Galina Siarheichyk, Ph.D. COMMUNICATING VERISIMILITUDE: THE POWER OF RHETORIC MWF 1.00 PM - 1:50 PM ROOM: CLUB 4 FIRST-YEAR WRITING AND RHETORIC Instructor: Galina Siarheichyk, Ph.D. Office: ENVD 1B50G Hours: MW 4.00 PM - 4.50 PM or by appointment WRTG 1150, SECTION 029, 030, 800 1 Galina Siarheichyk, Ph.D. Description Human civilizations thrive on words. These words consist of highly organized rows of symbols, tied together by cultural, historical, economic, political and religious formulas. In the same way that objects can be studied in their smallest atomic components, human civilizations can be dissected, understood and interacted with by means of studying the formulas of verbal expression. In this course you will learn to engage in such modes of human communication as composition, reading and “Let rhetoric be defined as speaking, in order to analyze and implement the formulas of an ability, in each successful, clear and eloquent communication in your own particular case, to see the verbal expressions. In this process, we will rely on the available means of persuasion.” fundamentals of the science of rhetoric, so as to perceive the – Aristotle, On Rhetoric architecture behind composition and understanding of a written text; so as to evaluate the hierarchies and boundaries with a critical eye for logical fallacies; and so as to adopt the strategies of erudite, persuasive argumentation. "I am God! I am nothing, I'm play, I am freedom, I am life. I am the boundary, I am the peak." In this course we will read and discuss the classic texts (short stories) from the icons of the world literature and muse on images that create – Alexander Nikolayevich Scriabin the rhetoric of various cultures. We will rely on texts coming from a range of fields: literature, science, politics, rhetoric, linguistics, photography and film. In preparation for your research projects we will discuss a variety of primary and secondary texts, as well as incorporate and expand your digital literacy and use of technology in class. Course Objectives: The key focus of this course will be on the writing itself, both your own and that of your classmates. You will be engaging in the art of composition frequently, in the form of both short in-class free-writes and elaborate composing and editing of your own work as well as that of your colleagues. The essays you write will be thesis-driven, reflective and analytical, aiming for dynamic use of language, semantic precision and daring integration of your personal commitment and understanding of your civic responsibilities. You will chose your own topics for two of the four essays, something that truly sparks your curiosity or sense of justice. In the process we will explore a variety of rhetorical techniques to read, understand and write critically. What therefore is truth? A mobile army of metaphors and metonymies, antropomorphisms: in short a sum of human relations which became poetically and rhetorically intensified, metamorphosed, adorned, and after long usage seem to a nation fixed, canonic, and binding; truths are illusions of which one has forgotten that they are illusions; worn-out metaphors which have become powerless to affect our senses; coins which have their obverse effaced and now are no longer of account as coins, but merely as metal. – F. Nietzsche, “On truth and Falsity in their Ultramoral Sense” To best facilitate our exploration of various modes of written expression and further your personal growth as successful writers, class will often change styles of interaction (from small-groups, to individual to joint effort arrangements) and rhythm. Your progress in class will be directly proportionate to your effort, and will be evaluated in these terms. 2 Galina Siarheichyk, Ph.D. Ultimately, in this class you will acquire tools of critical importance to help you navigate the work you will do at the academia in a more efficient and personally rewarding way. You will be able to engage with various fields of study by means of competent, eloquent and persuasive dialogue. Maximizing Your Success WRTG 1150 is designed to prepare you for and maximize your success in the academic writing you will do at the university. Taught as a rigorous writing workshop using advanced reading materials and writing techniques, the course emphasizes critical reading, analytical and argumentative writing, and writing for multiple contexts. This course is labor-intensive and will demand extraordinary commitment and discipline in all areas of the required work: reading, researching, composing and