Chapter 9: Writing Proposal and Progress reports Proposals are informative and persuasive writing because they attempt to educate the reader and to convince that reader to do something. The goal of the writer is not only to persuade the reader to do what is being requested, but also to make the reader believe that the solution is practical and appropriate. In persuasive proposal writing, the case is built by the demonstration of logic in the approach taken in the solution. Structure of Proposals Introduction Body Project Proposal: (Includes Statement of the Problem, Proposed Solution(s), Program of Implementation, Conclusions/Recommendations) Conclusion/Recommendations Back Matter Bibliography and/or Works Cited Qualifications (of writer(s) and/or project implementers) Budget (Itemization of expenses in the implementation and operation of the proposed plan, and detail of materials, facilities, equipment and personnel) Appendices PLANNING SHEET FOR A PROPOSAL Analysis of the Situation Requiring a Proposal: What is the subject of the proposal? (This should be based on the thesis of your research.) For whom is this proposal intended? How do you intend the proposal to be used? What is the deadline date for the proposal and for tentative implementation of the proposed solution? Purpose of the Proposal: Statement of the Problem: Proposed Solution(s) or Plan(s), Including the Methods or Procedures: Conclusion/Recommendations: Additional Information to be used in Explication of the Proposed Solutions: (This includes: Costs, Personnel and their qualifications, Training, etc.) Types and Subject Matter of Appendices to be Included in the Proposal: Works Cited/References used in the Text of the Proposal: Bibliography of Related Source Information: 1. Introductory paragraph 2. Problem 3. Feasibility 6. Methods and procedures 5. Topics to investigate 4. Audience 7. Qualifications facilities and resources available 8. Work schedule 9. Call to action Progress Report - Reassures funding agency or employer that you’re making progress Allows you and the agency or employer to resolve problems as they arise Use positive emphasis and you-attitude Don’t present every detail as equal Try to exceed audience’s expectations in at least some small ways 3 types of Report Chronological Progress Report Summarize in terms of goals and original schedule Under “Work Completed” heading, describe what you have done Under “Work to Be Completed” heading, describe work that remains Express confidence in having report ready by due date Task Report Use headings that describe major tasks your project entails Under each heading, discuss work completed what remains to be done Recommendation Progress Report When easy for audience to accept, use direct pattern When likely to meet strong resistance, use problem-solving pattern Progress @ @ @ @ @ Reassures funding agency or employer that you’re making progress Allows you and the agency or employer to resolve problems as they arise Use positive emphasis and you-attitude Don’t present every detail as equal Try to exceed audience’s expectations in at least some small ways Chapter 10: Delivering Negative Messages 1. Negative Messages are: Information conveyed is negative Audience’s reaction is negative Message does not benefit them Usually they experience disappointment or anger 2. Purposes of Negative Messages Primary Purposes To give audience bad news To have audience read, understand, and accept message To maintain as much goodwill as possible Secondary Purposes To build good image of communicator To build good image of communicator’s organization To avoid future messages on same subject Want audience to feel They have been taken seriously The decision is fair and reasonable If they were in your situation, they would make the same decision 3. Parts of Negative Messages Subject lines Buffers Reasons Refusals Alternatives Endings 5. Tone in Negative Messages Tone—implied attitude of the author toward the audience and subject Show you took request seriously Use positive emphasis and you-attitude Think about visual appearance Consider timing of message 6. Varieties Claims and Complaints Needed when something has gone wrong Use direct organization pattern Give supporting facts and identifiers Avoid anger and sarcasm or threats that you will never use company again Disciplinary Notices and Performance Appraisals Present directly—no buffer Cite specific observations of behavior o Not inferences o Include dates, quantities State when employee may return to work, if disciplinary action is taken Rejections and Refusals Requests from external audience o Try to use a buffer o Give specific reasons o Give alternative, if any Requests from internal audience o Use knowledge of culture, individual to craft reply Layoffs and Firings If company likely to fold, tell early Give honest reasons for firing o Unrelated face-saving reason may create legal liability o Avoid broadcasting reasons to avoid defamation lawsuit Deliver orally; backup in writing 7. Organizing Negative Messages: Clients & Customers When you have a reason that the audience will understand and accept, give the reason before the refusal Give the negative