Topic
Reviewing Date
Group Name
Famous cuisine in the world
12/12
Preparer
Yuli
Essay Editor
Yuli Group
Yuli:
Enjoying a meal with family and friends is one of the most amazing things in life.
Whenever we travel around the world, we usually have local cuisine to experience their
natural culture, because the food is unique from country to country, each kinds of has its
features. No wonder people always say that having a local cuisine is the fastest way to
adapt the new country that you haven’t visited before.
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Enjoying a meal with family and friend’s is one of the most amazing things in life.
Whenever we travel around the world, we usually have local cuisine to experience their
natural culture because the food is unique from country to country with each kinds of its
own features. No wonder people always say that having a local cuisine is the fastest way
to adapt to the new country that you haven’t visited before.
Stanley:
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Annie:
There are many different kinds of food around the world. What kinds of food
is my favorite? I think that my favorite food is Japanese food. Because I like to eat
seafood, I think it’s really delicious and fresh. By the way I also like Taiwanese food.
Taiwanese Food
For example, pearl milk tea, stinky tofu and blood cake. Actually stinky tofu isn’t
stinky, it’s really delicious. If you come to Taiwan and try to eat the food, you will
know why I like it.
Correction: No need to start a new paragraph and some grammar error.
There are many different kinds of food around the world. What kind of foods is my
favorite? I think that my favorite food is Japanese Food because I like to eat seafood. I
think it’s really delicious and fresh. By the way I also like Taiwanese food such as Pearl
milk tea, stinky tofu, and blood cake. Actually stinky tofu isn’t stinky, it’s really
delicious. If you come to Taiwan and try to eat the food, you will know why I like it.
Vicky:
I love all kinds of food so long as they are delicacies! French dessert, spaghetti, sushi,
and so on are delicious food that I can’t keep out the lure of. However, I assume that
Taiwanese snacks are the greatest food which I have eaten, stinky tofu especially.
Although it smells terrible, the smellier it is, the more delicious it will be. If there is a
chance, it is really worth a taste.
Correction: Pretty nice. I find small errors but that’s not a problem
I love all kinds of foods as long as they are delicious! French desserts, spaghetti, sushi,
and so much more of delicious food that I can’t keep out the lust for. However, I assume
that Taiwanese snacks are the greatest food which I have ate especially stinky tofu.
Although it smells terrible, the smellier it is, the more delicious it will be. If there is a
American Food
British Food
chance it would be worth a taste.
What kinds of food is your favorite?
Taiwanese Food
Italian Food
German Food
French Food