AP® Language and Composition – The Language of Character Course Overview The mission of the English Department is to inspire students to embrace the power of language as the foundation for imaginative dialogue with one’s self and world. The course overview and objectives are taken from the AP® English Course Description (The College Board). Course Description Juniors in AP Language and Composition class are challenged to engage as readers and writers of their world. The course focuses on the overarching theme of human character, following such topics as character development, emerging dispositions, public v. private self, inner conflict, as well as the concept of human beauty. Throughout the course, students practice methods of analysis and interaction with texts from various time periods and genres, including both fiction and nonfiction. They discover the art of writing with purpose and for an intended audience, and they become critical of readings in this context as well. Students learn to recognize the stylistic elements that make language powerful, and they develop the argumentative skills to apply this authority as original authors themselves. Over the course of the year, students uncover and polish their own powers of communication through discussion and debate, building vocabulary, and engaging in an intensive writing and revision process. General Teaching Methods and Strategies Close Reading How to Read a Paragraph and Beyond: The Art of Close Reading by Dr. Richard Paul and Dr. Linda Elder At the start of the year, students are introduced to strategies of close reading and analysis as a “breaking down” of language. They learn the levels of reading to paraphrase, explicate, analyze, assess, and interact with an array of texts (Paul and Elder). They practice the process of studying language at its closest level through an examination of individual words, finding greater meaning and depth through their own interpretations. Students are encouraged to use this skill of close reading throughout the year as they seek to understand the true meanings and implications behind the readings they encounter. Style Analysis and SOAPSTone “SOAPSTone: A Strategy for Reading and Writing” by Ogden Morse (College Board AP® Central) In addition to strategies of close reading, students are taught to evaluate given texts specifically for elements of style that stand out as remarkable. In light of studying language, they learn to analyze an author’s use of diction, point of view, syntax, selection of detail, organization, and figurative language in a particular reading. In addition, students apply the “SOAPSTone” process of text analysis to readings as well as to their own compositions, in order to be more critical as learners. The following questions (Morse) are used to guide their study: Who is the Speaker? What is the Occasion? Who is the Audience? What is the Purpose? What is the Subject? What is the Tone? Throughout the year, students engage in this analysis method of stylistic elements in order to enhance their understanding of the writer’s work. Rhetorical Analysis “What are Essays?” by Joseph Kelly, ed. (The Seagull Reader) As critical readers, students are asked to examine the art of a given author’s argument, through strategies of rhetorical analysis. They are taught to uncover the crafty use of appeals to ethos, logos and pathos as well as inductive and deductive reasoning in an argument (Kelly). Their analysis of readings is guided by a study and appreciation of an author’s purpose, the intended audience of a piece, the examination of the validity of assertions and claims presented, the types of appeals used, as well as an understanding of possible rhetorical modes in use. Source Documentation Throughout the year, students practice parenthetical documentation in order to cite the sources of all of their work. In the spring term, they write a critical argumentative essay synthesizing sources that they have researched, in addition to a given reading packet on the topic of beauty. With this assignment in particular, students are taught various methods of MLA source documentation, including in-text citation as well as footnotes, endnotes, bibliography and works cited list format. Vocabulary The Least You Should Know about Vocabulary Building: Word Roots by Teresa Glazier Over the course of the year, students study vocabulary through root words in order to gradually build a broader word bank, as well as develop a better knowledge of word origins and methods of understanding words in context. Student Writing Throughout the course of the year, students write several major essays that are drafted through various stages of revision and both peer and teacher feedback. Lessons and corrections associated with these major essays focus on the organization of ideas, proper English grammar and sentence structure, and developing rhetorical skill and voice as a writer. Each essay assignment includes