revising (a minimum of 4 hours per day outside of classroom). Mastery of advanced reading techniques, proper use of proofreading and editing, willingness to openly discuss your work in a circle of your peers will be crucial to maximizing your time and effort during this rigorous class. ***** Required Texts: Erik Ellis and Lonni Pearce, Knowing Words: A Guide to First-Year Writing and Rhetoric, Fall/Spring 2009-2010. Sixth edition. Boulder: University of Colorado at Boulder, 2010. ESL - section only: Lunsford, Andrea A., John J. Ruszkiewicz, and Keith Walters. Everything's an Argument: With Readings.4th edition, Boston: Bedford/St. Martin's, 2007. All Sections: Further readings will be assigned in the form of online readings, e-mail and web postings, and occasional handouts. For some of the online readings see: http://uclibraries.colorado.edu/pwr/ and http://professionals.collegeboard.com/profdownload/words-have-no-borders2009-cb-writing-comm.pdf Resources For Writing Conventions: The Purdue University OWL (on-line writing lab): http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl The Colorado State University Writing Center: http://writing.colostate.edu The Oregon State Resource Center: http://cw;pregonstate.edu/Webresourcespage.html 3 Galina Siarheichyk, Ph.D. Recommended Texts On Rhetoric And Composition: Aristoteles, and George A. Kennedy. Aristotle on Rhetoric: A Theory of Civic Discourse. Oxford: Oxford University Press, 1991. Austin, J. L. How to Do Things with Words. The William James lectures, 1955. Cambridge: Harvard University Press, 1962. Hauser, Gerard A. Introduction to Rhetorical Theory. Cambridge [Cambridgeshire]: Harper & Row, 1986. College level dictionary and thesaurus; for example: Dk Dictionary Thesaurus. Paw Prints, 2008. Lunsford, Andrea A., John J. Ruszkiewicz, and Keith Walters. Everything's an Argument: With Readings.4th edition, Boston: Bedford/St. Martin's, 2007. Raimes, Ann. Keys for Writers. Houghton Mifflin College Div, 2006. Spilka, Rachel. Digital Literacy for Technical Communication: 21st Century Theory and Practice. New York: Routledge, 2010. For suggestions on further personal literacy reading in the world’s classics, see: Burt, Daniel S. The Novel 100: A Ranking of the Greatest Novels of All Time. New York: Facts on File, 2004. Charters, Ann. The Story and Its Writer: An Introduction to Short Fiction. Boston, Mass: Bedford/St. Martins, 2006. Writing Process and Workshop Format 1. A large portion of the course will take place in a collaborative revision through the re-working of multiple drafts incorporating the suggestions of others; peer review, where you will be asked to critique the work of others; and evaluation of sources, through the information literacy component of the course. Your own writing will be the principal text; we will all work together as a team to improve each paper. We will adopt the attitude that each paper can be improved, and give constructive criticism to everyone. Your job will be to provide oral and written commentary on other students’ papers when assigned to do so. Commentaries will be evaluated and counted in to your final grade for each paper as part of the final paper portfolio that you will be asked to submit along with the final draft of your prose. 2. You will also write short in-class compositions on various subjects, in order to brainstorm your views on a given topic, solicit ideas from your peers, and shape your strategy for building your own essays. These short writing samples should also be included in your final essay portfolio with each of the essays. 3. Occasionally you will be asked to write quizzes without prior warning on the subject of readings assigned and/or the definitions and application of various rhetorical concepts. Quiz grades will account for 5% of your final grade. 4. All writing will be done in both digital and printed format. Your final portfolios 4 Galina Siarheichyk, Ph.D. will have to be submitted in printed (hard) copies, as well as partially (only the final draft of your essay) in an electronic format to a specified website and/or email. All drafts are due when assigned. One grade point will be deducted from a late submission at a rate of each class time after the assigned due date. No exceptions will be made for late submissions, unless special circumstances are demonstrated and appropriately documented. Innovative Technology and Writing Conventions In this course we will employ printed texts, digital texts, the Internet, film, podcasts and other media. It is crucial to have full access to a