Rhetoric 105, or The Principles of Composition 148 Henry Administration Building Spring 2012, Section B1 MWF 9:00–9:50am Instructor: Elizabeth Tavares Office Location: 240 English Building Contact: tavares1@illinois.edu Office Hours: Thursdays 12:00–2:00pm ——————————————————————————————————————— “As imagination bodies forth The forms of things unknown, the poet’s pen Turns them to shapes, and gives to airy nothing A local habitation, and a name.” — from William Shakespeare’s A Midsummer Night’s Dream As this quote suggests, the work of poets is not dissimilar to the meaning-making purposes of any writer. Just as an astrophysicist explicates the behavior of the cosmos, so must any writer interpret and explain a given subject. The intent of this course is to provide you with just these fundamental rhetorical and compositional skills, which you will continue to hone according to your chosen field during your time here at the university. To achieve this, you will be asked to generate texts in a variety of environments, for sundry purposes, and using varied methods. Organization will be key to your success. To promote that success, our course is divided into four units, which are intended to elaborate upon one another. In the first unit, we will practice qualitative researching techniques, refresh your interrogative skills, and experiment with collaborative writing. In the second, we will establish methods for refining an argument and develop rich questions through primary source research. Integrating secondary sources, unit three introduces strategies for pre-writing, revision, and documentation. In the last unit, we will reflect on the writing and research process while workshopping and refining your arguments. As our professional and personal lives take place in an increasingly digital environment, so too does our written word become the primary way in which we represent ourselves. Thence, this course aims not only to acquaint you with the university’s resources and acclimate you to college-level writing, but it also hopes to engender criticalthinking and -writing skills applicable across the disciplines. Resources ——————————————————————————————————— All of the tools you will need for this course have some kind of electronic presence. This digital infrastructure, aside from constituting an eco-friendly classroom, provides opportunities to develop your technological literacy. This consists of the class texts—for which you can purchase access cards at the Illini Union Bookstore—and the course website: ➻ Writing @ the University of Illinois (W@UI): http://etext.illinois.edu ➻ Writer’s Help Handbook: http://writershelp.bedfordstmartins.com ➻ Illinois Compass: http://compass.illinois.edu There are several other services with which you should become immediately familiar. The Writer’s Workshop provides free scheduled or walk-in tutorials at any stage of the writing process, whether you are struggling to commit to a topic, need help with a pesky thesis statement, or have more technical issues. We also have one of the best library systems in the country with a specific library catering to undergraduates’ needs. Also, if you have any learning and/or accessibility needs, please come speak to 1 | © Elizabeth E. Tavares | RHET 105 me so we can get you acquainted with the opportunities offered by Disability Resources and Educational Services (DRES). ➻ The Writer’s Workshop: http://www.cws.illinois.edu/workshop ➻ Undergraduate Library: http://www.library.illinois.edu/ugl ➻ Disability Resources and Educational Services: http://www.disability.illinois.edu Policies ———————————————————————————————————— There are a few basic rules to play by this semester: namely, as in any course, you get out of it what you put in. Our classroom environment should be a space where everyone feels they can participate and succeed. We can fulfill this by respecting one another in what we do and say. While this includes smaller courtesies, like turning off or muting cell phones, it also includes the larger responsibility of refraining from using language or actions that show disrespect towards race, religion, ethnicity, sexuality, ability, beliefs, or ideas. While evaluation occurs in a number of ways, keep in mind that this is a writing-intensive course where participation and adherence to deadlines is crucial. If something presents a conflict for you, we can potentially negotiate alternatives, but this is ultimately the prerogative of the instructor. Every assignment is always due at the beginning of the class session. Except in the event of documented illness or emergency, papers submitted during and after class or to my mailbox during the hour are considered late and lose one full letter grade per day. ➻ Assignment Breakdown: 5% First Essay (Group Observation) 10% Second Essay (Statistical Rhetorics) 20% Primary Sources Essay 20% Secondary Source Essay 25% Synthesis Essay (20% essay, 5% presentation) 20% Participation (assignments, discussions, group work, etc.) Attendance is directly necessary to your success. Logistically, any student absent for two weeks (six meetings) will be unable to receive an A in the course, and three weeks (nine meetings) will result in failure of the course. Excused absences include religious holidays, letter-supported athletic events, or serious illness with