion
du réseau domestique -- Partie 3:
French title
Committee
ISO/IEC JTC 1/SC 25
Start date
2013-08-13
Opened by ISO/CS 2013-08-13 00:06:47
on
Status
Closed
End date
Closed by ISO/CS
on
2013-11-13
2013-11-15 00:21:06
Voting stage
Note
Version number
1
Enquiry
Result of voting
P-Members voting: 18 in favour out of 18 = 100 % (requirement
>= 66.66%)
(P-Members having abstained are not counted in this vote.)
Member bodies voting: 0 negative votes out of 21 = 0 %
(requirement <= 25%)
Approved
ISO/IEC JTC 1 / SC 533577329
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ISO/IEC JTC 1/SC 25
N 2234
Date: 2016-03-07
Votes by members
Country
Armenia
Australia
Austria
Belarus
Belgium
Canada
China
Czech Republic
Denmark
Finland
France
Germany
India
Ireland
Italy
Jamaica
Japan
Kazakhstan
Korea, Republic of
Lebanon
Malaysia
Malta
Mexico
Netherlands
Nigeria
Norway
Pakistan
Poland
Russian Federation
Singapore
South Africa
Spain
Sweden
Switzerland
United Arab Emirates
United Kingdom
United States
Zimbabwe
P-Member TOTALS
Total of P-Members voting: 18
TOTALS
Member
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ASI
BELST
NBN
SCC
SAC
UNMZ
DS
SFS
AFNOR
DIN
BIS
NSAI
UNI
BSJ
JISC
KAZMEMST
KATS
LIBNOR
DSM
MCCAA
DGN
NEN
SON
SN
PSQCA
PKN
GOST R
SPRING SG
SABS
AENOR
SIS
SNV
ESMA
BSI
ANSI
SAZ
Status
P-Member
P-Member
P-Member
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P-Member
P-Member
P-Member
P-Member
P-Member
P-Member
P-Member
P-Member
P-Member
P-Member
P-Member
P-Member
P-Member
P-Member
P-Member
P-Member
P-Member
P-Member
O-Member
P-Member
P-Member
P-Member
P-Member
O-Member
P-Member
P-Member
P-Member
P-Member
P-Member
P-Member
P-Member
P-Member
Secretariat
P-Member
Approval
Disapproval
Abstention
X
X
X
X
X
X
X
X
X
X
X
X*
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X
X*
X
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18
0
14
21
0
14
(*) A comment file was submitted with this vote
Comments from Voters
Germany
DIN
P-Member
Japan
JISC
P-Member
ISO_IEC DIS 30100-3_DIN.doc
ISO_IEC DIS 30100-3_JISC.doc
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533577329
Date:
2013-11-27
Collation of comment to 30100-3:
IT– Home network resource management:
Part 3: Management applications.
MB/NC1
Line
number
Clause/ Subclause
Paragraph/
(e.g. 3.1)
Figure/
(e.g. 17)
JP01
l. 131
Type of
comment
Document: ISO/IEC 30100-3
Comments
Project:
1.25.01.20.3 CS#:
56727
Proposed change
2
Table/
Observations of the
secretariat
(e.g. Table 1)
Introduction
E
Definition will be required for
the apartment complex server,
apartment complex office, home
residential gateway, and set top
box (STB).
Should be added the
definitions of the
apartment complex
server, apartment
complex office, home
residential gateway,
and set top box (STB).
* Supported
Apartment complex server: computer remotely managing
services for residents in a multi-unit dwelling
Apartment complex office: management facility that
provides services for residents in a multi-unit dwelling
Home residential gateway: interface between external
networks and home networks
Set-top box: interface between an external service and
home equipment
JP02
JP03
l.284
l.285
5.4
5.4
E
E
There is no brackets “[]” in Figure2.
There is no figure items indicating
“the
event registration messages”
Should be deleted “In
the Figure 2
messages in brackets
“[]” are 284 optional
messages.”
Are there, optional messages in table 2?
Should be changed to
“For example, in
order to receive
events of interest,
event registration
messages of the
following
HRM_regUserEvent
are used, and when
there are no events
of interest, these
messages are not
used.”
Please complete figure and its description
* Accommodated. Insert missing brackets around messages
3 and 6.
* Accommodated. With revised text:
“the event registration messages (3 and 6) …”
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(e.g. 3.1)
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(e.g. 17)
JP04
JP05
JP06
JP07
JP08
JP09
JP10
JP11
JP12
l.286
l.294
l.315
l.338-1
Type of
comment
5.4
5.4
5.4
6.2
E
E
E
E
l.415
6.3.7.1
Description
E
6.3.11.1
Description
E
6.3.15.1
Description
E
6.3.15.1
Description
E
l.512
Proposed change
2
Table/
6.2
l.511
Comments
Project:
1.25.01.20.3 CS#:
56727
Observations of the
secretariat
(e.g. Table 1)
l.33814
l.465
Document: ISO/IEC 30100-3
E
Grammatical error : “when there are
no events
”
Spell error “step 4”
Editorial comment: “resource” from
context. ?
