The Foreshadowing by Marcus Sedgwick Year 9 Reading Activities Introduction The following resources provide a three-lesson study of three key elements of the novel: How major events in the novel’s narrative are deliberately foreshadowed earlier on (AF3). The theme of fate (AF6). The relationship between the novel and the story of Cassandra from Greek mythology (AF7). Each element is introduced and explored in whole-class work before students work independently on an Assessment Task. Resources include detailed lesson plans, marking guidance and student resource sheets. Timing It is envisioned that these reading activities will be taught over three lessons of about one hour each, although you may wish to adjust timings to suit the needs of your class. The Assessment Tasks are introduced discretely, one a lesson. It is suggested that each task is completed before moving on to the next one. This might mean that extra time needs to be given for task completion, either in the form of extra lessons or homework. Framework Objectives and Assessment Focuses Once you have completed the study with your students, they will have engaged with the following Framework Objectives and Reading Assessment Focuses: 5.2 – Understanding and responding to ideas, viewpoint, themes and purposes in texts. 6.1 – Relating texts to the social, historical and cultural contexts in which they were written. 6.2 – Analysing how writers’ use of linguistic and literary features shapes and influences meaning. AF2 – Understand, describe, select or retrieve information, events or ideas from texts and use quotation and reference to text. AF3 – Deduce, infer or interpret information, events or ideas from texts. AF5 – Explain and comment on writers’ uses of language, including grammatical and literary features at word and sentence level. AF6 – Identify and comment on writers’ purposes and viewpoints and the overall effect of the text on the reader. AF7 – Relate texts to their social, cultural and historical contexts and literary traditions. 1 The Foreshadowing Year 9 Reading Activities LESSON 1 Learning objectives: Resources: To notice and interpret clues in a text. Copies of The Foreshadowing. Resource sheet 1: Tom and Edgar. To appreciate the significance of small details in a text. Resource sheet 4: The Assessment Tasks. Starter Introduction Development Share the learning objectives with the class. Divide the class into pairs and give them two minutes to discuss whether they noticed any clues as to what was going to happen while reading the novel. Tell the class that now you have all read the novel, you want to reread early parts to think again about their significance. Show the paragraph from Chapter 99, pages 8–9 that is reproduced in Resource sheet 1: Tom and Edgar. Model for the class how some details have a new significance now that you know the rest of the novel. Here are some aspects you might draw attention to: The fact that Tom is gazing out to sea might suggest he is more thoughtful than Edgar about life and the future. Edgar is ‘bigger, and stronger’ and this fits with his determination to do things without questioning them. For example, he does what his father wants and enlists at once. ‘He never seems to worry about things, he just does them.’ As it turns out, when Edgar becomes deeply involved in the fighting he softens and suddenly seems less strong and sure. In this 'softer' state he even visits Tom and tells him he has come round to his point of view. In a way, this early paragraph deliberately misleads the reader. Perhaps it wasn't surprising that Tom eventually enlisted as a private and exposed himself to the most dangerous role in the war: this early paragraph makes it quite clear that he is very protective – he ‘worries about people’. Ask the class to finish off the analysis of this paragraph. Ask them to spot things in the paragraph that become more significant later in the novel. Take feedback. Now introduce the first Assessment Task, which is also set out on Resource sheet 4: The Assessment Tasks: ‘Explain ways in which Chapter 86 foreshadows or hints at things that happen later in the novel.’ (AF3) Independent work 2 Ask students to complete the first Assessment Task. More-confident students can plan and write alone, but you may wish to pair lessconfident students for the planning stages of this task. The Foreshadowing Year 9 Reading Activities LESSON 2 Learning objectives: Resources: To notice and interpret clues in a text. To appreciate the significance of small details in a text. To examine the theme of fate in The Foreshadowing. Copies of The Foreshadowing. Resource sheet 2: Reading a book backwards. Resource sheet 4: The Assessment Tasks. Starter Share the learning objectives with the class. Explain that the learning for this lesson incorporates and builds on what was studied last lesson. Introduction Suggest to the class that, just as Alexandra believes she can predict the future, a careful reader can use clues to predict the rest of a novel. Show the class Resource sheet 2: Reading a book backwards and use it to develop a discussion around these questions: Is Alexandra's gift a curse or a blessing? If she can predict the future does that mean that our lives are fated? What does The Foreshadowing suggest about fate and how people react to it? You could also ask the class to try answering Alexandra's own questions on the resource sheet. Development Introduce the second Assessment Task, which is also set out on Resource sheet 4: The Assessment Tasks: ‘What does The Foreshadowing suggest about fate and how people react to it?’ (AF6) Explain that students will need to write about: Independent work 3 fate and how it affects the characters' lives how characters react to Alexandra's ability to foretell the future whether there might be more ordinary explanations for Alexandra's apparent ability to see into the future. Ask students to complete the second Assessment Task. Moreconfident students can plan and write alone, but you may wish to pair less-confident students for the planning stages of this task. The Foreshadowing Year 9 Reading Activities LESSON 3 Learning objective: To understand how Marcus Sedgwick uses the story of Cassandra in The Foreshadowing. Starter Introduction Resources: Copies of The Foreshadowing. Resource sheet 3: Cassandra. Resource sheet 4: The Assessment Tasks. Internet or library access. Share the learning objective with the class. Explain the importance and influence of Greek myths on modern literature. Show Resource sheet 3: Cassandra and ask the class how the details of Cassandra's story are echoed in Alexandra's. Divide students into small groups and allow them ten minutes to discuss the parallels between the stories of Cassandra and Alexandra. Then take some brief feedback, or re-group students to share their ideas more widely. Development Introduce the third Assessment Task, which is also set out on Resource sheet 4: The Assessment Tasks: ‘Explain how Marcus Sedgwick uses the story of Cassandra in The Foreshadowing.’ (AF7) The students would benefit from researching the story of Cassandra in more detail, either in the library or through the Internet. Independent work 4 Ask students to complete the third Assessment Task. More-confident students can plan and write alone, but you may wish to pair lessconfident students for the planning and research stages of this task. The Foreshadowing Year 9 Reading Activities Marking guidelines Level AF2 AF3 (Task 1) 4 Some relevant points identified. Comments supported by some generally relevant textual reference or quotation, e.g. reference is made to appropriate section of novel but is unselective and lacks focus. Comments make simple inferences based on evidence, e.g. ‘Ray’s “voice was flat” (page 40) because he was depressed’. Inferences often plausible, but comments are not always rooted securely in the text or they simply repeat narrative or content. AF5 Some basic features of writer’s use of language identified, e.g. ‘Alexandra uses mostly simple language like in a diary’. 5 The most relevant points clearly identified, including those selected from different places in the novel. Comments generally supported by relevant textual reference or quotation, even when points made are not always accurate. Comments develop explanation of inferred meanings drawing on evidence across the text, e.g. ‘When Alexandra comments that Jack’s eyes are lifeless and have lost their fire it reminds us of Edgar’s dull and flat mood when he returns from fighting’. Comments make inferences and deductions based on textual evidence, e.g. in drawing conclusions about Edgar’s feelings on the basis of his speech and actions. Various features of writer’s use of language identified, with some explanation, e.g. ‘When it gets to the exciting part when Alexandra is about to shoot Tom she writes with lots of short sentences to keep up the tension’. Continued 5 The Foreshadowing Year 9 Reading Activities Continued 6 Relevant points clearly identified. Evidence compared from different parts of the novel. Use of apt textual reference and quotation to support main ideas or argument. Comments securely based in textual evidence. Different layers of meaning identified, with some attempt at detailed exploration of them, e.g. explaining the conflicting impact of words and phrases or exploring connotations of clues in the text. Comments consider wider implications or significance of information, events or ideas in the text, e.g. tracing how details contribute to overall meaning or how hints and clues have cumulative significance. Some detailed explanation, with appropriate terminology, of how language is used, e.g. drawing attention to the use of ‘pathetic fallacy’ to introduce Hoodoo Jack on page 139. Continued 7 Evidence precisely chosen and applied to the point being made, e.g. close analysis of impact of a single word, or, deft selection across a longer textual stretch to evaluate Alexandra’s viewpoint. Ability to see the significance of a reference within novel as a whole. Comments begin to develop an interpretation of characters and/or themes, making connections between insights, teasing out meanings or weighing up evidence, e.g. considering the relative importance of different pieces of evidence when considering different foreshadowings in the novel; exploring more than one interpretation. Comments begin to develop precise, perceptive analysis of how language is used, e.g. showing how Alexandra’s repetition of ‘things’ on page 38 shows her growing determination that ‘things will be all right’. Continued Level AF5 (cont’d) 4 Simple comments on writer’s choices, e.g. ‘“squirming” (page 26) is a good word to use to show how the soldier felt frightened and trapped’. 5 Comments show some awareness of the effect of writer’s language choices, e.g. ‘“devoted” (page 37) suggests that Miss Garrett really loves her books’. AF6 (Task 2) Main purpose identified, e.g. ‘It’s about how people can see things through to the end’. Sedgwick’s main purpose clearly identified, often through general overview, e.g. ‘Sedgwick thinks Alexandra should be listened to and he wants the reader to agree’. Simple comments show some awareness of writer’s viewpoint, e.g. ‘You might begin to believe in the power of premonition'. Simple comment on overall effect on reader, e.g. ‘Alexandra describes herself as “alone, but not alone” (page 241) so you know she doesn’t feel as alone as she did’. AF7 (Task 3) Features common to both The Foreshadowing and the Cassandra myth are identified, with simple comment, e.g. both main characters are forced to do things against their will and they have to fight against restrictions. Simple comment on how the time in which the novel was set or written affects the meaning of The Foreshadowing. 