documentation. Anyone more than five minutes late will be marked as absent from that day of class. If you are absent or tardy, you alone are responsible for catching up on the announcements and discussion you missed; quizzes and other in-class assessments cannot be made-up for unexcused absences. ➻ Grading Scale: B+ (89–87) C+ (79–77) D+ (69–67) F (59–0) A (100–93) B (86–83) C (76–73) D (66–63) A- (92–90) B- (82–80) C- (72–70) D- (62–60) Regarding plagiarism, the University of Illinois has high standards of academic integrity set out in Article 1, Part 4 of the University Student Code, which I uphold. All written coursework in this course is expected to be your own, with all words and/or ideas from other sources fairly attributed. To use phrases and/or ideas from any other source as if they were your own constitutes plagiarism. Submitting your own work for more than one course without permission of both instructors can also constitute plagiarism. The University Student Code sets out possible consequences of plagiarism in coursework, ranging from failure on the assignment to suspension or dismissal from the University. The Code specifies that ignorance of these standards is not an excuse. All students in this class should familiarize 2 | © Elizabeth E. Tavares | RHET 105 themselves with the Code at www.admin.uiuc.edu/policy/code, with our library’s guidelines at www.library.illinois.edu/learn/research/academicintegrity.html and with the chapter on plagiarism in the Writer’s Help Handbook. Documentation should follow current MLA, CMS or APA form; guides are available at the Undergrad Library reference desk or at http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/section/2/. If you have questions about fair use or documentation, please do not hesitate to consult me. Technology is a major component of our classroom—online and in the real world. However, the availability of netbooks, laptops, and tablets can be a blessing and a curse. You are welcome to use these in the classroom, but I reserve the right to see your screen at any time. Cell phones, on the other hand, are not allowed in the classroom; this will help keep both you and I focused. Similarly, the best way to get in touch with me is through email or to visit my office hours. I keep regular business hours (9am– 5pm), and you can expect to receive a response within twenty-four hours. If you own a laptop or netbook and feel comfortable, do bring them to class. Some Expectations ———————————————————————————————— The priority of this class is to set the groundwork for you to develop college-level writing strategies and critical-thinking habits of mind. Considering that writing is both a process and a skill, the grades in this class reflect your execution of assignment goals as well as your demonstrating development in your writing. ➻ “A” Paper (Superior): This paper is written above the minimum standards outlined for the assignment and displays originality, imagination, and vitality. The principal characteristics of the paper are its thoughtfully exigent questions, rich content, and thorough analysis. Specific points are logically ordered, well developed, and unified around a clear central claim, which is apparent early in the paper. It is, of course, free of mechanical errors: e.g., spelling, grammar, syntax, etc. The paper also has stylistic finesse: the title and the opening are relevant and engaging; the transitions seamlessly link one thought with another; the tone enhances the purpose of the paper. The quality, quantity, clarity, and density of the information delivered is such that the reader feels significantly enlightened, sentence after sentence, paragraph after paragraph. Overall, this paper, because of its careful organization and development, imparts coherence and clarity. ➻ “B” Paper (Satisfactory): This paper is significantly more than competent and demonstrates work well done. It has positive value that goes beyond the avoidance of error, but one or more qualities are insufficiently addressed or executed. Besides being almost free of mechanical errors, it delivers substantial information—that is, substantial in both quantity and in relevance. It may develop an idea fully and accurately but lack elements of originality. It may have all the qualities of an “A” paper but suffer in terms of consistent organization, depth of critical analysis, richness of detail, quantity of information, topical unity, or occasional obscurity. Stylistically, the opening paragraph draws in the reader; the closing paragraph is both conclusive and thematically related to the opening. The transitions between paragraphs are, for the most part, smooth, the syntax varied. In general, this paper offers substantial information with few distractions. ➻ “C” Paper (Adequate): This paper is generally competent but lacks intellectual rigor. It meets the assignment’s expectations, has some mechanical errors, and is somewhat organized and developed. However, the central claims of the paper display a lack of originality. Central research questions may lack exigency, or supporting arguments may be fundamentally based on unsubstantial generalities or simply not fully developed. Other impediments may include a weak opening paragraph, a perfunctory conclusion, strained transitions, redundancy, or imprecision. ➻ “D” Paper (Unsatisfactory): This paper does not address the assignment, though not to such a degree that it exhibits complete disregard. It may contain little or no original content, it may simply restate arbitrarily selected material from the sources, or it may lack coherent organization. 