Should be changed to
“when there is no
event”
Should be changed to
“Step 4”
Supported
Should be changed to
“resources”
Supported
* Rejected
Consider
* Agreed
* Agreed
Should be changed to “authenticate a
user” from “authenticate user”
Either as proposed or "users"
“source resource identifier” is used at
l.499 as “using the source ID”.
Avoid ambiguities
Editorial comment: “so that user can
get”
Editorial comment: “resource ID and
source resource ID” ?
Editorial error: “the user sends
resourceID, objectID” ?
Editorial error: “The User can also
register”
* Agreed
* Agreed. Change “source resource identifier” in the table o
“source ID”.
Should be changed to
“so that the user can
get”
Should be changed to
“resource ID and
source ID”
Either "a user" or "users"
Should be changed to
“the user sends
resource ID, object
ID”
Should be changed to
“The user can also
The union: " the user sends: resource ID, object ID and "?
* Agreed. Change to “the users”
Please explain
* Accommodated by changing “source resource” to
“source”. Also removed spaces before ID because
resourceID and objectID are parameter names.
* Rejected because resourceID and objectID are parameter
names.
Please explain
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JP13
JP14
JP15
JP16
JP17
JP18
l.523
l.564
l.578
l.588
l.588
l.588
Type of
comment
Document: ISO/IEC 30100-3
Comments
Proposed change
2
Table/
Project:
1.25.01.20.3 CS#:
56727
Observations of the
secretariat
(e.g. Table 1)
6.3.16.1
Description
E
6.3.19.1 and
others
G
6.3.20.1
Description
E
6.4.1
E
6.4.1
6.4.1
E
E
register”
* Agreed.
Editorial error: “the user sends
resourceID, objectID”?
Should be changed to
“the user sends
resource ID, object
ID”
Please explain
It is unclear who assigns and manages
the resourceID, objectID, and
processID and the numbering? by
user or management company or
manufacturer?
Should be added as
“the assigning of
resourceID, objectID,
and processID,
numbering, and the
management should
be controlled by such
like an IANA for
internet resource
and/or some third
party organization in
the country, the
district or area.”
Responsibilities shall be clearly defined
Editorial comment: “so that user can
get”
Should be changed to
“so that the user can
get”
Either "the user" or " users"
Character error :”DominInfo”
Should be changed to
“DomainInfo”.
Supported
Editorial comment in “Description of
ResourceInfo,
“detail resource information”
Should be changed to
“detailed resource
information”.
Supported
Editorial error in Description of
Should be changed to
Supported
* Rejected because resourceID and objectID are parameter
names.
* Accommodated by inserting the following after the first
sentence in 6.3.19.1: “The assignment of identifiers for the
apartment complex shall be unique for that complex and
may be provided by the complex manager.”
* Agreed to select “the user”.
* Agreed
* Agreed
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2013-11-27
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Part 3: Management applications.
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Line
number
Clause/ Subclause
Paragraph/
(e.g. 3.1)
Figure/
(e.g. 17)
JP19
JP20
JP21
JP22
l.588
G
L.860,
L.867,L
.883
Annex B
E
l.872-4
B.3.2
250 254
Proposed change
2
Table/
6.4.1 and
others
l.897
Comments
Project:
1.25.01.20.3 CS#:
56727
Observations of the
secretariat
(e.g. Table 1)
RelationInfo, “detail relation
information”
“detailed relation
information”
* Agreed
It is unclear who assigns and manages
the domain and the numbering? by
user or management company or
manufacturer?
Should be added as
“the assigning of
domain id,
numbering, and the
management should
be controlled by such
like an IANA for
internet resource
and/or some third
party organization in
the country, the
district or area.”
Supported with changing "should" to "shall"
Editorial comment: “Fehler!”
Should be deleted.
This is the indication of a mistake that has to be founded
solved.
* See JP14
* Agreed, error not found.
B.3.5
DE
01
DE
02
Type of
comment
Document: ISO/IEC 30100-3
5.1
Beginning position of lines should be
arranged.
Change informative paragraph
Editorial comment: “Fault diagnosis
result notify” should be changed to
“Notification of Fault diagnosis result”
Supported
ge
Approval with comments
Note
ge
“The home resource management
architecture consists of three parts as
described in ISO/IEC 30100-2:
E
E
* Agreed
Accommodated by changing to “Notification of result of fault
diagnosis”
Postpone ISO/IEC 301003 until ISO/IEC 30100-2
has been finalized.
This is correct since 3010C-2 is reference normatively
although missing in clause 2 , where it has to be added
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Clause/ Subclause
Paragraph/
(e.g. 3.1)
Figure/
Table/
Type of
comment
Comments
Document: ISO/IEC 30100-3
Proposed change
2
Project:
1.25.01.20.3 CS#:
56727
Observations of the
secretariat
(e.g. Table 1)
Resource information provider
Resource management process
* Agreed. Process ISO/IEC 30100-3 when ISO/OEC 30100-2
reached DIS stage.
Management application”
ISO/IEC 30100-2 is referenced but has not
been published yet.
1
2
MB = Member body / NC = National Committee (enter the ISO 3166 two-letter country code, e.g. CN for China; comments from the ISO/CS editing unit are identified by **)
Type of comment: ge = general
te = technical
ed = editorialI
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