computer (a laptop for workshops). Having these online resources at your fingertips will allow you to access the distinct writing formats for each assignment. You may also utilize the course website and other course materials made available by the library to evaluate sources and apply genre conventions from structural to discourse analysis. We will apply stylistic and syntactic analysis throughout the course. However, if spotted web-surfing, chatting, face-booking or otherwise uninvolved in the class activity, the student will be asked to leave the classroom and the class will be marked as missed. A major feature of this course is our collaboration with the University Libraries, which is designed to help you acquire skills in critical information literacy. Library assignments and web-based readings developed together with the University Libraries will be an integral feature of our work. Library on-line quizzes (RIOT) will account for 5% of your final grade. Please explore the website of the University Libraries to fully familiarize yourself with the content of the server and available search options at: http://ucblibraries.colorado.edu/pwr/ If you should have difficulty logging in, please e-mail pwrhelp@colorado.edu with your name, indentikey username, and section number. COURSE POLICIES 1. Attendance: Regular attendance is vital for your progress in Russian and success in this class. You are allowed to miss three classes during the whole semester without a medical excuse. Each absence beyond those three will result in a one-increment drop of your final grade 5 Galina Siarheichyk, Ph.D. (For example, if you earn B+ for the course but miss five classes, your grade will be B-). More than six will result in an F for the course. Absence on medical grounds must be documented. There will be NO make-ups of missed tests, quizzes or other assignments, unless special circumstances are demonstrated and documented. All homework corrections are due two weeks before the last day of classes on Monday, November 29. Constant late appearance to class will not be tolerated. Two late appearances will count as a class missed. All deadlines are final. No exceptions will be made unless special circumstances are demonstrated in advance. 2. Assignments: All homework assignments must be completed PRIOR to meeting in class. Unprepared students will be asked to leave the class, or will have such a class counted as missed, unless special circumstances are documented. Required essays: Reflective writing (1-3 pages) DUE Textual Analysis (3-5 pages) – Asking “What” questions, discuss the significance of the content of a film, text, or a podcast DUE Rhetorical Analysis of an argument (3-5 pages) – Asking “How” questions, analyze the structure of the argument and its form of delivery. DUE Cultural Analysis (4-6 pages) - Asking “Why” questions, present a critical analysis of cultural practices and their verbal expression DUE Research Project (7-10 pages) – an essay in which you present a research question, contextualize it in the field and in the existing scientific/public/social dialogue around it, investigate and cite relevant sources and argue for a particular position/point of view, drawing conclusions from the data you accrued. DUE Assignments will count as follows: Textual Analysis (Short Assignment) – 15% Rhetorical Analysis (SA) – 15% Cultural Analysis – 20% Research Project – 30% Short reflection in-class compositions, blog entires, class participation, including contributions to class discussion and workshops: 10% Quizzes (Library/in-class) – 10% All papers must be typed, double-spaced. The only time you will need to print your work is when a final draft of it is due. All peer-reviews and drafts must be included in the printed out final portfolio and submitted together at the time of submitting your final drafts. Spelling and grammatical errors are unacceptable; see the recommended texts above if you have this problem. 6 Galina Siarheichyk, Ph.D. 3. Timing: We will write a total of four essays and work on each (peer-review workshop) paper once a week. Detailed plan of class homework and workshop date will be announced a week in advance. Please not that your paper is due to be distributed in advance of the discussion on your paper. In addition, you will be required to give an oral and written commentary on another student’s paper once a week in your blog forum. Oral and written participation constitute 30% of your final grade. It is recommended to revise your paper nightly, though the submission is on the due date. I will not accept final papers that have not been reviewed at least five times in class. The “first draft” final versions are unacceptable and will not receive a grade. 