English Language Arts 20 Module 1: Recollection Lesson 2: Innocence and Experience English Language Arts 20 1 Lesson 2 English Language Arts 20 2 Lesson 2 Objectives In Lesson Two students will have the opportunity to: recognize author’s purpose, form, and techniques. respond personally, critically, and creatively. recognize and explain allusions, symbols, and stylistic devices in a literary text. identify rhyme. state and evaluate author’s theme, tone, and viewpoint. note the variety of patterns that speakers and writers use to organize their thoughts. summarize information: write a précis. recognize and correct sentence errors (sentence fragment, run-on sentence). recognize that talk is an important tool for communicating, thinking, and learning. speak to communicate, think, and learn. choose a research essay topic. REQUIRED RESOURCES: Anthology of poems regarding childhood memories of a mother’s love. Article or Essay about discrimination or prejudice and feeling different. English Language Arts 20 3 Lesson 2 English Language Arts 20 4 Lesson 2 Introduction Literature selections in Lesson Two will focus on memories of childhood. What events from your childhood have become your fondest memories? Would your parents or other family members view these events in the same favorable light? Do you view past events in the same light as you did as a child? Language is the vehicle by which a child learns to navigate in his world. Many factors affect what a person ultimately comprehends any message to be. Clarity of language is as important to communication as good tires are to a car: one can get nowhere without them. Communicators can choose their message, just as a driver would choose his destination. Using language is very much like driving - the voyage is as important as the arrival. Can you extend this metaphor? What part of a vehicle or the road would punctuation be? In Lesson Two you will use language in a variety of ways. As a student, you will also choose the content of your own message by selecting a topic to research. English Language Arts 20 5 Lesson 2 Purpose and Form in Language There are many different ways to express information. The method of expression often varies according to the sender’s purpose, the type of information to be expressed and the kind of audience. For example, directions on how to assemble stereo equipment are usually written in clear, concise language (prose) that is easily understandable to the greatest number of people possible. Diagrams are often included. The same information on how to assemble stereo equipment would not be expressed in the form of a poem. Poems convey images and feelings well; they do not convey directions well. Sender’s Information + Type of Information + Kind of Audience = Overall Product Find the “Communication Strategies” section in your English Language Arts Ready Reference. Read “Prewriting.” English Language Arts 20 6 Lesson 2 Comprehension Check What are the seven different kinds of purposes for writing listed in the “Prewriting” section of your English Language Arts Ready Reference? 1. ________________________________________ 2. ________________________________________ 3. ________________________________________ 4. ________________________________________ 5. ________________________________________ 6. ________________________________________ 7. ________________________________________ English Language Arts 20 7 Lesson 2 The very form of a message itself can influence our reactions to the ideas within it. For example, would you prefer to read a poem or a short story? How do you react to reading different types of information? Do you react the same way when reading each of the following? the user manual for a new car love sonnets a horror novel There are three major genres of writing: fiction, nonfiction, and poetry. Furthermore, literature can also be divided by form. For example, nonfiction writing includes the forms of autobiography, memoir, editorial, research report, and so on. Genre: Broadly speaking there are three major types or genres of writing and literature: fiction, nonfiction, and poetry. Each genre has its own characteristics. There are many different forms of writing within each genre. The following illustration shows how some genres are classified. Fiction Nonfiction short stories novels plays essays news articles instructions biographies research reports Poetry sonnets free verse Haiku ballads Comprehension Check Three major genres of writing are: 1. _______________________________________ 2. _______________________________________ 3. _______________________________________ English Language Arts 20 8 Lesson 2 A person’s attitude and background knowledge can also influence how a message is perceived. For example, a party-loving teenager and a policeman would view a video of a group of teenagers drinking and talking while leaning against a car in entirely different ways. Who would see that scenario as fun? As dangerous? As irresponsible? Why? Poetry is a type of writing that conveys experiences, ideas, or emotions