information, just once Present an alternative or compromise End with positive forward-looking statement 8. Organizing Negative Messages: Superiors Describe problem clearly Tell how it happened Describe the options for fixing it Recommend a solution and ask for action 9. Organizing Negative Messages: Peers & Subordinates Describe problem objectively, clearly Present an alternative or compromise, if available Ask for input or action, if possible May suggest helpful solutions Audience may accept outcomes better 10. Checklist Originality in a negative message may come from; An effective buffer, if one is appropriate A clear, complete statement of reason for refusal A good alternative, clearly presented Details that show writer thought about specific organization and specific people in it Chapter 11: Sharing Informative and Positive Messages **Difference between informative and positive message Informative: Basic reaction is neutral Positive: Basic reaction is positive 1. Purpose of Positive Messages Primary To give information or good news to audience To have receiver view information positively Secondary To build good image of sender To build good image of sender’s organization To build good relationship between sender and receiver To deemphasize any negative elements To eliminate future messages on same subject 2. Communication Hardware Smartphones Portable media players Videoconferencing 3. Common Media Face-to-face contact Phone calls Wikis Letters and memos Social Media E-mail **Tips for designing effective email Put important information in the first sentence Long email, use an overview, headings, and enumeration Contain only one topic 4. Organizing Informative and Positive Messages 1) Start with good news or the most important information summarize the main points respond clearly to the issue raised 2) Give details, clarification, background Answer all questions your audience is likely to have provide necessary information Present details in order of importance 3) Present any negative elements—as positively as possible Make the negatives clear, but present them positively 4) Explain any benefits Show that it helps your audience Make the benefit clear and convincing 5) Use a goodwill ending: positive, personal, and forward-looking Emphasize the serving audience is the real concern 5. Effective Subject Line 1) Specific Differentiate message from others on same topic Broad enough to cover content 2) Concise Usually less than 35 characters 3) Appropriate for the pattern of message Must meet situation and purpose (positive, negative, persuasive) Good news: build goodwill by focusing it in subject line Neutral information: summarize subject line concisely 6. Managing Information in Messages Give audience information they need Consider your purpose Develop a system that lets people know what is new if you send out regular messages Use headings and bullets in long e-mails Put the most vital information in e-mails, even if you send an attachment Check message for accuracy and completeness Remember e-mails are public documents 7. Audience Benefits Use audience benefits when: Presenting policies Shaping audience’s attitudes Stressing benefits presents the audience’s motives positively Introducing benefits that may not be obvious Omit benefits when: Presenting factual information ONLY Considering audience’s attitude toward information does not matter Stressing benefits makes audience seem selfish Restating them may insult audience’s intelligence 8. Goodwill Ending Treats reader as individual Contains you-attitude, positive emphasis Omits standard invitation Chapter 13: Crafting Persuasive Messages In the workplace, a persuasive message occurs when a person attempts to convince an individual or group to take certain specific actions. The two types of persuasive messages in the workplace are sales and marketing, which are utilized to achieve organizational objectives. Gigantic Homes is the seller of luxurious homes in the local area. They depend on persuasive messages to convince customers to purchase their beautiful homes. Request for Action Sales and marketing messages are used for action, goodwill and information. These types of messages are arequest for action in order to get the consumer to purchase a product. The sales message is all about closing the deal, while the marketing message is concerned with making the consumer aware of the deal. At Gigantic Homes, the sales team is responsible for closing the deal, while their vivid television ads showcase their beautiful homes. AIDA Model One way to utilize persuasion for a marketing or sales objective is through the use of the AIDA model. This marketing model is used to describe the steps that are needed to persuade a consumer to take action. The model stands for Awareness, Interest, Desire and Action. Awareness is the first step of the AIDA process. Awareness is product knowledge gained through free product samples or emails. Gigantic sends monthly emails with video tours of their sample homes and the latest pricing information. The second step is interest, or wanting to know more, and can be achieved by highlighting the benefits or the product or service. In