a rubric outline that is then returned with the corrected draft in order to better help students monitor their own development as writers. In addition to these larger essays, students regularly engage in less formal writing in class, such as journal responses, quote identifications of style, as well as close-reading explications and “annotations” of all readings, for the purpose of developing their broader skills as readers and writers. Student Evaluation Students are assessed each trimester based on a system of accumulated points. Graded projects, essays, quizzes and exams are assigned a particular point value based on their level of difficulty and relative importance to the course objectives. At the end of each trimester, student achievement grades are based on the calculated average of their points throughout the term. In addition, each student receives a separate grade for effort each trimester, which is based on their accumulated effort and attitude points earned in a similar fashion to the achievement points. At the year end, the final year grade reflects a cumulative average of both the achievement and effort grades for the year. Course Outline Fall Focus: Style Analysis Unit Theme: Individualism and Autonomy Comparative study essay Unit Theme: Character Development Style analysis essay Unit Theme: Emerging Dispositions Expository writing Winter Focus: Rhetorical Analysis Unit Theme: Public v. Private Self Speech analysis project Unit Theme: Inner Conflict Rhetorical analysis essay Spring Focus: The Art of Argument Unit Theme: Inherent Beauty Analysis presentation Synthesis essay Organization and Study Strategies AP practice work Portfolio project Unit Theme: Presenting Self Personal narrative essay Course Syllabus – Breakdown Fall Trimester Unit Theme: Individualism and Autonomy Timeframe: four weeks Resources “English is a Crazy Language” by Richard Lederer (The Norton Sampler) “Notes on Punctuation” by Lewis Thomas (The Norton Reader) “In Praise of the Humble Comma” by Pico Iyer (The Norton Sampler) “Self-Reliance” by Ralph Waldo Emerson (Self-Reliance and Other Essays) “Civil Disobedience” by Henry David Thoreau (The Arlington Reader) Into the Wild by Jon Krakauer Topics and Skills In the first trimester, students are introduced to the idea of studying language through various texts and time periods. Beginning with essays regarding language by Lederer, Thomas and Iyer, they look closely at different styles of addressing similar topics. They further practice close reading skills with Emerson’s “Self-Reliance” and an excerpt from Thoreau’s “Civil Disobedience.” They examine the process by which these authors express their individualism and the responsibility of self-reliant citizens. Major Projects and Writing Comparative study essay Following these readings, students are asked to make connections between the thoughts of these two transcendentalists and the actions of Christopher McCandless, as presented in Krakauer’s Into The Wild (required summer reading). This brief essay offers an early look at the student’s writing skills and ability to draw connections between independent works. Unit Theme: Character Development Timeframe: four weeks Resources “How it Feels to be Colored Me” by Zora Neale Hurston (The Norton Reader) “Girl” by Jamaica Kincaid (The Bedford Reader) “Only Daughter” by Sandra Cisneros (The Bedford Reader) “Indian Education” by Sherman Alexie (The Bedford Reader) “How Boys Become Men” by Jon Katz (The Norton Sampler) “Writing About Yourself: The Memoir” by William Zinsser (On Writing Well) Various works of art (The Art Book and The American Art Book) “The Death of a Moth” by Annie Dillard (The Norton Sampler) “The Death of the Moth” by Virginia Woolf (The Norton Sampler) Topics and Skills In this second unit of the fall, students are introduced to reading personal narratives and memoirs. Through several excerpts of both fiction and nonfiction narration, they address the topic of developing character through developing language. In this unit, students learn to closely examine rhetorical devices such as diction, syntax, tone, imagery and an author’s intentional use of inference. By studying these tools of language, students make connections between an author’s methods of writing and the persona they portray through their words. In addition, students are introduced during this unit to analyzing artwork and images as similar to studying language. After viewing several paintings, they learn to “break down” the various aspects of style in a painting, similar to the way they have learned to “break down” the language of a text for the purpose of analyzing style. Major Projects and Writing Style analysis essay In this essay, students are expected to take one of the studied narrations and write a formal style analysis of the piece. They apply the skills of close reading and “break down” of language in order to support their integrated thoughts about how