through condensed language chosen for its sound and suggestive power and by the use of literary techniques such as metre, verse, metaphor, and rhyme. Poetry is organized in stanzas rather than in paragraphs as is prose. In Activity A, you will be asked to record your reactions to poetry on your blank audio tape. Before you begin Activity A, label your blank tape with your name, your course title (ELA 20), and the assignment number. Also record your name, your course title and the assignment number on your audio tape. Your voice must be audible at all times. The sound must be clear, with no background noise. Rewind your tape to the beginning of the section you want your teacher to listen to every time you submit your tape. Listen to your teacher’s comments when your tape is returned to you. Follow these steps every time you submit your audio tape with an assignment. Activity A (5) Your reactions to poetry in general will influence what message you carry with you after reading a poem. You can become more aware of what your attitude to poetry is through the following exercise. Your recorded answers to the following questions must be audible and will be marked for content as indicated below. 0 no real attempt made 2-3 4-5 short or inadequate explanations a good effort to express your thoughts and/or feelings (continued) English Language Arts 20 9 Lesson 2 Complete the following statements and record them on your audio tape. 1. Poetry reminds me of … _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 2. My earliest memory of poetry is … ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ 3. The best thing about poetry is … ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ 4. The worst thing about poetry is … ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ 5. I have/have not written poetry myself because … ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ English Language Arts 20 10 Lesson 2 “Childhood” Every poem, essay, short story, or novel contains an overall idea or truth about life in general. This idea is called a theme. (Teachers have students read a poem about childhood. Use the poem you have selected to teach, theme, first reactions and symbols. Insert it here.) Read along in the following script as you listen to our virtual students’ reactions to “Childhood” on your English Language Arts 20 audio tape. Virtual Students’ First Reactions Mrs. Tenshun closes her copy of PoemsRUs and looks expectantly at her students. MRS. TENSHUN: Well? Who would like to share his reaction first? No one meets her eyes for several seconds. Finally Adrian speaks, coloring a bit at his bravery. ADRIAN: It reminds me of when my brother had to go away to the hospital. In my mind’s eye I can see a little kid off in another room listening to his mom cook in the kitchen. Then, in the second stanza, the child goes away. I’m not sure why, but the mother forgives him. Finally, the mother welcomes him home again with typical symbols of motherly love: milk and home-made bread. There’s a lot of white in the poem. That’s a color that usually symbolizes innocence or cold. JENNY: (nodding)Yes, it does. “Childhood” makes me think of T.V. shows like Little House on the Prairies because the kids there are all innocent and sweet. It bothers English Language Arts 20 11 Lesson 2 me that the poem isn’t clear about why the child has gone away-because he grew up or because he passed away. In either case, the mother calls to the child to come home, using a glass of milk as kind of a lamp. Its light clears away the shadows, or the sadness, from her face when she holds it up. I think the child died and the mother puts out milk and bread as part of some strange ritual. Jenny nods at Mrs. Tenshun. Mel makes a face at Jenny and begins to speak. MEL: Well, this poem makes me feel warm and cuddly. You know, that’s how any kid feels after her mom has forgiven her for some stupid maneuver, even if it takes until the kid grows up. I wish my mother could bake. Mel blows a bubble and plops down ungracefully in her desk, with her feet pushed out in front of her. Frank stirs uncomfortably and, very quietly, contributes to the discussion. FRANK: When I heard Mrs. Tenshun read this poem, all I could think about was how my mother will feel when I move away from home next year. I can just see her putting out milk and cookies for me every night. I’m glad the mother in the poem forgave her child for leaving. MRS. TENSHUN: Thanks, kids. You have expressed some very thoughtful first reactions. Now, let’s move on to discuss the poem … English Language Arts 20 12 Lesson 2 Take a moment to write down your first reaction to the poem you just read. Symbols were used to convey particular ideas in the poem you just read. A symbol is a specific thing that may stand for ideas, values, persons or ways of life. For example, a dove is often used to symbolize peace while a crown symbolizes royalty and a sword symbolizes a soldier. Match the following symbols to the group of people each represents. 1. 2. 3. 