4. Plagiarism: Plagiarism is a crime and will result in an F for the course, as well as possible disciplinary action by the University. Always be sure to give credit for the words or ideas from another source and do not hand in work which is not your own. 5. Grading Scale: A 92-100 A- 90-91 B+ 88-89 B 82-87 B- 80-81 C+ 78-79 C 72-77 C- 70-71 D+ 68-69 D 62-67 D- 60-61 F 59 Standards for grading A Exceptional in form, content and style. No mechanical errors. Presents original and relevant ideas to a clearly identified audience. Demonstrates the student’s expertise. B A good, interesting paper. The student demonstrates control of the form and uses analytical or argumentative style as required by the assignment. C An adequate paper which has a form, but which may contain weaknesses. A descriptive paper would fall into this category. D Contains deficiencies in form, content, or mechanics. F Incoherent, lacking form, or NOT turned in when DUE. 6. Conferences During the course of the semester, we will meet for two 20-minute individual conferences to discuss your writing. In these personal sessions I hope to best assist you as writers. You can help me be a of better service to you, if you think of questions and concerns ahead of time about your piece or your writing in general. 7. Writing Center Additional free help with your writing can be obtained at the Writing Center in Norlin Library. For similar help with your research questions, please refer to the consultant Librarians at Norlin Library Research Center. 8. Classroom Order 7 Galina Siarheichyk, Ph.D. Respectful and focused environment is most efficient for this class. Please avoid any forms of distracting or disrespectful behavior, clothing (including hats, elaborate religious attires), unauthorized equipment usage (cell phones must be OFF), unauthorized conversations, early departures/late arrivals and value everyone’s right to feel comfortable in a public educational space. University Policies: Students with specific physical or learning disabilities and require special accommodations) should discuss the options with me during the first two weeks of class. If you qualify for accommodations because of a disability, please submit to me a letter from Disability Services in a timely manner so that your needs may be addressed. Disability Services determines accommodations based on documented disabilities. Contact: 303-492-8671, Willard 322, and www.Colorado.EDU/disabilityservices) I will make every effort to reasonable and fairly deal with all students who, because of religious obligations, have conflicts with scheduled exams, assignments or required attendance. Please notify me of anticipated conflicts as early in the semester as possible so that there is adequate time to make necessary arrangements. Full details regarding campus policy can be found at CU-Boulder students is at http://www.interfaithcalendar.org/ Proper classroom behavior is a required by the Honor Code of the University of Colorado, (for details see policy at http://www.colorado.edu/policies/classbehavior.html) failure to comply will inevitably cause unfavorable discipline procedures. The University of Colorado at Boulder policy on Discrimination and Harassment (http://www.colorado.edu/policies/discrimination.html, the University of Colorado policy on Sexual Harassment and the University of Colorado policy on Amorous Relationships applies to all students, staff and faculty. Any student, staff or faculty member who believes s/he has been the subject of discrimination or harassment based upon race, color, national origin, sex, age, disability, religion, sexual orientation, or veteran status should contact the Office of Discrimination and Harassment (ODH) at 303-492-2127 or the Office of Judicial Affairs at 303-492-5550. Information about the ODH and the campus resources available to assist individuals regarding discrimination or harassment can be obtained at http://www.colorado.edu/odh All students of the University of Colorado at Boulder are responsible for knowing and adhering to the academic integrity policy of this institution. Violations of this policy may include: cheating, plagiarism, aid of academic dishonesty, fabrication, lying, bribery, and threatening behavior. All incidents of academic misconduct shall be reported to the Honor Code Council (honor@colorado.edu; 303-725-2273). Students who are found to be in violation