that particular author has chosen to represent his developing character in the piece. Students are graded and given feedback at two points in the drafting process; first, with a complete rough draft that they submit for editing and revision suggestions, and second with a polished final draft ready for “publishing.” Unit Theme: Emerging Dispositions Timeframe: two weeks Resources “Design Flaws” by Bill Bryson (The Bedford Reader) “On Compassion” by Barbara Ascher (The Bedford Reader) “What is Happiness” by John Ciardi (The Sundance Reader) “Guys vs. Men” by Dave Barry (The Norton Sampler) “Indian Takeout” by Jhumpa Lahiri (The Bedford Reader) “Neat People vs. Sloppy People” by Suzanne Britt (The Bedford Reader) “Batting Clean-up and Striking Out” by Dave Barry (The Bedford Reader) “A Giant Step” by Henry Louis Gates, Jr. (The Norton Sampler) “The Wounds That Can’t Be Stitched Up” by Ruth Russell (The Norton Sampler) “How to Dump a Friend” by Lucinda Rosenfeld (The Bedford Reader) “A Small Place” by Jamaica Kincaid (The Arlington Reader) “The Ways We Lie” by Stephanie Ericsson (The Bedford Reader) “The Truth about Lying” by Judith Viorst (Subjects/Strategies) “Why We Travel” by Pico Iyer (The Arlington Reader) “Silent Dancing” by Judith Ortiz Cofer (The Bedford Reader) Topics and Skills In this third unit of the fall trimester, students are taught to recognize various rhetorical modes in non-fiction. The pieces they study are very different, although they all focus on diverse aspects of human emotion and disposition. Through the comparative study of given readings, students identify the primary modes of each piece, as well as the method of combining strategies within a single piece. With the focus on expository writing, students begin to address the purpose and intended audience of given readings through their guided analysis. Major Projects and Writing Expository writing For this assignment, students are asked to practice expository writing with the given topic of “human dispositions.” They choose the rhetorical mode they would like to focus on and a topic regarding character that interests them. Students write several drafts and engage in the peer editing process before submitting a final draft to be graded. AP Practice Work In the fall, AP practice work focuses on essay prompts that ask students to analyze the style of a given reading. In practicing several of these, students become more skilled at identifying various rhetorical devices and seeking the overall purpose of given pieces. The timed aspect of the AP work also helps them develop ways to clarify their writing in a structured setting without the benefit of a more comprehensive drafting process. Fall Exam The major topics covered on the fall exam are rhetorical devices and style analysis through study of a quote, a paragraph, and through comparing two different text excerpts. Winter Trimester Unit Theme: Public v. Private Self Timeframe: two weeks Resources “Drill, Grill and Chill” by Maureen Dowd (New York Times) “A Modest Proposal” by Jonathan Swift (Readings for Writers) “What are Essays?” by Joseph Kelly, ed. (The Seagull Reader) “Now Hear This: The Art of Speech” by Tod Olson (Literary Cavalcade) “I Have a Dream” Martin Luther King, Jr. (Readings for Writers) “Checkers Speech” by Richard Nixon (The History Place) “Inaugural Address” by John F. Kennedy (The History Place) “We Stand Passively Mute” by Robert S. Byrd (US Senate) Topics and Skills At the start of the winter term, students read and examine Jonathan Swift’s “Modest Proposal,” as an introduction to satire and persuasive writing. In this first unit of the winter trimester, students begin to study ethos, logos and pathos as a way to further enhance their understanding of appeals and rhetoric. Again, they practice drawing connections between the intended audience of a piece, the claims asserted, and the types of appeals presented in order to evaluate the rhetorical value of an argument. Through this unit, students are made aware of the difference between the public and the private self, through studying the impact of works intended for very public settings. Major Projects and Writing Speech analysis project To further this study, students read a variety of famous political speeches, exploring each one for its rhetoric and overall purpose. As a final project for the unit, students choose a political speech that interests them, and they demonstrate their understanding of rhetorical analysis by comprehensively annotating the speech and presenting their thoughts and findings to the class. Unit Theme: Inner Conflict Timeframe: eight weeks Resources “Will the Real Shakespeare Stand Up?” by Scott Smith (SKY) Othello by William Shakespeare Topics and Skills In this second unit, students continue to become proficient in rhetorical analysis as they study Shakespeare’s Othello. At the core of this play is an inner conflict that students study in light of the dramatic