THE SPEECH OF INTRODUCTION and The One-Point Speech The One-Point Speech A common first speaking assignment is the one-point speech, in which the speaker’s task is to establish only one main idea (the thesis). This type of speech requires a thesis that is clear and simple, and it is developed as follows: Introduction 1. Wake up! 2. This concerns you. 3. Generally speaking Body 4. For example Conclusion 5. So what? Introduction As indicated, the first three steps enact the introduction to the speech. "Wake up!" is the device to get the audience’s attention, such as an interesting story, a startling statistic, or an unexpected fact. "This concerns you" shows listeners how the topic relates to them; it gives them reason to pay attention and to take the speech seriously. "Generally speaking" states the thesis of the speech and forms a natural transition to the body of the speech. Body "For example" develops the thesis by presenting whatever supporting materials are needed to support the claims in the thesis—experiences, stories, facts, and opinions, arranged in whichever order is most effective. Conclusion Finally, "So what?" signals the twofold function of the conclusion: drawing together the important ideas of the speech and making a final lasting impression on the audience. Answering "So what?" points out what the supporting material leads to and gives listeners cues about what they should believe or do. The Speech of Introduction You can easily adapt the structure of the one-point speech to a speech of introduction if you avoid reciting all the details of the person’s biography. Such a recitation would have no central theme; besides lacking a sense of unity, the speech would be dull. Instead, select a key aspect of the individual’s experience, and devise your thesis from that. Then follow the structure of the one-point speech. Introduction For example, you might open with a statement such as "Unlike most of us, John Patterson has never lived out of this town." The contrast between John and his classmates should capture the audience’s attention and interest. This achieves the "Wake up!" function of the one-point speech. Your next statement might be, "John’s experience can give us insight into the sense of roots that many of our ancestors had but most of us lack today." This identifies how you will make John’s experience relevant to the audience, fulfilling the "This concerns you" step in the one-point speech. Then you might state the thesis: "This town is so much a part of John’s identity that he cannot imagine himself apart from it." This step matches "Generally speaking" in the one-point speech. It both states the idea that you intend to establish and provides a natural transition to the body of the speech. Body The next step is to support this thesis. You might do it by referring to key events in John’s life that are closely identified with the town: growing up where everyone knew everyone else, participating in parades and celebrations, living in the same house that he occupied as a baby, and watching things change around him as others moved into or out of town. These experiences are the supporting material, corresponding to "For example" in the one-point speech. Decide which order to present them in and how much detail to provide. Conclusion Finally, conclude by answering the implicit question "So what?" You might say something like, "So, the next time you read statistics about how often people move, or the next time you think about how many careers you might have during your life, remember that some people choose to nurture their roots where they stand. John Patterson is a thriving example." Outlining Your Speech Sometimes speakers read a speech, word for word, from a fully written manuscript. This approach may actually hinder your communication with the audience. On the other hand, neither is it a good idea to speak impromptu—without preparation, trusting that a flash of inspiration will strike you as you speak. Most successful speakers aim for middle ground with an extemporaneous speech, meaning that they have a clear sense of the main ideas and how to organize them, but they have not planned the speech in advance word for word. In speaking extemporaneously, an outline of the speech is a tremendous help. In fact, two outlines are even more helpful: a preparation outline and a presentation outline. PREPARATION OUTLINE Begin developing your speech with a preparation outline, which is more complete than the outline you will use when presenting the speech. The preparation outline helps you to identify your main ideas and to organize them sensibly, and it lists supporting materials and how you will use them. Write complete sentences as in this partial example below. Thesis: John has a clear sense of his roots. Support A. He still lives in the same house in which he grew up. B. He marched in the Fourth of July parade every year. C. He has never wanted to go anywhere else. The rest of the speech would be outlined similarly. PRESENTATION OUTLINE Although the preparation outline is valuable in developing the speech, your interaction with the audience will be limited if you are busy reading a complete-sentence outline point by point. Instead, prepare a very brief outline of key words that will jog your memory and remind you of what comes next. You will use this presentation outline during the actual speech. Here is the previous example reduced to a presentation outline Main Idea: Sense of roots Support A. Same house B. 4th of July C. No desire to leave Because you are familiar with the ideas of the speech, seeing the phrase "Same house" will remind you of the statement you want to make about how John still lives in the room he occupied as a child and how that experience has affected his perspective on life. You probably can reduce the presentation outline to fit on index cards, which are easier to handle than loose sheets of paper. For this speech, you may need only one index card. The Speech of Introduction As si gnment Procedure 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. Write down some questions you might ask during your interview. Interview a classmate with the purpose of getting enough information to write a 1 to 3-minute Speech of Introduction. Write a Preparation Outline to be turned in before you speak in front of the class. Prepare a Presentation Outline of your speech on one or more index cards. Practice the Speech and time it. Write down the final timing of your speech. Turn in your Speech of Introduction Assignment Sheet and then give your speech in front of the class. Turn in your index card(s). The Speech of Introduction As si gnment Sheet Who will you introduce? ____________________ Your Name ________________________ Per___ Interview Questions 1. _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 4. _____________________________________________________________________________________________ 5. _____________________________________________________________________________________________ Preparation Outline Introduction Final Timing of Speech (1:00 -- 3:00) ___:_____ 1. Wake up! _________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. This concerns you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. Generally speaking _________________________________________________________________________________________________ Body 4. For example _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ Conclusion 5. So what? _________________________________________________________________________________________________ Speech of Introduction Rubric Great Job! Preparation Organization Presentation Content Points Total Points _____/ 40 Good Work! Needs Work Volume, pacing & pitch are good Good eye contact. Subject’s name used many times Complete introduction Good support for thesis Strong conclusion 4 interview questions Preparation Outline is mostly complete and written in sentences Presentation Outline not on index card. Mostly follows 1-Point Speech format Speech within 15 seconds of time limit Volume, pacing & pitch are adequate Frequent eye contact. Subject’s name used more than once Mostly complete introduction Adequate support for thesis Conclusion 3 interview questions Preparation Outline is incomplete and/or not written in sentences Presentation Outline incomplete Missing parts of 1-Point Speech format Speech within 30 seconds of time limit Volume, pacing or pitch are lacking Infrequent eye contact. Subject’s name used once Incomplete introduction Some support for thesis Partial Conclusion. ____ X 10 = ____ X 9 = ____ X 7 = At least 5 interview questions Preparation Outline is complete and written in sentences Presentation Outline on index card. Follows 1-Point Speech format Speech within time limit Needs Effort 2 or fewer interview questions Preparation Outline is mostly incomplete or missing No Presentation Outline Does not follow 1-Point Speech format Speech more than 45 seconds off time limit Volume, pacing & pitch are poor Little or no eye contact. Subject’s name used at most once Incomplete or missing introduction Little support for thesis Partial or no Conclusion. ____ X 6 =