6 The Foreshadowing Year 9 Reading Activities Viewpoint clearly identified, with some, often limited, explanation, e.g. “At the end Alexandra feels at peace at last because….”. 6 Some drawing together of comments on how the writer’s language choices contribute to the overall effect on the reader, e.g. pointing out the sort of language that typifies characters’ horrified reactions to those who can see their futures. Evidence for identifying Sedgwick’s purposes precisely located at word/sentence level or traced through the novel. Viewpoint clearly identified and explanation of it developed through close reference to the text, e.g. ‘At this point Alexandra seems obsessed and willing to do anything’. General awareness of effect on the reader, with some, often limited, explanation, e.g. ‘You’d probably be horrified by Alexandra’s premonitions because you’d know she couldn’t do anything about them’. The effect on the reader clearly identified, with some explicit explanation as to how the effect has been created. Comments identify similarities and differences between the novel and the Cassandra myth with some explanation. Some exploration of parallels between The Foreshadowing and the Cassandra myth, and of how the latter enhances the effect of Sedgwick’s novel. Some explanation of how the contexts in which texts are written, set and read contribute to meaning, e.g. some comparison of Cassandra’s and Alexandra’s struggle against oppression. Some detailed discussion of how the contexts in which texts are written, set and read affect meaning, e.g. how the role of the heroine is treated differently. 7 Some appreciation of how Sedgwick’s language choices contribute to the overall effect on the reader, e.g. how Alexandra’s language reveals the urgency and determination of her search for Tom. Responses begin to develop some analytic or evaluative comment on how Sedgwick presents the theme of fate, e.g. considering whether Sedgwick is suggesting that the power to see the future is real, or whether Alexandra’s premonitions can have other explanations. Responses begin to develop some analytic or evaluative comment on how viewpoint is established or managed across the novel, e.g. tracing how our attitudes towards Alexandra’s powers of foresight develop during the novel. Responses begin to show some analysis of how The Foreshadowing is influenced by the Cassandra myth, e.g. how the essential features of Cassandra’s story are threaded through the novel to amplify its themes and mood. Resource sheet 1: Tom and Edgar Tom was gazing out at the sea lapping way beyond the West Pier, his thin frame silhouetted by a bright summer's sun outside. It made me think as I often did that it was hard to imagine my two brothers were related. Edgar's so much bigger, and stronger. He never seems to worry about things, he just does them, whereas Tom worries about everything and everyone. I'm told that once, when I was little, I was crying about a dead bird in the garden, and he put his arm round me and told me that animals go to heaven too. I don't suppose that's true, but he wanted to make me happy. That's how much he worries about people. Pages 8–9 7 The Foreshadowing Year 9 Reading Activities Resource sheet 2: Reading a book backwards A thought strikes me. What if I see something about someone I love, someone in my family? What if I see something about myself? And if I really can see the future, then what does it mean? Is there any sense in our lives if everything is already out there, just waiting to happen? For if that were so then life would be a horrible monster indeed, with no chance of escape from fate, from destiny. It would be like reading a book you know very well, but reading it backwards, from the final chapter, down to chapter one, so that the end is already known to you. Page 65 8 The Foreshadowing Year 9 Reading Activities Resource sheet 3: Cassandra In Greek mythology Cassandra had the gift of prophecy – she could predict the future. When Cassandra disobeyed a god she was punished by having all her prophecies disbelieved. Cassandra kept warning people about the coming disaster of the Trojan wars. Cassandra was declared a mad woman and imprisoned. 9 The Foreshadowing Year 9 Reading Activities Resource sheet 4: The Assessment Tasks For all of the following tasks you will need to: use evidence to support your ideas (AF2) interpret evidence (AF3) explore examples of the language that Alexandra uses in her narrative (AF5). Assessment Task 1 Re-read Chapter 86. Explain ways in which Chapter 86 foreshadows or hints at things that happen later in the novel. (AF3) Here are some aspects of Chapter 86 you might choose to explore: Miss Garrett's attitude towards Alexandra. The significance of the book that Alexandra borrows. Alexandra's promise to look after the book. How the last paragraph prepares the reader for the rest of the novel. Assessment Task 2 At the end of Chapter 75 Alexandra says that if our lives are fated, ‘It would be like reading a book you know very well, but reading it backwards, from the final chapter, down to chapter one, so that the end is already known to you’. What does The Foreshadowing suggest about fate and how people react to it? (AF6) Write about: fate and how it affects the characters' lives how characters react to Alexandra's ability to foretell the future whether there might be more ordinary explanations for Alexandra's apparent ability to see into the future. Assessment Task 3 To do this task you will need to find out about the story of Cassandra in Greek mythology. Explain how Marcus Sedgwick uses the story of Cassandra in The Foreshadowing. (AF7) 10 The Foreshadowing Year 9 Reading Activities