effect it can have on a person’s character. Although it is fiction, this particular Shakespeare work contains many forms of argument and rhetoric, providing the students many opportunities to see examples of appeals to ethos, logos and pathos, as well as various language techniques in the drama. As they read the text, class discussions focus on the many distinct methods that Iago uses to convince his audience, as well as the powerful arguments he holds with himself in his soliloquies. Major Projects and Writing Rhetorical analysis essay For this essay, students choose a passage from the Shakespeare text on which to perform an in-depth analysis of rhetoric. By examining the style of a particular character’s persuasive skills with another, they are able to examine the power of drama as written dialogue, as well as the effect of Shakespeare’s skilled and intentional use of language. In writing the rhetorical analysis essay, students practice in-text citation as a method of documenting their work. Students are graded and offered feedback at two points in the drafting process; first, with a complete rough draft that they submit for editing and revision suggestions, and second with a polished final draft ready for “publishing.” AP Practice Work Similar to the fall, in the winter, AP practice work focuses on essay prompts that ask students to analyze the style as well as the rhetoric of a given reading. In practicing several of these, students become more skilled at analyzing the use of various appeals, rhetorical devices, in addition to seeking the overall purpose of given pieces. At the end of the term, students devote several days to practicing multiple choice exam strategies. Winter Exam In addition to questions regarding Othello, the major topics covered on the winter exam are types of appeals, rhetorical devices, and general language analysis through the examination of various short writings. Spring Trimester Unit Theme: Inherent Beauty Timeframe: four weeks Resources “A Woman’s Beauty: Put-Down or Power Source?” by Susan Sontag (Fifty Great Essays) “Women and Beauty” by Sophia Loren (Women and Beauty) “Barbie Gets a Bum Rap: Barbie’s Place in the World of Dolls” by Sherrie Inness (The Barbie Chronicles) “Elegy for My Mother” by M. G. Lord (The Barbie Chronicles) “Thank Barbie for Britney: She’s Not That Innocent” by Kay Hymowitz (National Review Online) “A Grown-up Barbie” by Jane Hamill (NPR) “Here’s Looking at You, Kid!” by Martha Beck (O, The Oprah Magazine) “Drugs, Sports, Body Image and G.I. Joe” by Natalie Angier (New York Times) “Cure or Quest for Perfection?” by Ellen Goodman (The Arlington Reader) “Our Barbies, Ourselves” by Emily Prager (The Bedford Reader) “The Face of Beauty” by Diane Ackerman (Subjects/Strategies) Topics and Skills This major unit of the spring term asks students to apply their personal experience and beliefs to a redefining of the concept of beauty. They evaluate various essays, poems, images, and personal narratives presenting distinct views of beauty. In studying argument, they learn the classic formula, as well as other effective methods of organizing information. During this term in particular, students practice breaking down the content and context of various images, graphics and charts to discover important argumentative features. Students use the information given and their knowledge of rhetoric to clarify their own belief about beauty, using their own personal experiences and observations as support. Major Projects and Writing Analysis presentation At the start of this unit, students are asked to formally present their rhetorical analysis annotations of a given essay on beauty to the class. This assignment requires students to combine many aspects of analysis and breakdown that they have acquired over the course of the year in their study of language and rhetoric. Synthesis essay In this major “researched” paper of the term, students conduct research on the topic of beauty in order to find support for the definition of the concept that they will argue in their essay. They essay they produce demonstrates their understanding of methods of argumentation and the skillful use of rhetorical devices. Students are also taught to use research critically and to evaluate the source of their findings. During this unit, students learn various citation methods in order to properly document their sources. Again, students are graded and given feedback at two points in the drafting process; first, with a complete rough draft that they submit for editing and revision suggestions, and second, with a polished final draft ready for “publishing.” AP Practice Work: Portfolio Project Timeframe: two weeks Portfolio project In the weeks leading up the AP exam, students are asked to conclude their AP exam preparation with the portfolio project. Their portfolio must include all significant compiled notes from the year, wellorganized and presented. In addition, they