3 | © Elizabeth E. Tavares | RHET 105 It does, however, have some saving graces: a spark of innovation, some mastery of technical skills. Such a paper may receive this grade if the ideas are strong, but the degree of mechanical error renders it nearly unreadable. ➻ “F” Paper (Unacceptable): This paper does not fulfill the assignment whatsoever, or treats the subject at such a superficial level to render the argument without merit. Its theme may lack discernible organization, and the prose lacks clarity. Mechanical errors are frequent. In short, the ideas, organization, and level of critical thinking fall far short of acceptable college writing. Formatting does matter. While you may choose to prepare your papers using any of the major citation styles available in the Writer’s Help online handbook, all college-level written documents follow general guidelines across the disciplines: ➻ Type you paper on a computer and print it out on standard, white, 8.5 x 11-inch paper. Set the margins of your document to 1 inch on all sides. (Note: the default margins in Microsoft Word are 1.5 inches, so make sure to change this.) ➻ Using the Times New Roman font at 12 points, double-space the text of your paper. Indent the first line of paragraphs ½ inch from the left margin; use the Tab key rather than pushing the Space Bar five times. Keep in mind that all paragraphs should comprise at least 6–10 sentences. ➻ Create a header that numbers all pages consecutively in the upper right-hand corner, one half inch from the top and flush with the right margin. You may omit the number on your first page of a document. ➻ Use italics throughout your essay for the titles of longer works and, only when absolutely necessary (which should be sparingly), providing emphasis. When using acronyms, spell out the first iteration and then abbreviate thereafter. For example, the first time write out University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign but afterwards simply use UIUC. Most assignments for this course will be short enough to not require a separate title page. If you do need to include a title page, it will be indicated on the assignment sheet. Here are some tips for formatting the first page of your paper when you are not using a title page: ➻ In the upper left-hand corner of the first page, list your name, your instructor’s name, the course, and the date. Again, be sure to use double-spaced text. ➻ Double-space again and center the title. Do not underline, italicize, or place your title in quotation marks; write the title in Title Case (standard capitalization), not in all capitals. ➻ Use quotation marks and/or italics when referring to other works in your title, just as you would in your text: e.g., The Harry Potter Stories and French Arthurian Romance. Double-space between the title and the first line of text. ➻ Create a header in the upper right-hand corner that includes your last name, followed by a space with a page number; number all pages consecutively with Arabic numerals (1, 2, 3, 4, etc.) ½ inch from the top and flush with the right margin. For example: Harry J. Potter Ms. Tavares Charms 105 31 July 1980 The Hermeneutics of Spell Writing 4 | © Elizabeth E. Tavares | RHET 105 Schedule Think of this schedule as a road map to the course. It has two important features you should keep in mind. Firstly, all readings and assignments should be completed by the date to which they are attached (that is, the day listed immediately to the left). This means you need to be looking ahead to make sure you do not lose any points simply for lateness. Note that most dorms have printers, there is a computer lab in the basement of the English building, and another in Illini Union, so all you need do is plan ahead. Secondly, when an assignment is due, you must always submit the finished documents both online to our class Compass website as well as a hard copy to me at the start of class—always. I do this to generate a digital timestamp so you don’t lose credit for an assignment in case Murphy’s Law comes knocking. However, you cannot get those participation points (or learning for that matter) back if you miss class, so as Shakespeare implores us, “make use of time, let not advantage slip.” Introductory —————————————————————————————————— 18 January | Wednesday Introductions to the course, class texts, class website, resources, and one another. 20 January | Friday Read “Chapter 1: Introduction” in W@UI. Write a 2–3 page essay responding to the Diagnostic Prompt in chapter one of W@UI. Submit to the corresponding assignment on the course Compass website, and also bring a paper copy to class. Unit 1: Writing from Observations —————————————————————————— 23 January | Monday Read “Chapter 2: Noticing and Observation” in W@UI. Compose a 1–2 page reflection answering the questions in the W@UI exercise. Submit this Observation Prompt to the Compass and bring a hard copy with you to class. 