4. painter soccer player disabled person skater As you can see from the examples above, we use symbols on a regular basis. A personal symbol, one that might describe you, would be an object or animal with which you share at least one inherent quality. For example, if you are easily frightened, you might choose a deer as a personal symbol. English Language Arts 20 13 Lesson 2 English Language Arts 20 14 Lesson 2 English Language Arts 20 15 Lesson 2 (Teacher locate a poem that deals with childhood and childhood memories. Try to select something that contains allusion, end rhyme and that can be easily summarized. May want to review how to write a summary with your students.) Childhood can be remembered in different ways. Take a minute now to jot down: your own most happy childhood memory and __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ your own most sad childhood memory. __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ Now that you are older than when these events occurred, do you view the events in the same way? (e.g. What seemed to be the world’s most exciting water slide to you as a child may seem a bit lame now that you are a teenager.) As you read *** note the organization of the stanzas, circle the words you think might be symbols, and on the line beside each stanza, write the poet’s main idea or feeling about childhood in that stanza. English Language Arts 20 16 Lesson 2 English Language Arts 20 17 Lesson 2 How many stanzas did you note in the poem? Do they all begin with two long lines? Are there any other similarities between the stanzas? Do you feel the same way about childhood as this poet? Scan the “Poetry” section in your English Language Arts Ready Reference for information necessary to complete the following comprehension activity. Comprehension Check Circle the word or phrase which best completes each statement. 1. End rhyme occurs at the (beginnings / ends) of lines. 2. Rhyme schemes are the patterns of (sentences / rhymes) in a stanza or a poem. 3. (Alternate rhyme / Rhyming couplets) occur when two consecutive lines of poetry rhyme. 4. Poetic (metre / composition) is the rhythmical pattern resulting from the arrangement of stressed and unstressed syllables in a poem. 5. (Scansion / Syllabication) is the process of analyzing the rhythm in a poem. English Language Arts 20 18 Lesson 2 English Language Arts 20 19 Lesson 2 Activity C (1) 1. Scan the poem you read about childhood memories. Do the words at the ends of lines rhyme? If not, a poem that does not contain End Rhyme is called a Free Verse poem. ___________________________________________________________________ An allusion is a passing reference to some person, place, or event that has literary, historical, or geographical significance. For example, if one young climber is paying a compliment to another climber by saying, “Jack couldn’t have climbed his beanstalk better than you climbed that cliff,” the speaker is alluding to the well known children’s story of Jack and the Beanstalk. Many people use allusions in their day-to-day speech. (2) 2. To what/whom is the author alluding in the poem you read about childhood memories. ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ English Language Arts 20 20 Lesson 2 (5) 4. Refer to the notes you made about the poem you read about childhood memories in order to write a one paragraph summary about it. Be sure to use complete sentences your one paragraph summary. ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ English Language Arts 20 21 Lesson 2 Essays Childhood is a theme which occurs not only in poetry, but in prose as well. Many people organize their ideas about various subjects into a form of writing called the essay. An essay is generally short composition that discusses an idea, expresses a point of view or argues a thesis. An essay may be organized in several ways including order of importance, order of time, space order, logical order and so on. Review Lesson One for the characteristics of the formal and informal essay. Write them in the lined spaces below. Formal essay ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ Informal essay ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ (Teacher select an essay about childhood, differences and prejudice as described in the paragraph below.) Children seldom remark upon differences between themselves and others until they are made aware of these differences by adults. Being different from other people can be both positive and negative. Can you remember a childhood incident when you realized that you were different from the people around you? How did knowing this make you feel? Refer to “Reading Strategies” in the “Communication Strategies” section of your English Language Arts Ready Reference. English Language Arts 20 22 Lesson 2 Read ***. How would you feel if you were the subject of prejudice? English Language Arts 20 23 Lesson 2 English Language Arts 20 24 Lesson 2 Activity D This activity gives you the chance to respond to the essay you just read about childhood and differences. (3) 1. On your audio tape, record your first reaction comments in response to ***. The purpose is to give you an opportunity to freely express your thoughts and/or feelings after listening to or reading a selection. The content of your first reaction comment is what is important, rather than the grammatical structure of your wording or the perfection of your delivery. You will receive full marks for a good effort, as shown below. 