of the academic integrity policy will be subject to both academic sanctions from the faculty member and non-academic sanctions (including but not limited to university probation, suspension, or expulsion). Other information on the 8 Galina Siarheichyk, Ph.D. Honor Code can be found at http://www.colorado.edu/policies/honor.html and at http://www.colorado.edu/academics/honorcode/ 9 Galina Siarheichyk, Ph.D. SCHEDULE NOTE ON ABBREVIATIONS: COM = commentary (initiate a discussion/submit written commentary) Para = paragraph REV = revision SA = short assignment/ESSAY WS = workshop M AUG 23 Introduction to course requirements and goals. Class websites, syllabus, timeline. Short sample composition. Reading and interpreting an article(Hand-out). Chapter 1 in Knowing Words, discussion of goals at PWR. Write a short reflective essay about yourself as a writer, see p.12 in KNOWING WORDS for more helpful questions. W AUG 25 Reflective essay DUE. Reading: Chapter 2 from Knowing Words; and “The Oil We Eat” from Harper’s; Visual argument: Penn and Teller’s “Bottled Water” clip on Youtube. Web links are provided on the course website: http://web.me.com/galileus/WRTG1150/Welcome. html In-class: Rhetorical focus 1 – Critical reading/reading techniques; discussion; F AUG 27 Reading: chapter 3 from Knowing Words; “Interlude” by William Kittredge(Handout/scan); Compose: short vignette composition about a memorable family event; In class: Discussion of readings and compositions; Composition techniques; Review of technology resources on-line; ESSAY #1 (due Wed SEPT 8th) Write a textual Analysis of a selected piece. 10 Galina Siarheichyk, Ph.D. M AUG 30 Reading: Chapter 4 from Knowing Words; “Dead Men’s Path” by Chinua Achebe (Handout/scan); Writing Assignment: draft a reflective essay (SA#1) and bring the draft to class; Using NovaMind software, a mind-map for your first essay to help the reviewers understand your work better. In-class: Reading a vignette - WS; Crafting a reflective essay: eliminating bulky and filler-words. W SEPT 1 Reading: “My First Goose” by Isaac Babel; Writing: review your draft of the essay and bring to class for WS; In class: WS; Discussion of the reading; Read your essays out loud; SA#1 - WS; F SEPT 2 WS: SA#1; Read your essays out loud in groups of three; assemble portfolios for SA#1; M SEPT 6 NO class – Labor Day Holiday W SEPT 8 Reading: “Happy Endings” by Margaret Atwood; SA#1 DUE (submit electronically AND bring a printed out version to class in a full portfolio with commentaries/revisions and drafts). In class: Quiz on the key Rhetoric concepts from chapter 3 of the “Knowing Words”; Rhetorical focus 2: Critical Reading. Discussion of the assigned reading, using techniques offered in previously distributed hand-out on critical reading; ESSAY #1 WS; Brainstorm of MIND_MAPS for film project; F SEPT 10 Conferences M SEPT 13 Reading: chapter 5 from Knowing Words, pp.63-88 (read one of each kind – analysis and inquiry essays by students); “This Way for the Gas, Ladies and Gentlemen” by Tadeusz Borowski; 11 Galina Siarheichyk, Ph.D. In class: Quiz on vocabulary definitions from a chapter on “Speed Reading”; Discussion of readings; W SEPT 15 Reading: “The School” by Donald Barthelme; Rhetorical Focus 2: Critical Reading Continued; In-class: understanding the content; outlining arguments, examples; identifying the audience/style and tone; LIBRARY QUIZ#1 DUE. F SEPT 17 Reading: “The Declaration of Independence” Chapter 6 from Knowing Words; In class: Discussion of Readings using critical reading techniques; Rhetorical focus 3: Analytical Writing continued; Mind mapping for the rhetorical analysis Essay #2. RHETORICAL ANALYSIS ESSAY SA#2 (Monday October 4th): write an analysis of one of the selected primary texts or articles; see assignment details on the course website. M SEPT 20 Reading:“The Distance to the Moon” by Italo Calvino;Hand-out/scan on Rhetorical Analysis; Writing: Draft the rhetorical analysis Essay #2; bring to class for WS; W SEPT 22 Reading: “The Lady with the Pet Dog” and “Technique in Writing the Short Story” by Anton Chekhov; Hand-out/scan on Rhetorical Analysis; Revise ANALYSIS ESSAY SA#2 and bring to class for WS; In class: Rhetorical analysis practice/examples; WS; LIBRARY QUIZ #2 DUE. F SEPT 24 Reading: “Hands”, and “Form, Not Plot in the Short Story,” by Sherwood Anderson; Bring a revised SA#2 to class for WS; In class: Discussion of readings; 12 Galina Siarheichyk, Ph.D. Learning to signal in the text– ACTION VERBS game/study; WS; M SEPT 27 Reading: “A Very Old Man Wings” by