English Investigation – Year 6-7 Duration: 1 book each week Took The Children away The song tells the story of the stolen generation from a very personal perspective . It tells the story of the good intentions of the white people removing the children from their families so they could be raised in the white man’s way. They didn’t understand the incredible pain it caused and how the impact of their actions would be so longlasting. Some of these children are still looking for their indigenous families. Purpose for sharing the text: Author’s intent: Archie Roach has written this song to tell of his own personal story. His song and the paintings by Ruby Hunter, his late wife ,give us a strong insight into the heartbreaking experience of the Aboriginal children separated from their families. Essential Learnings Ways of Working identify main ideas and the sequence of events, make inferences and draw conclusions based on ideas and information within and across texts recognise and select vocabulary and interpret the effect of literal and figurative language interpret and identify that readers/viewers/listeners are positioned by aspects of texts Make judgments and justify opinions using information and ideas from texts, and identify how aspects of texts contribute to enjoyment and appreciation reflect on and compare how the language choices made across texts include and exclude certain groups and individuals . Reading and Viewing Words, groups of words, visual resources and images can persuade an audience to agree with a point of view by portraying people, characters, places, events and things in different ways. Comprehension involves drawing on knowledge of the subject matter and contextual cues to interpret, infer from and evaluate texts in community contexts Readers and viewers use a number of active comprehension strategies to interpret texts, including activating prior knowledge, predicting, questionning, identifying main ideas, inferring, monitoring, summarising and reflecting. Literacy Indicators reflecting on texts and evaluating them in terms of author position, quality of author’s craft, accuracy or reliability of content and how well they meet their purpose, citing information from texts to support their view Assessment 1: Engaging with the text Comparison/Retrieval Chart comparing White Man’s Intention/Viewpoint to Aboriginal People’s Experience/Viewpoint. Students complete the Chart finding examples of text and illustrations from the book. White Man’s Actions/Views Aboriginal People’s Experiences/Views Eg Come take our hand (Caring for Snatched from their mother’s children) breast( abduction) Assessment 2. Ongoing assessment ideas P7 “We’ll give to them what you can’t give Teach them how to really live” Write your interpretations of the white values underlying this statement. How did the artists use visual images to persuade his audience ? Give examples. Give examples from the text to show the strong emotive connection to family and land that the aboriginal people felt. What do you think the statement, Page 1; “Like the promises they did not keep” means? Assessment 3. Final Assessment Students write a persuasive letter, addressing the government of Australia (50 years ago), persuading the government to stop their unfair treatment of the Aboriginal people (custodians of this land). Students may mention areas touched upon in prior discussions whilst reading/analysing the book in class discussions eg; Aboriginal children were taken from their parents/families and put in foster homes Aboriginal people were not allowed to vote Aboriginal people were not allowed to earn a wage ie; work for money ( see other book in series; ”From Little Things Big Things Grow”) Aboriginal people were classed as, ”‘Flora and Fauna “ in Australian Law Before Reading Before reading the text to students we suggest that the teacher should read for their own information the Foreword by Martin Flanagan and the preface written by Archie Roach to understand his thoughts and reasons behind the writing of this song. Front Cover Just using the front cover, working with a small group of three or four children, allow children to respond to the following questions and be prepared to share. Who do you think has written this? Why do you think they have written this? Who is the intended audience? What do you notice about the writing on the front cover ? Why do you think it is written this way? What do you notice about the colours? Turn to back cover –What do the colours represent? Predict what words you might find in the book As suggested by Martin Flanagan , it is recommended that teachers play the song whilst turning the pages of the book for the first reading. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zLXzKYP1uCw The students to work in pairs to write down some of the words that they can remember and to discuss with the class what they think the song is about and what some of the words mean. The author develops the themes of heartbreak due to family separation and the loss of identity. Write a paragraph to show your understanding of the story that is being told through the lyrics of this song. SHARED READING GUIDED READING- Please note- it is very important that in Guided reading you work with a smaller group of students e.g. 8 so that meaningful discussions can occur. Other activities which could be conducted while you work with the smaller group could be: Responding to the shared reading task described above. Participating in comprehension tasks which follow on from other texts read previously Conducting research about the indigenous history of their local area Independent reading GUIDED READING 1. Students read the text. This time they will focus on the language features of the text. Note repetition, rhythm and rhyme. 2. Note how the writer introduces a topic/event outlining the white man’s spoken intentions and then describes what actually happened .eg; “Teach them how to live they said Humiliated them instead” 3. Focus on the language elements- the words and word groups used to describe. Students independently reread and write down all of the words the Author used to describe how the Aboriginal children were treated. Literal comprehension questions Was the author a child from the “stolen generation”. Write the part in the story that tells you this. Were did the “stolen children” live? Write words from the story to support your answer. What were the children taught at the mission? 4. Inferential level questions for discussion. Did the Aboriginal parents want their children to be taken? Give examples from the story to support your answer. What were the children given as compensation for being split up again? How do you know this and what do you think the author thinks of this ? Why? 5. Read with students the Foreward and Preface. 6.Applied level questions for discussion. What do you think the author meant, when he says ,“ and others taught them prejudice” What do you think the author meant by this page? ‘ Sent us off to foster homes As we grew up we felt alone ‘Cause we were acting white Yet feeling black’ How do you think the author feels about what happened to him as a child? Support your answer with words from the text. Transcript Took The Children Away This story’s right this story’s true I would not tell lies to you Like the promises they did not keep And how they fenced us in like sheep Said to us come take our hand Sent us off to mission land Taught us to read to write and pray Then took the children away Took the children away The children away Snatched from their mothers breast Said it was for the best Took them away The welfare and the policeman Said you’ve got to understand Will give to them what you can’t five Teach them how to really live Teach them how to live they said Humiliated them instead Taught them that and taught them this And others taught them prejudice You took the children away The children away Breaking their mother’s heart Tearing us all apart Took them away One dark day on Framlingham Came and didn’t give a damn My mother cried go get their dad He came running fighting mad Mother’s tears were falling down Dad shaped up and stood his ground He said you touch my kids and you fight me And they took us from our family Took us away They took us away Snatched from our mother’s breast Said this was for the best Took us away Told us what to do and say Told us all the white man’s ways Then they split us up again And gave us gifts to ease the pain Sent us off to foster homes As we grew up we felt alone ‘Cause we were acting white Yet feeling black One sweet day all the children came back The children came back The children came back Back where their hearts grow strong Back where they all belong The children came back Said the children came back The children came back Back where they understand Back to their mother’s land The children came back Back to their mother Back to their father Back to their sister Back to their brother Back tot their people Back to their land All the children came back The children came back The children came back Yes I came back Teachers Notes Prepared by Donna Williams & Gaynor Williams