0 no comments 1 2-3 very short or inadequate comments a good effort, several sentences long, to express your first reaction to what you have just read You may already know what to say. If not, following are some possible starters. Only use one starter. Many out-dated stereotypes still exist. For example, … Like the main character, my past has affected me. It has caused me to become … because … I, too, was a subject of prejudice when … I feel uncomfortable about excluding … when … (continued) English Language Arts 20 25 Lesson 2 (8) 2. Think of two objects/things which can be used as symbols to represent you. Draw or paste a picture of each of these items below. Then, explain how you and each object share particular qualities or characteristics. ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ English Language Arts 20 26 Lesson 2 Activity E Record your answers to the following questions about *** in complete sentences on your audio tape. (1) 1. The main character recounts an incident where he/she was regarded with prejudice. In one sentence, tell what happened. (1) 3. How has being the subject of prejudice changed the person? (1) 4. How would it/has it change(d) you? The Précis Writing a précis is a useful way to summarize the main ideas of a longer composition in a clear, concise and orderly way. A précis is usually one-third to one-quarter the length of the original piece of writing. A paraphrase and a précis are not the same. You may refresh your memory about the paraphrase by referring to Lesson 1. There are several important differences between the paraphrase and the précis. Quality Paraphrase Précis form restatement summary content entire thought of the original only main thoughts of the original (exclude examples) length approximately the same as the original 1/3 –1/4 the length of the original point of view same point of view as the original third person point of view English Language Arts 20 27 Lesson 2 Read “The Précis” in the “Special Forms of Writing” section of your English Language Arts Ready Reference. Check your comprehension with the help of the following questions. Comprehension Check Circle the word/phrase which most accurately completes each statement. 1. The (paraphrase / précis) is used to summarize the essential ideas of a longer composition. 2. A précis (omits / includes) figures of speech, repetition, examples, interjections or words inserted for emphasis. 3. A précis (does / does not) change direct speech, or material that is in quotation marks, into indirect speech. 4. A précis (does / does not) keep the same tone as the original. English Language Arts 20 28 Lesson 2 Reread the following paragraph from “I Didn’t Know I Was Different” and review how Jenny, one of our virtual students, has developed a précis for it. Nothing more was said, but a few days later or perhaps the next day the kids main idea started teasing us, calling us Indians and half-breeds! This went on for some main idea time. I couldn’t understand why the teacher did not stop them, although the main idea teasing occurred at lunch time and recess. One lunch hour, all the kids Remove examples. General statement: We were even excluded from some school events. stayed inside the school while my brother and I were outside alone. Then one day, because we were Catholic, my brother and I were let out of school half an hour early when the Anglican missionaries came to the school to give a service. We walked and ran the two miles home as fast as we could to get home before the other kids. Our parents were surprised to see us home in thirty minutes. I had a sore throat that night, was in bed with a chest cold the next day, and missed school for two main idea weeks. We must have told our parents about the teasing then. When I main idea went back to school, the teasing had stopped. I assume my parents had main idea intervened. My brother skipped school a lot that year and eventually main idea dropped out. He was fourteen years old. main idea (196 words) English Language Arts 20 29 Lesson 2 The completed précis follows. Note that the original was written in the first person point of view, and our virtual student has changed the point of view in her précis to third person point of view. Soon afterwards, the other kids started teasing Jenine and her brother, and the teacher didn’t stop them. They were even excluded from some school events. Jenine assumed her parents intervened because the teasing stopped when she went back to school after a two week illness. At fourteen, Jenine’s brother began to skip school and dropped out. (56 words) English Language Arts 20 30 Lesson 2 English Language Arts 20 31 Lesson 2 Activity F Use the process