this stage the message should keep the attention of the consumer. Gigantic homes was smart enough to hire a local sports celebrity, who also purchased their home as their spokesperson. The third step is desire, or a strong want, and focuses on the audience and adds supports for the product's claims. Gigantic Homes communicates to the consumer how reasonable it will cost to buy their homes. The last, and final step, is action, and the marketing message should create a sense of urgency to buy. If a consumer is not ready to buy immediately, Gigantic Homes always adds a deadline date as to when prices will be going up. Function Television and online advertising may represent a company’s most public expression of persuasive messages, but a complex marketing campaign must include much more interaction with audiences to achieve real effectiveness. Considerations According to Kaul, many business communication tools have become so focused on broadcasting a consistent message that managers lose sight of their real objective: to persuade audiences into taking a specific action. Features For messages to truly become persuasive, professionals must learn to listen to their audiences, confirm that they heard feedback accurately and reflect that feedback in the next wave of communication. Misconceptions When professionals fail to listen to customer feedback, “groupthink” can seize a team’s momentum. Interrupting the feedback cycle or neglecting to give customer reactions a sounding board can create a culture where teams no longer innovate their messages or their offerings based on customer needs. Effects Thanks to online media and database technology, professional marketers can more closely monitor the effects of the feedback cycle on their campaigns. Politicians and direct marketers often take the fullest advantage of consumer polls and online indexes to determine whether adjustments to their messages have taken hold among target audiences. Purposes @ Primary To have audience act or change beliefs @ Secondary To build good image of the communicator To build good image of communicator’s organization To cement a good relationship To overcome any objections To reduce or eliminate future messages on subject Persuasive Strategy 1. What do you want people to do? 2. What objections will audience have? 3. How strong a case can you make? 4. What kind of persuasion is best for organization and culture? Approach 1. Requesting a job interview 2. Requesting a free trial of service 3. Inviting customers to a store opening 4. Reporting a co-worker’s poor work performance 5. Requesting a new office computer 6. Asking co-workers to participate in a charity event Dealing with Objections 1. Specify how much time and/or money is required--it may not be as much as the reader fears. 2. Put the time and/or money in the context of the benefits they bring. 3. Show that money spent now will save money in the long run. 4. Show that doing as you ask will benefit some group or cause the reader supports, even though the action may not help the reader directly. 5. Show the reader that the sacrifice is necessary to achieve a larger, more important goal to which he or she is committed. 6. Show that the advantages as a group outnumber or outweigh the disadvantages as a group. 7. Turn a disadvantage into an opportunity. Chapter 14: CONFLICTMANAGEMENT CONFLICTS Has a negative connotation But it is a positive occurrence if managed properly Benefits of Conflict • • • • • • • Requires goal analysis Creates dialogue among employees Prevents stagnation Learning from generational differences • Older workers view “work” as a place – a location you go to at a specified time • Younger workers view “work” as something you do – anywhere, anytime. Fosters creative thinking Offsets personal biases Result in high-quality decisions Communication & Conflict @ Conflict implies communication/interaction @ Goal are incompatible @ Struggle over values, resources, power, status 4 Axioms of Communication & Conflict 1. Conflict involves at least two parties Conflicts can be generated or resolved only through communication 2. Conflict develops from perceived mutually exclusive goals 3. Conflict involves parties with different values or perceptions Share value and more friendly Accurate communication helps reducing conflicts 4. Conflict ends when each side feels it has won or lost Sources of Conflict @ Lines of authority Work for who? @ Distribution of limited resources Obvious conflict: Annual budget review Budget allocation @ Diverse Goals QA manager VS production manager @ Inaccurate perceptions (omit “Conflict and Perception” p.227 – 229) Conflict Resolution Strategies @ @ @ @ @ Avoiding Accommodating Forcing Compromising Problem-solving Model of Conflict Behavior Compromising • • • • Accommodating Problem Solving Avoiding Forcing Avoiding (Lose – Lose) • • • • • • • • Avoidance/Withdrawal = low concern for production with a low concern for people See conflict as hopeless, useless experience May be psychical or psychological Simply remove themselves from conflict situations Avoid disagreement and tension, not take side Use in large bureaucracies By ignoring a comment, quickly