25 January | Wednesday Read “Chapter 3: Coming to Questions” in W@UI. 27 January | Friday Class cancelled—instructor attending an academic conference. Post to Compass a copy of your observation field notes for your peers to comment upon. 30 January | Monday DUE draft version of the First Essay (Group Observation) due today. Remember that each group member needs to submit this to Compass as well as bring a paper copy to class. 1 February | Wednesday Read “Chapter 5: Collaboration and Peer Review” in W@UI. 3 February | Friday Read the “Introduction” and “Composing and Writing” sections in the Writer’s Help Handbook. 5 | © Elizabeth E. Tavares | RHET 105 6 February | Monday DUE First Essay (Group Observation)—final version submitted to Compass and in-class. Unit 2: Writing from Primary Sources ————————————————————————— 8 February | Wednesday Read “Chapter 6: Primary Sources” in W@UI. 10 February | Friday Read “Chapter 7: Reading and Meaning Making” in W@UI. While reading, practice your annotation skills in one of two ways: copy, paste, and print the chapter out and mark this sheet, or use the eText note-taking interface. 13 February | Monday Read “Chapter 10: Multimodal Composing” in W@UI. 15 February | Wednesday Read “Chapter 8: Summary and Abstracts” in W@UI. In preparation for the Second (Time Capsule) Essay, summarize your object in a short paragraph that focuses on sensory details, not its uses— make the familiar strange. 17 February | Friday DUE Second Essay (Statistical Rhetorics)—draft version submitted to Compass and in class. 20 February | Monday Find a primary source related to your emerging research questions and compose a précis of this source to bring to class. 22 February | Wednesday DUE Second Essay (Statistical Rhetorics)—final version submitted to Compass and in class. 24 February | Friday Locate a second primary source relevant to your research question and compose a summary of the source, to be submitted along with a digital copy of the source if possible. 27 February | Monday Read “Chapter 9: Rhetorical Principles and Argument Structure” in W@UI. 29 February | Wednesday Continue gathering primary sources and begin drafting the Primary Sources Essay. 2 March | Friday DUE Primary Sources Essay—draft version submitted to Compass and in class. Unit 3: Writing from Secondary Sources ————————————————————————— 5 March | Monday Read “Chapter 11: Secondary Source Integration” and “Chapter 12: Citation and Documentation” in W@UI. 7 March | Wednesday Student conferences—no class meeting will be held. 6 | © Elizabeth E. Tavares | RHET 105 9 March | Friday Student conferences—no class meeting will be held. 12 March | Monday Meet in the Undergraduate Library room 291 for class today. DUE Primary Sources Essay—final version submitted to Compass and in class. 14 March | Wednesday Submit the Wikipedia Research Path Assignment, which you will also present in class today. 16 March | Friday Read “Chapter 13: Writing Across Campus” in W@UI. 19–23 March Spring Break—a university holiday, classes are not in session. 26 March | Monday Read “Chapter 4: Revision and the Writing Process” in W@UI. 28 March | Wednesday DUE Secondary Sources Essay—first draft version submitted to Compass and in class. 30 March | Friday Complete all three exercises in Chapter 11 under the heading “Research and Writing Exercises.” Create a reverse outline of the current version of your Secondary Sources Essay and bring it to discuss. 2 April | Monday Review the “Basic Grammar” section in Writer’s Help and play with some of the mini-quizzes. Bring to class three to five grammar, mechanics, or punctuation questions or problems. 4 April | Wednesday DUE Secondary Sources Essay—second draft version submitted to Compass and in class. Unit 4: Synthesis and Reflection ——————————————————————————— 6 April | Friday Class cancelled—instructor attending an academic conference. Read “Chapter 13: Reflection and Impact” in W@UI. 9 April | Monday DUE Secondary Sources Essay—final version submitted to Compass and in class. 11 April | Wednesday Submit the 1–2 page proposal for your Synthesis Essay. 13 April | Friday Create an Annotated Bibliography for your Synthesis Essay, submitted to Compass and in class. 16 April | Monday DUE Synthesis Essay—partial draft version submitted to Compass and in class. 7 | © Elizabeth E. Tavares | RHET 105 18 April | Wednesday Complete the online peer-review activities and responses, prepare for your presentation next week, and continue revising the final Synthesis paper. 20 April | Friday DUE Synthesis Essay—full draft version submitted to Compass and in class. If you are having trouble, want to brainstorm, or even just have a brief question, make sure to stop by my office hours. 23 April | Monday Prepare for your presentation, and continue revising the final Synthesis paper. 25 April | Wednesday Synthesis Project Presentations. 27 April | Friday Synthesis Project Presentations. 30 April | Monday Synthesis Project Presentations. 2 May | Wednesday DUE Synthesis Essay—final version submitted to Compass and in class. If you have any outstanding work, note that everything for the course needs to be submitted by today’s class meeting. DISCLAIMER ➻ As the instructor, I reserve the right to modify the policies, assignments, and any other contents of this syllabus at any point in the semester. I will communicate all changes in writing and in class with sufficient notice. 8 | © Elizabeth E. Tavares | RHET 105