for creating a précis modeled by our virtual student, Jenny, to create your own précis of the last paragraph of “I Didn’t Know I Was Different.” Refer to the chart that follows Activity E for a list of the elements of a précis. (4) 1. Underline the main ideas below. I think the prejudice I was exposed to as a child affects the way I interact with people as I am not an open person and do not make friends easily. When I compare myself to my sisters, who did not suffer the same prejudices I did, I find them to be much more open and congenial. I would like to think there is less prejudice in the world, but is there? I have a ten-year-old son writing a story about an Indian Chief who killed a white-man’s wife and then this white man relentlessly hunts down the Indian. The story is supposed to take place one hundred years ago. I guess the stereotypes are still there. Where else would this ten year old get his ideas? (131 words) English Language Arts 20 32 Lesson 2 (5) 2. Include the main ideas you indicated above in a précis. Be sure to avoid sentence fragments and run-on sentences. Refer to the chart that follows Activity E for a list of the elements of a précis. _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ English Language Arts 20 33 Lesson 2 The Sentence Fragment One common problem many writers encounter is the sentence fragment. A sentence fragment is a group of words which is intended to function as a sentence but which lacks some important part. Often, sentence fragments are only phrases or clauses, rather than complete sentences. In order to avoid sentence fragments, check that your sentences are complete in two ways. Every complete sentence needs a subject and a verb. Wrong: Running madly down the street. no subject, incomplete verb Right: Jenny ran madly down the street. subject verb A complete sentence must be able to stand alone. It cannot begin with a subordinate conjunction. Wrong: Although Adrian smiled subordinate conjunction Right: Adrian smiled. no subordinate conjunction You can correct a sentence fragment either by joining it to a complete sentence or by rewriting it to make it a complete sentence. Some kinds of fragments are best corrected by joining. Other kinds can be best corrected by rewriting. English Language Arts 20 34 Lesson 2 The Run-on Sentence Some textbooks call the run-on sentence a run-together sentence, a comma splice, or a comma fault. The run-on sentence occurs when a writer either tries to make a comma work in the wrong way or omits a semicolon or a period altogether. Two or more complete sentences should not be joined with a comma. There are several ways to correct a run-on sentence. Use a period to make the two independent clauses into two sentences. Wrong: New Wave Books has a sale today, I’m going to help. Right: New Wave Books has a sale today. I’m going to help. Use a semicolon to join the two sentences. Wrong: Jenny did her homework efficiently, Adrian gazed dreamily out the window. Right: Jenny did her homework efficiently; Adrian gazed dreamily out the window. Use a semicolon, a connecting word (also called a conjunctive adverb) and a comma if there seems to be a pause between the word and the rest of the sentence. Some conjunctive adverbs are: also finally then thus besides still consequently furthermore nevertheless otherwise however likewise moreover therefore (as a result) Wrong: Girls soccer is a fast-growing sport, it is more fun to watch at the field than on TV. Right: Girls soccer is a fast-growing sport; however, it is more fun to watch at the field than on TV. Use a comma and a coordinating conjunction to separate two independent clauses which have run together. The coordinating conjunctions are: English Language Arts 20 35 Lesson 2 so yet nor or for but and Wrong: I don’t want to go to school over the summer I think I should. Right: I don’t want to go to school over the summer, but I think I should. For extra information about clauses and sentence errors, refer to your English Language Arts Ready Reference. Planning a Research Essay There are many topics related to the idea of childhood and youth. As you read the following material about the research essay, be aware that you will be required to choose a research essay topic in Lesson Two. A research essay is a piece of expository writing organized into an introduction, a body, and a conclusion which explores the facts related to a particular topic and which provides adequate documentation of those facts. Research essays vary greatly in length and content; however, the tone of a research essay should be formal, factual, and avoid argument. A research essay might be a big job, but it doesn’t need to be overwhelming! Dividing the job into manageable tasks will help separate a big project into several smaller projects. For example, the process that you will follow in writing your research essay is the following: Process Lesson Step 1 Select a topic. Prepare research questions. Identify resources. Call your Technology Supported Learning teacher. 