Essay Author: ________________ Peer Editor: ______________________ Sonnet Essay Peer Feedback Checklist Draft #1 Directions: For areas that need work, offer specific suggestions/questions for improvement. Is the topic sentence of paragraph #1 accurate & clear? (poem title, author, general/big idea) Does each paragraph begin with a claim that clearly & accurately states the suggested/deeper meaning of the quatrain? o Note: claim in last paragraph should be about overall meaning of the poem. Does each paragraph include at least one quoted line from the quatrain that helps prove the claim? o Note: paragraph #4 should include BOTH lines from couplet quoted together. Does each quote have a proper lead-in? (Watch out for runons/fragments!) Are the lines of poetry quoted accurately & correctly? Does each paragraph include the “reasoning” of the evidence? Does the reasoning in each paragraph include BOTH… o a) an analysis of what the words and/or literary techniques in the quote suggest and o b) an explanation of how the quote(s) supports the claim? Is the writer using present tense? (Use t-s to mark where tense needs to be changed to present.) o Note: It’s okay to write, “The standards of beauty in the Elizabethan era were…”