Gabriel Garcia on Rhetorical Analysis; In class: WS; Rhetorical Annotated Bibliography; Read out loud individual assignments; with Enormous Marquez; Hand-out focus 4: writing an parts; partner W SEPT 29 LIBRARY QUIZ #3 DUE. Rhetorical Focus 5: Writing an Inquiry Essay; In class: Discussion of readings; Brainstorming Interview ideas/results; F OCT 1 Conferences M OCT 4 ESSAY #2 DUE. Reading: “A Hunger Artist” by Franz Kafka; Rhetorical Focus 6: Writing an Inquiry Essay; In-class: Critical Inquiry techniques; discussion of readings; Sample inquiry questions- small group WS; W OCT 6 F OCT 9 LIBRARY QUIZ #4 DUE. Reading: “House Opposite” by R.K. Narayan, and pp.69-77 – examples of analytical writing in Knowing Words; Writing: compose a brief vignette of analytical writing that contextualizes an important event in your culture; bring to class. Find an IMAGE to illustrate your argument; In-class: Rhetorical focus 7: understanding visual argument; discussion of readings; Reading: “The Tell-Tale Heart” by Edgar Allan Poe; COMPLETE any 5 exercises: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/exercises/ 13 Galina Siarheichyk, Ph.D. In class: Discussion of Readings; Brainstorming Annotated Bibliography Essay; Work-Groups on FILM; ESSAY# 3 due Monday, October 25 – Write as annotated bibliography of at least 5 sources relevant to your argument to accompany your essay; M OCT 11 Draft out Cultural Analysis Essay #3; bring to class for WS; Reading: “The Necklace” by Guy de Maupassant; and “How I stumbled upon Maupassant” by Kate Chopin Scanned materials on structuring argument; In class: Discussion of Readings; WS/REV; W OCT 13 LIBRARY QUIZ #6 DUE. Reading: “Creative Writing 101” by Raymond Carver; Scanned materials on style in Argument; Writing: bring in revised version of your essay fro WS; In class: Discussion of Readings; WS/REV/COM; F OCT 15 Conferences M OCT 18 Reading: “International Writers and Their Novels” by Carlos Fuentes; Writing: bring in revised version of your essay fro WS; In class: Discussion of Readings; WS/REV/COM; Rhetorical focus 6: Using Visual Arguments; presentations; W OCT 20 Reading: “The Flash of Fireflies” by Nadine Gordimer; Writing: bring in revised version of your essay fro WS/ FIND and image to illustrate your argument; In class: Experiment with Google images for the arguments; Discussion of Argument and Visual Rhetoric; 14 Galina Siarheichyk, Ph.D. F OCT 22 SCRIPT Essay #4 draft SEND VIA CU-LEARN; Prepare FILM for screening in class First Film Screenings; M OCT 25 ESSAY# 3 DUE. W OCT 27 LIBRARY SEMINAR TBA F OCT 29 Reading: “Agonies of Inspiration” by Nathaniel Hawthorne; scanned materials on writing a research paper; In-class: Practice exercises to find appropriate sources for a research paper; Brainstorming ideas and structure of the Essay #4; M NOV 1 Reading: “The Scapegoat in Omelas” by Ursula K. Le Guin; Materials on writing a research paper; Writing: Draft out Research Essay #4 and bring to class for WS; In-class: Discussion of readings; argumentation techniques exercises; WS; ESSAY# 4 DUE on Wednesday, November 17th – Write as annotated bibliography of 7-10 sources relevant to your argument to accompany your essay in your portfolio; W NOV 3 Interactive Theater/TBA F NOV 5 Reading: “The Writer’s Goal” by Guy de Maupassant; TBA; Writing: bring the revised version of your draft to class for WS; In-class: Discussion of readings; WS/REV; M NOV 8 Reading: “The Making of a Writer” by Joyce Carol Oates; TBA Writing: bring the revised version of your draft to class for WS; In-class: Discussion of readings; WS/REV; Reading: “Reading Fiction” by Richard Wright; TBA W NOV 10 15 Galina Siarheichyk, Ph.D. Writing: bring the revised version of your draft to class for WS; In-class: Discussion of readings; WS/REV; F NOV 12 Conferences M NOV 15 Reading: “Writing About Short Stories” (scanned); TBA Writing: bring the revised version of your draft to class for WS; In-class: Discussion of readings; WS/REV; ESSAY #4 DUE In class: writing a STRENGTHS-BASED RESUME W NOV 17 F NOV 19 Lecture on STRENGTHS-BASED RESUME by a representative from Career Services Center NOV 22-28 Campus closed for Fall Break and Thanksgiving M NOV 29 W DEC 1 All final corrections are DUE; Reading: TBA In-class: Debates workshop/public speaking techniques; Reading: TBA F DEC 3 Conferences M DEC 6 Reading: TBA W DEC 8 Guest Lecture by a published fiction writer James Denny Townsend F DEC 10 Last Day of class Reading: TBA In-class: discussion; final remarks. 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