2 2 2 2 Step 2 Read and evaluate research material. Make research notes. 4 4 Step 3 Organize material. Write an outline for the research essay. List problems and questions. 4 4 4 Step 4 Write the first draft. 8 Step 5 Peer edit the first draft. 8 Step 6 Revise the essay. 8 Step 7 Present the final copy of the essay. 8 English Language Arts 20 36 Lesson 2 Choose one of the following questions as a basis for your own research essay. What are the individual, provincial, and national effects of rising university costs? Is IQ an adequate indicator of a child’s success in later life? Do video games promote violence? Is capital punishment a deterrent to crime? What effect would subsidizing Saskatchewan farmers have on individual farmers, residents of Saskatchewan, and Canada’s International trading partners? How does global warming affect the weather? How can pollution be stopped/reduced on a personal, a national and an international basis? How is my favorite hobby or sport performed, organized within the province and the country, and viewed by the general public? Write the question you have chosen here. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ In your research essay, you may present information which supports a particular view on your topic; however, all your findings must be supported with documented facts. Refer to your English Language Arts Ready Reference’s section on “Documentation” for help in completing the following statements. English Language Arts 20 37 Lesson 2 Comprehension Check Circle the word or phrase which best completes each statement. 1. (Documentation / Recitation) tells your reader from where you took the quotation or facts used in the body of your writing. 2. Use quotations (continually / sparingly). 3. When writing an essay, you (must / must not) acknowledge your source when material is quoted word for word and when material is only slightly reworded. 4. Sources must be (acknowledged / ignored) when ideas and opinions are definitely borrowed and statements or figures are used which may be questioned. 5. Sources (are /are not) to be noted in abbreviated form in the body of the essay. 6. A (scriptography / bibliography) is an alphabetical list of all the sources actually used for your paper. 7. There (are / are not) particular methods of documenting information found on the Internet. Now you are ready to find resources directly related to your topic. Remember to keep track of the sources of your information as you collect it. English Language Arts 20 38 Lesson 2 English Language Arts 20 39 Lesson 2 Activity G (5) 1. (1) 2. Idea Web: Part of the first step in writing your research essay is to generate ideas about the topic (see p. 100). Write the question you chose as the subject of your essay in the centre box of the idea web below. On the left side of the page write down five pieces of information you know about your research question. Think in terms of details, examples, results, reasons, and definitions. On the right side of the page write down five things you want to know about your research essay question. Ask what, who, why and how about ideas which are related to your research question. Refer to the section on “Reference Books” in your English Language Arts What I know What I want to know My research essay question is: English Language Arts 20 40 Lesson 2 Ready Reference. Then, identify four sources of information you will use as resources for your essay. ____________________________ ____________________________ ____________________________ ____________________________ Activity H (3) Calling Your Technology Supported Learning Teacher Now that you have identified some of the strengths and weaknesses in your preparation, call your Technology Supported Learning teacher to confer and to get help in adjusting your research essay plan if necessary. The toll free telephone number for Technology Supported Learning is: 1800-667-7166. English Language Arts 20 41 Lesson 2 Your Copy of Activity G 1. Make and keep this copy of your work for Activity G to use as a basis for writing the outline of your essay in Lesson Four. Part of the first step in writing your research essay is to generate ideas about the topic (see p. 100). Write the question you chose as the subject of your essay in the centre box of the idea web below. On the left side of the page write down five pieces of information you know about your research question. Think in terms of details, examples, results, reasons, and definitions. On the right side of the page write down five things you want to know about your research essay question. Ask what, who, why and how about ideas which are related to your research question. What I know What I want to know My research essay question is: English Language Arts 20 42 Lesson 2 2. Refer to the section on “Reference Books” in your English Language Arts Ready Reference. Then, identify four sources of information you will use as resources for your essay. ____________________________ ____________________________ ____________________________ ____________________________ English Language Arts 20 43 Lesson 2