must complete a given number of practice multiple choice tests and prompt responses. The portfolio grade is largely based on the student’s deliberate organization skills demonstrated. Final Exam The final exam for the course functions as a method of preparing for the AP exam, as well as a way to gage the student’s understanding of rhetoric and the study of language. The students are given a list of significant vocabulary pertaining to the course that they are asked to define as a demonstration of their knowledge of the topics. Unit Theme: Presenting Self Timeframe: two weeks Topics and Skills In this unit on narration, students focus on their own development of character. They learn various skills of writing personal narration and methods of presenting themselves effectively through the skilled use of language. Major Projects and Writing Personal narrative essay The personal narrative essay is an opportunity for students to work through many drafts in order to “show,” not “tell” some significant aspect of their character or some influential moment of their life. Students often submit over five drafts after much prewriting and revision before finishing the year with a “published” piece. Teacher Resources Course Texts Emerson, Ralph Waldo. Self-Reliance and Other Essays. New York: Dover, 1993. Krakauer, Jon. Into the Wild. New York: Anchor Books, 1996. Shakespeare, William. Othello. Ed. Norman Sanders. Updated ed. Cambridge: Cambridge UP, 2005. Supplements The American Art Book. New York: Phaidon, 1999. Angier, Natalie. “Drugs, Sports, Body Image and G.I. Joe.” NY Times on the Web 22 Dec. 1998. The New York Times Company. 2 Apr. 2006 <http://www.bebeyond.com/LearnEnglish/BeAD/Readings /SteroidsGIJoe.html> The Art Book. London: Phaidon, 1999. Beck, Martha. “Here’s Looking at You, Kid!” O, The Oprah Magazine. Apr. 2006: 266-8. Bloom, Lynn, and Louise Smith, eds. The Arlington Reader: Canons and Contexts. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2003. Byrd, Robert C. “Senate Remarks by Robert C. Byrd: We Stand Passively Mute.” US Senator Robert C. Byrd. 12 Feb. 2003. United States Senate. 15 Apr. 2007 <http://byrd.senate.gov/speeches/byrd_speeches_2003february/ byrd_speeches_2003march_list/byrd_speeches_2003march _list_1.html> Connelly, Mark, ed. The Sundance Reader. 3rd ed. Boston: Thomson Heinle, 2003. Cooley, Thomas, ed. The Norton Sampler: Short Essays for Composition. 6th ed. New York: W. W. Norton & Company, 2003. DiYanni, Robert, ed. Fifty Great Essays. Boston: Longman, 2002. Dowd, Maureen. “We Are America: Drill, Grill and Chill.” New York Times 20 May 2001, T:114. Eschholz, Paul and Alfred Rosa, eds. Subjects/Strategies: A Writer’s Reader. 9th ed. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2002. Glazier, Teresa. The Least You Should Know about Vocabulary Building: Word Roots. 4th ed. New York: Harcourt Brace Jovanovich College Publishers, 1993. Hamill, Jane. “A Grown-up Barbie.” NPR Morning Edition. 22 May 2006. National Public Radio. 26 May 2006 <http://www.npr.org/templates/story/ story.php?storyId=5419659> Hymowitz, Kay. “Thank Barbie for Britney: She’s not that innocent.” National Review Online 3 May 2002. 15 April 2005 <http://www.nationalreview.com/comment/commenthymowitz050302.asp> Kelly, Joseph, ed. The Seagull Reader: Essays. New York: W. W. Norton & Company, 2002. Kennedy, John F. “Inaugural Address.” The History Place: Great Speeches Collection. 15 Apr 2007 <http://www.historyplace.com/speeches/ jfk-inaug.htm> Kennedy, X., Dorothy Kennedy and Jane Aaron, eds. The Bedford Reader. 8th ed. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2003. Loren, Sophia. Women and Beauty. 1st ed. New York: William Morrow & Company, 1984. McCuen, Jo Ray and Anthony Winkler, eds. Readings for Writers. 10th ed. Boston: Thomson Heinle, 2001. McDonough, Yona. The Barbie Chronicles: A Living Doll Turns Forty. New York: Simon & Schuster, 1999. Olson, Tod. “Now Hear This: The Art of Speech.” Literary Cavalcade Sept. 2004:14-19. Peterson, Linda, John Brereton, and Joan Hartman, eds. The Norton Reader. 10th ed. New York: W. W. Norton & Company, 2000. “Richard M. Nixon: Checkers Speech.” The History Place: Great Speeches Collection. 15 Apr 2007 <http://www.historyplace.com/speeches/ nixon-checkers.htm> Smith, Scott S. “Will the Real Shakespeare Stand Up?” SKY Dec. 1992: 96-100. Zinsser, William. On Writing Well. New York: HarperPerennial, 1998. General References College Board. AP English Course Description. New York: The College Board, 2006. Hacker, Diana. A Pocket Style Manual. 3rd ed. Boston: Bedford/St.Martin’s, 2000. Morse, Ogden. “SOAPSTone: A Strategy for Reading and Writing.” College Board AP Central® 31 Aug. 2005 <http://apcentral.collegeboard.com/ members/article.1,3046,175-186-0-45200,00.html> Paul, Dr. Richard and Dr. Linda Elder. How to Read a Paragraph and beyond: The Art of Close Reading. Dillon Beach, CA: Foundation for Critical Thinking, 2003.