changing topic, responding “I’m looking into the matter”, blaming on policies, etc. Not paying attention to conflict and not taking any action to resolve it. Accommodating (Win – Lose) • • • • • • • Try to deal with conflicts by making everyone happy Mutually acceptable solution which partially satisfies both parties. Focus on maintaining relationships, not focus on achieving productive goals Want to be accepted and liked by others Believe confrontation is destructive Include calling for a coffee break at a tense moment, using humor, changing the topic, promoting togetherness A camouflage approach that can break down at any time and create barriers to progress Forcing (Win – Lose) @ @ @ @ @ @ @ @ Try to meet production goals (winning) at all cost Losing is destructive Goals are more important than relationship Number 1 Conflict resolution Forcing others to accept your solutions. Describe conflicts as opposition, battle, fight, conquest, head-to-head, coercion, smash Can resolve immediate conflicts But has long-term effects such as a loss of productivity Compromising • • • Half a loaf is better than nothing No one wins, no one loses Fall between forcing and accommodating. Use under two conditions: • • • Neither party involved believes he or she has the power to “force” the issue on the other party. • One or both of parties believes winning may not be worth the cost in money, time, or energy. Highly related to negotiating May result in perceiving themselves as winners and losers. Problem-Solving Strategy (Win - Win) @ Win-win strategy for conflict @ Skillful strategic managerial communication @ Highly-quality mutually acceptable solution Problem-Solving Strategy (Win – Win) Beliefs necessary to implement the strategy 1. Cooperation is better than competition Different opinions lead to new insights and creativity Must believe others’ opinions are beneficial 1. Parties can be trusted Create trusting climate & lead to better communication 2. Status differences can be minimized (Equal status) Not separate into we – they orientation Develop listening climate 3. Mutually acceptable solutions can be found Reach their different goals in an acceptable manner Strategy Concept Task Avoiding Neutrality is maintained at all costs Withdraw from conflict Low Accommodating Disagreement is smoothed Peaceful coexistence Low Forcing Conflict is suppressed through authority Authority-obedience approach High Compromising Problem-solving No one wins and no one loses Varying points of view Objectively evaluated Medium High Prerequisites for Problem-solving @ Absence of time constraints @ Understanding of the process @ Agreement on communication principles Communication Principles @ @ @ @ @ @ @ @ @ Do not interrupt Effective listening skill (paraphrase) Avoid furniture barriers (importance of physical arrangements) Use mutually understood terms Use neutral terms rather than emotional terms Avoid absolutes statements Ask open-ended questions Avoid leading questions Repeat key phrases The Problem-Solving Process Dewey’s Problem Solving Strategy 1. Define the problem 2. Analyze the problem Look at its history, causes, effects, and extent 3. Brainstorm alternatives All parties offer solutions 4. Develop criteria for a good solution Ex. Must be cost effective, easy to implement, use available resources, legal, consistent with organization’s mission 5. Find the best match (identify the best alternative) Chapter 16: Building Resume Job Hunting 1. Building resume 2. Writing Application Letter 3. Preparing for job Interview Building resume @ Definition @ How Employers Use Resume @ Guidelines @ Types of Resume @ Electronic Resume @ Honesty @ Persuasive summary of qualifications for employment Makes you look well organized, prepared Highlights your unique qualifications Helps you try for an even better job Shows you how to prepare for job market Job hunting @ Check services of career placement office @ Join extracurricular organizations @ Find jobs/internships that give you experience @ Note which courses you like @ Conduct a self-assessment @ Take personality and aptitude tests @ Ask yourself some questions: @ What skills and strengths do I have? @ What achievements have given satisfaction? @ What work conditions do I like? @ Do I prefer firm deadlines or flexibility? @ What kind of work/life balance do I want? @ Where do I want to live? @ Use the Internet to research jobs Cautions about Social Networking @ Remove any unprofessional material @ Remove negative comments about current or past employers and teachers @ Remove political or social rants @ Remove any personal information that might embarrass you @ Remove inappropriate material posted by friends, family, relatives @ Check blog for writing aptitude How Employers Use Résumés @ To decide whom to interview @ To screen applicants by scanning or skimming @ To assess what they assume is your best work @ To prepare for job interviews @ To get final approval for selected applicants Guidelines: Length @ Fill at least one page @ Average résumé these days: 2 pages Put most important information on page 1 Put at least 10 lines on page 2 Include Name and Page 2 Guidelines: Emphasis @ Emphasize your achievements That are most relevant to position applied for That show superiority to other applicants That are recent @ To emphasize information: Put it at top or bottom of page Set it off with white space Give it in a vertical and/or bulleted list Guidelines: Details @ Give evidence to support your claims @ Convince reader @ Separate you from other applicants @ Use numbers and descriptions @ Omit details that add no value Guidelines: Writing Style @ Be concise (brief, but complete) @ Use phrases and sentence fragments @ Never use I; use me or my if you must @ Use more action verbs than nouns @ List items in parallel form Guidelines: Key Words @ Use words or phrases that employers will have the computer seek @ May include: Software programs Job titles Types of degrees Job-specific skills, buzzwords, jargon Professional organizations Personality traits (creativity, dependability, team player) Guidelines: Layout and Design @ Experiment with layout, fonts, and spacing Use no more than three fonts Use color sparingly(carefully) Use at least 10-pt type Use white space to group items @ Consider creating letterhead to use for your résumé and application letter @ Use headings for reading ease @ Avoid templates Resume 1. Chronological Resume • Emphasizes what you did in time line • Start with most recent events: reverse chronology • Include degrees, job titles, dates When to use— • Your education, experience closely related to job applying for • You have impressive job titles, offices, or honors 2. Skill Resume • Emphasizes skills you used • De-emphasizes job titles, employment history, dates • a.k.a. functional résumé When to use— • Your education and experience not usual route to job applied for • You’re changing fields • You want to show broad experience • From paid jobs • From volunteer work • From extracurricular activities • From college courses What to include in the resume? @ Full Name and Contact Information @ Career Objective @ Summary of Qualification (keywords) @ Education (most recent first) @ Honors and Awards @ Experience ( job titles, organization, City, date of employment etc.) @ Other skills @ Activities @ Portfolio Résumé Information @ Required Name, address, and telephone number Education Experience @ Omit unfavorable information Résumé Information: Contact Info @ Use full name, even if you have a nickname @ Center one address; type two side by side @ Provide professional e-mail address @ Provide phone (cell or land) where you can be reached during the day @ Omit age, marital status, race, sex, and health Résumé Information: Education @ First main category in these cases— Earn new degree Need degree for job you’re seeking Can present the information briefly @ Put it later in these cases— Need page 1 for another category Lack degree that other applicants may have @ Cover 4-year and graduate degrees Include junior college if it gave you other expertise Include study abroad, even non-credit courses Give degrees, dates, schools, and cities @ May list short, descriptive course titles @ Include GPA—if it’s good—and what it’s based on: 3.4/4.0 Résumé Information: Experience @ Use heading that works best for you @ Include this information for each job held— Position or job title Organization City and state Dates of employment Job duties; other details Résumé Information: Activities @ Critical for new college graduates @ Include this kind of information— Volunteer work and student organizations Professional associations Activities involving talent or responsibility Varsity or intramural athletics Leadership roles Electronic Résumés Basic guidelines of email job hunting etiquette: @ Don’t use your current employer’s email @ Set up a free, Internet-based email account @ Avoid using silly or cryptic email addresses cutiepi@yahoo.com @ Write a simple subject line @ Test how résumé looks before sending @ Send only one résumé Chapter 17: Writing Job Application Letter Letters vs. Résumés Employer and Job Research Solicited Letters Prospecting Letters E-mail Application Letters Professional Image Application Essays Résumés vs. Job Letters Resume Job application letter Summarizes all your qualifications Shows you know organization, your qualifications can help it, and you differ from other applicants Resume avoids controversial material. Explain controversial material (The job letter can explain situations, such as career changes, gaps in employment history, in a positive way) Uses short, parallel phrases and fragments Uses complete sentences in well-written paragraphs Hidden Job Market @ Meaning? @ Example? @ How can you put yourself into that market? Networking (Information & Referral Interview) Prospecting Letter Walk In Networking Let you know whether you like the job or not? Purpose? • Information Interview • Referral Interview • Not ask for job! Ask for information about the field or general job opportunities Job Application Letters: 2 Kinds • • Solicited letter • To apply for job the organization announced • Like persuasive direct request Prospecting letter (Unsolicited) • To sell one’s qualifications though no job is announced • Like problem-solving persuasive message Do these things in both kinds: Address letter to a specific person Name specific position you’re applying for Be specific about your qualifications Show how you differ from other applicants Show knowledge of the organization and position Refer to your résumé (enclose it) Ask for an interview Organize Solicited Letters 1. State that you’re applying; name the job Tell how you know about job Show that you have main qualifications job requires Summarize other qualifications 2. Cite your main qualifications in detail Be specific about what you’ve done Relate achievements to work you’d do in new job 3. Discuss other qualifications, even if not required Show what separates you from other applicants Show knowledge of the organization 4. Ask for an interview Tell when available to interview and to begin work End on a positive, forward-looking note Example: March 14, 2000 Ms. Dianne C. Strand Manager of Human Resources Atlantic Coast Industries, Inc. Virginia Beach, VA 23464 Dear Ms. Strand: I am applying for the position of systems analyst which was advertised March 11 with the placement service at Old Dominion University. The position seems to fit very well with my education, experience, and career interests. Your position requires experience in computer systems, financial applications software, and enduser consulting. With a major in management information systems, I have training on mainframes, minicomputers, and microcomputers as well as with a variety of software programs and applications. My practical experience in my university's computer center as a programmer and as a student consultant for system users gave me valuable exposure to complex computer operations. My background and career goals seem to match your job requirements well. I am confident that I can perform the job effectively. Furthermore, I am genuinely interested in the position and in working for Atlantic Coast Industries. Would you please consider my request for a personal interview to discuss further my qualifications and to allow me to learn more about this opportunity? Please give me a call at 5556433. The best times to reach me are before 10 a.m. or after 4 p.m. Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to talking with you. Sincerely, Natasha Redd Organize Prospecting Letters 1. Catch the reader’s interest 2. Create bridge between attention-getter and your qualifications 3. Explain your strong points in detail Relate what you’ve done in past to what you could do now Show knowledge of organization Identify the role you wish to fill 4. Ask for an interview Tell when you’re available for it End with a positive, forward-looking statement Example: January 18, 2003 Mr. Ronald Reegis Penelco Electric Company Balete Drive, Quezon City Dear Mr. Reegis: I read about Company X's retail management training program in College Graduate Magazine and I would like to inquire about the possibility of openings. I am interested in a career in retail management and am planning to relocate to the New York City area in the near future. I would be interested in learning more about the company and about available opportunities. (what you know& what you can do) I have a Bachelor of Science degree in Management and Business, as well as retail experience as a Sales Associate and Key Holder. In addition, I completed two internships focusing on retail management. (your strong point) My resume, which is enclosed, contains additional information on my experience and skills. I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss the training program with you and to provide further information on my candidacy. I can be reached anytime via my cell phone, 555-555-5555. (ask for an interview) Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to speaking with you about this exciting opportunity. Sincerely, Your Signature Your Typed Name Application Essays @ Chance to expand on your best points in more detail Uses essay format instead of letter @ Capture audience’s interest and show you are exceptional Insert personality into writing @ May use anecdotes that Show you developing as a professional Outline future goals Chapter 18: Interviewing, Writing Follow-Up Messages, and Succeeding in the Job Developing Interview Strategies What do you want the interviewer to know? Minimize disadvantages or weakness do you need to. What do you need to know about the job and the organization? Preparation: Final Research - Research all things that related to your work such as salary, job description. It’ can be both from primary and secondary data. Travel Planning -Plan all transportation and schedule to the place on time **important. Professional Materials - All necessary paper work that you will need and also extra copy for just in case. Types of Job Interview Stress Interview -Puts you under stress to see how you handle pressure, keyword is treating as requests for information Situational Interviews -keyword is putting you in a situation where they will tests problem-solving skills and ability to handle problems under time constraints and minimal preparation Behavioral Interviews -keyword is making a decision quickly Working under a tight deadline All things that will reflect out your behavior